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Topic Starter
Hinsvar

gideon5504 wrote:

My 7th mod :D

Cold:
~01:22:760 -It's a bit hard to read,put the circle at the reverse slider end to emphasis 1/2 beat note. Uhm, I'm sure enough it's not that hard and it's impossible to place it there.
~03:03:541 - ^-Same goes here ^
~Can't find anymore mistakes here 0.o

Frozen:
~00:53:229 -Put NC here instead of the circle b4. Why?
~01:46:432 - It's a bit hard to read here,maybe something new? Hmm, rearranged the pattern there.

Your map has been modded many times,so I dunno if this advice would do any but I tried my best ><
Great map btw ^^ and good luck~
Thanks for modding! ;)
GIDZ

Hinsvar wrote:

gideon5504 wrote:

My 7th mod :D

Cold:
~01:22:760 -It's a bit hard to read,put the circle at the reverse slider end to emphasis 1/2 beat note. Uhm, I'm sure enough it's not that hard and it's impossible to place it there.
~03:03:541 - ^-Same goes here ^
~Can't find anymore mistakes here 0.o

Frozen:
~00:53:229 -Put NC here instead of the circle b4. Why?
~01:46:432 - It's a bit hard to read here,maybe something new? Hmm, rearranged the pattern there.

Your map has been modded many times,so I dunno if this advice would do any but I tried my best ><
Great map btw ^^ and good luck~
Thanks for modding! ;)
Lol, I tried my best but I am still inexperienced in modding :o
AnreFM
Halo Hinsvar :D
M4M from Hinely's queue? :3

  • StoryBoarding
  1. 00:29:674 - SB loads exceed 5.00, try to reduce?
  2. 02:02:955 - ^
  3. 02:38:112 - ^
  4. 02:41:862 - ^
  5. 02:45:612 - ^
  6. 01:13:620 - Suggestion : For every star.png that have reached the bottom of the map, how about adding fade? Will make the map nicer and besides, having them dissappear like that isn't looked really nice in my opinion orz
  7. 02:07:514 - Same as above; for the s.png this time, add fade also
  • COLD
  1. 00:13:620 (1) - nazi sorry; raise the slider end 1 grid to keep symmetry with 00:11:745 (3) -
  2. 00:41:276 (2,3,4) - Why the circles are so straight? How about moving the
  3. 00:41:510 (3) - Doesn't really look nice i think orz
  4. 00:56:745 (3) - Avoid stacking on normal, might be confusing for beginners
  5. 01:07:995 (4) - Make it curvy?
  6. 01:22:760 (2) - I don't think this note is really necessary and a tiny bit confusing for beginner orz
  7. 01:49:245 (4) - NC? different rhythm
  8. 02:24:870 (4) - NC
  9. 02:32:604 (1) - I think the spinner should start better at 02:32:838 instead, more fit the flow you're following from the notes before it :D
    03:03:541 (1) - Change with spinner until 03:04:245? Can make the play better :D
  • FROZEN
  1. 00:11:745 (1,2,3) - Why not symmetry with 00:10:807 (1,2,3) -? If it is, it will make the NC in the 00:12:682 (1) - fit actually orz
  2. 00:53:229 (2) - NC here instead of 00:52:995 (1) -
  3. 02:11:510 - Add note here? Isn't really good if left blank orz
  4. 02:29:557 (1) - Doesn't really necesarry to put NC here, still same rhythm(and to avoid too short combo too :))
  5. 03:03:073 (2) - NC? Gives a nice feeling and to emphasize the silence gap in the 03:02:370 (1) - :D
Uhh sorry for the short mod, this map is already great :)
Hope my mod helps you, good luck! :)
Starrr~ :D kecantol sama lagunya
yurunneram
Mod requested from my queue's 12 hour birthday bonus! ^^

Cold
I think the hitsounds should be louder. At least by about 5%. For this diff and the other diff
00:26:745 (3) - Move the slider to x360 y216 then resnap the other notes.

Frozen
00:23:463 (2,3,4) - try

E-eh @.@ Ne.. I couldn't find much. Gomen >< Dun give me Kudosu! I dun want kudosu for this. very sry

You've been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram
shikyu
hi, M4M for Hinely's queue :D

overall it's pretty good, just some little suggestion

[Frozen]
00:18:541 (5,1,2,3,4) - it can be a pentagonal (?), if you interested to change http://puu.sh/3qiD7.jpg
00:23:698 (3) - you can place it blanket with slider (4)
01:06:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - too linear, it can be made into circular pattern like this http://puu.sh/3qhl1.jpg
01:41:745 (1) - whistle on slider's start?
02:03:776 (1,2) - prefer drum-finish here, but up to you
02:58:385 (4,1) - use 1,2x DS pls, it's awkward since it has same beat, after that use 1,0x DS isn't problem http://puu.sh/3qiut.jpg

[Cold]
00:26:745 (3) - move bit down (x:360 y:216) and fix slider to blanket 00:26:276 (2)
01:01:432 (4) - move to x:372 y:176 to blanket slider head with slider (3)
02:54:401 (3) - move a bit down? to prevent it touch HP bar and make smooth circular (can use x:192 y:32)
02:55:807 (5) - move bit down to blanket slider head with slider 02:54:870 (4)

I prevent from nazi mod, especially for triplet arrangement. just make it have more variety (circular or diagonal), your choice :)
semoga berguna :v that's all, good luck~
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

AnreFM wrote:

  • COLD
  1. 00:13:620 (1) - nazi sorry; raise the slider end 1 grid to keep symmetry with 00:11:745 (3) - Arranged the slider by myself.
  2. 00:41:276 (2,3,4) - Why the circles are so straight? How about moving the
  3. 00:41:510 (3) - Doesn't really look nice i think orz I don't see any problem with this o.o
  4. 00:56:745 (3) - Avoid stacking on normal, might be confusing for beginners I'm sure enough stacks are fine in a Normal diff...
  5. 01:07:995 (4) - Make it curvy? It fits better with the entire pattern if made straight.
  6. 01:22:760 (2) - I don't think this note is really necessary and a tiny bit confusing for beginner orz Huh? I think it's fine; there's nothing to worry o.o
  7. 01:49:245 (4) - NC? different rhythm Don't see how could it be different.
  8. 02:24:870 (4) - NC ^
  9. 02:32:604 (1) - I think the spinner should start better at 02:32:838 instead, more fit the flow you're following from the notes before it :D Done.
    03:03:541 (1) - Change with spinner until 03:04:245? Can make the play better :D Nope; a spinner that lasts less than a second is a very bad idea.
  • FROZEN
  1. 00:11:745 (1,2,3) - Why not symmetry with 00:10:807 (1,2,3) -? If it is, it will make the NC in the 00:12:682 (1) - fit actually orz I wanted to create a variety of patterns, and to be honest, I don't think making a symmetrical pattern will work here...
  2. 00:53:229 (2) - NC here instead of 00:52:995 (1) - Umm, I'm following the stanza.
  3. 02:11:510 - Add note here? Isn't really good if left blank orz I'm sure enough that one's fine if left unmapped.
  4. 02:29:557 (1) - Doesn't really necesarry to put NC here, still same rhythm(and to avoid too short combo too :)) It's to indicate that it's the beginning of a new pattern.
  5. 03:03:073 (2) - NC? Gives a nice feeling and to emphasize the silence gap in the 03:02:370 (1) - :D Well, it follows the... yeah, stanzas, and I don't see why should we abandon that here...
Uhh sorry for the short mod, this map is already great :)
Hope my mod helps you, good luck! :)
Starrr~ :D kecantol sama lagunya

yurunneram wrote:

Mod requested from my queue's 12 hour birthday bonus! ^^

Cold
I think the hitsounds should be louder. At least by about 5%. For this diff and the other diff
00:26:745 (3) - Move the slider to x360 y216 then resnap the other notes. Done.

Frozen
00:23:463 (2,3,4) - try k.

E-eh @.@ Ne.. I couldn't find much. Gomen >< Dun give me Kudosu! I dun want kudosu for this. very sry Nope; I'll still give you one because your mod is still helpful.

You've been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram

shikyu wrote:

hi, M4M for Hinely's queue :D

overall it's pretty good, just some little suggestion

[Frozen]
00:18:541 (5,1,2,3,4) - it can be a pentagonal (?), if you interested to change http://puu.sh/3qiD7.jpg ...Will consult to her later.
00:23:698 (3) - you can place it blanket with slider (4) Did stuff here.
01:06:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - too linear, it can be made into circular pattern like this http://puu.sh/3qhl1.jpg Also not gonna touch this for now.
01:41:745 (1) - whistle on slider's start? Done.
02:03:776 (1,2) - prefer drum-finish here, but up to you Drum-whistle goes better with the song, IMO o.o
02:58:385 (4,1) - use 1,2x DS pls, it's awkward since it has same beat, after that use 1,0x DS isn't problem http://puu.sh/3qiut.jpg Done.

[Cold]
00:26:745 (3) - move bit down (x:360 y:216) and fix slider to blanket 00:26:276 (2) ...It's scary how can two modders suggest the exact same thing. Done.
01:01:432 (4) - move to x:372 y:176 to blanket slider head with slider (3) I think she intentionally makes a pattern like this, and thus I won't be touching it for now.
02:54:401 (3) - move a bit down? to prevent it touch HP bar and make smooth circular (can use x:192 y:32) y 48 instead.
02:55:807 (5) - move bit down to blanket slider head with slider 02:54:870 (4) Same as the second suggestion.

I prevent from nazi mod, especially for triplet arrangement. just make it have more variety (circular or diagonal), your choice :)
semoga berguna :v that's all, good luck~
Thanks for modding everyone ;)
happy30
Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

nice song~ sb is cute too.
I had two issues with the sb though. I don't know why but widescreen SBs are not supported yet. Could you use a 4:3 bg instead of your current 16:9 bg so that black borders will appear at the sides when you play it in widescreen mode? It will look much better for the SB.
The second thing is that some snowflakes or stars randomly appeared or disappeared on the screen >.> It would look better if they faded.

Cold
nice collab!
very solid diff. The rhythm and spacing were both good.
The hitsounds fit the song well too. :)

Frozen
the sliders are a bit too fast in the first 20 seconds imo. can you reduce the speed there to like 0.75x?
I had the same feeling for the slower part after the break. I think you could reduce the speed there as well.
Other than that the map was quite nice. your mapping styles fit together nicely. I liked the triplets you used. :)
YTYuyu
yo here's your mod from my random queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i agree with happy about the stars and snowflakes disappearing on the screen. it'd look really nice and more effective if you fade it in/out somehow.

[Cold]
00:15:495 (1) - remove the NC for this because the piano is the same as the previous combo, also it should look easier for players since it has a straight path to the next note to keep the flow steady during gameplay.
00:26:745 (3) - make this slider look like (1) because the flow would be steady and symmetrical, also i find it more fun to follow during gameplay IMO. it should look something like this.
00:30:495 (3) - stack this perfectly on the beginning of (1). same reason as above, about the flow being steady.
01:35:182 (5) - forgetting a whistle? i highly consider adding a whistle at the beginning for consistency with the other whistles in the whistle pattern.
02:17:370 (3) - i think i heard claps at the end of this slider. i say that you should listen carefully for it to hear it, but idk if it's me. if you can't hear it, then ignore this suggestion.

[Frozen]
00:16:432 (1) - i think you can do 0.50 instead of 0.75 to show emphasis in the piano. i find 0.75 too fast and quick to the piano, so i feel that 0.50 should fit here instead IMO.
00:18:541 (5) - add whistles at the repeat arrow and at the end since they're emphasizing the piano, also i find that it fits with this part of the song since you did a similar whistle in this combo.
00:19:713 (3) - consider adding a whistle at the end. same reason as above.
00:23:698 (3,4) - i say that you make your spacing consistent here to increase the flow and excitement in this part of the song during gameplay.
01:57:682 (3,4) - you made a mistake in this clap pattern. it should be on the end of (3), not (4) because adding the clap at (4) breaks the consistency pattern in the claps during gameplay.
02:03:776 (3) - why not a NC here? it follows a new phrase and you did the same thing in cold as well.

and that's all. these diffs are pretty nice. call me back for a re-check once the faded out problem is fixed.
yanlu
thank you all for modding >.< fixed the issues~


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//Storyboard Sound Samples
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo here's your mod from my random queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i agree with happy about the stars and snowflakes disappearing on the screen. it'd look really nice and more effective if you fade it in/out somehow. Fixed by yanlu... I think?

[Cold]
00:15:495 (1) - remove the NC for this because the piano is the same as the previous combo, also it should look easier for players since it has a straight path to the next note to keep the flow steady during gameplay. Wait, this is not supposed to be NC'd in the first place. Fixed.
00:26:745 (3) - make this slider look like (1) because the flow would be steady and symmetrical, also i find it more fun to follow during gameplay IMO. it should look something like this. Done.
00:30:495 (3) - stack this perfectly on the beginning of (1). same reason as above, about the flow being steady. | It's already stacked there...
01:35:182 (5) - forgetting a whistle? i highly consider adding a whistle at the beginning for consistency with the other whistles in the whistle pattern. Done.
02:17:370 (3) - i think i heard claps at the end of this slider. i say that you should listen carefully for it to hear it, but idk if it's me. if you can't hear it, then ignore this suggestion. Uh, idk, but I don't think I heard anything on the music that can fit with a clap...

[Frozen]
00:16:432 (1) - i think you can do 0.50 instead of 0.75 to show emphasis in the piano. i find 0.75 too fast and quick to the piano, so i feel that 0.50 should fit here instead IMO. Done.
00:18:541 (5) - add whistles at the repeat arrow and at the end since they're emphasizing the piano, also i find that it fits with this part of the song since you did a similar whistle in this combo. ^
00:19:713 (3) - consider adding a whistle at the end. same reason as above. ^
00:23:698 (3,4) - i say that you make your spacing consistent here to increase the flow and excitement in this part of the song during gameplay. ^
01:57:682 (3,4) - you made a mistake in this clap pattern. it should be on the end of (3), not (4) because adding the clap at (4) breaks the consistency pattern in the claps during gameplay. Not really sure about this; I think it's supposed to be on the red tick, but okay, I think this one's good too. Done.
02:03:776 (3) - why not a NC here? it follows a new phrase and you did the same thing in cold as well. Done, yeah.

and that's all. these diffs are pretty nice. call me back for a re-check once the faded out problem is fixed.
Thanks for modding! :D

*Yes, Xinely told me to fix her parts, so here you go.

Also thanks to happy for testplaying (sorry for replying really late orz) and yanlu for providing the updated SB script) :P
YTYuyu
re-check~ no kd for this post.

[Cold]
03:02:838 (4) - i think this should be a NC since the vocals change in this part of the song. remember to remove the NC on the next note if you do this since they're connected.

[Snowy]
00:13:502 (3) - i find that this circle is unnecessary to the music, so you should remove it for that purpose to keep a steady flow in this part.
00:16:432 (1) - the beginning of the slider should be 0.50, not the end since it's at 0.50.
00:22:995 (1,2) - i think that if you do a perfect stack at the end of (4), it'll be more neater and more smoother in transition, but if you do this, you should keep the spacing between (1,2) consistent, so reduce the spacing between (4,1) to 1.90 so that it'll be consistent in spacing and it'll be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay.
01:15:377 (5) - same as 00:13:502.
01:18:190 (3) - ^
01:33:190 (3) - same as above since this part is a bit calm and an extra circle isn't necessary here.
01:38:346 (2) - ^
01:42:096 (2) - ^
01:48:190 (3) - same as 00:13:502.
02:08:346 (3) - ^

also there's one snowflake that disappears suddenly at the 2nd kiai, so you should fix that so that it'd be consistent in the fade-outs.

and that's all for now.
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Byakugan249 wrote:

re-check~ no kd for this post.

[Cold]
03:02:838 (4) - i think this should be a NC since the vocals change in this part of the song. remember to remove the NC on the next note if you do this since they're connected. Fixed.

[Snowy]
00:13:502 (3) - i find that this circle is unnecessary to the music, so you should remove it for that purpose to keep a steady flow in this part. Done.
00:16:432 (1) - the beginning of the slider should be 0.50, not the end since it's at 0.50. Oh damn lol. Done.
00:22:995 (1,2) - i think that if you do a perfect stack at the end of (4), it'll be more neater and more smoother in transition, but if you do this, you should keep the spacing between (1,2) consistent, so reduce the spacing between (4,1) to 1.90 so that it'll be consistent in spacing and it'll be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay. Did things here by my own way.
01:15:377 (5) - same as 00:13:502. There are sounds from an instrument here...
01:18:190 (3) - ^ ^
01:33:190 (3) - same as above since this part is a bit calm and an extra circle isn't necessary here. Done here.
01:38:346 (2) - ^ There are instruments here.
01:42:096 (2) - ^ Done here.
01:48:190 (3) - same as 00:13:502. Instruments.
02:08:346 (3) - ^ ^

also there's one snowflake that disappears suddenly at the 2nd kiai, so you should fix that so that it'd be consistent in the fade-outs. Fixed by yanlu.

and that's all for now.
Thanks for the recheck~ :D
YTYuyu
everything looks good and ready to go, so here's your bubble :D.

kanpakyin
Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Elisha_old
CONGRATS! :D
Natsu
congratz
Topic Starter
Hinsvar
Holy shit I can't believe this.

Thanks 249 and kanpakyin o/

Also thanks to everyone who supported us in ranking this map~ And to the players, thanks for playing and I hope you can have fun \:D/

What am I talking about lol
69653863
why you rank this first '-'

jk congrats
Dark_Ai
aaah nice I wanted to map it too >< well nice to see another version ranked :3
congrats :D
Satellite
Congratz~~!!!!
Gloria Guard
Gratz ~
Oyatsu
Gratz! Xinevar
Yasora
widih~
selamat XD
Senritsu
at last, after so many ranked GD..
2 ranked maps.. gratz :D
10nya
hinsvar noob
grats
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