CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Disable letterboxing.



[Kantan]
fine~

[Nardo's Futsuu]
fine~

[Muzukashii]
00:49:092 (39) - delete, it sounds too awkward - updated

[Oni]
02:46:395 (186) - add finish - okay
02:46:541 (187) - delete - am I think there should be something

very nice map already, wow~
one more thing, can I make another Oni?

Mintong wrote:

抱歉迟到了 O.O

Black - Normal Suggestion
Pink - You may need to consider
Red - Unrankable stuff

[General]
Artist should be "nano" but not "Nano" . see this
Well, since artist already have nano, you should not put nano to tag again. Delete it. 好吧
There's some note you didn't snapped, check it at AIMOD.

0.0............

[SB]

I did recommend you to cut some Background, because some is too big and you never use it. Example 3.jpg, you just use between the name "Nevereverland" right? Beside, it can reduce the beatmap filesize.
SB还可以改善, 比如做歌词SB还是什么的, 现在单单CG太单调了.

不要吧,太累了

我略看了图 感觉没什么我可调了 所以.....对不起啦 Q_Q
加油 好图

• [Kantan]

1. 00:43:485 - add d?
   00:44:068 (6) - if above is done, change this to d?
2. 00:58:922 (34) - delete? have a little break here is nice
3. 01:58:046 (31,32,33) - change these to a slider/spinner instead? it's just plays weird here especially (32)
4. 02:26:735 (23) - move this to 02:26:881 flows better
   02:27:172 (24) - if above is done, move this to 02:27:463 plays better here imo
5. 02:30:376 - add d?
6. 03:07:948 (99) - move this to 03:08:093 plays better here
7. 03:10:278 (103) - move this to 03:10:424 ^
8. 03:14:647 (112) - move this to 03:14:356 ^
9. 03:23:676 - add d?
10. 04:17:123 (67) - move this to 04:17:268 plays better here
    
    [Nardo's Futsuu]
    
11. 00:44:213 (8) - move this to 00:44:068 flows better and easier to read
12. 01:18:145 (88) - move this to 01:18:437 plays better with the vocals
13. 01:20:475 (94) - move this to 01:20:767 plays better
14. 01:59:211 (172) - plays weird here .w. move this to 01:59:065 ? plays better with the vocals
15. 02:08:531 (193) - ^ move this to 02:08:386 ?
16. 02:24:551 (233,244) - delete? have a little break here is nice
17. 02:26:735 (238,239) - delete (238) and move (239) to 02:26:881 flows better with the drums
18. 02:28:920 - add k?
19. 03:14:647 (341) - move this to 03:14:501 plays better with the vocals
20. 03:23:967 (363) - move this to 03:23:822 ^
21. 04:08:239 (25) - move this to 04:08:093 ^
22. 04:17:559 (47) - move this to 04:17:414 ^
    
    [Muzukashii]
    
23. The 2nd break on this diff, why don't you follow the drums there? will play better if you'd follow the beat there rather than having a pause for break. It's up to you though :3
24. And also map some at the last part after kiai .w.
    
25. 00:21:830 (61,62) - k d? flows better with the piano imo
26. 00:58:339 - add d? plays better for the drums
    00:58:776 (86) - if above is done, delete this to simplify the flow
27. 01:27:611 (324) - delete? not needed here
28. 01:42:319 - add k for the drums?
29. 01:42:901 (9) - d?
30. 02:02:997 (100) - k? flows better
31. 02:08:531 (131) - delete?
32. 02:09:696 (136) - D? plays better imo
33. 02:33:434 (88,89,90) - k d k? plays better for the vocals
34. 02:34:162 (92) - delete?
35. 03:15:812 (255) - D?
36. 03:18:579 (268) - delete?
37. 03:25:132 (302) - D?
38. 03:52:511 (60,61) - swap these 2 to k d? plays better
39. 04:17:559 (171) - delete?
40. 04:18:725 (176) - D?
    
    [Oni]
    
41. The 2nd break on this diff, put some notes just like i mention in Muzu
42. And also map some at the last part after kiai .w.
    
43. 00:15:630 (42) - delete? not needed here imo
44. 00:21:830 (62,63) - k d? flows better with the piano imo
45. 00:40:864 (2) - k? make a "d k d k d" pattern flows nice with the guitar for this part
    00:42:029 (7,9) - if above is done, change these to k
    00:43:485 (16,18) - ^
46. 00:58:995 (124) - move this to 00:58:704 ? plays better with the drums
47. 01:26:009 (272) - k?
48. 01:27:465 (283) - ^
49. 01:42:319 - add k for the drums?
50. 01:42:901 (9) - d? or are u following the piano? i prefer d here for the drums though ww
51. 01:55:133 (71) - delete? have a little break here plays nice imo
52. 01:58:483 (95) - k? plays better with the vocals
53. 02:17:560 (24) - k? flows better
54. 02:22:366 (61,62,63,64) - delete (61) and move (62,63,64) here, and then add a d at 02:22:657 , plays better imo
55. 02:33:434 (109,110,111,112) - k d k d? flows well with the vocals
56. 02:34:162 (114) - delete?
57. 03:07:365 (249) - k? flows better
58. 03:10:569 (276) - delete? have a little break here plays nice imo
59. 03:12:899 (292) - k? follows the vocal better
60. 03:18:579 (337) - delete?
61. 03:52:511 (65,67) - swap these 2 to k d? plays better
62. 03:54:258 (75) - k?
63. 04:00:958 (91) - ^
64. 04:02:123 (101) - ^
65. 04:07:511 (140) - ^

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ mappers~~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue as M4M
I am glad if it becomes helpful.

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?

[General]

1. Be same volume sample => Soft or Normal
2. Want to play… ><
   04:23:967 - ~04:42:462 – add something…;w;
   Futsuu is put notes.
   

[Kantan]

1. 00:12:230 (17) – delete , 00:13:030 (17) – move to 00:12:630 (17) –
2. 00:18:630 (23) - move to 00:19:030 (23) –
3. 00:19:430 (24) – delete? if you like..
4. 00:58:922 (34) – delete
5. 01:08:825 (49) – delete
6. 01:18:145 (66) -^
7. 01:22:223 (71) –move to 01:21:932 (71) –and k?
8. 01:47:561 (11,12,13,14,15,16) – all finish
9. 03:02:997 (86,87,88,89,90,91) -^
10. 01:58:774 (32,33) – move 01:58:628 (32) -01:59:211 (33) –
11. 02:07:803 (50,51,52) -^ ddK 1/1divisor.
12. 02:26:735 (23,24) – 24 del, 23 move02:26:881 (23) –
13. 02:35:327 (38,39,40,41,42) – confuse
    02:35:327 (38,39) – move 02:35:619 - , 39 delete
    02:36:347 (39) – move 02:36:201 (39) -
    02:37:366 (41) - move 02:37:075 (41) –
    └――――――――――――――――――
14. 02:57:172 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) – too hard. 02:58:046 (78,83) - delete
15. 03:19:598 (116) – move 03:19:890 (116) -

[Nardo’s Futsuu]

1. 01:47:561 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146) – add finish , 145 delete? want to accent
2. 03:02:997 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316) -^
3. 01:54:842 (157) - move01:54:988 (157) - & 01:55:424 (158) – delete?
4. 03:10:278 (326,327) -^
5. 04:03:870 (11,12) -^
6. 02:14:356 (208) – add finish
7. 04:22:511 (60,61) – k? no drums sounds….
8. 04:23:384 (63) – delete? make break is more variation.
9. 04:26:297 (70) – change normal
10. 04:30:957 (82) -^
11. 04:35:617 (93) -^

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:39:430 (1) – spin start this points is better.
2. 00:42:757 (10,11) – k?
3. 00:48:582 (35) - how about move? 00:48:873 (36) –
4. 01:01:835 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) – how about all swap? I think it fits better(caught pitch)...& last 2ndphrase, so want variation something…
5. 01:59:211 (81) – delete is better fit vocal
6. 02:08:531 (130) -^
7. 02:09:696 (134) – D hearing by background sounds pitch
8. 03:25:132 (302) -^
9. 04:18:725 (176) -^
10. 02:51:784 (167) – k ?
11. 04:09:404 (129) – add finish
12. 03:25:132 (302) –k or move to 04:13:045 (147) –

[Oni]

1. 01:01:835 - ~ how about this? Same reason muzu. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1147529
2. 00:17:230 (48) – k. kept piano and vocal(is little high) pitch
3. 00:39:430 (1) – spin start this points is better.
4. 00:58:267 (119) – add d , 00:58:776 (123,124,125,126) – ddk (or d?) k
5. 02:51:784 (200) –k
6. 03:52:220 (64) – add k?

That’s all! I thank you for reading it through
Good Luck!

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx's Mod Queue

Since there's a SB I'll check it first!

@ 00:22:930 to 00:25:830 - The picture to text to picture transition is too solid, since the bg of the text is just black bars and white bars, the transition from realistic picture to simplified picture might be too "harsh"
I suggest using .png to create the text and overlap the first bg and use fade to transition to the next bg

Example of what i mean

@00:49:602 - Transition to the title could be done better with a flash - Fade in a white.jpg file quickly and fade out slowly
@01:50:983 - Same can be done here
@03:06:492 - Same here
@03:58:919 - The scaling in of white.jpg should be replaced with a flash for a better effect

@02:30:594 - Consider desaturating this here, the tag on the bg is a bit unfit for a mostly desaturated SB

@01:47:416 - The inverted picture was appropriately made, however the "jerking" of the image could be done better with some zooming in instead of just movement of the BG - The impact of the "jerking" is too little
@03:02:852 - Same here

@04:42:607 - Might want to fade out with black.jpg at the end here

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Italic = Optional

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni

Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:42:757 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - d,d,d,d,d,d > D, , ,D, , | Consider changing this since the music uses 2 loud drum sounds instead of triplets
00:51:058 (64,65,68) - k,d,d > d,k,k | I feel that this kat pattern is better flowing because the kat at 64 seems to be too quick/sudden in this rhythm
00:54:262 (88,90) - Swap | Since you used a kat at every 2 white lines, this would make the flow better
01:10:864 (188,189) - Swap | Putting a kat at 188 breaks the kat rhythm
01:42:901 (10) - k > d | Putting a kat here after 2 kats is too loud/"hyper" for this quiet section
02:08:822 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - Modify | k,k,d 1/4's are weird in rhythm consider moving the kats
02:16:978 (19,20,21,22) - k,k,d,d > k,d,k,k | Putting a 2 1/4 kats at the front of a rhythm is too sudden considering you did not do it in the first rhythm and the chorus of the song ended
02:25:643 + d | The drum here is missing ( mapping according to music )
03:15:666 (313,314) - d,d > k,k | Since you used 2 1/4 kat patterns before this, ending the rhythm at the same amount of kats is pretty underwhelming, add some kats to increase the "hype"
03:24:987 (384) - d > k | Same here
Rest was mapped well, 04:08:530 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - This should replace every 03:14:938 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315) - Rhythm

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Add Epilepsy warning for all diff.s
Consider deleting unused SB from your osb file, it creates lag and sometimes errors

Title Check

No Problems

:c tired, not going to mod all diff.s, don't kudosu this if you want X_X, if there's anything that you can't understand about the storyboard please do pm me :3