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Miyazaki Ayumi - brave heart (TV Size)

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Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for your mods :3

And thanks for your star Cobra~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
\u heya bakai-nyan

[General]
  1. Remove 宮崎歩 from tags since it's already at Artist Unicode, and it's searchable if it's not in tags.
[Hard]
  1. 00:23:860 (2,3) - This flow can be better if you change (3)'s slidershape like this:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:36:959 (1) - This rhythm is boring ;__; why don't you add more things? To follow the special sound in the music, I'll suggest you to change your rhythm like this:
  3. 00:44:353 - Add a finish to emphasize the finish-like sound in the music? I can hear it correctly and easily, so whistle might be a bit soft to emphasize it.
  4. 01:35:268 (3,4) - Oh wait, what, a jump? That kinda unexceptable and unreasonable! I can't hear any sound in the music to prove that there should be a jump, and the placement how you place it is a bit... you know, ugly q.q. Consider to use random spacing to re-place it, that's much better than nonsense jump ;_;
[Normal]
  1. 00:53:649 (1,2) - Even I can hear the vocal is a bit special here, but an 1/2 slider + a note might be a bit weird here. I'll suggest you to use a 1/1 slider instead, that's much easier I bet.
[Easy]
  1. Slider tick rate 1? Since the slider velocity is the way too low, tick rate 2 will be ugly and annoyed when they appear in those sliders.
  2. 00:19:846 - Oh well, you miss a whistle here.
  3. 00:37:170 - Oh well, you miss a slidertick2 here.
  4. 00:58:719 (5) - Add a NC here to separate this slider and the previous objects? The music here is kinda special, so you should add a nc to make it individual imo.
Solid mapset, can't find many issue. Good luck bakai-nyan!
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for modding Flask :3

Fixed everything <3
EmingK
341 posts
Joined October 2012
EmingK
from queue
I'm a newbie modder ._. if there are errors ignore them

unrankable issue
suggestion
feel free to ignore
[General]
Make hitsounds crescendo from 00:56:818 to the first kiai's start ._.

[Easy]
00:21:536 (1,2) - blanket
01:02:945 (2,3) - ^
00:45:198 (1) - increase volume of the slider head
01:13:930 (1) - ^
01:45:198 (2,3) - not parallel
01:47:311 (4,2) - make full overlap?
01:02:522 (1,3) - exchange NC

[Normal]
00:45:198 (1) - increase volume
00:49:001 (4,5) - blanket
00:58:719 (1) - extend end to white line and add hitsound
01:13:930 (1) - increase volume of the slider head
01:02:099 (4) - make symmetry?
01:35:057 (5) - move up to grid

[Hard]
00:06:325 (1,2) - blanket
00:13:719 (5,6,7) - ^
00:23:226 (1,2) - ^
00:48:156 (5,6) - ^
01:43:930 (4,5) - ^
00:24:916 (3) - finish at head
01:42:663 (1) - ^
00:45:198 (1) - increase volume
01:13:930 (1) - increase volume of the slider head
01:12:874 (3) - SV changed, NC
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for modding EmingK :3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
IRC Modded.

SPOILER
04:58 Sekai-nyan: irc uguu
04:58 Andrea: for which map? =3=
04:58 Sekai-nyan: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/98117 =3=
04:58 Andrea: I don't have AIBat here
04:58 Sekai-nyan: my mapset
04:59 Sekai-nyan: it's fine o3o
04:59 Andrea: ok :V
05:00 Andrea: I highly suggest to not add japanese tags
05:00 Sekai-nyan: :<
05:00 Sekai-nyan: it looks moe
05:00 Sekai-nyan: lol
05:00 Andrea: it's not a matter of moe D:
05:01 Sekai-nyan: it's for japanese people :V
05:01 Sekai-nyan: it's the sourse in japanese
05:01 Sekai-nyan: source*
05:01 Andrea: if you want to keep it, alright
05:02 Sekai-nyan: :V
05:03 Andrea: 00:10:128 - this part feels empty... what about adding a slider and make it end where (3) is?
05:03 Andrea: 00:21:959 (2,3) - I know you wanted to make overlap here but spacing is kinda too close
05:04 Sekai-nyan: umm
05:05 Andrea: diff is clean, can't find much lol
05:05 Sekai-nyan: lol
05:05 Sekai-nyan: wait
05:05 Andrea: sure
05:05 Andrea: I'll go to Normal once you're done
05:07 Sekai-nyan: ok
05:07 Sekai-nyan: done with easy finally ;w;
05:08 Andrea: ok let's go to Normal
05:08 Sekai-nyan: o3o
05:08 Sekai-nyan: gratz for bubble baka xD
05:09 Andrea: lolwut
05:09 Andrea: xD
05:10 Sekai-nyan: lol Nymph gonna bubble it =3=
05:10 Andrea: 00:24:494 (5,6) - make these 2 notes into a slider instead?
05:11 Andrea: 01:13:508 (6,7) - same as above, it plays better imo
05:11 Andrea: 01:16:466 (5,6) - and again :V
05:12 Andrea: 01:19:846 (5,6) - ^
05:12 Andrea: 01:40:128 (2,3) - ^
05:12 Andrea: I won't mention the rest /lazy
05:13 Sekai-nyan: lol
05:13 Andrea: but you got my idea
05:13 Andrea: anyways I'll go to Hard when you're ready
05:14 Sekai-nyan: ok
05:14 Sekai-nyan: ready now
05:15 Andrea: 00:07:592 (3,4) - wrong spacing
05:15 Sekai-nyan: fixed it
05:15 Sekai-nyan: o3o
05:16 Andrea: 00:12:240 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing once again
05:17 Andrea: 00:18:156 (1,2,3) - make them symmetric?
05:17 Sekai-nyan: nazi =w=
05:18 Andrea: 00:48:790 (6) - this slider feels off the music imo, you're missing a main beat on white tick
05:18 Sekai-nyan: o.o
05:19 Sekai-nyan: no it follows the voice well imo
05:19 Andrea: though you miss the instrumentals there
05:19 Sekai-nyan: whistle?
05:19 Andrea: the drum on white tick
05:19 Andrea: anyways
05:19 Andrea: 01:12:874 (1) - why sudden SV change here? feels random
05:20 Sekai-nyan: music
05:20 Sekai-nyan: D:
05:20 Sekai-nyan: felt faster lol
05:20 Andrea: I don't like it tbh
05:20 Sekai-nyan: orz
05:20 Sekai-nyan: remove it?
05:20 Andrea: just normal speed
05:20 Andrea: like the rest
05:21 Andrea: 01:35:268 (3,4) - only random jump in the whole diff, space it normally
05:21 Sekai-nyan: ok
05:21 Andrea: nothing else, I guess
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Tonta C: Baka!

Here The SB - Mon! xD:

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//Storyboard Sound Samples

OSB: OSB

Folder: Here -----> Bakamon! <-----
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for great irc mod Andrea <3

And Gero thanks for the nice sb >w<
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
Nice mapset and sb,
Sb suggestions

spanish because yes.

Me gustaría que black.jpg aparezca en 01:56:184 - junto con el spinner porque no le encuentro mucho sentido que sea en 01:57:874 -

~Nothing else I can say about the sb

Oh! and for Sekai, AR+1 in Hard diff because looks better than ar7
GL!
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
[jeros SB]
pues lo unico que veo es que tienes una copia de pulse en el SB y no se anda usando
pero esta mui bueno el sb :3
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
eLtigreXXx
[jeros SB]
pues lo unico que veo es que tienes una copia de pulse en el SB y no se anda usando
pero esta mui bueno el sb :3 Tienes Razon! no lo estoy utilizando, Fixed!

-Cloudchaser
Nice mapset and sb,

Sb suggestions

spanish because yes.

Me gustaría que black.jpg aparezca en 01:56:184 - junto con el spinner porque no le encuentro mucho sentido que sea en 01:57:874 - Fixed

~Nothing else I can say about the sb
GL!


Thanks for the mods :3



OSB BAKA: http://puu.sh/3eAsm.osb


Sekai removes the file "Pulse" in the SB folder :3
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thank you guys for your mods :3

and updated the SB ><
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
[]
  1. really feel weird about the whistles you used at this map.. decreasing the volume of them by cooledit(or the same kind of tools) could improve it much imo..
　
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  1. 00:58:719 (1) - how about extending it 1/2 tick? since i heard the rhythm of the slider should be end at the line of downbeat..
  2. 01:34:212 (1) - i'd like to curve the tail of the slider like this -> http://puu.sh/3fwZ7.jpg
  3. 01:29:142 - to 01:49:423 - the new combo look didn't catch the beats. firstly the new combo should be set here 01:32:522 - rather than 01:34:212 - so that the rest of following new combo are all in wrong place.. yea after changed here the others can be done in the same manner. (for instance new combo at 01:35:902 - ,01:39:283 - ,01:42:240 - blablablabla...
　
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  1. 00:40:128 (1) - useless whistle on that head. consider to remove it.
  2. 00:43:508 (3) - ^
  3. 01:12:240 (4) - ^
  4. 00:58:719 (1) - same as Easy.
  5. 01:21:536 (2,2) - personally i think the whistles on these starts can be removed for a better effect.
　
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  1. 00:54:916 (7) - try to make the blanket better? --> http://puu.sh/3fxvX.jpg
  2. 01:01:043 - for the vocal and drum sound from the music, i'd rather like to use the rhythm like this for more flexible and recreational.
  3. 01:04:212 - ^
  4. 01:39:283 (3) - http://puu.sh/3fxFi.jpg
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that's all. good luck~
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai

Strawberry wrote:

[]
  1. really feel weird about the whistles you used at this map.. decreasing the volume of them by cooledit(or the same kind of tools) could improve it much imo..
　
[]
  1. 00:58:719 (1) - how about extending it 1/2 tick? since i heard the rhythm of the slider should be end at the line of downbeat.. Fixed
  2. 01:34:212 (1) - i'd like to curve the tail of the slider like this -> http://puu.sh/3fwZ7.jpg ^
  3. 01:29:142 - to 01:49:423 - the new combo look didn't catch the beats. firstly the new combo should be set here 01:32:522 - rather than 01:34:212 - so that the rest of following new combo are all in wrong place.. yea after changed here the others can be done in the same manner. (for instance new combo at 01:35:902 - ,01:39:283 - ,01:42:240 - blablablabla... Fixed them
　
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  1. 00:40:128 (1) - useless whistle on that head. consider to remove it. ok
  2. 00:43:508 (3) - ^ ^
  3. 01:12:240 (4) - ^ ^
  4. 00:58:719 (1) - same as Easy. ^
  5. 01:21:536 (2,2) - personally i think the whistles on these starts can be removed for a better effect. ^
　
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  1. 00:54:916 (7) - try to make the blanket better? --> http://puu.sh/3fxvX.jpg yeah it's nice :3 fixed it
  2. 01:01:043 - for the vocal and drum sound from the music, i'd rather like to use the rhythm like this for more flexible and recreational. yeah it's good, ok added it ><
  3. 01:04:212 - ^ umm i think my patterns here fits the music better, and i still tried it but i leave this patterns for now
  4. 01:39:283 (3) - http://puu.sh/3fxFi.jpg ok~
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that's all. good luck~
Thanks for modding Strawberry :3
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Did some irc mod

SPOILER
13:56 Flower: Hi~
13:56 *Sekai-nyan is away: resting a bit.....
14:01 Sekai-nyan: hi o.o
14:03 Flower: I don't want to post in the thread... Are you free to do an irc?
14:03 Sekai-nyan: sure owo/
14:04 Flower: okay
14:04 *Flower is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/261898 Miyazaki Ayumi - Brave Heart [Hard]]
14:05 Flower: 00:02:945 (1,2) - I think the rhythm plays better likehttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/815475 , if you accept, please also adjust the hitsounds
14:05 Sekai-nyan: hard?
14:05 Flower: yep
14:06 Flower: 00:05:480 (5) - move to 00:05:268 - ?
14:07 Sekai-nyan: baka first link broken
14:07 Sekai-nyan: o3o
14:07 *Flower facepalms
14:07 Flower: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/815475
14:08 Sekai-nyan: no i want to keep easy at the start
14:08 Sekai-nyan: slow music
14:08 Flower: up to you :3
14:08 Sekai-nyan: :3
14:08 Flower: 00:18:156 (1,2,3) - make more symmetrical
14:09 Flower: by moving 1 downwards
14:09 Flower: you can still keep ds
14:09 Sekai-nyan: sure
14:09 Sekai-nyan: done :3
14:09 Flower: 00:24:811 (2) - add clap? I find it sound much better
14:10 Sekai-nyan: oh ok
14:10 Sekai-nyan: sounds better yeah
14:10 Flower: 00:27:240 (2) - whistle on head instead of tail imo
14:11 Sekai-nyan: o.o
14:11 Sekai-nyan: wow yeah it followed good
14:11 Sekai-nyan: done :3
14:11 Flower: 00:38:121 - add clap? same reason
14:11 Sekai-nyan: ok
14:12 Flower: 00:43:297 (5) - whistle head insead of tail, same reason
14:12 Sekai-nyan: ok
14:12 Sekai-nyan: so many bad whistles ;w;
14:13 Flower: lol actually I think you need to improve the whistle placing
14:13 Flower: some of them don't follow
14:13 *Flower runs
14:13 Sekai-nyan: baka
14:13 Sekai-nyan: so mean lol
14:14 Flower: 01:06:430 (7) - I prefer to create some custom rhythm here. add clap and reduce volume just to this note? you can choose to keep your current pattern.
14:15 Sekai-nyan: nah
14:15 Sekai-nyan: i think i'll keep this for now
14:15 Flower: 01:13:719 (6,7) - add clap to both or just 7. also alternatives.
14:15 Sekai-nyan: looks good imo
14:15 Flower: k :3
14:16 Flower: 01:01:254 (4,1) - oh forget this one. blanket better
14:16 Sekai-nyan: ok
14:16 Sekai-nyan: fixed them o.o
14:18 Flower: 01:35:057 - I don't like this whistle here, but no better sulution imo. maybe you can try adding clap to 01:35:268 -
14:18 Sekai-nyan: no
14:18 Flower: k
14:18 Flower: 01:42:557 - why not add note here and add clap also with 01:42:452 - ?
14:18 Sekai-nyan: this whistle sounds good with music
14:19 Sekai-nyan: sure
14:19 Flower: Yeah, I know it, that's why I say "no better sulution"
14:19 Sekai-nyan: done
14:19 Flower: end of Hard :3 let's go to normal
14:20 Sekai-nyan: ok
14:20 Sekai-nyan: normal now
14:21 Flower: 00:09:705 (1,1) - I think the spinner is too short for players to note the next slider, which is only 1 beat later
14:21 Sekai-nyan: it's fine
14:21 Sekai-nyan: this normal
14:21 Flower: maybe 1/2 beat earlier just like Hard
14:21 Sekai-nyan: and bpm is not that fast :o
14:22 Flower: mmm
14:22 Flower: keep it if you like
14:22 Flower: 00:14:775 (1) - blanket previous 5?
14:22 Flower: 00:16:888 (4) - ^ the same
14:23 Sekai-nyan: done
14:23 Flower: 00:24:705 - add clap?
14:24 Sekai-nyan: sure
14:25 Flower: 01:21:536 - missing whistle imo
14:25 Flower: 01:23:226 - ^same
14:26 Sekai-nyan: lol
14:26 Sekai-nyan: i just removed them
14:26 Sekai-nyan: on strawberry's mod
14:27 Flower: lol... I think it sounds better with whistles. Let's just keep this until more mods.
14:27 Flower: 01:40:128 - ^same
14:27 Flower: nothing more in normal... quite neat map
14:28 Sekai-nyan: thanks :D
14:28 Flower: going to easy
14:28 Sekai-nyan: ok easy now
14:28 Sekai-nyan: :3
14:29 Flower: 00:03:367 - hmmm. why don't you add whistle to every third white tick instead of second and fourth? if you want to keep, please consider reducing tick volume
14:31 Sekai-nyan: ok
14:31 Sekai-nyan: done
14:31 Flower: 01:02:945 (5,1) - blanket better
14:31 Flower: 01:05:480 (3) - ^
14:31 Flower: 01:46:043 (1) - ^
14:32 Sekai-nyan: ok
14:32 Flower: nothing more as far as I know. Good map :3
14:32 Sekai-nyan: thanks >w<
14:32 Flower: No problem. Now I'm going to post the chatlog. Is that all right?
14:33 Sekai-nyan: yeah sure
14:33 Sekai-nyan: owo
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Flower for your nice mod :3
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax
IRC mod here.

amazing mapset baka <3

PD: Great SB Gero. You surprised me here.

log
02:06 Zeroarg: so nice ;w;
02:06 Zeroarg: btw
02:06 Zeroarg: baka Gero did amazing SB omg
02:06 Sekai-nyan: lol
02:06 Sekai-nyan: yeah
02:06 Sekai-nyan: simple but good xD
02:08 Zeroarg: anyway, let's focus here
02:08 Sekai-nyan: Zero meanie =w=
02:08 Zeroarg: 00:24:494 (4) - 
02:08 Zeroarg: that's a bit too hard easy
02:08 Zeroarg: change it into a circle maybe?
02:08 Sekai-nyan: let's see
02:08 Zeroarg: only because is a kick slider
02:09 Zeroarg: newbis always try yo follow the entire slider
02:09 Zeroarg: and that might confuse them with the sudden next slider
02:09 Sekai-nyan: oh right :/
02:09 Sekai-nyan: ok changed it
02:09 Sekai-nyan: =w=
02:10 Sekai-nyan: Zero so smart to notice this o3o
02:10 Zeroarg: o.o
02:10 Zeroarg: =w=
02:10 Zeroarg: btw
02:10 Zeroarg: epilepsy warning would be nice
02:10 Zeroarg: 2 flashes a bit strong at the start
02:11 Sekai-nyan: ok
02:11 Sekai-nyan: =3=
02:11 Zeroarg: and the sky keeps flashin a little before the lyrics start
02:11 Sekai-nyan: i think you're a bit right here
02:11 Zeroarg: ,w;
02:12 Sekai-nyan: lol
02:12 Sekai-nyan: really where
02:12 Zeroarg: look the sky
02:12 Zeroarg: since the very start
02:12 Zeroarg: up to the lyrics
02:12 Zeroarg: it follows the music
02:12 Zeroarg: lol
02:12 Zeroarg: gero so smart
02:12 Zeroarg: he made a great SB
02:12 Sekai-nyan: oh yeah lol
02:13 Sekai-nyan: i just noticed that 
02:13 Sekai-nyan: xD
02:13 Zeroarg: haha
02:13 Zeroarg: baka
02:13 Sekai-nyan: so smart yeah lol
02:13 Zeroarg: ;w;
02:13 Sekai-nyan: yeah lol lazy to notice
02:13 Sekai-nyan: =3=
02:14 Zeroarg:  well
02:14 Zeroarg: can't find anything else
02:14 Zeroarg: here
02:14 Zeroarg: good easy baka ;w;
02:14 Sekai-nyan: baka 
02:14 Sekai-nyan: =w=
02:15 Zeroarg: gonna follow with normal
02:17 Sekai-nyan: normal is a bit
02:17 Sekai-nyan: lol nvm
02:17 Sekai-nyan: i hate making normal tho xD
02:17 Zeroarg: me too
02:17 Zeroarg: normals are hard to map
02:17 Zeroarg: orz
02:17 Zeroarg: and again
02:17 Zeroarg: 1x100
02:17 Zeroarg: rofl
02:18 Sekai-nyan: lol
02:18 Zeroarg: yeah
02:19 Zeroarg: i saw 2 ugly overlaps
02:19 Zeroarg: baka
02:19 Sekai-nyan: lol
02:19 Sekai-nyan: ugly?
02:19 Zeroarg: overlaps are 90& of times ugly
02:19 Sekai-nyan: orz
02:19 Sekai-nyan: which one is that?
02:20 Zeroarg: lemme find them in editor
02:25 Zeroarg: anyway
02:25 Zeroarg: where were we?
02:25 Zeroarg: oh yeah 
02:25 Zeroarg: overlap
02:25 Sekai-nyan: the ugly overlap
02:25 Zeroarg: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/815564
02:25 Sekai-nyan: xD
02:25 Zeroarg: see the tails
02:26 Sekai-nyan: give me time
02:26 Zeroarg: ok
02:26 Sekai-nyan: the*
02:27 Sekai-nyan: o.o
02:35 Zeroarg: sorry
02:35 Zeroarg: 00:58:719 (1) - 
02:35 Zeroarg: that's it
02:37 Sekai-nyan: fixed it
02:37 Sekai-nyan: thanks for noticing that =w=
02:37 Zeroarg: sorry =w=
02:37 Zeroarg: and well the next overlap is
02:37 Sekai-nyan: is?
02:37 Sekai-nyan: lol
02:38 Zeroarg: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/815581
02:38 Zeroarg: 01:39:283 (1) - 
02:38 Zeroarg: is not overlap really
02:38 Zeroarg: is just fault of the ar
02:38 Zeroarg: it doesn't give enough time to (4) to dissapear
02:38 Zeroarg: and it overlaps (1)
02:39 Sekai-nyan: :c
02:39 Sekai-nyan: but i liked that overlap
02:39 Sekai-nyan: orz
02:39 Zeroarg: baka
02:39 Zeroarg: leave overlaps for hard and insane
02:40 Sekai-nyan: ;w;
02:40 Sekai-nyan: then if you have any plane on how to change
02:40 Sekai-nyan: it, tell me :c
02:40 Zeroarg: give me time
02:40 Zeroarg: and i'll se what i can do
02:40 Sekai-nyan: umm sure baka Zero :<
02:43 Zeroarg: well
02:43 Zeroarg: i have it
02:43 Sekai-nyan: o.o
02:43 Zeroarg: i'll puush the code
02:43 Zeroarg: give me a sec
02:44 Sekai-nyan: sure ><
02:45 Zeroarg: 01:39:283 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 
02:45 Zeroarg: delete those
02:45 Sekai-nyan: ok
02:46 Sekai-nyan: o.o and then?
02:46 Zeroarg: then wait baka
02:46 Zeroarg: puushing
02:46 Sekai-nyan: oh ok :I
02:46 Zeroarg: http://puu.sh/3gN4m.osu
02:46 Zeroarg: there it is
02:47 Zeroarg: hitobjects
02:47 Zeroarg: only
02:48 Sekai-nyan: omg
02:48 Sekai-nyan: it's good
02:48 Zeroarg: =w=
02:49 Sekai-nyan: thanks baka Zero =w=
02:50 Zeroarg: well
02:50 Sekai-nyan: so anything else?
02:50 Zeroarg: good normal
02:50 Zeroarg: nothing else there
02:50 Zeroarg: hard now
03:09 Zeroarg: ;w;
03:09 Zeroarg: and well yeah
03:09 Zeroarg: i can't find anythin in the hard lol
03:12 Zeroarg: btw
03:12 Zeroarg: not sure but
03:12 Sekai-nyan: but
03:12 Zeroarg: you might have to remove Gero from tags
03:13 Sekai-nyan: he made the sb
03:13 Zeroarg: dunno if storyboarders name should be in the tags
03:13 Zeroarg: ask that to a BAT
03:13 Zeroarg: i once saw sone who had to delete it
03:13 Zeroarg: that's why i'm not sure
03:14 Sekai-nyan: let's leave it to that for now
03:14 Sekai-nyan: :/
03:14 Zeroarg: yeah
03:14 Zeroarg: anyway
03:14 Zeroarg: i guess the mod finish here
03:14 Zeroarg: great mapset baka, thanks.
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for the great mod Zero <3
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
storyboard maker name shouldn't be in the tags.
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
ok Done thanks Heat :3
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi, late but here's my promised mod /o/

[General]
:!: Snap all objects in all difficulties. :!:
/me slaps Bakai.

[Hard]
:!: First. All these 3/4 sliders I point, make them 1/2 sliders, I can't see any reason to extend them. Adding that they sounds ankward as some of them have a silenced end (at least the first 4). Don't want to look mean, but please do.
00:32:522 (3) -
00:34:635 (5) -
00:35:902 (6) -
00:38:860 (3) -
00:47:311 (2) -
01:08:860 (1) -
01:21:536 (4) -

Ok, now some suggestions.
00:38:329 - Add a circle here.
00:40:128 (1) - Remove, there's no sound here, and it's better as this empty space give emphasis to the previous slider.
00:43:085 (4) - Delete and move 00:43:297 (5) here.
00:43:930 (2,3) - What is this? Move closer ;w;
00:48:156 - Do this instead, fits a lot better for vocals.

01:01:254 (4) - Here you coud use an extender 3/4 slider followed by a 1/2 slider and you didn't, here that pattern really fits, baka

01:06:114 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream is for? I'd delete 01:06:430 (7,9).
01:11:395 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider and add a circle in 01:11:709.
01:11:818 (4) - Maybe put a finish in the end?
01:12:240 (5) - There's no sound here, delete, also this note breaks the impact done by previous slider.
01:13:402 (3,5) - Remove, there's no sound and it'd be more fun to hit before the last chorus.
01:22:378 - Maybe this instead?

01:25:336 - This is more fun and matches perfectly with drums, please do D:

01:28:297 (2,3) - Actually I'd like this part be only circles in 1/2 or sliders, that 1/4 repeat sliders break the intensity of the drums imo.
01:47:730 - Please do this, matches perfectly with drums and it'd be a nice final.


[Normal]
00:08:015 (3) - Make this start in 00:07:801 and make it a 3/2 slider.
00:23:012 - Maybe add a circle for the piano.
00:24:494 (6) - Add a repeat here, it'd fill better this part, as theres a 1/4 triple in the song and having that part empty its a bit ankward.
00:36:325 (4) - Remove the repeat.
00:40:125 (1) - Begin this in 00:40:336 and make it a 1/2 slider, there's no sound in the downbeat and sounds better <:
00:43:505 (3) - Remove 1 repeat, move it to 00:43:927 and then add a circle in 00:43:716.
00:44:984 - Add a cicle here.
01:12:234 (4) - Move it to 01:12:449 and make it a 1/2 slider.
01:25:973 (1) - No finish, like in Hard?
01:33:998 - Maybe add a circle for the piano.
01:40:758 - ^
01:49:632 - Add a circle here and in 01:49:843, the spinner should being in 01:50:054 (1) c:

[Easy]
00:19:846 (3) - Any reason why this is a 3/2 slider? I'd prefer to put a 2/1 beat slider instead this and then a circle in 00:21:111.
00:36:744 (3) - ^
00:41:818 (1) - ^
00:45:198 (1) - ^
00:48:578 (1) - ^
01:05:480 (3) - ^
01:19:001 (4) - ^
01:29:142 (1,2) - ^
01:34:212 (4) - ^
01:47:733 (3) - ^
01:42:240 (1) - Move this slider to the next down beat and put a circle here. And I'd like that slider being a 3/2 slider, like you did in 00:24:916 (1).
01:46:043 (1) - A 3/2 slider as in 00:28:297 (1) please ;w;
01:49:846 (1) - Begin this spinner in 01:50:054.

:!: Actually this is a very tricky song with some empty downbeats, I tried to point all of them while modding each difficulty, the maps sounds a bit ankward as you are mapping on those empty downbeats, after a recheck on the song, I found them, you should avoid put something there (this goes for all difficulties), it'd really kill the emphasis the song itself put in the beats before (and I'll cry for real).
00:33:364 -
00:36:744 -
00:40:125 -
00:43:505 -
01:12:237 -

That'd be all from my part, please make this a nice mapset because it's a nice song for me :3
Good luck o/
Sekai
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Thanks Dake for helpful mod :3

Fixed some <3
HeatKai
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HeatKai
I would prefer Rookie/Champion/Ultimate/Mega. their digivolve level.
"digivolve" is just =w=''
Teara
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Teara
[Thoughts]

The whole mapset feels really plain. Since you mapped on the same pattern thing over and over again. While this is not bad and it is mapped pretty well, I cant help but feel you can map certain parts of the song better. There is so many places where you can follow other instruments and vocals to make it better. If your not sure what I mean, ask me in-game and I'll point out a few things.

[General]

All Diffs are has unsnapped objects.

The storyboard really looks weird on a widescreen (on the sides of the screen) its nothing major, but slightly distracting.

[Digivolve]
Weird diff name. Any reason why you don't just call it Hard? (since you have Easy/Normal)

Some slider Nazi:

00:25:761 (5) - It can look a tad bit neater. See SS

SPOILER

00:49:423 (7) - ^

SPOILER

00:50:268 (1) - Same as above.
00:51:536 (6) - ^

Not gonna point out the rest, you should get an idea of what I mean

[Normal]

00:07:170 (2,3) - These are a bit tricky to sight read for a normal -> unstack it like so maybe.

SPOILER
Sekai
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Thanks for modding Teara :3

Fixed everything on your mod <3
alacat
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alacat
Hi nyan! As requested.

[General]
  1. How about adding kiai time at here ? 01:07:167 -
  2. 00:02:942 - use lower volume ? since the melody is calmer than this part.00:11:392 -
[Rookie]
  1. 00:06:956 - it doesn't follow the music. I recommend you to put 1/1 rhythm.
  2. 00:10:125 (3) - add a clap at the end instead of whistle.
  3. 00:18:153 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
  4. 00:28:294 (1) - How about remaking a triangle ? looks better imo.
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/942550
  5. 01:25:970 (1) - add a whistle.
[Champion]
  1. 00:18:153 (1) - same as Rookie diff.
  2. 00:22:378 (2,3) - I feel it fits the piano sound. please try my rhythm
  3. 00:43:505 (3) - dont forget to add a finish to the tail of the slider.
  4. 01:06:322 (5) - Same.
  5. 01:10:547 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
  6. 01:17:308 (1) - Please try to rotate around 60°, you can make the natural flow.
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/942581
  7. 01:21:533 (2) - ,01:23:223 (2) - add a whistle to the head of the slider.
  8. 01:40:125 (2) - ^
  9. 01:43:927 (1) - remove new combo ? :o
[Ultimate]
  1. 00:18:153 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
  2. 00:32:730 - volume up around 20%, please!
  3. 00:43:294 (5) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
  4. 00:47:625 - How about putting lower volume ? like this previous part.
  5. 00:48:153 (5,6) - it doesn't follow the music. i will follow the vocal in this case.
  6. 01:01:251 (4) - add a whistle to the repeat of the slider.
  7. 01:05:477 (1) - ,01:18:998 (1) - ,01:35:899 - add a finish.

    i feel it is better to make more jump part ;)
Nice SB and great mapset ! Hope you fine this helpful :3
Sekai
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Thank you alacat for your helpful mod :3

Fixed everything <3
Gero
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Good luck baka <3 rank this

you can add me on tags x'D ok no
Sekai
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lol Thanks Gero =w=/

And about tags, you're too yaoi to be in tags =w=b so no i won't =3=
-Neipezi
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o_o d!
Andrea
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IRC Modded.

SPOILER
15:29 Andrea: ok let's see
15:29 Andrea: There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 3).
15:29 Andrea: ^ wut
15:29 Sekai-nyan: lol wut
15:31 Sekai-nyan: fixed
15:31 Sekai-nyan: lol
15:31 Sekai-nyan: let me submit
15:31 Andrea: waaaaait
15:31 Andrea: let me finish the mod
15:33 Sekai-nyan: o3o
15:35 Andrea: on Normal
15:36 Andrea: 00:44:772 (4,5) - make this a slider like other patterns like this
15:36 Andrea: 01:25:547 (4,5) - this would be better as slider too o3o
15:37 Andrea: 01:40:547 (3,4) - ^
15:37 Andrea: 01:45:618 (4,5) - like 00:44
15:37 Andrea: 01:48:575 (2,3) - ^
15:38 Andrea: I'll go on Hard
15:39 Andrea: 00:32:519 (3) - increase the volume of this sliderend a bit, like 5-10%
15:39 Andrea: do the same for the others like that
15:39 Sekai-nyan: wait ok
15:40 Andrea: 00:47:308 (2,3) - there is even worse since it's a circle <.<
15:40 Andrea: 00:48:787 (6) - this slider doesn't really follow anything, you're missing the big white tick with drum...
15:40 Andrea: consider changing rhythm here
15:41 Andrea: 01:07:167 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing!
15:41 Andrea: 01:12:871 (1,2) - I don't really like this jump here... ctrl+g is better
15:42 Sekai-nyan: lol wait
15:42 Andrea: 01:16:674 (6,7,8) - fix the spacing =3=
15:42 Andrea: 01:18:998 (1) - add a finish here, there's a strong beat on the music ><
15:43 Andrea: 01:42:449 (5,6,1) - fix the spacing again
15:43 Andrea: okay fix them all xD
15:43 Andrea: and fix all lowered volumes
15:43 Andrea: I'd suggest +10% on all of them
15:47 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed them all
15:47 Sekai-nyan: i guess
15:49 Andrea: c:
15:49 Sekai-nyan: btw by ctrl+G you mean
15:49 Sekai-nyan: slider then stream
15:49 Sekai-nyan: o.o
15:51 Andrea: only the slider, sorry
15:51 Sekai-nyan: baka
15:52 Andrea: =w="
15:52 Andrea: is it updated?
15:52 Sekai-nyan: =3=
15:52 Sekai-nyan: wait
15:53 Andrea: okaaaay~
15:54 Sekai-nyan: ok updated now
15:55 Andrea: let me check
15:55 Andrea: oh right
15:55 Andrea: I need to reDL
15:59 Andrea: [Normal]
15:59 Andrea: 01:40:970 (4,5) - WRONG SPACING
15:59 Andrea: WHY
16:00 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed it =3=
16:01 Andrea: 00:49:209 (8,9) -
16:01 Andrea: wrong spacing on Hard <.<
16:01 Sekai-nyan: o3o
16:01 Sekai-nyan: bakadrea
16:01 Andrea: also make the 25% sections to 30%
16:01 Andrea: I think it's better
16:01 Andrea: and that's it
16:03 Sekai-nyan: o3o
16:04 Sekai-nyan: noticed that :/
16:04 Sekai-nyan: anyways updated
16:05 Andrea: the spacing on hard isn't fixed...
16:05 Andrea: x_x
16:06 Sekai-nyan: which one?
16:06 Andrea: I pointed you lol
16:06 Sekai-nyan: you mean normal
16:06 Andrea: 00:49:209 (8,9) -
16:06 Sekai-nyan: baka
16:06 Andrea: Champion
16:08 Sekai-nyan: ok
16:08 Sekai-nyan: done =3=

EDIT: Bubbled~
Natsu
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gogo baka! c:

also andrea is pikachu D:
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o.o
Sekai
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Thanks Andrea owo/ and Kurai <3
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Gratz :D My first SB Ranked xD
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u fast baka congratz back me my acc D: you are not in tags gero go away aahhahaha
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Oyatsu
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Pro Sekai-senpai!! Congratz!! <3 :)
Sekai
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Thank you guys o3o/

this one has finally got ranked orz!
yurunneram
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OMG THE FEELS!!!! YES!!! GRATZ AND THANK YOU!!! OAO
Sekai
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Thank you for your support ></
Hard
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CONGRATZ <3 dad feels
Stefan
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I perfer the german version ;____;

Grats!
Kyouren
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Gratzz!!! Sekai!!!

Nyan, Nyan, Nyannnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!
-Neipezi
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congratz :3/
Andrea
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That was fast :P

Congrats.
pimp
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congratulations <3
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Congratz! :3
Sekai
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Thank you Guys >w</
hoLysoup
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show me your brave heart!
Sekai
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oh hoLysoup so moe :>

and Thank you <3
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Wow.... This song.. Evolution bgm.. (tears)
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