NachoPiggy wrote:

Awesome map and great Storyboarding. No problems found. Just a tiny suggestion.

[Hard]
03:26:130 - Add a note added =3 I guess it also made my pattern pretty, i guess xD

Starred.

tieff wrote:

I love your SB. <3 ur maps too

[Normal]
00:14:45 (7,8) - Spacing. Its fine ~ said Alace xD
00:45:91 (4) - New combo? yes
01:40:72 (6) - Wtf? Loud... fixed >.> no more SB hitsound though
02:02:77 (5,6) - Spacing. O.o

[Hard]
01:35:53 (8,9) - Spacing.
01:40:725 - Wtf? So loud... Fixed

Star, cool map.
Hai, ty!!

animask wrote:

Don't forget to add a Source and Tags added

[Normal]
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks messy to me... it shouldn't be messy >.< I just copied the first four notes then paste the other 4 below the first 4 o.o buuuut. I fixed it.


[Hard]
00:07:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It might sound better if you continue with the clap pattern here too you won't be hearing any claps coz whistles are loud
01:15:42 (3) - Align with 1 lol fixed
01:28:40 (4) - Remove?
02:32:29 (5,1) - Whistles maybe?
02:37:80 (3) - ^
02:45:26 (1) - Raise hitsound volume a little
03:28:40 (1) - Change the whistle pattern here maybe? X nooo, i love it. you love it too right? =3

Wojjan wrote:

NORMAL

00:09:59 (1) - Delete this spinner. You'll see why when I get to the overall section. >w<
00:14:45 (7) - Align with 5 and 8
01:15:42 (5) - Move 1 lvl 3 grid up, and... Changed the whole pattern
01:15:75 (6) - align this with 1

Halven the BPM, place the slider tick rate at 2, and recalculate slider lengths. Kiai time will go slower, which would be better here. only on first chorus

HARD

00:01:81 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd delete this entire part. It allows for a build up, and you get to grow accustomed to the song. Also see the overall section. X no
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7) - This is hard enough without jumps D= X na-uh
00:22:23 (9,1) - Spacing ooh o.O
00:48:99 (1,2,3) - Move the entire combo to the blue ticks after every note! X no
01:52:40 (1) - Place on the blue tick BEFORE the current position X no >: sounds ugly
03:28:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change this into a break X no
Once the pitch of the guitar lowers at (7)
03:33:26 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spinner here! X no =-=

OVERALL

Your patterns are really wild O.O O.O
Disable count down, or storyboard one, so it will go like this: this will only be applied only on Normal, I'll ask someone who can make a cuty cute cute countdown =3
00:11:22 (3...)
00:11:54 (2...)
00:11:86 (1...)
00:12:19 (GO!!)
You've managed to pull of that awesome SB already, so a countdown will be a breeze! putting a SB countdown is nice, i'll try =3

You get a star!

K2J wrote:

[Hard]
Rename to Insane? Especially since it's over 10 mil. No need,My Hard is not actually that Insane , I think.
Storyboard: 02:28:40 (1) - Is this section of black intentional? Are the characters from the other difficulty supposed to drop in?this is intentional, the TO-RA-DO-RA-! characters is only for closing the Normal diff. ^-^

Otherwise,



Really nice-looking map, skin, storyboard. Keep it up!

1. Watch out! You can't have 2 Kiai fountains at almost the same time... Please regulate Kiai and limit yourself to place it only on the chorus. Also, it must be the same for both difficulties.

1. The difficulty ends with a black background, and it won't skip itself; It can be troublesome. Maybe just delete it?

Gens wrote:

[Kiai Time]

1. Watch out! You can't have 2 Kiai fountains at almost the same time... Please regulate Kiai and limit yourself to place it only on the chorus. Also, it must be the same for both difficulties.

ok fixed
[All Difficulties]
00:12:19 - You forgot to Inherit this section. if i did, it will ruin my map D+

gdeath wrote:

>Sir Minelli

I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked.
however WyndII have changed the timing and poped bubble by himself ;_;

star for you.WyndII

gdeath wrote:

>Sir Minelli

I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked.
however WyndII have changed the timing and poped bubble by himself ;_;

star for you.WyndII

gdeath wrote:

>WyndII

oh..you shouldn't give kds to me.xD
Well, It is not a problem that timing sections are placed right on note
but i have to admit that Sir Minelli'mod makes your map more beautiful.
i just wanna say.you shouldn't fix those like this kind of "problem"
coz your map has been bubbled.
anyway.good luck.

note:dont give kuds for the post this time xD

Sir Minelli wrote:

Just one last quick check before you get this ranked.
Few suggestions to make it better!

[Normal]

00:12:18 - Just wondering... Don't you feel that you should add a beat here to begin with?
00:14:77 (8) - new combo?
01:00:18 (1) - undo new combo and then new combo this: 01:00:50 (9) -
01:14:77 (3) - new combo?
02:28:007 (7) - new combo and then undo this new combo here: 02:28:40 (1) -


[Hard]

00:04:89 (7) - New combo undo and then undo this new combo here: 00:05:005 (1) -
00:54:34 - Add a timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases.
00:54:99 (1) - Move this timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases as well.
01:58:56 - Timing section a couple of ticks back? Soft sound ends, normal begins.
03:16:40 - Add another timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume increases.

Try the following:

03:30:67 (8) - New combo, and then undo this new combo here: 03:30:99 (1) -
03:32:29 (1) - Undo this new combo and then new combo this: 03:33:10 (15) -
03:33:59 (1) - Undo this new combo and this one here too: 03:34:56 (1) -


Nice map once again =)

WyndII wrote:

Sir Minelli wrote:

Just one last quick check before you get this ranked.
Few suggestions to make it better!

[Normal]

00:12:18 - Just wondering... Don't you feel that you should add a beat here to begin with? fine~
00:14:77 (8) - new combo? no, can you hear a finish? it means there is a change of chord thing in the instrument or it becomes faster.
01:00:18 (1) - undo new combo and then new combo this: 01:00:50 (9) - nice, i think you compared them to 01:13:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .....
01:14:77 (3) - new combo? no, duh.
02:28:007 (7) - new combo and then undo this new combo here: 02:28:40 (1) - um no please.


[Hard]

00:04:89 (7) - New combo undo and then undo this new combo here: 00:05:005 (1) - no,
00:54:34 - Add a timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases. it's fine D=
00:54:99 (1) - Move this timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases as well. it's really fine >.>
01:58:56 - Timing section a couple of ticks back? Soft sound ends, normal begins. it's fine, omg.
03:16:40 - Add another timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume increases. >___>

Try the following:

03:30:67 (8) - New combo, and then undo this new combo here: 03:30:99 (1) - i think it's fine?
03:32:29 (1) - Undo this new combo and then new combo this: 03:33:10 (15) -
03:33:59 (1) - Undo this new combo and this one here too: 03:34:56 (1) -

I think we don't have the same idea of putting combos.

Nice map once again =)
Thanks, but if only you could be more advance! T.T
still, tahnks~

Sir Minelli!!!!!!
>.>

WyndII wrote:

I think we don't have the same idea of putting combos.

WyndII wrote:

[b]Thanks, but if only you could be more advance! T.T

1. Equalize Kiai Time between all difficulties.
2. You need an easier difficulty.
3. Erase "Toradora Character Song Album" from the tags, since this is already in the source.
4. Filesize is a bit off-limits...
5. Yes, countdown really needs a touch-up.

1. Can you please fix the SB so I don't have to press skip at the end?

WyndII wrote:

Well, the song did not came from the anime but it came from the album, Toradora character song album, imo.