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Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[General]
Fine
Fine
[Insane]
00:00:714 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –The whistles you used at this part don’t fit well. Try use S;C2 sampleset;
00:06:960 (4) –this jump is strange, maybe you can set jump at 00:06:781 (3) –because 00:06:781 (3) –is stronger than(4);
00:09:817 –triplet can be set at here;
00:15:531 (3,4) –I suggest you use larger spacing.It will be better;
00:26:245 –adding a note here is more natural because there is a vocal here;
00:33:567 (5) –Jump can be set at here,your spacing between 00:33:388 (4,5) –is too small for an Insane diff.I suggest you stack00:33:567 (5) -to00:33:924 (1) –‘s head;
00:43:205 (5) –Ctrl+G is better imo;
00:52:673 (2,3) –Ctrl+G, 00:52:138 (1,2) –the spacing is too small;
01:00:352 (5,6) –Ctrl+G for better flow and fit song better;
01:06:423 (8,9) –make a larger spacing;
01:07:405 (2,1) –They are overlapped and don’t look good;Stack01:07:405 (2) -to01:07:852 (1) -;
01:11:245 (2,3) –Ctrl+G ,the same reason as above;
01:24:637 (3,1,2) –try equaling their spacing;
[Zzz's Hard]
00:21:781 (8) –add nc here and remove nc at 00:22:853 (1) -;
00:30:353 (1) –Since you follow vocals at many times,so 00:30:531 –here is a vocal too0.0,maybe try this,http://puu.sh/5ceeS.jpg
00:35:531 –try this rhythm to follow vocals better. http://puu.sh/5ceiK.jpg
00:37:674 (4) –how about using a 1/2 reverse slider to follow vocals?
00:41:955 –add a note to follow vocal
00:44:812 -^
00:47:668 (6) –remove this to make a transition;
01:17:316 (3) –this is hard to be read that it’s a 1/1 rhythm since your other similar patterns all are 1/2;Maybe add a nc or move it far way from (2);
01:24:280 (6,2) –finish the blanket?
[Normal]
00:17:853 (4,5) –since you follow vocals at this diff,please try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cg6o.jpg
00:23:745 (3) –extend this to white tick.3/2 slider fits vocal and drums better;
00:28:567 (2) –stack this to 00:26:424 (1) –’s end?
00:35:531 (4) –try this rhythm to follow vocals better, http://puu.sh/5cVo7.jpg
00:48:740 (3) –Use a note like 00:47:490 (1) -?
01:04:637 (1) –move this to 01:04:816 –since you follow vocals?
[Habi’s Easy]
00:09:995 (4) –I suggest you use this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cVY4.jpg,If you change this ,also add nc at(4);
00:13:210 (3,4) –Stack maybe too hard to read for a easy player;
00:39:278 (1) –maybe something like this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cW96.jpg
This rhythm (also you can change some other rhythms)fits music better.You can hear00:39:813 -00:40:884 –etc,there is beat at these tick;
00:52:138 (3) –remove clap at sliderend;
01:04:995 (1) –remove clap at reverse arrow;