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Topic Starter
Thank you ALice <3 Hehe.
Booooo are those sliders really unrankable T______T;;
I'm pretty sure it's Bucuresti ><"" And I didn't wanna use white because yellow is so close to it!
Booooo are those sliders really unrankable T______T;;
I'm pretty sure it's Bucuresti ><"" And I didn't wanna use white because yellow is so close to it!
Easy:
Pros:
-It was somewhat easy, yet mostly enjoyable.
-The length's perfect for this difficulty, also, nice song.
-Nice BG and combo colors, they work well (applies for all difficulties)
-For the most part it was the right mix of repetitive yet not overly so, which is what you want for an Easy.
Cons:
-Spacing feels cramped, but that's not too much of an issue.
-Some sliders, like 00:43:12 (1), overlap in a non-pretty way. I would watch out for sliders like that one and things like 00:44:66 (3) that curve too sharply too soon.
-1/2 repeat sliders can be hard for newbies, especially when close to other notes. Watch out for that!
-1 and a 1/2 long sliders like 00:46:01 (1) feel weird on a difficulty of mostly 1 beat sliders. However, it is not much of an issue.
-Notes 1/2 close to each other, however, like 01:16:97 (1,2) should be stacked in one way or another on Easy difficulties like this. It looks prettier and is easier.
That's all, really. Good overall.
Normal:
Pros:
-It flowed well.
-Nice hitsounds, etc.
-Pretty much most things that applied to Easy.
Cons:
-Spacing felt too cramped.
-The squiggly sliders felt weird, but it's not a real issue.
-02:23:88 (4) - I find this inappropriate for a Normal, sorry. Change please.
Hard:
Pros:
-Flowed really well, I liked it a lot!
-Basically what applies to early difficulties, nice job!
Cons:
-Spacing again felt cramp, about the only gripe I really had.
Delirious:
Pros:
-Almost everything.
Cons:
-Only con was that part with all the squiggly sliders. So confusing... but also very fun.
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Good overall. Star!
Pros:
-It was somewhat easy, yet mostly enjoyable.
-The length's perfect for this difficulty, also, nice song.
-Nice BG and combo colors, they work well (applies for all difficulties)
-For the most part it was the right mix of repetitive yet not overly so, which is what you want for an Easy.
Cons:
-Spacing feels cramped, but that's not too much of an issue.
-Some sliders, like 00:43:12 (1), overlap in a non-pretty way. I would watch out for sliders like that one and things like 00:44:66 (3) that curve too sharply too soon.
-1/2 repeat sliders can be hard for newbies, especially when close to other notes. Watch out for that!
-1 and a 1/2 long sliders like 00:46:01 (1) feel weird on a difficulty of mostly 1 beat sliders. However, it is not much of an issue.
-Notes 1/2 close to each other, however, like 01:16:97 (1,2) should be stacked in one way or another on Easy difficulties like this. It looks prettier and is easier.
That's all, really. Good overall.
Normal:
Pros:
-It flowed well.
-Nice hitsounds, etc.
-Pretty much most things that applied to Easy.
Cons:
-Spacing felt too cramped.
-The squiggly sliders felt weird, but it's not a real issue.
-02:23:88 (4) - I find this inappropriate for a Normal, sorry. Change please.
Hard:
Pros:
-Flowed really well, I liked it a lot!
-Basically what applies to early difficulties, nice job!
Cons:
-Spacing again felt cramp, about the only gripe I really had.
Delirious:
Pros:
-Almost everything.
Cons:
-Only con was that part with all the squiggly sliders. So confusing... but also very fun.
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Good overall. Star!
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I think the BPM is just 156, not 156.01. the last part felt a bit off (too fast)
[Easy]
Some parts were more [Normal] than [Easy] but overall it's a good diff ^^
Nice hitsounds.
[Normal]
nice ^^
[Hard]
00:48:32 (4,5) - I dont like how these dont have sound. It confused me a bit.
01:13:89 (1) - add 2 repeats?
01:14:66 (1,1,1) - add 1 repeat? you need to change the inherit timing section then so that only the last beat will have the normal hitsound.
01:24:66 (1) - I dont have problems with this but BATs will bash you for this.
02:49:28 (1,1,1,1) - same suggestions as earlier.
good map, relaxing to play it.
[Delirious]
02:49:27 (1) - You can't see there is this repeating slider after the stream, also follow the slider suggestions of hard here too.
It's cool.
[Easy]
Some parts were more [Normal] than [Easy] but overall it's a good diff ^^
Nice hitsounds.
[Normal]
nice ^^
[Hard]
00:48:32 (4,5) - I dont like how these dont have sound. It confused me a bit.
01:13:89 (1) - add 2 repeats?
01:14:66 (1,1,1) - add 1 repeat? you need to change the inherit timing section then so that only the last beat will have the normal hitsound.
01:24:66 (1) - I dont have problems with this but BATs will bash you for this.
02:49:28 (1,1,1,1) - same suggestions as earlier.
good map, relaxing to play it.
[Delirious]
02:49:27 (1) - You can't see there is this repeating slider after the stream, also follow the slider suggestions of hard here too.
It's cool.
Delirious
cool drunkie sliders XD... im not gonna mess with that, cuz i dont know if there´s a rule against it
Hard
fine
Normal
01:13:89 (1,1,1,1) - loved the mini jumps, but i always been told : " no jumps on normal"
Easy
maybe you should avoid 1/2 beat for easy version
Really like your maps, good work
star
cool drunkie sliders XD... im not gonna mess with that, cuz i dont know if there´s a rule against it
Hard
fine
Normal
01:13:89 (1,1,1,1) - loved the mini jumps, but i always been told : " no jumps on normal"
Easy
maybe you should avoid 1/2 beat for easy version
Really like your maps, good work
star
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[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
00:47:35 (5,6) - Spacing
[Hard]
You placed some weird sliders O_O , you should ask BATs about this.
[Delirious]
Same as Hard.
Fine
[Normal]
00:47:35 (5,6) - Spacing
[Hard]
You placed some weird sliders O_O , you should ask BATs about this.
[Delirious]
Same as Hard.
normal:
00:47:35 (5,6) - wrong spacing
hard:
01:24:66 (1) - sorry but overlapped slider like that cant be ranked,please change it
01:39:08 (2,1) - bad spacing
delicious:
00:46:39 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont put 4,5 and 8,9 at the same place
00:49:27 (1,2,3) - why you didnt use 0.8x DS here? @_@
00:52:35 (1,2) - ^
00:55:43 (1,2) - ^
01:06:77 (7,8) - spacing
01:10:81 (1,2,3) - same as above,I dont get why you map it like this
01:21:77 (3,4,5) - these 2.0x sliders are too sudden,change them or add an SB warning
01:24:66 (1) - sorry,unrankable :<
01:27:93 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - personally I dont like that jump,it's tooooooo large
01:34:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make it cleaner
02:30:81 (1,2,3) - same as above
02:43:50 (2,3) - spacing
sorry for my nazi,this is a good map,but you need to fix those unrankable sliders
star
00:47:35 (5,6) - wrong spacing
hard:
01:24:66 (1) - sorry but overlapped slider like that cant be ranked,please change it
01:39:08 (2,1) - bad spacing
delicious:
00:46:39 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont put 4,5 and 8,9 at the same place
00:49:27 (1,2,3) - why you didnt use 0.8x DS here? @_@
00:52:35 (1,2) - ^
00:55:43 (1,2) - ^
01:06:77 (7,8) - spacing
01:10:81 (1,2,3) - same as above,I dont get why you map it like this
01:21:77 (3,4,5) - these 2.0x sliders are too sudden,change them or add an SB warning
01:24:66 (1) - sorry,unrankable :<
01:27:93 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - personally I dont like that jump,it's tooooooo large
01:34:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make it cleaner
02:30:81 (1,2,3) - same as above
02:43:50 (2,3) - spacing
sorry for my nazi,this is a good map,but you need to fix those unrankable sliders
star
//Overall//
- Could you light a little bit the second color? When the hits are on the top of the dark area of the BG, I makes me see nothing X__X (since I'm color-blind .__.) So just... light a little bit?
- 01:30:430(2) - Why this note is not distance snaped o.O Please, fix that.
- 01:38:122(3) - New Combo should be here, I think. Not on the previous note.
- 00:26:204(3) - using a extra loop here (you are using 2 loops here instead of one) may be a little confusing, since you only use one loop on the similar sliders on the rest of the song. Please, take off this loop or make on every part like this one on the music (< that would be hard o.O)
- 00:48:125(6) - too close with the (5), distance it a little bit.
- 01:20:623(2) - no clap hit sound here.
- 02:27:734(1,2) - this two slider ending on the same place may be confusing =/ Please, change the (1)
- 02:46:579(2) - bye bye hidden gameplay?
- 00:38:511(6) - New Combo
- 00:51:202(5) - please, turn it to left or to the right. How this is running so fast, is not possible to see when this slider is going to end so pleople may think that when the slider ends, is the time to hit the other one (00:52:260)
- 01:21:777(1,2,3,4) - I don't like the pisition of these sliders. Could you make something more... artistic? XD
- 02:49:271(1,1,1,1) - Love this A__A Something wrong here? No, I just love it XD
- Nothing here ^^
Ps.: Love those "look's like normal but it's not" sliders
Topic Starter
updated <3 thanks a bunch!
waah ,_, i wanna keep the sliders. T__T
waah ,_, i wanna keep the sliders. T__T
star~
<3
Topic Starter
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Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
- Cut the mp3 please.
BPM: 156,01
Offset: 56 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Easy]
01:29:028 (1) - A note after the spinner is too hard for an easy map.
[Hard]
00:36:097 (3) - New combo.
00:37:016 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:051 (6) - New combo.
01:13:094 (1) - Invisible slider.
01:21:077 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive change of spacing.
01:22:093 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:39:008 (2,1) - Spacing.
02:26:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:49:027 (1) - Same like 01:13:094.
[Lunatic]
00:52:035 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:21:077 (3,4,5,6) - You need a BPM 2x storyboard warning.
01:24:066 (1) - Unrankable slider.
01:25:023 (2) - ^
01:29:027 (1) - ^
01:30:081 (7) - ^
01:32:093 (2) - ^
01:40:081 (7) - SB Warning here too.
01:58:050 (8) - New combo.
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
- Cut the mp3 please.
BPM: 156,01
Offset: 56 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Easy]
01:29:028 (1) - A note after the spinner is too hard for an easy map.
[Hard]
00:36:097 (3) - New combo.
00:37:016 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:051 (6) - New combo.
01:13:094 (1) - Invisible slider.
01:21:077 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive change of spacing.
01:22:093 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:39:008 (2,1) - Spacing.
02:26:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:49:027 (1) - Same like 01:13:094.
[Lunatic]
00:52:035 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:21:077 (3,4,5,6) - You need a BPM 2x storyboard warning.
01:24:066 (1) - Unrankable slider.
01:25:023 (2) - ^
01:29:027 (1) - ^
01:30:081 (7) - ^
01:32:093 (2) - ^
01:40:081 (7) - SB Warning here too.
01:58:050 (8) - New combo.
Easy
Nothing
Hard
01:36:097 (1) - i don't like this spinner e_e
Lunatic
Awesome
Star[ite] for you :3
Nothing
Hard
01:36:097 (1) - i don't like this spinner e_e
Lunatic
Awesome
Star[ite] for you :3
Black approach circles are difficult to see 
~Easy~ <<< more like Normal - -"
Fine
~Hard~
00:48:032 (4,5) - don't mute them, at least set volume 20 or 30
~Lunatic~
Crazy, but fine.
+Star
~Easy~ <<< more like Normal - -"
Fine
~Hard~
00:48:032 (4,5) - don't mute them, at least set volume 20 or 30
~Lunatic~
Crazy, but fine.
+Star
☆ﾉﾉ～
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I think the hitsounds are kinda loud... well, just the normal hitsound used as a custom soft
Normal-
It's fine
Hard-Could you please increase overall diff by one? The notes come too slow for this fast paced map
Aside from that, the map's fine, ignoring the nazi list I can make
Lunatic-
01:21:078 (3,4,5) - too sudden of a speed change
01:40:081 (7) - ^
02:40:081 (3) - hardly saw this, maybe new combo to make this more visible (or new combo the 2), but I honestly think this is too quick to appear, and unrankable imo
Nazi-
Normal-
It's fine
Hard-Could you please increase overall diff by one? The notes come too slow for this fast paced map
Aside from that, the map's fine, ignoring the nazi list I can make
Lunatic-
01:21:078 (3,4,5) - too sudden of a speed change
01:40:081 (7) - ^
02:40:081 (3) - hardly saw this, maybe new combo to make this more visible (or new combo the 2), but I honestly think this is too quick to appear, and unrankable imo
Nazi-
SPOILER
Since so many people already looked and you didn't change those self overlapping sliders, I don't need to ask you to change them, do I?00:41:078 (1) - new combo (change in spacing/pace)
01:28:051 (4,6) - left a tick (mirror other side)
01:34:085 (5) - left a tick, to equally space 5,6,7
01:40:033 (4) - awkwardly centered, doesn't really matter
02:15:004 (7,1) - switch new combo with 7 instead
02:17:035 (13) - new combo?
02:18:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this look nicer? (2- up two ticks/3 - up a tick, right a tick/4-left a tick, up a tick)
I would have more new combo complaints, but they're technically fine
01:28:051 (4,6) - left a tick (mirror other side)
01:34:085 (5) - left a tick, to equally space 5,6,7
01:40:033 (4) - awkwardly centered, doesn't really matter
02:15:004 (7,1) - switch new combo with 7 instead
02:17:035 (13) - new combo?
02:18:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this look nicer? (2- up two ticks/3 - up a tick, right a tick/4-left a tick, up a tick)
I would have more new combo complaints, but they're technically fine
Awesome song. Im not usually keen on Silver forest but this tune is class
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
Timing looks good
[NORMAL]
no problems
[HARD]
01:21:078 (1,2,3) - Remove these jumps? They feel off to me. but its probably just my opinion
[INSANE]
01:21:078 (3) - Add a warning for the speedup here?
01:40:081 (7) - ^
Nice map. Pretty fun too, even though that stream at 02:23:070 made me go :<
star'd
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
Timing looks good
[NORMAL]
no problems
[HARD]
01:21:078 (1,2,3) - Remove these jumps? They feel off to me. but its probably just my opinion
[INSANE]
01:21:078 (3) - Add a warning for the speedup here?
01:40:081 (7) - ^
Nice map. Pretty fun too, even though that stream at 02:23:070 made me go :<
star'd
nice map
star
star
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Topic Starter
Updated!!! I finally changed the sliders ;_____;
Fabulous~!
[Normal]
Fine~
[Hard]
00:48:42(5)-Start here 00:48:51?
00:54:48(6,7,8)-Move 1 lv.3 grid left?
00:57:36(5)-Move 1 lv.3 grid right?
00:59:28(2,3)-Spacing?
01:00:05(3,4,5,6,7)-^
01:03:37(2,3,4,5,6)-^
02:01:01(4,5)-^
02:01:78(6,7)-^
02:09:09(10,11)-^
02:17:74(11)-Move 1 lv.3 grid down?
02:18:70(2,3)-Spacing?
02:29:28(5,6)-^
[Insane]
01:14:01-Ilove this part~
01:34:10(1,3,7)-Move 1 lv.3 grid right?
Star~
[Normal]
Fine~
[Hard]
00:48:42(5)-Start here 00:48:51?
00:54:48(6,7,8)-Move 1 lv.3 grid left?
00:57:36(5)-Move 1 lv.3 grid right?
00:59:28(2,3)-Spacing?
01:00:05(3,4,5,6,7)-^
01:03:37(2,3,4,5,6)-^
02:01:01(4,5)-^
02:01:78(6,7)-^
02:09:09(10,11)-^
02:17:74(11)-Move 1 lv.3 grid down?
02:18:70(2,3)-Spacing?
02:29:28(5,6)-^
[Insane]
01:14:01-Ilove this part~
01:34:10(1,3,7)-Move 1 lv.3 grid right?
Star~
nice song, i like the streams in lunatic.
i did not mod normal and hard btw, they seemed fine.
But here are a few things that bothered me in the Lunatic diff. your combo color sometimes breaks off the rythm. there were some kind of unrankable stuff aswell
put +5 to the offset (all diffs)
[Lunatic]
00:33:091 (9) - new combo starts here | 00:34:068 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:068 (6) - new combo here
01:26:021 (9) - new combo here
01:30:083 (7) - new combo here
01:34:088 (5) - Move this note 2 grids left to make it symmetric
02:09:029 (13) - new combo starts here | 02:09:068 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:083 (11) - new combo starts here | 02:11:060 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:037 (8) - new combo starts here | 02:12:056 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cluster fuck, please remove i doubt this is rankable
02:17:075 (8,9,10) - don't do this. bad jump pattern, swap places between 9 and 10
not a fan of those fast weird sliders, it's almost as if you got bored and just put down whatever :\
other then that really fun ^^
star
i did not mod normal and hard btw, they seemed fine.
But here are a few things that bothered me in the Lunatic diff. your combo color sometimes breaks off the rythm. there were some kind of unrankable stuff aswell
put +5 to the offset (all diffs)
[Lunatic]
00:33:091 (9) - new combo starts here | 00:34:068 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:068 (6) - new combo here
01:26:021 (9) - new combo here
01:30:083 (7) - new combo here
01:34:088 (5) - Move this note 2 grids left to make it symmetric
02:09:029 (13) - new combo starts here | 02:09:068 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:083 (11) - new combo starts here | 02:11:060 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:037 (8) - new combo starts here | 02:12:056 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cluster fuck, please remove i doubt this is rankable
02:17:075 (8,9,10) - don't do this. bad jump pattern, swap places between 9 and 10
not a fan of those fast weird sliders, it's almost as if you got bored and just put down whatever :\
other then that really fun ^^
star
Topic Starter
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wooow
Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3 I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
[Normal]
HP Drain Rate, Circle Size and Overall Difficulty are too low! Increase them.
Afterall i don't see any problemi ^^
[Hard]
Circle Size are too large! Make them more tiny.
Seems fine ^^
[Lunatic]
02:23:142 (1,2,3) Spacing is wrong, Insane or not. Recheck.
And that's all for your map! Good job! <3 I hope you will search me again for other mods x3 Starred
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3 I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
[Normal]
HP Drain Rate, Circle Size and Overall Difficulty are too low! Increase them.
Afterall i don't see any problemi ^^
[Hard]
Circle Size are too large! Make them more tiny.
Seems fine ^^
[Lunatic]
02:23:142 (1,2,3) Spacing is wrong, Insane or not. Recheck.
And that's all for your map! Good job! <3 I hope you will search me again for other mods x3 Starred
Some sliders must be fixed. Especially 01:40:083 (7) in the in the Lunatic diff.
Other else, fine. And anyway, this song is really nice but will nicer with vocal IMO.
EDIT: Increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty two or three ticks in the Normal diff. You MUST do it.
Other else, fine. And anyway, this song is really nice but will nicer with vocal IMO.
EDIT: Increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty two or three ticks in the Normal diff. You MUST do it.