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Alestorm - Wenches & Mead

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awp
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awp
They just couldn't follow a steady bpm for this one...

1. Offset: 20,431ms BPM: 101.00
2. Offset: 30,000ms BPM: 100.00
3. Offset: 42,030ms BPM: 100.00
4. Offset: 70,790ms BPM: 100.25
5. Offset: 89,980ms BPM: 100.00
6. Offset: 99,580ms BPM: 99.50
7. Offset: 109,220ms BPM: 100.00
8. Offset: 140,410ms BPM: 100.325
9. Offset: 159,575ms BPM: 100.00
10. Offset: 188,415ms BPM: 100.00
11. Offset: 200,410ms BPM: 100.325
12. Offset: 217,175ms BPM: 98.00

I don't see how I can pass up the chance to make a difficulty for my dearly beloved Alestorm.

Also, to criticize your map: the spinners during the chorus on Normal are no good. They're very short, making them difficult to interpret/clear, and notes follow immediately afterward, which is A - disorienting, and B - reserved for higher difficulties (Insane it is okay, Hard it should be avoided). The verses are well done, I say. But you gotta cut back on the ninja-spinners on the chorus.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,936 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Alestooooorm!

Give me a bell when this is ready for modding proper. I'd be more than happy to go through it in any depth you like. Anything to see more Alestorm ranked.
awp
osu! Alumni
11,869 posts
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awp
Just a heads up, the first couple offsets I gave you are late. Also your tags are pretty misspelled and "Alestorm" is redundant when used as a tag.

I am probably going to further fine-tune the timing while mapping Insane, since this shit's all over the place.
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
ShaggoN
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
awp
osu! Alumni
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awp
eh this sounds okay to me re: timing so I guess I'm okay with it

have not redownloaded for skinned elements yet

Download: Alestorm - Wenches & Mead (ShaggoN) [awptense].osu
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
Nice map arghhhh!!
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Well, my modding is here...

Overall, the map is well spaced but follow awp's offsets and BPM (the beginning is messy, you have not already set the awp timing in your diffs.) and minor errors
Easy:
SPOILER
00:51:061 (3) - Recommend to be parallel to the previous slider (2)
02:06:002 (1,2,3,4,5) - wrong spacing
Overall: Be careful with chorus parts, steps becomes confussing for novice players, check 'em again

Normal:
SPOILER
03:21:030 (3) - IMO could be further than circle 2
00:22:079 (5) - New Combo (?)
00:49:021 (4) - ^
00:54:001 (4) - ^
00:58:081 (6) - ^
01:58:052 (4) - ^
02:03:062 (5) - ^
02:08:042 (6) - ^
03:23:069 (3) - ^
03:37:017 (1) - align with the previous circle (1 grid left [lvl3 grid])
Overall: good job BUT Check combo distribution

awptense:
SPOILER
Perfect

Starred...nice pirates themed song xD
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Yaharrrr!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P

Here we go!!

~All diffs~
- The third combo colour doesn't fit so much with the background, try changing it (maybe a dark yellow one? oxo)
- That comboburst is awesome!! But maybe someone says you have to make it a bit smaller. It's totally up to you, btw, I like it as it is now xD
- Are you going to continue with the skin work? Adding a custom hitcircle would be perfect :3

~Easy~
- The hitsounds volume is a bit low, try increasing it a bit ^^
02:01:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I loved this *^*

~Normal~
- Same problem with the hitsounds as in [Easy] >x<
00:55:021 (6) - Tricky little jump. It's okay but try reversing it, it looks better imo :3
02:06:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I love this too x3

~awptense~
- HP Drain Rate it's a bit high imo.
01:37:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Etna Sliderrrrssss *w*

So good map!! *star*
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 7,72MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

awp's timing is awesome.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

00:22:079 (3) - New combo.
00:25:017 (5) - ^
00:32:098 (4) - ^
00:35:038 (7) - ^
01:56:042 (5) - ^
01:57:062 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

00:27:055 (5) - New combo.
01:17:068 (5,1) - No jumps on normal difficulties, please.
02:00:092 (8) - New combo.
02:01:022 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:22:050 (5,1) - Same as 01:17:068.
02:27:028 (5,1) - ^
03:27:028 (5,1) - ^

[awptense]

01:20:038 (1) - You need a storyboard warning here, due to BPM change.
01:22:077 (1) - ^
02:29:097 (1) - ^
02:32:037 (1) - ^
03:29:097 (1) - ^
03:32:037 (1) - ^
03:34:076 (1) - ^
miccoliasms
491 posts
Joined April 2009
miccoliasms
yo~

nice song XD

[Normal]
00:23:038 (2) - i think moved 1grid right
03:00:057 (4) - i think moved 1grid left
03:01:077 (2) - i think moved 1grid down

awesome~ :oops:
deadbeat
osu! Alumni
9,218 posts
Joined June 2009
deadbeat
normal
01:13:020 (1) - osuplayer stated all ready :o

Not really the best modder so could only really see that. good map thou. Love the spinner :)
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
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Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • 4th custom colour (dark brown) is a bit hard to see. Please consider changing it.
- Easy:
  • .Opinions:
    Fine ^^
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Great ^^
- awptense:
  • .Opinions:
    Maybe add a white (or another light colour) border to texts in storyboard? Just to make them a little more visible.
Nothing else, only these minor suggestions to make things a bit "easier to see".
Star ^^
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
HAY! HAY! I WANT MORE WENCHES!!!
akX
24 posts
Joined November 2008
akX
Fajna mapka miszczu xD 3mej xD
hyt103
21 posts
Joined March 2009
hyt103
8-)
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

-Timing looks good

[EASY]

Looks good

[NORMAL]

'tis fine

[AWPTENSE]

Maybe make those SB'd speeeed/slooooow a bit brighter/more visible? I didn't notice them until i tore my eyes away from the beats.

Apart from that, seems fine. Some of the sudden spacing changes feel a bit awkward but they didn't completely throw me off, so ill let those slide.

Nice mapset. Its good to see some more Alestorm ;)

star'd
awp
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awp
lol storyboardin' in mah difficulty?

Maybe I should redownload and check it out; see if I can't give it that extra little touch, eh?
awp
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awp
So I do have a couple of comments. I tweaked the timing a little bit more on awp difficulty - I swear something is changing on me. So I've reuploaded my difficulty with minor timing fixes, resnaps, adjusted inherited timing sections.

Comment on the spinner: the spinner-circle wheel has some "Photoshop residue" on it - if you look closely you can see some rough edges. Pretty sure simply opening it up in Paint.NET and re-saving it will fix the problem. It does when I do it, at least. I think the same applies to Captain Morgan, but idk that may just be the image.

Some of the storyboarded "Speed up" and "slow down" segments are hard to notice. A suggestion I can give you is to create a white mask for each image that fades in overtop the images, so that when they initially fade in, they fade to a solid white colour. Then, have the white fade quickly away, leaving the speed/slow images as they are - that way, they'll draw the eye a bit more.

Rest of the skin's looking pretty good, but you'll need to add in a standard lifebar of sorts - since it isn't skinned, it'll look weird in some skins. You can just copy the osu! default lifebar images in, and that should do it.

EDIT: Oh shoot hey uh kiai time is broken in my difficulty because of the inherits. That was careless of me.

Download: Alestorm - Wenches & Mead (ShaggoN) [awptense].osu
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
just posting to collect :(, map looks good so far, can't give any suggestions on the speed ups or slowdowns,
anyways, i did some irc modding b4 this map was done, awptense wasn't touched by me, but looks good

*star
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
First offset: 20 414 ?
4th offset: 42 020 ?
10th offset: 90 000 ?
18th offset: 159 595 ?
Last offset: 217 225 ?

The rest seems spot on, but these 5 seem all way too early. I'm not saying my offset's are good, but at least fix those 5 since they are all too early.
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
niedz
o.o
Niko
360 posts
Joined October 2009
Niko
gfiazdka :D
mikhe
673 posts
Joined November 2008
mikhe
Star! :3
Level awptense have likely jumps :P (in CtB)

Bye :D
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
One of the tags is wrong.

Change "Pirtate" to "Pirate".

And on [awptense], add the same tags of the other difficulties and add "awp" on the tags.

Fix and I'll bubble. Very cool map!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Bubbled.
Pally_old
10 posts
Joined July 2009
Pally_old
Yeah next nice map by ShaggoN ^^

Star for that.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,936 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Ranked!

(To think I spent 20 minutes going over the timing before realizing it was my UO.. orz)
awp
osu! Alumni
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awp
;_____; why this was tagged as Novelty, I do not know. Fixed, tagged as Rock (Rock > Metal > Power/Folk Metal).
Mogul
7 posts
Joined January 2017
Mogul
8hp drain on a 4 star song is pretty funny tbh
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