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Hilary Duff - Come Clean (Remix 2005)

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UnderminE
ahhh my childhood
10crystalmask01

UnderminE wrote:

ahhh my childhood
Them feels ;_:

Ello, random mod! >w<

[General]
01:00:847 - Somewhere around here I'm looking at the Lyrics, and I noticed that the last sentence in the chorus "I'm coming clean" is fading to early. 01:02:693 is where you hear the vocals say the last word "Clean", but it's already like this by the time I look back:

Try adding in a space between the two last sentences of the chorus. The last sentence should come and go a bit later, and it should look good ^^'
[Normal]
00:46:539 (3,4) - Try removing all the hitsounds on their tails? I feel that the hitsounds are sort of being overused on this part ><
00:50:232 (4,5) - ^
01:34:309 (2) - Move it to 01:34:539, and shrink it so its tail ends at 01:35:924? Sounds better imo.
01:49:309 (4,5) - Same suggestion as 00:46:539 (3,4).
01:54:616 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]
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╱╰━━━╯ Looks good to me! :)

Hope this helps~!
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BounceBabe
@10crystalmask01: I fixed that SB issue, should be better now. Also i moved this 01:34:309 (2) and changed the spinner a little , but have to disagree with the others, thank you for your help!
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BounceBabe

UnderminE wrote:

ahhh my childhood
So true, so true (:
jericho2442
well changed one tiny thing in Normal (changing a note to a slider to suit better) and sorted the tags abit. no kudo

i seriously cant find anything else to point out what is unrankable ect. the spread is abit lazy but you already know that ;)

ohwell bubbled, its ready and since i checked it i dont really see a reason to just leave it without moving it forward, nice amount of mods and good quality mods too

enjoy it!
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BounceBabe
Thanks Hon ♥
Gero
Wooow Nice! GO GO! Bonce \:D/
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BounceBabe

Gero wrote:

Bonce \:D/
haha, i'm Bone not Bonce.... what was that mistake for.. haha xD
Aurele
Bonce it up.
Gero

BounceBabe wrote:

haha, i'm Bone not Bonce.... what was that mistake for.. haha xD


my phone is troll =w= has automatic dictionary ;A;
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BounceBabe
Haha, made jeri and me laugh at least ♥
Aurele
Let the heart fall down
and wake my rank
let it wash away
the bubble
cause I wanna feel the players
I wanna first
let the heart fall down
I'm coming Ranked.

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BounceBabe
Wonderful ryming ♥ :D
Stefan
bravo! :)
Gero
Gratz! ~
Avena
Gratz for the ranking~
Now I am waiting for the Nightcore version of it to be ranked ;3
XinCrin
Grats BB <3
Cloudchaser
congratz BB o3o
Sey
Good stuff from our past. Congrats!
happy623
Gratz!!
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BounceBabe
Thank you everyone (:
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