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1. 01:42:220 (4,5) - しっかり重ねましょう。

1. 00:08:146 (1,2,3,4) - 重ねるなら重ねる。ずらすならずらした方がいいです。ちなみに僕はずらすことを推薦します。そしてずらすにあたって、
   今までのこのタイミングでのサークルからサークルの距離は
   
   これ

   
   でしたがここで距離を変えてしまうとプレイヤーが混乱してしまいます。
   一定距離に保つかもしくは十分な距離を開けることを提案します。

1. 00:12:499 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - ここも上と同様でしょうか。例を挙げておきます。
   
   For Example!

   

1. 00:07:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - たたくタイミングが違うのにすべてが同じ間隔だとプレイヤーはわかりません。

1. 00:21:908 (3) - 重ねるかずらすかしましょう。

1. 00:23:158 (1) - 配置をこう変えたらどうでしょう？
   
   配置

   

1. 00:30:658 (2,3) - 距離を離しましょう。

1. 01:50:033 (1,2) - ここも距離を離しましょう。

1. 01:16:908 - 感觉这里少个note，加个感觉会更好
2. 01:42:533 (5) - 这个是故意没和4重叠的？

SPOILER

1. 02:05:033 加個note感覺無妨?

1. 00:35:033 (3,4) http://puu.sh/3H7Z6.jpg 這樣感覺好點（跟音樂）
2. 00:37:376 這裡可以加note 不過排列上可能不好弄
3. 00:59:095 (3,4) 不跟前面的 (1,2) 對稱嗎?

• Tickrate 2 really adds a lot to the song, please consider using it in every difficulty.
  01:02:533 to 01:12:533 could be used as break time, if you need it (and i'd actually recommend it for every difficulty).

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:07:521 (1) - move the middle anchorpoint to x:264, y:316 and the last to x:240, y:276. This should make the stack look a bit better.
   00:12:499 (5) - move it one square to the right (grid4)
   00:13:749 (3) - move it one square to the right and one to the top.
   00:21:908 (3) - why this weird stack? You didn't make anything similiar anywhere else. A normal stack works fine (if you do that obviously fix 00:22:220 (4,5) as well) and you used them in the whole map (apart from a few manual ones)
   00:26:908 (4) - this one is also not used anywhere else in the map and it's kinda a weird anti-jump to do here. Make it like this or similiar?:
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:39:720 (6) - i think it's better if you keep following the triangle-shaped pattern, it just feels... weird as it is now.
   00:38:470 (2,3,4,5,6) - rotating this by 13° (clockwise, selection center), makes it much smoother with 00:37:533 (1)

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Tickrate 2 really adds a lot to the song, please consider using it in every difficulty. hmm I think they're now tickrate 1 0.0
  01:02:533 to 01:12:533 could be used as break time, if you need it (and i'd actually recommend it for every difficulty).nah cuz I think it's a very short song and I would like to have it fully mapped to show I'm not lazy XD

- Sword:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:07:521 (1) - move the middle anchorpoint to x:264, y:316 and the last to x:240, y:276. This should make the stack look a bit better.
   00:12:499 (5) - move it one square to the right (grid4)
   00:13:749 (3) - move it one square to the right and one to the top.
   00:21:908 (3) - why this weird stack? You didn't make anything similiar anywhere else. A normal stack works fine (if you do that obviously fix 00:22:220 (4,5) as well) and you used them in the whole map (apart from a few manual ones)
   00:26:908 (4) - this one is also not used anywhere else in the map and it's kinda a weird anti-jump to do here. Make it like this or similiar?:
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:39:720 (6) - i think it's better if you keep following the triangle-shaped pattern, it just feels... weird as it is now.
   00:38:470 (2,3,4,5,6) - rotating this by 13° (clockwise, selection center), makes it much smoother with 00:37:533 (1)