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Endou Aya - Moe Yousotte nan desu ka?

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Alice
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Alice
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 15 novembre 2009 at 10:46:50

Artist: Endou Aya
Title: Moe Yousotte nan desu ka?
Source: Lucky Star Character Song Vol.004 - Takara Miyuki
Tags: takara miyuki izumi konata hiiragi kagami tsukasa lucky star
BPM: 136
Filesize: 8308kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,23 stars, 77 notes)
  2. Hard (4,99 stars, 565 notes)
  3. Normal (4,18 stars, 170 notes)
Download: Endou Aya - Moe Yousotte nan desu ka?
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mountain of pink, wtf
Special Thanks
Inozuma - Timing help; Slider modification; Testing
Ema Skye - Testing (SS lol); Suggestion&Ideas

Changelog/ Thanks to people starred or modded this.
SPOILER
09/28 Followed Yes' hitsound&some notes add advices n__n
09/30 happy30: mostly hitsounds change in normal and followed some advices. :3
roxkyuubi: followed some advices. :D
Skin:Requested by rox&happy both: Changed lighting.png!
10/2 Ekaru: changed spacing [Easy]. Changed some things in [Hard]. <3
Storyboarded an arrow for the star slider.
10/4 Changed the spinner circle.
Followed osu_CN_yaya's advices.
Hitsounded hard. o/~
Followed animask's advices on hitsound. :3
10/24 Followed pieguy1372's advices on [Easy] and [Hard]. o:
11/10 Followed Mafiamaster's advices on Hard!
11/12 Followed Takuma's advices on Easy&Normal.
11/13 Added an audio lead-in.
11/15 Removed Normal's short breaks and added preview position. (JarJarJacob fixes)
Last edited by Alice , edited 38 times in total.
Yes_old
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Alice
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Alice
Haha thanks :3 I'll fix this soon
I expected hitsounds mods so yeah n_n (it's the only things I really want to change. all jumps&all are kinda wanted so yeah..)
Also thanks for kudo star and thanks for the skin, I'm glad some people like it cause I wasn't sure about it ):

EDIT: about hard, second clap suggest sounds off, listen closely, this isn't random mapping, there's some soft noises in the instrumental here so clap sounds off.
EDIT2: 02:46:16 (1) - kinda weird place for a new combo I know! :3
happy30
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happy30
Please modify the skin a bit, when I click many notes everything becomes white and then i cant see anything anymore D:

[Easy]

00:20:68 (1) - I don't really like this, it would be better if it started 1/2 later.
00:24:21 (1) - ^
00:27:74 (1) - ^
00:31:27 (1) - ^ :\
00:34:80 (1) - ^
00:38:33 (1,2,3) - look, doesn't this sound much better than the sliders above this? ^^
00:54:65 (5) - again, those sliders need to start on a white tick

[Normal]

let's try something

01:01:93 (4) - add clap
01:02:60 (6) - add clap on first repeat
01:03:70 (7) - change whistle to clap
01:04:58 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - delete all hitsounds here
01:05:02 (3) - add clap
01:05:90 (7) - add clap
01:06:79 (11,12) - add claps
01:08:55 (2) - add clap on startpoint
01:09:87 (1) - add clap on 1:10:321
01:12:08 (2) - add clap
01:12:96 (6) - add clap on startpoint

If you like it you can continue through the song with this rhythm of claps.

[Hard]

00:12:96 (2) - BATs don't like this, this may cause a reason someone wouldn't bubble this
00:30:61 (1) - ^ (the endpoint is also off)
00:57:08 (1) - please make it visible which way the sliderball will follow.
01:08:55 (2) - It's not visible that this is a slider
01:32:38 (1) - see above.
01:32:71 (1) - end 1/4 earlier
Alice
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Alice
Thanks. I looked at what you said, I'll fix later..

OK edit
easy
00:20:68 (1) - I don't really like this, it would be better if it started 1/2 later.
00:24:21 (1) - ^
00:27:74 (1) - ^
00:31:27 (1) - ^ :\
00:34:80 (1) - ^
00:38:33 (1,2,3) - look, doesn't this sound much better than the sliders above this? ^^
00:54:65 (5) - again, those sliders need to start on a white tick
I don't agre with the starts but when they're in white ticks they end well. So I kept where they start and changed one cause i don't want to do all them like 00:38:33 (want to keep this very easy). Thanks a lot, must afk so fix hard&normal later.

normal
all done except one, but i changed a bit differently.. nothing much. i suppose it sounds better now!

hard
00:30:61 (1) - -> border of death? lol.. I changed the first one.. but I like this one.. but if bats really bother me with this , then.. :/
00:57:08 (1) - i'll not change, but i'll try storyboarding something.
01:08:55 (2) - same than 00:30:61: i like it but if there's a real problem here i'll change :/
01:32:38 (1) - ah? oO it's just stacked.. visible it's a slider O.O

i fixed all you suggested me except all this. ^^

Thankkksss
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GabrielRKF
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GabrielRKF
//Easy//
  1. 00:52:453(4) - too long. Make it end at 00:53:335, end maybe make notes at 00:53:77 and at 00:54:218.
//Normal//
  1. 00:43:188(1,2,3,4,5,6) - May be hard for newbies and it's weard having note son the top. Could you please change this part? ._.
  2. 01:28:850(2) - New Combo?
  3. 01:57:968(break) - Useless break here o.o
//Hard//
  1. 00:10:982(7) - Clap.
  2. 00:12:527(1) - ^
  3. 00:12:968(2) - unexpected slider =/ I don't like it ._.
  4. 00:13:960(1) - strange note?
  5. 00:30:615(1) - another strange stream ._.
  6. 00:52:453(1 - 14) - 14 hit combo is way too much, I think. Use new combo somewere here please ^^
  7. 01:06:129(8) - Hard to find this note, please, move it up.
  8. 01:08:556(2) - I would NEVER think that I slider were going to be here o.O
  9. 01:11:644(10) - The new combo is here, not on the previous note.
  10. 02:12:968(4) - Unatural note =/
//Overall//
  • So cute skin >A<
    But, as Happy sayid, the lighting is really "lighty" XD
    Just make it transparent a little bit .__.
Star :3
Alice
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Alice
Rox:

Easy:
done

Normal:
00:43:188(1,2,3,4,5,6)- for me normal aren't for newbies. easy are. normal are for "old" newbies that are now understanding osu! a bit more, i changed a bit, but, no much..
I don't like the new combo suggest :( sorry

Hard:
00:10:982(7) - why do people want to do sounds here? there's noises in the back, that's not a random mapping, and they don't goes with clap or anything i think.
00:13:960(1) - i don't think so..
00:30:615(1) - bbbuuuttttt ;_; (I mean but, not butt. :/)
00:52:453(1 - 14) - 14 isn't high at all o_o
01:06:129(8) - Hard to find this note, please, move it up. yes, it is! =)
01:08:556(2) - ^. I personally succeed at finding that sorts of hidden notes, and lots of players are.. Many maps have some too as I remember, and they aren't unranked so well
02:12:968(4) - I like it.

Sorry.. Kudos anyway cause some things were useful, but I don't like all those suggestions above =(...

Thanks a lot for the staaarr Rox <3.

EDIT: oh, forgotten-
Changed a bit lighting
Ema Skye
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Ema Skye
a star, because you know i love this map, awesome !
Alice
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Alice
Thanks Ema
Jarby
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Jarby
The mp3 is really big. Compress the bitrate to 192kbps and shorten it.
Ekaru
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Ekaru

JarJarJacob wrote:

The mp3 is really big. Compress the bitrate to 192kbps and shorten it.
This. 15 megabytes is way too big. I can help get the new offset afterwards.

Anyways, on to modding...

All difficulties:

If the break is only a second long or shorter, which there are plenty of in this mapset, delete it. All it does is mislead players. I'd even say it looks nicer to not have breaks that short in this particular case.

Easy:

Map feels really weird right now and can be hard to read. Respace using .8x distance snap; this will make the map much easier, I assure you. Also avoid overlapping hit circles.

Normal:

Same as earlier. Would help quite a bit.

Hard:

00:13:96 (1,2) - I would stack these. Right now you can easily be tricked into think it's a stream of 3, because of where the previous 3 slider was.
00:15:39 (4) - I recommend moving this from underneath the stack. It's currently an uneven stack.
00:24:21 (1,2,3) - This section feels cramped. Respace, maybe?
00:27:74 (1,2,3) - ^
00:30:58 (1) - This 2x slider makes no sense, sorry. I would get rid of the 2x section and make it a normal, 1x slider.
00:31:27 (1,2,3) - Again feels cramped.
Delete that break, as stated earlier. It's too short to warrant a break.
00:55:98 (14) - move from under that stack, please. ><;
00:57:08 (1) - I can't tell which way it goes starting off, so move the endpoint so it's a bit of ways from the starting point.
01:25:76 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it so the sliders aren't on top of each other please.
01:08:11 (1,2) - ^
01:33:70 (1) - Delete please, plays poorly IMO

break time... let's continue

The second half is much better.

When you fix this map up, PM me so I can remod and hopefully star it, please. :)
Alice
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Alice

JarJarJacob wrote:

The mp3 is really big. Compress the bitrate to 192kbps and shorten it.
Done. ;_;
Also thanks for the star <3 I fucking love your maps
I didn't shorten, I think since now it's 4Mo it doesn't need to be shorten anymore


Ekaru:

Easy: done
Normal: I don't think it needs so.
1. Moooore notes than in easy so less confusing
2. Distance snap does.. Whatever.. Wrong, strange things when I try to use it, and I don't want to remap entirely! -.-
Hard:
Also, as said I said before:
Strange spacings in Hard are wanted! Seriously there's worse maps concerning spacing and they are ranked, my spacings are quite understandable compare to some recent maps I won't quote >___< (I personally hate those kind of maps and I think I didn't spaced horribly compare to these.)
But, I changed a bit every "cramped" parts you quoted me to respace.

00:30:58 (1) - Why T_T (done since everybody told me so, but I seriously don't understand why. D:)
Every stacked note: I don't want to move them, sorry!

00:57:08 (1) -
00:57:08 (1) - i'll not change, but i'll try storyboarding something.
It's just that I'm too lazy at this time. I'll maybe do this when 8+ Priority cause if by luck BATs look at it they will obligatory told me something

01:25:76 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't want to change this..
01:08:11 (1,2) - ^
As already said it's hard diff and as already said maybe people aren't able to guess notes but Ema Skye tested this map for me and got S fullcombo first time she did it, without any problem with this, and I'm good at guessing this too, so, I suppose it's just a matter of people. So I won't change this. T__T

01:33:70 (1) - Huuuuh??
1. We haven't got same tastes here
2. You didn't hear there was really a noise in the song here :/
I won't delete it :| ...


Thanks a lot! *PM*
PicoLo
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Alice
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Alice
Thanks.
yaya
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yaya
bonjour :oops: ma francais.. ttttttttrop mal.
ok .
[normal]

i think.. overall 5 is fix this map .

[hard]

ehhhhh. i think you shouldnt follow lyric so close . feel a bit boring .and so many empty . try to create your own rhythm.

00:57:08 (1) - i dont like this . make me confused.

01:08:55 (2) - nononononono .

02:22:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - feel dont fix this song.

02:28:85 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^

02:55:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^

eh .. not finished? or what . this map is more fix "soft" hitsound . "normal" hitsound is quiet noisy . i think so .

merci bien .
Alice
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Alice
Bonjour, don't worry about your french it's kinda good since it's a really hard language (even for us, usually >__<)

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

00:57:08 (1) - i dont like this . make me confused.
The arrow or the slider? O:
The arrow is kinda obligatory.. Bats wouldnt bubble this if the beginning of the spinner won't be shown..
The slider isn't confusing O: or, i don't understand what are you talking about

about 01:08:55 I think I'll ask a BAT his opinion.. ): I really want to keep them and as said, maybe some people can't catch this but some are good at hidden notes.. So why is it so bat ): it's like streams or jumps. But, I really take this as a consideration since EVERY people modded this has told me it was bad ..

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

02:22:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - feel dont fix this song.
It does, there's non-stop noises in the background of the song and then after comes the three-beats noises (02:23:55 1.2.3.4.5). :O

02:28:85 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ok here it's random but I like it sorry >.<

02:55:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
It's finished.. xD

Merci à toi :D
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Easy]
You could replace some claps with whistles
01:15:17 (1,1) - Maybe whistles here?
01:22:23 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
You could replace some claps with whistles
01:03:70 (7) - Maybe a finish here?
01:07:23 (12) - ^
01:08:99 (3) - Hitsound this (whistles maybe?)
01:19:14 (3) - Add a Clap here
01:22:67 (2) - Hitsound the end
01:24:43 (3) - ^

[Hard]
You could replace some claps with whistles
00:10:10 (4) - Remove clap
00:10:76 (6) - Add clap here
00:14:95 (1) - Add a whistle here?
00:15:61 (1) - Shorten slider to previous white tick
00:51:12 (4) - Hitsound the end
00:55:54 (10,11,12) - Hitsound these
00:57:08 (1) - Sliders that have overlapping slider ends isn't allowed. Personally...I think its too good to take out
01:46:82 (2) - Remove clap and Replace on (3)
01:47:38 (6) - Add clap here
02:12:96 (4) - Remove clap at the end
02:28:85 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - The whistle pattern sounds wrong...reverse the whistle pattern?
03:04:14 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This long stream feels a bit unnecessary.
03:18:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same thing for the previous pattern like this one
I think some of the streams were a bit too much.
Alice
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Alice
You're... well, fast oO
I'll check this later. But I really like claps (and I don't like whistles) , just to say, so no disappointment if "whistles instead of claps" mods are denied. Thanks for your star anyway <3
Kurai
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Hi~
[Skin]
Le section-fail ne convient pas du tous avec le reste du design Oo je t'en ai fait un plus zoulis. Enfin, si tu préfere l'autre, je t'oblige pas :D
SPOILER
[Easy]
00:54:21 (7) - Crée un slider jusqua 00:54:438
00:54:65 - Crée une note puis une autre 1/2 plus tard pour ensuite créer un slider encore 1/2 plus tard qui se terminera a 00:55:321 !

J'aime bien le skin et les les diff, surtous la hhard qui est parfaite, sa mérite bien une star :3

☼STAR☼
Scar
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Scar
Star~!
Alice
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Animask: thanks a lot! Easy and normal hitsounds advices you gived are awesome, they fit really well.
But..

animask wrote:

[Hard]
You could replace some claps with whistles
00:10:10 (4) - Remove clap
00:10:76 (6) - Add clap here
fjgjdnsnfhfhdns. That's all I could say about this ;_;
-all after is ok- then

animask wrote:

00:57:08 (1) - Sliders that have overlapping slider ends isn't allowed. Personally...I think its too good to take out
ooooh and when it's BAT or known people who do it it's allowed strangely. ><
Normally, when there's an arrow storyboarded, it's ok..
so no i won't delete it :lol:

Also streams may be "too much" I don't really care, I'm good at streams and I like maps where they are some, and they fit in this one so I don't think this is such a problem.. T__T;;
thanks a lot again :3

Kurai_: Ton section-fail n'est pas très accordé à mon section-pass, car les miens ont tous les deux une bordure noire =/ et le tiens et un peu pixellisé aussi.. Cela dit si le mien est moche je vais le refaire. =)
Le easy j'ai rien contre ta proposition.. Mais malheureusement je préfère comme il est actuellement. Merci beaucoup pour la star et pour avoir pris le temps de modder :3

Scar: merci :3
pieguyn
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pieguyn
General:

It may just be me, but the white notes blend into the background, as do the hitcircles (of every color). You might want to change the colors a bit to make them stand out more.

Easy:

00:20:68 (1) - Make this end 1/2 of a beat earlier

Normal:

Looks good to me.

Hard:

00:30:58 (1) - Make this end at the next 1/4 beat?
00:57:08 (1) - o_o I don't see an arrow there
01:29:29 (1) - Spacing
02:05:46 (3) - It's a bit hard to tell when this starts. Perhaps move it?
02:21:57 (5) - Extend this by 1/4 of a beat and remove the next note

Nice work so far. *star*
Alice
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pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

It may just be me, but the white notes blend into the background, as do the hitcircles (of every color). You might want to change the colors a bit to make them stand out more. While playing the bg gets darker. I personally haven't got any problem, even while playing with monitor's contrast. :/

Easy:

00:20:68 (1) - Make this end 1/2 of a beat earlier Alright.

Normal:

Looks good to me.

Hard:

00:30:58 (1) - Make this end at the next 1/4 beat? I did the reverse, but kept the note after.
00:57:08 (1) - o_o I don't see an arrow there There's one. I'll full submit again ;_;
01:29:29 (1) - Spacing Jump. Sorry.
02:05:46 (3) - It's a bit hard to tell when this starts. Perhaps move it? Hm.. No. :/ Sorry.
02:21:57 (5) - Extend this by 1/4 of a beat and remove the next note I'd like to keep it as it is.

Nice work so far. *star*
Thanks a mil <3
[DBF]
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Star for you. <3
Alice
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<3 Thanks~~
Mafiamaster
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Alice
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Takuma
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Only checked Hard for now, but 03:19:365 is a very awkward place to end imo. I'll give the rest of my post when I get back. For now, have my star.
Alice
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Takuma wrote:

Only checked Hard for now, but 03:19:365 is a very awkward place to end imo. I'll give the rest of my post when I get back. For now, have my star.
I don't think so ^^; , you think I should continue or remove the last notes and end before the break? btw thanks for your star. O:
Takuma
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Normal:
01:00:174 (2) - Eh, weird spacing, stacking with (1) would be best imo.

Easy:
00:15:835 - Remove break time. ?_?
Alice
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Donedone
Takuma
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ircfix then bubbled. ;)
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Add a 1 second lead in time.

Edit: Rebubbled.
Alice
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Alice
Done.
Jarby
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Alice
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Jarby
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Moe~!
Alice
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It's getting boring.
Also has been bubbled-popped-bubbled for really minor things. Can someone explain me what BATs are doing? Some ~+10 maps are currently getting ranked way faster and I'm pretty sure sometimes nobody ask people to mod it. T__T rageragerage
Takuma
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Ranked! >A</
EDIT: 1000th post. o___o
Alice
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Haaahh finally <3 Awesome Takuma >w<~ Thank youuu~~
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