updated!
Fixed that ^ aaaaand some random things on my own.-Srui- wrote:
Hi ~ :3
[Akareh's yesterday]
00:23:073 (8) - opposite slider You mean Control + G? I don't think it's a good idea. Tried control + H, even worse idea.
00:42:164 (4) - a little bent Sure, why not.
01:07:391 (3,4,5,6) - how to use stream ? I like slider streams like those, though that one can be a confusing pattern, so if someone else points it I'll change it.
01:57:732 (6) - a little bent I like it like that, no change.
02:09:891 (4) - reduce some curve Fixed
03:24:437 (3) - a little bent Ok
03:32:618 (1,2,3,4) - Umm.. a little bored I guess, but I don't know how to improve it, so I'll wait for suggestions.
sorry no change ;-;)a;; but Thanks~-Srui- wrote:
[Teru's Normal]
00:13:641 (3) - opposite slider. i think it look like better I don't think so, because I'm going to flow it like this http://i.cubeupload.com/UVg4ED.jpg
00:18:187 (1,2) - blanket err no ;A;
00:20:005 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:34:096 (1) - a little bent no? maybe a pic might explain what you want me to do
01:07:278 (1,2,3) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner yeah its hard, I'll need more modder to point this out first ;-; because I like that ;;
01:47:278 (1,2) - blanket no?
02:00:005 (2) - opposite slider nope ;; it'll ruin the pattern and it'll out of the window too
02:12:278 (3) - a little bent mnn sorry
02:49:096 (1,2,3) - i think this rhythm is hard for beginner ^
02:50:459 (2,1) - blanket ^
thank you for mod!- Jelly - wrote:
I think should use BPM264,or you will use 1/8 Beat snap ,1/8 seem to unrank well, I don't really get rhe problem with this. first of all I reeeally don't think I'll change BPM and second I don't see the problem with the beat snap O.o if a vat will mention this I'll change, but for now, I don't really think I'll so it O.o
Plz check Aimod , some objects is not snappedHard Yesterday01:38:414 (2) - start at 01:38:528 should be better ok, I also think here the beat is where you say
01:40:232 (2,3) - follow last sentence rhythm hm... I don't get it
01:43:641 (1) - end at 01:43:982 this could have been good, but here I'm following the vocals and also I don't want to ruin the pattern
02:05:232 (5) - keep same between prevent distance and next distance ok, fixedEasy yesterdayl00:23:868 (1) - start at 00:24:096 ok
02:20:005 (1) - ↑ ,same rhythm plz don't get it
00:25:914 - add i circle I can't because it's too near to the spinner end and for an easy diff is not good
00:38:528 (4) - sound strange , try yo start at 00:38:528 you're right, but It's better to not make a note start on a blue line in easy diff.
03:23:641 (1,2,1,2) - I think should follow the strong rhythm I think it's good also as it is
Best Wishes !
http://puu.sh/4vLLH.osu- Jelly - wrote:
Akareh's Yesterday00:03:186 (1,2,3,4) - lack a object , should use 1/8 beats Nope
00:04:247 (7) - wrong time, plz move to 00:04:209 Nope, it actually goes there, listen in 25%
00:10:459 (1,2,3,4) - overmap,plz follow the rhythm or lyric It's following the drums!
00:26:709 - Add a circle Okay
00:39:664 (4) - overmap ,plz delete Again... listen to the drums!
01:23:073 (2) - shoule be 1/6 beat,
http://puu.sh/4vkJe I've said this in another mod, I'm trying to stick to 1/4 when possible and not overcomplicate things. I'll change this one, tho.
01:44:891 (5) - 01:45:005 stary may be better Umm.... what?
02:19:778 (7) - change it into silder,end at 02:19:929 The pattern at 02:20:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) is enough complicated as it is, no change.
02:55:914 (6) - keep same between prevent distance and next distance Fixed
01:52:391 (4) - ↑ Fixed
00:52:732 (1,2,3,1) - silders look bad Not really
you mean in insane diff? O.oKisaragiShin wrote:
I think you could put more hitcircles in like
00:38:755 (2,3)
where you have two sixteenths and a longer slider after
I would prefer not stacked just to move a little quicker
Here you go!Moway wrote:
Random mod for Akareh's difficulty, I might do a full mod here in a bit, but for now just felt like covering some things. Ohai, there
[Akareh's Yesterday]
00:03:641 (4) - a bit of a nazi thing here, but maybe bring the mid point to around (225,283) so that the first part of the curve is more straight down to follow the straight line formed from the objects before. Yeah, sure.
00:04:020 (5,6,7) - i don't think i really like this a whole lot. I know you're following the drums, but the odd snapping makes this part hard to read and time. I suggest following the keyboard part in the background which has a simpler rhythm and in my opinion is stronger here.I was initially following the keyboard here, but as you say It feels convoluted and hard to read for the drums. I'll revert back to how it was before.
00:10:346 - add a circle here? The drums begin here so it would fit better IMO. I had changed this in a previous mod due to suggestions, but yes, it starts there, fixed now.
00:13:755 (9) - not sure about this because the off rhythm doesn't really fit here that well. I suggest something like this:http://puu.sh/4wU8U.jpg, which I think feels more natural to how the music is and plays better also. Yep, again, was changed due to previous modding, but that sounds waaaaay better.
00:23:073 (8) - maybe ctrl +g, ctrl + h, and ctrl+j this. Flows a bit better imo. Sure
00:24:437 (1) - this NC isn't really necessary and it doesn't fit with your comboing method, so I suggest removing it. ^
00:26:596 (5,6,7) - This jump is really odd to me, and seems to not fit that well with the rest of how you mapped this. I suggest stacking these instead. Making a jump from 4? I guess it works better.
00:34:096 (1,2) - switch the NCs here. Would make more sense because it would move the NC onto the downbeat instead which would be better I think. Sure
00:43:187 (1,2) - I think a jump here is more fitting than an antijump since (2) falls on a strong vocal line. This would be nice too since you do a jump at
00:44:096 (3,4) - to match that vocal part That 00:42:505 (5) kills me pattern-wise there, I've tried doing control+g on 00:43:528 (2) , hope that works now.
00:47:959 (4,1) - not a big fan of this stack at all, especially since you have a big jump immediately after. I suggest making a jump here as well. If you don't decide to do this, fix the stack here then. I really want to make that jump "special" to remark the claps, so I've decided to change the stack.
00:51:368 (3,4) - this spacing was a bit confusing for me, it looks nice but having that big 3.0x jump is kind of weird. I think a jump is okay, but maybe make it smaller, a possible solution would be to stack (4) on the sliderend of (2). Which 2 are you refering to? the one at 00:49:096? I think it feels weird there, but I've come up with another fix, Jump is now 2.0x
00:54:550 (1,2) - These stacks like this don't work that well for me. One reason is that you do the same stack for 1/4, which I think plays a lot better than the one for 1/2. For example, at 00:56:368 (1,2,3,4) - you do a stack for (1,2) and (3,4), but the time spacing is different which makes reading it harder than it should be. I suggest going through this and unstacking all these 1/2 spaced slider combos for better readability and I think they play better unstacked anyway. I won't mention every time you do this, so just go through your kiais and clean these up if you take this suggestion. I don't think they are too hard to read or play, and I really really like that kind of patterns, so I'll keep them, sorry.
01:09:550 (2) - I would prefer for this to be more angled to the left so that the slidertrack for 01:09:891 (3) - is a bit more visible. Sure
01:23:300 - add a circle here to match the drums? ^
01:42:732 (1) - remove the finish from this one, I think it is not needed and clutters up the hitsounding here a bit too much. Okay
01:55:687 (4,1) - stack fix Best I can do with the grid is 0.01x D:, I tried!
01:55:914 (1,2) - switch the NC here to move it to the downbeat. Okay
01:56:255 (2,4) stack fixOkay
I"ll stop here. Might get back to this later, but for now I hope I gave you some things to think about. Good luck!
Sure, your mod was really really helpful, and my mapping is really crappy, so thanks for all that help!. Sorry for not changing those patterns at the chorus, though. I know sometimes that spacing makes the 1/2 and 1/4 hard to read, but come on, this is an Insane, and it's not like it's so hard to read them
If this is for my diff (which I don't know, but I suppose so), there's not really anything in the rhythm there to follow except for what I've already mapped, so no change, sorry.KisaragiShin wrote:
I think you could put more hitcircles in like
00:38:755 (2,3)
where you have two sixteenths and a longer slider after
I would prefer not stacked just to move a little quicker
YGOkid8 wrote:
[General]
- Shiet that timing lol. First timing point should be 3641 as right now, the white tick is on the offbeat. Actually hell, just use 1823, and you won't need second uninherited either. 've been thinking again ;; actually stanza resets.. but well it sounds almost the same i guess :/ luxoDeh :3 maybe just use the first one ;; and delete the 3 other I guess
[Teru's Normal]Normal isn't bad, I'm more or less happy with it... except some things are, my god, very hard. Like that intro for instance, is it really necessary? I suggest dumbing it down so it coincides with the rest of the difficulty more. Would be nice if mapped more like the first verse, or if you want some difficulty, the chorus. actually my normal here is to follow consistence between the easy and hard diff (and I make sure that there will be no unnecessary 1/4 ;; most of them 1/2 ;-; ) , because I'm pretty sure the Hard difficulty is a bit over insane :/ so I'm making my normal , easy yet hard ;; but meh ;; so many complain about it already so I might need to think of something
00:23:641 (1) - This is pretty cool, I like it. X'D Thanks
01:07:278 (1,2,3) - I will very much advise against 1/4 sliders in difficulties Normal and below as they are fast and not Normal player friendly. In fact this whole little section here is a big difficulty slap to the face, so I again advise dumbing it down. okay ;w;
01:21:823 (1,2,3) - You have made a difficult rhythm fit quite nicely here, please do so for the other sections I pointed out as well! I take that as good? X'D
02:49:096 (1,2,3) - As before. changed this ;w;
02:50:459 (2,1) - Overlap here makes noooo sense at all, please change. ^
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thanks for mod!YGOkid8 wrote:
[General]
- Shiet that timing lol. First timing point should be 3641 as right now, the white tick is on the offbeat. Actually hell, just use 1823, and you won't need second uninherited either. ok O.o
- Buuuut offset is still very off. Feels very early, but couldn't exactly get anything working out for me, so you might need multiple uninherited sections. Anyway you'll have to ask a more timing godly guy for assistance. I'll ask someone to check it :3
- Also lol what is with the inconsistent difficulty names? You named your diffs. yesterday, Akareh called his yesterday, but Teru is a Normal. Please make consistent. But I would heavily advise you to just use the boring Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane names. Adding yesterday at the end is completely unnecessary. ok, finally changed it, nobody like this "yesterday" let's leave the normal name...
[Hard Yesterday]00:14:550 (2,3) - Not a big fan of that red point in the slider. Doesn't exactly look great, I'm sure you can do something else while still getting the effect you want. Applies to all like this in the map. well I actually liked this :/ anyway I'll think about something, but for now no change
00:20:459 - Beat here would be nice, flow feels a bit broken here. ok, I made the previous slider a bit longer :3
00:27:278 (1) - Okay this one I can live with. I guess the reason I had a problem with the other ones is because the slider ends are very cramped up. :3
00:45:459 (2) - I'd prefer if the curve in the slider end was on the opposite side of the slider. Just move the slider end point down and right a bit and hey presto. ok, fixed
01:19:550 (1,2,3) - Straight line flow here doesn't really work imo. I suggest repositioning so that the sliders flow into each other more. hm... ok, eaven if I think it was ok also before XD
At the end of the diff, I personally thought the map ended a bit too early. Consider mapping up to where Insane diff. does? yeah, not a bad idea
Otherwise, diff. is a bit more structured and I can see sense in some decisions, but doesn't exactly catch my intention.
[Easy Yesterday]00:31:368 (4) - I see no particular reason for that curious looking bend, and it doesn't look all that good either. Please change. I don't really want to change this... I made it just to make a different shape respect to all the other regular curves... if possible I'll leave it as it is
00:43:641 (1,3) - No overlap please, especially after those no overlapping (so to speak) sliders, this looks not cool at all. hm... didn't change for now, I think is readable... anyway I'll think about it
00:47:277 (1,2,3,4) - As rhythm is same here, I suggest moving (4) out more to the right, so it's consistent in its beat placement. ok
00:52:505 (1) - Maybe have a little break like in Normal diff? Otherwise if you want to keep the spinner, start it on the white tick and then end it on the white tick. You'll have to delete 00:54:550 (1), then I suggest adding a beat at 00:55:459. I choosed to leave a little breack, this spinner was disturbing me too, so better delete it
01:02:277 (1,2) - Nope. Change to something more straightforward. The time placement of (2) makes no sense at all. ok O.o if you say so
01:36:368 (1,1) - Not as bad, but still feel weird returning to the end of the previous slider. hm... ok, tryed something
02:00:005 (1,3) - Not sure why these aren't c&p symmetrical. Small thing, but will look better. yeah, it was trange for some reason o.o anyway, now should be better u.u
02:05:459 (1,1) - Same thing as before, except delete the (2) as well. ok
02:19:777 (1,1) - And as before. ok
02:48:868 (1,1) - ~ ok
02:59:550 (2,4) - Stacking, my eyeeees. Move (4) out right and under (3), rotate if need be. fixed
03:30:914 (1) - Same thing as Hard. fixed also here
Thanks for the modYGOkid8 wrote:
[Akareh's Yesterday]00:03:083 (1,2,3) - I hope you realise that the slider starts before the actual beat does ._. Also the rhythm here is incorrect, you want to use 1/6 beat snap divisor. You're welcome. 00:03:186 (1) starts with the guitar slide in the background, ends with the first drum. I mapped that part with 1/6, the only beat missing is on 00:04:019 , which was deleted on previous modding because it's kinda hard to read. Thanks, I guess.
00:10:358 (1) - I know you're mapping to the drums here, but I can guarantee you that 100% people who plays this will expect this to start 1/2 earlier, where the vocals first start. I mean it just makes more sense, and starting on blue ticks isn't really a thing. Let's start with the vocals then.
00:23:653 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here also isn't correct, though admittedly most people won't know that from playing anyway. Just thought I'd point it out. I'm checking on 50% and I don't think that it's off. I can change it if you provide more details on this.
00:27:630 (9) - I expected this to end 1/4 earlier, then a hitcircle where it originally ended. So, I suggest you do that. Sure
00:55:017 (2,3) - Due to how you've mapped and the music, I kinda expected a jump here. I've found that doing Ctrl+G on 00:55:346 (3) makes a little jump from 2, and makes the flow drop to 00:55:914 (4), which I like. I guess I'll go with that if there aren't objections on your part.
01:09:562 (2,3) - Feels awkward, and doesn't look the best. I advise against this. I'll stack them under the slider end of 1, I guess.
01:16:153 (1,2) - ^ Changed to stack, I've been doing that all diff, so it should work.
Ergh, your chorus lacks consistency. You've mapped the same motif in several different ways, which just seem randomly blended together. I know it's important to vary the rhythm, but I can tell it's random and not exactly thought out here. 00:55:017 (2,3), 01:09:562 (2,3) and 01:16:153 (1,2); They use identical rhythm, yet for some reason you've decided to do it at those particular places, not to mention the 3rd one uses similar mapping idea as the 2nd one. Well, except the first one they are all fixed now, so..
Anyway that's my main point for this diff (haven't looked at others as of typing this yet). Overall, it is decent. Both flow and rhythm are fine by themselves, but when combined together, it makes the difficulty a bit of a mess. This applies to everywhere else as well, but it's not as obvious (in that I can't pinpoint it), but I can still feel it when I play. Not bad enough for it to warrant a remap, but just something to keep in mind for future maps: to have a reason for why you've placed a beat/slider/spinner where you've placed it. I usually place things with a reason. Sure, there are some things that aren't that though out, but I'm not an experienced mapper (I actually map like crap), and sometimes I just go on without thinking, just following the rhythm and trying to flow things. Do I have to work on that? Sure, and I'm trying to improve. Thanks for the suggestion, though.
Speaking of spinners, a spinner in this diff. would be nice. Maybe just put one at the very end? Start it 1/4 after the last beat, then end it either end it at 03:40:926 or 03:41:835. Silence the spinner as well. If not, I suggest you find somewhere in the map to replace with a spinner. Look to the other diffs. for reference if needed. The way they mapped spinners on other diffs is really cool, but this diff being an insane I think it's more interesting making the streams on those places, so I'll just take your suggestion for a spinner at the end.
01:36:380 (1,2,3) - Rhythm a bit different in the music than what you've got mapped. Follow that tom drum sound more strictly I say. Or that guitar. Maybe do the guitar... I think the drums are more readable, so I'll go with that. Checked on 50%, so I hope I got it right now.
Well if nothing else, your second chorus looks more consistent.
02:36:380 - Change in the map to accentuate the pitch change would be nice. I would normally suggest a small SV boost (e.g. x1.25), but again not big enough to warrant a remap. I suppose it would be nice... I'l consider it but most probably I won't change it, since it's not like a critical error or something, and I would have to remap all that part.
Fix all X'D and yes ;; I did the map untill 03:09:096 - X'DEggache0 wrote:
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No map after 03:21:823 - ?
check unsnapped objects.
00:14:323 (4) - reduce it's volume
00:28:868 (3) - ^
Great diff.
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396,0,111823,2,0,L|428:160,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,112732,6,0,L|332:172,2,105,4|8|8,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,376,113868,6,0,B|156:324|156:324|72:300,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,280,114550,2,0,P|20:352|48:380,2,105,4|8|8,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,112,115687,6,0,B|52:80|32:44|32:44|112:32,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,33,116368,2,0,L|252:43,1,70,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,56,116823,2,0,P|296:116|304:156,2,105,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,128,117732,6,0,P|408:104|420:68,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,4,118187,2,0,B|472:116|472:116|504:216,1,210,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,328,119323,6,0,L|408:240,2,70,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,372,120005,2,0,P|232:356|156:384,1,140,4|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
100,328,120687,2,0,L|72:240,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,121141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,216,121368,1,2,0:1:0:0:
40,52,121823,6,0,P|112:68|188:40,1,140,4|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
244,96,122505,2,0,L|272:184,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,122959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,208,123186,1,2,0:1:0:0:
472,108,123641,5,4,0:2:0:0:
336,208,124096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,176,124550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,276,125005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,308,125459,5,2,0:1:0:0:
456,28,127278,6,0,P|500:76|504:172,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,88,128073,2,0,P|392:144|340:188,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,108,128641,2,0,P|284:128|244:128,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,108,129096,6,0,P|107:101|28:156,1,140,0|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,188,129891,2,0,P|117:228|113:296,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,267,130459,2,0,P|195:304|219:336,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,380,130914,6,0,P|272:324|332:260,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,220,131709,2,0,P|476:172|456:120,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,88,132278,2,0,L|412:12,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,20,132732,6,0,P|256:56|184:44,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,56,133528,2,0,B|97:70|97:70|104:108|138:129,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,156,134096,2,0,P|248:160|296:148,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,184,134550,6,0,B|348:216|312:232|312:232|320:312,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,135346,2,0,P|164:336|112:356,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,272,135914,2,0,P|76:256|56:224,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,136368,6,0,P|116:124|168:44,1,140,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,36,137164,2,0,B|296:52|332:60|332:60|356:58|376:48,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,20,137732,2,0,P|484:8|520:20,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,92,138187,6,0,B|476:132|448:152|448:152|476:176|480:220,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,139096,2,0,B|388:312|416:292|416:292|388:268|384:224,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140005,12,8,141368,0:0:0:0:
72,264,141823,6,0,P|124:340|192:348,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,284,142618,2,0,P|308:228|360:216,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,140,143187,2,0,L|364:84,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,16,143641,6,0,B|408:84|408:84|460:136,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,256,144437,2,0,B|448:284|448:284|460:360,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,324,145005,2,0,L|344:400,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,328,145459,6,0,P|224:336|152:296,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,220,146255,2,0,P|44:176|52:96,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,40,146823,2,0,P|92:8|136:-8,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,32,147278,6,0,P|252:48|328:8,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,16,148073,2,0,P|476:72|476:120,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,116,148641,2,0,P|404:160|432:184,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,224,149096,6,0,P|528:304|500:364,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,372,149891,2,0,B|344:368|320:356|320:356|300:368|272:368,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,368,150459,2,0,P|208:328|240:296,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,150914,6,0,P|304:176|264:96,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,111,151709,2,0,P|124:153|119:205,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,240,152278,2,0,P|204:280|228:304,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,152732,6,0,L|164:356,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,264,153641,2,0,L|0:126,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,40,154550,6,0,P|192:20|248:28,1,105,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
244,112,155118,2,0,B|280:104|280:104|336:116,1,70,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
340,140,155459,2,0,P|409:137|471:167,1,140,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,320,156368,6,0,P|400:352|320:340,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,316,157164,2,0,P|168:308|112:340,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,332,157732,2,0,P|40:296|60:268,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,216,158186,6,0,P|152:152|128:76,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,44,158982,2,0,L|116:8,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,8,159550,2,0,L|280:24,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,88,160005,6,0,P|376:112|448:76,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,188,160800,2,0,L|496:300,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,264,161368,2,0,L|392:336,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,292,161823,6,0,P|256:344|184:336,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,384,162618,2,0,B|28:336|28:336|4:296,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,248,163186,2,0,L|44:168,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,163641,6,0,L|136:28,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,164436,2,0,L|260:184,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,140,165005,2,0,L|340:64,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,80,165459,6,0,P|472:160|524:168,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,292,166255,2,0,B|404:288|404:288|352:304,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,332,166823,2,0,L|204:324,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,364,167277,6,0,P|120:300|32:280,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,108,168186,2,0,P|119:84|151:20,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,19,169096,6,0,P|344:48|368:104,1,105,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,56,169664,2,0,P|444:104|424:136,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,156,170005,2,0,P|392:224|436:296,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,364,170687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,344,170914,6,0,P|260:360|176:340,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,356,171709,2,0,P|12:300|20:252,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,172277,2,0,L|108:216,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,180,172732,6,0,L|8:36,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,52,173527,2,0,P|200:80|236:72,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,28,174096,2,0,P|339:33|380:28,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,16,174550,6,0,P|408:44|380:132,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,248,175346,2,0,P|404:304|456:328,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,380,175914,2,0,L|308:388,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,344,176368,6,0,L|169:314,1,70,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,244,176823,2,0,L|64:152,2,105,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,168,177732,2,0,L|136:88,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,178186,6,0,B|224:40|224:40|228:0|276:-8,1,140,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,112,178982,2,0,B|312:168|312:168|316:204|352:212,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,179550,2,0,L|400:72,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,45,180005,6,0,L|475:193,1,140,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,304,180800,2,0,P|372:324|348:368,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,376,181368,2,0,L|240:312,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,336,181823,6,0,P|52:312|4:336,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,152,182732,2,0,P|51:160|159:136,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,20,183641,6,0,L|292:172,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,232,184550,2,0,L|456:80,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,228,185459,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,312,185914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,144,186368,1,4,0:0:0:0:
60,228,186823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,84,187278,6,0,P|212:60|264:84,1,105,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
324,104,187846,2,0,P|359:114|407:107,1,70,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
432,96,188187,2,0,P|392:160|400:248,2,140,4|8|4,0:0|0:3|0:2,0:0:0:0:
thanks for mod! updated :3Eggache0 wrote:
From queue
[General]
nothing.
[Easy]
00:48:186 (2) - use finish instead of clap may better? also, reduce the volume of normal claps afterwards. hm... I think this sound good also as it is
00:50:005 (4) - ^
02:00:686 - ^
02:02:504 - ^
01:02:278 (5) - nc oh, I forgot this
02:34:323 (1) - start at 02:34:549 - ok, eaven if it seem too short now :/
[Hard]
00:33:641 (2,3) - put them closer nope
01:05:913 (3,4) - try not using blanket? it breaks the flow hm... maybe it's true but I want to keep the blancket
01:40:005 (1,2,3) - due to same ds as 01:38:187 (1,2) - , it's hard to read no
02:51:368 (2,3) - blanket? fixed this
Sorry for the delay for sooooo many days. Nothing much to say. I think this map is quite good(through I personally don't like the Insane).
No one likes my insaneEggache0 wrote:
[Insane]
00:17:278 (3) - whistle? Sure
00:20:687 (5,6,7,8,9) - tripet is enough Fixed, but there is definitely a hit on 00:21:140
00:34:096 (7,1) - blaket Wasn't really searching the blanket there, but I guess
00:49:096 (2,3) - stack properly plz Fixed
01:36:367 (1,2,3,4) - I can't read this o_o I really liked the stacks here, but I'll just make a stream of notes :V
02:27:050 (1) - use circle is better
Sorry for the delay for sooooo many days. Nothing much to say. I think this map is quite good(through I personally don't like the Insane).
thank you for mod! so I'll call you for a recheck when all answer to the mod (I'll also have to mod your map u.u)TheVileOne wrote:
Mod4mod
General
Source is Kagerou Project with capital P. ok, fixed
Aimod is bringing up so many issues. Go through each difficulty is make sure the metadata, notes are snapped, everyone is using the same timing, and preview point. Your preview points are probably unsnapped as well. I tryed to resnap all the things I could, at least in my diffs, and also fixed the prewiew points
Easy
Unsnapped notes, and kiai- check Aimod [/color]
00:47:277 (1,2,3) - Spacing difference bothers me. It would be much better if you could somehow get the first slider shifted over some. hm... I don't really get what you mean...
01:18:641 (4) - The blanket here looks strange. I would prefer it be more perfect. I know a lot of your blankets are like this, but this one stands out more than others. I think it would be better consistency wise if you used 01:21:368 (5) - as a template slider and rotated it into place. I noticed your pattern was slightly off-centered. I took the time to perfectly center your pattern when adjusting the spacing after the blanket. I turned grid snap off when I made the adjustments. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1016122 ok, tryed to fix this, blancket and symmetry.
01:58:187 (3) - Angle doesn't match 01:56:368 (1) - and it doesn't look very nice going into the next section. I think I like it better when it has curves to match the next sequence. Otherwise it would be best to fill the gap by having a slider here 01:59:322 - , so that the transition from linear to non-linear is less abrupt. I tryed something. I added the slider when you sayd, maybe now is better
02:10:459 (1,2) - Your blankets so far have looked less clean. This one stands out because of it's uniform gap. http://puu.sh/4GF52.jpg <- This is what your blankets tend to look like. Make it like this for consistency? fixed this
02:15:005 (1) - Imperfect blanket. Make the left and right side the same distance, and adjust the spacing of the part after. It shouldn't be that hard to fix. ok
02:32:277 (1) - I managed to make a curve similar to other blankets you have used. coordinates: 1st x 208 y 236 2nd x 256 y 248 3rd x 305 y 236
I'm not sure if it's better or not. ok
02:41:823 (3) - I think it looks better if the middle wasn't so far out from the center of the blanket. Do this http://puu.sh/4GFWC.jpg fixed
03:23:641 (1,2) - I suggest using sliders that correctly blanket into each other. It's weird that there is a big empty spot in one of the blankets. It's obviously inconsistent compared to the next part which does interlock. ok, I copy/paste the next 2 sliders that were good
Hard
Lots of blankets waiting to be fixed. There are still even slighter things that I'm saving for the recheck to mention.
Unsnapped notes fixed
00:22:050 (2,3) - I think it looks better if this blanket was spaced similarly to the previous blanket. ok
00:40:005 (1,2,3,4,1) - a few things about this. It's design is unlike other parts of the map thus far. this is not necessarily a bad thing, only different. I'm not sure if that is the best angle for the second slider. It's much different than a very similar part shortly after. The spacing could be more consistent. I suggest do this at least. I fixed the spacing, but I don't think I'll change the shape
00:49:778 (3,4,5) - Make spacing consistent? ok
01:36:368 (1,2,3,4) - This has hitsounds in the Easy. Why are they missing? oh, I forgot them >.<
01:41:596 (6,1) - Improve this blanket? ok
01:43:641 (1) - ^ (basically the same blanket as above) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1016310 ok
01:49:778 (2,3) - I suggest making a better blanket note and give this a proper form. ok
01:57:959 (6,7) - 1.04 spacing is messing with this blanket. fixed
02:08:868 (5,1) - flow doesn't match the anything you've done in the song so far. I think it should be a regular blanket like all your other blankets. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1016322 This is highly recommended. hm... I tryed to fix this...
02:09:550 (2,3,4) - Make 1.00 instead 0.97/98 I don't really get it XD
02:13:528 (3,4) - Imperfect and too different than other blankets. hm...
02:14:778 (1,2) - You should stack better. There is a glitch that prevent perfect stacking. You will need to use the auto snap feature when you place a new object. You wont be able to snap an already placed object on this slider end. I don't really understand what should I do here O.o
02:16:141 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket. fixed
02:37:732 (5,1) - Maybe increase the distance between these notes slightly? It doesn't look like most other pattern in the map. ok
02:38:187 (1,2) - I really don't think these should be stacked but I guess it's up to you. I think I'll leave the stack
02:46:368 (3,1,2,3) - Even out the spacings here for a cleaner pattern. hm... just tryed to fix the symmetry, but the pattern is good to me
02:59:323 (4,5) - Improve the shape of 5 so that it uniformly wraps around 4. ok
Conclusion
Well mapped for the most part.
Thanks!TheVileOne wrote:
Mod4mod
Insane
This map has lots of inconsistent sections. It will need more opinions to get into shape. I will point out more issues when I recheck. I'm working on fixing those myself, but I need all help I can get.
Unsnapped notes Most of those are the 1/6 notes and some circles I had to move using coordinates to stack perfectly. If one of those things is unrankable please tell me so and I'll fix them.
00:16:823 (1,2,3) - Inconsistently stacking, make the stack perfect. You may find it wont stack properly even at the same coordinates. you will either need to resnap the slider end to a different point or re place the notes using the auto stacking feature. Fixed now
00:25:459 (1,2,3) - The stack leniency is badly screwing up this blanket. Manually space this part to account for stack leaning. I've been trying to fix this for an hour and I can't find the solution. Any help or guide I can use?
00:39:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Clean up this spacing, it shouldn't be this inconsistent. This spacing looks very different than most parts of your map so far. Maybe normal spaced stream here with curves similar to how you've been spacing thus far. I came up with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1016368 I thought the jump was fitting for the mood, but I guess the spacing was kinda random. I'll go with your pattern.
00:56:368 (1,2,3) - Same issue as 16 seconds. Same as before.
01:01:823 (1,2) - For the love of flow how about you make this a slider? Sure
01:19:891 (2,3) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1016380 IMO the gap here should be larger than what you have it. Fixed
01:47:618 (3) - The way this juts out doesn't look good IMO. My suggest would be a simple circular stream http://puu.sh/4GPxL.jpg ^
01:48:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stacking inconsistently.^
01:52:732 (1,2,3) - bad pattern and flow. Try moving 01:53:414 (3) - to x 251 y 205 2 still juts out kind of randomly, but the move into 3 is smooth. Changed that pattern completely
02:00:005 (4,5,6) - Space similarly. Fixed
02:01:823 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:16:823 (3,4) - blanket could be a lot better. I think I fixed it
02:35:686 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing is nonsense. Spacing is 1.5x. It might be a little big for a stream, but I think a jump there fits with the pitch change.
02:43:641 (1,2) - same as 1:01 Fixed
03:01:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking inconsistently. Fixed
thank you for mod! ^.^ and also for star :3 quite all fixed.Yumih wrote:
Hello! From ShiroiYume and Yumih's Modding Queue~!
With this, you used your ticket!Unrankable issue
Highly suggested
SuggestionGeneral
● Inconsistency in Audio Lead-In. The only diff with Audio Lead-In is Normal, and I don't think that this music really needs it. There's a little break before the song itself starts.
● Inconsistency in Red lines. The offset of the red line on Teru's guest difficult is in a different place.
● Add this for the Song Setup?
- Artist: じん
- Romanised Artist: Jin
- Title: 夕景イエスタデイ
- Romanised Title: Yuukei Yesterday
- Tags: 自然の敵P Shizen no Teki Shidu
Easy
● Unsnapped green lines on:
- 00:16:028
- 00:18:528
- 01:46:028
- 02:26:028
- 02:38:528
- 02:46:028
- 02:58:528
- 03:06:028
- 03:26:028
● 00:05:004 (1) - This slider doesn't really follow the music, in my opinion. The last hit on 00:06:822 sounds out of place. Maybe you could try using a different pattern here?
● 00:50:004 (4,1) - The spacing is slightly larger here
Really nice diff~Hard
● Unsnapped red lines on:
- 00:07:051
- 00:16:028
- 00:47:278
● 01:05:913 (3,4) - Hmm, you could improve this blanket a little
● 01:09:095 (1,2) - Why not change this pattern so that it follows the vocal instead of the drums? It makes things more exciting to play, in my opinion. You could move 01:10:004 (3) to 01:09:890 for example just not sure about changing it, I'll think about it
● 02:22:276 (2,3) - How about using this pattern here? It follows the vocal nicely, in my opinion.
Well, I guess that's it. I'm sorry if I wasn't of much help, the diffs were all pretty solid! It was difficult for me to find things to point out~
That's a great map and song you've got there! I'll give you a !
Good luck~!
Thanks!Yumih wrote:
Akareh's Insane
● 00:33:867 (5,6,7) - Hmm, the flow here looks a bit rough. Maybe the larger spacing here is a bit suddenly after so many streams with small spacings. I guess, spaced back to 1x
● 01:01:026 (6,7,8) - ^ Nah, I like that spacing
● 01:04:095 (4,5,6,7) - This part here has something that makes it a bit awkward to play. There are too many notes on the "stream", but maybe if it was a linear stream (if it wasn't stacked) there wouldn't be any problems. Well, how about doing this?
● 02:04:663 (5,6,7,8) - ^ Similar to the previous item It's a nice suggestion, but listening closely I really think my rythm there is fitting the song better. Might change this, though.
● 02:45:913 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
● 02:03:981 (2) - This note would flow better if it was stacked on 02:04:095 (3) - 's head, in my opinoin. Changed due to previous modding there.
Well, I guess that's it. I'm sorry if I wasn't of much help, the diffs were all pretty solid! It was difficult for me to find things to point out~
Good luck~!
thank you for mod I'll be modding your map as soon as possible >.<KillerGecko wrote:
Wow, hard to find much with such good mods already. I'll Try my best though.
EASY:
-So the Kiai Time from 02:07:276 to 02:19:776 and 02:21:822 to 02:34:322 makes for a long stretch of Kiai Time when added with the next section. It's fine that way, but I think you could highlight the intensity between 02:36:367 to 03:09:095 by taking away the Kiai sections before it. Again, it's fine the way it is. don't know XD maybe I'll leave as it is
-02:20:004 (4) This one hit circle is outside of the Kiai range. Not sure if intentional or not. fixed
-02:49:095 (3) This hit circle is also outside of Kiai range as well. fixed
Hard
00:13:867 (4, 5):Normal Clap hit sounds, sound really good right here. In fact, there are a few places I think they go perfectly. You already do something similar at some places like 00:48:413 (3, 4) so a few more can make the clapping feel more consistent. hm... the fact is that I added the normal clap when there was a hand clap sound, and in all the rest of the song there is a clap similar to the custom one I added, so I think the only moment where there was need of a normal clap is where I placed it, so no change, also for the rest.
01:46:822 (3, 4): suggest adding normal clap hit sounds.
03:26:595 From added clap hit sounds to the end of the end of the 2 slider and 3. Since this section repeats the same pattern to the end of the song, each pattern afterwards having a similar clap beat would be nice.
It's a good map and well modded already lol. Hope you enjoy the suggestions!
ritsu-tanaika wrote:
Hey, from M4M!
GENERAL
I like the flow of the rhythms and the use of hitsounds! but sometimes you make the notes appear too close to the border of the screen which can make it hard for players to identify
EASY
00:05:458 (4) - Move the red tick on slider path to X:272 Y:292 (suggest) it makes the slider look more proportional in symmetry hm... it's quite strange...
00:38:640 (4,5) - Maybe make a longer slider that starts at 00:38:640 and ends at 00:39:549? Right now, 00:38:640 (4) - doesnt really seem to fit in well with the rhythm no, I prefere as it is
00:52:731 (3) - I wouldnt suggest stacking for this difficulty since it can confuse some beginner players that's right, changed
01:45:458 (1) - Lower the position of this slider to maybe X:304 and Y: 52, right now its too high so it may be a bit off-screen not really high, I usually take care about this, but I just fixed the blancked for now and maybe now is just a bit lower
02:25:004 (5) - Again, I wouldnt suggest stacking fixed
02:34:549 (1) - Remove this spinner, its too quick for an Easy difficulty done
HARD
00:50:458 (6) - Why is it separated so far from 00:49:776 (3,4,5) - ? because there are 2 normal clap in there and a jump was fitting good
01:22:958 (1) - Add a spinner that ends at 01:23:640? nah, it will be too short
02:15:686 (3,4) - The jump between these 2 notes is a bit clumsy, try stacking 3 on top of 4 for a smoother flow just fixed the jump but not the stack
I cant mod Insane sorry, too hard! But I hope I helped
thank you both :3Kin wrote:
Hi ~
Ai mod :
strange, but fixed O.o
Easy :
00:43:640 (1,2,3) - can be confusing for easy hm... I think I'll leave it
00:52:731 (3) - add soft as addition ? hm... no?
01:02:276 (1) - ctrl + h + adjust spacing ? I find the flow better yes, that make sense
01:43:186 (3,4) - a lil confusing for easy, so how about New combo 4 ? fixed
Hard :
00:23:640 (1,2,3) - If you follow the melody it's mostly somthing like this http://puu.sh/53SNs.jpg tryed something
01:05:913 (3) - try to make a better blanket ? ok
02:54:549 (1,2,3) - kinda confusing, because of anti jump 1/2 and just after anti jump 1/4 ok, fixed this
02:56:367 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
that all, good luck ~
thanks for mod...m1223961117 wrote:
From Queue^^
and spent 2 days finishing it=口=
HardOpen to read00:06:026 (3,4) - change reverse slider better I prefere not
00:09:095 (1,2) - change slider, hard to play...for some players don't think so... it's a hard diff, it should be hard I think
00:09:890 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:10:231 (1,2,3) - a little hard, snap better same
00:13:867 (4) - del, 'cause 00:12:504 (1,2,3,4,5) you follow lyric, and this circle follow sound, follow lyric or sound, not all. I don't want to follow only the vocal either. and I don't want to make this diff easyer than it is. I think also listening to the song that beats are very often and also often on a blue tick, so I think better leave it as it is
00:19:322 (3) - del, 00:19:549 add circle, same reason ^same here and quite for all the other suggestions
00:33:867 (3) - del, If you don't want to do this, 00:33:640 (2,3) get close
00:43:640 - voice start here, just listen. And if add object, just add finish here. or 00:43:413 (1) - move to blue line
00:54:549 (1,2) - How about this↓ good suggestion, but no
01:09:095 (1,2,3) - try this↓ ^
01:15:231 (3) - stack 01:15:345 (4) 's head I don't want here because I prefere to don't ruin the pattern. and also there are not any other stack like this in the map...
01:17:049 (2) - stack 01:17:163 (3) 's head
01:40:458 (3) - del, and 01:40:231 (2) move to blue line
01:42:958 (4,5) - same way. del 01:43:186 (5), move 01:42:958 (4) to blue line
01:46:595 (3) - del, no lyric can follow
02:18:413 (6) - ^
02:24:776 (4) - del, and 02:24:208 (3) tail on blue line
02:36:822 (3,4) - make like 02:51:367 (2,3)
02:58:640 (2,3) - make like 02:22:276 (2,3)
EasyOpen to read00:21:822 (1) - remove finish on the tail don't see why
00:43:640 (1) - add finish on the head ok
00:49:095 (3) - ^ ok
00:50:913 (1) - ^ ok
00:52:731 (3) - finish there's arleady a finish...
01:01:367 (4) - add finish on the tail ok
01:21:367 (5) - remove finish on the tail ok
01:36:367 (1) - Normal diff start 01:38:186 (1), Why Easy diff start here?? because I mapped it before teru mapped her diff, I mean, if someone should change is not me. (I map on my own way, not like teru, and teru don't map like me, just that)
01:45:458 (1) - remove finish on the head hm...
01:50:458 (3) - add finish on the head and remove clap no
02:01:822 (1) - add finish on the head ok
02:03:640 (1) - ^ ok
02:04:549 (2) - add finish on the tail ok
02:32:276 (1) - ^ ok
02:34:549 (3) - remove finish on the tail ok
Sound fix
Un...I suggest you can fix drain time like Teru's Normal
Teru sama find a good point as ending... I will not ever delete the last part, so no changing on draining time for my diffs. treu can do what she wants anyway
I think 03:09:095 is good ending too.
good lock, for my MOD