drama queen arrived so let's go
[Easy]
00:12:071 (2) - Tbh, I would move this one to 404 96, I can show you the reason why
http://puu.sh/4br65.jpg Don't forget to check DS afterwards~
00:32:642 (2) - Same for this one
.. and for all the others
00:51:500 (1) - Why the DS increase? Here you use 1.0, while you use 0.8 before.. you should fix that
00:51:500 (1) - Make sure it's somewhere like 368 312, it's basically the same as above, just slider > circle this time.
00:56:642 (2,3) - Wow, 1.1, then 1.2, THIS GOES INSANE01:17:214 (2) - 224 24 ? Same reason as above xD Sorry >< It bothers me that it randomly goes downwards.
01:41:214 (2) - Can't understand this one as well, why is it on the left side? It doesn't even create a naisu pattern
01:44:642 (2) - Meh, but yeah xD It would make you remap until the spinner, up to you~~
01:56:642 (3) - If you follow the instructions above, move this one to 144 360
02:00:071 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Use at least 1 slider? 8 circles could be exhausting (although i don't think so, it's really slow)
02:29:214 (1) - Either you delete this NC or you apply one 02:36:071 (3) - and here 02:39:500 (3) - , for consistency
02:40:357 (4) -
http://puu.sh/4brvU.jpg because of the flow
03:01:785 (1) - Increase volume because it's the start of the kiai?
03:49:785 (4) - NC to empahsize the finish? (and because it's a white tick) xD
The rest is fine
Feel free to deny the thing where I showed you the screen, it's just how i would do it.
[Normal]
Just some minor things, fixed irc~ <3
[Hard]
00:02:857 - Adding three circles 1/2 from here on, stacked, would be quite nice wouldn't it? ^-^ Just to give the lyric + the begin some emphasis.
00:05:000 (7) - NC to avoid geting to high combos? 10 is rather high i suppose.
00:09:500 (7) - Mh, this confused me a bit. I would replace it, so you can clearly see the high DS. What I mean is, i don't really get it because it's stacked with something behind it > jump. Consider NC as well, for readability.
00:11:214 (5) - NC, to split the pattern into two bits
00:26:107 (2) - Move a bit higher? It's the same as showed in beginner, if you want to fix that, it's up to you, i'm not going to mention this anymore, because it'd be wasted time if you don't like it.
00:27:821 (3) - èPut the white angle point to 264 40? Putting the curve into another direction gives a nice flow.
00:33:285 (9) - This circle seems unnecessary, what exactly is it following? The lyrics are in the foreground imo.
00:32:428 (5,6,7) - Also, what about a long slider instead of these three circles? If you want to follow the lyrics, it'd be really fitting ^-^
00:36:928 (3,4) - Might be okay in an insane diff, because of the DS. But here, i guess it's too confusing. I'd like you to change this, while showing that you use 1/1 and 1/2 there, so you should use a proper fitting DS please.
00:57:607 (2) - I can't really hear this in the background, better remove it because of overmapping. If doing so, replace the section with a spinner, to fit her voice perfectly.
01:00:500 (3,4,5,6,7) - Slow part -> no reason to put so many circles. Try to work with a slider, please!
01:03:285 - U. She says U, which means add a circle <3
01:04:571 (2,3) - Slider?
01:05:000 (4,5) - Slider? Basically, it's just the same as above, i think a slider fits more due to her long stretched words.
01:11:214 (6) - I think this is a new part. So you should consider adding NC.
01:27:500 (5) - Aw, why that jump here? I know, i make this all the time, but i try to reduce it. I recommend Ctrl + G!
01:29:857 (3) - A repeater doesn't fit, you should remove it, but keep the length -> make a 1/1 slider.
01:30:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Creative.. but too confusing for a hard map :c try remapping it, maybe use a kickslider instead with a little jump? Fits as well, and is easier to get.
01:36:071 (1) - Guess you missed a finish here.
01:44:642 (6) - A new square, so a new combo for this please.
01:45:500 (10) - ^ , since the pattern is over.
01:48:500 (2) - Stack it properly!
01:49:785 (1) - finish fits her voice perfectly!
consider it~
02:01:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above, some sliders will work as well, they can be symmetric, to fit the same-staying gutiar.
02:05:428 (2,3,4,5,6) - Take some ideas from here, this part fits good.
02:08:642 (1,2) - I suggest using an equal DS, since i can't hear anything jumpy. ( I hate modding this xD i think my maps would be like this suggestion only :c)
02:16:142 (8) - How can you ignore this long streched vocal? Please put an 1/1 slider.
02:18:714 (9) -
http://puu.sh/4btcj.jpg , I think this rhythm is easier to get. way easier.
02:28:892 (4) - quite a big gap here, so NC?
02:32:214 (7) - You missed a blanket here. Aesthetics~
02:32:642 (1,2,3) - Equal spacing please. It's the same reasons as usual.
02:34:142 (7,1) - This jump feels quite uncofortable to play, since i first get confused 02:34:142 (7) - with this, and suddenly theres a rather big jump. Make it less confusing and less jumpy, maybe with something like this?
http://puu.sh/4btjE.jpg02:36:071 (1,2,3,4) - Is this 'wrong' flow on purpose? Because if you wanna follow some basic flow rule, it should be like
http://puu.sh/4btm5.jpg http://puu.sh/4btmJ.jpg .. or
http://puu.sh/4btnt.jpg, however you like. you don't need to change that, just wanted to mention it, since there are no real rules.
02:55:357 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Try to make a nice pentagon here, maybe space it out a bit more, so you can put 02:57:500 (1) - in the middle of it.
02:59:214 (3) - I don't know how you feel, but if i put a rhythm like this, i only like it if it appears twice in a row. So consider adding it 03:00:928 - here as well.
03:02:857 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why? Q_Q I mean it looks good, but it is so hard
03:10:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - KECCO THIS IS A HARD, NOT AN INSANE! Well, you could maybe map a hard diff, and leave the patterns like this.
03:18:285 (8) - Finish on slider end? sounds good. Can't really explain it o:
03:33:500 (5) - NC :c
Well, idk what to say anymore! xD I hope you can fix some stuff :c Sorry if I'm repeating, but .. yeah. Don't hate me </3 The map isn't that bad, just that stuff!
See you ingame and in QAT <3
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