• Suggestion
• Must fix/High suggestion
[General] ✔
• Remove 4Story from tags, it's already in the source
• Add MMORPG, RPG and OST in the tags
• Add numbers in the folder to complete the skin, not all the skins have got numbers that fit with this custom hitcircle
[Hard] ✔
• I'd use OD6, this is the hardest difficulty and play it with OD5 is really easy to SS! With OD6 is still easy to SS but it will be a little bit more difficult.
• I'd use HP6 to balance the difficult
• 00:01:180 (1) - Add a whistle here and 00:01:680 (3) - here
• 00:03:180 (1) - Add a whistle here and 00:03:680 (3) - here (do the same for the next patterns until 00:20:430 (1) - here)
• 00:06:680 (3,4,5) - Flip this pattern horizontally to fix 00:07:680 (5,1) - this spacing
• 00:08:430 (1,2,3,1) - Decrease a little bit more this spacing and make it perfectly linear, it would be better to see and play:
• 00:09:430 (2,3) - For a better flow try to reverse these two beats (CTRL+G). You should obtain a pattern like this:
• 00:11:180 (2,3,4) - Make a triangle like 00:09:180 (1,2,3) - 00:13:180 (1,2,3) - these two (so increase the spacing too)
• 00:13:180 (1,2,3) - Fix this triangle a little bit
• 00:13:430 (2,3) - For a better flow reverse these two beats (CTRL+G)
• 00:15:180 (2,3,4) - As I said before, make a triangle here like 00:09:180 (1,2,3) - 00:13:180 (1,2,3) - these two and increase the spacing
• 00:15:680 (4,1) - Fix this spacing, these two elements are too close
• 00:20:680 (1) - Remove this new combo
• 00:20:680 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this curve, I'd suggest to make something like this:
• 00:21:180 (1) - Add a finish on the head, here starts the KIAI and it fits a lot
• 00:21:930 (2,3,1) - What about stack this triple on 00:22:180 (1) - 's head? I don't like so much al these triples place in the way you used
• 00:22:930 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:21:930 (2,3,1) -
• 00:24:180 (4) - Curve this slider less or make it linear
• 00:29:180 (1,1,1) - Please fix these sliders, their forms are so stranges and irregular :S I'd make all in the same way:
• 00:29:180 (1) - Add a finish here
• 00:32:180 (4) - Extend this slider 1/4, it fits better:
• 00:34:180 (3) - Move this slider at x:464 y:224 to fix 00:33:930 (2,3) - this blanket
• 00:35:180 (1) - Move this note on 00:33:180 (1) - 's head
• 00:35:180 (1,2) - Make a blanket here:
• 00:35:180 (1) - Remove this clap
• 00:35:430 (2) - Remove the clap from the head
• 00:36:430 (5) - Remove these claps too (head-tail)
• 00:37:180 (1,2,3,4) - Select this pattern, move it at x:120 y:123, select 00:37:430 (2) - this beat and move it at x:120 y:208 and then select 00:37:180 (1) - this beat and move it at x:120 y:96. You should obtain a pattern like this:
• 00:37:430 (2) - To follow the next hitsounding add a clap here and 00:38:430 (5) - here
• 00:41:680 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Fix the spacing here and try to make a perfect triangle or a curved singletap
• 00:44:430 (4,5,6) - Try to make a pattern like this:
• 00:45:930 (3,4,5,6,1) - Fix spacing and the curve a little bit
• 00:47:180 (1,2,3) - Fix this stack, it's broken
• 00:48:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't decrease the spacing here! It's unneeded! And the spacing is totally wrong
• 00:52:680 (1) - Remove this new combo
• 00:52:680 (1,2,3,4,1) - As I said for 00:20:680 (1,2,3,4) - fix this curve
• 00:53:180 (1) - Add a finish on its head
• 00:53:930 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - As I said in the first KIAI, I'd stack these triples on sliders' heads
• 00:56:180 (4) - End this slider 1/4 before and then add a note 00:56:680 (5) - here
• 00:56:930 (5,6) - Fix this blanket a little bit
• 00:59:180 (4,5,6) - This pattern doesn't flow a lot... try to reverse 01:00:180 (6) - this slider horizontally
• 01:00:180 (6,1) - Fix this spacing
• 01:01:180 (1,2,3,1) - Fix this spacing too
• 01:01:180 (1) - Add a finish here
• 01:01:930 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - As I said before I'd stack these triples
• 01:04:180 (1) - End this slider 1/4 before and then add a note 01:04:680 (2) - here
• 01:09:805 (3) - Change this slider with 01:09:180 (1) - this one flipped horizontally: actually 01:09:180 (1,2,3) - this pattern isn't symmetrical!
[Normal] ✔
• I'd use AR5 to balance the difficult (H AR7, N AR5 and E AR3)
• 00:01:180 (1) - Add a whistle on its head
• 00:03:180 (3) - Add a whistle on its head too (do the same for the next patterns until 00:20:430 (1) - here)
• 00:04:430 (4) - Make this slider linear
• 00:06:680 (1,2) - Fix this blanket a little bit
• 00:12:430 (1,2,3,1) - Change this pattern, a beginner can't read this movement (the elements are overlapped and this make it more difficult)
• 00:21:180 (1) - Add a finish on the head, here starts the KIAI and it fits a lot
• 00:21:180 (1) - Move this pattern in the center moving 00:20:430 (1,2,3) - these beats
• 00:29:180 (1) - Add a finish on the head
• 00:38:180 (2,3,4) - Change these three sliders or make perfect blankets, don't overlap them
• 00:40:180 (4,1) - Fix this blanket too or change 00:40:180 (4) - this slider's form
• 00:41:180 (1,1) - Make a blanket here
• 00:45:180 (1,2) - Fix this blanket, it's not really good
• 00:45:180 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing here, a decreased spacing isn't needed here
• 00:53:180 (5) - Add a new combo and a finish on its head, here starts the KIAI and it fits a lot
• 00:54:180 (1) - Remove this new combo
• 00:57:680 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:57:305 (5) -
• 01:01:180 (1) - Add a finish here
• 01:05:680 (2,3,4,1) - Fix these two triangles
• 01:08:180 (3,4,1) - Fix this triangle too
[Easy] ✔
• 00:01:180 (1) - Add a whistle on its head
• 00:03:180 (3) - Add a whistle on its head too (do the same for the next patterns until 00:21:180 (1) - here)
• 00:09:180 (1,2) - Fix these two sliders a little bit:
• 00:21:180 (1) - Add a finish, here starts the KIAI and it fits a lot
• 00:23:180 (4,5) - Remove this jump, this is an easy difficulty! This is a bit hard for a beginner
• 00:29:180 (1) - Add a finish here
• 00:37:180 (1) - Add a note here stacked on 00:37:680 (1) - 's head
• 00:41:180 (3,4) - Fix this blanket a little bit
• 00:46:680 (2,3,1,2,3) - There are too many beats, it could be difficult to play for a beginner. Change two beats with a slider
• 00:47:680 (1) - Remove this new combo
• 00:51:680 (1) - Remove this new combo too and add a new one 00:53:180 (2) - here where the KIAI starts. Then remove 00:54:180 (1) - this new combo
• 00:53:180 (2) - Add a finish, here starts the KIAI and it fits a lot
• 01:01:180 (1) - Add a finish here too
• 01:05:180 (1) - Remove this finish, it doesn't fit the music here... the song finishes and there is no a strong sound