Done with manual snapping!
mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Hi! Time for a new check. I'll do it in English this time.
[Normal:]
• 00:18:112 (7) - Since you like to follow vocals in general, I suggest you to move this Slider 1/2 back (after that, this slider should finish in 00:18:549). Give it a try please. OK
• 00:24:808 (2) - This note is not following properly the music and it produces a bad transition in the map. Move this note 1/2 forward, with that this note will follow better the vocals. It's following the music, just hear 00:23:501 (6,7) -
• 00:37:202 (5,6,7) - As I said above, these notes are not following the music either. I think you should use some music over red ticks, I suggested you use some 1/2 sliders to make the pattern a bit simpler for this diff. Well, in general I suggest you to make something like this:
OK!
• 00:38:511 (x) - If I were you, I'd add a Note here (with whistle). It is better if you follow other things in the music and not just the vocals (as I said you in my previous mod). OK!
• 00:39:165 (1) - The Slider end is bad snapped since it is not following anything in the music, there is no sound over the red tick. The best way to fix that, is reducing the slider length in 1/8 (yes, 1/8.. listen the music in 25% playback to confirm that). On the other hand, you can reduce the Slider in 1/4 because in someway follow the vocals, but you need to remove the finish at the slider end. For me, the best idea is reducing the slider in 1/8 and keeping the finish at the slider end. 1/8
• 00:40:783 (2) - I don't feel really comfortable with this note over the blue tick, can be kinda difficult for an average player. I suggest you a simple rhythm here, move this note 1/4 forward to follow the vocals instead of the Instrumental Nah, sounds good, players can try again, and again, and again..I still think your hitsounds can improve. So, I'll give you some hitsounds suggestion here.• 00:07:624 (3) - Add a whistle at the slider beginning to follow the Vocals. Fine, sounds good.
• 00:08:499 (4) - Whistle in this Note, same reason as above. Nope, I don't like how it sounds here.
• 00:10:248 (1) - Whistle at the slider start. Yeah
• 00:11:123 (2) - Whistle. Nope, this is just the same as 00:08:499 (4) -
• 00:11:779 (4) - (^) Yep!
• 00:13:739 (1) - Add a finish at the slider start to emphasize the cymbals and a whistle at the slider end. OK
• 00:15:051 (2) - Whistle in the reverse arrow Si, suena muy bien.
• 00:16:144 (3) - Whistle OK
• 00:17:893 - If you the suggestion mentioned in my mod, you need to add a whistle at the slider start here. OK
• 00:20:669 (1) - This clap at the slider beginning sounds pretty odd, I think it is better if you delete it and add a Finish instead Much better!
• 00:21:540 (3) - Whistle at the slider start. Ok
• 00:22:411 (5) - (^) Ok
• 00:24:154 (1) - (^) Ok
• 00:27:640 (1,2) - Whistle in both sliders beginning Ok
• 00:31:126 (1) - Finish at the Slider start. Ok
• 00:31:997 (2) - Whistle. Ok
• 00:44:341 (6) - Add a Whistle at the slider beginning Ok
• 00:49:338 (2) - (^) Ok
• 00:51:512 (6) - Finish at the slider end I don't think it sounds well
• 00:55:418 (1) - Finish Ok
• 00:56:287 (3,4,5) - Add whistles in those sliders beginning. Ok
• 00:58:896 (Spin) - I think a clap fits better in this spinner as Xin did in his diff.
- Basically the idea is the same in all these hitsounds, they fit much better with the song. Your custom clap is the Normal sampleset sound, so only claps make the hitsounding really boring, some whistles are really needed. Try adding at least most of them, but please give me a good reason if you want to reject some of them.
[Hard:]
• 00:05:899 (1,2) - That kind of things always makes trouble in me, in some way it doesn't flow during the gameplay. I suggest you to remove one of the sliders and instead of that add two repetitions in the slider (1). Ok
• 00:11:997 (5) - I think is better if you remove this Note, previously you had a 1/1 slider and you didn't emphasize that beat. Ok
• 00:19:617 (4,5,6,7) - Same as my first suggestion, these feel bad to me. I suggest you to use a pattern like this. OK
• 00:39:165 (4) - This slider need to finish 1/8 forward, to follow better the music. Again, I recommend you to listen the music in 25% playback so you can verify that by yourself Ok
• 00:46:080 (1) - And as I said in the previous suggestion, this need to finish 1/8 forward as well Ok
- You can use the Hitsounds suggestion that I gave you in Normal if you want too. I recommend that for consistency.
[Insane:]
• 00:09:373 (4) - This pattern flows better if you move this note up to the Sliders, with that I mean that you should move this note to x:256 y:8 Ok
• 00:19:406 (1) - I think that you are missing a clap at the slider beginning you're right!
• 00:39:529 (4) - This should be snapped in 1/8, not in 1/6 Ok
• 00:45:210 (1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend that in any difficulty, because it has the same spacing as your 1/4 patterns when it is a 1/2 pattern. I recommend you to increase the spacing between the notes or stack them properly Stacked
• 00:46:386 (2) - Move this note 1/8 forward, if you want to follow properly the song Ok..
• 00:47:136 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:45:210 ummm... ok
• 00:57:591 (6) - This slider will follow better the music if you reduce the slider in 1/2 and after that add a Note in 00:58:026 nah!, I feel it fine how it is
- Again, You can use some of the hitsounds mentioned in the Normal diff.
Ok, that's all.
Gonna pop due to the number of changes that you'd need to do.
Give me a call later, would be better if you talk to me in-game since I need to discuss some other things with you.
21:04 mancusojuanmattos: creo que encontre un par de cosas
21:04 mancusojuanmattos: te las puedo decir por aca?
21:07 mancusojuanmattos: ezek (?
21:09 ezek: si
21:10 ezek: y donde se estaban escondiendo esas cosas?
21:10 mancusojuanmattos: debajo de la cama xD
21:11 ezek: y busque! debajo de la cama♪ y encontre! pedazos de mi alma♪
21:11 mancusojuanmattos: hablando en serio ahora xD
21:11 ezek: ok
21:12 mancusojuanmattos: creo que agregar cartoon network en los tags no duele, fue una serie que pasaron mucho tiempo por Cartoon Network
21:12 mancusojuanmattos: no se, digo
21:12 mancusojuanmattos: que pensas?
21:12 ezek: IDK
21:12 mancusojuanmattos: yo buscaria algo de scooby doo por Cartoon Network, sinceramente
21:12 ezek: ya esta el hana barbera
21:12 mancusojuanmattos: pero esta en vos
21:13 mancusojuanmattos: wee.. no se, si queres agregalo sino no xD
21:13 mancusojuanmattos: pasemos a la Normal
21:14 mancusojuanmattos: 00:54:338 (5,6) - El ritmo se siente raro aca, lo senti desde la primera vez pero no sabia como corregirlo
21:14 mancusojuanmattos: ahora si :P
21:14 mancusojuanmattos: elimina el segundo slider y hace que el primero termine en 00:54:773
21:14 mancusojuanmattos: 00:54:773 -
21:14 mancusojuanmattos: luego agrega una nota en 00:54:990 -
21:14 ezek: hhmm.. aver..
21:15 ezek: dame tiempo
21:15 mancusojuanmattos: avisame cuando estes listo
21:18 ezek: ya esta :)
21:18 mancusojuanmattos: 00:38:511 (7) - Yo moveria esta nota a x:268 y:172, fluye mejor
21:21 ezek: ok, lo estaba pensando
21:22 mancusojuanmattos: Hard:
21:22 ezek: Duro/Dificil
21:23 mancusojuanmattos: 00:19:617 (4,5,6,7) - Veo que hiciste lo que te dije, pero no estoy conforme con el posicionamiento de las notas
21:23 mancusojuanmattos: no me gusta que la distancia entre (4,5) sea distinta a la de (5,6,7)
21:24 mancusojuanmattos: yo aumentaria el espacio entre (5,6,7) a 0.8x
21:24 mancusojuanmattos: esta bien para una Hard
21:24 ezek: hmm.. aver
21:25 ezek: me faltaban 2 claps 00:20:357 (6,7) - ya los añadi
21:25 mancusojuanmattos: eso tambien xD
21:27 ezek: que tal http://puu.sh/37482.jpg ?
21:27 mancusojuanmattos: eso tambien sirve :)
21:29 ezek: ya esta bien todo asi?
21:29 mancusojuanmattos: te tengo que molestar con los hitsounds otra vez :/
21:30 mancusojuanmattos: aqui vamos
21:30 ezek: ok, ya se... siempre me han salido mal :(
21:30 mancusojuanmattos: 00:11:123 (3) - Whistle al comienzo
21:30 ezek: OK
21:30 mancusojuanmattos: 00:12:864 (3) - Ese finish se siente muy alto, yo lo eliminaria, no hay nada para enfatizar
21:31 ezek: Eliminadoouu
21:31 mancusojuanmattos: 00:12:864 (5) - Whistle al comienzo, vas a ver que sigue bien el 'Doooo' xD
21:32 mancusojuanmattos: 00:17:893 (4) - Y ahi tambien al comienzo, juega bien con el 'heeeeelp'
21:33 ezek: ok (2x)
21:33 mancusojuanmattos: 00:24:154 (2) - Otro whistle ahi
21:34 ezek: ok
21:34 mancusojuanmattos: 00:28:512 (5,6) - Whistle en los 2 comienzos de los Sliders
21:35 ezek: ok
21:35 mancusojuanmattos: 00:49:773 (1) - Whistle al comienzo del Slider
21:35 mancusojuanmattos: al final, al final del Slider
21:35 mancusojuanmattos: perdon
21:36 ezek: ok
21:37 mancusojuanmattos: 00:56:287 (5) - Ahora si whistle al comienzo del Slider
21:37 ezek: ok
21:37 mancusojuanmattos: 00:57:157 (1) - Y por ultimo un whistle en esa nota
21:38 ezek: yep
21:38 mancusojuanmattos: y una ultima cosa en la Hard, pero no son hitsounds xD
21:39 mancusojuanmattos: 00:54:121 (1,2,3,4) - Despues del slider estas notas fluyen bastante raro
21:39 mancusojuanmattos: te propongo hacer algo mas o menos asi
21:39 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791042
21:41 ezek: ok
21:43 mancusojuanmattos: 00:43:471 (1) - Siento que olvidaste un clap al final del Slider, se siente muy vacio sin hitsounds
21:44 ezek: si... creo que lo olvide
21:44 mancusojuanmattos: 00:47:136 (4,5,6) - Deberias apilar estas notas correctamente
21:44 mancusojuanmattos: (4,5) lo estan pero (6) no
21:45 ezek: ok, me quedo mal por apurado
21:48 mancusojuanmattos: 00:12:427 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - Fijate bien esas notas? Me parece que estan unsnapped, pero AiMod no me marca nada :/
21:51 ezek: you're right! they're unsapped, hmm.. I checked the map well y no lo habia notado :/
21:51 mancusojuanmattos: yo tampoco xD
21:52 mancusojuanmattos: no me marca nada el AiMod, por eso
21:52 ezek: cochino AiMod
21:52 mancusojuanmattos: now, my hitsound mod! (again :P)
21:52 ezek: :O
21:53 mancusojuanmattos: 00:11:123 (4) - Whistle
21:53 ezek: Ok
21:53 mancusojuanmattos: al final del mapa agregaste mucho y bien los whistles pero te faltaron al comienzo del mapa xD
21:53 mancusojuanmattos: 00:17:237 (2) - Whistle al comienzo del slider
21:54 ezek: Ok
21:54 mancusojuanmattos: 00:21:976 (1) - Whistle al final del Slider
21:54 ezek: ok
21:55 mancusojuanmattos: 00:23:719 (1,2) - Como se nota que no le di importancia a los combos, seria mejor que elimines el combo en (1) y lo agregues en (2)
21:55 mancusojuanmattos: luego agrega un whistle en 00:24:154 -
21:56 mancusojuanmattos: 00:25:026 - Y otro whistle ahi, al comienzo del slider
21:56 ezek: Ok (3x)
21:57 mancusojuanmattos: 00:31:126 (2) - Whistle al comienzo del Slider
21:57 ezek: ok
21:58 mancusojuanmattos: 00:59:548 (3) - Y otro whistle al comienzo del Slider
21:59 mancusojuanmattos: luego de eso puedes actualizar
21:59 ezek: ok
22:01 ezek: listo
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: meh..
22:03 ezek: meh..
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: Normal.. 00:39:165 (1,1) - El spacing es inconsistente entre las notas
22:05 ezek: listo, le s aplique el distance snap
22:07 mancusojuanmattos: bueno, ahora si parece estar todo bien, en todas las diffs.
22:07 mancusojuanmattos: actualiza de nuevo
22:07 ezek: ok
[TimingPoints]
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6745,437.190323520839,4,2,1,60,1,0
18986,425.531914893617,4,2,1,60,1,0
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58042,437.956204379562,4,2,1,60,1,0
58917,434.782608695652,4,2,1,60,1,0
Done!Charles445 wrote:
Timing is indeed messed up, no 1/8 should be needed ever in the map.
I gave timing a shot, have a listen.[TimingPoints]
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6745,437.190323520839,4,2,1,60,1,0
18986,425.531914893617,4,2,1,60,1,0
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31145,433.212996389892,4,2,1,60,1,0
32877,436.363636363636,4,2,1,60,1,0
33313,422.535211267606,4,2,1,60,1,0
33735,430.10752688172,4,2,1,60,1,0
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Thanks!Teara wrote:
Still no progress here?
I'll make this my top priority this weekend.
Thanks a lot!LunarSakuya wrote:
General
- Title is supposed to be Scooby-Doo, Where Are You? (question mark) Thanks to Garven for googling http://puu.sh/3D3sA.png thanks Garven!
Normal
00:17:018 (5) - NC, like 00:10:242 (1) - OK
Hard
00:15:707 (2) - Delete Finish from end, i'd prob replace it with a whistle; right now it brings unnecessary emphasis on a part that's supposed to "fade off" vocals-wise hmm.. ok, replaced w/whistle
Insane
00:34:595 (4) - NC? introduces the new measure ok
00:47:901 (1) - one grid up for even stream spacing ok
00:57:380 (5,6) - Try this rhythm instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/867451 fits the vocals much better, which this part seems to be relying on more no.. yeah, it sounds better and I would like to do this but the new timing section doesn't let the slider be snapped at the end.
just some small things besides the title~
Call me back ^^ ok!
the clone has been killed!LunarSakuya wrote:
Hmm it seems like the old osb file is still there when I redownloaded. Might wanna delete that
XD XD XD!!!!!CDFA wrote:
i find it amusing that the title ends with a ? while the source ends with a !. you would of thought it was the same ._."ezek wrote:
Title: Scooby-Doo, Where Are You?
Source: Scooby-Doo, Where Are You!
thanksmancuso_JM_ wrote:
Glad to see that re-ranked!!
Congratz my friend!