wa米桶神mapper QAQmintong89 wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/ZH:Ranking_Criteriaoscartutu wrote:
^求完整
p/1767683
Menold_1702 wrote:
Who is the SBer of this map?
= <3On_WanWan wrote:
Menold_1702 wrote:
Who is the SBer of this map?
Thanks QAQnold_1702 wrote:
= <3On_WanWan wrote:
Me
seeOn_WanWan wrote:
Thanks QAQnold_1702 wrote:
= <3
Touching ;w;Foreverends wrote:
seeOn_WanWan wrote:
Thanks QAQ
I told you
Thank you for your mod and star >///<!sheela901 wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue~
[General]
-Easy and Normal don't have countdown. Unless you'll keep it like that it's okay
-Ends, Hard and Wan doesn't have the Epilepsy Warning
-Is 2 osb files can be in one folder?
-Is "Kakushi goto.png" unnecessary?
-02:28:871 - This kiai is no need because it's has more than 1/3 of the map is kiai time. And it's a solo
-Tags: put "secret" because it's the name of the song in english
All Fixed :3
[Easy]
The last break time, maybe it should start at 02:59:572 Fixed
[Normal]
The last break time, maybe it should start at 02:59:572 Fixed
[Hard]
00:26:171 (4) - Ctrl + J? No Fix, it is intentional :3
02:38:621 (1) - Maybe reduce this spinner to 02:39:671 and put a circle at 02:40:871 No Fix, the spinner is too short i think
03:15:671 (1,2,1,2) - Isn't this really hard? These maybe a little hard but it's Fun and suitable
[Wan]
00:38:171 (2) - Move it to the center? No Fix
00:51:071 - Reduce the speed of the slider at 0.50x and put a slider 00:51:221 to 00:51:521 No Fix
03:54:071 - Suggestion: Reduce the speed of the slider at 0.50x and put a slider here to 03:54:671 No Fix, I want there have a clear feeling before kial
Good Luck and star!
呀happy623 wrote:
哇
Thank you for your mod, it's very useful :D!Xivaxi wrote:
Hi, from my mod queue[Wan]The map looks nice with a lot of pretty patterns, though some of the diffs feel untested and unpolished.
00:05:546 (5) - x:111 y:120 and 00:05:546 (5) - x:154 y:130 for a cleaner curve
00:36:971 (4) - x:253 y:194 to center it better in those circles
00:47:921 (3) - I think it feels better without this note
01:03:071 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make these a cleaner star
02:27:371 (4,5,6) - Give this a cleaner curve and spacing
02:31:121 (6,7,1) - Cleaner spacing
02:47:471 (1,2,1,2) - Evenly space these so they don't look like doubles?
03:15:071 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make this a cleaner star
03:19:871 (3,4,5,6) - And make this a star missing a point (or make it a cleaner square/diamond, I'm not entirely sure what shape this was supposed to be)
03:27:071 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:44:171 (1,1,1,1) - Silent notes very confusing to read - at least give them a little volume with soft hitset so we have something to go off of
All Fixed :33333!
[Hard]
00:53:771 (4) - Make this line up with the rest of the pattern
00:55:871 (3) - Ctrl G maybe? Feels better I think
00:58:871 (1,2) - Line these up with 00:58:571 (4)
00:59:471 (1,2) - Line up
01:03:071 (3,4,1) - ^
01:10:571 (4) - Normal clap on head
01:36:671 (2,3) - Move these back on the timeline to the red line, the break in the map doesn't match the rest in the vocals and is confusing
02:25:871 (3) - Curve like 02:26:171 (4)
02:52:421 (2,3) - Line these up with 02:51:671 (1) - 's head
03:27:071 (3,4) - Make these curves similar, either less curvy like 3 or more curvy like 4
03:32:171 (3) - Line up with the rest of the pattern
03:44:171 (4) - This might just be me, But I think removing this not altogether gives a better feel to the map instead of making it silent, it puts more emphasis on the note after
All Fixed too :33333!
GL with rank!
Thank you so much for mod >w<!!!Xivaxi wrote:
Hi, from my mod queue
[notice][Ends]
The main issue I have with this diff is that it's very very hard to read because a lot of the patterns and distance don't make much sense (even if they look pretty). There's also a lot of random distance snapping that doesnt' really match up with the background music or the surrounding patterns, making it very hard for the player to know what to expect next. Adding some consistant spacing like "All big jumps will be ~4x space, medium ~3x space, small ~1.5" would be nice, instead of all the distances just random. I only marked down the main offenders I found I am suck at distance ;w;
00:49:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Evenly space all of these, some are ~0.7, others are ~0.9, and A lot of them vary between 0.85-0.95 for no real reason, you can still make it a pretty curvy pattern like that with them all at 0.9 Fixed
00:51:671 (1) - The inconsistent spacing in this Kiai time makes sight reading this whole section very difficult, for example
00:51:896 (2) - Distance between previous note and note after is almost the same, despite it being much closer to the previous note on the timeline/music
00:58:871 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Can't read. Sliders are too far apart and the end note is hidden under so much random stuff I can't even tell where it is without looking for it specifically in edit. First make these two distinct from the stream and build a pattern from there
01:10:421 (2) - Ctrl G for better flow nice x)
01:10:721 (4) - ^ so nice x)
01:33:221 (1,2,3) - I dont understand why these are so quiet and spaced so close together, there's no significant tempo/volume break in the bgm to suggest this. Something like a medium-spaced triangle would signify the vocal break without making it so awkward here I think. I just do what I think DX this part feels like it need anti jump lol
01:35:921 (7) - Around x:238 y:65 to line up with 4 Fixed
01:40:871 (1) - Lower volume for this section? Seems too loud for the music considering the volume of the rest of the map Fixed
02:07:271 (1,2,3) - Distance between the two sliders is too big I saw this in 0108's ranked diff before, I think it is ok to put like this
02:28:196 (2) - Should be a beat here Fixed
02:31:046 (2) - Maybe Ctrl G this for better flow, though it's kind of ok the way it is now original one is better
02:55:271 (1,1) - Spaced too close together, curving slider end away a little would fix this
03:09:671 (1) - Again for this kiai, you have a lot of closely spaced patterns and then absurdly far spaced patterns right next to each other with no real consistency in the distances. Variable distance is great, and I love seeing it/playing it, but when it's just random distances all over it becomes too hard to tell what's going on in the map. Try to add some consistency in the spacing so players can know what to expect.
多謝杏仁姐:3happy623 wrote:
irc modedirc17:29 *happy623 pokes
17:31 *On_WanWan !
17:31 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/276132 mafumafu - Kakushigoto [Easy]]
17:31 *On_WanWan 求mod xd
17:31 happy623: 01:10:871 (1) -
17:31 happy623: 呢咁樣扭既slider Easy最好唔好有
17:32 On_WanWan: ok ;w;
17:32 happy623: 姐係個尾可能會fake左新人;w;
17:32 On_WanWan: 得意嘛www
17:32 happy623: sb個到
17:33 happy623: yes Q_Q 我本身都有咁整過 點知人地又話唔比
17:33 happy623: 1024*768 好似唔得;w;
17:33 On_WanWan: =口=
17:33 happy623: maximum要用640*480
17:33 On_WanWan: 唔係800*600 / 1024*768咩
17:33 happy623: sb唔同;w;
17:33 happy623: 係design個度會見到1024個d會over哂
17:34 happy623: 01:00:071 (5,1) - 試下唔好overlap
17:35 On_WanWan: scale整返個大細得5得;w:
17:35 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Storyboarding
17:37 happy623: 03:08:471 (2) - 呢個用100好似有d太大聲;w; 唔太fit
17:37 On_WanWan: sad..要整過;w:
17:37 happy623: DX
17:38 happy623: 早知早d同你睇(?
17:38 happy623: aimod話tags同Ends個diff conflict左;w; 改改
17:39 On_WanWan: 55漏左tag secret
17:39 happy623: k
17:39 happy623: 00:46:871 (1,3) - 不如blanket佢地DX
17:41 On_WanWan: okww
17:43 happy623: 其實colours個度有d顏色好似;w;
17:43 happy623: 唔知比唔比
17:44 On_WanWan: 我改改佢0.0
17:44 happy623: 恩
17:46 happy623: 諗緊 03:25:271 (4) - 中間個reverse位再kiai一次好唔好;w;
17:47 On_WanWan: 有empilepsy warning 應該得0.0
17:47 happy623: ok (y)
17:48 happy623: 個度好岩再kiai一次 ww
17:48 happy623: normal
17:48 happy623: 00:01:271 (1,2) - 未包好;w;
17:48 On_WanWan: 55(y)
17:48 happy623: 加左kiai記得其他diff都要加o/
17:48 On_WanWan: 好的ww
17:49 happy623: 00:09:671 (1) - 呢個可以再扭多下等佢更加配個bgm
17:50 On_WanWan: ok (y)
17:52 happy623: 01:53:471 (2) - 可以試下咁放?
17:52 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/893511
17:53 happy623: 02:07:271 (1) - 拉低少少同 02:06:671 (2) - 平行? ;w;但咁樣可能搞到同後面 02:08:171 (2) - 唔直線, 可以唔改
17:54 happy623: 02:29:771 (2,3) - 包得唔夠好睇
17:56 On_WanWan: grid level 3 既壞處;w;
17:56 happy623: ;w;
17:56 happy623: normal應該冇啦
17:56 On_WanWan: ><(y)
17:57 happy623: shock
17:57 happy623: EZ同NM冇spinner ;w;
17:57 On_WanWan: 驚加左spinner太難;w;
17:57 happy623: XD Hard 6個
17:57 happy623: ;w; 唔放唔緊
17:57 On_WanWan: hard handle到既x)
18:01 happy623: 01:39:821 (1) -
18:01 happy623: auto岩岩轉到2000
18:01 happy623: 分
18:01 On_WanWan: 咁唔要好D0.0
18:01 happy623: 但Hard黎講可能太兇殘;w;
18:01 happy623: 恩
18:02 happy623: 02:14:171 (5,1) - blanket
18:04 happy623: 02:43:271 (1,1,1) -
18:04 On_WanWan: 唔要邊個note @@
18:04 happy623: 覺得唔洗NC都ok
18:04 happy623: ? ;W;
18:04 On_WanWan: 02:14:171 (5,1)
18:04 happy623: blanket
18:04 happy623: 包好d
18:04 happy623: ;w;
18:05 happy623: 02:28:271 (3,4,5,6) -
18:05 happy623: 同之前一樣 高BPM 少d note
18:05 On_WanWan: blanket唔係解空白咩;w;
18:05 happy623: 不過u想留住個5角形就算na 唔係一定要DX
18:05 happy623: XD perfect blanket
18:06 happy623: 02:46:871 (1,1,1,1) - 好似唔洗咁多nc都ok
18:06 On_WanWan: keep ;w; 想5角形
18:06 happy623: 留啦咁(y)
18:07 happy623: 02:56:471 (1,1,1,1) - ;w;
18:07 On_WanWan: wwwww
18:07 On_WanWan: 唔知點整好xd
18:07 happy623: 太多nc DX
18:08 happy623: 03:08:471 (3,1) - 未stack好
18:08 On_WanWan: ok ww
18:09 On_WanWan: (y)
18:09 happy623: 03:53:471 (1,1,1,1) -
18:09 happy623: 我都有坑係最尾3個nc ;w; 其實好想留
18:09 happy623: 覺得好正DX
18:10 On_WanWan: 應該得掛DX
18:10 happy623: DX keep住先
18:10 On_WanWan: wan唔洗mod 0.0 我remap緊
18:10 happy623: ok DXEnds
整多d Ends 將Ends發陽光大
- 00:22:421 (2) - NC?
- 01:29:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 呢度個音慢慢漸大會正d (y)
- 03:25:271 (1) - 呢個用0.75會好d 唔係太難讀到;w;
快d rank左佢
Thanks for modding ;w;kocaca2009 wrote:
Hello~
Newbie mapper random mod time~
Feel free to ignore what I wrote,because these all are suggestions.
[Normal]
00:22:871 (1,2) -Make a blanket here like this maybe better? Fixed
00:36:071 (3) -The slider's end might be wrong:a quarter beat longer than the same slider on 00:37:271 (1).What's more ,you can let both slider smoother like this. Fixed
01:16:871 (3) -If you are worrying about distance problem about this slider,why not try this one? Fixed
01:51:671 (3) -This looks like better,I think. Fixed
02:03:662 (3) -If I were you,I would smooth it like:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/885824 Fixed
02:14:471 (1) -As I mentioned at 01:51:671 (3),I can't accept such a weird slider . It's interesting
02:55:271 (1) -Make a blanket with slider 2 like this one? Fixed
03:38:471 (3) -Try something like this? Fixed
[Hard]
(OMG!Don't you think the difficulty of span is too high?) I did not notice that, fixed
00:24:071 (1) -Try this? No fix, I want to Form a circle with 00:23:471 (3,4)
00:32:471 (1) -Okay,I started to realize that sliders like that are your characteristic...so just forget it. It's interesting
00:39:671 (1) -Well,I prefer to see this one:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/885877. : I prefer to keep it sorry :<
01:12:071 (1) -As I mentioned. I prefer to keep it sorry :<
That's all.I've tried my best to mod your map.
Because I lack of experience,I can't mod Insane diff. ,sorry.SPOILERWhatever,I had to admit it's a nice map.Good luck to your map!I will shot the star in advance!Though I mainly mod easy diff.,your easy diff. have so many weird sliders that I can hardly mod it ,I'm so sorry.Actually I didn't find anything wrong with this diff..So...suit your self!
感激>< 特別是slidertick的建議!- Miomio Chii - wrote:
Hi, here is my mod. From Queue. (sorry for late)
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-General-
✔ Okay.
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-Easy--------------------------------------------------
- 盡量不超過5 combo在Easy
- 00:11:171 - 用音效(xxxx-slidertick)在這跟00:11:771 - 弄上nc1的clap吧 忘了有Slidertick這東西;w; 發現還有很多地方都需要用到:o
- 00:30:371 - 跟00:30:371 - 同上 Fixed
- 01:38:471 (3) - 跟上面一樣的音效和放置 Fixed
- 00:49:271 (3,4) - 水平翻轉如何 Fixed
- 01:00:071 (5,1) - 這樣如何 (1)中間的x 646 y 240 尾端 x 392 y 256 x646!? Fixed
- 01:10:871 (1) - 有點不太好, 可以再把尾端弄出來一點 整個狀形改了
- 02:02:471 (3,4) - 可以再擺好看一點 Fixed
- 02:10:871 (2,3) - 互換, 節奏會好些 Fixed
- 02:36:071 (4) - NC Fixed
- 03:54:071 (1) - 對新手來說這個可能有點難讀 Fixed
-Normal-
- 00:01:271 (1,2) - 這樣如何 (2)尾端 x 336 y 288 包好了
- 00:10:871 (2,3) - 這裡包同等距離如何 Fixed
- 00:25:271 (1,2) - 同上 Fixed
- 01:36:071 (1,2) - 同上 Fixed
- 03:27:671 (1,3) - 同上 Fixed
- 03:46:871 (1) - 難讀 Fixed
- 03:52:571 - 加個note附clap Fixed
- 00:51:971 - 用nc1的clap如何, 像easy的slidertick Fixed
- 00:56:471 (1) - 同上的音效 Fixed
- 03:13:271 (1) - 同上的音效 Fixed
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-Hard--------------------------------------------------
- 00:13:271 - 這裡的音量要不要小聲一點? Fixed
- 01:21:671 - 同上 Fixed
- 01:30:071 (1,2) - -10%音量, 01:30:371 (3,4) - -5%音量 如何 Fixed @v@b
- 01:48:071 (1) - N的slider如何 N的slider0.0?
- 01:59:771 (2) - 頭加個clap 感覺不加比較好:<
- 02:28:271 (3,4,5,6) - 都加whistle如何 Fixed
- 02:40:871 - 這裡的音量小聲點? 因為背景音樂所以這個音量ok~
- 03:43:871 (3) - 尾端加個clap如何加了沒有那種突然斷了的感覺ww
owob
-Wan-打算重map這個diff~
- 02:37:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 有點難按, 可以有些距離
owob
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End of this mod.
祝你好運 !
謝謝moddd!!Sweet Vanilla wrote:
因为时间的问题只能看2个diff> <~~~
渣建议 希望可以帮到乃~
[General]一直忘了弄;w;
- 02:57:671 - SB 这个时间点之后的字母君呢> < ~~~
[Normal]
- 00:09:671 (1,2) - 这两个滑条形状一样要好些 Fixed
- 01:36:071 (1,2) - 没能完全平行呢 试着把GS去掉然后调整 Fixed
[Hard]
- 01:55:271 (1,2) - 这个1试着以2为圆心 Fixed
- 00:29:171 (2,3,4) - 这三个circle是直的形状 可以让它顺势弯下来(不喜欢可以ignore掉 想保留直線><
- 02:22:571 (4) - 滑条尾fin Fixed
- 02:28:871 (1) - 滑条头fin?Fixed
这图做的好有特色....只能看出这些了 ~ good luck
- 02:52:871 (1) - 滑条头fin Fixed
打算重map整個diff;w; 我會mod啦wwKoihik wrote:
Hello.from your M4M queue.
Wan
- 00:11:696 (1,1,1,1,1) - 这里不要这么多NC把?
- 00:22:571 - 这里感觉应该有个note?
- 00:30:671 (3,4,1) - NC应该在3上吧,因为3开始改DS了
- 00:33:971 - add note?
- 01:20:171 (1,1,1,1) - 同00:11:696 (1,1,1,1,1)
- 01:42:371 - 同00:33:971 , add note?
- 01:54:071 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的四方跳有点莫名,音乐听不出这里是jump的感觉,而且前后又是stream...
- 02:58:871 - 这里开始的break感觉时间长了点
- 03:53:471 (1,1,1,1) - 这里感觉也是去掉NC好一点?
easy normal hard 看不出什么...歌太长了累感不爱
so that's all.Good Luck.
my map is here:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/98558
不太喜欢那么正式的"Mod for Mod"
这只是"我mod了你的图,你要是也来mod我的图就太好啦!"
所以如果你:觉得我的mod没什么帮助or懒or不喜欢歌,都可以不mod我的图
Thank you for the !!_Asagi_ wrote:
Epic map.. just take my star!!
(╯°□°)╯︵
Thank you so much for mod >w<!!!Koihik wrote:
Hello.from your M4M queue.
Ends
这真是战略级鬼畜难度,感觉AR10才能读懂oAo- 00:26:696 (2) - 这个滑条的ds反倒比note高了一倍,后面这种还有许多,真的要这么鬼畜吗... 憑感覺就放出來了;w;
- 00:41:396 (1,2) - 叠在一起不太好看的样子. 這是配合00:41:771 (3) - 的說owo
- 00:53:171 (2,3) - 感觉这俩ctrl+g 合适一点 因為00:52:871 (1,2) - 是1/4ds所以才stack一起,如果ctrl+g的話會很坑(超難打) ;w;
- 00:58:871 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段1/4slider后空拍,然后jump+stream....真的要这么鬼畜吗?
我感觉去掉00:59:921 (4) 这个好点?或者像后面一部分一样,把3,4换成滑条. 這個組合打起來挺有feel不是嗎lol- 01:15:521 (2) - 这个ds也太高了点把..而且感觉ctrl+g比较适合读一点 good
- 01:29:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 真的要把2挪出来吗... 01:29:771 (1,2,3) - 這個flow呈三角的形,所以才把2挪出來
- 01:33:221 (1,2,3) - 比较奇怪 個人感覺個人感覺~~~
- 02:17:771 (3,4) - 这2个换下位置怎么样?現在的flow較順~
- 02:36:671 (1,2,1,2) - 把2都ctrl+g感觉好一点 同上lol
- 02:57:271 (1) - unsnapped slider. nold說這是用1/6 snap的._.
- 03:16:571 (3) - 这个note..
感觉AR10才能读矮油DX- 03:43:271 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 把2都ctrl+g感觉好一点 還是原來的好DX
- 03:54:071 (1) - 这里不是1/6的节奏吧,换成1/4的滑条,然后吧spinner往后挪 仔細聽是1/6較今適
Thank you 杏仁J >w<!!!happy623 wrote:
irc modedEnds
整多d Ends 將Ends發陽光大
- 00:22:421 (2) - NC? good
- 01:29:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 呢度個音慢慢漸大會正d (y) very fucking good!
- 03:25:271 (1) - 呢個用0.75會好d 唔係太難讀到;w;
吾制><其實係因為冇左bgm得返vocal先錦整lol
快d rank左佢
zorefire wrote:
From modding queue
[Easy]
00:25:271 (3) - new combo no because the NC will be too frequent i think
00:30:071 (3) - maybe idk ^
02:12:071 (3) - new combo ^
[Normal]
Perfect
[Hard]
02:19:271 - why that hitsound it sounds out of place D: I think it affected by the previous note, I added hitsound to it
[Wan]
I tested it and eh way over my level but I think its good for ranking
Thanks for mod :>litoluna wrote:
hi~ from #modreq
[General]nice song
Ends diff add "Secret" in tags Fixed
All diffs add "meikyoushisui" in tags. meikyoushisui is this song CD album Fixed
All diffs add "vocaloid3" in tags. ia is vocaloid3 Fixed
Good Luck
Thanks for your mod :3Kenterz9 wrote:
Mod =D
[General]
So wonderful =O
This mapping is perfect with the song ! And the SB is awesome o_o
Also Take my star =3 Thanks :>
[Storyboard]
02:19:271 - 02:28:871 This part doesn't need monochrome BG, it's this part who need it : 02:28:871 - 02:38:471 I think it's good ;w;
02:58:871 - 03:07:871 Maybe a monochrome sakura in this part ? no fix because i want there are clear
[Easy]
01:36:071 (1) - Don't know why, but try this xD Fixed a bit
03:14:471 (2) - Here try this (it does a sort of symmetry) Fixed
[Normal]
Please add slidertick4, it's better =) Great idea :>
00:09:671 (1,2,3) - Why not add a whistle hitsound on the start of the 3 sliders ? I think it's good without whistle ;w;
01:18:146 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:146 (3) - This slider isn't same as 00:11:771 (3) (And don't forget the clap hitsound on the start of the slider)
02:09:671 (1) - Error at the end of the slider ? Fixed
02:28:871 - 02:38:471 This part have "default" clap, maybe you can change it ? Fixed
03:08:471 (2) - Can you decrease the volume at the start of the slider ? Something like 70 / 60 % is better =3 Fixed
03:09:671 (1) - Clap hitsound at the end of the slider Fixed
03:54:071 (1) - Pink NC please, and we can hear the slidertick, it's bad =/ oh.. the slidertick..
The rest is perfect ;D
You accept guest diff ?
Thanks =3