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i come to know about this from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gNtU22p ... ture=share
i hope its the same =x the video it sounded really cool

*edit*
YES IT IS THE SAME!

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2013-06-03T18:49:07+00:00

Yo
[General]

No kiai?!

[Lunet]

Diff seems quite messy, sliders could get a better shape with the new system and look the map much better.

00:41:144 (1) - Noob players can click that by mistake, move away from slider repeat :<
01:57:795 (1) - Can you try not to touch 01:56:462 (2) - ?
02:05:462 (4) - Fix spacing?
02:10:128 (2) - Move last slider point some grid down D:
02:14:462 (1,2) - Make them the most similar possible :3
Well, this diff is about two years old and many things has changed, rhythm is weird at the beginning and I see a little whistle spam, but overall it could be much better. :3

[Dis]

00:27:311 (5) - Remove finish? Or lower volume please D:
01:06:304 (4,5,6) - Quite hard to sightread >.<
01:31:295 (7,8) - ^
01:39:962 (2) - Intentional? I'd stack on (2)
02:25:128 (5) - ^ Same xD
02:31:628 (2,3,4) - Excessive jump for a Hard D:
Nice diff, maybe a bit harder than a common [Hard], but that's fine :3 Also, I'd reduce hitsounds volume

[Kecco]

00:27:811 (1) - Stacka sul (3) oppure mettila in uno dei due angoli in basso, ci sta bene :3
Bella diff. :>

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-06-03T20:38:17+00:00

Leader wrote:
Yo
[General]
No kiai?!
Fixed.

[Lunet]

Diff seems quite messy, sliders could get a better shape with the new system and look the map much better.
00:41:144 (1) - Noob players can click that by mistake, move away from slider repeat :< Fixed.
01:57:795 (1) - Can you try not to touch 01:56:462 (2) - ? Fixed.
02:05:462 (4) - Fix spacing? Fixed.
02:10:128 (2) - Move last slider point some grid down D: Fixed in another way.
02:14:462 (1,2) - Make them the most similar possible :3 Fixed in another way.
Well, this diff is about two years old and many things has changed, rhythm is weird at the beginning and I see a little whistle spam, but overall it could be much better. :3
[Dis]
00:27:311 (5) - Remove finish? Or lower volume please D: Nope. It's the same as Kecco's diff
01:06:304 (4,5,6) - Quite hard to sightread >.< Nope. It's respecting the distance snap
01:31:295 (7,8) - ^ Nope. It's respecting the distance snap
01:39:962 (2) - Intentional? I'd stack on (2) Fixed
02:25:128 (5) - ^ Same xD Fixed
02:31:628 (2,3,4) - Excessive jump for a Hard D: Fixed
Nice diff, maybe a bit harder than a common [Hard], but that's fine :3 Also, I'd reduce hitsounds volume
I prefer them like this It's the same as Kecco's diff.

[Kecco]
00:27:811 (1) - Stacka sul (3) oppure mettila in uno dei due angoli in basso, ci sta bene :3 Fatto.
Bella diff. :>

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-06-08T02:17:07+00:00

hi~~~

let me mod, please

[General]

I think that intro and outro of this map are too long. How about cuttiing them suitably?
(I suggest -> start:00:11:811- , end:03:23:128-)
change title to " -Rayrain- "

[Lunet]

01:39:795 (1) - change the slider-end to 01:40:295
I think it is hard to get the timing of beat correctly. I suggest to make DS longer or avoid starting sliders form red line

[Dis]

00:41:144 (4,1) - avoid overlaping
00:45:644 (2,3) - ^
01:09:137 (2,4) - ^
01:22:462 (5,1) - avoid overlaping or stack correctly
01:28:462 (1,2) - stack correctly
01:35:295 (2,3,6) - avoid overlaping
02:15:295 (2,3) - ^
02:16:628 (2,3,5) - ^
02:22:462 (3,4) -stack
02:23:462 (3,4,5,6) - not stack. less visible
02:56:295 (4,6) - avoid overlap
02:24:795 (3,5) - stack correctly

Congrats on revival!

~Good Luck~

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-06-10T13:16:51+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
hi~~~

let me mod, please

[General]
I think that intro and outro of this map are too long. How about cuttiing them suitably?
(I suggest -> start:00:11:811- , end:03:23:128-) Nope, since I don't have to cut it according to the ranking criteria
change title to " -Rayrain- " I'll do some research and rename if needed

[Lunet]
01:39:795 (1) - change the slider-end to 01:40:295 Ok
I think it is hard to get the timing of beat correctly. I suggest to make DS longer or avoid starting sliders form red line
It doesn't matter that much, the timing is correct and the map is almost all-sliders so... I'll leave it like it is now also because the mapper is inactive and I don't want to screw his entire work up.
[Dis]
00:41:144 (4,1) - avoid overlaping It's made on purpose
00:45:644 (2,3) - ^ It's made on purpose
01:09:137 (2,4) - ^ It's made on purpose
01:22:462 (5,1) - avoid overlaping or stack correctly Ok.
01:28:462 (1,2) - stack correctly Ok.
01:35:295 (2,3,6) - avoid overlaping It's made on purpose
02:15:295 (2,3) - ^ It's made on purpose
02:16:628 (2,3,5) - ^ It's made on purpose
02:22:462 (3,4) -stack It's made on purpose
02:23:462 (3,4,5,6) - not stack. less visible It's made on purpose
02:56:295 (4,6) - avoid overlap It's made on purpose
02:24:795 (3,5) - stack correctly Ok.

Congrats on revival!

~Good Luck~

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-06-10T18:25:44+00:00

[General]

dopo 3 ore a cercare il titolo giusto ti confermo che è -Rayrain- ; preso le info da http://vgmdb.net/album/20608 track nr 7
adda il nome tei tuoi Guest mapper nelle tag
00:00:645 - sta cosa random all'inizio? o.o wtf,sorse è per quello che ti hanno consigliato di tagliare l'mp3

[SB]

00:17:145 - il flash che c'è qui è troppo veloce e flescianto come si direbbe io direi di fare un soffice inizio e non cosi tanto improvviso perchè sinceramente all inizio di cio' ho pensato allora perchè non hai attivato il epiessy warning, ma vedendo il resto mi sono detta che non ce ne bisogno,quindi dovresti cercare di rendere piu' leggero questo inizio
01:52:295 - qui il black è cosi improvviso dinuovo e troppo veloce considera di allegerire anche qui e magari iniziare un po' prima l'effetto
il pulse non è che lo usi spesso e solo in una parte dove prorio non si nota

La cosa che ti consiglierei è
A: di cercare di sistemare la SB cercando di creare effetti piu' leggeri o
B: di eliminarla perchè non è che sia mega stra-fantastica

[Lunet]
Sinceramente detto questa diff ha un flow orriblile ç___ç ed è molto vecchia lo so ma gli attuali standard prevedo un livello diciamo maggiore di questo,ci sono un sacco di overlap di cose chefanno difficile la diff che dovrebbe essere quella piu' facile del mapset,io ti consiglierei di metterci seriamente mano e rimappare molte parti o un total remap perchè molti slider possono essere migliorati con la nuova 3 point formula; cerchero' di elencare i maggiori problemi nella diff ma l'ho guardata e riguardata un paio di volte e ci vorrebbe troppo lavoro per i modders per migliorarla >.<

AiBat

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AR 4 OD and HP 3 pls hp 0 is not allowed
00:22:478 - try to don't use multiple reverse-arrow in a easier diff of the mapset ; for this and for all the other in this mapset try to remplace1 reverce witha circle
01:10:970 (1,2) - this is very difficult to read for the beginners, first of all try to don't stack objects and after to use multiple reverse-arrow sliders
01:14:303 (5,1) - very ugly overlaps ;_;
01:35:795 (3,1) - same with this one, 02:09:128 (1,3) - ecc .. all the overlaps should be fixed , about 02:10:795 (3) - is better to ctrl + j so you can form a triangle patter with the next and the prev slider, after fixing the overlap ofc o3o
02:55:128 (1) - this slider touch the hp drain

[Dis]
Questa diff paragonata alla normal/easy è fatta un po' meglio ma sempre come ho detto prime ci sono anche qui lacune nel flow ;_; e un sacco di overlap bruttissimi .3.

AiBat

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HP and OD 6 pls
00:19:145 (3,5) - why don't you try to stack the end of slider 3 with 5 slider start?
00:19:811 (5,1,2) - why don't you try to clean un a bit this patter with something like:
SPOILER
00:27:811 - soft sampleset + whistle
00:41:311 (5,1,2,3,4) - this pattern should be remade because the overlapped circles plays not so good TT
00:45:644 (2,3) - place it under the reverse-arrow?
00:49:144- silence this spinner end with 5% volume
01:00:470 (3,1,2) - ç_ç again
01:08:303 (6,2) - again overlap
01:10:470 (1,2,3) - try with a pattern like:
SPOILER
01:52:628 - if i'm not wrong this is a Hard diff,well i think this a bit to much insane to have a circle in a such short time after the spinner,same with 02:14:628 - and 02:27:962 -
well in this diff i think all the overlaps should be replaced and improved with other patterns

[Kecco]
Questa diff rispetto a tutte le altre nel mapset è molto buona o3o

AiBat

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OD 8 pls ovo
00:27:811 - usa il soft sampleset qui con un whistle
00:49:144 - stessa cosa anche qui suona molto meglio
01:01:470 - una cosa del genere è molto meglio imo
SPOILER
01:10:970 (2,3) - fai un po' meglio la blanket
01:33:795 (8) - riesci a piazzarlo sullo slider perfettamente in una maniera simile?: ovviamente dovrai modificare la pattern quandrata dinuovo per formare un quadrato perfetto dinuovo @@
SPOILER
non fare caso alle combo number lol
02:00:462 (5,1) - mi sembra un po' esagerato sto jump
02:02:128 (8) - (8,1) - stessa cosa riguardo a questo
02:08:795 (7,1) - idem
02:44:295 (8,1) - idem
02:46:462 - che ne dici di fare questo mini stream tutto staccato invece che andare sul lato?

buona fortuna o3o

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-06-10T21:17:36+00:00

Lally wrote:
[General]
dopo 3 ore a cercare il titolo giusto ti confermo che è -Rayrain- ; preso le info da http://vgmdb.net/album/20608 track nr 7 Fixed
adda il nome tei tuoi Guest mapper nelle tag Già messi
00:00:645 - sta cosa random all'inizio? o.o wtf,sorse è per quello che ti hanno consigliato di tagliare l'mp3
Si ma non c'importa, che dici?

[SB]
00:17:145 - il flash che c'è qui è troppo veloce e flescianto come si direbbe io direi di fare un soffice inizio e non cosi tanto improvviso perchè sinceramente all inizio di cio' ho pensato allora perchè non hai attivato il epiessy warning, ma vedendo il resto mi sono detta che non ce ne bisogno,quindi dovresti cercare di rendere piu' leggero questo inizio
01:52:295 - qui il black è cosi improvviso dinuovo e troppo veloce considera di allegerire anche qui e magari iniziare un po' prima l'effetto
il pulse non è che lo usi spesso e solo in una parte dove prorio non si nota

La cosa che ti consiglierei è
A: di cercare di sistemare la SB cercando di creare effetti piu' leggeri o
B: di eliminarla perchè non è che sia mega stra-fantastica
Non fixo niente della SB, la preferisco così e non credo ci sia bisogno di un warning.

[Lunet]
Sinceramente detto questa diff ha un flow orriblile ç___ç ed è molto vecchia lo so ma gli attuali standard prevedo un livello diciamo maggiore di questo,ci sono un sacco di overlap di cose chefanno difficile la diff che dovrebbe essere quella piu' facile del mapset,io ti consiglierei di metterci seriamente mano e rimappare molte parti o un total remap perchè molti slider possono essere migliorati con la nuova 3 point formula; cerchero' di elencare i maggiori problemi nella diff ma l'ho guardata e riguardata un paio di volte e ci vorrebbe troppo lavoro per i modders per migliorarla >.<
AiBat
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AR 4 OD and HP 3 pls hp 0 is not allowed
00:22:478 - try to don't use multiple reverse-arrow in a easier diff of the mapset ; for this and for all the other in this mapset try to remplace1 reverce witha circle
01:10:970 (1,2) - this is very difficult to read for the beginners, first of all try to don't stack objects and after to use multiple reverse-arrow sliders
01:14:303 (5,1) - very ugly overlaps ;_;
01:35:795 (3,1) - same with this one, 02:09:128 (1,3) - ecc .. all the overlaps should be fixed , about 02:10:795 (3) - is better to ctrl + j so you can form a triangle patter with the next and the prev slider, after fixing the overlap ofc o3o
02:55:128 (1) - this slider touch the hp drain
[Dis]
Questa diff paragonata alla normal/easy è fatta un po' meglio ma sempre come ho detto prime ci sono anche qui lacune nel flow ;_; e un sacco di overlap bruttissimi .3.
AiBat
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HP and OD 6 pls Ok
00:19:145 (3,5) - why don't you try to stack the end of slider 3 with 5 slider start? Ok
00:19:811 (5,1,2) - why don't you try to clean un a bit this patter with something like: Ok
SPOILER
00:27:811 - soft sampleset + whistle No
00:41:311 (5,1,2,3,4) - this pattern should be remade because the overlapped circles plays not so good TT Ok
00:45:644 (2,3) - place it under the reverse-arrow? Ok in another way
00:49:144- silence this spinner end with 5% volume No
01:00:470 (3,1,2) - ç_ç again Ok
01:08:303 (6,2) - again overlap Ok
01:10:470 (1,2,3) - try with a pattern like: Ok
SPOILER
01:52:628 - if i'm not wrong this is a Hard diff,well i think this a bit to much insane to have a circle in a such short time after the spinner,same with 02:14:628 - and 02:27:962 - Ok
well in this diff i think all the overlaps should be replaced and improved with other patterns
[Kecco]
Questa diff rispetto a tutte le altre nel mapset è molto buona o3o
AiBat
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02:03:063 - snap to 02:03:128
02:03:230 - snap to 02:03:295
02:05:730 - snap to 02:05:795
02:05:896 - snap to 02:05:962
02:08:396 - snap to 02:08:462
02:08:563 - snap to 02:08:628
OD 8 pls ovo No
00:27:811 - usa il soft sampleset qui con un whistle No
00:49:144 - stessa cosa anche qui suona molto meglio No
01:01:470 - una cosa del genere è molto meglio imo Ok
SPOILER
01:10:970 (2,3) - fai un po' meglio la blanket La preferisco così
01:33:795 (8) - riesci a piazzarlo sullo slider perfettamente in una maniera simile?: ovviamente dovrai modificare la pattern quandrata dinuovo per formare un quadrato perfetto dinuovo @@ ^
SPOILER
non fare caso alle combo number lol
02:00:462 (5,1) - mi sembra un po' esagerato sto jump L'ho ridotto un pochino
02:02:128 (8) - (8,1) - stessa cosa riguardo a questo No
02:08:795 (7,1) - idem Ok
02:44:295 (8,1) - idem Ok
02:46:462 - che ne dici di fare questo mini stream tutto staccato invece che andare sul lato? Ok

buona fortuna o3o

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-06-11T12:48:56+00:00

Un paio di suggerimenti:

• Perchè non usi il pv della canzone? (se decidi di non usarlo allora trova un mp3 senza l'intro iniziale)
• Trovo la SB abbastanza inutile, se proprio vuoi farne una non limitarti a mettere solo 2 pulse e uno sfondo nero.
• La canzone è cantata da まめみ (Mamemi) quindi ti consiglio di cambiare l'artist della mappa, conagusuri puoi metterlo nelle tags.
• Aggiungi "TH12 UFO Undefined Fantastic Object" nelle tags.
• Che ne dici di usare un BG con dei colori su tonalità più fredde? Quello attuale non è che mi piaccia poi tanto.
• Controlla AIMod, ci sono un paio di cose da sistemare riguardanti oggetti non snappati e sezioni timing non uguali in tutte le diff.
• Fossi stato in voi avrei mappato la prima parte della canzone (00:17:145 ~ 00:59:804) con una sv ridotta, nella tua difficoltà soprattutto la velocità è troppo alta e le pattern che hai fatto stonano con la canzone.

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-06-14T16:26:31+00:00

=^=) finalmente ho finito premetto che ho mappato prima ancora che avessi cambiato il titolo quindi fixalo tu per me pls ovo
come volevi una diff da 2,5 è uscita a 2.6 di star rating,rimango insicura su 2 spinner ma me la vedro piu' avanti ovo
non dimenticarti di aggiungere il mio nome nelle tag \o3o/

o3o/° biscotto

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Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-06-15T15:35:10+00:00

Replaced Lunet's diff with Lally's.

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-06-15T16:11:31+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Un paio di suggerimenti:

• Perchè non usi il pv della canzone? (se decidi di non usarlo allora trova un mp3 senza l'intro iniziale) Fatto
• Trovo la SB abbastanza inutile, se proprio vuoi farne una non limitarti a mettere solo 2 pulse e uno sfondo nero. SB cancellata
• La canzone è cantata da まめみ (Mamemi) quindi ti consiglio di cambiare l'artist della mappa, conagusuri puoi metterlo nelle tags. Direi di no ma aspetto volentieri altri consigli su questo da altri modders
• Aggiungi "TH12 UFO Undefined Fantastic Object" nelle tags. Fatto
• Che ne dici di usare un BG con dei colori su tonalità più fredde? Quello attuale non è che mi piaccia poi tanto. Direi di no, ma se puoi linkamene uno
• Controlla AIMod, ci sono un paio di cose da sistemare riguardanti oggetti non snappati e sezioni timing non uguali in tutte le diff. Fatto
• Fossi stato in voi avrei mappato la prima parte della canzone (00:17:145 ~ 00:59:804) con una sv ridotta, nella tua difficoltà soprattutto la velocità è troppo alta e le pattern che hai fatto stonano con la canzone. Preferisco mantenerlo così

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2013-07-12T16:11:39+00:00

Hello mod from your request~

[General]

not necessary but you can turn off the letterbox in breaks
And maybe use a silence sliderslide sound? I can hear the sound which is quite strange for me.

[Lally]

01:06:137 (3) - kinda nazi but I might prefer
SPOILER
02:14:795 (1) - I assume this is an Easy diff so this note is too close to the spinner which is not suitable for new players. But if it is a Normal diff you know, just ignore me.
02:41:795 (1) - This spacing might cause confuse for new players. I do not really recommend this kind of stack. Ctrl+g might be better imo.
03:00:462 (1) - same with previous

[Dis]

01:06:970 (6,1,2) - make the spacing the same?
02:29:962 (1) - hmm why NC?
02:35:295 (2,3,4) - might be better if you make 2 hear - 3 and 3 - 4 the same spacing
02:37:962 (4) - NC to clarify btw
03:03:628 (1) - maybe del this NC and add NC on 03:03:795 (2) -

[Kecco]

~~I personally think AR8 fits better~~ Changed my mind
00:46:811 (2) - Ctrl+g sounds better for me. And if you do this, ctrl+g 00:47:144 (3) - also
02:10:962 (7) - Ctrl+g?
03:02:962 (5) - move one grid left so that you can stack 03:01:795 (5) -. kinda nazi though
03:12:462 (1) - ctrl+g?

Nothing Else~ Good map and good luck~

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-07-12T21:46:06+00:00

Megurine Luka wrote:
Hello mod from your request~

[General]
not necessary but you can turn off the letterbox in breaks -OK-
And maybe use a silence sliderslide sound? I can hear the sound which is quite strange for me. -NO-

[Lally]
01:06:137 (3) - kinda nazi but I might prefer
SPOILER
02:14:795 (1) - I assume this is an Easy diff so this note is too close to the spinner which is not suitable for new players. But if it is a Normal diff you know, just ignore me.
02:41:795 (1) - This spacing might cause confuse for new players. I do not really recommend this kind of stack. Ctrl+g might be better imo.
03:00:462 (1) - same with previous

[Dis]
01:06:970 (6,1,2) - make the spacing the same? -DONE-
02:29:962 (1) - hmm why NC? -FIXED-
02:35:295 (2,3,4) - might be better if you make 2 hear - 3 and 3 - 4 the same spacing -FIXED IN ANOTHER WAY-
02:37:962 (4) - NC to clarify btw -DONE-
03:03:628 (1) - maybe del this NC and add NC on 03:03:795 (2) - -NO-

[Kecco]
~~I personally think AR8 fits better~~ Changed my mind
00:46:811 (2) - Ctrl+g sounds better for me. And if you do this, ctrl+g 00:47:144 (3) - also -DONE-
02:10:962 (7) - Ctrl+g? -NO-
03:02:962 (5) - move one grid left so that you can stack 03:01:795 (5) -. kinda nazi though -DONE-
03:12:462 (1) - ctrl+g? -DONE-

Nothing Else~ Good map and good luck~

Waiting for Lally to reply to your mod.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-07-13T02:49:08+00:00

Hi m4m sorry for the delay my pc was broke orz

Kecco:

00:21:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is so confuse since 00:21:478 (1,2,3) - that part got around 1 - 10 distance and then a random jump on the combo here 00:21:978 maybe you should add new combo 00:21:978 to make this readable
00:27:144 remove finish from slider boddy atleast?
00:27:645 try to add a circle here since this place feel so empty for me gonna empathize better the song like you did on 00:48:978
00:48:478 finish sound bad here maybe reduce the volume or add a whistle instead of finish?
01:06:304 add finish or clap here since the music change a little i preffer a soft finish imo
01:14:303 add a circle here then start the spinner on 01:14:387 gonna fit alot better with the song
01:16:637 add new combo for the jump gonna be more readable
01:33:795 (8,9) - stack 8 perfect on 9 body plz actually look bad imo
01:41:795 NC and here too 01:42:295 since that jumps and stream need they to make the map readable
02:27:128 put NC so the player can notice the repeat slider
02:27:962 - 02:28:128 - 02:28:295 gonna be nice if you map that parts since when you finish the long previous slider this next part feel so empty
03:15:712 should be a circle here i dont know why you ignore it if is so important in the music
03:21:295 remove new combo no sense for me since it should be on 03:21:128 just saying

Dis:

I think AR 8 fit better this diff since 00:25:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pattern like it are so har to read with AR 7 imo
00:20:644 Maybe you can move this to other place maybe when 00:19:811 tail get perfect stacked on 00:20:644 body
00:21:144 this spinner dont make much sense maybe you should map that parts
00:42:478 same as 00:21:144 the spinner dont fit with the song orz
01:02:304 new cmbo to tell the player about the next jump gonna be nice
01:11:137 move this atleast 2 grids down to the previous slider dont cover it alot
01:19:803 (1,4) - stack they perfect
01:35:628 new combo actually this pattern luck so confuse with previous .-. a litle overlaped
01:41:128 add a circle here the start the spinner on 01:41:212
02:34:462 (5,1,2,3,4) - pattern like this are so ahrd to read thats why I recomend you to put ar 8 on this
02:50:962 (1,3) - stack they perfect

Lally:

I highly recomend you AR 5 here patterns like 01:53:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - with alot of beats on the screen can be confuse alot for newbies and so hard
to ready AR 5 fix this :3
00:19:811 should be a new combo
00:22:478 same here
00:59:804 missing finish here
01:40:128 NC .-. long combos like yours can be tedious for new players
I like your diff but the combos are a ittle messy imo

thats all I can suggest here GL with this :3

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-07-13T13:15:26+00:00

Megurine Luka wrote:
Hello mod from your request~ Hii o3o/
[Lally]
01:06:137 (3) - kinda nazi but I might prefer fixed a bit
SPOILER
02:14:795 (1) - I assume this is an Easy diff so this note is too close to the spinner which is not suitable for new players. But if it is a Normal diff you know, just ignore me. is an normal/easy but i will think about this one even if i think is not so hard
02:41:795 (1) - This spacing might cause confuse for new players. I do not really recommend this kind of stack. Ctrl+g might be better imo. i don't think so because is enought time until the prev circle dissaper at all
03:00:462 (1) - same with previous here is enought time as the prev exsample

Natsu wrote:
Hi m4m sorry for the delay my pc was broke orz Hi o3o/

Lally:

I highly recomend you AR 5 here patterns like 01:53:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - with alot of beats on the screen can be confuse alot for newbies and so hard
to ready AR 5 fix this :3 i'll think about not really wanna to change the ar
00:19:811 should be a new combo ok done
00:22:478 same here ok done
00:59:804 missing finish here ok done
01:40:128 NC .-. long combos like yours can be tedious for new players ok done
I like your diff but the combos are a ittle messy imo i have always problems with new combos X3
thats all I can suggest here GL with this :3

le diff o3o

osu file format v12

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348,164,86462,6,0,P|424:140|460:152,2,99.9999904632569,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,87462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,187,87795,2,0,P|179:147|52:207,2,199.999980926514,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,89462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,340,89795,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,284,90128,2,0,P|52:204|228:200,1,299.999971389771,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,264,91462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,168,91795,6,0,P|288:120|152:52,1,199.999980926514,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,92795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,160,93128,2,0,P|96:208|232:276,1,199.999980926514,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,94128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,260,94462,6,0,P|460:212|416:84,1,199.999980926514,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,95462,2,0,P|344:32|376:8,2,99.9999904632569,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,196,96462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,284,96795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,97128,6,0,P|116:336|52:232,1,199.999980926514,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,140,98128,2,0,P|92:76|128:64,1,99.9999904632569,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,36,98795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,99128,2,0,P|224:168|360:136,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,64,100128,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,44,100462,2,0,L|280:4,2,49.9999952316285,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101128,12,0,102462,0:0:0:0:
104,192,113128,6,0,B|178:191|254:310|254:310|328:192|406:191,1,399.999961853028,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,124,114795,2,0,P|428:100|376:100,1,99.9999904632569,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,148,115462,2,0,B|256:172|256:172|212:148,1,99.9999904632569,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,98,116128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,200,116462,2,0,L|304:304,1,199.999980926514,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,176,117795,6,0,P|448:136|312:88,2,199.999980926514,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,264,119462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,180,119795,2,0,P|276:184|216:80,2,199.999980926514,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,124,121462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,76,121795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,220,122462,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,280,122795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,180,123128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,120,123462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,64,123795,6,0,B|346:19|398:36|398:36|434:83|473:83,2,199.999980926514,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,120,125462,2,0,P|165:137|101:111,1,99.9999904632569,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,102,126128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
55,192,126462,2,0,L|57:312,1,99.9999904632569,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,345,127128,2,0,L|139:225,1,99.9999904632569,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,144,127795,2,0,B|193:75|265:75|265:75|295:129|330:156|410:133,1,299.999971389771,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,40,129128,6,0,P|456:59|490:160,1,199.999980926514,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,248,130128,2,0,P|444:268|412:276,1,49.9999952316285,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,300,130462,2,0,P|328:332|208:296,1,199.999980926514,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,220,131462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,200,131795,2,0,P|199:136|125:122,2,149.999985694885,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133128,12,0,134462,0:0:0:0:
200,240,134795,6,0,P|172:160|172:124,2,99.9999904632569,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,135795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,136128,2,0,P|368:188|468:248,1,199.999980926514,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,336,137128,5,4,0:0:0:0:
376,288,137462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,232,137795,2,0,P|304:188|316:164,2,49.9999952316285,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,332,138462,2,0,P|220:304|200:184,2,199.999980926514,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,288,140128,6,0,P|353:173|285:145,1,199.999980926514,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,88,141128,2,0,P|276:32|392:60,1,199.999980926514,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,142128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,148,142462,6,0,P|324:164|304:316,2,199.999980926514,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,144128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,52,144462,2,0,P|316:60|280:84,1,99.9999904632569,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145128,12,0,147795,0:0:0:0:
132,252,148462,5,12,0:0:0:0:
236,80,149128,1,12,0:0:0:0:
268,228,149628,1,12,0:0:0:0:
268,228,151128,6,0,P|296:176|424:208,1,199.999980926514,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,288,152128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,340,152462,2,0,P|300:356|180:280,1,199.999980926514,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,153462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,120,153795,2,0,L|64:72,2,49.9999952316285,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,104,154462,6,0,P|296:60|384:120,1,199.999980926514,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,208,155462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,164,155795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,109,156128,2,0,P|408:64|472:48,2,99.9999904632569,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,208,157128,2,0,P|344:304|256:320,2,199.999980926514,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,159128,5,12,0:0:0:0:
152,312,159795,1,12,0:0:0:0:
284,236,160295,1,12,0:0:0:0:
284,236,161795,6,0,P|300:164|192:92,2,199.999980926514,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,163462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,360,163795,2,0,P|104:276|180:196,1,199.999980926514,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,172,164795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,144,165128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,76,165462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,108,165795,6,0,P|172:144|256:272,1,199.999980926514,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,280,166795,2,0,P|384:280|400:272,1,49.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,256,167128,2,0,P|472:200|472:160,1,99.9999904632569,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,72,167795,2,0,P|376:56|296:152,2,199.999980926514,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,264,169795,6,0,B|428:332|364:244|304:336,1,199.999980926514,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,244,170795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,328,171128,2,0,B|148:244|84:332|24:264,1,199.999980926514,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,168,172128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,196,172462,2,0,B|176:204|192:160|192:160|176:104|212:60,1,199.999980926514,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,173462,2,0,P|404:128|440:60,2,199.999980926514,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,68,175128,5,4,0:0:0:0:
120,120,175462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,220,175795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,176128,2,0,P|228:340|356:312,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,256,177128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,177462,6,0,P|238:244|180:184,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,178462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,178795,12,0,179795,0:0:0:0:
200,252,180462,6,0,P|208:200|136:76,2,199.999980926514,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,182128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,252,182462,2,0,P|304:200|376:76,2,199.999980926514,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,340,184128,2,0,P|424:336|464:136,1,299.999971389771,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,92,185462,6,0,P|436:52|492:52,2,99.9999904632569,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,186462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,132,186795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,72,187128,2,0,P|176:52|48:124,2,199.999980926514,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188795,12,0,190462,0:0:0:0:
208,224,191128,6,0,P|180:172|144:160,1,99.9999904632569,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,204,191794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,104,192128,2,0,P|112:56|240:64,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,193128,6,0,P|360:84|368:36,2,99.9999904632569,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,156,194128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,216,194462,2,0,P|240:256|131:192,2,199.999980926514,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,155,196128,2,0,P|414:165|435:194,1,49.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,218,196462,6,0,P|483:266|389:365,1,199.999980926514,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,331,197462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,273,197795,2,0,P|154:235|143:119,1,199.999980926514,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,49,198795,6,0,P|171:29|144:28,2,49.9999952316285,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,141,199462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,213,199795,2,0,P|334:147|327:102,2,99.9999904632569,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,297,200795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,207,201128,6,0,L|141:206,1,49.9999952316285,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

ty for modding <33

Kecco

908 posts

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Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-07-13T16:05:32+00:00

Updated!

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2013-07-15T13:06:28+00:00

back to ask for kds ovo

yeah~

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-07-15T22:51:34+00:00

So sorry Megu!

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-07-15T23:09:10+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi m4m sorry for the delay my pc was broke orz

Kecco:

00:21:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is so confuse since 00:21:478 (1,2,3) - that part got around 1 - 10 distance and then a random jump on the combo here 00:21:978 maybe you should add new combo 00:21:978 to make this readable -IT'S PERFECTLY READABLE FOR ME-
00:27:144 remove finish from slider boddy atleast? -NOPE, IT'S MEANT TO BE SO-
00:27:645 try to add a circle here since this place feel so empty for me gonna empathize better the song like you did on 00:48:978 -NOPE, SORRY-
00:48:478 finish sound bad here maybe reduce the volume or add a whistle instead of finish? -NOPE, SORRY-
01:06:304 add finish or clap here since the music change a little i preffer a soft finish imo -NOPE, SORRY-
01:14:303 add a circle here then start the spinner on 01:14:387 gonna fit alot better with the song -NOPE, SORRY-
01:16:637 add new combo for the jump gonna be more readable -NOPE, SORRY-
01:33:795 (8,9) - stack 8 perfect on 9 body plz actually look bad imo -FIXED IN A DIFFERENT WAY-
01:41:795 NC and here too 01:42:295 since that jumps and stream need they to make the map readable -FIXED-
02:27:128 put NC so the player can notice the repeat slider -NOPE, SORRY-
02:27:962 - 02:28:128 - 02:28:295 gonna be nice if you map that parts since when you finish the long previous slider this next part feel so empty -NOPE, SORRY-
03:15:712 should be a circle here i dont know why you ignore it if is so important in the music -FIXED-
03:21:295 remove new combo no sense for me since it should be on 03:21:128 just saying -NAH, I LIKE IT-
Dis:

I think AR 8 fit better this diff since 00:25:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pattern like it are so har to read with AR 7 imo -I'LL SEE WHAT I CAN DO-
00:20:644 Maybe you can move this to other place maybe when 00:19:811 tail get perfect stacked on 00:20:644 body -FIXED IN ANOTHER WAY-
00:21:144 this spinner dont make much sense maybe you should map that parts -NOPE, SORRY-
00:42:478 same as 00:21:144 the spinner dont fit with the song orz -NOPE, SORRY-
01:02:304 new cmbo to tell the player about the next jump gonna be nice -OK-
01:11:137 move this atleast 2 grids down to the previous slider dont cover it alot -OK-
01:19:803 (1,4) - stack they perfect -OK-
01:35:628 new combo actually this pattern luck so confuse with previous .-. a litle overlaped -FIXED IN ANOTHER WAY-
01:41:128 add a circle here the start the spinner on 01:41:212 -NOPE, SORRY-
02:34:462 (5,1,2,3,4) - pattern like this are so ahrd to read thats why I recomend you to put ar 8 on this -I'LL SEE-
02:50:962 (1,3) - stack they perfect -OK-

thats all I can suggest here GL with this :3

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2013-07-27T07:05:25+00:00

Hi there

[General]
* The difficulty gap between Lally and Dis are too far, Lally diff is easy but Dis are too hard for hard diff. Consider to make an hard diff to make the diff is balanced through this map
* Your difficulty name makes people confusing for which one is easy/hard diff. Consider to include the difficulty name in diff name (e.g. Lally's Normal)
* Please remove the very intro part of MP3, that just useless (00:00:000 - 00:05:478)
* Replace the artist to "こなぐすり" (keep the artist unicode)

[Lally]
02:14:795 (1) - Since this diff is an easiest diff, don't put this object after spinner because beginners can't reach this object after spinner. Consider to make a space between spinner and this object
02:58:795 (1) - This spinner are too short for easier diff because beginners will not able to complete this spinner due to length of spinner are being short. Consider to extend as possible

[Dis]
01:19:137 (1) - Why new combo?
01:21:295 (1) - Spacing error because it's too far from previous one
01:53:628 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It feels useless, but it's up to you
02:02:795 (3,4) - Make a pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891255 to make a better flow? Hard to explain orz
02:51:795 (1) - Reverse this object for better flow because it'll create a spiral flow pattern?

Well, good luck

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-07-28T22:43:39+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[General]
* The difficulty gap between Lally and Dis are too far, Lally diff is easy but Dis are too hard for hard diff. Consider to make an hard diff to make the diff is balanced through this map Sorry but I don't see any gap. Plus, there are plenty of maps ranked with this mapset. (Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/95533)
* Your difficulty name makes people confusing for which one is easy/hard diff. Consider to include the difficulty name in diff name (e.g. Lally's Normal) Fixed
* Please remove the very intro part of MP3, that just useless (00:00:000 - 00:05:478) The video has that intro, that's why I didn't cut it. Plus, other BATs said it's fine.
* Replace the artist to "こなぐすり" (keep the artist unicode) Fixed

[Lally]
02:14:795 (1) - Since this diff is an easiest diff, don't put this object after spinner because beginners can't reach this object after spinner. Consider to make a space between spinner and this object
02:58:795 (1) - This spinner are too short for easier diff because beginners will not able to complete this spinner due to length of spinner are being short. Consider to extend as possible

[Dis]
01:19:137 (1) - Why new combo? Fixed
01:21:295 (1) - Spacing error because it's too far from previous one Fixed
01:53:628 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It feels useless, but it's up to you Fixed
02:02:795 (3,4) - Make a pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891255 to make a better flow? Hard to explain orz Fixed
02:51:795 (1) - Reverse this object for better flow because it'll create a spiral flow pattern? Fixed

Well, good luck

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-07-29T19:06:31+00:00

per adesso lascio cosi :V vedro caso mai di pensarci con altre mod o3o

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-08-03T04:16:57+00:00

~~Placeholder for coming mod.~~

~General~

Try to make the Kiai Time consistent between the difficulties if possible.

~Lally's Normal~

01:21:129 (1) - Too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty of the mapset.
01:39:128 (4,1) - Switch the NC on (4), since the music actually changes there.
01:41:128 (1) - Add a Finish at the end of this spinner, to emphasize with the music.
02:28:462 (1,2,3) - These timing change might be confusing to read for beginners, try to make some sliders instead.
02:39:128 (1,2,3) - Same as above for the same reason.
02:58:795 (1) - This spinner is way too short for a Normal.
03:11:128 (1) - Remove the clap at the begin of this slider and leave only the finish, it's way too loud at the moment.
03:21:128 (1) - Remove this NC, it's not necessary.

~Dis's Hard~

Rename it to "Dis' Hard" for correct spelling.

01:04:803 (8,1,2) - Make the spacing consistent here, it looks and plays weird right now.
01:35:628 (4,5,6) - Wrong spacing, respace them carefully and correctly.
03:13:128 (3) - So many slider repeats all of a sudden might be confusing to read, I suggest to remove at least one repeat and add a circle instead, so it's easier to read and play.

~Kecco's Lunatic~

Rename it to "Kecco's Insane" for consistency with the other difficulties.

01:52:462 (4,1) - Switch the NC on (4), since the music actually changes there.
01:56:295 (3,4,5) - You used different slider repeats there, I'm not sure if that's a good idea, might be confusing.
03:21:128 (7,1) - Switch the NC on (7), since the music actually changes there.

Kecco

908 posts

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Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-08-03T13:13:32+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~~Placeholder for coming mod.~~

~General~
Try to make the Kiai Time consistent between the difficulties if possible.Done

~Dis's Hard~
Rename it to "Dis' Hard" for correct spelling.
Renamed to Disoy's Hard
01:04:803 (8,1,2) - Make the spacing consistent here, it looks and plays weird right now. Done
01:35:628 (4,5,6) - Wrong spacing, respace them carefully and correctly. Done
03:13:128 (3) - So many slider repeats all of a sudden might be confusing to read, I suggest to remove at least one repeat and add a circle instead, so it's easier to read and play. Done
~Kecco's Lunatic~
Rename it to "Kecco's Insane" for consistency with the other difficulties.
I like Lunatic more
01:52:462 (4,1) - Switch the NC on (4), since the music actually changes there. Done
01:56:295 (3,4,5) - You used different slider repeats there, I'm not sure if that's a good idea, might be confusing. Nope.
03:21:128 (7,1) - Switch the NC on (7), since the music actually changes there. Done

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-08-03T13:26:09+00:00

Don't forget to kudosu if it was helpful

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-08-03T13:50:27+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~~Placeholder for coming mod.~~

~General~
Try to make the Kiai Time consistent between the difficulties if possible.
~Lally's Normal~
01:21:129 (1) - Too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty of the mapset. fixed
01:39:128 (4,1) - Switch the NC on (4), since the music actually changes there.ok
01:41:128 (1) - Add a Finish at the end of this spinner, to emphasize with the music.ok
02:28:462 (1,2,3) - These timing change might be confusing to read for beginners, try to make some sliders instead.is not needed is not so hard
02:39:128 (1,2,3) - Same as above for the same reason.^same
02:58:795 (1) - This spinner is way too short for a Normal. fixed
03:11:128 (1) - Remove the clap at the begin of this slider and leave only the finish, it's way too loud at the moment. i love how it sound the finish with the clap so no
03:21:128 (1) - Remove this NC, it's not necessary. no i like it so

le diff o3o

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Conagusuri -RayRain- PV edit C78.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80382
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17135,27801,38468,49134,102458,112458,191124
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:-RayRain-
TitleUnicode:-RayRain-
Artist:Conagusuri
ArtistUnicode:こなぐすり
Creator:Kecco
Version:Lally's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:TH12 UFO Undefined Fantastic Object hijiri byakuren Zun Cosmic Mind Miyamo EastNewSound Emotional Skyscraper World's End Disoy Lally
BeatmapID:97617
BeatmapSetID:27212

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.999999904632569
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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312,252,182462,2,0,P|304:200|376:76,2,199.999980926514,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,340,184128,2,0,P|424:336|464:136,1,299.999971389771,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,92,185462,6,0,P|436:52|492:52,2,99.9999904632569,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,186462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,132,186795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,72,187128,2,0,P|176:52|48:124,2,199.999980926514,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188795,12,0,190462,0:0:0:0:
208,224,191128,6,0,P|180:172|144:160,1,99.9999904632569,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,204,191794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,104,192128,2,0,P|112:56|240:64,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,193128,6,0,P|360:84|368:36,2,99.9999904632569,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,156,194128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,216,194462,2,0,P|240:256|131:192,2,199.999980926514,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,155,196128,2,0,P|414:165|435:194,1,49.9999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,218,196462,6,0,P|483:266|389:365,1,199.999980926514,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,331,197462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,273,197795,2,0,P|154:235|143:119,1,199.999980926514,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,49,198795,6,0,P|171:29|144:28,2,49.9999952316285,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,141,199462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,213,199795,2,0,P|334:147|327:102,2,99.9999904632569,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,297,200795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,207,201128,6,0,L|141:206,1,49.9999952316285,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

@Kecco: comunque la tua diff dovresti chiamarla solo Lunatic imo perchè tu sei il creatore della mappa e non è una guest per qualcuno
@Andrea: molti mapper aspettano tutti i fix per dare il kudosu, non essere impaziente baka :V

Kecco

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Kecco 2013-08-03T14:06:59+00:00

Fixed!

Leorda

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Leorda 2013-08-04T17:44:39+00:00

Rechecked~

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Satellite

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Satellite 2013-08-05T01:04:41+00:00

Kecco's gogo

Marcin

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Marcin 2013-08-05T13:27:49+00:00

Kinda nazi, but hurts (at least mine) eyes:
[Normal]
02:10:128 (2,3) - aren't they supposed to be ideally inline ? https://www.dropbox.com/s/mwqbexpyjy6f1 ... 151101.jpg According to the other patterns like those 02:46:795 (2,3) - http://db.tt/FlmYtwAH
[Hard]
Also
01:20:803 (3) - This circle being under slidertrack is unrankable afaik, according to this rule:

Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

03:03:462 (4) - I'm not sure whether this applies too, but in my opinion could be too hard for a hard.
IMO Hard is being too hard, gap between normal and hard is big, but I'll leave that to BAT's
[Insane]
Looks fine ~~

Kecco

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Topic Starter

Kecco 2013-08-05T14:43:21+00:00

~~Gave you kudosu but won't pop my bubble for your suggestions, sorry.~~

Marcin wrote:
Kinda nazi, but hurts (at least mine) eyes:
[Normal]
02:10:128 (2,3) - aren't they supposed to be ideally inline ? https://www.dropbox.com/s/mwqbexpyjy6f1 ... 151101.jpg According to the other patterns like those 02:46:795 (2,3) - http://db.tt/FlmYtwAH Nazi >w<
[Hard]
Also
01:20:803 (3) - This circle being under slidertrack is unrankable afaik, according to this rule:
Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
It's perfectly rankable since the hitcircle is almost perfectly visible
03:03:462 (4) - I'm not sure whether this applies too, but in my opinion could be too hard for a hard. You see the sliderpath only in the editor... By the time this 03:03:462 (4) - note shows up, the slider would be already gone.
IMO Hard is being too hard, gap between normal and hard is big, but I'll leave that to BAT's As I said to Leorda pointing out the same question, there are a lot of maps ranked with this same mapset and actually having the hard diff harder than mine.
[Insane]
Looks fine ~~

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