kelvinli wrote:
Hi
[General]
Offset feels very biased. try Offset:6010 in the second red line OK
Is there a video without chinese subtitles? If so, use it to replace the current one
Use Grid Size 4 (or even disable the grid snapping function) so you'll have an easier time snapping notes Thanks
[Hard]
The distance spacing is too small for a Hard. Use Alt+mousewheel to adjust the distance (you are using 0.7x currently, where generic hards tend to have 1.0x or something). Most overlap issues will be completely fixed after the adjustment. OK
The whole map is just too loud. Reduce the volume by 30% might help Sorry but how?
Lack of hitsounds detected...
I see you have abused the use of NC, NC should not be added too frequently, especially when this is a hard diff. Generally, NCs are added between 4 white lines, but it severely depends on how you map
00:00:676 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 sliders are very loud. I might even use soft for those if I were yuo Sorry but how?
00:07:307 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing Fixed
00:07:973 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:26:622 (3) - sliders repeating 2 times can be confusing Fixed
00:28:568 (5) - end this on the white tick Fixed
00:32:298 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:32:946 (5) - This slider is just weird as it is... There are no clues in the music in indicate the existence of a 1 1/2 slider Fixed
00:38:622 (5,1) - I don't understand this distance, it is like 3/2 beats apart Fixed
00:47:055 - feels empty.Add something here plox? What's plox?
00:50:136 (3,4,5) - very un-readable. Break it, use other patterns Fixed
00:57:271 - Add a stream here? No...
01:01:163 (4) - I would rather let it go further instead of reversing Fixed
01:04:244 (3,1) - This overlap is not pretty Fixed
01:11:703 (7,8,9) - The distance of these 3 are different from former notes, confusing! Fixed
01:13:163 - add note? Fixed
01:17:217 (6,1) - This spacing is sort of unpredictable, really. Make them closer or they'll be alone forever :/ Fixed
01:19:325 (4,1) - Now there is a small overlap, not that intuitive, right? Fixed
01:26:460 (1) - Instead of a spinner which ends at a weird spot, why not just map till the music really ends? The music is messy...
[Hitsound]
The lack of hitsounds results in the feeling of bland while playing this map.
In most generic maps, patterns on hitsounds can be easily seen. In a 4/4 beats map, there are 4 white lines per section, 1 long and 3 shorts, as in followings:
In modern music, which emphasize the 2nd and 4th beats, claps are added.(i.e. the 2nd and 4th white line) While whistles and finish are used depending on the situation, usually using background music as an indicator
As for your map, you might try >this< clap Thanks
Well in overall, the map is pretty decent as of yuor first map. Still a lot to learn. Play other maps and learn from others, it'll help improving your map as well
Im drunk
Thanks for modding^^
Thanks for modding^^koko31 wrote:
From ~Freshly Baked Mods~
Keep in mind all personal opinion. Hope I don't double up with above mod, apologising in advance.
Normal
___________________________Fixed
- 00:07:163 (2) - This? Fixed
- 00:23:703 (1) - This? No
- 00:28:568 (5) - Extend slider to white tick Fixed
- 00:39:271 (1) - This? Fixed
- 00:48:838 (4) - Shorten slider to white tick Fixedand add note 00:49:325 (5) What?
- 01:25:000 (2) - Similar fix as 00:07:163 (2)
Hard
___________________________Fixed
- 01:44:445 (3) - Change slider maybe? Suggestion below What time?
- 00:14:460 (1) - Weird, not in sync Fixed
- 00:19:000 (2) to 00:19:487 (5) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
- 00:24:027 (4) - Extend until white tick Fixed
- 00:26:298 (2) - Ctrl-G Fixed
- 00:59:379 (1) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
- 01:00:027 (1) - ^ Fixed
- 01:00:676 (1) - ^ Fixed
- 01:07:163 (2) - ^ Fixed
- 01:16:406 (4) - Weird, not in sync
General stuff as per previous post. Good luck!