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Mystearica
BPM: 100
Offset: I like -4 ms but you should get confirmation on this.
Add in a lead-in time to all difficulties, it starts too suddenly.
[Normal]
Maybe use a blank sound sample for slidertick.
Where are your hitsounds?
00:11:85 (3) - Spacing is inconsistent
00:12:45 (4,5) - Stuff like this seems pretty harsh for the easiest difficulty...
00:15:75 (3) - Spacing slightly off
00:28:95 (10,11,12) - I definitively would recommend not using this kind of placement for your easiest difficulty
00:31:65 (2,3,4) - Spacing again
00:39:00 - Redo this break, it shortens
00:59:85 (3,4) - Spacing slightly off
01:21:90 (6) - Remove this and the break, add a note on the blue tick at 01:21:90, at a note on the red tick after, then start a spinner on the white tick at 01:22:65 and end it on 01:25:05 and fade out its volume.
01:34:50 (5) - Spacing
02:02:10 (8) - Extend 1/4
Alright well, you have a lot of spacing inconsistencies and it's rather tiresome to find them all so please just go through this difficulty with Distance Snap on.
[JL's Short ver]
Why is the BPM correct here and not in Normal? =w=
In my opinion claps don't fit the song too well but if you must use them, reduce their volume a bit.
I also didn't like a couple places at the start where notes were stacked on the opposite end of sliders, I recommend not stacking these.
00:09:00 - Redo break
00:20:55 - Redo break
00:39:00 - Redo break
[Hard]
Again, claps. Reduce their volume or better yet, don't use them at all.
What are these random huge jumps?
Also go through this difficulty with distance snap on as well, I felt there were a couple spacing issues while playing but I couldn't play this through, sorry.
Don't forget to resnap and make sure sliders are still where they're supposed to be. This map is incomplete because Normal needs hitsounds...
Well...encouragement star I suppose.
Offset: I like -4 ms but you should get confirmation on this.
Add in a lead-in time to all difficulties, it starts too suddenly.
[Normal]
Maybe use a blank sound sample for slidertick.
Where are your hitsounds?
00:11:85 (3) - Spacing is inconsistent
00:12:45 (4,5) - Stuff like this seems pretty harsh for the easiest difficulty...
00:15:75 (3) - Spacing slightly off
00:28:95 (10,11,12) - I definitively would recommend not using this kind of placement for your easiest difficulty
00:31:65 (2,3,4) - Spacing again
00:39:00 - Redo this break, it shortens
00:59:85 (3,4) - Spacing slightly off
01:21:90 (6) - Remove this and the break, add a note on the blue tick at 01:21:90, at a note on the red tick after, then start a spinner on the white tick at 01:22:65 and end it on 01:25:05 and fade out its volume.
01:34:50 (5) - Spacing
02:02:10 (8) - Extend 1/4
Alright well, you have a lot of spacing inconsistencies and it's rather tiresome to find them all so please just go through this difficulty with Distance Snap on.
[JL's Short ver]
Why is the BPM correct here and not in Normal? =w=
In my opinion claps don't fit the song too well but if you must use them, reduce their volume a bit.
I also didn't like a couple places at the start where notes were stacked on the opposite end of sliders, I recommend not stacking these.
00:09:00 - Redo break
00:20:55 - Redo break
00:39:00 - Redo break
[Hard]
Again, claps. Reduce their volume or better yet, don't use them at all.
What are these random huge jumps?
Also go through this difficulty with distance snap on as well, I felt there were a couple spacing issues while playing but I couldn't play this through, sorry.
Don't forget to resnap and make sure sliders are still where they're supposed to be. This map is incomplete because Normal needs hitsounds...
Well...encouragement star I suppose.
Topic Starter
Many thanks.Mystearica wrote:
BPM: 100
Offset: I like -4 ms but you should get confirmation on this.
Add in a lead-in time to all difficulties, it starts too suddenly.
[Normal]
Maybe use a blank sound sample for slidertick.
Where are your hitsounds?
00:11:85 (3) - Spacing is inconsistent
00:12:45 (4,5) - Stuff like this seems pretty harsh for the easiest difficulty...
00:15:75 (3) - Spacing slightly off
00:28:95 (10,11,12) - I definitively would recommend not using this kind of placement for your easiest difficulty
00:31:65 (2,3,4) - Spacing again
00:39:00 - Redo this break, it shortens
00:59:85 (3,4) - Spacing slightly off
01:21:90 (6) - Remove this and the break, add a note on the blue tick at 01:21:90, at a note on the red tick after, then start a spinner on the white tick at 01:22:65 and end it on 01:25:05 and fade out its volume.
01:34:50 (5) - Spacing
02:02:10 (8) - Extend 1/4
Alright well, you have a lot of spacing inconsistencies and it's rather tiresome to find them all so please just go through this difficulty with Distance Snap on.
[JL's Short ver]
Why is the BPM correct here and not in Normal? =w=
In my opinion claps don't fit the song too well but if you must use them, reduce their volume a bit.
I also didn't like a couple places at the start where notes were stacked on the opposite end of sliders, I recommend not stacking these.
00:09:00 - Redo break
00:20:55 - Redo break
00:39:00 - Redo break
[Hard]
Again, claps. Reduce their volume or better yet, don't use them at all.
What are these random huge jumps?
Also go through this difficulty with distance snap on as well, I felt there were a couple spacing issues while playing but I couldn't play this through, sorry.
Don't forget to resnap and make sure sliders are still where they're supposed to be. This map is incomplete because Normal needs hitsounds...
Well...encouragement star I suppose.
I'll check it and make it better.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
i check it agian.
much better than before
and add a lot of hitsounds for you.
take what you need.
star for now
Download: Chata - Love Rice (xierbaliti) [Hard].osu
much better than before
and add a lot of hitsounds for you.
take what you need.
star for now
Download: Chata - Love Rice (xierbaliti) [Hard].osu
surprise~~~~~
star for u
star for u
Topic Starter
感谢 已修改Dr_dy wrote:
NORMAL
00:56:104 7 改成一个节拍长的slider怎么样？
一点想法= =
很赞的图。
[Overall]
- - Add tags and source to all difficulties
+ Nice clean, cute map
+ Nice use of hit sounds
- * 00:23:55 (6) - I'd align it to (3) and then space accordingly.
* 00:55:50 (6,7) - I don't know what this is snapped to in the song.
* 00:57:15 (1) - ^ Perhaps shortening the slider one tick and add a beat on the white tick after shortening?
* 01:07:65 (6) - New combo.
* 01:08:55 (1) - Remove new combo if you wish.
* 01:10:65 (5) - New combo.
* 02:43:65 (11) - Align with (10)
* 02:48:30 (7) - New combo and snap the end to 1/6
- * No problems found
- * 1/8th divisor? o_0
* 00:51:15 (2) - Repeat isn't necessary.
* 01:07:50 (1) - Snap to 1/6th
* 01:22:35 (7) - Inconsistent spacing.
* 01:57:15 (3) - Seems outta place to me, vocal snapping-wise.
* 02:48:30 (1) - Snap to 1/6th
* 02:58:20 (5,6,7) - Align with (4)
* 03:17:11 (2) - Seems too big of a jump, IMO..
*03:27:46 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Hi-light this all yourself and then you can see the outline and you can try to make the shape more definite and look better.
Topic Starter
thx all fixed
Normal
00:25:05 (9) - new combo
00:28:65 (9) - ^
JL's short ver.
00:08:854 - re-add break here
well that's it, just fix all breaks in this diff, they don't end right
Hard
Fix all breaks in this
01:04:65 (5) - new combo
01:06:15 (10) - ^
00:25:05 (9) - new combo
00:28:65 (9) - ^
JL's short ver.
00:08:854 - re-add break here
well that's it, just fix all breaks in this diff, they don't end right
Hard
Fix all breaks in this
01:04:65 (5) - new combo
01:06:15 (10) - ^
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
两弹一星很强力<_<v2b wrote:
两弹一星 >_>
谢谢你的mod -w-
修改完成
[JL's Short ver]
Why is the BPM correct here and not in Normal? =w= =v=
In my opinion claps don't fit the song too well but if you must use them, reduce their volume a bit. reduced , you says right
I also didn't like a couple places at the start where notes were stacked on the opposite end of sliders, I recommend not stacking these. i think everyone has their style , so i think i don't need fix them but thank you !
00:09:00 - Redo break
00:20:55 - Redo break
00:39:00 - Redo break 3 breaks were fixed
Sorry for my poor english
Why is the BPM correct here and not in Normal? =w= =v=
In my opinion claps don't fit the song too well but if you must use them, reduce their volume a bit. reduced , you says right
I also didn't like a couple places at the start where notes were stacked on the opposite end of sliders, I recommend not stacking these. i think everyone has their style , so i think i don't need fix them but thank you !
00:09:00 - Redo break
00:20:55 - Redo break
00:39:00 - Redo break 3 breaks were fixed
Sorry for my poor english
awesome map, cute !? charming!?
whatever
star
P.S:I'm very suck in last confusing streams......T_T
whatever
star
P.S:I'm very suck in last confusing streams......T_T
Well you need to use 1/6 snap to map this song (if you want to follow those vocals)
1/4 divisors don`t fit the song well
<Hard>
-1 overall diff is better
1/4 divisors don`t fit the song well
<Hard>
-1 overall diff is better
你有よつのはova的op吗?
Topic Starter
http://pickup.mofile.com/1721029147152933Nekomiya Nono wrote:
你有よつのはova的op吗?
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
Offset = 1055
Set a preview point
[Normal]
Resnap all notes.
00:19:804 - Add a break
[JL's Short ver.]
It's ok
[Hard]
Resnap all notes.
01:07:050 (1) - End this slider on red tick (01:07:954)
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
Offset = 1055
Set a preview point
[Normal]
Resnap all notes.
00:19:804 - Add a break
[JL's Short ver.]
It's ok
[Hard]
Resnap all notes.
01:07:050 (1) - End this slider on red tick (01:07:954)
Starred~
Topic Starter
before i fix this, i have to fix that alace said. ._.xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
Offset = 1055
Set a preview point
[Normal]
Resnap all notes.
00:19:804 - Add a break
[JL's Short ver.]
It's ok
[Hard]
Resnap all notes.
01:07:050 (1) - End this slider on red tick (01:07:954)
Starred~
I'll remake this map ,but it nees time.
back to WIP
lol...?
first map :D
:OOO
Oh, Yotsunoha =D
And
the song
BPM should be 200 imo.
~Normal~
03:26:754 (5) - 1/6 snapped
~Collab~
00:17:854 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 snapped
00:19:054 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:054 (4,5) - move right 1 grid (Lv4)
01:16:854 (2,3) - move left 2 grids (Lv4)
01:36:454 (9) - should be ended on red tick
01:39:354 (5) - 1/4 snapped
02:25:204 >>> 02:43:654 - I don't know this part, they're both 1/6 and 1/4 rhythm mixed >.<
But I recommend using 1/6 snaps (instrument sync)
03:07:054 (1,2,3) - 1/6 snapped
03:11:854 (3,1,2,3) - ^
03:16:654 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^
03:21:154 (4,5,6) - ^
03:23:704 (3,4,5) - ^
03:26:104 (4,1) - ^
03:36:829 - add note
03:36:904 (1) - end on 03:39:604 and silence it
Not sure if I missed something, it's a bit difficult to mod >_<
+Star
And
Can you send the Yotsunoha albums? >_<
BPM should be 200 imo.
~Normal~
03:26:754 (5) - 1/6 snapped
~Collab~
00:17:854 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 snapped
00:19:054 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:054 (4,5) - move right 1 grid (Lv4)
01:16:854 (2,3) - move left 2 grids (Lv4)
01:36:454 (9) - should be ended on red tick
01:39:354 (5) - 1/4 snapped
02:25:204 >>> 02:43:654 - I don't know this part, they're both 1/6 and 1/4 rhythm mixed >.<
But I recommend using 1/6 snaps (instrument sync)
03:07:054 (1,2,3) - 1/6 snapped
03:11:854 (3,1,2,3) - ^
03:16:654 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^
03:21:154 (4,5,6) - ^
03:23:704 (3,4,5) - ^
03:26:104 (4,1) - ^
03:36:829 - add note
03:36:904 (1) - end on 03:39:604 and silence it
Not sure if I missed something, it's a bit difficult to mod >_<
+Star
DJPop wrote:
Oh, Yotsunoha =D
AndCan you send the Yotsunoha albums? >_<
BPM should be 200 imo.
~Normal~
03:26:754 (5) - 1/6 snapped
~Collab~
00:17:854 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 snapped
00:19:054 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:054 (4,5) - move right 1 grid (Lv4)
01:16:854 (2,3) - move left 2 grids (Lv4)
01:36:454 (9) - should be ended on red tick
01:39:354 (5) - 1/4 snapped
02:25:204 >>> 02:43:654 - I don't know this part, they're both 1/6 and 1/4 rhythm mixed >.<
But I recommend using 1/6 snaps (instrument sync)
03:07:054 (1,2,3) - 1/6 snapped
03:11:854 (3,1,2,3) - ^
03:16:654 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^
03:21:154 (4,5,6) - ^
03:23:704 (3,4,5) - ^
03:26:104 (4,1) - ^
03:36:829 - add note
03:36:904 (1) - end on 03:39:604 and silence it
Not sure if I missed something, it's a bit difficult to mod >_<
+Star
those rhythm was confused me when im mapping , thx for your great help > <~
Topic Starter
[General]
countdown有必要么?
[Normal]
圈小一号感觉好看些
00:44:854 (1) - 和前面对应的话这里的开头该有个whistle?和后面接的也可以
00:51:354 (2) - 虽然是重音,但之前都歌词的话似乎该提前1/3?
01:01:954 (5) - whistle换到4
01:12:054 (3) - 本来就比较散了,都finish是不是有点重...
01:41:854 (1,4) - 这里提一串,可以在相应位置上加sliderwhistle,不过01:47:554 (3) - 可能要略变,想法是这里吵一点后面静下来就更明显
02:04:654 (5) - 建议减两个重复然后空拍-单circle开kiai
02:14:454 (3) - 和前面同
03:21:354 (1) - 换circle?
03:27:454 (1) - 这slider结尾点这么诡异有啥寓意么..
[Collab]
00:10:254 (5) - 这应该是1/6*4而不是1/8*5吧,别扭
00:55:654 (8) - 删,一直是vocal的话这加拍平添混乱
01:39:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这排版连续起来不好么为什么一定要分着来
02:27:654 (1) - 和前面连贯应该有whistle,后面一串同,或者索性把02:25:254 (1)的删了,但因为都是同音高再滑下去所以应该加
02:48:304 (3) - 删sliderwhistle和尾whistle
02:59:854 (4) - 删sliderwhistle
03:27:454 (1) - 从这里开始 xooxooxooxooxxxo oxxoxxoo xoxoxoox oxxoxoox xoxoxoxo oxoxoxox, 03:29:254 (1,2) - 这两个的sliderwhistle删掉.
countdown有必要么?
[Normal]
圈小一号感觉好看些
00:44:854 (1) - 和前面对应的话这里的开头该有个whistle?和后面接的也可以
00:51:354 (2) - 虽然是重音,但之前都歌词的话似乎该提前1/3?
01:01:954 (5) - whistle换到4
01:12:054 (3) - 本来就比较散了,都finish是不是有点重...
01:41:854 (1,4) - 这里提一串,可以在相应位置上加sliderwhistle,不过01:47:554 (3) - 可能要略变,想法是这里吵一点后面静下来就更明显
02:04:654 (5) - 建议减两个重复然后空拍-单circle开kiai
02:14:454 (3) - 和前面同
03:21:354 (1) - 换circle?
03:27:454 (1) - 这slider结尾点这么诡异有啥寓意么..
[Collab]
00:10:254 (5) - 这应该是1/6*4而不是1/8*5吧,别扭
00:55:654 (8) - 删,一直是vocal的话这加拍平添混乱
01:39:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这排版连续起来不好么为什么一定要分着来
02:27:654 (1) - 和前面连贯应该有whistle,后面一串同,或者索性把02:25:254 (1)的删了,但因为都是同音高再滑下去所以应该加
02:48:304 (3) - 删sliderwhistle和尾whistle
02:59:854 (4) - 删sliderwhistle
03:27:454 (1) - 从这里开始 xooxooxooxooxxxo oxxoxxoo xoxoxoox oxxoxoox xoxoxoxo oxoxoxox, 03:29:254 (1,2) - 这两个的sliderwhistle删掉.
Disable countdown on both difficulties!
Mp3 is 320 kbps! I'm gonna have to ask you to compress it.
Collab
03:07:204 (2) - Snap to 1/6
03:12:004 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^
That's it!
Mp3 is 320 kbps! I'm gonna have to ask you to compress it.
You can get away with 256kbps as well ;3whymeman wrote:
320kbit = ask to recompress the bitrate to 192. They should not be ranked as of now; no exceptions.
Collab
03:07:204 (2) - Snap to 1/6
03:12:004 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^
That's it!