1. adjust the BG to

   0,0,"bg.jpg",0,100

1. OD-1
2. 00:11:122 (1) - remove? can emphasize 00:11:299 (1,1) - vocal
3. 00:22:660 (1) - remove? make 00:22:483 (2) - more powerful
4. 00:48:578 (1) - remove
5. 01:08:992 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make these easier :3
6. this muzu is a bit hard wwwww

1. 00:22:660 (1) - same as muzu
2. 00:46:891 - remove make the vocal clearly
3. 01:18:400 - ~ 01:19:643 - use this ?:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/869730

That's all
Good Luck~

qoot8123 wrote:

Random mod #modreq~

[General]

1. adjust the BG to

   0,0,"bg.jpg",0,100

[Muzu]

1. OD-1
2. 00:11:122 (1) - remove? can emphasize 00:11:299 (1,1) - vocal
3. 00:22:660 (1) - remove? make 00:22:483 (2) - more powerful
4. 00:48:578 (1) - remove
5. 01:08:992 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make these easier :3
6. this muzu is a bit hard wwwww Muzu diff has been improved ww

[Oni]

1. 00:22:660 (1) - same as muzu
2. 00:46:891 - remove make the vocal clearly
3. 01:18:400 - ~ 01:19:643 - use this ?:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/869730

That's all
Good Luck~

qoot8123 wrote:

Random mod #modreq~

[General]

1. adjust the BG to

   0,0,"bg.jpg",0,100

That's all
Good Luck~

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiya! You were a winner of my special round!

Let's go:

Normal

1. 00:39:347 (5) - The clap at the end of this slider sounds out of place. Try using hit sounds according to the down beat of the drum. Like every second white tick for example. Consider this for [Easy] too (btw I did look at easy as well, just couldn't find anything else in particular) Nice catch. Fixed. Will closely look at Easy's hitsounding. I do understand there may be hitsounds that need cleaning up.
2. 01:07:039 - Try and account for the beat at this point. Adjust one of the sliders (8) or (1) to do that. Agreed. Fixed~

Insane

1. I like the hit sounds a lot, but are sometimes inconsistent throughout the song.
   
   1. For example, here in the chorus 01:01:181 you suddenly stop using the the drum sample set and sometimes you use claps and other times you don't. Fixed a number of inconsistencies in the beatmap, and took a closer look at the entire map for similar things.
   2. Some notes that you've chosen to use a different hit sound on seem a little sporadic to me.Also checked and adjusted/fixed according to song.
   3. See jonathan's [Hard] which utilises a constant beat and/or is justified by the drums contained in the song.
   Yep.
2. 00:19:110 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Is the space missing between the stream intentional? If so, make the distance between (4) and (5) greater. Unsnapped notes, that's all. Resnapped and fixed.
3. 00:20:042 (1) - Lengthen this slider by a 1/4 note?Check above point.

That's it from me! I hope you find some of suggestions helpful.

Until next time

Ciao~

Unsfamiliar wrote:

jonathanlfj's Hard

1. 00:02:246 (5,1) - Move these further apart? meant to be an anti-jump, but moved a bit apart for better readibility
2. 00:22:838 (4,5,6) - Is this intentionally unstacked? Looks a little messy otherwise. intentional to prevent note shifting via stack leniency
3. 00:22:660 - Add a note here and chuck a clap on it (this is the only drum hit you don't account for in this section). well this is intended to follow the violins, and having consistency with 01:24:613 (2,3,4)
4. 01:25:323 (4,5,6) - Similar to before, looks untidy for me. stack leniency

Marcin wrote:

First time modding taiko, will mod just muzukashii, since i can't play oni's properly, also, please be lenient for me, I'm still learning taiko

[Muzukashii]
00:30:116 (2) - k ? to emphasize ending of the instrument you were following here 00:29:051 (1,2,3) -
and after doing this, 00:30:471 (1,1) - both d ??
01:20:885 (1,1) - d K ? Big kat would fit for the ending of vocal


Not so long, but still something Let's hope i'll get better at this.

SPOILER

Wafu wrote:

Please, prevent making M4M with me if you don't know how to map.

Wafu wrote:

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

[General]

You will probably need to remake whole hitsounds, because there are too random, not consistent, just weird. Will take a much closer look this timie.

[Insane]

00:01:181 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped a bit so I recommend to delete 00:01:536 (3), add repeat on 00:01:181 (2) and move the next note on 00:01:714 Fixed.
00:02:069 (4,1) - Try adding note on 00:02:069, remove the slider and add 1/1 slider on 00:02:246. Also remove 00:02:601 (1). Reason is that piano note on 00:02:246 still sounds until 00:02:601. Fixed.

00:04:554 (2,3) - Again overmapped. Use 2/1 slider or 1/1 slider with repeat on 00:04:554 and remove 00:04:554 (2,3) Fixed.

00:08:637 (5) - ^ Fixed.

00:15:560 (6) - I think these "sharp" sliders should be used on reasonable places so maybe make this smooth slider from this. Fixed, thank you!

SPOILER

00:19:998 (1) - 1/1 slider fits here more because this slider follows nothing on 00:20:175 and it feels like flow pauses on a while. Fixed. ~
00:59:583 (7,8) - Swap these two and move 8 on 7's start. It follows music better.ahh. Thank you~ Fixed.

These problems are repeating again and again..

[Normal]

00:09:524 (3,4) - What the hell flow is this? Totally needs to remap this part. Changed, and fixed. Thank you~
00:16:270 (4) - Make a perfect blanket. Done.
01:05:619 (7,8) - This totally doesn't follow the music, needs remap too.Yep. Fixed.

[Easy]

00:24:436 (1) - Start on 00:24:258 because it works like downbeat here. Fixed.
00:36:151 (1,2) - Make more natural shape, it so unsymmetric.Made it into something different.

Well... I have no patience with these maps. As my queue said:

Wafu wrote:

Please, prevent making M4M with me if you don't know how to map.

Sorry, but I cannot mod such maps. I can mod them only if they're really good so I've modded a bit and these things repeat still over again, so you could just follow some and fix them everywhere. Whole map needs really much of reworks and I won't mention everything, when I feel every 2nd pattern is bad so it would be 3 A4papers long mod and I really don't want to waste time like this. Modding is fine, unless the send you a bad map.
I don't want to be rude, but you need a lot of improvement of your style.

Of course, and I can't agree more. However, this is still my first map, and I'm well aware that a lot of things need to be changed. I appreciate the criticism as well. Although your comments were a little bit of a slap to the face for me, it still gives a me a good sense of what to be expected from other modders. A lot of these points can be kept for future reference too, so I really do appreciate it. Additionally, I would like to apologize for overlooking that rule you mentioned in your queue. I suppose it was just me being over confident with myself. Anyway, thank you for the mod!.

Wafu wrote:

[Hard]

00:00:294 (1,3) - Make a perfect blanket sure
00:12:720 (4,5) - Move on 222;351 to prevent the overlap. I know it a bit ignores DS, but isn't it better than making not-reasonable overlap? kinda lost here, if i move it there it would break the blanket formed by 00:12:187 (3), which will cause some inconsistency since i designed this diff for blankets...
00:19:998 (3) - Same as I said in insane. Sharp sliders imo needs to have reason in music, like breakbeat, any type of noise, distortion etc. so consider adding sliderpoint between 00:19:998 and 00:20:175 on 249;322 did something similar here
00:24:258 (1) - ^ made it curve
00:29:938 (1) - ^ It's suggestion so I won't mention this anymore. this one actually has a drum beat at 00:30:116 (2), which i think makes this slider fit here
00:37:572 (4) - Definitely fix this overlap if you look at it side ways, this is actually a symmetrical overlap on 00:37:039 (3,4), its one of the common techniques i use on my maps so i would like to keep this
00:47:867 (3) - Use this slider: 00:47:157 (1) for symmetry. symmetry here is rather difficult to do due to the way i arranged the objects here, but i made 00:47:867 (3) curvey to compensate
00:54:968 - This drum hitsound is really rare in your diff, I'd delete it, because it's not used in similar part. these are there to mimic the drum sounds in the music, they sound fine for me (variety is not a bad thing right?)
00:46:625 - ^

I don't want to be rude, but this is only one serious osu! diff in this mapset. well im sure Giralda will eventually make his difficulties clever~

snlrocks wrote:

general
i think you either need to increase in mp3 audio of lower your hit sounds.
I actually already increased the mp3 so if you want to use it. the mp3 is here. I think it would be better to lower your hit sound volume but it totally your call Reduced hitsound volume. Thanks for the mp3 suggestion though~

easy
only a few hitsound problems but its only because of the volume being a bit too loud. Also fixed.

normal
00:05:796 (1) - end the spinner 00:07:394 - here Done.
00:17:690 (1) - remove NC and NC the next object Done.

Taiko's were both amazing

hard
no complaints here

insane
that was absolutely perfect. i really enjoyed it

Trust wrote:

ZENBU ZENBU ZENB-

Trust wrote:

i'm probably just brainwashed

[ infL ] wrote:

Normal

1. 00:09:169 (2) - Maybe it could look like this instead. I think matches the vocal better Took the idea and turned it into something similar.
   From this:
   
   to this:
   
   
2. 00:11:299 (1) - If you are following the vocals i think this should start on the blue tick right after. I'll consider it. I'm a little hesitant about starting a slider on blue tick for a Normal diff.
   
3. 01:25:146 (2) - I think if you change this like this: it will be better. So move the start of 2 to the red tick where your timing point starts. Sure.
   From this:
   
   To this:
   

Insane

1. 00:35:974 (1) - Perhaps you could delete this circle since theres a tiny break in the song before she starts singing again.
2. 01:13:785 (6) - Maybe you could change like this. So that the 01:14:140 (1) slider will start when she is singing.
   From:
   
   To this:
   
3. 01:19:998 (9) - Same thing here
   From:
   
   To:
   

all suggestions taken for the insane, thank you for your mod!~

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M

[Normal]
Overall I suppose it looks so hard.Please put notes more constant Rhythm and playable placement for newbie.
Placement
00:47:152(2) NC here because of change of SV. sure.
01:05:796(1) Useless NC. Removed NC.
Rhythm
00:05:619(4) I don't follow this slider since the reverse doesn't follow any sound and it is hard for Normal diff. Fixed.
00:16:270(3,5) I don't recommend to change SV in Normal for newbie. or put NC here. Oops, removed. Overlooked it because I copied the inheriting sections over from the insane.
00:35:441(2) Add kick better to follow the music.sure.

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:08:104(1) Prefer finish at head. sure.
00:47:157(2) Add finish at head. okay.

[Insane]
Rhythm
00:00:294~00:05:974 It looks so fast SV in this calm part, I recommend you can slow down these sliders. SV reduced to 1.80
00:10:412(7,8,1) It looks weird for me since these notes doesn't follow any sound. Removed the circles.
00:11:299(2,3,4,5) Please listen music more carefully and you should follow these vocal and sound properly. e.g.) Suggestion taken.

SPOILER

00:16:092(5,6) Player won't expect change of speed suddenly, I don't suppose it is really necessary to change SV. If you aim to change SV, put NC better for sign of change. Remove SV increase and changed back to 1.00x
00:41:477(7,8,9) I don't agree these 1/1 notes since it isn't suitable for music. In this part vocal has lasted longer, so you can put sliders. Made it into something like this http://puu.sh/5qWqj.jpg
00:43:962~ Again, for Insane I don't agree to make many blanks especially AR9 since it will break the flow. I agree. I got a complaint from that from a friend that tested for me. Changed into something like this: http://puu.sh/5qWtu.jpg
00:51:950(1,2,3,4) It doesn't follow music properly, maybe you can replace better. one way to resolve, you can start sliders from white line.Changed.
01:05:086(1) Shorten this slider and instead put a note better like this. Sure.

SPOILER

01:19:998(9) Sounds weird since it's no sound at reverse. maybe like this? Made it into this: http://puu.sh/5qWLP.jpg

SPOILER

01:23:725(1) Shorten this and put notes instead better. Fixed.

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:14:317(1) Add soft-finish at head. Yep.
00:34:199(1)^ ^
01:09:702(1)^ ^
00:35:441(6) Add finish at end I actually changed this into a 1/2 and 1/1 slider with NC, and added a finish on the head of the 1/1 instead.

Good Luck. Thank you for mod!

[ Yuki ] wrote:

Hello~:3
M4M

mod

[Normal]
00:08:104 (1) - tail Finish Add
00:18:400 (6) - ^
00:34:199 (7) - head Finish Add
00:35:264 (1) - Clap Add
00:36:151 (1) - ^
00:36:862 (2) - ^
00:37:572 (3) - head,tail Clap Add
00:38:637 (4) - tail Clap Add
00:39:347 (1) - ^
00:40:057 (2) - ^
00:41:832 (4) - head,tail Clap Add
00:43:962 (6) - ^
00:45:382 (2) - tail Clap Add and tail Finish Add
00:47:157 (2) - head Finish Add
00:51:063 (3) - tail Finish Add
00:52:838 (2) - ^^ Having just the one on the head is fine imo.
00:53:548 (3) - ^^
01:09:524 (1) - head Clap Add
01:10:234 (2) - ^
01:11:654 (4) - Clap Add
01:12:009 (5) - tail Clap Add
01:12:720 (1) - ^
01:15:027 (5) - tail Finish Add
01:15:737 (1) - ^
01:19:110 (3) - ^
01:20:175 (4) - head Finish Add
01:20:885 (5) - ^^ I'd prefer not, but I'll take it into consideration cuz it sounds okay, but at the same time it doesn't...so if someone else says something, I'll change it.
01:26:743 (3) - Finish Add

Hit Sound Requesting confirmation!!!!!!!!Oh man, my apologies for missing out on the hitsounding. I had this difficulty remapped but didn't hitsound it. No comment = fixed Thanks~

[Insane]
01:17:690 (2) - x:380,y:116 <<(01:18:222 (4) - On the tail) Changed, thanks.

good

good song!! GL~ Thank you for your mod!

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hello~!
From M4M

[Normal]
Hmmm.. you should unity DS all note better. Cleaned up all the DS problems.

[Insane]
00:06:329 (1) - Delete NC fixed.
00:13:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - My suggestion. Going to keep mines because I don't want to change the flow of what I already had in mind. But I may take the suggestion if I do a little more testing. But for now I'll leave it the way it is.

00:26:743 (6) - Move it x-272 y-284 sure.
00:29:051 (1) - Delete NC done.

That's all.
Good Song and Map!
Take My Star

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

[Hard]
00:20:530 (1) - Delete NC The NC here is used for better clarity on the anti-jump.
00:40:412 (1) - ^ ^

1. Kiai starts at big white tick/stanza.
2. Check aimod. Check the Audio and Letterbox.

1. Kats Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:43:607 (1) - k add kat
     01:05:441 (1) - ^
2. Add/Delete Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:25:856 (2) - Delete this. 2 note is enough to pitch the vocal
     00:28:696 (2) - Delete this.
     00:37:217 (1) - Delete, wut anything fit here (just my oppinion )
     00:58:518 - Add circle. don or kat up to you. for me it's feel empty here because kiai not starts in big white tick/stanza.
     Add spinner at end?
3. Other Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:12:720 (4) - Delete kat. too enough.
     00:13:252 (1,1) - Trade them. i see the kat looks low instrumental than don. so trade them. (i mean change kd to dk.)
     00:22:483 (2,1) - Trade them. ^
     00:23:725 (1) - ^
     00:29:761 (3,1,2) - lol they weird pitch. trying to use dkd.
     00:31:181 (2,1,2) - So mainstream. trying to use these so incosistent. make it like this much better. 1/2 x 1/2
     
     SPOILER

     
     00:37:394 (2) - move to red tick. 5 patterns on this song is not good.
     00:41:122 (1,1,1) - lol delete and make new.
     01:04:376 (2,1) - Trade them.
     01:25:323 (1,2,3) - ddk. change it. suck at kkk.
     
     Ok <3 done

1. Kats Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:12:720 (1) - Delete kat.
     00:14:495 (1) - Add kat.
     00:18:045 (2) - ^
     00:19:998 (1) - ^
     00:24:791 (1) - ^
     Ok done <3
2. Delete/Add Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:10:412 - Add circle? don or kat up to you. Seems hidden instrumental is here? try it.
     00:10:589 - ^
     00:51:950 (2) - Delete circle.
     Add spinner at end?
     Ok done <3
3. Other Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:14:317 (1) - k is not logical for pitch here. so delete kat and add finish, and delete 00:14:495 (1).
     00:14:672 (1) - (CONTINUE) so move to red tick. and add kat. more consistency
     00:18:045 (2) - Add kat? same it as muzu.
     00:26:033 (1) - move to red tick. seems what you pitch/fit here?
     00:29:761 (3,1,2) - Same suggestion at Muzukashii.
     00:38:459 (1,2,3) - This stream. what you fits here? k maybe add kat at (3).
     Ok. i can't mod other parts.

sheela901 wrote:

[Normal]
00:48:933 (1) - Move the last point to x:325 y:188 so the curve could fit with 00:49:998 (2). sure.
00:52:838 (2) - Move the second point to x:276 y:63, and the last one to x:204 y:59 to get the same slider, but flipped. done.
00:58:518 - Start the kiai time here. Added a note on where I originally had the kiai time start. Mostly due to keeping kiai times consistent across the difficulties.

sheela901 wrote:

[Easy]
00:18:045 (2) - On the head, remove the clap? i like how this sounds
00:32:601 (1) - Move the first point (little square) to x:112 y:96? fixed up a few things here
00:39:524 (1) - Move it to x:376 y:144 to have a blanket, and move 00:40:412 (2) to x:323 y:344? sure

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: 58518
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:この世界は僕らを待っていた (TV Size)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:Giralda
Version:Trust's Easy
Source:Suisei no Gargantia
Tags:ledo amy chamber anime opening gartantia on the verdurous planet jonathanlfj reyshel trust production i.g. 翠星のガルガンティア
BeatmapID:314244
BeatmapSetID:98486

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
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420,20,37927,2,0,P|480:48|496:124,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,144,39524,6,0,P|352:204|355:292,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,40412,2,0,P|264:336|224:344,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,41122,2,0,P|105:282|80:207,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,128,42187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,68,42542,2,0,P|256:104|320:64,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,40,43607,6,0,P|452:32|496:56,2,79.9999999999999,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,128,44672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,184,45027,2,0,B|280:228|280:228|204:252,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,212,46092,6,0,L|-4:240,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,187,47157,2,0,P|256:152|336:212,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,228,48222,2,0,P|421:185|425:141,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,68,48933,6,0,P|372:67|335:52,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,49643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,52,49998,2,0,P|138:66|99:67,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,148,50708,2,0,P|64:224|120:324,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,268,51773,2,0,P|216:252|272:252,1,79.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,52483,5,8,0:0:0:0:
424,224,52838,2,0,P|436:108|316:48,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,54258,2,0,P|192:100|96:44,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
48,124,55323,5,8,0:0:0:0:
96,200,55678,2,0,B|128:256|128:256|140:332,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,332,56566,2,0,B|260:340|260:340|308:328,1,79.9999999999999,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,292,57453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,204,57808,2,0,L|452:116,1,79.9999999999999,8|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,48,58518,6,0,P|337:87|260:68,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,40,59583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,96,59938,2,0,P|95:172|134:240,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,236,61004,2,0,B|316:236|380:324|380:324|384:212|488:156,1,360,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,56,63134,6,0,P|344:40|296:48,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,68,64021,2,0,P|164:148|124:172,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,208,64909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,336,65441,6,0,P|185:325|219:293,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,244,66329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,66684,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,220,67039,2,0,P|468:158|448:96,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,62,67927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,44,68282,1,4,0:0:0:0:
200,140,68814,2,0,P|148:180|104:192,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,136,69879,6,0,P|376:116|460:144,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,204,70944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,280,71299,2,0,P|360:300|276:272,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,232,72542,6,0,P|136:184|136:112,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,40,73430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,91,73962,6,0,P|309:139|309:211,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,283,74850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,293,75382,6,0,P|108:264|73:129,1,200,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,130,76980,2,0,P|327:100|358:22,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,36,78045,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,114,78400,6,0,L|442:188,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,216,79110,2,0,L|300:328,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,80175,2,0,P|130:210|95:199,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81063,12,0,84080,0:0:0:0:
173,156,85323,6,0,P|187:232|339:156,1,320,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86832,12,0,88341,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:02:601 (5) - Stack on 00:02:246 (4) - or move higher than 00:02:246 (4) - , because the pitch is higher than it.
2. 00:03:666 (2) - Why you put this on here o.o? move it to here will be natural.
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3. 00:12:009 (4) - 1 grid down.
4. 00:14:317 (1,3) - Try to change the rhythm and add normal hitsound on every white line in 00:13:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this part, it's fits the music imo.
5. 00:15:826 (4) - Add clap.
6. 00:24:791 (1) - Move to x:316 y:224
7. 00:23:548 (6) - Add clap on slider's second reverse.
8. 00:35:353 (6) - Add clap, here has a drums sound too.
9. 00:39:524 (3) - Add clap on slider's end.
10. 00:45:915 (1) - Try use a note and 1/2 slider here.
11. 00:51:950 (1) - Speed up should be start from here 00:52:128 (1) -
12. 00:54:613 (9) - Add normal hitsound.
13. 01:10:412 (3) - 1 grid right.
14. 01:12:720 (1) - Remove clap, 01:13:075 (2) - add it on here.

1. 00:02:246 (5) - Try this.
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2. 00:03:134 (1) - If the slider is upward will be more fit on the music imo.
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3. 00:35:353 (2) - Add clap.
4. 00:46:447 (5,6) - On these two, i prefer to use jump here because the rhythm is changed on next beat.
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5. 01:16:802 (3,4) - Add clap on slider's start? The sound is good for me.

1. 00:00:294 (1) - Move left a bit.
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2. 00:11:299 (1) - Move to 00:11:477 (1) -
3. 00:24:791 (1) - Wht you only add normal hitsound here, add it on every 2,4 beat in this part. o3o
4. 00:58:341 (4) - Kiai time should be started from here.
5. 01:09:702 (x) - Add something here? It is strange withtout finish.
6. 01:26:388 (1) - Remove NC.

1. 00:18:755 (1) - End at 00:21:595 and add finish?
2. 01:21:063 (1) - Add finish.

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From my Queue

[Insane]

1. 00:02:601 (5) - Stack on 00:02:246 (4) - or move higher than 00:02:246 (4) - , because the pitch is higher than it. Good suggestion. Changed, Thanks ~
2. 00:03:666 (2) - Why you put this on here o.o? move it to here will be natural. Was trying to aim for not making the player to stop at a note before the note appears, but I'll change for better flow.
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3. 00:12:009 (4) - 1 grid down. sure.
4. 00:14:317 (1,3) - Try to change the rhythm and add normal hitsound on every white line in 00:13:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this part, it's fits the music imo. Kept the (1), removed the (3) and made a new 1/1 slider w/ repeat as a (2) for that combo.
5. 00:15:826 (4) - Add clap. From the last point, I added a note w/ clap to make a triplet with (4) and (1). It sounds better like that than having a clap being played on a blue tick.
6. 00:24:791 (1) - Move to x:316 y:224 Done.
7. 00:23:548 (6) - Add clap on slider's second reverse. Okay.
8. 00:35:353 (6) - Add clap, here has a drums sound too. Sure.
9. 00:39:524 (3) - Add clap on slider's end.Done.
10. 00:45:915 (1) - Try use a note and 1/2 slider here. Nice idea. Thanks.
11. 00:51:950 (1) - Speed up should be start from here 00:52:128 (1) - changed 00:51:950 (1) to be 1.00x sv, and moved speed up tick to 00:52:128 (1) as stated.
12. 00:54:613 (9) - Add normal hitsound. sure.
13. 01:10:412 (3) - 1 grid right. okay.
14. 01:12:720 (1) - Remove clap, 01:13:075 (2) - add it on here. Done.

The arrangement is kinda messy for me. :O I'll try harder next time
But it's not bad for new mapper

[Normal]

1. 00:00:294 (1) - Move left a bit. Done.
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2. 00:11:299 (1) - Move to 00:11:477 (1) - Done.
3. 00:24:791 (1) - Wht you only add normal hitsound here, add it on every 2,4 beat in this part. o3o Err, didn't quite understand what you meant here but I tried to do the best I could.
4. 00:58:341 (4) - Kiai time should be started from here. Woops. Fixed.
5. 01:09:702 (x) - Add something here? It is strange withtout finish. Used a note on 01:09:524 and made a 1/2 slider on 01:09:702 with finish on the head.
6. 01:26:388 (1) - Remove NC.Done.

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Trust's Easy]
00:18:755 (1) - End at 00:21:595 and add finish?
01:21:063 (1) - Add finish.

sheela901 wrote:

[Hard]
00:37:572 (4) - Move it to one grid lower? moved the previous on up instead

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

1. 00:02:246 (5) - Try this.
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   i prefer the current setup more
2. 00:03:134 (1) - If the slider is upward will be more fit on the music imo.
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3. 00:35:353 (2) - Add clap.
4. 00:46:447 (5,6) - On these two, i prefer to use jump here because the rhythm is changed on next beat.
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5. 01:16:802 (3,4) - Add clap on slider's start? The sound is good for me.
   done everything else

brendanuhs wrote:

i think [insane] should od+1.

Teara wrote:

Nice. Thank you!

[Normal]

00:11:477 (1,2) - This just doesn't follow the vocals or lyrics and just feels wrong. The finish's land on the red ticks so I'll highly suggest you try something like this

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Delete two, and make 1 repeat once. and add a hitcircle at 00:13:252 - (Finishes on the slider only thou, start/repeat/end) and a whistle on the hitcircle. Good suggestion. Changed.

00:29:938 (5) - The whistle on this note should be a bit louder to empathize the music more. Increased hitsound volume for the green tick to 65%, up from 50%

[Insane]

Always try and keep OD and AR roughly the same, so if you have a AR of 9, try and keep OD 8/9. Please raise OD by one, or lower AR by one brendanuhs mentioned it above as well so I'll change based on that and to keep consistency. Increased OD by 1.