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nano - Nevereverland

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Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
In exchange for your rank and the pain you had to suffer.


[General]

  1. No costum combo colors?

  2. Do you think you could get some more tags like the album, etc?

[Sakuya's Normal]

  1. Too good diff
  2. 00:18:911 (2) - Whistle for the repeat?
  3. 00:23:311 (1) - Whistle the start to emphasize the Piano?
  4. 00:34:111 (2) - Whistle on the end?
  5. 00:59:617 - Add a break, the draining time is far too long to bear this.
  6. 01:22:190 (3) - Hitnormal on the start? Feels more intensive than the rest.
  7. 02:37:917 (1) - Finish on the start?
  8. 02:49:858 (4) - Try whistle on the start and on the repeat, gives a quite cool emphasize to the piano.
  9. 02:54:810 (2) - Whistle on the start, fits perfectly well to 02:54:517 (1) -
  10. 03:02:091 (2) - Try a whistle on the start, flows good with the strong vocal.
  11. 03:19:276 (2) - I don't like how that shape ends, try to make it straight with the red end point.
  12. 03:54:373 (2) - Leaving the start empty doesn't feel good since the piano is playing here, try a whistle.
  13. 04:02:674 (4) - Try a finish on the start here, it will be consistent with 04:11:994 (2) - . If you follow this, fix it on the other KIAIs aswell.

[jonathanfj's Hard]

  1. Diff settings are unbalanced, considering that AR 7 is confusing, try to reduce OD by one or increase HD by 1.
  2. 01:08:209 (6) - Looks untidy placed, try to place it under 2's end and fix the triangle
  3. 01:51:316 (1) - Missing a finish on the start.
  4. 02:01:655 (4) - Hm, I think this is much more readable if you place it with 5.
  5. 02:13:087 (3) - Could be a bit hard to read for a Hard difficulty with the hitbursts. Could you space it more out?
  6. 02:41:995 (6) - Remove clap on the start, it's inconsistent.
  7. 03:22:189 (3,1) - Far too confusing for Hard players, increase spacing between 3 and 1 please.
  8. 04:11:266 (5) - Either change hitsound back to normal on the start or change them on the KIAIs before this one to the same.

[Insane]

  1. 01:35:442 (6) - CTRL + G this? Makes spacing smoother in my opinion.
  2. 01:48:549 (1) - Remove this circle, it seems useless and unfitting.
  3. 01:50:296 - Add a note on this one and the followings to follow the piano? Just suggesting I can imagine why you did this.
  4. 02:14:471 (3) - Stack with 5? asasak
  5. 03:00:052 (6) - This Slider isn't really following the piano anymore, right?
  6. 04:38:207 (1) - Missing a finish here.

Nice mapset!
Only diff spread makes me worry a bit, hue.

Good luck!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj

Konei wrote:

[jonathanfj's Hard]

  1. Diff settings are unbalanced, considering that AR 7 is confusing, try to reduce OD by one or increase HD by 1. done HP+1
  2. 01:08:209 (6) - Looks untidy placed, try to place it under 2's end and fix the triangle done
  3. 01:51:316 (1) - Missing a finish on the start. i knew a few hitsounds would slip
  4. 02:01:655 (4) - Hm, I think this is much more readable if you place it with 5. for me double stacked notes seem to be more intuitive than single note + stack with slider, plus there are alot of these double stacks in the map so i think its fine
  5. 02:13:087 (3) - Could be a bit hard to read for a Hard difficulty with the hitbursts. Could you space it more out? increased spacing to ~0.5x
  6. 02:41:995 (6) - Remove clap on the start, it's inconsistent. alrite
  7. 03:22:189 (3,1) - Far too confusing for Hard players, increase spacing between 3 and 1 please. i think this is fine, there are other occurrences before this and i marked the slider with NC so it should be enough hints for players to get this
  8. 04:11:266 (5) - Either change hitsound back to normal on the start or change them on the KIAIs before this one to the same. the last kiai actually has these random soft whistles to accompany the piano, i personally think they sound pretty nice and differentiates it from the kiais before
Thanks for the mod!
http://puu.sh/3ck5P.zip
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya

Konei wrote:

[Sakuya's Normal]

  1. Too good diff
  2. 00:18:911 (2) - Whistle for the repeat? Fixed
  3. 00:23:311 (1) - Whistle the start to emphasize the Piano? Fixed
  4. 00:34:111 (2) - Whistle on the end? Fixed
  5. 00:59:617 - Add a break, the draining time is far too long to bear this. oops fixed
  6. 01:22:190 (3) - Hitnormal on the start? Feels more intensive than the rest. Fixed
  7. 02:37:917 (1) - Finish on the start? nah, it'll be ok
  8. 02:49:858 (4) - Try whistle on the start and on the repeat, gives a quite cool emphasize to the piano. Fixed
  9. 02:54:810 (2) - Whistle on the start, fits perfectly well to 02:54:517 (1) - Fixed
  10. 03:02:091 (2) - Try a whistle on the start, flows good with the strong vocal. left it for now, felt more like a crescendo and didn't wanna disturb that
  11. 03:19:276 (2) - I don't like how that shape ends, try to make it straight with the red end point. Fixed
  12. 03:54:373 (2) - Leaving the start empty doesn't feel good since the piano is playing here, try a whistle. sure
  13. 04:02:674 (4) - Try a finish on the start here, it will be consistent with 04:11:994 (2) - . If you follow this, fix it on the other KIAIs aswell. Fixed
Thank you Konei <3

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@Nyquil: can you NC 04:26:557 (3) - for me kthxshng
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~

[General]
Check the metadata from NicoNico:
SPOILER
Illustration：有坂あこ @stem04

Movie：matsuda @T_I_S_S_U_E

Encode：neko @nekoniconico


作曲：伊藤直樹
編曲：neko
歌、作詞：ナノ

You can add "Itou Naoki" and "neko" to the tags.

Again, no custom combo colour yet?

[Insane]
00:23:311 - sounds cool if add finish as whistle+finish, imo
00:29:511 (10,11) - add whistle to them and set volume to 30%. if you do so, also add finish to 00:29:711 (1) -
00:39:311 (9) - remove whistle? so that the piano can be heard clearer
00:40:831 - I think this part lack of soft whistles. here are my suggestion:
SPOILER
00:41:267 -
00:41:559 -
00:42:287 -
00:42:869 -
00:43:889 -
00:44:471 -
00:48:258 -
00:45:054 - 00:45:127 - 00:45:199 - 00:45:345 - I suggest changing these notes to normal sample. this responds well with following finishes.
01:07:481 (4,5) - continue with the spiral pattern?
SPOILER
01:24:811 - finish+clap?
01:25:102 - also add finish to raise the tension
01:43:088 - add a note?
02:00:053 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - reducing volume by 5% sounds better
02:14:689 (1) - add finish?
02:18:112 - add clap?
02:25:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - you can stack with 1
03:00:052 (6) - reduce a repeat? The jump to the next note is too far and it's easy for player to break combo here imo.
03:15:489 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same as 02:00:053 -
03:16:509 (3) - why not add a break here? it is like can't defeat airman. or you can add a spinner at 03:58:014 - , ending at 04:00:052 -

[Hard]
00:14:311 (2) - I suggest remove whistle on the start and add whistle on the end
00:49:860 (1) - drum finish instead of clap?
01:45:345 - add whistle
01:47:530 - ^
02:46:946 (1) - I somewhat recommend that you delete this note

[Normal]
01:24:811 (2,3,1) - blanket better
01:54:811 (5,6) - ^
01:55:976 (1,2) - ^
02:02:966 (1,2) - ^
03:15:489 (3,1) - ^
03:18:402 (1,2) - ^
03:48:111 - add whistle?
03:54:373 (2) - blanket better

That's all. Great mapset, good luck~
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
I once decided to map this song but I was quite lazy at that time >3<
Finally I found this map that is excellent enough for me to give up that decision
A star for you,hope you can get it ranked

btw I think tick 1 fits this song better..tick sound doesn't fit this song at all imo.
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj

Flower wrote:

[Hard]
00:14:311 (2) - I suggest remove whistle on the start and add whistle on the end the heavy piano sound is at 00:14:311
00:49:860 (1) - drum finish instead of clap? sure
01:45:345 - add whistle ok
01:47:530 - ^ yep
02:46:946 (1) - I somewhat recommend that you delete this note it feels quite comfortable to play for me, since its awkward to ignore the first beat of a new musical phrase in my perspective
Thanks for the mod~
http://puu.sh/3tJGo.zip
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nyquill
Lunarsakuya made me lose my updates >.>

soz I forgot what I changed, but there are colours now.
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
hi from my queue sorry for delay >3< !

let'su go !

Sakuya's Normal

- 00:14:911 (2) - what about this ? fit better imo
SPOILER
- 00:21:311 (2) - ^
- 00:26:911 (1) - or blanket ?
SPOILER
- 00:34:111 (2) - same as 00:14:911 (2) -
- 01:05:588 (2) - move to x:376,y:164 and then end point to x:440,y:112
- 01:27:141 (1) - try this code '-'
332,164,87141,6,0,B|348:128|348:128|372:80|424:64|476:96,2,180,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:52:481 (3,4) - fit better imo
SPOILER
- 03:07:917 (3,4) - ^
- 04:05:878 (2) - move to x:108,y:40

Jonasthanlfj's Hard

HP -1
- 00:21:911 (5) - Whistle on reverse
- 00:34:911 (4) - whistle on head
- 01:15:054 (6) - remove jump
- 02:24:811 (3) - Whstle on tail
- 03:07:188 (2) - slider'end unsnapped
- 03:42:722 (4) - nazi but red point x:192,y:92
- 04:06:751 (1,2) - use the same spacing as 04:05:878 (1,2) - ?

Insane

- 00:38:511 (6) - x:428,y:300 blanket
- 00:44:180 (5) - middle point x:372,y:152, end point x:356,y:252 to take better the curve of 00:43:889 (4) -
- 01:17:675 (7) - x:320,y:116
- 01:46:073 (2) - what about stack with 01:45:491 (1) -
- 01:52:189 (3) - stack with 01:51:316 (1) -
- 02:43:160 (2) - 1 grid down, lozenge
- 02:46:072 (6) - better in this way
SPOILER
- 03:52:043 (2) - 2 grid to the left
- 04:42:722 (2) - move to x:364,:140 to be same as 04:42:285 (1,1) -

that'all really good mapset not many things to say, star and good luck ✌('ω')✌
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya

Flower wrote:

[Normal]
01:24:811 (2,3,1) - blanket better Fixed
01:54:811 (5,6) - ^
01:55:976 (1,2) - ^
02:02:966 (1,2) - ^
03:15:489 (3,1) - ^
03:18:402 (1,2) - ^
03:48:111 - add whistle? Fixed
03:54:373 (2) - blanket better Fixed

-Umi- wrote:

Sakuya's Normal

- 00:14:911 (2) - what about this ? fit better imo i was trying to keep it simple and follow the main lyrics & the piano is kinda subtle anyway?
SPOILER
- 00:21:311 (2) - ^
- 00:26:911 (1) - or blanket ? Fixed
SPOILER
- 00:34:111 (2) - same as 00:14:911 (2) - Fixed
- 01:05:588 (2) - move to x:376,y:164 and then end point to x:440,y:112 Fixed
- 01:27:141 (1) - try this code '-' Fixed on my own
332,164,87141,6,0,B|348:128|348:128|372:80|424:64|476:96,2,180,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:52:481 (3,4) - fit better imo nice, fixed <3
SPOILER
- 03:07:917 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
- 04:05:878 (2) - move to x:108,y:40
im sry about colors omg
SPOILER
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276,40,250538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,280,262188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj

-Umi- wrote:

Jonasthanlfj's Hard

HP -1 some tell me HP+1 and now some tell be HP-1, i will discuss this with some others b4 settling on it
- 00:21:911 (5) - Whistle on reverse ok
- 00:34:911 (4) - whistle on head sure
- 01:15:054 (6) - remove jump made it same spacing as 01:13:889 (2,3)
- 02:24:811 (3) - Whstle on tail yeah
- 03:07:188 (2) - slider'end unsnapped opps there was a sv glitch here, fixed
- 03:42:722 (4) - nazi but red point x:192,y:92 did some no grid adjustments
- 04:06:751 (1,2) - use the same spacing as 04:05:878 (1,2) - ? this was using the same spacing as 04:05:004 (1,2)
Thanks for the mod~
http://puu.sh/3yX0h.zip
dkun
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
dkun
Audio bitrate is 224kb/s. Please re-encode to 192~
The tags are also inconsistent with jonathan's difficulty.

Is jonathan's diff supposed to not use custom colors?

Also, very nazi, but the kiai on jonathan's diff is off by 1ms, which is causing a AIBAT error.
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:51:316, ends on 02:14:616 compared to 02:14:617.

Let me know when you fix things~
Nyquill
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Nyquill
Ugh jonathan you fridge
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj

Nyquill wrote:

Ugh jonathan you fridge
orz atleast i got the new mp3 and such so forgive me ><
ztrot
osu! Alumni
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ztrot
was asked to verify the timing after the check looks and sounds good my play testing was a bit altered to to cold hands but my ears usually don't lie :P
dkun
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dkun
did a timing recheck with ztrot after the mp3 swap.

good to go on my end!
Breeze
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Breeze
[Sakuya's Normal]

  1. 01:32:116 - Drag break to here for a better letterbox effect?
  2. 03:31:386 - ^
[jonathanlfj's Hard]

  1. 00:57:528 - It seems you have dragged break here, which seems to be meanless, redo this break?
  2. 03:31:386 - Drag break here?
  3. 03:38:304 - The same to 00:57:528
[Insane]

  1. 00:57:674 - suspectable dragged break, suggest redo it
  2. 03:38:522 - ^
Only these nazi things
Call me back
Nyquill
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Nyquill
I'm pretty sure those breaks are auto allocated? I dragged them around a little to play with the effect anyways.

Let me know what you think.
Breeze
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Breeze
Clarifiesd break issues with mapper, it's deal
RANKED, Congratulations
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
congrats~
Umi
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Umi
yeah gratz ! :3
Nyquill
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Nyquill
Thank you 微风姐姐
Zeraph
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Zeraph
Yay \o/
Yasora
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Yasora
congrats~
Satellite
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Satellite
Congratz~!!
maaagic
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maaagic
congraz!!! :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Requesting unrank, sorry.

03:06:774 (1) - Insane difficulty, wrong SV and snapping.
Melophobia
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Melophobia

Andrea wrote:

Requesting unrank, sorry.

03:06:774 (1) - Insane difficulty, wrong SV and snapping.
Nyquill
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Nyquill
fixed
Breeze
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Breeze
I'm so sorry for missing that :(
Melophobia
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Melophobia
~
Andrea
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Andrea
Time to FC Insane again~
Mythol
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Mythol
~
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
MMMMMMMM JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Makar
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Makar
grats~
UnitedWeSin
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UnitedWeSin
Gratz :3
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
oh nice C:
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
Everything happens when I sleep ><
gratz~
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
ooh finally omg <33333

congratz on the rank ;)
Frostmourne
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I will have to play it tonight hmmmmmmmmmm
mintong89
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恭喜 :)
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