eveless wrote:

[General]
I'm in doubt about that the bg "na" and "no" are nsfw(not safe for working) or not...I’ve asked some other bats about it and some of them said that you’d better to change them to a safety one...if you can just ask more BATs for this problem.

「ｂｇ“な”と“の”はちょっと危ないから変えてほし」って、とあるbat達か言ってたけれども、確信できないので、もしよければ、もっと他のbatからの意见を集めたほうがいいと思っています。
なるほど、もう少し控えめのBGちょっと探してみますね

[Idea]
00:19:621 (8) - 　末にwhistle？ Added
00:40:477 (3) -　美観のためにこうやって移動したらどうでしょう？　Done. it's nice idea!

[milu]
Missing Video in this diff映像いなくなりました、食べてはいけませんよ？ 気づかなかった、僕の方で直しておきました

[Normal]
01:55:717 (3) - 大したことではありませんが、末の音について、Normalよりsoftの方が好み Fixed

[Easy]
01:55:717 -　Normalと同じく 元からsoftだったようです

最近ちょっと忙しいからrecheckも遅くなっている状態なので　了解です。ゲストさんの修正が終わったらPMしておきますので、お時間あるときにお願いします。
お忙しい中 Thanks a lot evelessさん！ヾ('ω')ノ

eveless wrote:

[milu]
Missing Video in this diff映像いなくなりました、食べてはいけませんよ？ｽｲﾏｾﾝ
01:06:787 (3) - 個人的にここでwhistleをくわえたほうがいい　うーん...必要ないと思ったのでno changeで...

eveless wrote:

[merchat's hard]
00:23:311 (1) - Move this newcombo to 00:23:792 (3) will be better, it's really unneed imo. The reason for this is for consistency with 00:13:204 (1,2) - (New combo is always before the long slider) , but if you really want me to change, I don't mind doing this.
00:28:445 (1) - ^same ^
00:40:156 (1) - move this nc to 00:39:193 (8), I dont think they're make sense. I changed my rhythm logic to follow the instrument that plays here. As you can see 00:40:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's always repeating slider > slider and I new combo it to show the change in logic. My rhythm logic before was focus on piano and vocal.
01:07:108 (7) - a bit hard to read imo, you'd better replace this with another way.I unstack the hit circle

eveless wrote:

Recheck

[Idea]
01:35:664 (13) - There are two timing section at the same time with different volume, i think you should remove one.
ここで重なった二つの緑線の音量が違うから、どちらか削除してください　Oops. Removed

Kitsuneko wrote:

eveless wrote:

Recheck

[Idea]
01:35:664 (13) - There are two timing section at the same time with different volume, i think you should remove one.
ここで重なった二つの緑線の音量が違うから、どちらか削除してください　Oops. Removed

OKデス
kds渡した方がいいのかな

Edit: Should I remove (Short Ver.) from the title?

eveless wrote:

Sorry for take so long

Suzully wrote:

ずもももも