Mei wrote:

cantonse song \^o^/
for m4m


[reality]

first read your ai mod, there are some kiai timing problem need to be solved

* 00:57:932 (5,6) - change to this i following totally the vocal here so i leave the rhythm like this o3o

SPOILER

* 01:04:432 (3) - ctrl + g i would ruin the flow between 01:04:432 (3,4,1) - and i don't wanna have a jump in the non kiai part

* 01:22:432 (6) - make a repeat for this i follow the vocal here so no

* 02:09:182 vocal start from there totally agree with,changed

* 02:16:557 i prefer add note there i don't like much a note there

* 02:42:932 (4) - ctrl+g nah i don't wanna a jump here and it would ruin the flow

* 03:46:954 (1,2) - how about blanket there nah


[dream]

* 01:26:932 add note there is not needed here

* 01:36:932 add note there i'm following the vocal here so no :3

* 02:03:432 (1) - remove this and add spinner i agree

* 03:44:454 add note there following the vocal here so no

* 03:48:954 (1) - dat slider....maybe change to a better parttern it's a heart ;____;

nice song and mapset, star~~

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Dream] :
Combo1 : 254,192,192
Combo2 : 201,239,248
Combo3 : 220,247,185
- [Reality] :
Combo1 : 252,239,252
Combo2 : 167,245,216
Combo3 : 227,248,251
Combo4 : 41,60,107
Combo5 : 255,155,155
Combo6 : 123,36,53

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Dream] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:432, ends on 01:26:931
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:431, ends on 01:45:432
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:23:432, ends on 02:38:932
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:39:432, ends on 02:57:432
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:34:954, ends on 03:52:954

- [Reality] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:432, ends on 01:26:931
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:431, ends on 01:45:426
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:23:432, ends on 02:38:932
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:39:432, ends on 02:57:432
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:34:954, ends on 03:52:954

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Dream
00:41:926 - snap to 00:41:932
01:27:930 - snap to 01:27:932
01:28:430 - snap to 01:28:432
01:28:930 - snap to 01:28:932

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Reality
00:41:926 - snap to 00:41:932
01:27:930 - snap to 01:27:932
01:28:430 - snap to 01:28:432
01:28:930 - snap to 01:28:932
01:45:426 - snap to 01:45:432

Leader wrote:

Nya >w<

[General]

1. Non capisco il significato dei nomi delle diff, sinceramente Dream e Reality non mi ispirano molto, specialmente il secondo. :\ se guardi http://www.jpopasia.com/celebrity/elann ... :9632.html il video capirai perchè le ho chiamate cosi

[Dream]

2. 00:24:932 (3) - Potresti provare a curvare questo slider in modo che sia diciamo simmetrico allo slider precedente, devi abbassare un po' 00:25:432 (4) - e fixare lo spacing, ma secondo me esce bene.
   SPOILER

   
   me gusta done
3. 00:30:432 (4) - Secondo me dovrebbe stare dritto, ora come ora non sta molto bene.. (Potresti curvare 00:29:432 (3) - per rendere il pattern migliore) nah non lo volevo fare dritto apposta
4. 01:04:432 (2) - Stessa cosa, inclinarlo di un grid solo non è il massimo, o fai minimo 15° o lo tieni parallelo all'asse delle x (smetto di lagnarmi qui, ce ne sono altri, up to you) same^
5. 00:41:432 (3) - Non credo che quello che hai fatto qui sia intenzionale, suppongo sia un errore. xD Se lo è, suona comunque male e rovina la canzone. ;_; se intendi il whistle sullo slider body si è intenzionale,se togli lo slider sentirai che nella canzone c'è lo stesso rumore/suono
6. 00:59:432 (1) - Più a destra? si poco poco
7. 01:13:432 (3,4,5) - Non trovo il pattern al massimo, anche se non puoi cambiarlo di tanto dato che lo spacing ti schiaccia verso la fine dello schermo orz ya lo so e non mi dispiace molto
8. 01:16:932 (4) - x:44 y:120 per essere precisi. allineato con un altro metodo del editor
9. 01:24:432 (2) - Siccome lo slider è poco curvo rispetto agli altri, io lo farei dritto e inclinato, esce bene imo
   SPOILER

   Non è un gran esempio ma è per darti un'idea
   ho fatto un altra cosa qui dalla mod precedente
10. 01:57:432 (3) - Anche qui, lo farei dritto piuttosto che una curva moscia amo sta curva moscia o3o
11. 02:12:932 (2,3) - Piccolo suggerimento, farei qualcosa di simile:
    SPOILER

    
    simi piace
12. 02:39:432 (1,2,3) - Che brutto il cuore al contrario x° (HR) almeno in questo kiai sarà dritto :V
13. 03:18:752 - Farei iniziare il break qui, dato che è il punto dove riniziano le vocal. nah
14. 03:42:954 (1) - Lo metterei in mezzo alla griglia. Se lo fai ricordati di sistemare anche 03:44:954 (2) - non mi uscira' mai simmetrico ed è anche per cio' che non lo faccio e lo lascio cosi'

[Reality]

1. 00:41:432 (5) - Come nella [Dream], gli hitsounds qui non mi piacciono per niente stessa risposta di prima
2. 01:00:932 (3) - Lo sposterei un po' a sinistra, dato che la linea verticale 01:00:682 (2,3,4,1) - è brutta da giocare, a mio parere sono perfettamente allineati con shift dall'editor
3. 01:13:182 (5,1) - Lo spacing tra queste due nota è diverso (1.10x invece di 1.20x), magari è intenzionale ma ti suggerisco di fixare w fixato
4. 01:45:426 - Kiai non snappato correttamente fixato nella prev mod
5. 02:17:432 (1) - Avrei preferito uno slider curvo normale qui nah mi piace questo o3o
6. 02:18:432 (3,4) - Secondo me un pattern simile è più carino
   SPOILER

   
   mi piace il mio attuale
7. 03:18:752 - Come ho detto nella [Dream] stessa risposta

Ben fatta Aly-nya :3 ♥ grazie tesoro <3

RikiH_ wrote:

m4m

Dream

00:26:932 (5) - Non mi piacciono molto gli slider orizzontali/verticali come questo... Magari sposta la fine in alto di 1 o 2 grid nah
00:33:432 (3,4) - Penso che questo ritmo sia molto meglio (Ignora gli slider, li ho piazzati a cazzo xD)

SPOILER

ci pensero'
00:35:432 (1,2) - Fai bene questo blanket! Usa l'approach circle del (2) per aiutarti (il mio non è proprio perfetto ma insomma il concetto è quello)

SPOILER

nazi fixato
00:41:432 (3) - Io toglierei il whistle dal corpo dello slider e lo lascerei solo sull'inizio... Fa un po' troppo casino secondo me come ho spiegato prima a leader c'è anche nella musica questo suono quindi lo lascio
00:41:932 - Wtf qua ci sono due linee verdi D: tolte in precedenza
00:42:432 (4) - Non sono sicuro ma penso che silenziare l'inizio di uno slider sia unrankable... Però non sono sicuro l'ho tolto in precedenza,comunque dalle ranking criteria è previsto che si possono silenziare con il 5% di volume gli slider end se non mi sbaglio dei slider star non ne sono sicura,comunque era uno sbaglio qui
01:38:932 (3,1) - Non è che rischi di confondere i newbies con un pattern del genere...?modificatoin precedenza fatto un po' piu' semplice,ma poco poco
01:41:432 (4) - Mettilo così, almeno non rompi l'oval flow

SPOILER

done
02:09:432 (4) - Lo preferirei così... Rompe un po' meno il flow secondo me done

SPOILER

02:50:932 (3,1) - Come 01:38:932 (3,1) idem
02:53:432 (4) - Come 01:41:432 (4) ok
03:38:954 (1,2) - Questo non mi piace per niente... Non puoi farlo meglio? D: fatto un po' meglio

Reality

00:40:182 (2,3,4) - Non mi piace il ritmo qui... Prova ad usare questo anche se probabilmente non va bene dato che gli slider iniziano/finiscono sui tick blu... Però boh, mi sembra che suoni un po' meglio dato che segue meglio i vocal xD preferisco il mio

SPOILER

01:15:932 (2) - Ctrl+g? li volevo tutti nella stessa direzione
01:23:932 (4) - Ctrl+h e poi fixa lo spacing, secondo me flowwa meglio i agree done
01:52:182 (2,4) - Fixa lo stack qui :c nu
01:54:432 (6) - Prova a farlo un po' più simmetrico, così è più carino! preferiscol'imprerfezione
02:22:932 (1) - Uh, questo non è perfettamente al centro, ed è un po' strano... Io lo metteri nel centro e poi fixerei lo spacing, oppure lo sposterei un po' più in alto tipo 296|100 nah preferisco tenerlo cosi
02:34:932 (4,1) - Fai un po' meglio il blanket

SPOILER

preferisco tenerlo cosi'
02:49:182 (3) - Io proverei a curvare questo slider e blankettarlo con quello precedente! ya
02:50:682 (6) - Ctrl+g? non voglio jump qui
03:05:469 (1) - Sposta in 217|352 così si sovrappone perfettamente con lo slider precedente k
03:07:469 (1,2,3) - I clap nelle code di questi tre slider non mi piacciono proprio... Io li toglierei cambiata radicalmente la pattern dalla suggestion di CXu
03:09:469 (4) - Anche questo clap non mi suona tolto
03:10:469 - Aggiungi una nota?messo altro
03:10:969 - ^-^

________________________

Nient'altro, scusa se il mod è un po' scarno ma con canzoni di questo tipo sono veramente impedito
Comunque il timing mi sembra a posto, solo non capisco a cosa ti serve questa red line: 03:18:752 - chiedilo a Niva e non a me o3o

Comunque la map mi piace, ti metto una stellina
grazie mille >u< <333

luxoDeh wrote:

Ciao! M4M dalla mia queue :3

DREAM

• 00:29:432 (3,4) - questi due slider sono non vanno bene per una easy (anche perchè il primo sta su una linea blu. prova a cancellarli, poi fai un unico slider che va da 00:29:432 - fino a 00:30:182 - e aggiungi una nota a 00:30:682 - seguo il vocal qui e non sono difficili da prendere e comunque dovrebbe essere una normal semplice e non una easy
  00:35:432 (1,3) - muovili semplicemente una grid a sinistra così il blancket con 00:35:432 (1,3) - sarà perfetto nah va bene cosi com'è
  
  00:41:932 - sbaglio o ci sono 2 inherithed point quà? penso sarebbe meglio comunque non rendere silenzioso anche questo 00:42:432 - punto. inoltre nel punto in cui l'audio è ridotto al 5% sembra quasi che non si colpisce affatto lo slider, sarebbe meglio quindi non lasciare questo 5% ma portarlo almeno al 10-20%, lo stesso vale per gli altri momenti in cui c'è questo momento a basso volume. è uno sbaglio mio fixed
  
  00:55:432 (1,2) - fai un blancket con questi due? qui preferisco non averlo
  00:58:432 (4) - anche questo essendo su una linea blu non credo sia ok per una easy. stessa cosa di prima seguo il vocal qui
  01:24:432 (2,4) - forse prova a rendere questi due della stessa forma, prova a copia/incollare uno dei due. no quello no ma li ho modificati un po' per migliorare il flow
  01:38:932 (3,1) - questo overlap non mi convince molto, per essere una easy 01:39:432 (1) - potrebbe non essere ben visibile o intuibile. su questo ci faro' un pensiero
  01:47:432 (1,1) - questo è l'unico stack dell'intera mappa, forse è meglio evitare. fixed
  01:58:432 (4) - qua vale la stessa cosa di prima. stessa risposta
  02:19:432 (1) - forse dovresti far finire questo spinner a 02:22:682 - , in questo punto si sente un battito molto forte, potresti anche aggiungere un finish hitsound in questo punto. hai pienamente ragione
  02:26:432 - fino a 02:54:432 - è completamente copia/incollata dal primo kiai time, quindi valgono le stesse cose che ho menzionato prima. ho fixato solo quello che ho fixato prima
  03:10:969 - aggiunci una note qui? semplicemente fatto lo slider a reverse

REALITY

• 00:41:932 - come nella easy. fixed
  01:52:182 (2,4) - non sono perfettamente uniti non era mia intenzione infatti
  02:19:432 (1) - stessa cosa che per l'altra difficoltà ok
  02:46:932 (7,1) - questi due non sono perfettamente paralleli (ma giusto se si vuole essere pignoli XD) fixato o almeno spero
  03:07:969 (2,3) - penso che questo punto suini meglio così:
  SPOILER

  
  ma penso vada bene anche come hai già fatto tu :3 cambiato in un altro modo come mi ha suggerito CXu
  da 03:10:219 - a 03:10:969 - potresti aggiungere 2 slider da 1/2? mi sembra troppo vuoto questo stacco prima dello spinner.
  03:41:454 (1) - questo dovrebbe finire a 03:41:704 - altrimenti sembra essere sul nulla :/ aggiunto qualcosa

ook, è tutto carina la canzone! buona fortuna per il rank!

Lanturn wrote:

Really nice mapset. Some of the timing does seem a bit odd, such a few drums in the song hitting about 1/16th earlier or something than they should. I'm not the one to ask about for timing though. It does play fine enough anyways, as I didn't get any bad 100s

[General]
Tags: add Bold
Innocent This is apparently the name of the album: Chinese Wiki | Track is number 2 oook

Not really much else to add.. that one tag would make it so you have at least one anyways XD

SPOILER

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Dream] :
Combo1 : 254,192,192
Combo2 : 201,239,248
Combo3 : 220,247,185
- [Reality] :
Combo1 : 252,239,252
Combo2 : 167,245,216
Combo3 : 227,248,251
Combo4 : 41,60,107
Combo5 : 255,155,155
Combo6 : 123,36,53

fixed

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Dream] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:432, ends on 01:26:931
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:431, ends on 01:45:432
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:23:432, ends on 02:38:932
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:39:432, ends on 02:57:432
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:34:954, ends on 03:52:954

- [Reality] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:432, ends on 01:26:931
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:431, ends on 01:45:426
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:23:432, ends on 02:38:932
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:39:432, ends on 02:57:432
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:34:954, ends on 03:52:954

fixed

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Dream
00:41:926 - snap to 00:41:932
01:27:930 - snap to 01:27:932
01:28:430 - snap to 01:28:432
01:28:930 - snap to 01:28:932

fixed

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Reality
00:41:926 - snap to 00:41:932
01:27:930 - snap to 01:27:932
01:28:430 - snap to 01:28:432
01:28:930 - snap to 01:28:932
01:45:426 - snap to 01:45:432

done

[Dream]

00:29:432 (3) - This part sounds odd as the music and the vocals both happen 1/4 later at 00:29:932 - | Maybe remove the reverse, extend the slider to 1/1, and add a circle at 00:30:182 - i prefer to keep it like it is for now

00:49:682 (1,1) - Try this: Add a clap at the end of your spinner | remove the clap from 00:52:932 - | after this, two different ideas:
00:53:432 (2,1,3,1) - (1) is the dominant beat where you'd normally apply finishes and such. My idea is to either clap on the (1)s or clap on all four mentioned notes on the big white tick.I personally think it plays better with the clap every second measure, but try them both out did not exsactly this but similar

01:37:432 (2,3,1) - - A little more on the nazi side. How about leaving this just a bit more room? http://puu.sh/4CM6n.jpg | Rotate (2) and adjust to kind of match the previous (1) slider. | Move the (3) away from the (1) so it's a 1.00 gap. After that, move (2) so that its evenly spaced between the previous (1) and the (3) fixed a bit

03:40:954 (4,5) - I would suggest ending the (4) 1/2 earlier, and adding a note on the red tick it originally ended at. I didn't even notice while listening or looking at the map it was supposed to be 1/2 longer and ended up releasing early because I was listening more to the vocals than anything at this point.
hmm for now i leave it like it is now

[Reality]

Beautiful map, nice and relaxing to play.

Replay: http://puu.sh/4CNFw

random 100 ;w;

00:53:932 (3) - This was the only thing I really messed up on. I released this one 1/2 early because the vocals or something made me think I should release it 1/2 earlier. Not asking to change this. Just wanted to mention the only thing I noticed on my test play that felt a bit odd.
hmm will think about
---

00:49:682 (1,2) - same idea as Dream. Just only these two need to be changed. and done

Honestly I can't really find anything wrong here. The sliders do seem a bit too slow at the start of the map, but it isn't bad enough to remap over.
i wanted a really slow start since the music has a really slow rhythm there and relaxing one

Great job! Take a

tyyy >\\\\<

Xinely wrote:

Hi Lally ~
trying m4m here

• 
  Dream
  HP+1? y
  00:29:432 (3) - i know blue tick have drum but sound so low here, better to follow vocal in 00:29:932 - , try this rythm http://puu.sh/4DEpm.jpg ? will think about
  00:36:932 (2) - 428,292 for better blanket? fixed already
  00:41:432 - try volume 30%? 50% too loud imo i agree
  00:48:932 (3) - whistle sampleset normal in tail to consistency with 00:47:432 - , 00:45:432 - etc nah
  00:54:932 (4,1) - imo, this placement have better flow, feel free to reject, it's nazi, http://puu.sh/4DEK3.jpg i agree fixed
  01:05:432 (3) - imo this flow kinda bad, well try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1010238 ? did something similar
  01:24:432 (2) - make it little curved, imo will be have better flow lol fixed in the prev mod
  01:39:432 (1) - the spacing is itentional? O.o yap it is but i changed it a bit
  02:08:432 (2) - 32,128 for blanket? nah is ok so
  02:28:682 (3) - nazi, 1 grid down for diagonal fixed in a other way
  02:51:432 (1) - this too, the spacing is itentional? yap it is but i changed it a bit
  03:10:969 - add note to follow violin sound? did a reverse

• 
  Reality
  00:42:432 - make volume 25 or 30% due already have sound here y
  01:06:182 (2) - i prefer placement in 308,72 to better visual imo, well it's nazi nah o3o
  01:11:182 - add note here for following vocal? seems better to me y
  01:12:682 - add note for following vocal nah here not
  01:27:182 - add note, placement in 320,248? seems nice to me ^
  01:40:682 (6,7,8) - try to make curve, example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1010622 , it will be have better flow y
  02:04:932 (3) - i prefer ctrl+G this for flow i don't wanna have a jump here
  02:22:682 - add note with whistle to follow violin (i think) sound here? it's fine 1/2 after spin since this diff is Hard i did the spinner longer here
  02:33:182 (4) - i prefer put in 228,200 for make triangle shape too nazi but fixed
  02:34:432 (3) - make it little curve for better flow y
  02:45:932 (6) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/4DX6G.jpg ? y
  02:54:182 (5) - just opinion, but i would to make spacing consistency here with ctrl+G for better flow i prefer not
  03:50:954 (1) - move the spinner to 03:51:079 - , and then add note with finish in 03:50:954 - , you can't skip this since have cymbal sound here nah

Nice song, Good Luck >w< tyyy <333

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Delete .osb file
Inconsistence Widescreen Support. Uncheck it on your Dream diff. fixed
[Dream]
Placement
01:55:432(1) nazi, 1 grid down for spacing. ok
Rhythm
01:05:432 unnecessary green line
01:13:932 ^
... and more I found.
00:24:432(2) there is no sound here, so move it at 00:24:182 better. i agree sounds better with the vocal
00:29:432(3) the reverse doesn't follow the main sound, it sounds weird for me. hmm will think about
[Reality]
Placement
01:00:682(2,3,4) liner placement looks wierd for this map, maybe replace better like this? ok

SPOILER

02:26:432 (3) a bit swift compared with previous slider. just cuved it better, it makes nice flow. i prefer it like it is now

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:29:182 expect a note here since I can hear vocal clearly. added
01:12:682 same as above. I don't find same pattern in this diff. i prefer not here
00:43:432(1) this slider sounds odd because of too long, suggetion. e.g.) i prefer to keep it

SPOILER

02:18:432(3,4) to follow the vocal, I suppose it would be proper rhythm. yap changed

SPOILER

02:47:432(1) consider to remake this slider, the reverse is followed a rest of vocal, but it sounds weakly and sounds odd. maybe I suppose 1/2 slider with kick better. hmm will think about

sorry for short mod. good luck~it was helpfull ty <3

SkyDevil wrote:

Helloooo im here for the M4M round >w<

I like the hitsound use here..

Dream
02:00:432 (2,3) - just some preference.. Im not fan of reverse 1/2 and then another 1/2 behind it xD maybe change? owo changed

Reality
00:48:432 (1) - kinda felt odd to me.. maybe because you mainly used 1/1 for whenever there are no vocals.. hmm not feel like to change it
00:57:932 (5) - doesnt feel very well~~ how about just 1/2 and 1/1 mainly i like how it sound here so no changes
01:20:932 (3,4,5,6) - y u no curvy sliders :3 i prever here to have a little jumpy pattern
02:51:432 (1,2,3) - uh... doesnt seem right, just make 1/2's from (1,2) and keep the 3rd slider changed this pattern
03:02:723 (3) - im sure the somewhat longer note starts here o3o hmm

ITs a really good map >w< I reaallyy like the hitsound orientation ; w ;~

BeatofIke wrote:

Sorry for the delay. School and work got in the way orz :<
Okay, let's begin.

[General]

1. Everything seems to be clear. Your map is currently rankable!

[Dream]

1. 00:29:432 (3) - Be aware that this slider (including one at 00:58:432 (4), 01:58:432 (4), and 02:09:432 (4)) is off beat due to the reverse part of the slider. Just a precaution in advance. i follow the vocalhere and for me sounds good
2. 00:55:432 (1) - If you want, you could blanket this slider with the short slider at 00:56:932 (2). It doesn't ruin the flow during gameplay, thus it would be a nice add. iwas following the slider end for the flow and didn't want to have a blanket here
3. 02:23:432 - 02:57:432: Heh XD copy-paste. Just make sure to double-check any inconsistent hitsounds adn notes as future mods may require you to change them. uguu o3o
4. 02:43:432 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is a tad bit off. Try moving 2 a grid down. nah is ok here o.o
5. 03:01:473 (2) - This slider is not exactly symmetrical and at the same time the shape could be more interesting. Here is an example:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   Code: 364,268,181473,2,0,B|324:284|284:268|284:268|256:314|228:268|228:268|188:284|148:268,1,240,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   ty very much i like this slider more o3ob
6. 03:06:973 (4,1) - The flow between these notes is a little awkward, because the 1/2 slider at 03:06:973 (4) is curved slightly upwards and the way it's angled. Try making this slider straight and angle the end a few degrees up for a better flow and spacing. Here is an example:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Code:
   460,236,186973,2,0,L|404:260,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   368,308,187473,70,0,P|308:356|164:288,2,240,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   i prefer to keep it like it is now i just did the curve of the 1/2 slider better

[Reality]

1. 00:25:182 (2) - Optional, but you could add a spinner (starting at 00:25:682) for this pause if you like. It doesn't do any harm to not add the spinner here because there is no pause in the next spinner at 00:48:932 (2,1). i prefer o not have a spinner here
2. 00:27:182 (3) - Personally, I would add an extra note here and stack it with 00:27:432 (1) because the next vocal line starts here. i agree it follow the vocal
3. 01:27:432 (1,2) - This flow isn't too bad here, but it would be more interesting if you reverse selecting these notes for a better and interesting flow. You may have to double-check the hitsounds as they will reverse select as well. i like the flow here so no changes
4. 01:58:182 (2,3) - Well, it's possible to do a slight blanket with these notes for a nice polish, but this will require a spacing change. If you don't mind this, please consider. :3 will consider but don't like so much the blanket here
5. 02:43:432 (1,2) - This linear flow is a bit strange. Try curving the slider at 02:43:432 (1) downward for a nicer flow. You may have to adjust spacing a bit. You could try moving the slider at x:432 y:164 maybe. changed totally pattern here
6. 02:47:432 (1) - Similar issue as Easy due to the fact that this note being off-beat with the vocals due to the reverse part of this slider. same answer as Normal
7. 03:38:473 (4) - A little nazi but you could improve this blanket with the head of 03:36:973 (1) to slightly polish the notes a bit. impreoved

As always, nice and relaxing map. Take my star and good luck!

Kodora wrote:

As requested :3/

[General]

1. Add "chinese" to tags no since it will be the genere ò.ò

[Reality]

*I would recommend you keep this diff with tickrate 1. Tickrate 2 fits as well on kiai part but sounds horrible at slowdown parts, especially at the beginning
i use TR 2 because of SV changes,and it sound not so bad

1. 00:25:182 (2) - Hmm, any reason for slider usage here? If you're following vocals then single note at 00:25:182 wouls work much better imo, slider doesnt sounds well here i know but i hate mostly to finish a vocal on a red line
2. 00:41:432 (5) - awesome volume trick <3 <33
3. 01:13:432 (1,2) - How about change them to slider? This singletap part feels a bit weird due to song's tempo and slider will mach song better at this part. with this i will agree it's a bit difficult to single tap in such a relaxing song to much single cicles/notes so will change it
4. 01:22:432 (6,1,2) - Thats may looks minor while playing nomot but may be pretty much confusing with dt on due to low AR. Please make spacing consistent at this part. played it many times with dt and i will say that is no problem because the spacing inconsistencyis only about ~0,15
5. 01:46:432 (1) - I understand reason why you put spinner here, but imo it doesnt fit enough good here - first, it really unexpected and come too suddenly after previous one, second - it really feels too short :V Consider replace with slow slider. Also, i guess finish at the end would work much better than clap. y
6. 01:54:432 (6,1) - Swap NCs follow pattern? k
7. 02:02:182 (1) - Finish would work better here. Also please dont reduse volume at the spinner's end, there is actually a strong beat. changed a bit
8. 02:19:432 - Add note? Feesl empty a bit. k
9. 02:45:432 (5) - This slider snapped wrong: if you will listen at 50% you will see that reverse here dont mach lyrics; something like this would work better:
   it have just an other rhythm not that is snapped wrong
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:04:473 (2,1) - There are tiny stacking issue i didn't want to have a perfect stack here
11. 03:50:973 (1) - Please don't kill volume at the spinner end it's ok how it is atm

[Dream]

*Wanna OD-1 due to unstable timing? Would be nice for an easiest diff in mapset imo will think about,but i don't think will do any change since the OD is already on 3 and is enought easy

1. 00:19:432 - You dont need this green line, you can place volume settings directly on uninherited section.yap some issues of copy pasting the green lines
2. 00:29:432 (3) - This slider... feels weird. It doesnt mach lyrics well. A simple replacement like this will work better:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   i prefer to keep this one
3. 00:34:932 - add note follow guitar sound? if i wanted to follow the guitar i should add a note 00:34:682 - here and not where you said,btw no
4. 00:49:682 (1) - Please dont kill volume at the end of spinner, it snapped to strong beat here and also needs finish. y
5. 01:11:182 - useless green line
6. 01:46:432 - ^
7. 01:58:432 (4) - Weird snapped slider: try something like this instead? nah o3o i love ma sliders o3o
   
   
   SPOILER

   

Awesome hitsounds <3 *D* yay ty <333

Good luck!

Stefan wrote:

hi

[General]
until 00:35:432 - The custom Whistles (but also the soft Hits here in general) sounds too loud and a bit distored in contrast to the song. You may go with the Sound volume here to 40% or maybe even 30%. Up to you, both sounds well to me - at least better as currently.as ok done

[Dream]
00:31:432 (1,2) - The begin of (2) sounds misleaded, I would like to see a longer slider which starts from (1)'s begin until (2)' end point.good idea
00:41:432 (3) - I think the effect you wanted to reach does not really bring the success people like to see. It would be more logical if you start the slider from 00:41:932 to 00:42:432. ok
01:42:932 (1) - The spinner should follow the Voice here, and the Spinner fits much better if it starts with the time where the singer holds its voice. So.. move the Spinner to 01:43:932 - and make a Slider before that it doesn't looks so empty.
02:54:932 (1) - Same as 01:42:932 (1). i prefer to keep mu spinners like this

Dream looks fine, it's a bit tough for the fact it's the easier Diff here but it's also a Normal Diff, so.

[Reality]
<brb> o3o?

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Dream]
00:27:432 (1) - I prefer you to use the same hitsound from 00:19:432 (1) - on the head of this slider instead :3 sounds better imo. i prefer not o3o
00:38:182 - 00:39:432 Try this rhythm? i prefer mine here o3o

00:41:432 (3) - Move to 00:41:182. For a soft quiet song like this, it'd be better if you follow the vocals.the vocal ends on 00:41:432- so why should i move it? o.o
00:46:182 - 00:47:432 same suggestion as 00:38:182 - 00:39:432 same
02:01:682 (1) - Change clap to finish? i prefer a softer sound as a finish here

[Reality]
00:28:182 I recommend using a slider from here to 00:28:932 instead, since 00:28:432 (4) - 's head sounds to extra at this part,becuase 00:28:182 (3) - hits the 'sang' the vocals say.
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my feel is like:
00:28:182 (3) - sa
00:28:432 (4) - ng - chon
00:29:182 (5) - sa
00:29:432 (1) - ng ....
sang - chonsang ....
it follows the same identical pattern and i don't feel like kinda change it
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00:40:182 (2,3) - ^ same
01:39:932 (5) - NC yap i agree
02:05:432 (4) - ^ yap i agree
02:11:432 (1) - Add finish on the head? i don't like how it sounds ;;
02:36:932 (4,1) - Not a pretty overlap. Try this instead? i like how it is atm

02:45:432 (5) - NC yes
02:49:932 (4) - ^ not here is in the middle of the vocal and has no sence o3o

...Ahh my feels This song sure gives off an emotional feeling. Pretty good map you've made!
Hope this helps~!

Rakuen wrote:

Hi!

[General]
Nice mapping

02:23:182 - Please make preview point here, it's better (I feel better with the lyrics there) i prefer my prev point
01:11:432 - Don't KIAI here, it doesn't suit IMO (refer to another chinese song which is newly ranked https://osu.ppy.sh/s/64473&#41; i refer to myself for thekiai not to the other maps
Consider to map 03:53:473 - with some 1/1 slider (simple sliders) and put a spinner starts 04:01:973 - and ends 04:05:473 - no.

[Dream]
00:29:432 (3) - This doesn't follow the lyric, it remains on white tick which is here 00:29:932 -
^ Or maybe you're following guitar cover? won't change the rhythm here *again*
00:46:432 (4) - Move to 00:46:182 - and add a circle 00:47:182 - don't see a reason to do it
01:25:432 (4) - Rotate it 15* clockwise i like the actual flow
01:38:932 (3) - Inconsistent DS here? or there's no more space? yes is the only point because i wanted to create a different pattern here and i like it how it is because is not so difficul to read it.
02:09:182 (3) - Clap here uh waw i forgot one ty
02:17:432 (4) - Rotate 15* clockwise is not needed
02:37:432 (4) - ^ This too, which makes like the pic below: no,i don't like it

03:05:223 (2) - Clap in hard diff is none here
03:07:223 - ^-^
03:47:723 (2) - Clap this follown not my hitsound pattern

[Reality]
If you wanna follow the lyrics, try mapping with 1/3 starts from 00:19:432 - no.
01:15:932 (2) - Ctrl+G again no because i don't like it here
01:27:182 - A circle here which stacks to head of 01:26:432 (4) - (small jump) just no not here a jump
01:52:932 (4) - Move to X:399 Y:64 to stack perfectly i don't wanna a perfeck stack here,the actual is fine

I love the song

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey kawaii~ sorry for the delay ></

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Dream]
00:25:432 (4) - why don't you replace this for a 2/1 slider instead of a 1/1 repeat because there's nothing following the repeat in this part? i find it unnecessary to have during gameplay. done
00:31:432 (1) - end this slider at 00:32:182 because that's where it follows the guitar in this part, also you can add a repeat. i find that it keeps the flow steady for players during gameplay IMO.i mostly follow the vocal so i ended it 00:32:432 - here
00:58:432 (4) - i find that this slider breaks the flow in the whole map during gameplay, so for this one, replace this for a 1/1 slider followed by a circle to follow the music properly as it follows the vocals during gameplay.
01:06:432 (5) - why don't you add a whistle like at 01:04:432 (2) - to keep the hitsound pattern consistent in the snaps during gameplay? because the vocal here is a bit more softer so i decided to don't use the whistle here
01:22:932 (6) - remove the whistle here because it breaks consistency with the previous note since it has the snap in that part, and it doesn't with with this part of the song. forgot to CS:1 here D:
02:09:432 (4) - same as 00:58:432.
02:50:932 (3,1) - the spacing here is inconsistent, so you should fix that issue so that the spacing is consistent during gameplay. you forget then 01:38:932 (3,1) - too since is a copy pasted pattern o3o and btw i don't find it much inconsistent because the difference about thespacing is very little and i wanted to create a particular pattern

about the 02:09:432 (4) - same as 00:58:432 - i would like to keep this sliders how they are because i found that they fit good withthe vocal part :V

[Reality]
00:57:932 (5) - same idea as Dream. i find that this slider breaks the flow in the whole map during gameplay. for this one, replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider and a circle so that it'll follow the vocals properly during gameplay. same then ^
01:06:432 (3) - same as Dream. same o3o
01:22:432 (6) - for this one, do Ctrl+G because it'll keep the flow going as it makes a jump pattern throughout (4,5,6). following the DS would break the flow in this part during gameplay. a ctrl+g would breake more the spacing atm is only a ~0,20 difference and i prefet to keep itlike this because of 01:20:932 (3,4) - have a same direction so the next 2 too
01:37:932 (4) - same as above, but this is a suggestion. changed a bit the pattern to do flow better and done
02:10:932 (6) - try a stack at the end of this slider to the beginning of (1) so that the flow in this part is smooth tofollow during gameplay IMO. hmm i stacked 02:10:932 (6) - with 02:09:432 (2) - end and did a better flow between 02:10:932 (6,1,2) -
02:24:932 (5) - same idea as 01:2:432, but this one, stack this note on the beginning of (3). same reason. i prefer to not to do a small jump here:V
02:47:432 (1) - same as 00:57:932. and same o3o

and that's pretty much it. i feel that the map is almost ready for a bubble. so here's a star . GL on the rank kawaii and don't give up on this map. . you're almost there, i'm telling you... Ty moe for modding =3=) nyaa

Breeze wrote:

[Dream]

1. 00:33:432 (2) - This one sounds weird, maybe you can try a repeat slider which repeat at 00:34:057 and end at 00:34:682, and I'd recommend lower the volume of the reverse point D: it was kinda a bug fixed
2. 00:41:932 (4) - (nazi) According to previous 2 and 3, this slider should be on a same curve (red one), but as you said (green one), it looked a bit weird now fixed
   
3. 03:18:723 - Drag break here seems better since voice starts here done

[Reality]

1. 03:18:723 - The same to Dream diff done

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