Haya wrote:

[General]
No Hitsounds?

CDFA wrote:

Haya wrote:

[General]
No Hitsounds?

Wat

1. The bitrate of your mp3 is 256 kb/s, which is unrankable! Your mp3 must not be lower then 128kbps or higher than 192 bkps.
2. You have an unused file in your map (fanmade_rarity_1.png)! If you are not planning on using this file, please remove it.
3. You have an unsnapped inherited (green) sections at 00:24:303. Try resnapping it to 00:24:406!
4. The BPM changes at the last part could be a lot better. It a bit off sync with he music.

1. You have a few unsnapped slider ends at 01:30:347 (1), 01:34:244 (1), and 01:37:050 (2).

1. Reduce the Overall Difficulty a bit. An Overall Difficulty of 6 is to high for a Normal difficulty. I recommend OD4 or OD5.
2. 01:17:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be nicer:
   
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   124,40,77656,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   72,88,77906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   48,152,78156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   72,216,78406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   124,260,78656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   212,152,79156,1,4,0:0:0:0:

1. I think you should increase the drain rate to 6, so it's not the same as your Normal difficulty.
2. 00:17:906 (4) - Try replacing this soft-finish with a soft-whistle on the head of this slider.
3. 00:26:156 (3) - I can hear a soft crash in the BGM. i think adding a soft-finish at the head of this slider will help emphasize that sound.

1. Good enough!

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  - 00:32:156 (4) - I'd make this slider a little more like this (http://puu.sh/2aPwr) it looks better imo
  - 01:37:050 (2) - ^ (http://puu.sh/2aPyE)
  
  This was more like suggestions, can't find anything bad here, pretty good easy diff :3

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  - I'd make the OD of this 4 or 5, 6 is too much
  - 01:08:156 (3,4,5) - I don't like this very much, I would make it something like: http://puu.sh/2aPFk
  - 01:13:156 (5) - Make this slider "look" a little bit more down (http://puu.sh/2aPGX)

• 
  - HP Drain same as Normal?
  - 00:09:156 (3) - I'd make this slider a little more like this (http://puu.sh/2aPKG) It plays better IMO.
  - 00:21:656 (5) - ^ (http://puu.sh/2aPMq) and then make the (5) a blanket for 00:22:656 (6) - (you can see in the previous picture)
  - 01:02:656 (4) - Ctrl+G
  - 01:32:334 (5) - Ctrl+G feels better to me since all sliders are pointing to the right
  
  Fun DT diff :3c

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  - 00:14:656 (6) - Ctrl+G
  - 00:40:156 (6) - ^
  - 00:40:656 (7) - ^
  - 01:16:656 (5) - ^
  - 01:17:156 (6) - ^
  - 01:17:656 (7) - ^
  
  Very nice map, the ctrl+g are just suggestons that I feel it plays better :3c

• General

1. The mp3 you used isn't an appropiated one. You need to convert it to 192 or 128kbps.
   
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2. The sliderslide sounds too noisy o.o consider adding a normal-sliderslide sound to make it silent. If you're interested, here's the file: http://puu.sh/34SQd
3. Changing the mp3 may give you a headache for your red timelines. At least it would be a good opportunity for a second check of the timing. Sounds a bit strange at the end of the song, or it is just me.. :<

• [Easy]
  
  *There are some unsnapped sliders: 01:30:347 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:34:244 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:37:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

1. 00:36:156 (3) - Place this slider where 00:33:656 (1) was at?
2. 01:19:406 (1) - This spinner starts too early for an easy diff imo. I highly suggest you to remove 01:19:156 (4), and move the spinner there instead. This would be easier to read for beginners :3 so they can recognize that a spinner will start.
3. 01:30:347 (1) - This shape looks ugly tbh. You can try something more smoother, without that sharpy edge to fit more with the calm and melodic vocals. How about something like this shape :3?
   
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4. 01:37:050 (2) - To make the slider shape fit with the music, try to move the red point to x336 y72 approximately. When the vocals start the sliderball goes down. It makes sense imo.
   
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5. 01:40:713 (1) - Decrease the volume for the end of this spinner, sounds very very loud compared to the music itself. ;-; this applies to your other difficulties as well.

• [Normal]

1. 00:41:156 (5) - The clap at the repeat of this slider isn't following anything, the sound you're following with claps it's not heard here, but at 00:41:656. :3
2. 01:27:718 (1) - To follow more the piano perhaps remove whistle at the repeat and then add whistle at the end?

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:531 (7) - This slider sounds bad because it's placed at a blue tick. This is not necessary, you can follow the music in a more flowy way. A note and a 1/2 slider sounds much better than that 1/4 slider imo. ;_;
2. 00:25:656 (2,3) - Two things :3, 1) 00:25:656 (2) isn't correctly spaced, fix it. 2) After you fix that please consider moving 00:26:156 (3) where you placed 00:25:406 (1), and flip the slider horizontally. I'm reffering to this :3 it's for a better flow:
   
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3. 01:09:906 (6) - How about replacing this slider with a copy of 01:08:656 (5)? Like this. It doesn't affect gameplay too much but it looks clean o3o
   
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4. 01:16:656 (4) - Perhaps add a NC here to make the combo of (10) shorter, and to follow the vocals?
5. 00:17:531 (3) - Similar case as the one about a slider at blue tick. This note if you listen carefully, isn't following the music. The vocal is at 00:17:656, not here. Here the singer is starting to sing again but the vocal is at the next white tick so move this note there.
6. 01:27:718 (2) - To follow the piano here how about adding whistle at the end of this slider~?
7. 01:30:347 (4) - ^ At the start of this one. Also at the end, but to avoid making the slider sound too redundant with whistles consider removing the whistle at the repeat.
8. 01:33:826 (1) - Why is this note here? Move it to 01:33:992 to follow correctly the voice.
9. 01:37:050 (4) - To change a bit the patterns you used on the difficulty I suggest you to change the curve of this slider like this, for better flow with 01:36:288 (3) too.
   
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• [Insane]

1. 00:09:156 (5) - This pattern would flow better if you flip this slider horizontally like this. The curve in this way feels more natural to play when having to click 00:10:156 (1), and before, at 00:08:906 (4) :3 /bad at explaining flow. Also this slider has a whistle on its body, remove it if you can, because it sounds really loud and out of place. ;_; ...
   
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2. 00:32:156 (5,6) - Hmmm this overlap looks messy :< You can try something better imo. 00:32:906 (6)'s end gets covered up by 00:32:156 (5) a bit and that's not cute. Move 00:32:906 (6)'s to x76 y276 approximately for a better overlap.
   
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3. 00:36:656 - How about adding a note here to vary the rhythm here? Also to follow that important beat of the music. If you do this I also suggest you to add a note at 00:37:156. Sounds muuuch more accordingly to the music than before imo. :3
4. 00:42:906 (3) - It looks a bit messy how this note is here where the previous stream was. Not noticeable that much during gameplay but you can improve it by simply adjusting spacing a little bit. Also this diamond pattern doesn't look completely as a diamond :p you can improve this too. Something like this can work o3o
   
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5. 01:03:156 (1) - Perhaps make a blanket with this slider curve and 01:04:156 (2)? Yes I like to do nazi modding I think it benefits the map in a good way.
   
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6. 01:05:906 (7) - ^ More nazi ;A; Improve this curve? It doesn't look properly curved. Old sliders ;_;
7. 01:07:156 (1) - The Newcombos are kinda changed here o3o I think that a nc here isn't necessary. This is part of the same verse as 01:06:656 (1,2,3) so better remove this combo, and then add NC to 01:07:906 (6)?
8. 01:13:656 - Add a note here to keep following the clap sound like you did at 01:09:906 (2,3) for example? The empty space between 01:13:281 (2,4) is kinda big and feels awkward when playing. ;_;
9. 01:14:406 (5) - This spacing can be confusing. Players may think this is 1/1 instead of 1/2. Use the same spacing you used for 1/2 notes, like at 01:10:406 (3).
10. 01:29:071 (5) - To follow the piano melody add a whistle here o3o?
11. 01:30:347 (1) - A hitfinish here sounds too loud, you didn't use this in your hard diff iirc. Replacing it with a whistle sounds much better for this calm part.
12. 01:32:334 (6) - This whistle at the slider body sounds really noisy and unfitting so better remove it imo.
13. 01:36:637 (9,10,11) - Why is the spacing of these notes different as of 01:34:581 (3,4,5,6,7,8) etc o.o?
    01:38:764 (1) - Again, a hitfinish soudns too loud ;_; consider replacing it with a whistle like you did with your other diffs.
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Byakugan249 wrote:

[General]
consider adding "MLP" in the tags since it's an acronym for My Little Pony. Will do. I use MLP to search for MLP songs all the time, idunno why I didn't do it earlier

[Easy]
00:18:156 (4) - for this one, i think you can do Ctrl+H to make the transition and flow more easier and straightforward during gameplay IMO. Taken
00:20:656 (1) - i can see this spinner being replaced for notes to follow the vocals, so try a 2/1 slider, a circle and a 1/1 repeat with a small break to represent the vocals at the 1/2 tick. i think doing that would be more fun and more exciting for beginners to follow IMO. something like this should be acceptable. Made changes
00:31:656 (3,4) - consider re-adjusting these notes so that it'd look something like this. that way it'll be a lot easier to follow for beginners during gameplay IMO. Changed.
01:11:656 (2) - why don't you move this a bit to the left so that it'd give off that smooth feeling to the diff during gameplay?changed.

[Normal]
00:11:156 (2,1) - i think you can do a minor adjustment here by aligning the beginning of (2) to the end of (1), for a smoother transition during gameplay, as well as (1) if you can. fix'd
01:19:406 (1) - the spinner should end at 01:21:906 to follow the hold in the vocals during gameplay. Sounds awkward in a musical phrase standpoint.

[Hard]
00:10:156 (4) - if you can make this slider look like (3), then the transition would feel a lot smoother and more fun during gameplay. changed
00:31:406 - how about a circle here to follow the vocals? the vocals keep going here, so i figured that the flow would be steady during gameplay. changed, and got rid of an NC

[Insane]
No problems here.

and that's it. whenever you're ready, catch me in-game for a re-check, but please reply to every suggestion. it'd be nice to hear what you applied and what you didn't apply with reasoning.

• [Easy]

1. 00:44:156 - Snap the break here? :p nazi hueee
2. 00:11:156 (4) - This slider is too short. Better finish it at 00:12:156 since this point is a much more important beat than 00:11:906.
3. 01:29:709 (2) - I suggest removing this note. The guitar sounds earlier than where this note is, that's why it sounds off. Better remove it imo.
4. 01:31:680 (2) - This repeat sounds awful o.o please consider making this slider shorter, end at 01:33:005 and repeat at 01:32:342. :3 it doesnt follow completely the vocal but it sounds more accurate than your current way. btw if you do this remember to add whistle at the repeat of this slider (i recommend adding only at the repeat :3).

• [Normal]

1. 00:34:156 (2,3,4)- Inconsistent spacing. Fix this with DS~
2. 00:41:156 (5) - How about adding a soft whistle at the repeat like you did with your Easy difficulty?
3. 00:44:156 - Snap the break here? nazi again hueee
4. 01:11:156 (2) - You can use this curve to blanket 01:10:656 (1). Then, you can try moving 01:12:656 (3) to 01:10:656 (1)'s place, for a more clean pattern imo. Just a suggestion though.
   
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5. 01:19:156 (6) - Nazi again :p place this note at the center of this curved pattern (x204 y164 if possible)
6. 01:30:347 (4) - The end of this slider sounds too early. It's not snapped to the red line at 01:31:672. You can try removing a repeat of 01:30:347 (4) and then adding a note at 01:31:305 and then moving 01:32:334 (5) to 01:31:672.
7. 01:32:342 (4) - The whistle at the end sounds too redundant. I suggest you to remove it!
8. 01:34:259 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing again (by a grid or less only ><)

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:531 (8) - The whistle here sounds awful and out of place. You should remove it.
2. 00:15:531 (8) - I think i pointed out this already in my previous mod. This slider sounds ughhg it follows the vocals but it breaks the flow. How about adding a note 00:15:406 and a 1/2 slider at 00:15:656 - ? Sounds better with the vocals.
3. 00:20:156 - How about adding a note here? that's an important beat with that piano sound. Feels awkward ignored like this ;_;
4. 00:44:156 - Snap correctly? huee
5. 01:32:342 (7) - This whistle at the end sounds bad. Better add the whistle at the start of the slider and remove the one at the end. :3
6. 01:40:262 (1) - Is this nc really necessary? She says Should know, it's part of the same verse so you may want to make them part of the same combo. :p

• [Insane]

1. 00:09:156 (5) - The whistle in this slider sounds too noisy and awful, please remove it. ;_;
2. 00:10:656 (3,4) - To improve the hitsounding a bit, consider adding whistle at the end of 00:10:656 (3) and remove whistle of 00:11:531 (4).
3. 00:18:656 (2,3,4) - Same here! ^
4. 00:44:156 - SNAAP BREAK >:l
5. 01:13:656 - This sounds odd. Try adding a note here with clap and remove the clap of 01:13:281 (2). Sounds better and adds more flow to this rhythm.
6. 01:18:281 - How about adding a note here to keep following the stream??
7. 01:32:342 (6) - Again, how about adding whistle at the start of this slider and removing the one at the end of it?
8. 01:31:680 (5,6) - Instead of making a ugly pattern (imo thats ugly ;_; how the end gets covered by that note) you can try a better rhythm. Replace 01:31:680 (5) with a slider that ends at 01:32:342, then add to it a repeat. Sounds much better imo. I highly suggest you this. ;_;
   
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9. 01:36:334 (7,8) - Is this inconsistent spacing intentional? If so, why? It doesnt make sense imo.

• Easy

1. 01:34:259 (1) - Can you move this slider slightly up, just a little bit. So it doesnt look like this. Yes I'm very nazi orz
   
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• Normal

1. 00:32:156 (4) - This slider doesn't make too much sense ending at that red tick. It sounds more according to the vocals if you extend it to 00:33:156. As always, just a suggestion.
2. 00:41:156 (5) - You didn't replace the clap with a softwhistle like in your other diffs?
3. 00:44:156 - You didn't snap this hue~

• Hard

1. 00:15:406 (8,9) - I like the pattern you used but it's the only pattern you made like this in the whole difficulty. It makes it senseless. Why not going for a 1/2 pattern like the rest used in this difficulty? The one I suggested you works pretty good: note at 00:15:406 and a 1/2 slider that starts at 00:15:656 and ends at 00:15:906.
2. 00:41:156 (4) - Again about whistle at the repeat. It's not only about consistency, but making it sound better.

• Insane

1. 01:18:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this stream look more neat? sorry for being annoying, it's just a polishment. :3
   
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2. 01:31:680 (5) - Whistle at the repeat, not at the end! you forgot to change it ;_;