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Nakanishi Ryosuke - Nyuubu Todoke

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Yukyy

Tari wrote:

Please check Skin too~ there are some unused things I think and wrong dimensions for some images.
I think all is fine with the dimensions. The skin has a normal AND HD version included, if that's what you mean.
Lanturn
go go epicz! so close to your first ranked mapset!
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[Epicz]

Lanturn wrote:

go go epicz! so close to your first ranked mapset!
yep :3 hopefully some BAT modding it within the next few hours, days, weeks years
jericho2442
got the guest diff mapper to fix one unfitting jump and the combo colours. waiting for the creator to update then i think this will join the ranked section :p
Smoothie
Alrighty, here are the fixes
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YTYuyu
we're not done yet--it's my turn to check it ;)

[General]
you're missing a spinner-osu file so you need that to complete the spinner set, hit0@ is being unused, as well as a sliderfollowcircle.png to complete the slider set.

[Easy]
00:15:123 (1,1) - since this is the easiest diff, you need to give more time than this for beginners so that they can recover for the next note after the spinner, so you should delete the circle because of that.
00:20:623 (1) - maybe a finish at the beginning to show emphasis in the BGM? i think it sounds a lot nicer since it's a new phrase in the music as well.
00:40:623 (1) - the whistle is unnecessary and distracting, so i highly consider that you remove it because of that.
00:50:623 (4) - i think you can make this slider look like (3) for a smoother transition and pattern during gameplay.
00:52:623 (1) - same as 00:20:623.

[Normal]
00:22:123 (2,3) - maybe you can move this around so that you can blanket (1) outside border? i think that it'll look a lot nicer and more flowy to follow during gameplay.
00:37:873 (3) - perhaps flipping it the other way like this would make the transition from (2) more straightforward and smoother to follow as well during gameplay?
00:41:123 (1) - the finish at the end of the slider is unnecessary, so make sure that you remove it since it sounds too distracting to follow.

[Smoothie's Hard]
00:21:623 (3,4,5) - i think you can do a jump pattern in this part because the BGM in the song rises and goes down, and because of that, i think that it'll fit nicely if you add a jump similar to 00:29:123 (3,4,5) - for consistency.
00:53:373 (4) - not a big deal, but if you wanna make this perfect, then you should stack this perfectly to the end of (4).

and that's all i got. i'm popping this because of the unused and missing skin files, as well as the gap between the spinner and the slider too soon in the easy diff. sorry about that :(

Smoothie

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Smoothie's Hard]
00:21:623 (3,4,5) - i think you can do a jump pattern in this part because the BGM in the song rises and goes down, and because of that, i think that it'll fit nicely if you add a jump similar to 00:29:123 (3,4,5) - for consistency. Hum... I guess you're right.
00:53:373 (4) - not a big deal, but if you wanna make this perfect, then you should stack this perfectly to the end of (4). Fixed
Thanks
Update
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Topic Starter
[Epicz]

Byakugan249 wrote:

we're not done yet--it's my turn to check it ;)

[General]
you're missing a spinner-osu file so you need that to complete the spinner set, hit0@ is being unused, as well as a sliderfollowcircle.png to complete the slider set. will fix it later when yukyy is back

[Easy]
00:15:123 (1,1) - since this is the easiest diff, you need to give more time than this for beginners so that they can recover for the next note after the spinner, so you should delete the circle because of that.
00:20:623 (1) - maybe a finish at the beginning to show emphasis in the BGM? i think it sounds a lot nicer since it's a new phrase in the music as well.
00:40:623 (1) - the whistle is unnecessary and distracting, so i highly consider that you remove it because of that.
00:50:623 (4) - i think you can make this slider look like (3) for a smoother transition and pattern during gameplay.
00:52:623 (1) - same as 00:20:623. fixed everything

[Normal]
00:22:123 (2,3) - maybe you can move this around so that you can blanket (1) outside border? i think that it'll look a lot nicer and more flowy to follow during gameplay.
00:37:873 (3) - perhaps flipping it the other way like this would make the transition from (2) more straightforward and smoother to follow as well during gameplay?
00:41:123 (1) - the finish at the end of the slider is unnecessary, so make sure that you remove it since it sounds too distracting to follow. fixed everything

and that's all i got. i'm popping this because of the unused and missing skin files, as well as the gap between the spinner and the slider too soon in the easy diff. sorry about that :(

YTYuyu
ok just one more thing and i can re-bubble this.

[Normal]
00:52:623 (1,2,3,4) - it's not fixed yet. remove every finish in this combo, and add the finish at the beginning so that like i said, it doesn't sound distracting to follow during gameplay.
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

Byakugan249 wrote:

ok just one more thing and i can re-bubble this.

[Normal]
00:52:623 (1,2,3,4) - it's not fixed yet. remove every finish in this combo, and add the finish at the beginning so that like i said, it doesn't sound distracting to follow during gameplay.
fixed
YTYuyu
ok this is better than last time :D.



re-bubbled and GL :D.
eveless
[Normal]
00:30:623 (4) - a bit unti-flow for me, how about change it like this?00:37:873 (3) - ^same,
[Easy]
00:30:623 (4) - ^same,
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

eveless wrote:

[Normal]
00:30:623 (4) - a bit unti-flow for me, how about change it like this?00:37:873 (3) - ^same,
[Easy]
00:30:623 (4) - ^same,
fixed all, thanks
eveless
well ranked
Moway
grats on your first rank!
Lanturn
Congrats [Epicz]! :D
Natsu
OMG man im so happy congratz baka you did it :3/
Gamu
Congrats :3
Aurele
Told you it was close!
DakeDekaane
yay, congratz :3
Smoothie
Gratz! :3
Oyatsu
Wow, Congratz for first ranked! Good job! :D
Yukyy
Finally! Congrats <3
fanzhen0019
yo nice job
gratz!
Stefan
Gratuliere :3
Topic Starter
[Epicz]
thanks all :3
Irreversible
:) Glad to see it ranked now, gz for your first map! >w<
Sey
I remember modding this in past. Congratulations!
Umi
Oh yeah ! gratz You did it finally :D !
Itachi_Uchiha
First ranked :D

I´m proud of you^^
meiikyuu
epiczzzzzzzzzz :D
Haya
DAYUM DUDE ENDLICH
Kirito1337_old
Nice Map :)
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