Hi! Your requested mod!
Normal:Please lower the Approach Rate at least by 1, since there are no lower difficulties in the mapset, I think 5 is high, and it actually felt a bit high while testplaying.
00:19:680 (2) - I think it would flow better if (2) was placed the same as (4), because the sliders (1, 3) lead upwards and not downwards
00:41:537 (3) - I think it would flow better, if you flipped it horizontally and rotated it:
http://puu.sh/5jZZh.jpg00:42:822 (4) - it might be easier to play a reverse slider then a short slider+hit circle on the easiest difficulty, so I would like to suggest something like this:
http://puu.sh/5k02Z.jpg (after that, you can place the new combo on (5) which would fit well because of the lyrics)
01:56:537 (2,3) - it is a bit boring to play 1/1 almost all the time, so I think it would be nice if you made a long slider out of (2) and removed (3)
01:56:537 (2,4,5) - I personally don't really like this pattern:
http://puu.sh/5k0i5.jpg - because you made (2) and (4) symmetric, so placing (5) in that way doesn't look nice to ME, so I would change it (just an example:
http://puu.sh/5k0ne.jpg)
02:20:108 (1,2,3) - you already did this pattern in the first chorus, it would be nice if you tried another shape for the long sliders, or another pattern
02:48:501 (1) - even though this spinner fits, I think that it might be too hard and tiring for players who are on an Easy/Normal level, you could edit the beginning part, and place a shorter spinner afterwards:
http://puu.sh/5k0G6.jpg (or something similar)
03:26:108 (3,4) - try this for better flow:
http://puu.sh/5k0MJ.jpg because -->
http://puu.sh/5k0Oa.jpg03:37:358 (1) - use soft sampleset on the spinner, because I think that Normal hitsounds are too loud, and the song isn't so loud at this part, so soft sounds would sound better :3
Hard:00:42:822 (4,1) - this part doesn't flow well, because (4) leads to the opposite direction, so I think you should try something similar:
http://puu.sh/5k3ew.jpg00:44:322 (4,1) - I think this -->
http://puu.sh/5k3kJ.jpg - flows better and looks nicer than this -->
http://puu.sh/5k3nY.jpg00:50:108 (1) - small thing, but I think you could make this look nicer:
http://puu.sh/5k3uK.jpg01:15:822 (1,2) - why is the distance lower here? it should be 1,20 just like at the other places, but if you want to emphasize the sound in the background then you should add a hit circle instead of using incorrect spacing:
http://puu.sh/5k3AI.jpg01:19:251 (1,2) - this would flow better in my opinion -->
http://puu.sh/5k3HX.jpg (the pattern could be improved though)
01:35:430 - add a hit circle maybe? because it sounds like she pronounces "ta" a little bit later than the red tick, however there are sounds in the background so a 3/4 slider might not fit that well, that's why try adding a hit circle:
http://puu.sh/5k3NP.jpg02:02:108 (3,4) - instead of a jump, why don't you try something like this? it might have a better flow:
http://puu.sh/5k3YK.jpg02:05:965 (4) - this is a bit too much, because in the music there aren't so many beats, or if there are, they are not loud enough, so it would be enough to emphasize a bit less beats:
http://puu.sh/5k45L.jpg - this also follows the melody nicely
02:20:108 (1,3) - make it nicer:
http://puu.sh/5k4aP.jpg02:23:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,3,4) - I don't understand why you used 1,00 spacing at these places (and also here - 02:35:537 (1,2,3) - )
For example here, you use 1,2 02:20:108 (1,2) - and here you used 1,00 02:21:394 (3,1) - I understand this, because the song is faster, so it's nice to emphasize faster lyrics like this, here 02:21:822 (1,2,3) - spacing is again 1,2 which would be nice, but 02:23:537 (1,2) - this is again 1,00 and the lyrics are not faster, so that's why I find it weird that you used different spacing, it's not such a big deal, but it's weird in my opinion (especially that you didn't do this in the second part of this chorus)
03:57:179 (1) - replace this, because this -->
http://puu.sh/5k4E4.jpg - flows better than -->
http://puu.sh/5k4HC.jpgInsane:00:18:823 (2,3,4) - this would flow better in my opinion:
http://puu.sh/5k4Xa.jpg00:36:108 (4) - please don't put it under (3), it doesn't look nice, and it might be hard (well I know it's insane but still xD) why don't you try something like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110618000:41:108 (4,1) - select these and flip them horizontally, then replace, I think it will flow better
00:46:394 (4) - small thing but you could try to make it nicer
http://puu.sh/5kax5.jpg00:57:822 (3) - put this a little bit upwards so that the distance is the same as the distance between 00:56:965 (1,2) -
http://puu.sh/5kaDb.jpg01:16:894 (5) - add NC maybe? since it would look nice (and would fit as well) if you emphasized these, it sounds like she starts singing a "new" section
01:20:537 (4,5) - why don't you make these a slider? it would fit better to the lyrics, but it would still fit to the sounds in the background, and then the 2 beats afterwards would be emphasized more, so it would be cool, it's similar to this place - 01:22:251 (4,1) -
01:47:108 (4) - flip this horizontally and vertically to make the flow better:
http://puu.sh/5kbcM.jpg01:50:108 (3) - improve flow?
http://puu.sh/5kbiQ.jpg02:01:679 (2,4) - make the pattern nicer:
http://puu.sh/5kbnU02:29:751 (5) - add NC again? same reason as 01:16:894 (5) -
02:33:394 (4,5,6) - remove (5) and make (4) and ((6) a slider, it would fit so well to the lyrics, and you already did it similarly before and after 02:34:251 (3,4) -
02:42:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing here is bigger than 02:41:965 (4,5,6,1) - even though the way of singing is almost the same, so I think you should fix spacing here
03:14:108 (1,2) - I think you could make these shapes nicer, even though it might just me thinking that they are not that nice
03:15:822 (1) - ctrl+G for better flow?
03:23:965 (4,5,6) - same here as 02:33:394 (4,5,6) - make a slider
03:33:394 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing as 03:32:536 (1,2,3,4) -
03:40:251 (1,2,4,1,3,4,6,1) - and 03:43:679 (3,1) - these places are similar, but you used different spacing many times, I think you should try to make them more consistent, it would look nicer too
03:51:822 (1,2,1) - try something like this for better flow? -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1106482Overall nice mapset and I hope my mod was useful, good luck!