O_O
Change OD to 7Foreverends wrote:
irc w騙kd呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵自己也覺得不好意思領kd(羞20:23 Midasmens: kemu
20:23 Midasmens: !
20:23 Foreverends: !!!
20:24 Foreverends: 被發現了!!!
20:25 Midasmens: 新坑么?
20:25 Foreverends: 不,只是試試有沒有靈感再作圖;w;
20:26 Midasmens: 哦哦
20:26 Midasmens: 话说小米新图求试
20:26 Foreverends: come on baby
20:26 Midasmens: http://puu.sh/2UFxl.osz
20:27 Foreverends: 來了owo
20:31 Foreverends: 很不錯0.0
20:31 Foreverends: 好玩0.0
20:31 Midasmens: 谢谢
20:32 Foreverends: btw就od一定要8么?;w;
20:32 Midasmens: 感觉可以8于是就8了 xD
20:32 Foreverends: 7好一點吧;w;
20:33 Midasmens: 等马上rank图了~ 上传上去mod再说吧
20:33 Foreverends: 貌似更好打
20:33 Midasmens: 乃也可以骗KD(pia
20:33 Foreverends: mark...i will mod this(maybe
20:33 Foreverends: 立刻savelog ;3
20:34 Midasmens: xD
20:34 Foreverends: 上傳後來騙kd ;D
20:34 *Foreverends is editing mamenoi - Tabi no Owari [Owari]
STAR<3
呵呵:3Foreverends wrote:
irc w騙kd呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵自己也覺得不好意思領kd(羞20:23 Midasmens: kemu
20:23 Midasmens: !
20:23 Foreverends: !!!
20:24 Foreverends: 被發現了!!!
20:25 Midasmens: 新坑么?
20:25 Foreverends: 不,只是試試有沒有靈感再作圖;w;
20:26 Midasmens: 哦哦
20:26 Midasmens: 话说小米新图求试
20:26 Foreverends: come on baby
20:26 Midasmens: http://puu.sh/2UFxl.osz
20:27 Foreverends: 來了owo
20:31 Foreverends: 很不錯0.0
20:31 Foreverends: 好玩0.0
20:31 Midasmens: 谢谢
20:32 Foreverends: btw就od一定要8么?;w;
20:32 Midasmens: 感觉可以8于是就8了 xD
20:32 Foreverends: 7好一點吧;w;
20:33 Midasmens: 等马上rank图了~ 上传上去mod再说吧
20:33 Foreverends: 貌似更好打
20:33 Midasmens: 乃也可以骗KD(pia
20:33 Foreverends: mark...i will mod this(maybe
20:33 Foreverends: 立刻savelog ;3
20:34 Midasmens: xD
20:34 Foreverends: 上傳後來騙kd ;D
20:34 *Foreverends is editing mamenoi - Tabi no Owari [Owari]
STAR<3
打到一半網頁當掉Zero__wind wrote:
我是个抢kd的坏人(>.<)
G's Hard
00:04:725 - 建议用40~50的音量 还有其他类似的地方 O
00:31:297 (1,2,3) - 明明1的地方是长音 为什么这样?感觉很违和 即使背景音乐也不是应该连续拍的啊 X
00:43:725 (4) - 或许尾巴上也clap O
00:49:297 (1) - 头上不finish么 你是指哪個的finish
00:57:868 (3,1) - 这个地方节奏不太对 应该是在00:57:868 - 这里起3连 后面1的那个地方一个单拍 X
00:59:154 (4) - 这个地方感觉soft比较好?连续normal太多了 X
01:14:368 (2,3,4) - 类似这样的音乐比人声更强的地方加一些whistle呗? O
01:22:082 (1,2) - 感觉有点太弯了 O
01:53:582 (3,4) - 蓝线折返还是有点奇怪=。= X,因為長的slider放不下
02:11:154 (5,1) - 为何感觉很难看 因為5太短惹
02:31:726 (4) - soft? 连续normal太多了的感觉 X
02:44:797 (7,1) - 感觉应该在现在7结束的时间起滑条比较好? X, 記得這裡我是跟像小提琴聲音的東西放的
That's all
Good luck
Thank you~Zero__wind wrote:
00:03:011 (3) - 左1grid可以不overlap OK
00:48:225 - 类似的多余绿线删掉 OK
01:24:011 (5,6) - 一起左2grid 可以让6的尾巴和4嵌套得好一点 后面的1要微调一下保证距离稳定 OK
02:27:440 (3) - clap?OK
02:32:154 (1,3,5) - 尾巴上都不clap么? 这一段自己查一查 加上了 少数地方跟BGM
最后的spinner跟的那个音好像在03:27:011 - 就结束了 建议在这里结束spinner 而且我觉得用绿线递减音量配合音乐会好一些
加了绿线调整音量,结尾时间没变
ts8zs wrote:
[Autumn's Normal]
AR4 plz √
Warning: [Autumn's Normal] 00:39:011 有多余的timing线√
Warning: [Autumn's Normal] 01:40:404 有多余的timing线√
Warning: [Autumn's Normal] 02:11:582 有多余的timing线√
我这个强迫症患者只希望你能把滑条调到fit approachcircle._. 比如00:23:582 (1) -
不过改起来又没必要又麻烦所以就不说了看在咱关系那么好的份上._. 好 那就不改了
Thx for mod
Pokie wrote:
Request from Forum PM
_(:3 」∠)_
Red: Unrankable issues or Highly recommended
Black: OpinionsAutumn's Normal
- So...for the consistency of hitsounding, I would prefer to list up those notes which supposed to have hitsound added!
00:56:154 -
01:01:297 (3) -
02:48:868 (5,6) -
I was intended to enhance the BG music so I didn't add hitsounds...but I decide to make some compromise.
Added hitsounds but using low volume.
Otherwise, good enough for ranking
Thx for modding!
多谢mod!sjoy wrote:
[Owari]
00:30:447 (1) - 不对劲的节奏阿 这个不改~
00:36:232加个NOTE吧 不了
00:48:875 (5) - 变速建议NC 加了太花不好~
01:52:304 (4) - ctrl+g吧 感觉没必要跳 好
02:07:732 (1) - 要包住02:07:518 (6) - 就包好吧 好
02:14:589 (4) - 感觉用1/2滑条比较好 不用
02:23:375 (6,1) - 我觉得每俩小节这样下节奏很好阿
02:30:875 (1) - 头 whis 加了
02:44:589 (1) - whis 加了
sjoy wrote:
[G's Hard]
00:42:875 (1,2) - 我喜欢方向是朝上下的._. X
00:58:518 (2) - 495,197我觉得往内拐挺难受的 X, 往外的話感覺跟歌對不上
01:05:804 (4) - 这个NOTE不应该是提前半拍的么? X, 我這裡是跟鼓聲的,沒記錯的話
01:34:947 (5,7) - 感觉可以删掉 X, 5有鼓聲,7就當裝飾用o3o
02:06:875 (2,3) - 合并成滑条吧 O
02:44:375 (5) - 叠在4的尾巴看看 X
03:20:804 (9) - 这里太挤了。。 我看test不會阿o.o
抱歉来迟了sjoy wrote:
[Autumn's Normal]
00:44:161 (1,2) - 我觉得1/2+1/1的节奏 是这样,不过我想和前面的单点+折返保持一致
01:03:447 (2) - 就单独一个WIS感觉很突兀,这里还好把,后面都是这样摆的,如果还有人挑我就改
Midasmens wrote:
不能放弃!
改了不少地方~ 应该好多了popner wrote:
说的十号前摸,好像忘了,先mark
[Owari]
01:33:447 (5,1) - 这种overlap有什么特殊目的么
好多地方1.0x 1.1x 1.2x spacing混用,看着很乱,建议全统一成一个 01:58:732 (1,2) - 02:10:089 (8,9) - 02:02:589 (7,8) - 02:11:589 (1,2) - 02:12:875 (5,6,1) - 02:14:161 (3,4) - 以及其他无数地方
03:02:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放到直线上
根据新rule,“Owari”应该是不能做diff名的。
PS.不想每次说那么多细节问题啊,到最后费半天劲变成我在作图了。你自己应该多用点功夫把细节弄好。。。
Done.....Strawberry wrote:
modded by irc@Midasmens: display epilepsy warning on all diffs the i can bub this.2014-01-22 15:43 Strawberry: 00:26:589 (3,4,5) - 这里感觉可以摆对称吧。。
2014-01-22 15:43 Strawberry: insane
2014-01-22 15:43 Strawberry: 角度都调一调
2014-01-22 15:44 Strawberry: 00:49:304 - 这里加一个kiai burst吧
2014-01-22 15:46 Midasmens: 有点刺的感觉
2014-01-22 15:48 Strawberry: 作sb效果也可以
2014-01-22 15:48 Midasmens: 就保持这样吧
2014-01-22 15:48 Strawberry: 加个柔和一点的flash
2014-01-22 15:48 Midasmens: (不影响应该
2014-01-22 15:49 Strawberry: 。
2014-01-22 15:49 Midasmens: 中间的一个SB效果好像有点不好~ 我对中心对称了 然后break正好一个勾 难看了呢
2014-01-22 15:49 Strawberry: 你说哪里?
2014-01-22 15:49 Midasmens: 01:45:018 -
2014-01-22 15:51 Strawberry: 这种的话换一套section-pass和fail就好了(?
2014-01-22 15:54 Midasmens: 我调整一下
2014-01-22 15:58 Strawberry: 02:09:875 (7,8,9) - 这里不知道是出于什么考虑.. 不过过渡段还是不建议放这种副歌部分都没出现过几次的大跳..
2014-01-22 15:58 Strawberry: 而且flow总感觉有点怪o.o
2014-01-22 16:00 Midasmens: 其实这里钢琴的声音太明显又不知道怎么抓(干脆做了跳
2014-01-22 16:00 Midasmens: (大概是因为这样
2014-01-22 16:00 Midasmens:
2014-01-22 16:00 Strawberry: 这里跟vocal就好了..
2014-01-22 16:02 Midasmens: 好
2014-01-22 16:02 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/6tPnp.jpg
2014-01-22 16:03 Strawberry: 另外这里干脆做blanket 02:17:161 (3) -
2014-01-22 16:04 Midasmens: 包起来么?
2014-01-22 16:04 Strawberry: 恩
2014-01-22 16:07 Strawberry: 03:02:697 (4) - 这里whistle去掉
2014-01-22 16:07 Strawberry: 反而不合 :/
2014-01-22 16:07 Midasmens: 好
2014-01-22 16:08 Strawberry: 恩
2014-01-22 16:08 Midasmens: 去掉?还是不去
2014-01-22 16:08 Strawberry: 去掉
2014-01-22 16:08 Midasmens: 嗯
2014-01-22 16:17 Strawberry: hard03:10:732 - 这里开始whistle的三连都去掉中间的..不然会吵
2014-01-22 16:18 Strawberry: 咦前面好像也有
2014-01-22 16:19 Strawberry: 哦哦 从kiai开始
2014-01-22 16:20 Strawberry: 别的没啥了
Zero__wind wrote:
啊居然要泡了
本来我还打算……上狗以后来泡呢
神预言, 点赞Midasmens wrote:
零风快上狗泡小米其它图
[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
神预言, 点赞Midasmens wrote:
零风快上狗泡小米其它图
Zero__wind wrote:
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions
General
your lryic files are at a great size which is too exaggerated, and the problem is mostly caused by the unused space of every lyric file, which is too big. plz cut your lyric files to a proper size, in order to make your .osz file smaller 我跟其他图里面的歌词对比了一下 基本上平均上一句歌词也就能占个一二十kb的,长一点的也不会超过50,而你现在每个都271kb实在太夸张了=。= k
Insane
There are many wrong snapped beats in this diff, those particular piano(?) melodies are actually landing on 1/6 beats but you used 1/4 tripples instead. plz rearrange them with 1/6 circles or kcik sliders (or 1/2 beats) to make the rhythm correct. I listed all the wrong snaps below, hope I didn't get anything wrong k
01:04:089 (2) -
01:06:661 (4,5,6) -
01:09:232 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/6SVf0.jpg
01:11:911 (5,6) -
01:14:482 (5,6) -
02:46:947 (2,3,4) -
02:54:768 (7,8) -
02:57:232 (6,7,8) -
02:59:804 (5,6,7) -
03:02:375 (1,2,3) -
03:15:339 (5,6) -
03:17:804 (3,4,5) -
03:20:482 (5,6) -
03:23:054 (5,6) -
01:09:761 - unsnapped inherited point
and there're some spinners that you snapped on 1/16, it's highly recommended that you snap them ordinarily to blue ticks (1/4) instead, check the below k
03:03:045 (1) -
03:08:188 (1) -
03:23:616 (1) -
01:01:732 (8) - the whistle on the sliderbody doesn't really sound nice, I'd suggest that you remove it
02:24:018 (1) - ^
02:30:875 (1) - ^
02:34:304 (1) - ^ k
That's all for now
I think it's good to have these important issues addressed first before we go on