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Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu - Love Shitai! (TV Size)

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Fycho
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年8月29日 at 12:59:18

Artist: Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu
Title: Love Shitai! (TV Size)
Source: LOVE LAB
Tags: happy623 opening numakura manami akasaki chinatsu minase inori sakura ayane taichi you 恋愛ラボ kurahashi riko maki natsuo tanahashi suzune enomoto yuiko mizushima sayori
BPM: 182
Filesize: 11946kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 623's Easy (2.83 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 253 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 321 notes)
  4. Normal (4.21 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu - Love Shitai! (TV Size)
Download: Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu - Love Shitai! (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 Love Lab op~ 恋愛したいっ!
623's Easy by happy623

If downloading before 2013/8/18,please redownload


老婆是gay！
Last edited by Fycho , edited 52 times in total.
happy623
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happy623
maaagic
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Joined October 2011
maaagic
:)
Little
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Joined November 2012
Little
Hi, Fycho!

[General]
Unrankable issue for SC:1 :
you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.


[623's Easy]
00:06:508 (2) - I suggest to change the rhythm as shown below. I think it goes much better with the music.
SPOILER
00:15:245 (2) - I just think this looks a bit weird, but it's your choice.
00:25:464 (1) - Why this shape?
00:27:442 (3) - Curve more to blanket better
00:36:344 (2,3) - I think flow directly will be better.
SPOILER
00:42:442 (3) - Just a little detail, but make the middle segment more evenly curved? (4th slider point to 240,264)
00:42:442 (3,1) - These can blanket better
00:43:926 (1,2,3) - Maybe it would be better if these were all the same shape?
01:08:981 (3,1) - Can blanket better (3) around head of (1)
00:23:157 - Use SC:2 here for slider tick clap, then switch back to SC:1?
SPOILER
00:25:794 - ^
00:28:102 - ^ (I hope you get the point, do this for any other sliderticks where clap is needed (beats 2 and 4?)

[Normal]
00:09:311 (6,1) - Align these in a straight line?
00:21:344 (4,5) - I think you should curve these.
00:43:926 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't look good.
00:49:860 (2) - This is really deceiving, since it has the same rhythm as the vocal interjection but is 1/2 a beat earlier. ;w;
01:12:937 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad
01:25:135 (4,2) - Stack perfectly?
01:28:102 (4) - Move to the left a bit
01:28:596 (1) - This spinner is really short.

[Hard]
00:11:618 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - LOL looks like NC spam
00:12:937 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:333 (1) - So fast... but i guess it could be ok
00:50:025 (4,5,1) - Too jumpy for "Hard" in my opinion
00:51:344 (4,5,6) - ^
00:59:091 (3,4,1) - This pattern doesn't really feel good with the music
01:03:377 (4,5,1,2,3) - Too jumpy
01:06:014 (4,1) - Any way to blanket?
01:06:179 (1) - Use this rhythm is better in my opinion:
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:09:640 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to change the visual pattern, since the rhythm is different, so you don't confuse the player.
00:19:366 (3) - Consider removing this note ;w; I expected a pause when I played this because of the music ><
00:19:860 (5,1,2,3) - This stack is boring. Make some kind of visual pattern or polygon.
01:20:190 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this pattern ;w;
Nice map.

Good Luck :)
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, Fycho!

[General]
Unrankable issue for SC:1 :
you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.


[623's Easy]
00:06:508 (2) - I suggest to change the rhythm as shown below. I think it goes much better with the music. nice
SPOILER
00:15:245 (2) - I just think this looks a bit weird, but it's your choice. changed a bit
00:25:464 (1) - Why this shape? /_>\ okay changed
00:27:442 (3) - Curve more to blanket better fixed
00:36:344 (2,3) - I think flow directly will be better. yea
SPOILER
00:42:442 (3) - Just a little detail, but make the middle segment more evenly curved? (4th slider point to 240,264) done o/
00:42:442 (3,1) - These can blanket better tried ;w; hope it looks nice now
00:43:926 (1,2,3) - Maybe it would be better if these were all the same shape? much better
01:08:981 (3,1) - Can blanket better (3) around head of (1) sry for my poor blanket skills xD
00:23:157 - Use SC:2 here for slider tick clap, then switch back to SC:1? sure, applied to all other similar sliders
SPOILER
00:25:794 - ^
00:28:102 - ^ (I hope you get the point, do this for any other sliderticks where clap is needed (beats 2 and 4?)

Good Luck :)
all fixed xD
thanks for modding!
the diff looks much better now
ts8zs
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Joined May 2011
ts8zs
做这首也不叫上我……伤心._.
感觉offset有点早……程序一测果然早...绝对音感已练成了么我._. offset 417
问一下收不收Insane._.
Mark 一下去睡觉去._.
Little
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Little
^我也觉得offset有点早
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Fychan, Add in tags
  1. 恋愛ラボ and Rabu Rabo (love lab in japanese and its latinh)
  2. Fujisaki Girls Academy
:arrow: from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Love_Lab

I will mod after ;)
ts8zs
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ts8zs

CloudSplash16 wrote:

^我也觉得offset有点早
原来你会中文._.
Fycho
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Fycho

ts8zs wrote:

CloudSplash16 wrote:

^我也觉得offset有点早
原来你会中文._.
他是华裔啊;w;然后抱歉不需要insane了四diff足够 :o
lkx_Shore
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lkx_Shore
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:069 (1) - 这个弧度不太好看
  2. 00:26:453 (5) - 这是漏clap吗
  3. 00:31:069 (2,3) - 前面和后面都是接两个note，这里接一个note就直接滑条了，为了这个梗才这么放有点勉强了吧
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:728 (1,1,1,1) - 都放一个地方比较无聊，每次往下0.02x如何
  2. 01:06:179 (1) - 尾巴加Finish?
  3. 01:07:003 (3) - 头也加上clap吧
  4. 01:12:442 (3) - 头Finish?
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:366 (3) - Nc?
  2. 00:22:497 (6) - 其实这个地方加个whistle不错，记得降一点音量
[623'sEasy]
Hihihi
  1. 01:08:981 (3) - 后半身没包好?
  2. 01:17:223 - 加note在x428 y164?
[Other]
Goodluck star
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -

Hi, here is my mod. From mutual reqs.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
-------------------------------------------------
-623's Easy-
  1. 00:29:091 - clap ?
  2. 00:42:937 - clap ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-
  1. 00:41:783 (2) - 頭去clap ?
  2. 00:43:926 (1) - 頭加whistle?
  3. 00:50:355 (3) - 頭加whistle?
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. 00:08:322 (1) - 加finish?
-------------------------------------------------
-Insane-
✔ Okay.]
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
哭了, mod出好少
祝你好運 ! ;)
Fycho
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Fycho
CS16

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, Fycho!

[General]
Unrankable issue for SC:1 :
you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
fixed,thx~

[Normal]
00:09:311 (6,1) - Align these in a straight line? not necessary
00:21:344 (4,5) - I think you should curve these. I think straight and curve is the same
00:43:926 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't look good. 0.0?
00:49:860 (2) - This is really deceiving, since it has the same rhythm as the vocal interjection but is 1/2 a beat earlier. ;w; I think there is no problem
01:12:937 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad It seems not bad:<
01:25:135 (4,2) - Stack perfectly? ok
01:28:102 (4) - Move to the left a bitok
01:28:596 (1) - This spinner is really short. If more people point it out ,I will change

[Hard]
00:11:618 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - LOL looks like NC spam
00:12:937 (1) - Remove NCok
00:22:333 (1) - So fast... but i guess it could be ok
00:50:025 (4,5,1) - Too jumpy for "Hard" in my opinion So it is called"Hard"
00:51:344 (4,5,6) - ^
00:59:091 (3,4,1) - This pattern doesn't really feel good with the music I follow the drum not the vocal
01:03:377 (4,5,1,2,3) - Too jumpy
01:06:014 (4,1) - Any way to blanket? I will keep the flow ,so don't make blanket
01:06:179 (1) - Use this rhythm is better in my opinion: If you listen closely,you will hear,drum at01:06:179 - 01:06:508 - 01:06:673 - 01:06:838 - I keep following the drum
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:09:640 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to change the visual pattern, since the rhythm is different, so you don't confuse the player. From a lot of test play,it seems no problem,this is Insane
00:19:366 (3) - Consider removing this note ;w; I expected a pause when I played this because of the music >< There is a pause 00:20:025 - ,too many is not good
00:19:860 (5,1,2,3) - This stack is boring. Make some kind of visual pattern or polygon. I was laze lol
01:20:190 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this pattern ;w;
Nice map.

Good Luck :)

lkx

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:16:069 (1) - 这个弧度不太好看 稍微改了下
  2. 00:26:453 (5) - 这是漏clap吗 漏了，fixed
  3. 00:31:069 (2,3) - 前面和后面都是接两个note，这里接一个note就直接滑条了，为了这个梗才这么放有点勉强了吧 我觉的还好呢
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:728 (1,1,1,1) - 都放一个地方比较无聊，每次往下0.02x如何 I am lazy /w\
  2. 01:06:179 (1) - 尾巴加Finish? 好的
  3. 01:07:003 (3) - 头也加上clap吧 ok
  4. 01:12:442 (3) - 头Finish?这个不加了，有点吵
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:366 (3) - Nc? 好的
  2. 00:22:497 (6) - 其实这个地方加个whistle不错，记得降一点音量 加了会和那个叮的声音有点错开冲突，没找到合适音效之前还是不加了
[Other]
Goodluck star thx~~

MmC

- Miomio Chii - wrote:


Hi, here is my mod. From mutual reqs. ^^

-Normal-
  1. 00:41:783 (2) - 頭去clap ? ok~
  2. 00:43:926 (1) - 頭加whistle? 不了
  3. 00:50:355 (3) - 頭加whistle?ok~
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. 00:08:322 (1) - 加finish? 不加了
-------------------------------------------------

End of this mod.
哭了, mod出好少 谢谢了，没事~
祝你好運 ! ;)

thank you for modding~~ :D
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happy623
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happy623

lkx_Shore wrote:

[623'sEasy]
Hihihi
  1. 01:08:981 (3) - 后半身没包好? 再包了試試 囧... 希望OK
  2. 01:17:223 - 加note在x428 y164?
不了, 那裡沒音樂;w;

[Other]
Goodluck star
謝謝w

- Miomio Chii - wrote:


Hi, here is my mod. From mutual reqs.

-------------------------------------------------
-623's Easy-
  1. 00:29:091 - clap ? 不了;w;
  2. 00:42:937 - clap ? 加不了 ;w; 滑條的ticks不在claps的位置上
-------------------------------------------------

End of this mod.
哭了, mod出好少
祝你好運 ! ;)
thanks Chii姊ww
ts8zs
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Joined May 2011
ts8zs
说好的._.
所有我提出的梗都是基于本身不顺手（个人感受）的情况下提出的，所以即使不用我的梗也请尝试修改._.
[Insane]
00:13:267 (4) - 太靠上了
00:13:596 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928293
00:17:552 (1,3) - 分别Ctrl+G 或者改变2的位置
00:27:442 (4) - 放在3延长线上
00:28:596 (3) - 放在4反延长线上
00:29:091 (5,6) - 放在2,3上
00:44:585 (3) - Ctrl+G
>00:45:080 (4) - 移到2
01:01:728 (3) - move to 172,112
01:10:959 (3) - Ctrl+G and move to 280,256
先save._.
还有就是开头HD很坑会降分._.
有一点既视感._.
[Hard]
^
00:10:464 (5,6) - 用折返
00:41:453 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:42:442 (1) - Ctrl+G &折返
[Normal]
00:01:728 (1,2,1,2) - ._.算了反正开头的话多试几次就好
00:11:618 (3) - 在点那里放红点._.
00:50:025 (2) - 用1/2没问题吧._.
[Easy]
00:12:607 (2) - 垂直向下太死板
00:25:464 (1) - 后半形状略诡异
00:43:926 (1) - 包._.
00:51:179 (2,1) - not fit
01:21:179 (2) - 避免吧._.

就这样干劲全无了最后一个也清了._.
happy623
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Joined April 2010
happy623

ts8zs wrote:

说好的._.
所有我提出的梗都是基于本身不顺手（个人感受）的情况下提出的，所以即使不用我的梗也请尝试修改._.

[Easy]
00:12:607 (2) - 垂直向下太死板 還好啦
00:25:464 (1) - 后半形状略诡异 改了
00:43:926 (1) - 包._. 恩
00:51:179 (2,1) - not fit 加了note
01:21:179 (2) - 避免吧._. okay

就这样干劲全无了最后一个也清了._.
thanks for modding o/
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
Hi
From my queue
[Easy]
00:04:366 (1) - 可以试试Finish

[Normal]
这个SV我觉略微快，如果还有人吐槽的话建议CS-1
00:04:366 (1) - 可以试试Finish
01:10:300 - ^
01:26:783 (2) - 左移一格Stack
结尾的转盘还是有些短，建议换成一个note

[Hard]
00:01:728 (1,1,1,1) - 太单调 可以像Insane一样相互错开2格
(第一个note上移10格，第二个8格，以此类推
00:17:058 (4) - 和00:17:223 (5) 头部Stack更好读一点
一些Stack
00:39:805 (1) - X=357 Y=148
00:41:453 (2) - ^ X=212 Y=192
00:43:102 (3) - ^ X=292 Y=183

00:51:508 (5) - 下移1格避免遮挡
00:59:091 (3) - 这里稍微有点跳，可以试试Ctrl+G

[Insane]
00:09:970 (3) - 可以试试放中间，不然柑橘有点鬼畜
http://puu.sh/42Ee7.jpg
01:14:091 (4) - stack。X=220 Y=176
01:23:486 (1) - 考虑Ctrl+G改进这里的Flow，前后总体有一个顺时针的走势

That's all. GL~
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

Autumn wrote:

Hi
From my queue
[Easy]
00:04:366 (1) - 可以试试Finish ok~

That's all. GL~
thanks~ :oops:
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Autumn wrote:

Hi
From my queue


[Normal]
这个SV我觉略微快，如果还有人吐槽的话建议CS-1
00:04:366 (1) - 可以试试Finish 好的
01:10:300 - ^ 好的
01:26:783 (2) - 左移一格Stack 好多
结尾的转盘还是有些短，建议换成一个note 好多

[Hard]
00:01:728 (1,1,1,1) - 太单调 可以像Insane一样相互错开2格 懒了;w;
(第一个note上移10格，第二个8格，以此类推
00:17:058 (4) - 和00:17:223 (5) 头部Stack更好读一点这个不了，感觉现在可以
一些Stack 好的都改了
00:39:805 (1) - X=357 Y=148
00:41:453 (2) - ^ X=212 Y=192
00:43:102 (3) - ^ X=292 Y=183

00:51:508 (5) - 下移1格避免遮挡 ok~
00:59:091 (3) - 这里稍微有点跳，可以试试Ctrl+G 不了，这个跳可以接受

[Insane]
00:09:970 (3) - 可以试试放中间，不然柑橘有点鬼畜 insane的话没事的
http://puu.sh/42Ee7.jpg
01:14:091 (4) - stack。X=220 Y=176 ok
01:23:486 (1) - 考虑Ctrl+G改进这里的Flow，前后总体有一个顺时针的走势ok~

That's all. GL~
thanks~
pw384
2,287 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
wpcap这神麻婆..

[Insane]
* 00:14:420 (4,6) - 调换一下位置吧 应该会顺手一些

* 00:55:464 (7,8,1) - (nazi) 尝试做成正三角形？

* 01:02:552 - 以及 01:03:212 - 这里留空很不爽啊，试试这样？：
Example

* 01:10:959 (3) - 折返处加一个whistle，这样可以合得上vocal，也不至于听起来有点少掉什么的样子（

* 01:28:596 - (very nazi，改不改都没问题的)我听到这里有一个声音（而且normal的这个地方是一个note） 所以试试这样？：
click me
01:28:596 - 这里加一个note，然后转盘从这里01:28:761 - 开始，结束的话拖满一个小节也没事


[Hard]
* 00:33:212 (1) - (nazi)差一点点就和后面blanket到有点不太好吧。。调整一下

* 00:38:651 (1) - (nazi)微调一下使得开头完全在00:37:827 (4) - 的track下面

* 00:38:651 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段排得太紧凑了

* 01:10:959 (3) - 折返处加whistle，建议的理由同Insane

* 01:28:596 - (very nazi，改不改都没问题的)和Insane一样？


[Normal]
* 00:38:651 (1,2,3,4) - 不太善良吧，避免误读的话 00:39:311 (2) - 可以考虑改成一个1/1滑条

* 00:43:267 (4,1) - 拉远一点，这里考虑不要用相同DS（因为后面的sliderspeed发生变化）


[Easy]
* 00:08:322 (2) - (nazi) 包住00:07:003 (1) - 的折返处？

其他我觉得没问题！:D

嗯有了kds来一个star ;w;

EDIT: BBcode grammar fix
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

384059043 wrote:

wpcap这神麻婆..

[Easy]
* 00:08:322 (2) - (nazi) 包住00:07:003 (1) - 的折返处？OK!

其他我觉得没问题！:D

嗯有了kds来一个star ;w;

EDIT: BBcode grammar fix

thanks!!
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

384059043 wrote:

wpcap这神麻婆..

[Insane]
* 00:14:420 (4,6) - 调换一下位置吧 应该会顺手一些

* 00:55:464 (7,8,1) - (nazi) 尝试做成正三角形？好的，改正了

* 01:02:552 - 以及 01:03:212 - 这里留空很不爽啊，试试这样？： 这里跟着鼓点呢，这样打击感强
Example

* 01:10:959 (3) - 折返处加一个whistle，这样可以合得上vocal，也不至于听起来有点少掉什么的样子（ 加了前后的whistle柑橘要去掉的样子，有些吵，就没节哀了

* 01:28:596 - (very nazi，改不改都没问题的)我听到这里有一个声音（而且normal的这个地方是一个note） 所以试试这样？：
click me
01:28:596 - 这里加一个note，然后转盘从这里01:28:761 - 开始，结束的话拖满一个小节也没事


[Hard]
* 00:33:212 (1) - (nazi)差一点点就和后面blanket到有点不太好吧。。调整一下 为了flow还是不改了

* 00:38:651 (1) - (nazi)微调一下使得开头完全在00:37:827 (4) - 的track下面 好的;w;

* 00:38:651 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段排得太紧凑了 太紧凑是什么意思，节奏密度大吗

* 01:10:959 (3) - 折返处加whistle，建议的理由同Insane 同insane下/color]

* 01:28:596 - (very nazi，改不改都没问题的)和Insane一样？


[Normal]
* 00:38:651 (1,2,3,4) - 不太善良吧，避免误读的话 00:39:311 (2) - 可以考虑改成一个1/1滑条 1/1也不合节奏的样子，等看看有没有更好的节奏吧;;

* 00:43:267 (4,1) - 拉远一点，这里考虑不要用相同DS（因为后面的sliderspeed发生变化） 好的，这块DS重新弄了


其他我觉得没问题！:D

嗯有了kds来一个star ;w;

EDIT: BBcode grammar fix
Thank you very much~ :D
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
感觉被无视._.
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

ts8zs wrote:

说好的._.
所有我提出的梗都是基于本身不顺手（个人感受）的情况下提出的，所以即使不用我的梗也请尝试修改._.
[Insane]
00:13:267 (4) - 太靠上了
00:13:596 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928293
00:17:552 (1,3) - 分别Ctrl+G 或者改变2的位置
00:27:442 (4) - 放在3延长线上 这几个位置稍微变动了，但是没放延长线上
00:28:596 (3) - 放在4反延长线上
00:29:091 (5,6) - 放在2,3上 什么意思？
00:44:585 (3) - Ctrl+G
>00:45:080 (4) - 移到2 不了，不顺;w;
01:01:728 (3) - move to 172,112 移了，不过坐标偏了一点
01:10:959 (3) - Ctrl+G and move to 280,256
先save._.
还有就是开头HD很坑会降分._. 为什么要HD，遮挡就是要坑死HD的，
有一点既视感._.
[Hard]
^
00:10:464 (5,6) - 用折返
00:41:453 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:42:442 (1) - Ctrl+G &折返 不行这块flow是连续的
[Normal]
00:01:728 (1,2,1,2) - ._.算了反正开头的话多试几次就好
00:11:618 (3) - 在点那里放红点._.
00:50:025 (2) - 用1/2没问题吧._. 没问题

就这样干劲全无了最后一个也清了._.
忘reply了抱歉啊~ 没说的都nochange :(
Mei_coN
372 posts
Joined March 2009
Mei_coN
莉子和夏绪快结婚啊!!
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Topic Starter
Fycho

Mei_coN wrote:

莉子和夏绪快结婚啊!!
残念，有男主;w;
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hi~

General request from t/149494

[Artist]

●Fuji-Jo Seitokai Shikkou-Bu ⇒ Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu
It would be better "Fujijo" than the "Fuji-Jo".
"Bu" : Would have to be in all lowercase.. Please look at the artist name of this map　https://osu.ppy.sh/s/54033

[Title]

●fine

[Source]

●Love Lab ⇒ LOVE LAB
http://puu.sh/43zXS.png
It is written in Wikipedia. So, you will need to fix.

[Tags]

●Remove "op".
"opening" is because it is added, it is not need.

●Add "kurahashi riko maki natsuo tanahashi suzune enomoto yuiko mizushima sayori"
This is the name of the anime character. Since you are adding the name of the voice actor, you need to add them.

●Add "恋愛ラボ"
This is Japanese. It is possible to add to the tags. I recommend that you add. Recently, many maps would have been added (Various anime)
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~

General request from t/149494

[Artist]

●Fuji-Jo Seitokai Shikkou-Bu ⇒ Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu
It would be better "Fujijo" than the "Fuji-Jo".
"Bu" : Would have to be in all lowercase.. Please look at the artist name of this map　https://osu.ppy.sh/s/54033

[Title]

●fine

[Source]

●Love Lab ⇒ LOVE LAB
http://puu.sh/43zXS.png
It is written in Wikipedia. So, you will need to fix.

[Tags]

●Remove "op".
"opening" is because it is added, it is not need.

●Add "kurahashi riko maki natsuo tanahashi suzune enomoto yuiko mizushima sayori"
This is the name of the anime character. Since you are adding the name of the voice actor, you need to add them.

●Add "恋愛ラボ"
This is Japanese. It is possible to add to the tags. I recommend that you add. Recently, many maps would have been added (Various anime)
thx~ all fixed :)
Regou
1,916 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
媽啊要還債
[Insane]
00:11:618 (2) - 聲量再少一點應該會比較自然
00:14:091 (2,4,5) - 感覺也是不太整齊,正三角?
00:18:047 - 這裡add note
00:29:915 (2,3) - 重疊感覺不好
01:06:179 (1) - 尾降低聲量
01:27:772 (2,3,4) - 歪了

[Hard]
這hard好像有點難,HP-1?
00:11:618 (1) - 同Insane
00:32:882 (4,1) - 不考慮Blanket?
00:49:695 (3,4,5,1) -
00:51:014 (3,5) - 有點太靠近了
01:08:651 (4,2) - ^
01:09:640 (4,1) - Blanket
01:27:772 (2,3,4) - Spacing

[Normal]
00:36:673 (2,3) - Improve Blanket
[Easy]
00:13:596 (3) - Improve shape,現在顯得不太對稱
00:43:926 (1) - Improve Blanket

先這樣吧~Gl
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn
IRC mod for general~

IRC mod
2013-08-17 12:42 hopperhtkn: Title Unicode is 恋愛(ラブ)したいっ! 
2013-08-17 12:43 Fycho: I follow the video
2013-08-17 12:44 Fycho: 恋爱したいっ
2013-08-17 12:45 hopperhtkn: ah~
2013-08-17 12:45 hopperhtkn: I see
2013-08-17 12:47 Fycho: れんあい
2013-08-17 12:47 Fycho: なぜれんあいじゃない
2013-08-17 12:48 hopperhtkn: phonetic symbol
2013-08-17 12:48 Fycho: ラブ　is恋愛？
2013-08-17 12:48 hopperhtkn: yes~
2013-08-17 12:48 Fycho: love？
2013-08-17 12:48 hopperhtkn: you can read Lubi?
2013-08-17 12:49 hopperhtkn: video
2013-08-17 12:49 Fycho: 恋爱can be read love in japanese?
2013-08-17 12:49 Fycho: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/148593/start=15 
2013-08-17 12:49 Fycho: I asked Gamu
2013-08-17 12:49 hopperhtkn: puush server is down orz
2013-08-17 12:49 hopperhtkn: plz wait
2013-08-17 12:49 Fycho: gif mienai
2013-08-17 12:53 hopperhtkn: you knowsubstitute to puush?
2013-08-17 12:54 hopperhtkn: okay I use tlanslation servise
2013-08-17 12:54 hopperhtkn: In some cases
2013-08-17 12:54 Fycho: no~
2013-08-17 12:54 Fycho: tlanslation is what？
2013-08-17 12:55 hopperhtkn: Japanese changing the kanji reading
2013-08-17 12:55 hopperhtkn: google tlanslate
2013-08-17 12:55 Fycho: 汉字读..
2013-08-17 12:55 Fycho: why changed？
2013-08-17 12:55 hopperhtkn: http://www.kasi-time.com/item-513.html
2013-08-17 12:55 hopperhtkn: you can open?
2013-08-17 12:56 Fycho: yes
2013-08-17 12:56 hopperhtkn: 天空→そら（空
2013-08-17 12:56 hopperhtkn: 時空→とき（時
2013-08-17 12:56 Fycho: for example 天空 is sora
2013-08-17 12:56 hopperhtkn: yes
2013-08-17 12:56 Fycho: 时空 is 时 
2013-08-17 12:57 Fycho: but can these be used in daily life?
2013-08-17 12:57 hopperhtkn: 悪夢→まぼろし（幻
2013-08-17 12:57 hopperhtkn: no
2013-08-17 12:57 Fycho: only lyric
2013-08-17 12:57 hopperhtkn: Song or Novel 
2013-08-17 12:57 hopperhtkn: or manga
2013-08-17 12:58 Fycho: is it designed by artist or creators?
2013-08-17 12:58 Fycho: decided
2013-08-17 12:59 hopperhtkn: this song Lyrics by 水樹奈々 because artist
2013-08-17 12:59 Fycho: ok I see
2013-08-17 13:01 hopperhtkn: you can read in video upper from 恋愛？
2013-08-17 13:02 hopperhtkn: it's written ラブ
2013-08-17 13:02 hopperhtkn: same　（ラブ）
2013-08-17 13:03 hopperhtkn: ラブ
2013-08-17 13:03 hopperhtkn: 恋愛
2013-08-17 13:03 hopperhtkn: 恋愛（ラブ）したいっ！
2013-08-17 13:03 hopperhtkn: It's right I think
2013-08-17 13:03 Fycho: ok~
2013-08-17 13:04 Fycho: I will fix next update
2013-08-17 13:05 hopperhtkn: okay~
2013-08-17 13:05 hopperhtkn: you should use ！　（　）
2013-08-17 13:05 hopperhtkn: in unicode
2013-08-17 13:07 hopperhtkn: looking good :3
2013-08-17 13:08 hopperhtkn: !()→！（）
2013-08-17 13:08 hopperhtkn: ok_
2013-08-17 13:08 hopperhtkn: *?
2013-08-17 13:08 Fycho: 全角？
2013-08-17 13:08 hopperhtkn: yes
2013-08-17 13:08 hopperhtkn: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931786
2013-08-17 13:09 Fycho: this is 半角
2013-08-17 13:09 Fycho: IN ARTIST
2013-08-17 13:09 hopperhtkn: because english XD
2013-08-17 13:09 hopperhtkn: sry
2013-08-17 13:09 Fycho: 半角is wrong？
2013-08-17 13:09 hopperhtkn: under and upper
2013-08-17 13:09 hopperhtkn: plz see
2013-08-17 13:10 Fycho: np
2013-08-17 13:10 Fycho: np plz
2013-08-17 13:10 hopperhtkn: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/202860 Liliana Sisters - Life-Ru is LOVE-Ru!! (TV Size)]
2013-08-17 13:10 hopperhtkn: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/243610 Jesus-P - Death Should Not Have Taken Thee!]
2013-08-17 13:10 Fycho: ！
2013-08-17 13:11 Fycho: should I use 半角标点?
2013-08-17 13:11 hopperhtkn: japanese should use ！
2013-08-17 13:11 hopperhtkn: 半角 is wrong
2013-08-17 13:12 hopperhtkn: I cant read
2013-08-17 13:12 hopperhtkn: english name is 半角
2013-08-17 13:12 hopperhtkn: japanese name is 全角
2013-08-17 13:13 Fycho: yes~
2013-08-17 13:13 Fycho: I will 使用全角
2013-08-17 13:13 hopperhtkn: it's good :D
2013-08-17 13:17 Fycho: I fix it now
2013-08-17 13:20 Fycho: should it be（TV Size）
2013-08-17 13:20 hopperhtkn: TV size is english
2013-08-17 13:20 hopperhtkn: because 半角
2013-08-17 13:21 Fycho: OK~update it now
2013-08-17 13:21 hopperhtkn: if we need TVサイズ when we will use 全角
2013-08-17 13:22 Fycho: um~
2013-08-17 13:22 hopperhtkn: OK~
2013-08-17 13:23 Fycho: Rolling! Rolling!
2013-08-17 13:24 Fycho: this is 半角
2013-08-17 13:24 hopperhtkn: yes
2013-08-17 13:24 Fycho: but rolling isnot english
2013-08-17 13:24 hopperhtkn: why?
2013-08-17 13:24 hopperhtkn: rolling is english
2013-08-17 13:25 Fycho: ｔｈｅｒｅ　　ｉｓ　ｎｏ　ｗｏｒｄ
2013-08-17 13:25 Fycho: ｒｏｌｌｉｎｇ
2013-08-17 13:25 Fycho: Ｏ。Ｏ　
2013-08-17 13:25 hopperhtkn: ?
2013-08-17 13:25 hopperhtkn: rolling 回転
2013-08-17 13:25 Fycho: 　ｍｙ　入力法ｉｓ　ｂｒｏｋｅｎ
2013-08-17 13:26 hopperhtkn: not loli!!!
2013-08-17 13:26 hopperhtkn: XD
2013-08-17 13:26 Fycho: ＬＯＬＩｎｇ
2013-08-17 13:26 hopperhtkn: basket ball is rolling
2013-08-17 13:27 hopperhtkn: it's np
2013-08-17 13:27 Fycho: Ｉ　ｓｅｅ
2013-08-17 13:28 Fycho: ｔｈａｎｋ　ｙｏｕ
2013-08-17 13:28 hopperhtkn: your welcome~
2013-08-17 13:33 hopperhtkn: ah
2013-08-17 13:33 hopperhtkn: need spacing  tv size
2013-08-17 13:34 hopperhtkn: after ！
2013-08-17 13:34 Fycho: 全角 spacing or 半角？
2013-08-17 13:34 hopperhtkn: 半角
2013-08-17 13:37 Fycho: can‘t upload now ^^restart osu
2013-08-17 13:43 hopperhtkn: can I reply IRC mod?
2013-08-17 13:43 Fycho: ok~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
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Topic Starter
Fycho

Regou wrote:

媽啊要還債 其实昨天说了一半就掉线了，不mod也没事，谢谢了
[Insane]
00:11:618 (2) - 聲量再少一點應該會比較自然 40其实已经够小了
00:14:091 (2,4,5) - 感覺也是不太整齊,正三角? 改正了
00:18:047 - 這裡add note 不了
00:29:915 (2,3) - 重疊感覺不好 移开了
01:06:179 (1) - 尾降低聲量 懒了，打的时候影响不大
01:27:772 (2,3,4) - 歪了 哪歪了？

[Hard]
這hard好像有點難,HP-1?
00:11:618 (1) - 同Insane 好的
00:32:882 (4,1) - 不考慮Blanket? 不考虑了，顺flow
00:49:695 (3,4,5,1) - 抱歉，没发现有什么区别
00:51:014 (3,5) - 有點太靠近了 可以接受
01:08:651 (4,2) - ^
01:09:640 (4,1) - Blanket ok
01:27:772 (2,3,4) - Spacing ok

[Normal]
00:36:673 (2,3) - Improve Blanket ok

先這樣吧~Gl
thanks~~ :)
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
nothing to say. 提醒一下：
你在一些地方用了很难第一次读出的0.5x变速 当心被挑 一般情况下STR2可以解决 尽管如此 我认为这些地方x0.7就足够了 可以给人思考的空间
no kds
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Flower wrote:

nothing to say. 提醒一下：
你在一些地方用了很难第一次读出的0.5x变速 当心被挑 一般情况下STR2可以解决 尽管如此 我认为这些地方x0.7就足够了 可以给人思考的空间
no kds
thansk for pointing it out andstar， fixed;w;
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
mod4mod

General
clean

623's
00:07:003 (1) - remove whistle
00:08:651 - ^
00:08:322 (2) - add whistle
00:22:497 - use this hit sound ?http://puu.sh/43Kzs.wav
00:24:805 (4) - add whistle on head
00:26:783 (2) - ^
00:32:223 (2) - make brancket ? http://puu.sh/43KBJ.jpg
01:26:124 (1) - add finish

Normal
00:21:344 (4,5) - make a curve ? http://puu.sh/43LG5.jpg
00:22:497 (6) - same as 623's
00:39:805 (3,4,5) - make triangle
00:54:475 (1) - start at 00:54:475 and end at 00:55:959

Insane
00:09:640 (1) - add note. please follow vocal
00:14:915 (1) - same as another diff
00:50:190 (6,1) - make a jump is better. 00:50:190 (6) move it ? http://puu.sh/43MPw.jpg
01:07:003 (4) - stack

Hard
00:22:497 - same as
00:51:673 (6) - delete is ? it makes useless jump
00:56:618 (3) - end at 00:56:948 -
01:02:058 (5) - move to this http://puu.sh/43Nc6.jpg
01:02:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/43NcS.jpg

That's all
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Charles445
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