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Topic Starter
NachoPiggy wrote:
Awesome map and great Storyboarding. No problems found. Just a tiny suggestion.
[Hard]
03:26:130 - Add a note added =3 I guess it also made my pattern pretty, i guess xD
Starred.
tieff wrote:
I love your SB. <3 ur maps too
[Normal]
00:14:45 (7,8) - Spacing. Its fine ~ said Alace xD
00:45:91 (4) - New combo? yes
01:40:72 (6) - Wtf? Loud... fixed >.> no more SB hitsound though
02:02:77 (5,6) - Spacing. O.o
[Hard]
01:35:53 (8,9) - Spacing.
01:40:725 - Wtf? So loud... Fixed
Star, cool map.
Hai, ty!!
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cool map
i loved the SB
just one thing that catch my attention:
Hard
00:12:18 (1) - this note is too fast after the spinner
star
good luck
i loved the SB
just one thing that catch my attention:
Hard
00:12:18 (1) - this note is too fast after the spinner
star
good luck
Nice Slideshow Storyboard 
Lower hitsound audio a bit, the music and beatmap sounds clash a bit too much
Normal-
00:43:32 (1,2,3) - I don't like this in Normal, its too fast compared to the rest of the map... maybe reduce (1,2) by 1/2 beat, move (2) forward by 1/4 and reduce one repeat on 3? <<< what I suggested follows the vocal though
The notes are placed too scattered for me to Nazi~
Hard-
So much placement I want to nazi... but since its so scattered (design?), I shouldn't
Nazi-
00:10:24 (2) - add clap?
00:39:26 - felt like a note should be here (comparing to the last two combos that have this fast pace)
The map itself is hard to follow... oh well, nothing technically wrong
Redo Breaks for both diffs
Its faint, but I can see the light dots on the storyboard end (for To-Ra-Do-Ra-! and that skip), that's kinda... umm noticable for me, no biggie, but please trim those off (if you know what I'm talking about)
And I doubt people would understand the skip arrow right away for Normal, so just turn the rest of the storyboarding as Diff specific for Hard?
Lower hitsound audio a bit, the music and beatmap sounds clash a bit too much
Normal-
00:43:32 (1,2,3) - I don't like this in Normal, its too fast compared to the rest of the map... maybe reduce (1,2) by 1/2 beat, move (2) forward by 1/4 and reduce one repeat on 3? <<< what I suggested follows the vocal though
The notes are placed too scattered for me to Nazi~
Hard-
So much placement I want to nazi... but since its so scattered (design?), I shouldn't
Nazi-
00:10:24 (2) - add clap?
00:39:26 - felt like a note should be here (comparing to the last two combos that have this fast pace)
The map itself is hard to follow... oh well, nothing technically wrong
Redo Breaks for both diffs
Its faint, but I can see the light dots on the storyboard end (for To-Ra-Do-Ra-! and that skip), that's kinda... umm noticable for me, no biggie, but please trim those off (if you know what I'm talking about)
And I doubt people would understand the skip arrow right away for Normal, so just turn the rest of the storyboarding as Diff specific for Hard?
Hard:
The spacing changes are a little hard to make out, imo. And the whistles towards the end are a little random - I mean, they sound nice but, yeah.
Normal:
When I choose this difficulty, a bg appears. Intentional?
02:19:15 (1) - Woah, really long spinner! You should end it at 02:24:509 imo.
Have a star~!
The spacing changes are a little hard to make out, imo. And the whistles towards the end are a little random - I mean, they sound nice but, yeah.
Normal:
When I choose this difficulty, a bg appears. Intentional?
02:19:15 (1) - Woah, really long spinner! You should end it at 02:24:509 imo.
Have a star~!
Topic Starter
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No need to really re-map anything in [Hard]
Great map, starred :3
No need to really re-map anything in [Hard]
Great map, starred :3
Don't forget to add a Source and Tags
[Normal]
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks messy to me...
[Hard]
00:07:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It might sound better if you continue with the clap pattern here too
01:15:42 (3) - Align with 1
01:28:40 (4) - Remove?
02:32:29 (5,1) - Whistles maybe?
02:37:80 (3) - ^
02:45:26 (1) - Raise hitsound volume a little
03:28:40 (1) - Change the whistle pattern here maybe?
[Normal]
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks messy to me...
[Hard]
00:07:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It might sound better if you continue with the clap pattern here too
01:15:42 (3) - Align with 1
01:28:40 (4) - Remove?
02:32:29 (5,1) - Whistles maybe?
02:37:80 (3) - ^
02:45:26 (1) - Raise hitsound volume a little
03:28:40 (1) - Change the whistle pattern here maybe?
NORMAL
00:09:59 (1) - Delete this spinner. You'll see why when I get to the overall section.
00:14:45 (7) - Align with 5 and 8
01:15:42 (5) - Move 1 lvl 3 grid up, and...
01:15:75 (6) - align this with 1
Halven the BPM, place the slider tick rate at 2, and recalculate slider lengths. Kiai time will go slower, which would be better here.
HARD
00:01:81 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd delete this entire part. It allows for a build up, and you get to grow accustomed to the song. Also see the overall section.
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7) - This is hard enough without jumps D=
00:22:23 (9,1) - Spacing
00:48:99 (1,2,3) - Move the entire combo to the blue ticks after every note!
01:52:40 (1) - Place on the blue tick BEFORE the current position
03:28:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change this into a break
Once the pitch of the guitar lowers at (7)
03:33:26 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spinner here!
OVERALL
Your patterns are really wild O.O
Disable count down, or storyboard one, so it will go like this:
00:11:22 (3...)
00:11:54 (2...)
00:11:86 (1...)
00:12:19 (GO!!)
You've managed to pull of that awesome SB already, so a countdown will be a breeze!
You get a star!
00:09:59 (1) - Delete this spinner. You'll see why when I get to the overall section.
00:14:45 (7) - Align with 5 and 8
01:15:42 (5) - Move 1 lvl 3 grid up, and...
01:15:75 (6) - align this with 1
Halven the BPM, place the slider tick rate at 2, and recalculate slider lengths. Kiai time will go slower, which would be better here.
HARD
00:01:81 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd delete this entire part. It allows for a build up, and you get to grow accustomed to the song. Also see the overall section.
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7) - This is hard enough without jumps D=
00:22:23 (9,1) - Spacing
00:48:99 (1,2,3) - Move the entire combo to the blue ticks after every note!
01:52:40 (1) - Place on the blue tick BEFORE the current position
03:28:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change this into a break
Once the pitch of the guitar lowers at (7)
03:33:26 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spinner here!
OVERALL
Your patterns are really wild O.O
Disable count down, or storyboard one, so it will go like this:
00:11:22 (3...)
00:11:54 (2...)
00:11:86 (1...)
00:12:19 (GO!!)
You've managed to pull of that awesome SB already, so a countdown will be a breeze!
You get a star!
Topic Starter
animask wrote:
Don't forget to add a Source and Tagsadded
[Normal]
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks messy to me...
[Hard]
00:07:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It might sound better if you continue with the clap pattern here too
01:15:42 (3) - Align with 1
01:28:40 (4) - Remove?
02:32:29 (5,1) - Whistles maybe?
02:37:80 (3) - ^
02:45:26 (1) - Raise hitsound volume a little
03:28:40 (1) - Change the whistle pattern here maybe? X nooo, i love it. you love it too right? =3
Thanks guys!Wojjan wrote:
NORMAL
00:09:59 (1) - Delete this spinner. You'll see why when I get to the overall section.
00:14:45 (7) - Align with 5 and 8
01:15:42 (5) - Move 1 lvl 3 grid up, and...
01:15:75 (6) - align this with 1
Halven the BPM, place the slider tick rate at 2, and recalculate slider lengths. Kiai time will go slower, which would be better here.
HARD
00:01:81 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd delete this entire part. It allows for a build up, and you get to grow accustomed to the song. Also see the overall section. X no
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7) - This is hard enough without jumps D= X na-uh
00:22:23 (9,1) - Spacing
00:48:99 (1,2,3) - Move the entire combo to the blue ticks after every note! X no
01:52:40 (1) - Place on the blue tick BEFORE the current position X no >: sounds ugly
03:28:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change this into a break X no
Once the pitch of the guitar lowers at (7)
03:33:26 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spinner here! X no =-=
OVERALL
Your patterns are really wild O.O
Disable count down, or storyboard one, so it will go like this:
00:11:22 (3...)
00:11:54 (2...)
00:11:86 (1...)
00:12:19 (GO!!)
You've managed to pull of that awesome SB already, so a countdown will be a breeze!
You get a star!
[Normal]
00:57:91 (2) - New combo.
01:14:77 (3) - ^
01:34:88 (4) - ^
02:18:34 (3) - ^
[Hard]
00:04:08 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:05 (3) - New combo.
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7,8) - No
not the jumps...
02:28:72 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:29:37 (1) - ^
02:30:02 (1) - ^
02:30:67 (1) - ^
02:54:50 (1) - Remove this new combo.
02:54:67 (1) - ^
02:54:99 (1) - ^
02:55:15 (1) - ^
Starred *
00:57:91 (2) - New combo.
01:14:77 (3) - ^
01:34:88 (4) - ^
02:18:34 (3) - ^
[Hard]
00:04:08 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:05 (3) - New combo.
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7,8) - No
not the jumps...02:28:72 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:29:37 (1) - ^
02:30:02 (1) - ^
02:30:67 (1) - ^
02:54:50 (1) - Remove this new combo.
02:54:67 (1) - ^
02:54:99 (1) - ^
02:55:15 (1) - ^
Starred *
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Great map! There really isn't ANYTHING wrong! The SB was REALLY good. Like JInxyjem said, the SB feels like a video. It's awesome!
I MY~~Niiiiiiiiice SB~~~
Normal~
02:19:15 (1) - Suggestion: Maybe start this at 02:19:32 instead.
WOW! Nice SB at the end lol.
Hard~
Awesome SB! =P
Didn't see anything wrong.
Normal~
02:19:15 (1) - Suggestion: Maybe start this at 02:19:32 instead.
WOW! Nice SB at the end lol.
Hard~
Awesome SB! =P
Didn't see anything wrong.
[Normal]
Nice!
[Hard]
Rename to Insane? Especially since it's over 10 mil.
Storyboard: 02:28:40 (1) - Is this section of black intentional? Are the characters from the other difficulty supposed to drop in?
Otherwise,
Really nice-looking map, skin, storyboard. Keep it up!
Nice!
[Hard]
Rename to Insane? Especially since it's over 10 mil.
Storyboard: 02:28:40 (1) - Is this section of black intentional? Are the characters from the other difficulty supposed to drop in?
Otherwise,
Really nice-looking map, skin, storyboard. Keep it up!
Topic Starter
THANKS!!!!!!XDK2J wrote:
[Hard]
Rename to Insane? Especially since it's over 10 mil. No need,My Hard is not actually that Insane , I think.
Storyboard: 02:28:40 (1) - Is this section of black intentional? Are the characters from the other difficulty supposed to drop in?this is intentional, the TO-RA-DO-RA-! characters is only for closing the Normal diff. ^-^
Otherwise,
Really nice-looking map, skin, storyboard. Keep it up!
I see no problems here
Nice BG
Starred
Nice BG
Starred
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make a mark
I'll download this map if the download speed return to normal
I'll download this map if the download speed return to normal
[Kiai Time]
00:12:19 - You forgot to Inherit this section.
[Normal]
02:19:15 (1) - Same goes for this spinner.
[Hard]
00:12:50 (1,2) - You're keeping a steady rhythm here, so these sliders sound out of place.
~ ~ ~
Starred. Honestly, I'm not a fan of girlish anime songs, but here you go.
- Watch out! You can't have 2 Kiai fountains at almost the same time... Please regulate Kiai and limit yourself to place it only on the chorus. Also, it must be the same for both difficulties.
00:12:19 - You forgot to Inherit this section.
[Normal]
- The difficulty ends with a black background, and it won't skip itself; It can be troublesome. Maybe just delete it?
02:19:15 (1) - Same goes for this spinner.
[Hard]
00:12:50 (1,2) - You're keeping a steady rhythm here, so these sliders sound out of place.
~ ~ ~
Starred. Honestly, I'm not a fan of girlish anime songs, but here you go.
Very good~
[Normal]
02:28:08(1)-Remove new combo?
02:28:40(2)-New combo?
02:30:67(x)-Add a note here?
[Hard]
00:51:75(3)-Move to 00:51:91?
00:52:08(4)-Move to 00:52:24?
00:52:40(5)-Remove?
00:52:73(6)-Move to 00:52:56?
00:52:89(x)-Add a note here?
01:55:32(3)-Move to 01:55:48?
01:55:64(4)-Move to 01:55:81?
01:55:97(5)-Move to 01:56:13?
01:56:29(6)-Move to 01:56:46?
Star~
[Normal]
02:28:08(1)-Remove new combo?
02:28:40(2)-New combo?
02:30:67(x)-Add a note here?
[Hard]
00:51:75(3)-Move to 00:51:91?
00:52:08(4)-Move to 00:52:24?
00:52:40(5)-Remove?
00:52:73(6)-Move to 00:52:56?
00:52:89(x)-Add a note here?
01:55:32(3)-Move to 01:55:48?
01:55:64(4)-Move to 01:55:81?
01:55:97(5)-Move to 01:56:13?
01:56:29(6)-Move to 01:56:46?
Star~
Topic Starter
I'm so sorry to the previous modders D=
Im actually remapping Hard!
But Thanks for checking!!
I should post this in OP
Im actually remapping Hard!
But Thanks for checking!!
I should post this in OP
You should probably have moved this from Pending since it isn't complete.
Hurry up and finish Hard, I wanna bubble or rank this. =(
Topic Starter
So JJJ, moved this to WIP
and Hito convinced me to work with this, and i did aaand
you cant rank this after I uploaded the new version >.> needs other BAT approval right? but
you can bubble it
and now it's done
Some clarifications:
and Hito convinced me to work with this, and i did aaand
you cant rank this after I uploaded the new version >.> needs other BAT approval right? but
you can bubble it
and now it's done
Some clarifications:
Gens wrote:
[Kiai Time]
- Watch out! You can't have 2 Kiai fountains at almost the same time... Please regulate Kiai and limit yourself to place it only on the chorus. Also, it must be the same for both difficulties.
[All Difficulties]
00:12:19 - You forgot to Inherit this section.
Awesome. Still awesome. More awesome? Maybe. Just... <3
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Hmmm....
[Normal]
00:14:45 (7,8) - This is the only jump I see in this difficulty, though normal wouldn't feel right with jumps honestly. Please check into this.
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In the shape here, (5) is kidna off. It can look much neater if lined up with (2).
02:02:13 (3) - Bottomed out of the window...
Make sure to double check the spacing on this difficulty.
[Hard]
Seems okay, though the combo placement feels a bit odd...
Another thing I want to point out is that you have a large amount of the SB objects in .jpeg format instead of .png. I know .png's take a great load of space but it does help with the quality as i'm seeing the pixels being streched out in a way that makes it look less neat (example at 02:08:94). Make sure to check into that as well. After the fixes are done, let me know and i'll check into bubbling.
[Normal]
00:14:45 (7,8) - This is the only jump I see in this difficulty, though normal wouldn't feel right with jumps honestly. Please check into this.
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In the shape here, (5) is kidna off. It can look much neater if lined up with (2).
02:02:13 (3) - Bottomed out of the window...
Make sure to double check the spacing on this difficulty.
[Hard]
Seems okay, though the combo placement feels a bit odd...
Another thing I want to point out is that you have a large amount of the SB objects in .jpeg format instead of .png. I know .png's take a great load of space but it does help with the quality as i'm seeing the pixels being streched out in a way that makes it look less neat (example at 02:08:94). Make sure to check into that as well. After the fixes are done, let me know and i'll check into bubbling.
Topic Starter
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Almost...
[Normal]
01:10:56 (8) - Not lined up with (3) above it.
Just that small fix and then i'll bubble.
Edit: Error fixed and bubble for you.
[Normal]
01:10:56 (8) - Not lined up with (3) above it.
Just that small fix and then i'll bubble.
Edit: Error fixed and bubble for you.
A well made map needs well placed timing sections~
[Normal]
01:26:13 - What is this timing section doing here? It doesn't change anything.
[Hard]
The following timing sections are placed right on top of the beats / sliders.
If a player clicks to early, he will get the previous timing section sound / properties.
Place them a couple of ticks before.
00:48:83 -
00:54:34 -
00:54:99 -
01:20:94 -
01:58:56 -
02:28:40 - Timing section doesn't change anything. (also, if you are adding something to it, make sure to place it before the beat)
Again, the following timing sections are placed right on top of the beats / sliders:
02:45:26 -
02:54:34 -
02:55:64 -
Other than that, nice map.
[Normal]
01:26:13 - What is this timing section doing here? It doesn't change anything.
[Hard]
The following timing sections are placed right on top of the beats / sliders.
If a player clicks to early, he will get the previous timing section sound / properties.
Place them a couple of ticks before.
00:48:83 -
00:54:34 -
00:54:99 -
01:20:94 -
01:58:56 -
02:28:40 - Timing section doesn't change anything. (also, if you are adding something to it, make sure to place it before the beat)
Again, the following timing sections are placed right on top of the beats / sliders:
02:45:26 -
02:54:34 -
02:55:64 -
Other than that, nice map.
Topic Starter
I have changed the placement of the sections
>Sir Minelli
I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked.
however WyndII have changed the timing and poped bubble by himself ;_;
star for you.WyndII
I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked.
however WyndII have changed the timing and poped bubble by himself ;_;
star for you.WyndII
Topic Starter
Thanks gdeath.gdeath wrote:
>Sir Minelli
I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked.
however WyndII have changed the timing and poped bubble by himself ;_;
star for you.WyndII
But i guess even without the bubble this can be ranked right?
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You need a bubble first to get it ranked, but you did good by replacing those timing sections.
Just ask the BAT who bubbled your map to bubble it again.
Just ask the BAT who bubbled your map to bubble it again.
Also WyndII, you shouldn't give kudosu to posts like this.. It will most likely get denied.gdeath wrote:
>Sir Minelli
I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked.
however WyndII have changed the timing and poped bubble by himself ;_;
star for you.WyndII
gdeath, it wouldn't prevent it of being ranked, but so what? You shouldn't be a conformist.
EDIT:
I just read that. and IT IS A PROBLEM. If you want certain parts of your map to start with an specific sound, you will need to play the timing sections correctly.gdeath wrote:
>WyndII
oh..you shouldn't give kds to me.xD
Well, It is not a problem that timing sections are placed right on note
but i have to admit that Sir Minelli'mod makes your map more beautiful.
i just wanna say.you shouldn't fix those like this kind of "problem"
coz your map has been bubbled.
anyway.good luck.
note:dont give kuds for the post this time xD
Also, I'm not making the map beautiful, I'm fixing future problems.
>Sir Minelli
you know.there are a lot of ranked maps like this kind of "problems"
What i wanna express is even if its not be fixed,players also can play this map well.
however your mod is fine and make his map better.(not more beautiful.i must say sorry.because of my poor english
that led to the wrong expression before)
of course.since he has fixed this "problem',let's stop talking about more.
That's my last post in this thread. I hope you will read it from a neutral perspective and really just try to understand what I'm trying to say. That's all.
you know.there are a lot of ranked maps like this kind of "problems"
What i wanna express is even if its not be fixed,players also can play this map well.
however your mod is fine and make his map better.(not more beautiful.i must say sorry.because of my poor english
that led to the wrong expression before)
of course.since he has fixed this "problem',let's stop talking about more.
That's my last post in this thread. I hope you will read it from a neutral perspective and really just try to understand what I'm trying to say. That's all.
Re-bubbled. WHY IS THIS NOT RANKED YET!? *glares at other BATs*
Just one last quick check before you get this ranked.
Few suggestions to make it better!
[Normal]
00:12:18 - Just wondering... Don't you feel that you should add a beat here to begin with?
00:14:77 (8) - new combo?
01:00:18 (1) - undo new combo and then new combo this: 01:00:50 (9) -
01:14:77 (3) - new combo?
02:28:007 (7) - new combo and then undo this new combo here: 02:28:40 (1) -
[Hard]
00:04:89 (7) - New combo undo and then undo this new combo here: 00:05:005 (1) -
00:54:34 - Add a timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases.
00:54:99 (1) - Move this timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases as well.
01:58:56 - Timing section a couple of ticks back? Soft sound ends, normal begins.
03:16:40 - Add another timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume increases.
Try the following:
03:30:67 (8) - New combo, and then undo this new combo here: 03:30:99 (1) -
03:32:29 (1) - Undo this new combo and then new combo this: 03:33:10 (15) -
03:33:59 (1) - Undo this new combo and this one here too: 03:34:56 (1) -
Nice map once again =)
Few suggestions to make it better!
[Normal]
00:12:18 - Just wondering... Don't you feel that you should add a beat here to begin with?
00:14:77 (8) - new combo?
01:00:18 (1) - undo new combo and then new combo this: 01:00:50 (9) -
01:14:77 (3) - new combo?
02:28:007 (7) - new combo and then undo this new combo here: 02:28:40 (1) -
[Hard]
00:04:89 (7) - New combo undo and then undo this new combo here: 00:05:005 (1) -
00:54:34 - Add a timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases.
00:54:99 (1) - Move this timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases as well.
01:58:56 - Timing section a couple of ticks back? Soft sound ends, normal begins.
03:16:40 - Add another timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume increases.
Try the following:
03:30:67 (8) - New combo, and then undo this new combo here: 03:30:99 (1) -
03:32:29 (1) - Undo this new combo and then new combo this: 03:33:10 (15) -
03:33:59 (1) - Undo this new combo and this one here too: 03:34:56 (1) -
Nice map once again =)
Topic Starter
Sir Minelli!!!!!!Sir Minelli wrote:
Just one last quick check before you get this ranked.
Few suggestions to make it better!
[Normal]
00:12:18 - Just wondering... Don't you feel that you should add a beat here to begin with?
00:14:77 (8) - new combo?
01:00:18 (1) - undo new combo and then new combo this: 01:00:50 (9) -
01:14:77 (3) - new combo?
02:28:007 (7) - new combo and then undo this new combo here: 02:28:40 (1) -
[Hard]
00:04:89 (7) - New combo undo and then undo this new combo here: 00:05:005 (1) -
00:54:34 - Add a timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases.
00:54:99 (1) - Move this timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases as well.
01:58:56 - Timing section a couple of ticks back? Soft sound ends, normal begins.
03:16:40 - Add another timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume increases.
Try the following:
03:30:67 (8) - New combo, and then undo this new combo here: 03:30:99 (1) -
03:32:29 (1) - Undo this new combo and then new combo this: 03:33:10 (15) -
03:33:59 (1) - Undo this new combo and this one here too: 03:34:56 (1) -
Nice map once again =)
>.>
Topic Starter
im sorry Htio T.TWyndII wrote:
Sir Minelli!!!!!!Sir Minelli wrote:
Just one last quick check before you get this ranked.
Few suggestions to make it better!
[Normal]
00:12:18 - Just wondering... Don't you feel that you should add a beat here to begin with?
00:14:77 (8) - new combo?
01:00:18 (1) - undo new combo and then new combo this: 01:00:50 (9) -
01:14:77 (3) - new combo?
02:28:007 (7) - new combo and then undo this new combo here: 02:28:40 (1) -
[Hard]
00:04:89 (7) - New combo undo and then undo this new combo here: 00:05:005 (1) -
00:54:34 - Add a timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases.
00:54:99 (1) - Move this timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume decreases as well.
01:58:56 - Timing section a couple of ticks back? Soft sound ends, normal begins.
03:16:40 - Add another timing section a couple of ticks back? Volume increases.
Try the following:
03:30:67 (8) - New combo, and then undo this new combo here: 03:30:99 (1) -
03:32:29 (1) - Undo this new combo and then new combo this: 03:33:10 (15) -
03:33:59 (1) - Undo this new combo and this one here too: 03:34:56 (1) -
I think we don't have the same idea of putting combos.
Nice map once again =)
Thanks, but if only you could be more advance! T.T
still, tahnks~
>.>
I believe we don't.WyndII wrote:
I think we don't have the same idea of putting combos.
There is nothing to be "more advance" here at all. Those were only suggestions as I said.WyndII wrote:
[b]Thanks, but if only you could be more advance! T.T
~Also, the timing sections that you said were fine, from my point of view NOT fine.
If a player clicks too early, they WILL get the lowered / increased sound~
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Normal]
Resnap all notes. (This 00:12:185 (1) isn't snapped!!)
00:30:067 (6) - New combo
[Hard]
It's ok
Nice *w*
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Normal]
Resnap all notes. (This 00:12:185 (1) isn't snapped!!)
00:30:067 (6) - New combo
[Hard]
It's ok
Nice *w*
Starred~
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
^ It's AIMod, ftw. >.>
Thanks xxheroxx~
fixed
Thanks xxheroxx~
fixed
I understand after having this map pointed out to me why it's at the SP it is and it's still not bubbled or ranked.
Your timing is fine. The SB is satisfactory. The skin is horrible and Hard difficulty is an absolute joke.
The countdown images for the skins are completely unacceptable. Find ones that don't suck - use gelbooru if you're having problems (and I define suck as 'ripped straight from the anime'). The kiai is completely inconsistent between the difficulties and to top it off, you make no effort either in mapping style or SB to even remotely notify the person of the seemingly random BPM/velocity shifts that accompany various sections in your map.
Then to top it off, you randomly switch between 0.8-1.2x spacing without providing any notification at all. You might as well have not used distance snap to begin with if you're going to shift between them as abruptly as you have. Let's fix this, shall we?
Equalize kiai between normal and hard (for the durations which are applicable at least)
[Hard]
00:12:050 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
00:17:037 (1) - Spacing notification here
00:19:096 (1) - Spacing notification here
00:43:031 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
00:54:099 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here (+ spacing)
01:05:037 (1) - This is just ridiculous. Don't do this. Nobody likes phantom sliders. I swear they're even unrankable.
01:10:088 (1) - Spacing notification here
01:46:088 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
01:58:056 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
02:17:004 (1) - Remove new combo
02:38:077 (5) - Remove this beat
02:45:026 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here (+ spacing)
02:54:034 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here (+ spacing)
I'm not starring this until you at least attempt to fix the skin.
Your timing is fine. The SB is satisfactory. The skin is horrible and Hard difficulty is an absolute joke.
The countdown images for the skins are completely unacceptable. Find ones that don't suck - use gelbooru if you're having problems (and I define suck as 'ripped straight from the anime'). The kiai is completely inconsistent between the difficulties and to top it off, you make no effort either in mapping style or SB to even remotely notify the person of the seemingly random BPM/velocity shifts that accompany various sections in your map.
Then to top it off, you randomly switch between 0.8-1.2x spacing without providing any notification at all. You might as well have not used distance snap to begin with if you're going to shift between them as abruptly as you have. Let's fix this, shall we?
Equalize kiai between normal and hard (for the durations which are applicable at least)
[Hard]
00:12:050 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
00:17:037 (1) - Spacing notification here
00:19:096 (1) - Spacing notification here
00:43:031 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
00:54:099 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here (+ spacing)
01:05:037 (1) - This is just ridiculous. Don't do this. Nobody likes phantom sliders. I swear they're even unrankable.
01:10:088 (1) - Spacing notification here
01:46:088 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
01:58:056 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here
02:17:004 (1) - Remove new combo
02:38:077 (5) - Remove this beat
02:45:026 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here (+ spacing)
02:54:034 (1) - Velocity/BPM notification here (+ spacing)
I'm not starring this until you at least attempt to fix the skin.
Topic Starter
lol, and i thought the bats were aware of this
Topic Starter
geez, don't worry, this is going to be remapped. geez
kugimin~ <3
Topic Starter
Change everything and ignored some/most. 
New HARD!! yay!!
simplified and no skin changes >.> gawd.
New HARD!! yay!!
simplified and no skin changes >.> gawd.
[General]
02:40:076 - Add a beat here.
02:54:022 (8,9) - Unexpected and bad jump.
03:16:401 - STROBES AAAH I don't like them.
~ ~ ~
Yep.
- Equalize Kiai Time between all difficulties.
- You need an easier difficulty.
- Erase "Toradora Character Song Album" from the tags, since this is already in the source.
- Filesize is a bit off-limits...
- Yes, countdown really needs a touch-up.
- Can you please fix the SB so I don't have to press skip at the end?
02:40:076 - Add a beat here.
02:54:022 (8,9) - Unexpected and bad jump.
03:16:401 - STROBES AAAH I don't like them.
~ ~ ~
Yep.
Topic Starter
Thanks Gens, followed most of them
Man, This was almost graveyarded..phew
Man, This was almost graveyarded..phew
ah, what's wrong with it? c'mon BATs
Hmm.. I'm sorry about this situation.
I suggest you revive this map and try again for it be ranked.
BATs never come by themselves without special or personal reason.
I suggest you revive this map and try again for it be ranked.
BATs never come by themselves without special or personal reason.
This kind of slipped under the radar, my apologies.
If you'd like it revived, let me know via PM and I'll do that and mod it to see if the changes you've implemented have fixed any of the problems I addressed before.
If you'd like it revived, let me know via PM and I'll do that and mod it to see if the changes you've implemented have fixed any of the problems I addressed before.
Revived
This map needs a better mod.
Get it ranked already.
Kasi nga naman, tinatamad. D:
Get it ranked already.
Kasi nga naman, tinatamad. D:
Topic Starter
wooo! jockeytiyan! You just made me update my map! XD 
arigatou, ne?
arigatou, ne?
Topic Starter
Well, the song did not came from the anime but it came from the album, Toradora character song album, imo.
Album does not belong into Source ;__;WyndII wrote:
Well, the song did not came from the anime but it came from the album, Toradora character song album, imo.
I'll kill you if you don't rank this!
....I love this so much...T T
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