This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月15日 at 16:21:29

Artist: BEAST
Title: Shadow
Tags: Korean Pop
BPM: 115
Filesize: 3679kb
Play Time: 03:35
Difficulties Available:

1. B2UTY (2.47 stars, 250 notes)
2. SHADOW (4.71 stars, 508 notes)
3. SO BEAST (4.51 stars, 346 notes)

Download: BEAST - Shadow
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BEAST - 'Shadow (그림자)' 《Hard to Love, How to Love》

From my queue~
本来想昨天清的结果/_\
offset 332 这个先改了……
insane sv有点低都挤成一团了
细节处理也不是很到位 00:44:126 (6,7,8) -
先这样 改完offset再mod(记得叫我)._. No kd

建议combo colour别用纯黑 哪怕 1,1,1也是好的……虽然说也不推荐就是了，我认为去掉纯黑色比较好……都用纯黑背景的话……圈就看不见了啊
第一次见澳门player和mapper._.
关于音效：音乐里有现成的拍手和finish 跟着走就行
[Insane]
00:29:418 (7) - 往前1/4
00:30:462 (3,4) - 后移1/4
00:37:375 (8) - 下移一格
01:01:245 - note
01:01:375 - remove
01:01:505 - note
01:05:027 (8,9) - 靠太近了 8 NC
01:07:897 (7,8,9) - 节奏不对
01:23:027 - note
02:03:462 (11) - 靠太近了
02:35:027 (2,3) - 不太好看
02:56:158 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - 不整齐 1 8 交换nc
03:08:288 (2) - 节奏不对
03:23:418 - note
03:24:071 (8) - NC
完全能自摸的……多看看最新的rank图._.
[Hard]
00:18:853 (5) - 节奏不对，前面的这个音都忽略掉了这里就显得不自然 忽略 00:19:114 - 就显得更不自然 ._.
01:21:723 (4) - 太近了
01:34:245 (6) - 没包好1
01:44:158 (6) - NC
01:48:853 (6) - NC
02:11:810 (7) - 太近了
02:28:505 (6) - 太近了
02:32:679 - NC
02:54:592 (5) - NC
03:21:201 (6) - 最后一个点去掉倒数第二个拉远一点
[Normal]
01:33:201 (3) - 和2一样
01:54:592 (10) - 挤成一团了……拉开
02:26:418 (3) - 歪了
02:58:245 (5) - NC
03:05:549 (5) - NC
03:30:332 (5) - NC

就这样……还有就是圈最好都缩小一号

Hey~

00:49:375 - Please set the preview time

[Normal]
00:18:592 (3) - clap
00:19:114 (4) - New combo
00:23:288 (8) - ^
00:22:245 (7,8,9) - 普通难度的是一个不同的变化规律，看起来那么好
00:26:418 (2) - ctrl + g
00:30:071 (5) - New combo
00:33:201 (1) - 删除新组合
00:35:810 (6) - New combo
00:43:897 (5) - 不符合的节奏 00:43:636 - 请到这里 And New combo
00:45:723 (7) - New combo
00:53:549 (7) - ^
01:08:679 (3) - ctrl + g
01:11:288 (7) - New combo
01:21:201 (3,4,5,6) - 为什么不越窄？在距离小于普通难度应该突然改变

有一个好~

HabiHolic wrote:

Hey~

00:49:375 - Please set the preview time

[Normal]
00:18:592 (3) - clap
00:19:114 (4) - New combo
00:23:288 (8) - ^
00:22:245 (7,8,9) - 普通难度的是一个不同的变化规律，看起来那么好
00:26:418 (2) - ctrl + g
00:30:071 (5) - New combo
00:33:201 (1) - 删除新组合
00:35:810 (6) - New combo
00:43:897 (5) - 不符合的节奏 00:43:636 - 请到这里 And New combo
00:45:723 (7) - New combo
00:53:549 (7) - ^
01:08:679 (3) - ctrl + g
01:11:288 (7) - New combo
01:21:201 (3,4,5,6) - 为什么不越窄？在距离小于普通难度应该突然改变

有一个好~

Thanks your mod^^
But what's that meaning?----->"为什么不越窄？在距离小于普通难度应该突然改变"
I can't understand it ><

timing is perfect

vahn10 wrote:

timing is perfect

Ok~ thank you^^

from my modding queue~

General

I suggest you to NC on "Shadow, shadow, shadow" parts =p (consider putting the "because" in the same combo color of "shadow, shadow, shadow" so they don't feel really strange, maybe)

00:12:853
00:31:636
01:05:023
01:38:418
02:11:812
03:26:940
03:31:114

I also noticed that you separated some "Shadow, shadow, shadow" parts with 2 green lines, but you didn't with all of them. I dunno why you isolated them, maybe hitsound?

B2UTY

If this is supposed the be an easy, it lacks breaks IMO, but if this is a normal, its pretty ok the breaks.

00:43:114(4) - Down to Y = 152 to align with previous slider?
00:43:636 (1) - X = 152 Y = 240 to align with previous circle and following slider?
00:45:723 (1) - X = 280 to allign?
01:05:207 (4) - X = 440 Y = 128
01:17:027 (6) - Y = 104 to match the pattern?
01:31:636 (1) - X = 344 Y = 80
01:49:897 (3) - Y = 320 so it fits a line between 1 and 2
01:54:071 (9) - Y = 232 to match the pattern
02:00:853 (8) - Y = 32 to match pattern?
02:06:592 (5) - X = 200 Y = 184?
02:08:679 (2) - X = 216
02:10:245 (5) - Y = 272?
02:23:288 (4) - X = 272 Y = 264?
02:29:027 (6) - X = 256
03:12:332 (5) - Y = 40
03:12:853 (6) - X = 256 Y = 40
03:13:375 (7) X = 168 Y = 200

SO BEAST
00:15:071 - make it start at 00:15:201
00:26:418 - X = 64 Y = 304

i'll keep it later no kudosu until i'm done

MOVING ON

SO BEAST

00:31:636 - NC?
00:34:766 - this pattern maybe? http://puu.sh/4bNBp.jpg
00:43:114 - X = 400 Y = 48?
00:43:636(1,2) - X = 400?
00:45:201 (3,4,5) - puu.sh/4bNPN.jpg maybe?
01:21:723 (4,5,6) - NC? Also, 6 Y = 256?
02:48:462 - make the spacing consistent?
02:51:462 - X = 392, Y = 272?
03:10:245 - NC?
03:15:984 (5,6) Y = 248

like i said, if you use some kind of a dark collor for shadow could add an interesting thing to these parts

SHADOW

00:53:027 - Reduce the space between 1 and 2?
00:56:940 - Inconsistent spacing from 3 to 4 compared to 1 to 2 and 2 to 3
02:19:897 - Move 5 to X = 320, Y = 216
02:24:592 - I don't know if your intention was to make so that 4 ends where 1 starts, but they aren't stacked
02:51:984 - You tried to do this pattern manually? You can just go to CTRL + Shift + D to the polygon circle section and create the polygon pattern you want to. Then, you just have to substitute the points.

well that's all I can do now. sorry for being so lazy! Good luck with your map!

SHADOW

我觉得ar7就够了 然后难度名称的话第一字大写就可以了吧

00:17:288(2,3)-时间轴上的位置换一下 排版也修改一下
00:18:071(4,5,6)-我觉得和(1,2,3)这样下比较好
00:20:288(2)-remove the slider, 从00:20:418(2,3)-放个三连打
00:21:201(4,5)-不要放在slider后侧..最好能顺着slider的滑动方向放 或者改变下slider方向
00:21:592(7)-add note
00:22:505(8,9,10)-把后面的(1)删了 也是从这里改成三连 (10)是到原来(1)位置的slider
00:24:201(3)-可以不加note
00:24:332(4)-可以把slider换成三连打 然后后面白线上放个note
00:25:114(x)-add note
00:25:636(2)-~00:27:201(x)-我觉得节奏可以这么下

00:29:288(4)-add note 把slider往后移到白线上 把后面2个白色note删了
00:31:636(5,6,7)-其实我觉得slider都可以拉长到红线
00:33:071(2)-remove note
00:33:723(5)-add nc
00:35:288(1)-remove nc
00:35:810(2)-add nc
00:37:114(5)-remove note
00:37:636(7,8)-时间轴上位置换一下 排版也修改一下
00:38:679(1)-remove slider , add note
00:38:940(2,3)-都删了 然后换成2条slider 00:38:940(2)- 和 00:39:462(3)-
00:41:288(9)-remove slider, add note ,然后 00:41:549(10)-add slider
00:44:158(5)-add nc
00:44:810(7,8,1)-remove these, 00:44:940(7)-add note 00:45:201(8)-add slider 00:45:723(9)-add slider
00:46:245(1)-remove slider, add note ; 00:46:505(2)-这里加个二连打或者短slider都可以 ; 00:46:766(2)-remove note ; 00:46:897(x)-add note 或者去掉后面的slider 也放个二连或者短slider
00:47:288(x)-add note and add nc ; 00:47:549(x)-add note
差不多这样吧
00:53:158(2)-从后面红线开始 结束点不变
01:02:679(1)-remove slider ,add note ; slider从后面白线开始
01:03:462(2,3)-这里间距太小

节奏跟着歌词去下 vocal唱字的时候就放note或者放个白线到红线长度的slider 唱长音的时候就用长slider
还有排版问题 就是感觉下的比较随意 稍微把note放开点 感觉有点挤

Hi ^^

[General]
Kiai #3 starts on Downbeat (red tick)
Resnap it to 03:03:984
Kiai #2 May be start it on 01:57:201 - I think it loocks better
And Kiai #1: Resnap to 00:50:418 - ^ Ends on 01:05:027 - starts on 01:07:114
That all for General

[Normal]
I think it's more EASY than NORMAL... HP Drain +1-2; AR+1; OD +1-2
And big problem with NC. Well...
• 00:28:505 (4,5,6) - Make a more symmetrical
• 01:20:940 - Add circle
• 02:04:505 - Make a more symmetrical
• 02:07:114 (4) - Check sistance.
• 02:08:679 (5) - Move to x:256 y:224
• 02:53:288 - Add circle.
• 02:56:418 - ^
• 02:58:505 - ^
• 02:58:766 (3) - Delete circle and make slider 1/1
• 03:00:332 - How about slider 1/2 here?
• 03:05:810 - Add Circle
• 03:35:288 - Make volume here 15%

[Hard]
• 00:24:332 (6) - Change points like that:
• 00:27:462 - NC
• 00:53:027 - ^
• 00:53:549 - Remove NC
• 01:00:332 - NC
• 01:09:723 - Where rhithm? xD Make like this:• 01:19:114 - Ugly slider ToT
• 01:35:288 - ^
• 01:59:810 - NC
• 02:00:332 - Remove NC
• 02:00:592 (3,4) - Make it more comfortable.. Do you use a very strange sliders ._. You really like this kind? Maybe that will be better:
• 02:02:158 - NC
• 02:02:418 - Add circle
• 02:09:462 (2,3) - Make like that pls
• 02:12:853 (9,1,2,3) - Make it in one combo. (1,2,3,4) And 02:13:897 - NC
• 02:16:505 - NC
• 02:17:288 - Remove NC
• 02:18:853 - NC
• 02:23:810 - ^
• 02:25:636 - Remove NC
• 02:27:723 - NC
• 02:53:027 (4) - Second point to х:176 у:80
• 03:07:636 - NC
• 03:07:897 - Remove NC
• 03:08:158 (3) - 4'th point to х:224 у:352

[Insane]
OMG.. it's impossible for playing ToT
Distance Snap=1,7x (When I said "Check Distance/CD", you move the object(s) to the place what more convenient for playing)
• 00:17:027 - Delete circle and finish spinner here.
• 00:17:810 - Delete circle.
• 00:17:418 - Move slider to 00:17:549
• 00:18:071 (3,4,5) - CD
• 00:21:201 - NC
• 00:21:723 (3) - CD and rotate it like that:
• 00:22:505 (5) - Delete it. Copy (3) and paste here. After press Ctrl+H/Ctrl+G/Ctrl+J and check distance.
• 00:25:114 - add circle
• 00:25:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make like that
• 00:26:940 (6,7,8) - CD
• 00:29:288 (7) - NC
• 00:30:201 - Remove NC and CD!
• 00:30:984 (6) - Ctrl+G CD
• 00:31:636 - NC
• 00:32:940 - ^
• 00:38:679 (1) - End slider to 00:39:201
• 00:39:201 (2) - Move to 00:39:332
• 00:39:332 (3) - Move to 00:39:462 - and slider end to 00:39:723
• 00:40:636 (7) - Move to 00:40:766
• 00:41:158 (8) - Move to 00:41:288 and slider end to 00:41:549
• 00:44:810 (8) - Move to 00:44:940 - End slider to 00:45:201
• 00:44:810 - Add circle
• 00:45:332 (10,1,2) - Delete it and make slider1/2 Slider start: 00:45:462 - add the repeat like that
• 00:46:245 - NC
• 00:53:158 (2) - Move to 00:53:288 - Slidere end to white tick.
• 00:57:462 - NC
• 00:59:027 (3) - Make it a little short... Becouse it's not rhithmical. Repeat point needs to white tick 00:59:288 - but not to 00:59:418 - (blue tick)
• 01:02:940 - Slider end here.
• 01:03:201 - Add circle ot make a repeat slider (1) (Circle more useble)
• 01:33:853 - Move to red tick and here add the circle.
• 01:33:984 (6) - Slider end to big white tick.
• 01:35:027 - NC
• 01:35:679 - Delete circle
• 01:46:766 - NC
• 01:48:332 (1) - Delete NC
• 01:48:853 - NC
• 01:51:201 - Move to red tick, but slider end to white tick
• 02:00:462 (3) - Move to red tick
• 02:00:853 (4) - Delete slider.
• 02:01:337 (4) - Move slider to 02:01:114
• 02:01:897 - Add circle
• 02:16:505 - Make it more rhithmical. Don't make sliders on the blue ticks here!
• 02:25:766 - ^
• 02:49:114 (6) - Slider end to big white tick
• 02:51:984 - NC
• 02:53:027 - Remove NC
• 02:54:592 - NC
• 02:58:245 - ^
• 02:58:636 - Move slider to white tick and add circle here!
• 02:59:158 - Delete circle
• 03:00:592 - NC
• 03:11:940 (8) - Move to red tick, delete slier (9) and add the repeat to slider (8)
• 03:14:940 - NC
• 03:15:984 - Remove NC
• 03:18:114 (2,4) - OMFG, you kill me x_x Don't add the sliders on the blue ticks.. Read osu!wiki pls!
• 03:19:636 - ^ move to white tick
• 03:24:723 (3,4) - Move it to white ticks and add cirle here.
• 03:35:288 - Add green section with minimal volume pls~

I'm sorry that lingered. I've been busy
Good Luck~

Hi ^^
Remod [SHADOW] xD

• 00:19:114 - NC
• 00:20:158 - Remove NC
• 00:21:201 - NC
• 00:21:592 - Add circle and change pattern like that:
• 00:21:984 - Add circle to х:280 у:248
• 00:22:505 - Remove NC
• 00:23:027 - Add circle
• 00:23:288 - NC
• 00:29:549 - ^
• 00:30:592 (3,4) - Move to х:168 у:88
• 00:31:636 - Make like that:
{(1) - х:96 у:240; (2) - х:256 у:72; (3) = Ctrl+H (1)}
• 00:32:940 - Add circle to х:448 у:144 + NC
• 00:33:462 (3) - Delete it. Copy 1'st circle and press Ctrl+H (Remove NC)
• 00:38:679 - NC
• 00:38:940 - Add circle.
• 00:39:592 (2) - Delete! Because it's not rhithmical. Will be better if you add repeat to 1'st slider.
• 00:45:723 - NC
• 00:47:288 - Remove NC
• 00:50:940 - NC
• 00:57:462 - ^
• 00:58:766 - Remove NC
• 01:00:332 - NC
• 01:02:418 - ^
• 01:02:479 - Remove NC
• 01:03:592 (5) - Start it to 01:03:723 - But on 01:03:592 - add circle!
• 01:06:071 - NC
• 01:08:158 - Remove NC
• 01:09:201 - Add circle.
• 01:09:723 - NC
• 01:21:723 (4,5) - Ctrl+G and (5,7,9) move to blue ticks.
• 01:32:940 - NC
• 01:40:245 - Remove NC
• 01:40:505 - NC
• 01:45:201 - ^
• 01:48:071 - Ugly overlap with (7) Move to х:88 у:148 and slider (2) start on end (7) (x:176 y:164) and remove NC. Put NC to 01:48:853
• 01:48:853 (1) - Ctrl+G
• 01:48:853 (1,2,3) - Move to х:78 у:225
• 02:09:462 - NC
• 02:10:245 - Remove NC
• 02:14:418 - NC
• 02:20:158 - Add circle.
• 02:20:679 - NC
• 02:21:462 - Remove NC
• 02:25:766 - Move to 02:25:897 slider end to 02:26:158 - and make it pattern:
• 02:17:723 (1,2) - So ugly T__T Make like that:
• 02:35:288 (2) - Delete, copy (1) circle paste here and press Ctrl+H. (Remove NC)
• 02:25:679 - Move to White tick, delete (4) slider, repeat (3) slider and move to х:304 у:80
• 02:48: 853 - NC
• 02:50:679 - Remove NC
• 02:51:984 - NC
• 02:54:592 - ^
• 02:54:853 - Remove NC
• 02:58:114 - Delete circle.
• 02:58:245 - NC
• 02:58:897 - Again sliders on blue ticks T___T Don't use it pls. Make like that:
• 03:11:288 - NC
• 03:14:940 - ^
• 03:15:984 - Remove NC
• 03:17:288 - NC
• 03:19:505 - Move to white tick x___x
• 03:19:505 - Add circle.
• 03:26:940 (6,8) - Move to blue ticks
• 03:29:027 - Add circle (NC)

Also, beatmap needs more work... You can make it more playable and comfortable.
Good luck~

BEAST - Shadow Updated ~ 15/09/13

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