Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey Mod from my Queues

General

• • seem fine. It is a cute map and video tho

Easy

• • 01:07:337 (3) - I think ending this slider on the next white line feels better imo. and also remove finish at the end it sounds weird I think It seems not better.
  • 01:18:994 (3) - move to x 180 y 208 to fit this with the preview slider? OK
  • 01:23:108 (1,2,3,4) - this claps spam on this part feels to ugly may you can change it? just adding the clap pattern like before like: 01:23:108 (1) - remove clap on 01:23:794 - and at the end. 01:25:165 (3) - on begin and also finish on the end. sounds are too random
  I just follow the music's drum to add these claps.It can be heard that there are a lot of drum voice in the mp3

Normal

• • 00:39:908 (4,5) - I think this feels kinda out..dunno may let the slider end on 00:40:423 and remove the circle there? sounds better imook
  • 00:49:508 (2) - what do you think to move this slider to x 248 y 268? I think it follow the preview slider better ok
  • 00:53:794 (1) - wrong spacing here and also remove NC and add it on the next one ok
  • 00:57:737 (2) - 1 grid right to fix spacing? ok
  • 00:58:251 (3) - 2 grid right then to follow the preview sliderok
  • 01:02:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - why dont you make this part like the preview one 00:51:394 (1,2,3,4,1) I think its better imo Every diff,I set the different pattern to this part,so I will keep these difference in NM diff
  • 01:23:108 (1,2,3,4) - same as easy

Hard

• • 00:40:251 (3,1) - may can you change this overlap? http://puu.sh/3I8j1.jpg Ok
  • 00:42:480 (2,3,4,5,6) - for a better pattern may add this part like this? http://puu.sh/3I8n1.jpg OK
  • 00:43:337 (1) - fix spacing here OK
  • 01:06:137 (5,1) - make a better stack here? move 01:06:480 (1) to x 225 y 321 ? I think its better OK
  • 01:23:108 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same as above

Insane

• • 00:10:251 (1) - 1 grid left to make a better stack
  • 00:40:423 (4) - move this to x 422 y 319 to make a better stack
  • 00:42:994 (6,1) - same here may make a better stack?
  • 00:45:565 (4) - ?

all fixed

well nice map and cute hehe
and sorry for my noob mod >< good luck with rank ~

1. 00:11:451 (1) - 感觉这个滑条的速度应该快点, 然后在00:11:794 - 加上note
2. 00:25:165 (3,4) - 这两个往下一点的话flow比较好, 或者ctrl+G
3. 00:29:451 (5) - 去掉怎么样, 和前面节奏一样
4. 00:44:280 - 加个圈233
5. 00:55:508 (1) - 往下面一点 嗯..
6. 01:20:708 (2,3) - 感觉这里莫名的不好读图 你看看这样..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884978
7. 01:21:565 (6) - ^
8. 好图

1. 00:21:908 (2) - 我觉得这个形状比较适合, 然后前面那个也调了一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884981
2. 00:38:365 (2,3) - 这个两边的间距都大一点, 这里有点太紧了
3. 00:49:508 (2) - 不要贴起来啊 我的建议是 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884987
4. 00:51:051 (4,1) - 建议 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884984 用滑条的话你看后面, 有种复读机坏了的感觉
5. 00:56:537 (3) - x:300 y:204 不要叠了, 前面的已经看不出来了
6. 01:02:194 (2) - x:68 y:172
7. 01:05:279 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884990

1. 00:18:651 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884991 大概
2. 00:25:508 (2) - finish掉了
3. 00:52:765 (3) - 滑条尾掉了
4. 01:21:394 (4) - 改成1/2短滑条怎么样, 后面这个会好抓点

1. 00:51:394 (1,2,3,4) - 这里有点莫名啊

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

喵


Insane

1. 00:11:451 (1) - 感觉这个滑条的速度应该快点, 然后在00:11:794 - 加上note 太坑玩家了，高速转圈
2. 00:25:165 (3,4) - 这两个往下一点的话flow比较好, 或者ctrl+G 好的
3. 00:29:451 (5) - 去掉怎么样, 和前面节奏一样 0.0
4. 00:44:280 - 加个圈233 好233
5. 00:55:508 (1) - 往下面一点 嗯.. 好的
6. 01:20:708 (2,3) - 感觉这里莫名的不好读图 你看看这样..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884978 很多人test时读图貌似不成问题
7. 01:21:565 (6) - ^
8. 好图

Hard

1. 00:21:908 (2) - 我觉得这个形状比较适合, 然后前面那个也调了一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884981 好的
2. 00:38:365 (2,3) - 这个两边的间距都大一点, 这里有点太紧了 好的
3. 00:49:508 (2) - 不要贴起来啊 我的建议是 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884987 没理解，什么叫做贴起来
4. 00:51:051 (4,1) - 建议 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884984 用滑条的话你看后面, 有种复读机坏了的感觉 复读机修理完毕
5. 00:56:537 (3) - x:300 y:204 不要叠了, 前面的已经看不出来了 好
6. 01:02:194 (2) - x:68 y:172 好的
7. 01:05:279 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884990 好的

Normal

1. 00:18:651 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/884991 大概 感觉这样看起来不好看
2. 00:25:508 (2) - finish掉了 已加
3. 00:52:765 (3) - 滑条尾掉了 手滑了;w;
4. 01:21:394 (4) - 改成1/2短滑条怎么样, 后面这个会好抓点好的

Easy

1. 00:51:394 (1,2,3,4) - 这里有点莫名啊怎么莫名了啊

你看, 既然这是萝球部SS的图, 你要把图做的容易SS一点, 不然别人就会感到奇怪, 「为什么我看了萝球部SS, 还是打不出SS?」 这样不科学

然后下一作是萝球部EXC你看，既然你是AR3，你要把所有图都做成AR3，不然别人就会感到奇怪，为什么我打了AR3的图结果却不是AR3呢？这这样不科学，然后小号ID是AR10

• nice

• 00:52:080 (2,3) - distance
  00:52:765 (3) - finish at slider's head? normal diff has finish at 00:52:765 -
  01:03:737 (3) - ^

• 00:24:137 (1,2) - add finishes at slider's reverse arrow? fit the song imo
  00:41:280 (2) - add finish
  01:00:480 (4) - finish at slider's head? kinda fit the song

• 00:38:537 (3) - finish at slider's head?
  00:37:851 (1,2) - dangit really hard to read 00:38:365 (2,3) - should be far enough from 00:37:851 (1) -
  00:59:794 (1,2,3) - also kinda hard to read at AR7 idk

20:37 -Bakari-: yo
20:37 Fycho: Hi~
20:37 -Bakari-: how about an IRC mod?
20:38 Fycho: OK，but maybe my English is not good enough~
20:38 -Bakari-: just let me know if you can't understand something
20:39 -Bakari-: i'll try to use simple english :)
20:39 Fycho: OK~
20:40 -Bakari-: let me check the artist
20:40 -Bakari-: I'm not sure if it's correct 
20:40 Fycho: the ranked version is this
20:40 Fycho: The video shows too
20:41 -Bakari-: can you link that part in the video?
20:41 Fycho: 00:56:655 - 
20:42 -Bakari-: ahhh, i see. thank you
20:42 Fycho: ~
20:43 -Bakari-: add "Project No.9" to tags 
20:44 Fycho: the reason is?
20:44 -Bakari-: it's name of the studio, you use their animation. it's better to credit them
20:44 Fycho: ok~
20:46 -Bakari-: now let's take at [Easy] 
20:47 -Bakari-: 00:18:994 (2) - try to make shape of this slider a bit [http://puu.sh/3KBTI.jpg softer]
20:47 -Bakari-: slider changes its direction too sudden, it may confuse beginners a bit
20:50 -Bakari-: 00:15:908 (1) - it's a bug. Please, add a new combo to this slider. 
20:51 Fycho: Oh~
20:51 Fycho: yes
20:51 -Bakari-: New Combo is not enabled, but number is (1). http://puu.sh/3KC0u.jpg 
20:51 Fycho: I add it
20:52 -Bakari-: 00:25:508 (2) - tail of this slider is TOO close to (1). 
20:52 -Bakari-: beginners will mistakenly click on (2)'s tail and get a miss. 
20:53 -Bakari-: for example, you can use [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/886129 this pattern]
20:55 -Bakari-: OR you can [http://puu.sh/3KC8K.jpg add repeats to (1) and (2)]
20:56 Fycho: I use the reserve slider ~
20:56 -Bakari-: great! :)
20:57 Fycho: ~
20:57 Fycho: Normal diff I used this
20:57 Fycho: But at first I think difference is better
21:00 -Bakari-: 00:51:394 (1,2,3,4) - thythm here is quite hard for beginners
21:01 -Bakari-: well, during kiai rhythm becomes hard. I'd recommend you to use Overall Diff 1
21:01 Fycho: I can't think over a better rhythm so I used this to be different with normal
21:02 -Bakari-: OD1 will help you to make rhythm more playable
21:02 Fycho: eOK
21:04 -Bakari-: now [Normal]
21:07 -Bakari-:  00:11:451 (1) - finish this slider on 00:11:623 - 
21:07 -Bakari-: it will fit with "yay" in music. 
21:07 -Bakari-: and start spinner from big white tick, to follow music. 
21:08 Fycho: `w`
21:09 -Bakari-: next suggestion?
21:10 Fycho: I think circle
21:10 Fycho: is better
21:10 Fycho: 00:11:451 - 
21:11 -Bakari-: uh, ok.
21:11 -Bakari-: 00:28:251 (1) - i think you're overusing NCs. How about removing this one?
21:12 Fycho: Ok~
21:12 Fycho: 00:33:737 (1) - but this NC should be removed too?
21:13 -Bakari-: 00:30:994 (1) - 00:33:737 (1) - 00:36:480 (1) - these NCs
21:13 -Bakari-: you should remove them to follow pattern
21:15 -Bakari-: 00:55:851 (1) - same as above. 
21:15 Fycho: ok
21:16 -Bakari-: 01:18:994 (2) - looks a bit random. How about [http://puu.sh/3KCNC.jpg this]?
21:17 -Bakari-: nice diff. I like it!
21:18 Fycho: thank you~
21:18 -Bakari-: now [Hard]
21:19 -Bakari-: please, set HP Drain to 7. It'll be much more interesting for players!
21:21 Fycho: It seems more harder~
21:21 -Bakari-: that's why this diff is [Hard] :)
21:22 Fycho: <3
21:22 -Bakari-: 00:15:908 (1) - 
21:23 -Bakari-: too soon after spinner. players have no time to detect this slider :<
21:23 Fycho: ^^?
21:23 Fycho: should be ar center
21:23 Fycho: ar center?
21:24 Fycho: at
21:24 -Bakari-: I'd make spinner shorter :<
21:25 Fycho: 00:15:565 - end at this?
21:25 -Bakari-: yes!
21:25 Fycho: If this spinner is too short to spin?
21:26 -Bakari-: nope, it's ok. Auto gets 3000
21:26 -Bakari-: 00:37:851 (1) - please, finish this slider on 00:38:194 - 
21:27 -Bakari-: it will fit with music better
21:30 -Bakari-: nothing else. 
21:30 Fycho: OK~
21:30 -Bakari-: now to the [Insane] diff!
21:30 Fycho: yap^^
21:31 -Bakari-: OD+1 
21:31 Fycho: ;w;
21:31 -Bakari-: this is insane, let's make it crazy! <3
21:31 Fycho: wa~
21:31 Fycho: Ok~
21:33 -Bakari-: 01:21:737 - don't you want to place a beat here? 
21:33 -Bakari-: a circle*
21:33 -Bakari-: there's piano sound in music, it's better to map it
21:34 Fycho: Hard diff there is not a circle too~
21:34 Fycho: All diff is so
21:34 -Bakari-: well, ok. 
21:35 -Bakari-: nothing else. really good diff
21:35 Fycho: ~
21:35 Fycho: 00:49:808 (2,3) - 
21:35 Fycho: I used 1/8
21:36 Fycho: is there any problems>?
21:36 -Bakari-: well, it fits with music, imo.
21:36 -Bakari-: let me double check it, anyway
21:36 Fycho: Oh~thank you
21:38 -Bakari-: well, it's playable and I like it. 
21:38 -Bakari-: if people will complain, you can use [http://puu.sh/3KDyP.jpg slider] here :)
21:39 -Bakari-: should i post this log?

1. Minor visual improvements
2. Some rhythm improvents
3. General check
4. Some metadata changes

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

hi, from queue :'3 sorry for the delay got school and distracted by other stuffs idk

anyway, noob modder, so mostly suggestions


[General]

• nice

[Easy]

• 00:52:080 (2,3) - distance
  00:52:765 (3) - finish at slider's head? normal diff has finish at 00:52:765 -
  01:03:737 (3) - ^

all fixed

[Normal]

• 00:24:137 (1,2) - add finishes at slider's reverse arrow? fit the song imo
  00:41:280 (2) - add finish
  01:00:480 (4) - finish at slider's head? kinda fit the song

all fixed

[Hard]

• 00:38:537 (3) - finish at slider's head? OK
  00:37:851 (1,2) - dangit really hard to read 00:38:365 (2,3) - should be far enough from 00:37:851 (1) - OK
  00:59:794 (1,2,3) - also kinda hard to read at AR7 idkNOW AR8

gomen for poor mod :'3 i haven't mod for a while
i guess kds isn't really necessary

well, good luck~

-Bakari- wrote:

IRC mod

Chat Log

20:37 -Bakari-: yo
20:37 Fycho: Hi~
20:37 -Bakari-: how about an IRC mod?
20:38 Fycho: OK，but maybe my English is not good enough~
20:38 -Bakari-: just let me know if you can't understand something
20:39 -Bakari-: i'll try to use simple english :)
20:39 Fycho: OK~
20:40 -Bakari-: let me check the artist
20:40 -Bakari-: I'm not sure if it's correct 
20:40 Fycho: the ranked version is this
20:40 Fycho: The video shows too
20:41 -Bakari-: can you link that part in the video?
20:41 Fycho: 00:56:655 - 
20:42 -Bakari-: ahhh, i see. thank you
20:42 Fycho: ~
20:43 -Bakari-: add "Project No.9" to tags 
20:44 Fycho: the reason is?
20:44 -Bakari-: it's name of the studio, you use their animation. it's better to credit them
20:44 Fycho: ok~
20:46 -Bakari-: now let's take at [Easy] 
20:47 -Bakari-: 00:18:994 (2) - try to make shape of this slider a bit [http://puu.sh/3KBTI.jpg softer]
20:47 -Bakari-: slider changes its direction too sudden, it may confuse beginners a bit
20:50 -Bakari-: 00:15:908 (1) - it's a bug. Please, add a new combo to this slider. 
20:51 Fycho: Oh~
20:51 Fycho: yes
20:51 -Bakari-: New Combo is not enabled, but number is (1). http://puu.sh/3KC0u.jpg 
20:51 Fycho: I add it
20:52 -Bakari-: 00:25:508 (2) - tail of this slider is TOO close to (1). 
20:52 -Bakari-: beginners will mistakenly click on (2)'s tail and get a miss. 
20:53 -Bakari-: for example, you can use [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/886129 this pattern]
20:55 -Bakari-: OR you can [http://puu.sh/3KC8K.jpg add repeats to (1) and (2)]
20:56 Fycho: I use the reserve slider ~
20:56 -Bakari-: great! :)
20:57 Fycho: ~
20:57 Fycho: Normal diff I used this
20:57 Fycho: But at first I think difference is better
21:00 -Bakari-: 00:51:394 (1,2,3,4) - thythm here is quite hard for beginners
21:01 -Bakari-: well, during kiai rhythm becomes hard. I'd recommend you to use Overall Diff 1
21:01 Fycho: I can't think over a better rhythm so I used this to be different with normal
21:02 -Bakari-: OD1 will help you to make rhythm more playable
21:02 Fycho: eOK
21:04 -Bakari-: now [Normal]
21:07 -Bakari-:  00:11:451 (1) - finish this slider on 00:11:623 - 
21:07 -Bakari-: it will fit with "yay" in music. 
21:07 -Bakari-: and start spinner from big white tick, to follow music. 
21:08 Fycho: `w`
21:09 -Bakari-: next suggestion?
21:10 Fycho: I think circle
21:10 Fycho: is better
21:10 Fycho: 00:11:451 - 
21:11 -Bakari-: uh, ok.
21:11 -Bakari-: 00:28:251 (1) - i think you're overusing NCs. How about removing this one?
21:12 Fycho: Ok~
21:12 Fycho: 00:33:737 (1) - but this NC should be removed too?
21:13 -Bakari-: 00:30:994 (1) - 00:33:737 (1) - 00:36:480 (1) - these NCs
21:13 -Bakari-: you should remove them to follow pattern
21:15 -Bakari-: 00:55:851 (1) - same as above. 
21:15 Fycho: ok
21:16 -Bakari-: 01:18:994 (2) - looks a bit random. How about [http://puu.sh/3KCNC.jpg this]?
21:17 -Bakari-: nice diff. I like it!
21:18 Fycho: thank you~
21:18 -Bakari-: now [Hard]
21:19 -Bakari-: please, set HP Drain to 7. It'll be much more interesting for players!
21:21 Fycho: It seems more harder~
21:21 -Bakari-: that's why this diff is [Hard] :)
21:22 Fycho: <3
21:22 -Bakari-: 00:15:908 (1) - 
21:23 -Bakari-: too soon after spinner. players have no time to detect this slider :<
21:23 Fycho: ^^?
21:23 Fycho: should be ar center
21:23 Fycho: ar center?
21:24 Fycho: at
21:24 -Bakari-: I'd make spinner shorter :<
21:25 Fycho: 00:15:565 - end at this?
21:25 -Bakari-: yes!
21:25 Fycho: If this spinner is too short to spin?
21:26 -Bakari-: nope, it's ok. Auto gets 3000
21:26 -Bakari-: 00:37:851 (1) - please, finish this slider on 00:38:194 - 
21:27 -Bakari-: it will fit with music better
21:30 -Bakari-: nothing else. 
21:30 Fycho: OK~
21:30 -Bakari-: now to the [Insane] diff!
21:30 Fycho: yap^^
21:31 -Bakari-: OD+1 
21:31 Fycho: ;w;
21:31 -Bakari-: this is insane, let's make it crazy! <3
21:31 Fycho: wa~
21:31 Fycho: Ok~
21:33 -Bakari-: 01:21:737 - don't you want to place a beat here? 
21:33 -Bakari-: a circle*
21:33 -Bakari-: there's piano sound in music, it's better to map it
21:34 Fycho: Hard diff there is not a circle too~
21:34 Fycho: All diff is so
21:34 -Bakari-: well, ok. 
21:35 -Bakari-: nothing else. really good diff
21:35 Fycho: ~
21:35 Fycho: 00:49:808 (2,3) - 
21:35 Fycho: I used 1/8
21:36 Fycho: is there any problems>?
21:36 -Bakari-: well, it fits with music, imo.
21:36 -Bakari-: let me double check it, anyway
21:36 Fycho: Oh~thank you
21:38 -Bakari-: well, it's playable and I like it. 
21:38 -Bakari-: if people will complain, you can use [http://puu.sh/3KDyP.jpg slider] here :)
21:39 -Bakari-: should i post this log?

We've done

1. Minor visual improvements
2. Some rhythm improvents
3. General check
4. Some metadata changes

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

Easy,Normal

can't catch anything on these diffs :<

Hard

00:38:365 (2,3) - using 1.1x DS is purposed instead 1.2x DS? OK
00:53:794 (1) - delete NC and add it 00:54:308 (3) - here ok
01:24:137 (3) - add finish on end instead clapI follow the music's drum here

Insane

00:27:737 (1) - delete NC for consistence OK
00:59:108 (5) - considering ctrl g here plays better imo This don't break the flow,I think it is good
00:26:451 (3) - move this slider to 00:26:423 - here (1/6 snap) and add some repeats like this? http://puu.sh/3L9AQ.jpg Now it fit the rhythm in music
00:56:365 (4) - NC for consistence ok

nice diffs xD good luck for rank~

Banana wrote:

miao~（小学生最高 好吧我想多了

[Insane]
00:04:937 (3,1,2,3) - a square pattern is more decent (move (1,3) plays not that bad本意不是正方形啊
00:09:051 (1,2) - rotate these two and move back like this? [color=#FF0000那样还有flow可言吗[/color]
00:11:451 (1) - use slider to follow the vocal and finish sound at the same time makes it plays not really well, consider split it up 不想动了
00:14:537 (3) - a normal spacing to form an anti-jump would be nice IMO, but its up to u up to me
00:14:623 (1) - the sound you follow ends at 00:15:908, consider the spinner starts not exactly the point (not at 00:14:537), it should be better if you follow it to the end感觉不怎么样
00:18:651 (1,3) - unstack these two for they are not the same pitch? (a triangle pattern is more reasonable to me) you may stack 00:20:708 (3,5) to keep your pattern 没理解;w;
00:23:965 (6) - eh, move it a grid right k
00:25:165 (3,4) - i see no specific pattern here, place these two horizontal? miao
00:29:280 (4) - eh, move it a grid right k
00:29:623 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么不是上下左右啊啊啊 往左的哪里去了啊啊啊（歇斯底里的强迫症你够了pia 吃记喵喵拳
00:35:623 (1,2,3) - if your jumping pattern have more anti-jump, it may have more possibility, miao, nothing more than suggestion 暂时不想大改动了..
00:37:851 (1) - seems it follows nothing why not follow the vocal .-.曲子节奏变弱，加点空拍
00:40:765 (2,4) - personally, i think it plays better without these twonazi
00:45:394 (3,4,5,6) - what a crowded corner.. consider rearrange this pattern
00:46:080 (1) - rhythm is strange here. break is not suit here IMO k
00:58:594 (2,3,4) - star pattern? (move 2,4 like this)改了，其实本意不是五角
00:59:451 (6,7) - 我死了！（well, can't upload screenshot to puush, i just want a better pattern 在来次截图
01:00:823 (4,1,2,3) - square? (3)-> x:224 y:316 k
01:04:423 (3,6,2) - it would be nice if you make these three related in position, or 01:05:108 (6) - move to x:92 y:152
---bibibibibibibbibbiiibbbibibibi---bibibibi
00:48:823 - add a green line to reduce the volume? or just reduce the 1/4 tick note, whistle is a bit loudk
00:47:965 (2) - add clap to slider head 有点别扭

[Hard]
00:28:594 (2) - jump a bit more may avoid the overlap k
00:38:365 (2) - keep 1.2*ds is enough IMO, 1*looks not very good K
00:52:080 (5) - suggestion on patternI keep original pattern
00:55:508 (1,2) - make it more like a circle? 本意不是圆
01:13:680 (1) - why slider here? 01:13:851 - here is a better place for a slider IMO 跟着乐器

[Normal]
00:28:251 (4,5) - 三角形摆好点啊啊啊（pia 哪来的三角形？！0.0
01:07:337 (4) - 其实个人感觉这边节奏和前面保持一致会比较好 不管1/2还是1/1 而且01:07:508 - 这边似乎可以加clap 建议这边还是1/2k

[Easy]
00:25:508 (2) - 稍微rotate一下？k
没啥问题倒是 高难度排列也能这样注意点细节就好了 （

1. 00:25:508 (2,1,2) blanket

1. 00:28:251 (4) DS

1. 00:01:508 (2) ctrl+G
2. 00:41:280 (3) ^ and move to x276, y160 http://puu.sh/3NqwL.jpg

1. 00:08:365 (3,4,5) try this, the flow will be better http://puu.sh/3NqeK.jpg
2. 00:26:423 (3) end on red line
3. 00:29:965 (2,3) try this http://puu.sh/3Nqjr.jpg
4. 00:31:851 (2,3,4) DS
5. 00:38:880 (4) move to http://puu.sh/3Nqmy.jpg
6. 01:16:423 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ugly >_>

Megurine Luka wrote:

[General]

1. No better BG? I feel strange when looking at those name tags lol
2. 00:51:394 (1) - If I'm not wrong you'd better not to start kiai on a red line is in the guideline. And this expands your timing problem. You should add a red timing line on 00:51:394 (1) - to adjust the downbeat and 00:54:308 (2) - to adjust back. Same as 01:02:365 (1) - here

[E]

1. 01:20:365 (1) - Move the red tick left a bit to make the slider symmetric

Others IRC MODDED

SPOILER

13:02 Megurine Luka: Normal没啥问题0.0
13:02 Megurine Luka: Hard这里
13:02 Megurine Luka: 00:39:223 (1) - 这里开始感觉可以试试看
13:02 Megurine Luka: http://puu.sh/3Ok80.jpg
13:03 Megurine Luka: 这样的排列，音效上也可以和00:37:851 (1,2,3) - 保持统一
13:03 Megurine Luka: 不然感觉略怪
13:04 Fycho: 好的
13:06 Megurine Luka: 01:06:137 (2) - 好像没stack好
13:07 Megurine Luka: 00:47:451 (1) - ^
13:07 Megurine Luka: 啊这个是Insane
13:08 Megurine Luka: 没其他的了 /w\

其他的就 /w\ 不看了

LunarSakuya wrote:

General
- Delete the timing points at 00:51:394 (1) - 00:54:308 (2) - & 01:02:365 (1) - 01:05:280 (1) - . Feels like you only added these to keep the vocals on the "main beat" or something. If you delete the red lines and hear closely, the whole map sounds fine without them. The drums are always there on the downbeat and shouldn't be altered to the vocals.


Easy
00:00:822 (1,2) - if you want, you can center these using the y-axis lol
01:14:880 (1,2) - ^ random grid off /shot
great diff~

Normal
00:08:023 (1) - Delete NC, similar to 00:02:194 (3) -
00:38:537 (2) - Try extending this to the red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896680 this slider will "lift" up with the vocals if that's what you were mainly following here
01:07:337 (4) - Add repeat, it'll compliment 01:08:708 (2) - nicely

Hard
00:01:508 (2) - Ctrl + G, great opportunity for some oval flow here imo

Insane
00:02:880 (4,5) - What's the reason for this antijump? i suggest you space these out more to give a more exciting feel to the song intro I stacked them at the same position
00:05:108 (1,3) - make sure these have equal spacing as (2,4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896701 makes a nicer parallelogram shape
00:26:423 (3) - Extend by 3 reverses. if you hear closely, the bgm keeps going and the current slider just creates a gap in that I changed this slider to some notes,I think it more suitable than reserve slider
00:36:308 (1,2) - might be just me, but this pattern reminds me of a 1/4 rhythm, mainly because of the way (2)'s tail is positioned. The player just came off from big jumps could be tempted to interpret the smaller distance as a shorter rhythm ; Try spreading them out like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896709

nice map <3
Feel free to call me back after a couple mods

Oyatsu wrote:

Maybe This year is for all new mappers grow up execpt me =w=. Go! Go! Fycho-chan

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! I'm sorry for the delay, here's the mod:

Easy:
00:04:937 (2) - maybe you could try to change the shape for better flow? it also doesn't so nice imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905046 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905034 I think it ok
00:24:137 (1) - this shape looks ugly (and it's not only me thinking that), so I think you could change it to something nicer: http://puu.sh/3SAy6.jpg OK
00:36:308 (2) - maybe you could raise the end point of the slider? so that it will be a better blanket: http://puu.sh/3SABz.jpg (also you can easily replace 00:37:851 (1) - a little bit for correct spacing afterwards) Fixed
00:58:080 (2) - I believe you can improve this shape: http://puu.sh/3SAEf.jpg OK
01:18:994 (3,1) - change (1)'s shape a little bit? put the end point of the slider down so that they don't reach: http://puu.sh/3SzLY.jpg --> http://puu.sh/3SzMy.jpg OK
01:22:080 (2) - this slider should start earlier in my opinion, she starts singing on the red tick, and the beat is also on the red tick: http://puu.sh/3SzQi.jpg - it sounds wrong otherwise, since it sounds like you're late with hitting the beat There is also a vocal at white tick

Normal:
00:36:480 (5,6) - these sound really off, because the piano starts on the red tick, so I would suggest you to change it to something like this: http://puu.sh/3SAO9.jpg just follow the drum rhythm
01:21:394 (4) - I think a simple hit circle would be enough here, because of the lyrics Ok

There is not else to say, it is a nice difficulty.

Hard:
00:04:080 (2) - remove hit circle, I think it is unnecessary, the beginning is still calm so removing it would be better ok
00:04:594 (4) - change this to a hit circle, because of the previous reason ^ it fits better to the lyrics too, aslo, if you remove it, I think the upcoming objects will sound better too, because it will somehow get a bigger emphasizes, so it will sound good in my opinion :3
00:21:908 (2) - why don't you put this a few grids down? (1) will be a blanket then, and it will look nice: http://puu.sh/3SB5R.jpg OK
00:23:108 (2,3) - the distance here is a bit bigger than usual and it doesn't look so good, so why not put (2) closer a bit? http://puu.sh/3SBKL.jpg ok
01:00:823 (4) - try to stack this perfectly: http://puu.sh/3SBNM.jpg --> http://puu.sh/3SBO6.jpg (turn off grid and distance snap for this) ok
01:25:680 - add hit circle maybe? because of the piano sound, it sounds like there are 3 bigger piano sounds there, so that's why you should add one more hit circleI don't think so .There is a break time

Insane:
00:00:822 (1,2) - put these a bit further from the center, so that they will not reach the slider on the middle: http://puu.sh/3SBTy.jpg ok
00:02:880 (4) - this was actually quite confusing to me, because it comes too slow in time, but it is stacked, so I thought I should hit it soon after (3), and it also sounds like she starts singing on the red tick, so you could try to change this: http://puu.sh/3SC2c.jpg
I tried to remake that pattern if it troubles you about how to changed it, but it is really just an example:no changed,I think it's ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905131
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905134
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905135
00:27:394 (3,4) - put a little bit to the left, because of this: http://puu.sh/3SCla.jpg ok
01:21:565 (6,1) - I think this anti-jump breaks the flow, I think you should replace it to emphasize the break in time nope,flow isn't broken
01:24:480 (1) - make this a better blanket: http://puu.sh/3SDhg.jpg ok

Very nice difficulties, good luck! I hope my mod is useful X_X

LunarSakuya wrote:

hahahahahahaha

Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

kanpakyin wrote:

這個(TV Size)是官方的title麼? 雖然很蠢但是rule說了

Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

Fycho wrote:

TV版写TV Size不是一直以来的惯例吗，可以把引用原帖给我看下吗