gideon5504 wrote:

Easy:
~00:09:227 (3) - Move it above to align with the other circles.
~Too many notes coming in from the 1/2 beat.Try to use less for Easy.

Normal:
~01:23:534 (1) - NC.Combo is over 8.
~Nothing more.

Hard:
~It's too hard for hard players.
~Too many triplets and streams.
~Jumps are too far for hard players.
~Try to keep streams in odd number for smoother game play.(But I think hard only has reverse sliders to replace streams.)
~I dun think 1/4 doubles are for hard diff?
~Maybe you could make this insane and make another hard? OR you could remake this diff for hard players. <--RECOMMENDED

Insane:
~00:56:073 (3) - Put this slightly down & closer to the head of slider.
~01:33:688 - Add spinner for end and make the volume soft.
~Loved ur insane!

That's all from me^^ Good luck!

1. 把Short Ver弄走? 原因這個 : http://puu.sh/3qi4c.png
2. BG的尺寸必須為1024*768或者1366*768, 請換掉

1. AR-1 & OD -1?
2. Easy這裡有幾個不跟distance snap : http://puu.sh/3qibM.jpg
3. 00:35:535 (2,3) - easy來說不能出現stack的情況
4. 00:37:843 (5) - NC, easy的最大的combo數為6
5. 00:41:073 (2,3) - 同樣的stack問題
6. 00:42:920 (5,6) - ^
7. 00:45:458 (3) - NC?
8. 00:56:765 (3,4) - stack問題
9. 00:57:457 (5) - NC?
10. 01:04:150 (2,3) - stack
11. 01:05:996 (5,6) - ^
12. 01:11:996 (3) - NC
13. 01:26:304 (2) - remove whistle?

1. Normal來說還是跟ds比較好 http://puu.sh/3qiuq.jpg
2. 00:13:843 (4) - NC?
3. 01:00:919 (4) - ^
4. 01:23:073 (6) - NC, normal的最大combo數為8

1. 感覺這個Hard有點難ww" 盡量把連打換成reverse slider可能較好
2. 00:42:920 (1) - remove NC?
3. 00:55:381 (2) - 這裡NC怎樣
4. 00:59:881 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不用stream比較好

1. 00:27:458 (3,4,5) - 換成這樣? http://puu.sh/3qiPU.jpg
2. 00:35:420 (6,7) - 這樣如何 http://puu.sh/3qiRQ.jpg
3. 01:08:996 (4) - NC
4. 01:12:919 (3) - Ctrl + G?, 採納的話01:13:381 (4) 也要Ctrl G, 像這樣 http://puu.sh/3qiXm.jpg

happy623 wrote:

request from PM

[General]

1. 把Short Ver弄走? 原因這個 : http://puu.sh/3qi4c.png fixed
2. BG的尺寸必須為1024*768或者1366*768, 請換掉
   必須為最大1024*768或者1366*768才對喔0.0

[Easy]

1. AR-1 & OD -1?
2. Easy這裡有幾個不跟distance snap : http://puu.sh/3qibM.jpg
   沒有硬性規定一定要跟DS，有理由的微調間距是可行的喔~
3. 00:35:535 (2,3) - easy來說不能出現stack的情況
   沒聽說過...
4. 00:37:843 (5) - NC, easy的最大的combo數為6 同上，下面幾個NC建議感覺很怪orz，有什麼可以給予參考的理由嗎?
5. 00:41:073 (2,3) - 同樣的stack問題
6. 00:42:920 (5,6) - ^
7. 00:45:458 (3) - NC?
8. 00:56:765 (3,4) - stack問題
9. 00:57:457 (5) - NC?
10. 01:04:150 (2,3) - stack
11. 01:05:996 (5,6) - ^
12. 01:11:996 (3) - NC
13. 01:26:304 (2) - remove whistle?

[Normal]

1. Normal來說還是跟ds比較好 http://puu.sh/3qiuq.jpg
   同Easy
2. 00:13:843 (4) - NC?
3. 01:00:919 (4) - ^
4. 01:23:073 (6) - NC, normal的最大combo數為8 數字太大的確不好看所以改了下，不過我真心沒看過最大combo數的規定，哪裡都找不到-.-

[Hard]

1. 感覺這個Hard有點難ww" 盡量把連打換成reverse slider可能較好
2. 00:42:920 (1) - remove NC?
3. 00:55:381 (2) - 這裡NC怎樣
4. 00:59:881 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不用stream比較好

[Insane]

1. 00:27:458 (3,4,5) - 換成這樣? http://puu.sh/3qiPU.jpg
2. 00:35:420 (6,7) - 這樣如何 http://puu.sh/3qiRQ.jpg
3. 01:08:996 (4) - NC
4. 01:12:919 (3) - Ctrl + G?, 採納的話01:13:381 (4) 也要Ctrl G, 像這樣 http://puu.sh/3qiXm.jpg 非常...不順手orz

加油w
有什麼不懂可以in-game問我~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Some suggestions:

Easy mode:
The slider at 00:31:843 is in tonight..but somehow it doesn't sound right with the music.
Try switching it with the hit circle at 00:31:381, so it'll look like this:
Now it sounds better!
I can't do this,it would be too hard for an Easy diff.

Also, try moving the slider at 00:25:150 back, to 00:24:920 instead. I find it rather annoying how it doesn't come at the same time as the guitar insrument. I need to follow vocals here.

Normal mode:
Optional* You could also add in an extra hit circle at 01:29:304 and 01:30:227, that way it'll get rid of those awkward gaps.

sorry I wanna keep this rhythm ;w;

Hard mode:
Add an extra hit circle at 00:41:535. to follow the vocal, I can't do this.
If you wanna be sneaky, you could remove that circle at 00:59:996, since the vocal's voice isn't heard in this place ;D Same goes at 01:07:381 too.

00:59:996 is for the voice, I feel ok for it. fixed this one.

So sorry I can't do insane, I'm afriad I don't have enoguh experience to do it yet

But, hopefully this mod helps~!

Death Rock wrote:

thank you for mod ~ ^^

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, From my queue ~

[General]
- Your background is unrankable, the size should be 1024x768 or 800x600. if you want a widescreen Background, size would be 1366x768.

[Hard]
00:43:150 (2,1) - Ctrl+G?
00:44:189 (4) - Remove note, didn't hear anything in this rhythm.
00:59:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What kind of rhythm is this??
01:06:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:10:034 (4) - Same as i mentioned on 00:44:189 (4) -

--------------------
Nice map anyways
Good Luck ~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Death Rock wrote:

thank you for mod ~ ^^

Your welcome!

...please don't kudos if you don't find my modding helpful though

Joon wrote:

hi

Hit sound modding


[Easy]
00:32:535 (1) - start notes add whistle [suggestion]
00:33:458 (2) - 2st notes add clap


[Normal]
00:32:535 (1) - 1st notes add whistle [suggestion]
00:33:458 (2) - 2st notes add clap

[Hard]
00:11:420 (7) - start notes remove whistle
00:18:804 (7) - ^
00:32:535 (1) - start notes add whistle [suggestion]
00:33:112 (3) - start notes add whistle
00:33:689 (4) - start notes add clap

[Insane]
00:07:843 (5) - start notes add finish
00:32:535 (1) - add whistle [suggestion]
00:33:112 (4) - add whistle
00:33:689 (6) - start notes add clap
01:09:573 (9,10) - change clap

good luck

1. 00:35:535 (2,3) - For Easy-diff, it is better to avoid this stack
2. 00:38:766 (7) - end at 00:39:227

1. 00:15:689 (1,5) - I like the following layout
   　●00:15:689 (1) - x:183 y:184
   　●00:18:227 (5) - x:436 y:248
2. 00:22:843 (5) - delete
3. 00:32:535 (1,2) -it is better not to change Slider-Velocity because slider length is too short

1. 00:59:996 (4) - delete

1. 00:28:150 (9) - avoiding overlap is better, I think
2. 01:20:650- add note

RandomEffect wrote:

Hello~
From my queue!

[Easy]

1. 00:35:535 (2,3) - For Easy-diff, it is better to avoid this stack
2. 00:38:766 (7) - end at 00:39:227

[Normal]

1. 00:15:689 (1,5) - I like the following layout
   　●00:15:689 (1) - x:183 y:184
   　●00:18:227 (5) - x:436 y:248
2. 00:22:843 (5) - delete
3. 00:32:535 (1,2) -it is better not to change Slider-Velocity because slider length is too short

[Hard]

1. 00:59:996 (4) - delete

[Insane]

1. 00:28:150 (9) - avoiding overlap is better, I think
2. 01:20:650- add note

enjoyable map owing to various beat patterns and various slider-shapes
star (^^)ノ☆
~Good Luck~

Shinchaechae wrote:

Normal:
Waah, couldn't find any mistakes ;___;
01:13:381 (6) - Stack at the end maybe?

Hard:
01:02:304 (4) - Many of the sliders are too repetitive. Try making this an arc?

01:09:227 (2) - Arc
I really enjoyed playing this map :3

Hard:
00:34:150 (1) - Rotate by 4, maybe?

01:11:534 (4) - ^

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Very nice mapping >.o /
Resize the backgrounds to 1024x768
I love Yousei Teikoku <3

[Easy]
Nicely mapped >.o)b

[Normal]
00:25:150 (1) - DS
01:18:457 - Add circle
01:20:304 - ^

[Hard]
Perfect! (for me)
01:07:496 (4) - move this cicle a little up around X:236 Y:212

[Insane]
>.o)b

Shot 1 Kudosu Star

Hope it can be ranked! It's nice

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[Easy]
00:19:843 - maybe try using slidertick hitsound here?
00:21:689 - same as 00:19:843 -
00:36:689 (4) - add NC? cause this combo is longer than the others
00:50:766 (1) - I hear a cymbal in the background, add finish on start?
00:50:766 (1) - missing clap on end
01:10:150 (1) - add whistle on start?
01:15:688 (1) - add NC for background vocal?
01:28:611 (1) - add whistle on end
01:30:457 (2) - add whistle on end

[Normal]
00:50:766 (3) - add finish? same idea as easy
00:59:304 (1) - add whistle on start here?
01:10:150 (1) - add whistle on start?
01:21:227 (1) - add whistle to keep the hitsounds pattern?

[Hard]
00:50:766 (1) - add finish? same idea as easy
01:09:227 (2) - not sure I understand the whistles here..IMO put whistle on start and remove from the end?'

[Insane]
AR +1? even if it's 130 BPM, it's an intense and fast-pased song so it might fit better
00:23:535 (3,5) - imo add whistle sounds good~
01:10:150 (1) - add whistle on start?

that's it, hope it's helpful o.o
star ~ nice map and good luck

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

General

1. i'm not sure 1280x720 bg size is allowed to rank beatmap

Easy

01:17:073 - not used green line

Normal

01:29:534 (2) - delete whistle on slider body

Hard

00:23:996 (5) - NC
00:47:073 (1) - isn't this better? http://puu.sh/3uPWm.jpg

Insane

00:15:227 (7) - reduce 2 repeat like 01:24:457 (7) - here? fits well
00:27:458 (3) - clap
00:58:034 (3) - try whistle on slider body, feels nice
01:07:727 (7,8) - i don't recommend this partern :< that stack plays not good imo

good luck~

MMzz wrote:

I can't find anything wrong with the diffs, they are very nice. The hard is little too hard though, but I will let it slide because this is your first map and it is technically not unrankable to not have a Hard difficulty. Next time, just make your hard a little easier! Use less jumps and less 1/4 patterns.

Bubbled!
Good luck!

happy623 wrote:

gogogo

Oyatsu wrote:

let call MMzz bubbled again. You uploaded and bubble pop. Hope you are more careful in next time. Good luck!

21:50 spboxer3: 00:26:996 (4) - Normal
21:50 spboxer3: 加上NC?
21:50 spboxer3: 00:30:458 (5) - ^
21:51 spboxer3: 00:36:227 (2) - 
21:51 spboxer3: 更正是00:37:843 (5) - 才對
21:51 spboxer3: 00:57:457 (5) - 
21:51 Death Rock: 那個  我NC都是跟人聲大段大段變的><  所以.;w;
21:51 spboxer3: 太長了點
21:52 spboxer3: 畢竟Normal而已 NC是可以加HP的
21:52 spboxer3: 如果有甚麼看法可以跟我說~ 例如有特別的理由o.o
21:52 spboxer3: 我不會強迫改的
21:54 Death Rock: 恩..  只是覺得HP已經是4了   test感覺也不會扣很多;w;
21:54 spboxer3: 那也可只要你感覺OK
21:54 Death Rock: 謝謝><
21:55 spboxer3: 01:32:304 - 這地方用50%就夠了
21:56 Death Rock: 好  我每個難度都改
21:58 spboxer3: 01:04:034 (7) - Hard 這個確定要用slider?
21:59 spboxer3: 注意一下這個打擊位置是在1/4上 這會造成手感上的問題
21:59 Death Rock:  恩恩  因為我喜歡01:03:457 (4,7)形狀
21:59 spboxer3: 如果換成先slider+2note呢?
22:00 spboxer3: 最主要還有個理由
22:00 Death Rock: slider在前note在後 ?
22:00 spboxer3: 01:04:150 - 與01:04:034 - 相比 01:04:150 - 應該要有打擊點的 可是你的擺法剛好相反
22:01 spboxer3: 01:04:034 (7) - 移到01:03:804 - 
22:01 spboxer3: 我指的是節奏部分
22:01 spboxer3: 排法當然要相反
22:02 Death Rock: 抱歉我不太懂   我認為這裡節奏部份跟著人聲是沒問題的
22:03 spboxer3: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/848035
22:03 spboxer3: 主要是對音樂的感覺
22:03 spboxer3: 從01:04:150 - 與01:04:034 - 感覺一夏
22:03 spboxer3: *下
22:04 spboxer3: 01:04:150 - 很明顯的比01:04:034 - 更適合擺上click
22:04 spboxer3: 意思是打擊點
22:04 spboxer3: 所以你擺上slider手感與音感方面會有問題
22:05 Death Rock: 那個  斗膽說一句   那種擺法(節奏)不好玩...  而且我也找不到對應01:03:457 (4)的排法了 
22:05 spboxer3: 目前為止能聽得懂我的意思嗎
22:06 spboxer3: 沒關係 你認為OK就這樣吧
22:06 Death Rock: 真的很抱歉因為我滿喜歡這個排列的..
22:06 spboxer3: 別在意
22:09 spboxer3: 00:59:996 (5) - Insane
22:09 spboxer3: 這顆感覺是多餘的 在鼓點/人聲上都是
22:09 spboxer3: 這個輔助音沒能帶給圖更好的感覺
22:09 spboxer3: 給人純粹是打過而已
22:10 spboxer3: 的感覺...
22:10 Death Rock:  欸?  可是我都用25%仔細聽過了
22:10 spboxer3: 再仔細聽一下xD
22:10 Death Rock: 人聲在那裡... ;w;
22:11 spboxer3: 那人聲的感覺只是轉音而已 若是這樣我會推薦用slider
22:12 Death Rock: 可是不是有很清楚的"咪"再那裡嗎;w;
22:12 spboxer3: 01:07:611 (6,7,8) - 這種打法少用 連打在同一個點上說實話不是很好
22:12 Death Rock: 啊  抱歉我看錯了  
22:12 spboxer3: 咪是在00:59:881 (4) - 喔~
22:12 Death Rock: 我看成4
22:12 spboxer3: 恩恩
22:13 Death Rock: 我改一下5
22:14 spboxer3: 好了跟我說
22:14 Death Rock: 恩
22:16 spboxer3: 上傳了?
22:17 Death Rock: 剛剛改好
22:17 Death Rock: 可以傳了?
22:17 spboxer3: 上傳跟我說
22:17 spboxer3: 可以 
22:17 Death Rock: 恩恩

spboxer3 wrote:

Oyatsu wrote:

let call MMzz bubbled again. You uploaded and bubble pop. Hope you are more careful in next time. Good luck!

nope, because I'm coming

IRC check log

21:50 spboxer3: 00:26:996 (4) - Normal
21:50 spboxer3: 加上NC?
21:50 spboxer3: 00:30:458 (5) - ^
21:51 spboxer3: 00:36:227 (2) - 
21:51 spboxer3: 更正是00:37:843 (5) - 才對
21:51 spboxer3: 00:57:457 (5) - 
21:51 Death Rock: 那個  我NC都是跟人聲大段大段變的><  所以.;w;
21:51 spboxer3: 太長了點
21:52 spboxer3: 畢竟Normal而已 NC是可以加HP的
21:52 spboxer3: 如果有甚麼看法可以跟我說~ 例如有特別的理由o.o
21:52 spboxer3: 我不會強迫改的
21:54 Death Rock: 恩..  只是覺得HP已經是4了   test感覺也不會扣很多;w;
21:54 spboxer3: 那也可只要你感覺OK
21:54 Death Rock: 謝謝><
21:55 spboxer3: 01:32:304 - 這地方用50%就夠了
21:56 Death Rock: 好  我每個難度都改
21:58 spboxer3: 01:04:034 (7) - Hard 這個確定要用slider?
21:59 spboxer3: 注意一下這個打擊位置是在1/4上 這會造成手感上的問題
21:59 Death Rock:  恩恩  因為我喜歡01:03:457 (4,7)形狀
21:59 spboxer3: 如果換成先slider+2note呢?
22:00 spboxer3: 最主要還有個理由
22:00 Death Rock: slider在前note在後 ?
22:00 spboxer3: 01:04:150 - 與01:04:034 - 相比 01:04:150 - 應該要有打擊點的 可是你的擺法剛好相反
22:01 spboxer3: 01:04:034 (7) - 移到01:03:804 - 
22:01 spboxer3: 我指的是節奏部分
22:01 spboxer3: 排法當然要相反
22:02 Death Rock: 抱歉我不太懂   我認為這裡節奏部份跟著人聲是沒問題的
22:03 spboxer3: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/848035
22:03 spboxer3: 主要是對音樂的感覺
22:03 spboxer3: 從01:04:150 - 與01:04:034 - 感覺一夏
22:03 spboxer3: *下
22:04 spboxer3: 01:04:150 - 很明顯的比01:04:034 - 更適合擺上click
22:04 spboxer3: 意思是打擊點
22:04 spboxer3: 所以你擺上slider手感與音感方面會有問題
22:05 Death Rock: 那個  斗膽說一句   那種擺法(節奏)不好玩...  而且我也找不到對應01:03:457 (4)的排法了 
22:05 spboxer3: 目前為止能聽得懂我的意思嗎
22:06 spboxer3: 沒關係 你認為OK就這樣吧
22:06 Death Rock: 真的很抱歉因為我滿喜歡這個排列的..
22:06 spboxer3: 別在意
22:09 spboxer3: 00:59:996 (5) - Insane
22:09 spboxer3: 這顆感覺是多餘的 在鼓點/人聲上都是
22:09 spboxer3: 這個輔助音沒能帶給圖更好的感覺
22:09 spboxer3: 給人純粹是打過而已
22:10 spboxer3: 的感覺...
22:10 Death Rock:  欸?  可是我都用25%仔細聽過了
22:10 spboxer3: 再仔細聽一下xD
22:10 Death Rock: 人聲在那裡... ;w;
22:11 spboxer3: 那人聲的感覺只是轉音而已 若是這樣我會推薦用slider
22:12 Death Rock: 可是不是有很清楚的"咪"再那裡嗎;w;
22:12 spboxer3: 01:07:611 (6,7,8) - 這種打法少用 連打在同一個點上說實話不是很好
22:12 Death Rock: 啊  抱歉我看錯了  
22:12 spboxer3: 咪是在00:59:881 (4) - 喔~
22:12 Death Rock: 我看成4
22:12 spboxer3: 恩恩
22:13 Death Rock: 我改一下5
22:14 spboxer3: 好了跟我說
22:14 Death Rock: 恩
22:16 spboxer3: 上傳了?
22:17 Death Rock: 剛剛改好
22:17 Death Rock: 可以傳了?
22:17 spboxer3: 上傳跟我說
22:17 spboxer3: 可以 
22:17 Death Rock: 恩恩

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