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Toshihiko Horiyama - Kyouya Garyuu ~LOVE LOVE GUILTY

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Irreversible
take a confetti star x) <3~
Topic Starter
Kei
omg ty. here, take an alt+3 heart: ♥
LunarSakuya
General
- For the source, I think you should use the English title (Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney) instead. And then move the japanese title to tags. idk it's not like those eroges, etc. that haven't been released under an english license...and maybe for search convenience since that might be a more well-known title?

- Try offset 646 (-6) Something definitely felt fishy towards the end, like the last note of Normal (which probably isn't snapped?) But yeah, I'd confirm offset with someone. Just felt a little late for some reason =v=

Easy
00:02:857 (3) - NC, differentiates it from the opening stanza
01:02:416 (5) - NC, like 00:48:299 (1) -

Normal
00:27:122 (1,2) - i think you can use the y-axis for symmetry :P
00:35:946 (5) - NC, to indicate the uh "weirdness" xD
00:46:093 (3,4,5) - hm I suggest follow the main melody here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824105 like other notes in the kiai time and for some variety ofc~
01:12:536 (5) - Unsnapped
01:27:095 (1) - Unsnapped

Hard
00:08:593 (3,4,5) - any reason for this spacing? Maybe stack (3) on (4) to create some difficulty and jump
00:43:004 (1) - Unsnapped green line on this note
00:48:960 (4,5) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824134 (feel free to ignore note placement) fits better with the melody imo
01:14:080 (4) - Unsnapped
01:24:227 (2) - Unsnapped (the unsnapped things are according to aibat but didn't show up in aimod lol oh well just resnap in case)

Very clean <3
just a timing check and maybe 1 or 2 mods and it should be good to go :D
Topic Starter
Kei

LunarSakuya wrote:

General
- For the source, I think you should use the English title (Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney) instead. And then move the japanese title to tags. idk it's not like those eroges, etc. that haven't been released under an english license...and maybe for search convenience since that might be a more well-known title? ok ok

- Try offset 646 (-6) Something definitely felt fishy towards the end, like the last note of Normal (which probably isn't snapped?) But yeah, I'd confirm offset with someone. Just felt a little late for some reason =v= o.o -6 is too much imo. i asked mancuso about it and we agreed that hte offset/bpm is fine as it is o_o some notes are unsnapped because i had previously a bpm with comma. i changed it to 136,00. thats why some notes got unsnapped :< edit: we decreased it by -2

Easy
00:02:857 (3) - NC, differentiates it from the opening stanza hmm fine!
01:02:416 (5) - NC, like 00:48:299 (1) - done

Normal
00:27:122 (1,2) - i think you can use the y-axis for symmetry :P thats what i did ;o; well fixed a bit the pattern.
00:35:946 (5) - NC, to indicate the uh "weirdness" xD ;__; a single nc for a slider? that doesn't look neat ;_;
00:46:093 (3,4,5) - hm I suggest follow the main melody here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824105 like other notes in the kiai time and for some variety ofc~ umm it sounds good and i was going to change it but thinking about it, i'll better keep my current 1/1 pattern :< i dont want to add a single 1/4 slider at this part. it may result confusing and kinda inconsistent with the rest of the map (even if it gives some variety :P) this is just my opinion though. o:
01:12:536 (5) - Unsnapped fixed both
01:27:095 (1) - Unsnapped

Hard
00:08:593 (3,4,5) - any reason for this spacing? Maybe stack (3) on (4) to create some difficulty and jump fine
00:43:004 (1) - Unsnapped green line on this note ugh unsnaped green lines dont affect gameplay thats why i didnt snap them but ok!
00:48:960 (4,5) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824134 (feel free to ignore note placement) fits better with the melody imo theres not too m uch difference betwee n the current way and yours ;A; also your way destroys one of the few jumpy patterns i made for this diff, so i'll stick with the current. i hope thats ok :<
01:14:080 (4) - Unsnapped fixd both
01:24:227 (2) - Unsnapped (the unsnapped things are according to aibat but didn't show up in aimod lol oh well just resnap in case)

Very clean <3
just a timing check and maybe 1 or 2 mods and it should be good to go :D thanks a lot for checking the map lunar! :D
mancuso_JM_
IRC Mod!
15:08 mancusojuanmattos: en Easy
15:08 mancusojuanmattos: 00:21:826 (2) - No me gusta como suena este slider al final, el ritmo no es igual a los demas
15:09 mancusojuanmattos: te sugiero terminar este slider 1/2 antes
15:09 Kei: :o hmm pero
15:09 Kei: y el espacio entre 00:21:826 (2,3) - ?
15:10 Kei: le agrego repeat al slider
15:10 Kei: 00:21:826 (2) -
15:10 mancusojuanmattos: emm.. no se, si queres agregale el Repeat a (2)
15:10 mancusojuanmattos: y si no queres no lo hagas
15:10 mancusojuanmattos: pero que termine ese slider sobre el tick blanco no tiene sentido
15:11 Kei: listo :o le puse repeat y una nota en el otro tick blanco
15:12 mancusojuanmattos: bien entonces :)
15:12 Kei: supongo que es lo mismo
15:12 Kei: 00:50:061 (2) -
15:12 Kei: o no
15:13 mancusojuanmattos: en ese lugar exactamente no
15:13 mancusojuanmattos: 01:04:179 (2) - ahi si
15:15 mancusojuanmattos: 00:40:355 (x) - Agregaria una nota con clap :P
15:16 Kei: listo, arregle todo xD
15:16 Kei: 01:22:708 - nota ahi tambien no?
15:16 mancusojuanmattos: sep
15:17 mancusojuanmattos: 00:43:002 (1) - El sliderslide suena feo con normal sampleset, por que no usas Soft sampleset?
15:18 mancusojuanmattos: si queres podes usar Normal sampleset en los slider ticks
15:18 Kei: fue sin querer
15:18 Kei: :p
15:18 mancusojuanmattos: lol
15:18 Kei: es solo para ese slider no?
15:19 Kei: o todo el kiai
15:19 mancusojuanmattos: solo ese slider
15:19 mancusojuanmattos: y este 01:25:355 (1) - obviamente
15:20 mancusojuanmattos: avisame cuando estes
15:21 Kei: ya termine
15:21 Kei: :3
15:22 mancusojuanmattos: 00:46:973 (3) - Whistle al final? se siente vacio sin este
15:22 Kei: mm cierto, lo puse
15:26 mancusojuanmattos: creo que nada mas en la Easy
15:28 mancusojuanmattos: ahh.. espera
15:28 mancusojuanmattos: deberias agregar un spinner en algun lado
15:28 mancusojuanmattos: para variar el score
15:28 Kei: aaah todo el mundo me dice lo mismo
15:28 Kei: ok me rindo
15:29 Kei: donde?
15:29 Kei: en el comienzo?
15:29 mancusojuanmattos: al final? en lugar de 01:25:355 (1,2) (?
15:30 mancusojuanmattos: hmm.. no se
15:30 Kei: mm si
15:30 Kei: al final queda mejor
15:30 Kei: en el comienzo me dijeron todos
15:30 Kei: y queda re mal ignorar
15:30 Kei: 00:02:855 (1) - el tick ese
15:30 Kei: porque si pongo spinner deberia dejar un espacio entre las notas
15:31 mancusojuanmattos: si, por eso
15:33 mancusojuanmattos: 00:24:473 (3) - Whistle al final?
15:34 Kei: sip :
15:34 Kei: :P
15:34 mancusojuanmattos: en Normal btw xD
15:34 Kei: ah
15:34 Kei: dasadasdas
15:34 Kei: dasdasdasd
15:34 Kei: xD
15:34 mancusojuanmattos: en easy ya ahi
15:34 Kei: igual lo agregue
15:35 mancusojuanmattos: 00:37:929 (1) - Esta nota se siente rara, no sigue bien la musica. Yo la eliminaria
15:36 Kei: hm si, suena media de sobra
15:36 mancusojuanmattos: ademas fijate en 01:20:282
15:36 mancusojuanmattos: 01:20:282 -
15:37 mancusojuanmattos: no hay nada
15:37 Kei: tambien xD
15:38 mancusojuanmattos: 00:44:767 (1,2) - Viendo la cantidad de 1/2 sin apilar que tenes, este 1/1 stacked se siente algo raro y me parece que le jugaria una mala pasada a los jugadores 'promedio'
15:38 mancusojuanmattos: que te parece desapilar estas notas?
15:39 Kei: tenes razon
15:39 Kei: no se porque las stackee
15:44 mancusojuanmattos: 01:00:649 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Este ritmo no me gusto en general, principal las notas sobre los ticks rojos (4,7)
15:44 mancusojuanmattos: te sugiero algo mas o menos asi
15:44 mancusojuanmattos: http://up.ppy.sh/files/sch.jpg
15:44 Kei: a ver
15:47 Kei: listo
15:48 mancusojuanmattos: 01:12:341 (4) - Esta nota esta al pedo xD. Fuera de joda, no sigue nada concreto en la musica. Deberias eliminarla
15:50 Kei: sigue la bateria de fondo
15:50 Kei: que hace
15:50 Kei: tututu
15:50 Kei: en realidad sigue hasta en 01:12:782 - pero no puse nota ahi porque sria mucho
15:50 mancusojuanmattos: oh.. ohh.. lo senti
15:50 mancusojuanmattos: sorry :P
15:51 Kei: :p
15:51 mancusojuanmattos: 01:26:238 (2,1) - Arregla el spacing :P
15:54 mancusojuanmattos: cri cri
15:56 Kei: estaba comiendo xD
15:56 mancusojuanmattos: lol
15:56 Kei: o.o
15:56 Kei: por que esta mal?
15:56 Kei: ah
15:56 Kei: LOL
15:56 Kei: nada
15:57 Kei: ahi lo arregle
15:58 mancusojuanmattos: oh.. deberias agregarle +1 al OD, para mejor spread
15:59 Kei: :O
15:59 Kei: creo que alguien me habia mencionado algo
15:59 Kei: y lo habia bajado
15:59 Kei: pero ahi lo subi
15:59 Kei: xD
15:59 mancusojuanmattos: xD
15:59 mancusojuanmattos: en Hard:
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: antes que nada arregla el patron en 01:25:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: Sabes a lo que me refiero
16:01 Kei: o.o
16:01 Kei: no xD
16:01 Kei: poner las
16:01 Kei: 01:26:789 (6,1) - en el medio?
16:01 mancusojuanmattos: no, ritmicamente
16:01 Kei: ah
16:02 mancusojuanmattos: hay muchas notas en los ticks azules, que deberian estar sobre ticks en 1/3
16:02 Kei: lol resnap
16:03 Kei: ahi las arregle
16:04 mancusojuanmattos: repetiste mucho los patrones en esta dificultad :/
16:04 mancusojuanmattos: 00:02:855 (1,2,3,4) - por ejemplo aparece muchas veces :/
16:05 Kei: :c lo hice por gusto porque la cancion se repetia
16:05 Kei: pero no hice copypaste
16:06 mancusojuanmattos: igual, pero bueno
16:06 mancusojuanmattos: no tiene nada de malo
16:06 mancusojuanmattos: 00:43:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Las notas que estan sobre los ticks azules, deben estar sobre ticks violetas en 1/3
16:08 Kei: lo arregle cuando dijiste lo de 01:25:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - :P
16:09 mancusojuanmattos: bien
16:09 mancusojuanmattos: 00:16:091 (2,3,4) - Yo incrementaria un poco mas el spacing entre estos objetos
16:10 mancusojuanmattos: por consistencia con 00:08:591 (3,4,5,6) -
16:10 Kei: tenes razon
16:10 Kei: lol cuantas cosas pudo haberme dicho lunarsakuya y no lo hace
16:11 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:11 Kei: al menos me moddeo enseguida cuando le pedi, pero igual
16:12 mancusojuanmattos: 00:22:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ahi deberias intentar un incremento de spacing tambien
16:12 mancusojuanmattos: al menos entre (4,5,6,7)
16:12 Kei: sep
16:12 Kei: xD
16:12 mancusojuanmattos: como dijiste antes, la cancion es repetitiva, por eso la consistencia es importante tambien :P
16:13 Kei: cierto :3 no me di cuenta de esos jumps xD
16:14 mancusojuanmattos: usa algo asi de 1,5x entre las notas
16:15 Kei: use algo asi
16:15 Kei: un poquiito mas
16:15 mancusojuanmattos: ahi va
16:15 mancusojuanmattos: acordate de hacerlo en el kiai tambien
16:15 mancusojuanmattos: 00:57:782 (6,7,8) - por ejemplo
16:16 Kei: asdasd 00:58:444 (7) - se me va fuera del grid
16:16 mancusojuanmattos: movelo un cachito a la izquierda=
16:16 mancusojuanmattos: ?*
16:16 mancusojuanmattos: igual fuera de grid no es algo no rankeable xD
16:17 Kei: es qe directametne esta en el limite xD
16:17 Kei: que tal si la pongo asi?
16:17 mancusojuanmattos: ...
16:18 Kei: o
16:18 Kei: espera xD
16:18 Kei: ahi pude
16:18 mancusojuanmattos: bien :3
16:19 Kei: termine todo eso
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: 00:22:047 (1) - Whistle?
16:19 Kei: omg siempre ese whistle me olvido
16:19 Kei: y en la easy lo puse xD
16:20 mancusojuanmattos: lol
16:23 mancusojuanmattos: Insane:
16:23 mancusojuanmattos: oh.. wait xD
16:23 mancusojuanmattos: no tengo mas nada que decir :P

Changes:
  1. Fixed the offset (used -2 from current)
  2. Some rhythmical patterns (in Easy and Normal)
  3. Some whistles added (in all difficulties)
  4. Increased some spacing between Notes (in Hard)
  5. Re-snapped some notes in 1/4 ticks, that must be over 1/3 (in Hard)
  6. And some other little changes
In general it is a good mapset, but let's wait for Sakuya's decision.
Good Luck, Kei :)
Topic Starter
Kei
Thank you very much mancu :D it was very helpful :3
DarkDunskin
Wowoowowowowowow!
I wanna map some Taiko's for this so badly.
Would you let me? Pretty Please? :<

EDIT: Aw that Map reminds me I always wanted to map Guitars Serenade when I started here.
Snepif
surprise~ luv u
Topic Starter
Kei
<3

DarkDunskin o3o sorry but i would like to keep the mapset as it is. I'm planning to map more Ace Attorney stuff so if I submit any other AA song I'll let you know so you can map Taiko difficulties if you like and want. :3

Also sorry for my late reply
LunarSakuya
ahue
Topic Starter
Kei
thank you once again ;___;
Konei
Yeessshh
Irreversible
I think soem confetti is needed to celebrate your bubble

now gogo for rank :3 :DD
dkun
Very nice map!

I have two things to note, though.

Shouldn't the title be "Kyouya Garyuu ~LOVE LOVE GUILTY", as listed here and here?

In Easy:
00:59:326 (1) - This slider literally hits the border of the playwindow. It's technically rankable, but could you please move it up by changing the slider, or re-arrange the combo so it's placed a few grid spaces higher? image for reference.

Please let me know what you decide~ Going to pop this for the sake of the title for now, though.
Konei
go go Kei and change the title huehue
Topic Starter
Kei
Oh, that's Klavier's japanese name, and this is his theme after all so I changed it. I also fixed that spacing. I hope it's fine now! :)

@Irrev: oh youuuuuuuu~
Gero
Go Kei! o3o/
Snepif
go my love~
dkun
I'M NOT GUILTY, I PROMISE
Konei
Gratz!!~
Snepif
~ i hope this doesn't bother you o3o i am happy that you get your stuff ranked! im happy to see you happy~

congratulations my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i love you!
Andrea
Grats Kei <3
Dark_Ai

Snepif wrote:

~ i hope this doesn't bother you o3o i am happy that you get your stuff ranked! im happy to see you happy~

congratulations my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i love you!
baaaah cute *w*

well congratz on ranked :D
Sieg
\w/
Cloudchaser
Felicidades Kei :3
Loooctav
KeiPro<3
Topic Starter
Kei
Thanks dkun, everyone and also my Inti<3, I appreciate it~
mancuso_JM_
Gratz my little friend :)
[Yue]
Gratz pan o3o
Gero
Congrats! Kei-Chan <3! Nice Map
LunarSakuya
Congrats <3
Sry about the title blip lol
Topic Starter
Kei
Thanks again! and, it's okay Lunar, I overlooked it in the first place lol
Lustrick
gratz! nice map and awesome song ty ty :D
Flask

dkun wrote:

I'M NOT GUILTY
BADKUN
rezoons
Yay! More PW maps. Congrats ^^
machomuu
Another Ace Attorney map :O

I think this is the second one in the span of a month, and I really hope to see more. The game has a lot of good tracks, it deserves to be mapped more.
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