This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 12, 2013 at 3:47:10 PM

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Rebellion Anthem
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5152kb
Play Time: 05:06
Difficulties Available:

1. Rebellion (5 stars, 857 notes)
2. Tawakashi's Schemes (4.78 stars, 336 notes)

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Rebellion Anthem
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st beatmap.
AMAZING song by Yousei Teikoku ~ \(^.^)/
I WANT YOUR MODDING.
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Normal (Tawakashi's Schemes): Done by my sister, Tawakashi Tsuki
Hard: WIP by Saten
Insane (Rebellion): Done
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~ 6/26 ~
Finished rough version, added hitsounds, cleaned up, fixed streams, modded by [Seraphin] and zorefire
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~ 6/27 ~
Fixed more hitsounds and more and more, bg changes (SO MANY >.<), cleanup, slider stuff, modded by ts8zs and [Luanny], Yales
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~ 6/28 ~
Hitsound and timing fixes, small cleanups, modded by Andrea
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~ 6/29 ~
Normal finished by my sister and is ready to be modded ~ \(^.^)/
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~ 7/12 ~
Simple fixes, modded by DEAncientNaga, [Seraphin]

From #modreqs

General

BG image is over 1024*768

Rebellion

01:33:981 (2) - flip vertically to match (4)

01:45:276 (10,11) - circle reaches off screen? :/

01:49:158 (7,9) - ^

01:50:570 (2,4,11) - ^

02:03:628 (5,6) - ^

02:12:099 (5) - ^

02:21:628 (2,4) - ^

02:23:040 (2,4) - ^

02:24:805 (4,6) - ^

02:27:981 (6,7) - ^

02:39:276 (6,7) - ^

02:44:217 (2,4) - ^

02:53:040 (7,8) - ^

02:59:923 (8) - ^?

03:01:864 (7) - ^?

03:11:393 (5,6) - ^

04:18:452 (5,6,7,8) - ^

04:27:981 (7) - ^

04:59:217 (5) - ^

05:04:334 (4) - ^

05:05:746 (10) - ^

That's it. Great map ^^
Some of the patterns looked weird, but when I tried a few of them they felt fine.

[Seraphin] wrote:

From #modreqs

General

BG image is over 1024*768 Fixed

Rebellion

01:33:981 (2) - flip vertically to match (4) Fixed

01:45:276 (10,11) - circle reaches off screen? :/ Fixed

01:49:158 (7,9) - ^ Fixed

01:50:570 (2,4,11) - ^ Fixed

02:03:628 (5,6) - ^ Fixed

02:12:099 (5) - ^ Fixed

02:21:628 (2,4) - ^ Fixed

02:23:040 (2,4) - ^ Fixed

02:24:805 (4,6) - ^ Fixed

02:27:981 (6,7) - ^ Fixed

02:39:276 (6,7) - ^ Fixed

02:44:217 (2,4) - ^ Fixed

02:53:040 (7,8) - ^ Fixed

02:59:923 (8) - ^? Fixed

03:01:864 (7) - ^? Fixed

03:11:393 (5,6) - ^ Fixed

04:18:452 (5,6,7,8) - ^ Fixed

04:27:981 (7) - ^ Fixed

04:59:217 (5) - ^ Fixed

05:04:334 (4) - ^ Fixed

05:05:746 (10) - ^ Fixed

That's it. Great map ^^
Some of the patterns looked weird, but when I tried a few of them they felt fine.

Done and thanks

Mod ReqThat's all i have to modd I guess sorry for it being so small

zorefire wrote:

Mod Req

[Rebellion]

1. 00:54:452 (4) - goin off screen Fixed
2. 02:04:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - all of these are going in the same spot trying moving them different places Fixed (I think)
3. that cray 02:11:746 (1,2,3,4) - do something like stack? Fixed
4. 01:08:040 (1,2,3,4) - your using the middle too much for these notes

Think I fixed it?
That's all i have to modd I guess sorry for it being so small

Done and thanks for the mod!

Now app map is longer than 6min,not scored more than 2,00.......0 ...so you need more diffs (I'm mad with this rule too...)
01:08:040 (1,2,3,4) - move up 1 small gird
01:09:981 (8) - make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835927
03:26:217 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835939
03:49:158 - drag Break start to here
04:12:818 - drag Break end to here
05:06:275 (1) - Spinner end 05:07:334 - here

ts8zs wrote:

Now app map is longer than 6min,not scored more than 2,00.......0 ...so you need more diffs (I'm mad with this rule too...)
01:08:040 (1,2,3,4) - move up 1 small gird Fixed
01:09:981 (8) - make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835927 Fixed
03:26:217 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835939 Fixed
03:49:158 - drag Break start to here Fixed
04:12:818 - drag Break end to here Fixed
05:06:275 (1) - Spinner end 05:07:334 - here

Fixed

I need more diffs damnit, oh well, time to get started then.
Anyways, thanks for the mod! Modding yours atm, gimme a few min

M4M from #modreqs

[General]
-Don't forget to make more diffs if you want this ranked
-Background size is not good for osu!. Find one with 1366x768 or 1024x768 resolution. 1366x768 is better because it works with widescreen.
-The background is kinda ecchi. I'd change it to something more sfw.
-Your mp3 is 1280kbps. Well this is acceptable but you could have more quality on 192kbps mp3.

[Rebellion]

01:03:452 (9) - the curve is this slider doesn't fit with the curve of the stream thus it breaks the flow. Make them fit
01:13:158 (10,1) - this stack isn't perfect
01:44:570 (8) - New Combo
01:53:040 (1) - Really, rearrange this slider, no need to spam points this way
01:55:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - redo this stream using the polygon tool and remove notes above 16
02:11:746 (1,2,3,4) - this sudden change of spacing is weird imo
02:43:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make all of these normal curves
03:14:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - This curve could be improved. Try making a slider and converting it to stream
03:15:628 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:27:452 (3) - make normal curve, no need to use so many points
03:41:746 (6) - ^

Overall imo the slider velocity is WAY TOO EXTREME and the map is REALLY hard.

Good luck on this.

[Luanny] wrote:

M4M from #modreqs

[General]
-Don't forget to make more diffs if you want this ranked -- In progress
-Background size is not good for osu!. Find one with 1366x768 or 1024x768 resolution. 1366x768 is better because it works with widescreen. -- Fixed
-The background is kinda ecchi. I'd change it to something more sfw. -- Fixed?
-Your mp3 is 1280kbps. Well this is acceptable but you could have more quality on 192kbps mp3. -- In progress

[Rebellion]

01:03:452 (9) - the curve is this slider doesn't fit with the curve of the stream thus it breaks the flow. Make them fit -- Fixed
01:13:158 (10,1) - this stack isn't perfect -- Fixed
01:44:570 (8) - New Combo -- Fixed
01:53:040 (1) - Really, rearrange this slider, no need to spam points this way Nothing really to change here
01:55:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - redo this stream using the polygon tool and remove notes above 16 -- Fixed
02:11:746 (1,2,3,4) - this sudden change of spacing is weird imo -- Fixed
02:43:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make all of these normal curves -- Fixed
03:14:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - This curve could be improved. Try making a slider and converting it to stream -- Fixed
03:15:628 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ -- Fixed
03:27:452 (3) - make normal curve, no need to use so many points -- Fixed
03:41:746 (6) - ^ -- Fixed

Overall imo the slider velocity is WAY TOO EXTREME and the map is REALLY hard.

Good luck on this.

Thanks for the mod~ And if that's ecchi, and if my new one is ecchi, then what isn't ecchi XD

01:02:040 (10) - add clap? :/
01:57:276 (1) - ->01:57:628 - I think it's better to keep the circle running and find the slider on that syllabe/tick.
02:59:746 (7) - Would be better at the 02:59:923 (8) position instead and put 03:00:099 (9) - a tick earlier.
03:39:628 (1) - I understand it's a "fill-blanket" but with all those sliders, it's really hard to hit it at the good timing.
04:31:864 (9) - at the 04:31:775 (8) tick.

I would also put CS on 4 and drain on 7~. Don't know what's really better...

Basically, it's quite a nice map ^^

It's a little mod. Sorry about that . Hope some stuff will be helpful for you thou.

Yales wrote:

01:02:040 (10) - add clap? :/ I think I'm good here
01:57:276 (1) - ->01:57:628 - I think it's better to keep the circle running and find the slider on that syllabe/tick. ?
02:59:746 (7) - Would be better at the 02:59:923 (8) position instead and put 03:00:099 (9) - a tick earlier. Fixed
03:39:628 (1) - I understand it's a "fill-blanket" but with all those sliders, it's really hard to hit it at the good timing. ?
04:31:864 (9) - at the 04:31:775 (8) tick. I think I'm good here too

I would also put CS on 4 and drain on 7~. Don't know what's really better... I didn't want to overload the drain and I was thinking about putting the CS on 4, but I decided not to

I also find the streams quite hard. I don't know if it's because of their shape (circle and stuff) or a lack of hitsounds....couldn't say much about that, sorry :/. Speed maybe?

Basically, it's quite a nice map ^^

It's a little mod. Sorry about that . Hope some stuff will be helpful for you thou.

Thanks for the mod~ Appreciate it.

toloveruu wrote:

01:57:276 (1) - ->01:57:628 - I think it's better to keep the circle running and find the slider on that syllabe/tick. ?

The 01:57:276 (1) slide would be i think better at the 01:57:628 tick (a bit later wat).

toloveruu wrote:

03:39:628 (1) - I understand it's a "fill-blanket" but with all those sliders, it's really hard to hit it at the good timing. ?[/qute]

Nevermind --> 03:40:334 (3) - a tick earlier ?

toloveruu wrote:

Speed maybe?

170bpm is my average, so no. Nevermind.

Yales wrote:

toloveruu wrote:

01:57:276 (1) - ->01:57:628 - I think it's better to keep the circle running and find the slider on that syllabe/tick. ?

The 01:57:276 (1) slide would be i think better at the 01:57:628 tick (a bit later wat). Nah I like it the way it is now, thanks anyways.

toloveruu wrote:

03:39:628 (1) - I understand it's a "fill-blanket" but with all those sliders, it's really hard to hit it at the good timing. ?

Nevermind --> 03:40:334 (3) - a tick earlier ? Same here I think it's good here.

toloveruu wrote:

Speed maybe?

170bpm is my average, so no. Nevermind.[/quote]

~General~

1. Remove your current tags, they're both the same as title and artist.

~Rebellion~

1. HP Drain is way too low, increase it by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

1. 00:55:864 (10) - Silence the end of this slider, since the music is silent here.
2. 01:52:687 (12) - This short slider here is kinda hard to notice, try adding a new combo here so it's more visible while playing.
3. 02:16:334 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the slowdown and music change.
4. 02:20:570 (10) - This slider is completely covered by the previous one, move it somewhere else.
5. 04:18:452 (8) - There should be a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
6. 04:31:864 (9) - This short slider here is kinda hard to notice, try adding a new combo here so it's more visible while playing.

Kinda old style but not a bad map, I actually like it.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Remove your current tags, they're both the same as title and artist.

Fixed

~Rebellion~

1. HP Drain is way too low, increase it by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

Fixed

1. 00:55:864 (10) - Silence the end of this slider, since the music is silent here. Fixed
2. 01:52:687 (12) - This short slider here is kinda hard to notice, try adding a new combo here so it's more visible while playing. Fixed
3. 02:16:334 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the slowdown and music change. Fixed
4. 02:20:570 (10) - This slider is completely covered by the previous one, move it somewhere else. Fixed
5. 04:18:452 (8) - There should be a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change. Fixed
6. 04:31:864 (9) - This short slider here is kinda hard to notice, try adding a new combo here so it's more visible while playing.

Fixed

Kinda old style but not a bad map, I actually like it.

Thanks for the mod!

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good >.o /

[Tawakashi's Schemes]
^ This is hard not normal, the slider vel is fast as the BPM is already high, even you didn't put many notes
^ Consider adding some streams (ex. 3 hits) etc.
^ Consider making it harder, like jumps or more spacing, it's a rock song
HP Drain: +1
Appraoch Rate: +2
Overall Difficulty: +1

Your mapping is likely http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28705 (Yousei Teikoku - Kokou no Sousei) , can refer that >.o /

[Rebellion]
Quite nice, no prob for me >.o)b

Shot 1 Kudosu Star, hope this is ranked

Good luck on ranking

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good >.o /

[Tawakashi's Schemes]
^ This is hard not normal, the slider vel is fast as the BPM is already high, even you didn't put many notes
^ Consider adding some streams (ex. 3 hits) etc.
^ Consider making it harder, like jumps or more spacing, it's a rock song
HP Drain: +1
Appraoch Rate: +2
Overall Difficulty: +1

Your mapping is likely http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28705 (Yousei Teikoku - Kokou no Sousei) , can refer that >.o /

[Rebellion]
Quite nice, no prob for me >.o)b

Shot 1 Kudosu Star, hope this is ranked

Good luck on ranking

Thanks for the star and the mod! I'll fix the above when I get home, in NYC atm.

Mod re-check~

[Tawakashi's Schemes]
HP Drain +1
For all the times when you slow the velocity, try doing a NC with a specific color or similar as they are unexpected.
01:19:864 (2) - How about just a normal curved slider?
01:19:511 (1) - Try increasing the spacing or similar because I did not expect the time between notes to change.
03:00:099 (3) - Extended slider, try halving the length
03:24:452 (2,3) - increase the spacing between these 2 notes

Sorry about the bad mod on this diff >//<
[Rebellion]
DAT SLIDER VELOCITY
nothing new here

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good >.o /

[Tawakashi's Schemes]
^ This is hard not normal, the slider vel is fast as the BPM is already high, even you didn't put many notes Nah it's normal
^ Consider adding some streams (ex. 3 hits) etc. No thanks
^ Consider making it harder, like jumps or more spacing, it's a rock song Not now
HP Drain: +1 Fixed
Appraoch Rate: +2 Fixed
Overall Difficulty: +1 Fixed

Your mapping is likely http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28705 (Yousei Teikoku - Kokou no Sousei) , can refer that >.o /

[Rebellion]
Quite nice, no prob for me >.o)b

Shot 1 Kudosu Star, hope this is ranked

Good luck on ranking

[Seraphin] wrote:

Mod re-check~

[Tawakashi's Schemes]
HP Drain +1
For all the times when you slow the velocity, try doing a NC with a specific color or similar as they are unexpected.
01:19:864 (2) - How about just a normal curved slider? Fixed
01:19:511 (1) - Try increasing the spacing or similar because I did not expect the time between notes to change. Fixed?
03:00:099 (3) - Extended slider, try halving the length Fixed
03:24:452 (2,3) - increase the spacing between these 2 notes Fixed

Sorry about the bad mod on this diff >//<
[Rebellion]
DAT SLIDER VELOCITY
nothing new here

Thanks for the mod :3

Halloww ~ owo)/
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- 妖精帝國 can be put at the artist ~
- Yousei Teikoku translates to Fairy Empire so add that into the tags.
- Add the members of Yousei Teikoku into the tags as well Yui Itsuki (伊月ゆい), Takaha Tachibana (橘 尭葉), Nanami (名波), and Relu.
- I'd suggest to use grid level 4 for better placement (My nazi mod is based on grid level 4)


[Tawakashi's Schemes]

DEAncientNaga wrote:

This is hard not normal, the slider vel is fast as the BPM is already high, even you didn't put many notes

The slider speed shouldn't change at all in a normal difficulty, and the difficulty settings are much too high. ;w;
Spacing should be kept consistent through the song for a normal diff too.
This is considered a hard difficulty.

I'll come back and mod this diff when you decide to turn it into a normal difficulty or decide to leave it as a hard diff.


[Rebellion]
00:45:981 (4) - Slider end stack
00:46:687 (7) - ^
00:47:393 (10) - ^
00:48:099 (1) - Allow 00:48:805 (4) to be on the same level, make it look like a mirror reflection
(00:48:099 (1) - at x:328 y:356, 00:48:628 (2,3,4) - at x:108 y:192
00:49:334 (5,6,7) - Remove and copy 00:48:628 (2,3,4), ctrl + H and move to x:184 y:28
00:50:040 (8,9,10) - Copy 00:48:628 (2,5,6,7) and ctrl + H
00:54:452 (4) - Middle point one grid down
00:55:158 (7) - Middle point one grid left
00:55:864 (10) - Middle point one grid up
00:58:511 (3) - Stack with 00:57:981 (1)'s end
00:58:687 (4) - How about this?
01:04:687 (6) - Stack with 01:03:452 (9)
01:15:276 (2) - Move this to 01:15:628 and move 01:15:628 (3) to 01:15:276
01:45:981 (5) - End at 01:46:864 01:47:217
01:47:040 - Start a slider here and end it at
01:55:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't fit
01:57:276 (1) - Move to 01:57:628 and end it at 01:58:334, fill in the rest of that empty space
01:59:040 - Add a circle?
01:59:570 - ^
02:00:099 - ^
02:13:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Overuse of finishes here ;w; There kind of loud as well, I don't mind if you deicde to keep the finishes, but lower the volume at least
02:17:570 (4) - Place at x:312 y:224
02:20:570 (10) - Try this? (Move to x:116 y:332, middle point at x:196 y:348 and last point at x:252 y:336)
02:34:334 (2,3) - Switch the placed of these two like how I suggested for 01:15:276 (2)
02:45:276 (1) - Ctrl + G
02:45:629 (2) - ^
02:45:982 (3) - ^
02:46:335 (4) - ^
02:50:217 (3) - This? (Move to x:100 y:72, middle point at x:128 y:144, last point at x:192 y:152)
02:50:746 (4,5,6,7) - ? ~ (02:50:746 (4) - At x:256 y:212, 02:50:923 (5) - At x:244 y:320, 02:51:452 (6) - Place where (4) is placed, 02:51:628 (7) - At x:452 y:280)
02:53:746 (5) - End at 02:54:628
02:54:805 - Slider here and end at 02:54:981
02:56:570 (5) - Ctrl + G (Do the same to the next three sliders)
03:00:099 (9) - End at 03:00:452
03:00:628 - Add a circle
03:03:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit the vocals
03:05:746 (5) - End at 03:06:099
03:06:275 - Add a circle
03:09:628 - ^
03:10:158 - ^
03:10:687 - ^
03:12:275 (2) - Stack with 03:11:393 (5) ? (You'll have to rearrange your pattern a bit)
03:21:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same thing about the finishes here
03:28:687 (4,5,1) - Keep the spacing consistent here
03:33:275 (3) - Ctrl + G ?
03:33:981 (4) - ^
03:40:334 (3) - Remake this slider using 3 points
03:41:746 (6) - Here, how about this?
03:45:805 (1) - Move two ticks forward and end at the same place
04:12:805 - Spinner here until 04:14:128?
04:19:864 (5) - End at 04:20:746
04:20:923 - Slider here until 04:21:099
04:23:040 (6,7) - Switch the placed of these two like how I suggested for 01:15:276 (2) and 02:34:334 (2,3)
04:26:217 (5) - End at 04:26:570
04:26:746 - Add a circle
04:29:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit
04:31:864 (1) - End at 04:32:217
04:41:570 (3) - Ctrl + G
04:42:099 (5) - ^
04:48:452 (2) - ^
04:48:805 (3) - ^
04:49:158 (4) - ^
04:52:158 (8) - Move one grid up so that it stacks 04:52:687 (2)'s end
04:52:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make a pattern with this? Try using ctrl + g on (2), (4), (6), and (8)
04:55:158 (1) - Slider end stack
04:55:864 (4) - ^
04:56:570 (7) - ^
04:57:275 (10) - ^


I see that your mapping mainly focuses on patterns and jumps, but I suggest that you should focus on the vocal, flow and arrangement of your map as well
Give me a poke or call if you would like me to mod this again ~
Good luck! >w<

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~ owo)/
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- 妖精帝國 can be put at the artist ~
- Yousei Teikoku translates to Fairy Empire so add that into the tags.
- Add the members of Yousei Teikoku into the tags as well Yui Itsuki (伊月ゆい), Takaha Tachibana (橘 尭葉), Nanami (名波), and Relu.
- I'd suggest to use grid level 4 for better placement (My nazi mod is based on grid level 4)


[Tawakashi's Schemes]

DEAncientNaga wrote:

This is hard not normal, the slider vel is fast as the BPM is already high, even you didn't put many notes

The slider speed shouldn't change at all in a normal difficulty, and the difficulty settings are much too high. ;w;
Spacing should be kept consistent through the song for a normal diff too.
This is considered a hard difficulty.

I'll come back and mod this diff when you decide to turn it into a normal difficulty or decide to leave it as a hard diff.


[Rebellion]
00:45:981 (4) - Slider end stack
00:46:687 (7) - ^
00:47:393 (10) - ^
00:48:099 (1) - Allow 00:48:805 (4) to be on the same level, make it look like a mirror reflection

(00:48:099 (1) - at x:328 y:356, 00:48:628 (2,3,4) - at x:108 y:192
00:49:334 (5,6,7) - Remove and copy 00:48:628 (2,3,4), ctrl + H and move to x:184 y:28
00:50:040 (8,9,10) - Copy 00:48:628 (2,5,6,7) and ctrl + H
00:54:452 (4) - Middle point one grid down
00:55:158 (7) - Middle point one grid left
00:55:864 (10) - Middle point one grid up
00:58:511 (3) - Stack with 00:57:981 (1)'s end
00:58:687 (4) - How about this?

01:04:687 (6) - Stack with 01:03:452 (9)
01:15:276 (2) - Move this to 01:15:628 and move 01:15:628 (3) to 01:15:276
01:45:981 (5) - End at 01:46:864 01:47:217
01:47:040 - Start a slider here and end it at
01:55:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't fit
01:57:276 (1) - Move to 01:57:628 and end it at 01:58:334, fill in the rest of that empty space
01:59:040 - Add a circle?
01:59:570 - ^
02:00:099 - ^
02:13:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Overuse of finishes here ;w; There kind of loud as well, I don't mind if you deicde to keep the finishes, but lower the volume at least
02:17:570 (4) - Place at x:312 y:224
02:20:570 (10) - Try this? (Move to x:116 y:332, middle point at x:196 y:348 and last point at x:252 y:336)

02:34:334 (2,3) - Switch the placed of these two like how I suggested for 01:15:276 (2)
02:45:276 (1) - Ctrl + G
02:45:629 (2) - ^
02:45:982 (3) - ^
02:46:335 (4) - ^
02:50:217 (3) - This? (Move to x:100 y:72, middle point at x:128 y:144, last point at x:192 y:152)

02:50:746 (4,5,6,7) - ? ~ (02:50:746 (4) - At x:256 y:212, 02:50:923 (5) - At x:244 y:320, 02:51:452 (6) - Place where (4) is placed, 02:51:628 (7) - At x:452 y:280)

02:53:746 (5) - End at 02:54:628
02:54:805 - Slider here and end at 02:54:981
02:56:570 (5) - Ctrl + G (Do the same to the next three sliders)
03:00:099 (9) - End at 03:00:452
03:00:628 - Add a circle
03:03:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit the vocals
03:05:746 (5) - End at 03:06:099
03:06:275 - Add a circle
03:09:628 - ^
03:10:158 - ^
03:10:687 - ^
03:12:275 (2) - Stack with 03:11:393 (5) ? (You'll have to rearrange your pattern a bit)
03:21:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same thing about the finishes here
03:28:687 (4,5,1) - Keep the spacing consistent here
03:33:275 (3) - Ctrl + G ?
03:33:981 (4) - ^
03:40:334 (3) - Remake this slider using 3 points
03:41:746 (6) - Here, how about this?

03:45:805 (1) - Move two ticks forward and end at the same place
04:12:805 - Spinner here until 04:14:128?
04:19:864 (5) - End at 04:20:746
04:20:923 - Slider here until 04:21:099
04:23:040 (6,7) - Switch the placed of these two like how I suggested for 01:15:276 (2) and 02:34:334 (2,3)
04:26:217 (5) - End at 04:26:570
04:26:746 - Add a circle
04:29:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit
04:31:864 (1) - End at 04:32:217
04:41:570 (3) - Ctrl + G
04:42:099 (5) - ^
04:48:452 (2) - ^
04:48:805 (3) - ^
04:49:158 (4) - ^
04:52:158 (8) - Move one grid up so that it stacks 04:52:687 (2)'s end
04:52:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make a pattern with this? Try using ctrl + g on (2), (4), (6), and (8)
04:55:158 (1) - Slider end stack
04:55:864 (4) - ^
04:56:570 (7) - ^
04:57:275 (10) - ^


I see that your mapping mainly focuses on patterns and jumps, but I suggest that you should focus on the vocal, flow and arrangement of your map as well
Give me a poke or call if you would like me to mod this again ~
Good luck! >w<

Jesus. I shall fix these when I get back from NYC.