Normal 00:07:003 (1) - how about curving like next slider? both sliders have similar sound
00:15:891 (1) - this slider breaking up the flow imo you can change this easily like
this 00:21:225 (1,2) - same opinion with 00:07:003 (1) - here
and don't forget to add spinner if you fix it in insane
Rare's Hard - check ai mod plz
00:36:558 (4,5) - well i think reduce this distance and give jump on 00:36:780 (5,1) - these notes will fits better with vocal
00:37:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern looks little bit messed up, 00:38:114 (3) - NC here can be solution
00:41:447 (2) - same clap suggestion with Insane diff
00:46:780 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uh another ramdon jump here, you can use
this or something else if you want to improve(just my think) this part
00:52:114 (2) - NC for SV changing
01:17:225 (3) - this slider should be started 01:17:003 - here if you followed vocal sound
01:26:891 - spinner suggestion like insane
Insane 00:18:114 (2) - it'll be better if you curve this slider like previous, plays and feels better considering music imo
00:20:114 (3,4) - hmm maybe try
this for better movement?
00:39:891 - uh need whistle on this slider o.o? (like 00:43:447 - this)
00:41:225 (2) - how about adding clap on end too? it fits really well and drum sounds are heard clearly (and don't forget to add it on 00:43:225 (4) - here , 00:44:780 (2) - here and etc.)
00:54:114 (1) - this sudden acceleration feels really bad, since you decelerated previous slider on previous this slider feels too fast to catch it,players may miss this slider easily (or 00:54:558 (2) - add NC here to notice easily that 00:54:114 (1) - this slider has different SV) or just reducing SV little
01:08:669 (1) - there isn't any sound here, i recommend to delete this note
01:17:891 (7,1) - try reversing these
01:23:447 (4) - need NC about large distance and rhythm changing
01:26:891 - i think add spinner here by 01:29:891 - here (or somewhere) fits awesome
good luck~