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pw384
快去PM找SG吧
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

384059043 wrote:

快去PM找SG吧
他没补完我怎么找
pw384

qq944364487 wrote:

384059043 wrote:

快去PM找SG吧
他没补完我怎么找
加油吧
Banana
http://puu.sh/3DgcU.zip
终于能开电脑了 这边没网线只有wifi 设置问题忙了两个小时
Topic Starter
[Mahua]
ok all fix!
pw384
好!爆米花准备好了
SapphireGhost
Hello again, I was visiting some people yesterday but I'm back now. A few last things:

- In Banana's Easy, it appears the breaks aren't moved yet (should look like this).
- I really think colours would be appropriate here, so I made some for you, hopefully you can use them!
[Colours]
Combo1 : 240,170,130
Combo2 : 90,90,140
Combo3 : 200,140,130
Combo4 : 180,150,80

And then go ahead and poke me again.
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hello again, I was visiting some people yesterday but I'm back now. A few last things:

- In Banana's Easy, it appears the breaks aren't moved yet (should look like this).
- I really think colours would be appropriate here, so I made some for you, hopefully you can use them!
[Colours]
Combo1 : 240,170,130
Combo2 : 90,90,140
Combo3 : 200,140,130
Combo4 : 180,150,80

And then go ahead and poke me again.
fix! thx~
SapphireGhost
In that case, all is well. Good luck with your map!

Bubbled!
pw384
太棒了 我的图泡了以后这张图也泡了 感动
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

SapphireGhost wrote:

In that case, all is well. Good luck with your map!

Bubbled!
Very thx :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
ts8zs
我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185

could be repair:3
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185
永久黑名单不用说了 mutual已revoke
pw384

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185
Recalculate does not work any more and I don't know why. Maybe it is a bug like this map... http://osu.ppy.sh/s/72134

重拉再resnap就有用了。。麻花啊传上去以后找SG rebubble一下吧
quantum-rose
sayonara ;w;
ts8zs

qq944364487 wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185
永久黑名单不用说了 mutual已revoke
1.Give me kd
2.I put you into blacklist about a month ago,The post you don't kd:3
3.反正unrankable我不戳别人也会戳,怕你啊,有种你来戳我的啊~
(If I don't poke this bubble,others will poke,if you are mad,come on!pokes me:3)
4.You never moded me,mutual is useless:3
Topic Starter
[Mahua]
1.Give me kd
2.I put you into blacklist about a month ago,The post you don't kd:3
3.反正unrankable我不戳别人也会戳,怕你啊,有种你来戳我的啊~
(If I don't poke this bubble,others will poke,if you are mad,come on!pokes me:3)
4.You never moded me,mutual is useless:3
没kd 因为你的mod的技术含量太少 就算是我的mod再水也没你的水 像这种跑跑aimod那种bug一堆的东西就复制过来的东西你叫我怎么给你kd
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

384059043 wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

我来试着戳泡……我非得把这个kd骗到手
[Banana's Easy]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:59:416
Object's end is not snapped! 01:05:262
Object's end is not snapped! 02:16:185
Recalculate does not work any more and I don't know why. Maybe it is a bug like this map... http://osu.ppy.sh/s/72134

重拉再resnap就有用了。。麻花啊传上去以后找SG rebubble一下吧
懒啊 有时间找sco 在check的时候直接改好了
ts8zs

qq944364487 wrote:

1.Give me kd
2.I put you into blacklist about a month ago,The post you don't kd:3
3.反正unrankable我不戳别人也会戳,怕你啊,有种你来戳我的啊~
(If I don't poke this bubble,others will poke,if you are mad,come on!pokes me:3)
4.You never moded me,mutual is useless:3
没kd 因为你的mod的技术含量太少 就算是我的mod再水也没你的水 像这种跑跑aimod那种bug一堆的东西就复制过来的东西你叫我怎么给你kd
谁让你自己不跑,活该被戳
技术含量再少也是mod,只要你改了,能说我的mod没有用?
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

ts8zs wrote:

谁让你自己不跑,活该被戳
真是谢谢了
其实你应该复制这段话
Mod: 节奏下的带感,排列有意思,音效合曲,BG选的不错,Skin配合BG锦上添花,SB看得出花了很多功夫。但我觉得还是再找点mod比较好
这段我就给你kd
ts8zs

qq944364487 wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

谁让你自己不跑,活该被戳
真是谢谢了
其实你应该复制这段话
Mod: 节奏下的带感,排列有意思,音效合曲,BG选的不错,Skin配合BG锦上添花,SB看得出花了很多功夫。但我觉得还是再找点mod比较好
这段我就给你kd
Mod: 节奏下的带感,排列有意思,音效合曲,BG选的不错。但我觉得还是再找点mod比较好
pw384
为了骗得kds不惜复制粘贴 啧啧
ts8zs

384059043 wrote:

为了骗得kds不惜复制粘贴 啧啧
我还删了一段呢……
我又不缺kds= =
我看他给不给,哼……
Scorpiour
sorry for the inconvenience, but i need to pop the bubble due to:

Unsnapped objects in Banana's Easy

i'll mod it later
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Scorpiour wrote:

sorry for the inconvenience, but i need to pop the bubble due to:

Unsnapped objects in Banana's Easy

i'll mod it later
fix
Scorpiour
ok

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Lechenaultia]
  1. 00:11:110 (1) - ctrl+g一下感觉flow会更好
  2. 00:12:956 - 鼓点这么重的地方空拍感觉不太舒服
  3. 00:16:649 (4) - 跳的不够大,我建议放到463:345
  4. 00:26:495 (3,4,5) - 这组比较期待平着过来,比如
  5. 00:37:264 (4) - 形状不好看
  6. 00:39:033 (2) - 建议删掉不好听, vocal小空拍这里值得突出一下,也好强调00:39:110 (2) -
  7. 00:41:264 (3,4,5) - 合并成一个1/2折返,这里五连用的莫名其妙的
  8. 01:02:880 (9) - slider大败笔,强烈建议删了
  9. 01:24:726 (6) - ^,还不如没有
  10. 01:37:495 (9) - ^
  11. 01:44:649 (1) - 跳的flow不好
  12. 01:46:803 (5) - 重拍压在slider尾巴导致节奏错位
  13. 01:48:957 (5,6,7) - 无意义的三连
  14. 01:49:956 (9) - 依然是难听的要命的slider
  15. 02:01:649 (8) - ^
  16. 02:04:649 (3,4) - ^
  17. 02:05:572 (5) - Slider尾压重音
  18. 02:10:957 (4,5,6) - 电吉他高潮燃起来的时候突然连续stack破坏flow和打击感
  19. 02:13:264 (6) - ^
  20. 02:48:033 (3,4,5,6,1) - flow很别扭,形状也难看……
  21. 02:51:110 (1) - 不合适的stack
  22. 03:02:187 (1) - ^
  23. 03:21:572 (4) - 既然前面都朝一个方向走了这里为什么突然反过来方向?
节奏太乱,感觉你音乐节奏都没有弄明白就想当然的一路摆下去了。看起来像草稿,还有种画虎不成的感觉。总而言之就是按照我惯常的标准节奏弄成这样我该让你去remap才对,不过考虑到还是新人,多去再找几个mod吧然后再来找我。其他diff整体来收相对好点,下次recheck再说。
ts8zs
我的kd呢XD
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

ts8zs wrote:

我的kd呢XD
没有
Scorpiour
please keep the forum clean

@ts8zs you are never expected to ask kds while mapper don't think your post is helpful.

edit: purge
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Scorpiour wrote:

ok

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Lechenaultia]
  1. 00:11:110 (1) - ctrl+g一下感觉flow会更好 ok
  2. 00:12:956 - 鼓点这么重的地方空拍感觉不太舒服 不好意思 这是故意的D:
  3. 00:16:649 (4) - 跳的不够大,我建议放到463:345 ok
  4. 00:26:495 (3,4,5) - 这组比较期待平着过来,比如 no
  5. 00:37:264 (4) - 形状不好看 ok
  6. 00:39:033 (2) - 建议删掉不好听, vocal小空拍这里值得突出一下,也好强调00:39:110 (2) - no
  7. 00:41:264 (3,4,5) - 合并成一个1/2折返,这里五连用的莫名其妙的 觉得不爽
  8. 01:02:880 (9) - slider大败笔,强烈建议删了
  9. 01:24:726 (6) - ^,还不如没有
  10. 01:37:495 (9) - ^
  11. 01:44:649 (1) - 跳的flow不好 好 坑坑他们
  12. 01:46:803 (5) - 重拍压在slider尾巴导致节奏错位 还好啊
  13. 01:48:957 (5,6,7) - 无意义的三连
  14. 01:49:956 (9) - 依然是难听的要命的slider
  15. 02:01:649 (8) - ^
  16. 02:04:649 (3,4) - ^
  17. 02:05:572 (5) - Slider尾压重音
  18. 02:10:957 (4,5,6) - 电吉他高潮燃起来的时候突然连续stack破坏flow和打击感
  19. 02:13:264 (6) - ^
  20. 02:48:033 (3,4,5,6,1) - flow很别扭,形状也难看……
  21. 02:51:110 (1) - 不合适的stack
  22. 03:02:187 (1) - ^
  23. 03:21:572 (4) - 既然前面都朝一个方向走了这里为什么突然反过来方向?
节奏太乱,感觉你音乐节奏都没有弄明白就想当然的一路摆下去了。看起来像草稿,还有种画虎不成的感觉。总而言之就是按照我惯常的标准节奏弄成这样我该让你去remap才对,不过考虑到还是新人,多去再找几个mod吧然后再来找我。其他diff整体来收相对好点,下次recheck再说。
改了一点 感觉很多地方感觉不同
ts8zs
我追着你要kd真的很对不起,我以后不会再要了
Ulysses

ts8zs wrote:

我追着你要kd真的很对不起,我以后不会再要了
我看不過眼才來post,
你真的好討厭
EDIT:會抱歉就好,友情比起KD來得重要

祝早RANK
Flask

nold_1702 wrote:

我看不過眼才來post,
你真的好討厭
ts8zs

nold_1702 wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

我追着你要kd真的很对不起,我以后不会再要了
我看不過眼才來post,
你真的好討厭
EDIT:會抱歉就好,友情比起KD來得重要

祝早RANK
真抱歉啊,友情什么的……在我指出aimod戳泡的时候他就把我拉黑了……这叫友情?跳楼大甩卖我都不要233
缺的不是这一两个kds,只是看看这垃圾友情是不是连2kds都不如
让你们讨厌真是对不起啊,关注这个帖子真心对我心脏不好,以后这个帖子你们说啥我都不想看了。
@麻花 你爱怎样怎样,有种你来打我啊。
不多废话免得被sco删帖,sco: keep clean,关于我的事我道歉,我不应该make this fourm mess,所以你们也不要闹。
你们好好mod,争取这个重新泡,我也不会没事闲得来戳了。我以后也不关注这个图了。
以上。
Ulysses
你還是不明白錯的討厭的不在你戳泡的行為而在於態度
Fycho
hi ~ingame req
Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[general]
None

[ Lechenaultia]

  • 00:12:956 –00:13:110 –这两处加note,这个空拍明显没00:13:418 - 00:14:187 –好啊
    00:24:957 (2) –向左弯
    00:25:572 (6) –向下弯
    00:25:880 (1,2) –平行?
    00:26:649 (5,6) –跳略小啊,和前面比起来
    00:35:726 (4,5,6,7,8) –overmap啊,背景里没1/4音
    00:37:879 (7) –移到(130,103)
    00:41:110 (1,2,3,4,5) –感觉三连比五连好啊1/2滑条从00:41:264 –开始,00:41:571 –这里放一个note
    00:42:803 (4,5,1) –这三个等距比较好
    00:44:341 (6) –换成一个note,设置空拍
    00:53:880 (7) -加NC啊
    00:56:571 (7,1,2,3) -–节奏参考[url]puu.sh/46oUv.jpg[/url] (光标所在时间是00:57:033 )
    01:00:187 (9) –移到(155,188)附近
    01:02:033 (6) -http://puu.sh/46p37.jpg
    01:33:572 (6) –同前
    01:36:803 (5,6,7,8) –这里难读啊,本身这个01:36:880 (6) –就有点overmap三连和滑条分开摆比较好
    01:56:957 (1,2,3) –间距小点啊,都看起来和01:54:495 (1,2) –差不多了
    02:12:264 –add note,突然双点打起来不带感了ww
    02:22:649 (1) –感觉不要减速啊
    02:56:649 (10,11,12) –这样试试 http://puu.sh/46pjm.jpg
    03:00:879 –加note
    03:05:110 (2) -^
    03:11:726 (5) –NC

[fay]

  • 00:35:725 (4) –这个换成从00:35:571 –开始的1/1滑条
    00:37:418 (2) –别突然跟vocal啊0.0拆成一note+一个1/2滑条
    00:44:033 (1) –这里应该是1/4滑条折返两次而不是1/3啊0.0。仔细听音
    00:50:341 (5) –Ctrl+G达到更好的flow
    01:13:879 (9) – 一根大白线nc一次的话这里也要nc
    01:40:956 (1,2,3,4) –说点nazi的,这几个可以试试逐渐加速或减速的滑条
    01:48:956 (3,1) –距离远点或者stack,不要看起来和01:48:802 (2,3) –一样
    01:55:110 (5) –延长1/4和前面一致
    01:58:802 (3,4) –距离远点
    02:12:033 (6) –移到(157,216)
    02:14:956 (8,9,10) –弧度大点,现在的太直和后面接起来移动起来不怎么顺
    02:22:033 (4,5,6) –顺时针旋转120°,让4在3的对面
    02:29:879 (1) –盖掉大白线只跟vocal很别扭啊,02:29:879 –这里放一个circle,然后02:30:187 –起1/1滑条
    02:17:264 (1,2,4) -和前面的看起来违和满满,打起来也怪怪,还是跟鼓点下1/4的比较好。。就算要保持slider,也最好在02:17:571 –02:18:187 -02:18:802 –结束。
    02:48:648 (1,2,3,4) –排版有点乱,因为这个02:47:418 (1,2,3,4) –是整齐排版的
    03:06:956 (1,2) –swap nc

[hard]

  • HP+1
    01:11:418 (2) –我觉的折返1次就好了,和前面保持一致,多加两个note就是
    双折返这里不容易读
    01:28:187 (1) –前移1/2,然后01:28:495 –加note
    01:31:110 (1,2,3,4) –平行??
    01:33:264 (6) –双折返
    01:37:879 –add note
    02:23:110 (1) -0.0
    02:53:880 (8,1) –间距远点啊

[normal]

  • 00:35:571 (3) –尾上clap去掉啊,或者在00:36:033 –结束
    01:33:110 (5,1) –最好别接触0.0
    02:50:495 (2) –太下面了吧
    02:53:572 (3,4,1,2) –这些overlap不好看啊

[easy]

  • OD-1 HP+1
    01:45:571 (1) –移这里01:45:879开始
    01:47:110 (2) – 移这01:47:110 –
    02:49:571 (1) – 为什么你们在一般的地方都喜欢盖掉大白线?这样很不舒服的
    03:01:264 (3,1) –交换,circle在前比较好imo

Good luck~
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Fycho wrote:

hi ~ingame req
Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[general]
None

[ Lechenaultia]

  • 00:12:956 –00:13:110 –这两处加note,这个空拍明显没00:13:418 - 00:14:187 –好啊
    00:24:957 (2) –向左弯
    00:25:572 (6) –向下弯
    00:25:880 (1,2) –平行?
    00:26:649 (5,6) –跳略小啊,和前面比起来
    00:35:726 (4,5,6,7,8) –overmap啊,背景里没1/4音
    00:37:879 (7) –移到(130,103)
    00:41:110 (1,2,3,4,5) –感觉三连比五连好啊1/2滑条从00:41:264 –开始,00:41:571 –这里放一个note
    00:42:803 (4,5,1) –这三个等距比较好
    00:44:341 (6) –换成一个note,设置空拍
    00:53:880 (7) -加NC啊
    00:56:571 (7,1,2,3) -–节奏参考[url]puu.sh/46oUv.jpg[/url] (光标所在时间是00:57:033 )
    01:00:187 (9) –移到(155,188)附近
    01:02:033 (6) -http://puu.sh/46p37.jpg
    01:33:572 (6) –同前
    01:36:803 (5,6,7,8) –这里难读啊,本身这个01:36:880 (6) –就有点overmap三连和滑条分开摆比较好
    01:56:957 (1,2,3) –间距小点啊,都看起来和01:54:495 (1,2) –差不多了
    02:12:264 –add note,突然双点打起来不带感了ww
    02:22:649 (1) –感觉不要减速啊
    02:56:649 (10,11,12) –这样试试 http://puu.sh/46pjm.jpg
    03:00:879 –加note
    03:05:110 (2) -^
    03:11:726 (5) –NC


[hard]

  • HP+1
    01:11:418 (2) –我觉的折返1次就好了,和前面保持一致,多加两个note就是
    双折返这里不容易读
    01:28:187 (1) –前移1/2,然后01:28:495 –加note
    01:31:110 (1,2,3,4) –平行??
    01:33:264 (6) –双折返
    01:37:879 –add note
    02:23:110 (1) -0.0
    02:53:880 (8,1) –间距远点啊

[normal]

  • 00:35:571 (3) –尾上clap去掉啊,或者在00:36:033 –结束
    01:33:110 (5,1) –最好别接触0.0
    02:50:495 (2) –太下面了吧
    02:53:572 (3,4,1,2) –这些overlap不好看啊


Good luck~
thx mod 改了一些
sherrie__fay
改了一点 但是基本上节奏和排版不会再大动了 抱歉:<
Jycool
[Lechenaultia]
开头十分适合加个转盘,要是我,我就加,你有写地方节奏下的不好,建议你看看fay姐的难度
00:05:726 (1) - 去掉nc
00:05:879 (1) - 加nc
00:06:033 (1) - 去掉nc
00:06:802 (1) - 去掉nc
00:13:264 (1) - 原地重拍改了要不就把00:13:572 (1) - 放远一点
00:14:341 (2) - 这个我还是建议摆远,不要摆在原地
00:26:803 (6,7) - 不要stack在一起,影响流畅感
00:43:956 (1) - 这个用短滑条意义不明
00:44:341 (6,1) - 要是我我就把1个头和6的尾巴stack
01:46:803 (5,6) - 类似这种地方的节奏处理的不是很好,因为在01:47:110 - 这里有个音,用滑条尾来压这个音就感觉很怪,没有打击感
03:03:418 (1,2,3,4) - 这段节奏别扭,前面都是跟vocal,突然跟鼓点有些莫名,而且03:03:418 (1,2) - 这个空拍用的不好
[fay]
normal的clap不是很适合这曲子,建议换成和其他难度一样的clap
00:35:418 (3) - 这个空拍用的不是很合适,建议把3放在00:35:571 -
02:20:341 (1) - 这个空拍用的也不是很合适,因为这里有个长音,建议换成到02:20:648 - 结束的滑条,再在02:20:802 - 加note
其他没什么问题,做的挺好的
[hard]
00:14:803 (1) - 很丑,非常
02:57:880 (3,4) - 离得太远
[normal&easy]
这么多人看了,应该没问题

祝rank
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[Lechenaultia]
开头十分适合加个转盘,要是我,我就加,你有写地方节奏下的不好,建议你看看fay姐的难度
00:05:726 (1) - 去掉nc
00:05:879 (1) - 加nc
00:06:033 (1) - 去掉nc
00:06:802 (1) - 去掉nc
00:13:264 (1) - 原地重拍改了要不就把00:13:572 (1) - 放远一点
00:14:341 (2) - 这个我还是建议摆远,不要摆在原地
00:26:803 (6,7) - 不要stack在一起,影响流畅感
00:43:956 (1) - 这个用短滑条意义不明
00:44:341 (6,1) - 要是我我就把1个头和6的尾巴stack
01:46:803 (5,6) - 类似这种地方的节奏处理的不是很好,因为在01:47:110 - 这里有个音,用滑条尾来压这个音就感觉很怪,没有打击感
03:03:418 (1,2,3,4) - 这段节奏别扭,前面都是跟vocal,突然跟鼓点有些莫名,而且03:03:418 (1,2) - 这个空拍用的不好
[fay]
normal的clap不是很适合这曲子,建议换成和其他难度一样的clap
00:35:418 (3) - 这个空拍用的不是很合适,建议把3放在00:35:571 -
02:20:341 (1) - 这个空拍用的也不是很合适,因为这里有个长音,建议换成到02:20:648 - 结束的滑条,再在02:20:802 - 加note
其他没什么问题,做的挺好的
[hard]
00:14:803 (1) - 很丑,非常
02:57:880 (3,4) - 离得太远
[normal&easy]
这么多人看了,应该没问题

祝rank
谢mod
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