1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:20:711 (1) - Way too many slider repeats might be boring to play imo, try to add something else maybe?
2. 01:12:804 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest to space these in a different way instead of stacking them all together, seems a bit boring to play this way.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:53:734 (9) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.

Andrea wrote:

Placeholder for coming mod.

~Normal~

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. fixed

~Hard~

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:20:711 (1) - Way too many slider repeats might be boring to play imo, try to add something else maybe? got a couple other suggestions for this, so I"ll change to a star~
2. 01:12:804 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest to space these in a different way instead of stacking them all together, seems a bit boring to play this way. making a square

~Insane~

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. fixed

1. 00:53:734 (9) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change. fixed

Great and lovely map. <3

1. 01:12:804 (1) - How about to make a regular triangle with 01:10:943 (1,2) - ?

1. 00:02:106 (2) - Move to around (176,168). 1.26x is far a bit.
2. 00:05:827 (2) - I prefer like this. Just a suggestion.
   
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   copy 00:03:966 (1) - and Ctrl+<
3. 00:59:780 (1,2) - Why are hitsounds different from 01:07:222 (1,2) - ? You should integrate hit sounds pattern imo.

1. 00:59:548 - Add note to follow vocal? Just a suggestion.
2. 01:06:990 - ^
3. 01:00:478 (4) - add finish.

1. 00:53:734 (1,2,3,4,1) - Straight line is unsuiteble for this song imo. I suggest to make curved line like 01:01:176 (6,7,8,9,1) -
   
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2. 01:00:478 (4) - add finish.
3. 01:07:920 (4) - ^

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Easy]

1. 01:12:804 (1) - How about to make a regular triangle with 01:10:943 (1,2) - ? fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:02:106 (2) - Move to around (176,168). 1.26x is far a bit. oops
2. 00:05:827 (2) - I prefer like this. Just a suggestion.
   
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   copy 00:03:966 (1) - and Ctrl+<
   i prefer the less angle change for easier flow
3. 00:59:780 (1,2) - Why are hitsounds different from 01:07:222 (1,2) - ? You should integrate hit sounds pattern imo. fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:59:548 - Add note to follow vocal? Just a suggestion. fixed this one
2. 01:06:990 - ^ leaving this one
3. 01:00:478 (4) - add finish. fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:53:734 (1,2,3,4,1) - Straight line is unsuiteble for this song imo. I suggest to make curved line like 01:01:176 (6,7,8,9,1) -
   
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   fixed
2. 01:00:478 (4) - add finish.
3. 01:07:920 (4) - ^ fixed both

So lovely map!
Good Luck

jonathanlfj wrote:

From my birthday queue~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Artist: 神前 暁 will change once i get my computer to not make these squares

[Easy]
00:13:269 (2) - how bout make these turn at the ticks to follow vocal change?

SPOILER

i'll try
00:54:655 - unsnapped green line orz
01:10:943 (1) - was this an extra NC? yes, fixed
01:19:315 (3) - curve this downwards makes a nice oval flow onto 01:20:245 (1) fixed

[Normal]
00:20:711 (1,2,3,4) - arrange the square so 00:22:106 (4) lands on the location of 00:18:850 (1), looks a bit messy atm fixed
00:29:083 (4) - shift this so 00:28:152 (3) gets a nice blanket around it fixed
00:53:966 - i would have expected a note here, since in the kiai you started using 1/2 spacing rhythm and this can give a good kick start sure i like this
01:00:711 (2) - plays a bit weirdly, since you have been following vocals all this time; try something like this:

SPOILER

01:08:152 (2) - ^ i think these are fine tbh, i like the hitsounding of this part so i'll leave these for now

[Hard]
00:07:222 (3,1) - the blanket here can look a bit better it's not really supposed to be a blanket, and I like this positioning a bit better for better flow
00:36:990 (3) - use drum sample like Easy/Normal? fixed
00:47:687 (3,4,5,6,1) - maybe you should perfectly center this (1 grid left) [/color]
01:13:501 (4) - a bit nazi but the end is not perfecly stacked on 01:12:571 (4) [/color]
01:17:455 (3) - missing a whistle on the start? fixed

[Insane]
00:19:897 (6,7) - curve the circles a bit down, since 00:19:548 (5) is not perfectly horizontal this looks a bit weird fixed
00:34:199 (2) - sounds like the whistle should be at the end, there is this sharp ring there which you always have whistles for going to leave the whistel on the head but also add one at the end
01:00:711 (5) - clap on the repeat, its heard in the music fixed
01:14:897 (6) - NC here, the combo is too long compared to other sections fixed
01:19:780 (4,5) - move this up a bit so 01:19:083 (1,2,4) forms a nice triangle [/color]
01:22:106 (1) - swap for a whistle instead (like the other diffs), finish sounds a bit overwhelming here fixed

Not to much to say, Great map have a star!
Good luck on ranking~

1. 00:20:711 to 00:22:571 - The four finishes in a row here (finish on each white tick) is loud and bland to me. I think you could make it more interesting by replacing the second finish with a whistle and the fourth finish with a drum finish. Drum finish at 00:22:106 sounds great, you could even reduce volume for it a bit if you felt the need to. This would apply in all diffs but Easy.
   
2. 01:23:966 (1) - The spinner is really loud at the end, it really stands out from the fading music. I'd like it if you could start it at a lower volume and decrease volume much more towards the end.

1. 00:29:548 (4) - Try replacing with two circles instead to follow the expanding vocals here, you can make a nice jump pattern into the 00:30:013 (1). The reason I say this is because from 00:22:571 to 00:33:734 you literally repeat the exact same rhythm six times in a row. It would be nice to add some variation in here.
   
2. 00:37:222 (4) - Try placing it around (256,144) instead. The zig-zag flow is more comfortable/fitting for this section imo.
   
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3. 00:38:269 (4) - Try a whistle on the head of this slider. It sounds nice for vocals and this 1/4 rhythm. If you do so, then add it to all the other similar sliders in the section also. It might go well to set this section apart from the previous one.
   
4. 00:39:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try placing the 6 so that it continues in the square pattern. I find the jump to be pretty unexpected.
   
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   You could stack the 00:41:176 (1) on the 6's head, or maybe move it down to preserve the blanket.
5. 00:53:385 (7,8,1) - This jump is pretty crazy tbh. It's nearly twice the size of the previous jumps between the doubles. I think it might be nicer for players if you reduce it a bit. Up to you.
   
6. 01:08:152 (5,6,7) - Try unstacking them and point them towards the stream 01:08:618 (8). It will push the player into the large jump to that stream.
   
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7. 01:13:501 (4) - Clap missing on the end I suppose.
   
8. 01:15:594 (3) - Remove clap from the head seems to follow the music more closely here.
   
9. 01:18:850 - I was disappointed to see this super accented hit being on the end of the slider 01:18:385 (7) because you chose to add a repeat to it. I would have loved to see a jump downwards onto a slider/circle here. To me this is one of the most important parts of the song to accent. It's alright though. :<

1. 00:35:129 (3,4,1,2) - Try Ctrl+H and then place the 00:33:734 (1,2) so that the 2 flows to the left side of the 3,4,1. You can remove the jump to the 3 and make a nicer flow.
   
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2. 01:03:036 (3,4,1) - I'm not too fond of the flow from the 2. Try more like this?
   
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   Just an idea I suppose. I prefer the 3 to be more upwards and a more curved flow to the 1 is nice.

1. 00:53:269 (3) - Add whistle?
   
2. 00:54:199 (1,2) - Spacing issue here. Also try to place the 2 more downwards, it has a nicer flow imo.
   
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3. 00:56:059 (1,2) - Spacing? o.o
   
4. 01:07:222 (1) - Remove finish from end? Seems quite loud here.
   
5. 01:12:804 (1) - Try adding a repeat and moving the spinner a bit later. That way you could have a finish at 01:14:199 and it would fill this somewhat awkward (imo) gap between the 1 and the spinner.

1. 00:48:618 (1) - How about a clap on the end instead of the finish. It seems more fitting.
   
2. 00:53:734 - Consider adding a note here to follow vocals and remove NC on the 1. I feel it's nice since vocals start before the downbeat here.
   
3. 00:58:850 (2) - Curve it more or rotate it downwards so that its tail is the same distance from the slider body 00:56:059 (3) that the 00:57:920 (1) is. It will look more clean.
   
4. 01:09:083 (1,2,3) - I'd really like to see the 3's head placed further from the 2's body to match the 1-2 placement. You can move the 01:06:292 (2,3) slightly downwards and the fix the placement here.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Yo M4M.

[General]

1. 00:20:711 to 00:22:571 - The four finishes in a row here (finish on each white tick) is loud and bland to me. I think you could make it more interesting by replacing the second finish with a whistle and the fourth finish with a drum finish. Drum finish at 00:22:106 sounds great, you could even reduce volume for it a bit if you felt the need to. This would apply in all diffs but Easy. sure i'll try it
   
2. 01:23:966 (1) - The spinner is really loud at the end, it really stands out from the fading music. I'd like it if you could start it at a lower volume and decrease volume much more towards the end. alright, made the volume drop from the start then have it go down to 30%[

[Insane]

1. 00:29:548 (4) - Try replacing with two circles instead to follow the expanding vocals here, you can make a nice jump pattern into the 00:30:013 (1). The reason I say this is because from 00:22:571 to 00:33:734 you literally repeat the exact same rhythm six times in a row. It would be nice to add some variation in here. i like that, fixed
   
2. 00:37:222 (4) - Try placing it around (256,144) instead. The zig-zag flow is more comfortable/fitting for this section imo.
   
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   eh, i'll decrease the spacing maybe, but i like that swooping motion leading into the part with the little drum hits
   
3. 00:38:269 (4) - Try a whistle on the head of this slider. It sounds nice for vocals and this 1/4 rhythm. If you do so, then add it to all the other similar sliders in the section also. It might go well to set this section apart from the previous one. sure, i felt like this part sounded a little empty anyway
   
4. 00:39:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try placing the 6 so that it continues in the square pattern. I find the jump to be pretty unexpected.
   
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   You could stack the 00:41:176 (1) on the 6's head, or maybe move it down to preserve the blanket.
   alright did some adjustments
   
5. 00:53:385 (7,8,1) - This jump is pretty crazy tbh. It's nearly twice the size of the previous jumps between the doubles. I think it might be nicer for players if you reduce it a bit. Up to you. sure
   
6. 01:08:152 (5,6,7) - Try unstacking them and point them towards the stream 01:08:618 (8). It will push the player into the large jump to that stream.
   
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   alright, seems to play well so i'll change this
   
7. 01:13:501 (4) - Clap missing on the end I suppose.
   
8. 01:15:594 (3) - Remove clap from the head seems to follow the music more closely here.
   
9. 01:18:850 - I was disappointed to see this super accented hit being on the end of the slider 01:18:385 (7) because you chose to add a repeat to it. I would have loved to see a jump downwards onto a slider/circle here. To me this is one of the most important parts of the song to accent. It's alright though. :< alright, tried something here, will check on the recheck

[Hard]

1. 00:35:129 (3,4,1,2) - Try Ctrl+H and then place the 00:33:734 (1,2) so that the 2 flows to the left side of the 3,4,1. You can remove the jump to the 3 and make a nicer flow.
   
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   trying something smilar
   
2. 01:03:036 (3,4,1) - I'm not too fond of the flow from the 2. Try more like this?
   
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   i moved the formation up a bit, but i left the angle of 1 the same, i like the transition from vertical to horizontal movement
   Just an idea I suppose. I prefer the 3 to be more upwards and a more curved flow to the 1 is nice.

[Normal]

1. 00:53:269 (3) - Add whistle? sure
   
2. 00:54:199 (1,2) - Spacing issue here. Also try to place the 2 more downwards, it has a nicer flow imo.
   
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3. 00:56:059 (1,2) - Spacing? o.o both fixed
   
4. 01:07:222 (1) - Remove finish from end? Seems quite loud here. mistake~
   
5. 01:12:804 (1) - Try adding a repeat and moving the spinner a bit later. That way you could have a finish at 01:14:199 and it would fill this somewhat awkward (imo) gap between the 1 and the spinner. sure, that's how i originally had it

[Easy]

1. 00:48:618 (1) - How about a clap on the end instead of the finish. It seems more fitting. maybe i guess, but i like the finish for spinners like this. To me, claps kind of feel better when they are in a rhythm, and just having the sound by itself is awkward for me. I like the finish because it feels more like a completion to something.
   
2. 00:53:734 - Consider adding a note here to follow vocals and remove NC on the 1. I feel it's nice since vocals start before the downbeat here. sure
   
3. 00:58:850 (2) - Curve it more or rotate it downwards so that its tail is the same distance from the slider body 00:56:059 (3) that the 00:57:920 (1) is. It will look more clean. made adjustments, should look good
   
4. 01:09:083 (1,2,3) - I'd really like to see the 3's head placed further from the 2's body to match the 1-2 placement. You can move the 01:06:292 (2,3) slightly downwards and the fix the placement here. alright, got this cleaned up. Should look a lot better now.

Cool. Feel free to call me for recheck.

Melophobia wrote:

Artist is 斎藤千和.fixed

Insane:
01:14:199 (5) - Remove this clap and it'd sound better. ah yeah, i agree since the finish is there already