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Kugimiya Rie and Shiraishi Ryoko - Karakoi ~Dakara Shoujo wa

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Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Ichigo-Sora
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年11月15日 at 20:13:44

Artist: Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko
Title: Karakoi ~Dakara Shoujo wa Koi wo Suru~
Source: Hayate no Gotoku Season 2
Tags: tv size ending hayate no gotoku shiraishi ryoko
BPM: 178
Filesize: 11770kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Combat Butler (4.94 stars, 202 notes)
  2. First Meeting (1.35 stars, 61 notes)
  3. Ojou-sama (4.22 stars, 117 notes)
Download: Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko - Karakoi ~Dakara Shoujo wa Koi wo Suru~
Download: Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko - Karakoi ~Dakara Shoujo wa Koi wo Suru~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd ending theme for the 2nd season of Hayate no Gotoku!!
Also my 2nd beatmap :P

Thanks to everyone who modded my map ^^

- Fixed up artist field
Last edited by Ichigo-Sora , edited 44 times in total.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[First Meeting]
Design < Upper Right Corner < Insert Background
Add your Background this way instead.
View < Grid Level < 2,3 (Use one of these)
00:19:96 (2) - Shorten by 1 tick on 1/4 beat snap divisor
00:21:99 (1) - Move to white tick to the right
00:23:67 (3) - Move to previous white tick
00:24:35 (4) - ^
00:35:80 (1) - Move closer to 6
00:46:25 (1) - Extend to next white tick you could also add a repeat for this slider instead of having the other slider there
00:47:94 (1) - If not shorten this slider to the previous white tick
01:09:17 (1) - Add a finish at the end.
01:12:54 (1) - Add a whistle

[Combat Butler]
Resnap these to 1/4 and adjust to time them correctly you should be able to tell where they go by listening to the music and the notes in the beatmap.

[Ojou-Sama]
Resnap these to 1/4 and adjust to time them correctly you should be able to tell where they go by listening to the music and the notes in the beatmap.

Try your best to fix the timing on these and I'll help you out again when you're done~

The offset is a little off...
16,614 should be around there.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
In my opinion, the mp3 volume could be a little higher.

First meating~
  1. 00:19:98 (2) - Snap end to nearest white tick.
  2. 00:35:82 (1) - This is kind of unexpected. Can you move closer to 6? Also snap the end to the nearest white tick.
  3. 00:40:88 (2,3,4) - Move farther from 1.

Ojou-sama<3~
  1. 00:18:80 (4) - Move this up on the grid a little more so it's not cut off from the bottom of the screen.
  2. 00:42:31 (1) - This slider isn't snapped at the middle or the end to the ticks. Also it sounds off from the vocals.
  3. I suggest changing this into something else. Like adding the first note at 00:42:39 instead of 00:42:31.
  4. Oh wow, redo the break close to the end. It will lengthen TREMENDOUSLY.

Kombat Butler~
  1. 00:30:43 (1) - Snap to nearest red tick.
Nice job! And uhh, yeah... Try getting a higher volume mp3. It will boost ratingz lolz.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
another Ichigo-Sora map :3

at first, I found this BG for you :

SPOILER

then mod start !!

as usual :
blue :arrow: it's just my personal opinion, fix it or not both OK, it depends on you
red :arrow: it's strongly recommened that you fix it

Overall

  1. Place a Preview Point. How to? Go to 00:46:273, click on "Timing" in the toolbar and choose "Set Current Position as Preview". Do this on every difficulty. This makes the song start from the chorus when you select it on the song selection screen
[First Meeting]

  1. 00:32:792 (1) - wrong spacing
  2. 00:47:453 (1) - ends here
  3. 00:47:959 (1) - 1/4 or 1/2 beat forward, as for a EASY diff. 1/2 would be better
  4. 00:52:003 - start KIAI time here
  5. 01:01:103 (1) - a little spacing wrong
[Ojou Sama]

  1. 00:52:003 - start KIAI time here
  2. 01:07:170 (4,1) - add some hit sound as you set before
  3. 01:19:978 (1) - 1/4 beat lengthen
  4. 01:21:326 (1) - ^
[Combat Butler]

  1. 00:25:545 (2) - remove clap
  2. 00:47:116 - 00:48:970 - it sounds starnge, but I can't tell why it's strange...
nice map
I like [Ojou Sama]
star for you!
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
I got
BPM:178.00
offset:453

<Combat Butler>
some sliders are lol sliders (not snap well)
00:18:80 (10) -
01:20:48 (4) -
01:21:83 (4) -
01:22:67 (1,1,1,1) -
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
I see no problems here. I think it could have a better hitsound but I don't want to write them down.
I'll talk with you if I see you (hopefully soon...)

Star for your well done

Edit : PLEASE don't give out kudos if you are not modded :o
Last edited by bmin11 , edited 1 time in total.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Good job~

[First Meeting]
00:27:08(x)-Add a note here?

[Ojou-sama]
00:28:26(3)-End here 00:28:60?
00:33:66(2,3)-Move 1 grid 3 down?
00:59:10(3)-End here 00:59:61(better with reverse slider)?

[Combat Butler]
01:25:06(1)-Start here 01:25:40?
01:01:46(2)-Whistle?
01:02:14(4)-^
01:02:81(6)-^

Star~
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
[Combat Butler]
00:30:790 I think making this slider shorter by one grid sounds better

And that's all I find as of now.
And my! What a great map~
I love this song too.
+1 star~
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi!
[First Meeting]
  1. Fine.
[Ojou-Sama]
  1. Fine.
[Combat Butler]
  1. Fine.
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
First meeting, nothing wrong.

Combat butler:
00:47:644 : It's too far from the previous note.

Ojou-sama:
I don't think there's anything imperfect.

Starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
first meeting
00:42:08 (5) - new combo?
00:47:81 (1) - start at 00:47:64


that's all! star!
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
kugyu's cute song~~ <3

good song and good map :D

stared :)
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Mod^^

[Combat Butler]
01:12:419 (8) finish at 01:12:756

[Ojou-Sama]
fine

[First Meeting]
fine

[All]
I find some problem with your map :
1. The clap sound is confused
2. Many wistle at the same time ~
(It will make a noice for many wistle!! )

But , Good Map ^^
STAR
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Hi!

First Meeting
00:19:16 (3) - move to the next white tick to follow the music ´cuz is easier to read n.n

Ojou-Sama
00:43:26 (1) - start on the next white tick, don't forget to shorten it
00:46:63 (4) - remove this note

Combat Butler
00:15:79 (4) - remove note?
00:21:35 (7) - move to the prev red tick
00:46:29 (7) - end point at 00:46:46

Star
Behon
Elite Mapper
1,380 posts
Here since the beginning
Behon
First Meeting:
Incorporate some whistles and finishes into the first 40% of the song; just clapping gets repetitive.
Every slider from the beginning up till 00:38:205 looks way too similar. Try making different-shaped ones for variety's sake.
00:49:666 (Spinner): Move up to 00:49:160, but end it at the same point as before.
00:52:026 through 00:57:419: Everything here is waaaay too repetitive. Try and make it go better with the music (ie make sliders for the drawn out "eeeeeee" word).
01:12:587 (Spinner): Move up to 01:12:419, but end it at the same point as before.

Ojou-Sama:
Again, incorporate some whistles and finishes into the first 40% of the song.
00:32:812 (1): Move or rotate the slider so that it doesn't overlap with the previous circle; it looks better.
01:22:700 (Spinner): Add a finish.

Combat Butler:
Whistles, finishes, first 40% blah blah blah.
00:04:329 (1 through 6): Is having this quick burst at the beginning really necessary? It leaves a long break and I don't see why it can't just start at the same point as the others so people don't have to sit through the first 15 seconds of the song.
01:27:756 (1): Add a finish.
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[First Meeting]
00:29:27 (4) - Check the distance snap
No Problems Found :)

[Ojou-Sama]
00:41:74 (5) - Note here?
No Problems Found :)

[Combat Butler]
01:20:50 (4) - I'd try removing the reverse on this slider, then extend it by 1/4 Beat. then a beat placed at 01:21:01 would fit it perfectly
01:21:85 (4) - 01:20:50 (4) - I'd try removing the reverse on this slider, then extend it by 1/4 Beat. then a beat placed at 01:22:36 would fit it perfectly[/color]

Overall a great map, the style I like playing, as well ^^ Starred for sure
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
First Meeting
00:55:71 (4,1) - a cruel jump for an easy... make them closer!

Ojou-Sama
00:28:24 (3,4,5,6,7) - a tricky point... maybe set a different spacing here...

Combat Butler
01:02:12 (4) - finish here

Funny map! Star'd.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[First Meeting]
00:23:35 (3,4,1) - line (4) up with (3) then fix next combo to suit this change
(suggestion) 01:03:13 (4) - new combo would go great here

[Ojou Sama]
00:24:36 (6,7) - line these up with (5) then fix next combo to suit the change
00:48:46 (1) - i see no real point to this new combo, remove it
(suggestion) 00:55:37 (1) - i think this new combo would work better on (5) of the last combo

[Combat Butler]
00:31:27 (3) - it would look better to either line this up with (4) or line (4) up with this
00:38:18 (1) - either line this up with (2) or line the rest of the combo up with this

__________________________-

nice fun and cute song :) star
jmaeshawn
170 posts
Joined May 2008
jmaeshawn
I just wanted to bring up what was discussed on IRC about this about and the possibility of a "Harmony Mode" for multiplayer.
Songs like this one that have 2 singers with different parts would make awesome multiplayer matches if each player could cooperate (one player hits one singer's set of beats while one player hits the other singer's set of beats at the same time) and work in "harmony".

In this case, only one set of beats would only be shown on a player's screen.

This would involve more work for the mapper, making 2 separate difficulties be played simultaneously, but would be a lot of fun to play IMO.

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Back to the actual map, this is very well mapped and deserving of many stars, but unfortunately, I can only give one, so here you go :)

Hope this get ranked soon! :)
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
I found the yellow colour blinding in Kiai time.

[First Meeting]
00:55:71 (4) - Didn't like the looks of this slider, lol, although it's a pretty trivial thing.

[Ojou-Sama]
Nothing major here. :)

[Combat Butler]
00:50:15 (9) - Extend this slider's height by 1 grid, and shorten the width by 1 grid (on grid density 3) and it becomes nicely symmetrical, save the ticks.

Other than hurting my eyes during Kiai time, the map was pretty cool. :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All fine.

[First Meeting]

00:40:88 (2,3,4) - A bit hard for an easy map.
00:52:00 (1) - A note after spinner is too hard for an easy map.

[Ojou-Sama]

Fine.

[Combat Butler]

00:42:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:14 (4) - New combo.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
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heartnetkung
54 posts
Joined March 2009
heartnetkung
A nice and relax song.
Good Symmetry in combo shape.
One thing bugs me, how come the difficulty stars are 4 and 5 when these diff doesn't seem that hard.
star~
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Combat Butler
00:54:537(5) - line up with end of slider
01:22:346(5) - spacing

Ojou-sama
00:20:492(4) - extend to red tick(00:21:840)
00:23:357(x) - add note here
00:24:031(x) - add note here

First Meeting
00:27:402(1,2,3,4) - is this supposed to go with the bell
- if so 00:27:907(2) move right to white tick
- 00:29:256(4) move right to white tick

i hope this helps.
Mismagius
9,267 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
I'm new at modding, so you may ignore them all...

[First Meeting]
01:03:080 (1) - Unrankable slider.. maybe..
And please end the kiai time section. Wherever you want.

[Ojou-sama]
00:52:034 (2) - Add clap.
00:53:002 (4) - Add clap at the beginning, second repeat, and fourth repeat.
00:55:071 (2) - Add clap.
01:01:044 (2) - Add whistle.
01:02:012 (4) - ^
01:02:045 (5) - Add whistle at the repeat.
01:03:046 (6) - Add whistle.
01:03:080 (7) - Move down 1 grid (use tiny grid size).
01:06:084 (3) - Add clap.
01:08:086 (1) - Add finish at the first repeat. Remove clap at the

first repeat, second repeat, and at the end.
01:22:051 (1) - If this is my map, I prefer put the end of the spinner on 01:27:823.

[Combat Butler]
Peerrrlllfffeecccffttthhh!! Lol perfect I mean.

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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *~
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[First Meeting]

It's ok

[Ojou-sama]

00:18:469 - add a circle
00:27:907 - ^

[Combat Butler]

It's ok

Starred~
Nakata Yuji
471 posts
Joined April 2009
Nakata Yuji
First Meeting:
Nothing wrong at all, really. Consider changing the sliders to become less linear.

Ojou-sama:
01:19:098 (1,1) - Consider making these finishes.
Nothing wrong here either.
If this is supposed to be the equivalent of Normal, then it's a bit hard, and if it's Hard, then it's fine.

Combat Butler:
This is fine.

I wouldn't be surprised if this was already ranked, nice work.
MapleLeaf
22 posts
Joined April 2009
MapleLeaf
offset 460 is better.

That's all.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
peppy
19,315 posts
Here since the beginning
peppy
Unranked due to stupid artist field. Please either choose a primary artist and use that name, or at VERY LEAST replace "and" with "&" and resubmit (full). Do not change anything else and I will consider leaving scores.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old

peppy wrote:

Unranked due to stupid artist field. Please either choose a primary artist and use that name, or at VERY LEAST replace "and" with "&" and resubmit (full). Do not change anything else and I will consider leaving scores.
Why not unrank Kanbu while you're at it?
Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Ichigo-Sora

peppy wrote:

Unranked due to stupid artist field. Please either choose a primary artist and use that name, or at VERY LEAST replace "and" with "&" and resubmit (full). Do not change anything else and I will consider leaving scores.
I've changed the artist field to "Kugimiya Rie" and added "Shiraishi Ryoko" to the tags.
Sun and Lunar
87 posts
Joined November 2008
Sun and Lunar
maybe it's better "Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko" since they're dueting in this song...
Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Ichigo-Sora

Sun and Lunar wrote:

maybe it's better "Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko" since they're dueting in this song...
I've changed it to "Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko" ^^
peppy
19,315 posts
Here since the beginning
peppy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hinagiku2
1 post
Joined April 2013
Hinagiku2
wow I love Hayate the Combat Butler im a Big fan!!!!!!!!!!! Nagi's voice is very cute, Hinagiku's voice is golden!!!!!!!!!!! :) :oops: :P :lol: ;)
Imitatia
Imitatia
this song is amazing!! i approve :D



















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