Hatori-kun wrote:

Kotori mai waifu <3

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Cose Unrankable, deve fissare
→ I miei dubbi umani, cose da considerare
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1. You have to make an easy. Why? There're TWO complete diffs from lolcubes. And there're 1,5 diffs from you. 2>1,5 so, you have to map more!
2. I'd recommend you to fade your colours a bit. Bright colours hurt players' eyeswhile playing and it's hard to focus on them. :<
3. On displays with big resolution your BG will look kinda ugly. Please, please, try to find a better one!
4. Drag start of your break to 01:12:822 - and end to 01:22:095 - so it will fit with music.. Test it, it looks ultra cool!

1. Well, diff itself has pretty fast SV, hard rhythm and intensive flow. That's rhy it's better to map an [Easy] diff that will be friendly towards beginners and make this diff harder!
   • AR5 / OD4 / HP3 will make diff spread better balanced + they will fit with your ehythm/flow better.
2. 00:14:640 - 00:16:095 - 00:17:549 - 00:19:004 - 00:20:458 - It's better to map these beats to follow vocals and to make rhythm more suitable for [Normal] diff. What's more gap between this part and 00:22:277 - this part is too big. So making first part a little bit harder is a good idea.
3. 00:47:913 - missed circle with clap hitsound here. It'll help you to emphasize music here! It feels really empty witout it.
   Note: 00:59:549 - same :<
4. 01:57:731 - oh maaan, not again! Don't be THAT lazy, it's not about missed circle it's about respect. When people see copypasted patterns they know that mapper doesn't even care about them :<
   
   Please, think about it. Make diff a bit harder and avoid copypasta next time!

1. Since this is [Hard] and it has stream it's better to reduce OD by one tick. As for HP Drain, there's no need to keep it THAT low.

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  Great!

1. 02:19:095 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - try to place spinner on 02:20:640 - and map previous part. So, it will be consistent with [Normal]. It's not really needed, but makin map more consistent is always better

tetsutaro wrote:

[Taiko] Perceived difficulty rating: 7* Muzukashii 7* Oni
Before *anyone* points out, <Muzukashii> 00:24:640 (71,72,73) or 01:34:458 (109,110,111) being ddk is perfectly acceptable in this context and level.
<Muzukashii> 01:27:186 (78,79,80) - This however not so much. Maintain more consistency by either removing (79) or adding a katsu at 01:28:731
Fixed it in another way. Made 01:27:367 (80) a katsu instead and then applied katsu to 01:28:731 afterwards. The reason I went for this choice was to make it a little more simple while keeping my version of variety. Tell me what you think of this if you want as well, I like how this turned out.

1. 01:12:822 - Fai iniziare il break qui

1. 00:21:186 (2) - Magari spostalo un po' in basso per non far sembrare monotono il pattern che hai già fatto prima
2. 01:57:368 (4) - Spostalo 3/4 grid giù, scorre meglio (stessa cosa per 01:57:913 (1) - )

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  Andrea:

1. 00:42:095 (6) - Sposta lo slider endpoint in 156|288
2. 01:01:186 (4) - Il pattern è troppo dritto, dovresti spostare questo un po' a sinistra
3. 01:37:186 (7,8) - Un blanket esce piuttosto bene secondo me
4. 01:40:095 (8) - Non dovrebbe essere 1/2 più lungo?
   
   Vicho:
5. 00:57:549 (1) - Move middle sliderpoint 1/2 grids up, it will be better imo :3
6. 00:31:004 (5) - You could add new combo here instead of 00:31:367 (1) - by following well the vocals

Andrea wrote:

I didn't forget it, was just a bit busy, but I modded it now.

Please don't go off-topic here ><

1. 00:40:822 (2) - che ne dici di farlo invece che rigido questo slider di farlo curvato che fa una blanket con 00:43:004 (1) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:48:095 (1) - lo so che non sei solito a fare forme di slider strani ma che ne dici di farlo come l'ho fatto io nello screen? secondo me il flow migliora abbastanza u-u ; dato che vedo copy pasta 01:57:913 (1) - fallo anche con questo slider
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:26:277 (1,2) - migliora la linea di questi 2 slider in un mod simile è molto nazi lo so
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:11:004 (3) - whistle

1. 01:46:458 (6,7,8,9,1) - qui ci dovrebbero essere dei clap normal e non solo normal sampleset e vabbe poi alla fine il finish

1. *-*) <3

1. 00:48:095 - what about to add a slider here that ends on 00:48:458 - like you did here: 01:57:913 (579) -
2. 01:12:095 (332) - what about a D here?
3. 02:10:095 (647) - i think a K will fit better here

Lally wrote:

[Oni]

1. 00:48:095 - what about to add a slider here that ends on 00:48:458 - like you did here: 01:57:913 (579) - My mapping style is something I call progressive variety where I add more stuff as the song goes, however I keep the base structure consistent. That's the reason I didn't map that slider here and I would like it to stay that way.
2. 01:12:095 (332) - what about a D here? There is no crash in the music here and the transition wouldn't be as smooth if it was a D.
3. 02:10:095 (647) - i think a K will fit better here

Nah, I am not a vocal mapper. D is a lot better here in my case because of 01:00:277 (267) - , to keep the consistency in the structure and it flows better. I sometimes use vocals to create variety in rhythm, but not on key notes like this.

1. offset sounds a bit late. Try using 2274?

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[lolcubes' Muzukashii]

1. 00:04:822 (4) - I personally think that would be much better if you can move this note to fit the pitch and instrument there. (The instrument seems stronger there) While you are right, this would devastate the intro structure I have here. The rhythm would be gone because all you would have are 2/1 notes.
2. 00:13:004 (31,32,33) - I don't think triplet fits the music there because it's clear that there are no instrument/drum present, so the triplet is redundant imo. A note at 00:13:186 - should be enough. There is actually a drum, but it's kinda quiet.
3. 01:11:186 (3) - , 01:11:731 (6) - change the notes to kat there so that it can fit the pitch? I believe it fits the pitch better as it is because the most important note stands out. If I do what you ask, it doesn't stand out anymore. Btw, I usually don't map to pitch, but sometimes I take it to shape some patters.
4. 01:22:822 (54,55,56) - Same as 00:13:004 (31,32,33) -
5. 01:52:276 (185) - I think you can change this back to don to fit the drum sound there and also it can correspond to 01:52:458 (186) - Ok.

[lolcubes' Oni]

1. 00:04:822 (5) - I personally think that would be much better if you can move this note to fit the pitch and instrument there. (The instrument seems stronger there) Same as in muzu.
2. (Kiai time) - I don't understand some the big notes there. Some places don't have accent or strong beat, but you still place a big notes there. As a result, the big note doesn't show a good effect and something it sounds weird/bad. Could you review the big notes again? It's actually pretty simple, let me explain. Every finish is a really heavy moment and in almost all cases a cymbal crash, but the parts without the finishers are because I am shaping patterns based on something else. I could put some more finishers but I believe that would be flow breaking so I won't. :p
3. 01:10:822 (325) - big don, 01:11:367 (328) - big kat and 01:11:913 (331) - big kat here? This can emphasize the vocal and also the pitch. You can consider removing 01:12:095 (332) - too. Eh, changing the kats into big kats could actually work, but changing that don to a big don definitely not, that's not a heavy note. I don't like the finish idea though, because this part is relatively calm. Putting finishes here would ruin the calmness and I believe they are emphasized enough with the kats that are already there.
4. 02:20:640 (711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718) - ^Same

nothing else.

Konei wrote:

Gratz! ~