• 
  
  uhh... you used a really complex hitsound system so yeah
  
  and it would be great if the title appear at 00:17:176 -
  
  imo, combo colour 3 is too bright at kiai time which makes the reverse arrow not quite visible. how about darkening it a bit?

• AR-1? BPM is quite slow and i think AR4 fits the song more in this diff
  
  00:47:908 (1) - add finish at slider's head? there's cymbal sound
  01:53:518 (4) - i prefer to nc since you're following a new beat here
  03:05:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - only suggestion, make 03:07:420 (1,2) - a bit parallel with 03:05:957 (2,3) -
  03:25:957 (1) - making it a double-flip spinners seems nice. how about making the first spinner ends at 03:29:371 - then the second spinner start at 03:29:859 -

• 00:51:322 (3,4) - how about unstack them? like 00:55:225 (4,5) - after all you used stack at this part to accent the double clap like 00:56:201 (2,3) - so stacking 00:51:322 (3,4) -while the second clap sounds weak is kinda awkward to me
  01:30:835 (1,3) - idk only suggestion, making symmetry seems nice
  
  SPOILER

  

• nice

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

From queue, i'm sorry for being late ;w; school has just started
noob modder, so mostly lame suggestions


[General]

• 
  
  uhh... you used a really complex hitsound system so yeah I will ask BAT about it, will be fine, it's only in guidence, not rules
  
  and it would be great if the title appear at 00:17:176 - nice idea~
  
  imo, combo colour 3 is too bright at kiai time which makes the reverse arrow not quite visible. how about darkening it a bit? well I think it's fine and I have really few reverses =.=

[Normal]

• AR-1? BPM is quite slow and i think AR4 fits the song more in this diff 5 is just the common one
  
  00:47:908 (1) - add finish at slider's head? there's cymbal sound yeah, also mentioned in the previous mod
  01:53:518 (4) - i prefer to nc since you're following a new beat here Don't want to create too short combo sets in easy diffs
  03:05:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - only suggestion, make 03:07:420 (1,2) - a bit parallel with 03:05:957 (2,3) - no, the both 1234 are totally symmetrical
  03:25:957 (1) - making it a double-flip spinners seems nice. how about making the first spinner ends at 03:29:371 - then the second spinner start at 03:29:859 - yeah I made it even more~

[Hard]

• 00:51:322 (3,4) - how about unstack them? like 00:55:225 (4,5) - after all you used stack at this part to accent the double clap like 00:56:201 (2,3) - so stacking 00:51:322 (3,4) -while the second clap sounds weak is kinda awkward to me Actually I think either is fine, I didn't considered that much when mapping, that would be too tiring :3
  01:30:835 (1,3) - idk only suggestion, making symmetry seems nice
  
  SPOILER

  
  sorry, not really fond of that

[Insane]

• nice

sorry for poor mod :'3 no kds. nice mapset~
good luck~

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No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

[General]
我觉得timing再加5-10ms差不多。。你那个有点早 确实是有不小的问题=。=自己都没查过…加了8

[Normal]
00:34:249 (3) - 建议停在00:34:981 刚好match吉他音 听着舒服 感觉就和后面保持一致性了 就当是低难度的一种简化处理了
01:30:347 (4) - 开头不加clap么 =。=
02:54:737 (2,4) - 音量略大 个人感觉还好 这个音量是在Insane里面配合放跳的时候用的 在低难度沿用了而已

[Hard]
00:03:518 (4,5,6) - copy一个然后旋转2次120会很好看 思考了半天终于大概弄出了个形儿
00:31:810 (9) - 其实我觉得最后一个repeat真没啥必要 好吧 既然是第二次被指出来了
00:34:249 (2,3,4) - 虽然节奏没问题但是感觉还是 http://puu.sh/3INtT.jpg 听着舒服 暂时没有改 就当是保持一致性了
00:48:396 (2,3) - 前后等距? 不太想改 再看看吧 我觉得这样移动比较舒服
01:16:201 (2,3) - 这。。 ORZ 这个确实比较蠢
02:56:688 (3) - 同N。我觉得你插几条线改改音量应该不算太费事

[Insane]
我觉得可以尝试一下AR9 我觉得为了让更多人可以DT所以设的AR8 会再考虑考虑
00:16:688这段开始有军鼓啊。。不加音效? 嗯有考虑过 但是最后没有加是因为这一段我是全normal的 那种鼓的效果在normal音的覆盖下没什么感觉
00:27:542 (7,8) - 别stack fixed
00:32:298 (1,2,3,4) - 不得不锁挺难看 嗯改得弧度大了些
00:38:396 (6,12) - 还是别吝啬NC。。 虽然之前好像也有人说过 虽然不是这个点 不过我还是不太打算改 这里我都是两段一NC的
01:26:449 - 这边少东西了吧。。然后后面都乱了 是的=。=啊啊啊啊啊啊好难过
01:46:937 (2,3,4) - 我感觉这边第三下没音。。包括前面01:43:035 (2) - 也是。。你删掉第三个note听感觉完全不一样 那个kick的确 中间好像没有音，不过这里也当是简化处理了 反正只需要按住不动 因为想用四分拍六分拍混拍本来就已经比较混杂了 所以想每一个小段落保持一致性 就弄成这样了 大概不会改
02:00:352 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我实在不理解你的间距 当初大概是想用5填充空间 而且考虑到它是个slider 即使放远点也比较好点到 这样 嘛 现在拉回来做了个三角

flow问题不大，但是图看着非常乱，如果你想的话不少地方都应该微调下。音效还不错

Marcin wrote:

I know it's already bubbled, but just passing by and saw
[Normal]
01:01:574 (3) - Slider end, isn't it supposed to have for example whistle?

1. 00:02:550 (2,3) - curve them further on like this? more catching with the previous slider(1,4). http://puu.sh/412Oi.jpg
2. 00:11:330 (3,4) - same with abovve?
3. 00:35:965 (4) - some hard for beginners as the first diff since the circle is on the red line and there has a gap with previous slider (3).. how about to stagger that with the following slider?
4. 01:41:818 (4) - moving the anchor on that tail onto x~0 y~156? looks better imo.
5. 01:42:550 (1) - right 1 grid on the middle anchor of the slider.(same reason as above.~
6. 01:50:355 (1,2) - same as 00:02:550. i.e. http://puu.sh/413nk.jpg
7. 01:54:013 (5) - strongly recommend to remove the circle since it's really over the difficulty it should have.. honestly the 1/4 slider is already hard to read for beginners imo..
8. 02:04:013 (3) - 1 grid up for the consistency?
9. 02:08:891 (5) - i'd make the blanket better~ http://puu.sh/413BM.jpg
10. 02:36:940 (1) - really too hard to catch on the red tick as the beginning of the part.. (and 02:40:843 (1) - 02:44:745 (1) - 02:48:648 (1) - 02:53:526 (6) -
11. 03:25:965 (1,1,1,1) - just merging them? i didn't see any reason to do that like now on the beginning diff.

Strawberry wrote:

[Normal]
the present diff is a bit excessive for a beginning diff.. some suggestions from me.

1. 00:02:550 (2,3) - curve them further on like this? more catching with the previous slider(1,4). http://puu.sh/412Oi.jpg I hope I've polished all the sliders' shapes mentioned
2. 00:11:330 (3,4) - same with abovve?
3. 00:35:965 (4) - some hard for beginners as the first diff since the circle is on the red line and there has a gap with previous slider (3).. how about to stagger that with the following slider? as I'm following the vocal throughout this diff, moving it to white tick would make the rhythm quite weird, while unstacking the circle will only make it looks worse for me considering the distance snap. So I'd prefer to keep it. After all, it's a Normal, hopefully it'll be ok
4. 01:41:818 (4) - moving the anchor on that tail onto x~0 y~156? looks better imo. k
5. 01:42:550 (1) - right 1 grid on the middle anchor of the slider.(same reason as above.~
6. 01:50:355 (1,2) - same as 00:02:550. i.e. http://puu.sh/413nk.jpg
7. 01:54:013 (5) - strongly recommend to remove the circle since it's really over the difficulty it should have.. honestly the 1/4 slider is already hard to read for beginners imo.. no no I never used 1/4 slider in this diff. I think it's ok to do so though, just a 1/2-gap circle between two sliders. As it's at a intense connecting part, I think it fits
8. 02:04:013 (3) - 1 grid up for the consistency? nope, already nice now
9. 02:08:891 (5) - i'd make the blanket better~ http://puu.sh/413BM.jpg
10. 02:36:940 (1) - really too hard to catch on the red tick as the beginning of the part.. (and 02:40:843 (1) - 02:44:745 (1) - 02:48:648 (1) - 02:53:526 (6) - hmm, actually when the gap is longer, players have more time to recogonize what is happening next. just one stacking circle on sliders' head should be ok in Normal though, it would really look bad if unstack them
11. 03:25:965 (1,1,1,1) - just merging them? i didn't see any reason to do that like now on the beginning diff. it's the idea of DNA, to match the 4 sentences with 4 spinners. I think there's nothing different for the players, they only need to keep spinning, whether they're splited or merged

Zero__wind wrote:

and to the BAT who may wanna rank this map
I'd like to see the title and artist appear at 00:16:696 - (white color is ok I think)
gratefully thanks

kanpakyin wrote:

[General]

1. Aimod showed this to me: File missing:sb\rain\rain.png discussed directly and this is alright

[Insane]

1. 01:02:550 (1,2) - 我覺得這邊可以弄一點花樣, 比如說超小間距甚麼的, 這樣做的話剛好能夠fit上pitch
   
   建議

   
   nice idea
2. 01:22:062 (3) - inperfect blanket, you can improve it by removing the grid snap. hope I've got it right this time =.= fixed so many times...怀疑美死早

[Hard]

1. 01:01:330 (5) - I would say adding a new combo here and then removing at 01:01:574 (1) - is much better in order to fit the vocal. I'm always adding NC at downbeat

[Normal]

1. 00:34:257 (3) - imo, this should be ended at 00:34:989 - , so that it can fit the vocal and the music. k
2. 00:43:769 (6,1) - Probably swap the new combo here? I mean you could add a new combo on (6)- and then remove on (1)- no, adding NC at downbeat
3. 00:45:965 (3) - Same as 00:34:257 no, considering the difficulty, consistent 1/1 beat gap at both sides of 00:47:428 (4) - would make it much easier to be handled by new players imo
4. 03:25:965 - ~ end - 太懶不能忍...至少我覺得不用這樣四個spinner帶過去啊... 哭了啊 不想改了啦 我觉得4个spinner对应4句话的这个点子还不错的说 不是真的因为懒…
5. 我覺得這diff的 1/2slider + 1/1 slider的梗太多了 因为基本上…节奏就是这样的啦 跟vocal有时候节奏会这样蠢……

kanpakyin wrote:

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ