1. Easy (2,56 stars, 167 notes)
2. Hard (4,89 stars, 299 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 393 notes)
4. Normal (4,31 stars, 258 notes)

AW-sama wrote:

A Nehézzel nincs semmi gond?

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hello! ^^ véletlen mod!

[Easy]
00:17:872 (4,5) - Switch them, sounds better imo. On 00:17:872 you hear vocals say 'so', then 'all alone' on 00:18:215. Okay
00:27:131 (1) - And finish on the head.. Okay
00:30:217 - Add note for consistency? Added
00:36:732 (3) - Finish on tail. Okay

01:02:794 (1) - Finish on the head. Okay
01:13:082 (5) - ^Okay
01:17:882 (1) - Finish on the tail. Okay
01:23:369 (3) - ^Okay
01:46:687 (1) - Finish on the head. Okay
02:10:006 (2) - ^ Okay
02:20:293 (3) -Finish on the tail. Okay
02:31:952 (1) - Finish on the head. Okay
02:42:925 (1) - ^ Okay
02:47:040 (3) - Finish on the tail Okay

needs some mroe hitsounds, that's all

[Medium]

1. HP drain rate -1?

00:38:104 (1) - Finish on the head
01:02:794 (1) - ^
01:13:767 (1) - ^
01:19:254 (1) - ^
01:46:687 (1) - ^
02:20:979 (1) - ^
02:31:952 (1) - ^
02:48:412 (1) - ^

Completed.

[Heavy]
00:29:188 (7) - NC (New combo)
00:40:162 (5) - ^
01:46:687 (5) - ^
01:49:431 - ^
01:54:917 (8) - ^
02:12:063 (7) - ^ okay

Nice map Good luck!

Hope this helps! ^^

Mastercraft2012 wrote:

Appalling

00:27:817 (6) - new combo
00:29:188 (9) - new combo
00:30:560 (14) - new combo
00:33:303 (6) - new combo
00:34:675 (9) - new combo
00:37:418 (9) - new combo
00:41:533 (7) - new combo
00:44:277 (6) - new combo
00:53:192 (6) - new combo
00:55:936 (7) - new combo
00:58:679 (6) - new combo
01:00:051 (12) - new combo
01:04:166 (6) - new combo
01:16:511 (9) - new combo
01:06:909 (4) - new combo
01:09:652 (6) - new combo
01:12:396 (5) - new combo
01:15:139 (5) - new combo
01:39:829 (5) - new combo
01:42:572 (4) - new combo
01:43:944 (7) - new combo
01:48:059 (6) - new combo
01:50:802 (5) - new combo
01:53:546 (7) - new combo
02:02:461 (4) - new combo
02:05:205 (4) - new combo
02:06:576 (9) - new combo
02:07:091 (1) - remove new combo
02:09:491 (6) - new combo
02:13:435 (6) - new combo
02:16:178 (5) - new combo
02:17:550 (9) - new combo
02:22:351 (5) - new combo
02:25:094 (4) - new combo
02:27:837 (5) - new combo
02:33:324 (5) - new combo
02:36:067 (7) - new combo
02:38:810 (6) - new combo
02:44:297 (7) - new combo
02:47:040 (6) - new combo
02:49:784 (7) - new combo

Tidek wrote:

From my mod queue.

Appaling

1. 00:14:786 - 00:25:759 - hmm, that part in some cases looks placed a bit randomly (i mean rhythm), try to focus on beat in music and put notes on them (for example u missing triplet here 00:24:902 or that strong music accent here 00:25:759 Fix'd
2. 00:37:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - that stream is longer, end it with repeat slider or circles .... no
3. 00:39:990 - add circle, it feels empty added
4. 01:13:082 (4,5) - here is 5 circle stream, these 2 triplets are unrhytmic fix'd
5. 01:54:231 (3,4,5,6) - watch ds yes
6. 02:10:006 - 02:19:436 - just suggestion, as u can hear, beats are showing up in music, u can try to accent them instead of vocal vocal and vocal... fix'd
7. 02:19:436 - stack it or 1,0x DS, it looks ugly now DS = 1,0x : 4 circle + repeat slider + 4 circle + repeat slider
8. Overall - i see a lot of long streams, but i dont see any triplet with circles, hmm? change atleast half of triple 1/4 repeater to circles.

Heavy

1. 00:37:418 (6,7) - 1/2 sliders instead of circles? ok
2. 00:48:563 - add circle added
3. 00:51:821 - 01:02:794 - damn... map it please ;_; okay, okay. :'D
4. 01:07:766 (6) - 3 circles instead of that sliders, fits to music a lot better ok
5. 01:13:082 (5,6) - again, 2 sliders 1/2 instead of circles ok
6. 01:18:397 (5,6,7) - make this rhythm, fits better (these stacks are ugly btw). ok
   
   
7. 02:36:582 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 02:42:068 (9,10,11) - ^
9. 02:47:555 (6,7,8) - ^ ok
10. 02:53:213 (4,5) - 2 sliders instead of circles

ok

Normal

1. 00:49:077 (9) - move to x136 y296 oks
2. 01:36:743 (3,4,5) - fix ds oks
   Well u used simple 1/1 rhythm, so i found nothing : P

Rookie

• 
  Slider tick is too high in my opinion. (reduce it to 1)
  Fix your DS on whole map because its incorrect and its not recommended on easy difficulty, DS is varies too much. Grid level 4 and make it 1,19x-1,21x

Tick rate fixed! Current distance snap 1,0x o_o

GL

higurush wrote:

Hey there, nice maps you got here :3

Here's what I think you should change:

[Appalling]
00:19:587 (6) - replace note to 00:19:415 (6)
00:19:758 (7) - Add note at x:192 y:272
00:19:930 (8) - replace note to x:272 y:256
00:20:101 (9) - replace note to x:224 y:224
00:20:272 (10) - replace note to x:240 y:296
02:19:607 (1) - replace note to x:272 y:296
02:19:950 (5) - replace reverse slider to x:416 y:288
02:20:293 (6) - replace note to x:448 y:216
02:20:378 (7) - replace note to x:448 y:176
02:20:464 (8) - replace note to x:432 y:144
02:20:550 (9) - replace note to x:408 y:120

XinCrin wrote:

OMG I love this <3
STARRED

CreamLegit wrote:

[General]
Put preview at 00:26:445 Okay
The combo numbers are too small, try to increase the size a little in photoshop? (the ones on the notes, not the ones that indicate how much combo you have) Coming soon.
The spinner in the end of each difficulty should be silent, each and every one of them. Okay

[Heavy]
00:56:450 (6) - Replace it with a 1/4 slider that repeats once, would go better with the song
01:01:594 - Need a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:02:451
01:18:568 - Should be a ministream until the slider starts.
02:36:582 - ^
02:42:068 - ^
02:47:555 - ^
Okay!

[Appalling]
Change the diff's name to Crazy/Insane/Whatever, Appalling is just bad.
00:23:359 (7) - New Combo Added!

1. disables the widescreen support is unnecesary, because the SB is 1024 x 768.
2. Add Remix,Dj Techno,Dance,Electro,Radio Edit in the tags, And remove Nightcore is unnecesary imo.
3. I have a suggestion for the SB, I think you could add the effect "fade" on this time 00:01:755 and the picture begins to Appear up to the minute 00:03:812.
   same in this time. 02:53:899 - 02:55:956.

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"background.jpg",320,240
 F,0,-301,1755,0
 S,0,0,176232,0.65
 F,0,1755,3812,0,1
 F,0,3812,173899,1
 F,0,173899,175956,1,0
 F,0,175956,,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"background-light.jpg",320,240
 L,27474,32
  F,1,0,343,1,0
  S,1,0,343,0.65,0.68
  F,0,343,686,0
 L,63137,32
  F,1,0,343,1,0
  S,1,0,343,0.65,0.68
  F,0,343,686,0
 L,152295,32
  F,1,0,343,1,0
  S,1,0,343,0.65,0.68
  F,0,343,686,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

1. 00:16:157 (3,4) - Nazi* in my opinion I think you can do better this blanket something like this:
   
   Nazi

   
   but I think it would be better if you change the pace of the slider, try this: sounds good Imo.
2. 00:21:644 (4,5) - this beat sounds out of place, would be better if you remove the reverse of here 00:21:644 (4) - and add one note here 00:22:673 Therefore it add reverse on this beat 00:23:016 (6) , and place the spinner on the next tick.
   
   Here The Example

   
3. 00:28:160 (2,3) - Nazi* I'm sure you can create better this blanket, Here an example:
   
   Example

   
   
   Here the code:
   

   [HitObjects]
   368,260,28160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   412,188,28502,2,0,P|451:243|433:312,2,140

4. 00:36:390 (2,3) - Same here ^
5. 01:13:082 (5) - remove the clap, sounds bad imo
6. 01:17:539 (6,2) - Nazi* move this slider 01:19:597 (2) - to X:152 Y:284 For a perfect stacking with this circle 01:17:539 (6).
7. Nazi* Move this 01:20:969 (4) - to X:443 Y:336 for a better blanket.
8. 01:56:289 (1) - you forgot to put a finish here
9. 01:59:032 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think that you should add this part soft whistles to follow the voice, sound great in this part ,you should to try. this for all diff.
10. 02:30:581 - finish in this time.
11. 02:53:899 - add note here with finish and move this spinner to next tick, this in all diff.

1. 00:24:387 (1) - Finish here.
2. 00:27:131 - you are ignoring the kiai start time which is a very important beat, I would recommend you change the rhythm of this part something like this: , if you do the above add finish here 00:27:131.
3. 02:09:320 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:37:075 (4) - Nazi* move this note to X:408 Y:155 for a better stacked.
5. 00:39:819 (3) - ^ X:235 Y:199
6. 00:46:334 (1) - NC
7. 01:07:423 - add note here! sounds good.
8. 01:12:396 (3,1) - Nazi* this looks very bad try to move this 01:13:767 (1) - to X:213 Y:197.
9. 02:09:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Same than easy
10. 01:53:546 (4,5) - spacing!
11. 02:37:782 (1) - NC here
12. 02:53:899 (1) - Same than easy.

1. 00:17:529 (1) - NC here
2. 00:22:673 (1) - ^
3. 00:26:445 (1,2) - same on normal
4. 01:07:423 - I think a normal slider is not follow the music, replaces this for three circles in this time 01:07:423 , 01:07:509 , 01:07:595 is more comfortable imo.
5. 01:16:854 (1,2) - you can create a better blanket in this part please.
6. 01:19:254 (1,3) - Nazi* move this circle 01:20:283 (3) - to X:382 Y:251 for a better stacked.
7. 01:36:228 (2) - ^ move this to X:443 Y:45 Same reason.
8. 01:54:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - for give aesthetic to the map and make it more symmetrical, moves all these notes to the coordinates X:160 Y:116
9. 02:10:006 - do not overlook the important beats of the songs add note here with finish.
10. 02:53:899 (1) - same in the other diffs.