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Serj Tankian - Lie Lie Lie

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Sieg
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Sieg
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 9 июля 2013 г. at 7:56:39

Artist: Serj Tankian
Title: Lie Lie Lie
Tags: elect the dead system of a down soad -bakari- stefan
BPM: 120
Filesize: 7267kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Normal (2,34 stars, 165 notes)
  2. Hard (4,46 stars, 320 notes)
  3. Insane (4,99 stars, 497 notes)
  4. Stefan's Easy (1,69 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Serj Tankian - Lie Lie Lie
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"At first I was skeptical because you have to adopt different roles simultaneously. You have to learn to self-edit and fortunately I was able to be very critical. An example would be a song called ‘Lie Lie Lie’, which is a funny a song but I had some very serious lyrics to it. Man, I went in there five fucking times trying to make that song great, but it just wasn’t working. Then I realized the lyrics were way too serious for such a silly song. So I ripped them up, threw them on the floor and went in and did it all on the fly, just having fun and creating it all again from scratch. In the end the song became this really crazy, humorous drama. And you have to do that. You have to be critical and keep changing things until it sounds right." — S.T.
Last edited by Sieg , edited 20 times in total.
Stefan
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Stefan
And now here we go again! <3
Chris Fox_old
1 post
Joined June 2013
Chris Fox_old
Very nicely done! :3
Sieg
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Sieg
thanks :3
riffy
osu! Alumni
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riffy
I'm watching you and I do want to mod it when it's done <3
Sieg
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Sieg
<3
Snaggletooth
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Snaggletooth
Modding this soon~
Stefan
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Stefan
Wohooo I am done. JUST SAYING, I'VE COPIED UR HITSOUNDS BCUZ #YOLOLAZYDERPBADHITSOUNDER
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Tags:elect the dead system of a down soad
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Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
sweet :3
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

Hit Sound modding


[Stefan's Easy]
00:38:968 (1) - add finish
00:48:718 (3) - end notes add finish

[Bakari's Normal]
fin.

[Hard]
fin.

[Insane]
fin.

amuse Hit Sound!
very nice..

good lcuk
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks Joon :3
chaee
chaee
Nnh, honestly can't find anything wrong with this map ;___;
Can't wait to see this ranked!
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
eh.... thanks Shinchaechae :3
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu
hi~ from my queue

[Stefan's Easy]
delete unused green timing
00:20:718 (1) - 1 grid down (current spacing 1,07x)
01:24:718 (1) - 1 grid up, same reason as above

overall fine

[Bakari's Normal]
delete unused green timing
00:26:718 (3) - make this slider same as 00:25:718 (2) ? and current spacing is 0,98x , make it closer
00:50:218 (4) - too far spacing (1,16x), fix this
00:59:718 (2) - almost touch progress bar, move it lower
01:14:218 (5) - move it lower, flow better with next slider http://puu.sh/3rM4z.jpg
01:24:218 (3) - stacked with slider (1), make something like this? http://puu.sh/3rM7j.jpg
02:50:718 (1) - move to x:300 y:276 to make better triangle pattern with 02:48:718 (3,4)

[Hard]
actually I prefer smaller CS, it prevent from overlap with score/ hp bar and not really crowded
00:28:718 (1,2,3) - make this blanket slider 00:27:218 (2) ? something like this http://puu.sh/3rMlB.jpg
01:11:968 (3,4,5,1) - encircle them better, maybe like this? http://puu.sh/3rMub.jpg
01:14:968 (2) - move this lower so it doesn't look too linear

[Insane]
01:08:718 (6) - NC here?
/me pass this after some retry D: (ignore), I think this pretty good

that's all, good mapset and skin~
good luck, and i throw something here
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
everything was pretty nazi, but applied everything
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:Lie Lie Lie
Artist:Serj Tankian
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Tags:elect the dead system of a down soad -bakari- stefan
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Sieg
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Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks shikyu :3
applied everything
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron
Hi, From my queue ~

General:-
- Breaktime should be consistent.(GDs can ignore this)

[Stefan's Easy]
Nice diff ~ but remove the unused inherited points.

[Baka's Normal]
Nice diff too, but this 01:46:718 - Inherited point in breaktime?? remove it.

[Hard]
01:22:718 (6) - Add NC

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Sorry if my mod is short. Have a Star ~ :D
Perfect map! Good Luck ~
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
+nc on hard
Thanks GrayKaiser82 :3
riffy
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Joined December 2010
riffy
Cake is a lie

[General]
  1. Genres that shoul be mentioned in tags: Experimental rock, art rock, alternative metal. And here's tag-list
    Experimental art alternative metal
[Stefan's Easy]
  1. I lol'd at velocity here. Both Velocity and DS are bigger than on my [Normal]. Maybe we should do something about it. Personally, I think that you can reduce space between your motes. Reducing SV is also a good idea here, I guess.
  2. Reduce OD and HP by one tick to keep diff spread balanced. It also makes diff more playable, this is [Easy] diff, remember!
  3. 00:14:717 (3,1) - nazi time - overlap here looks a little bit ugly. That'd be great if you'll try to avoid it somehow. It is visible even during testplay.
  4. 00:42:218 - unused green lines should be removed. They confuse mapper and modders :<
    Note: 00:56:218 - guess what? \:D/
  5. 00:51:718 (2) - both music and vocals kinda end at 00:52:218 - so this slider sounds strange here. Consider replacing it with something like 1/1 slider and circle. example (4 and 5 could be replaced with slider, too)
    Note: same goes at 01:09:718 (5) - 01:29:718 (4) - :< Sounds similar ,but suggestion is the same.
  6. 00:56:718 (1) - first of all, you can remove (2) and add repeat to this slider. Then, put a circle to 00:58:718 - so, we will follow vocals much closer,it sounds awesome here. example Same thing goes to, 01:24:718 (1,2) - so you should apply or ignore both of these suggestions to keep consistency.
    Oh, and DO NOT CHANGE DIRECTION OF THIS SLIDER SO SUDDENLY. MAke sure that it is visible and make curve smoother. Beginners should be able to read how this slider goes from beginning and 'till the end. example
  7. 01:12:718 (2,4) - nazi - sliders should be more readable for beginners. What's more second slider sholdn't be curved this way because it follows nothing. Can't you find another way? At least make shape of these sliders more readable.
  8. 02:02:718 (1) - it's nazi time <3 - slider overlaps itself, so it may confuse beginners. Consider curving it like this, instead.
    Note: don't copy my ugly slider, it's just an example, y'know.
  9. 02:18:718 (1,1) - please, make sure that these stacks are playable for beginners. THis song has low BPM, so it should be relazing for beginners. Don't stress them with hard-to-read patterns.
[Bakari's Normal]
  1. It's even slower than Stefan's Easy. Please wait for Stefan's response and poke me. We'll see what to do <3
[Hard]
  1. Almost 3 minutes with no breaks? Consider adding some!
  2. All diff settings +1. (Circles should be smaller, too!) It's [Hard] diff, so it should be hard. What's more 1/2 beats look really strange with low AR. :<
  3. 00:09:218 (2,2) same for all these 3/4s ;_; - as for these sliders, they would work with Tick Rate 2, but without it - it seems strange. So map all these 1/4s or try another way to map it, it sounds strange when you map this beaat randomly.
  4. 00:13:218 (2,3) - nazi - it's nazi time~ go fix your blankets <3 Anyway, we both know that you ca improve them a lot, so go ahead and do it!
  5. 00:54:468 (4,1) - nazi - looks like you've failed to make a blanket here, lol. Anyway, we both know that you can make this pattern looks prettier by making something like this
  6. 00:54:718 (1) - even if you don't follow vocals, at least listen to them. Vocals appearing in th e middle of this slider sound at least STRANGE. They may confuse players and ruin all the fun :<
  7. 01:23:968 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - it's hard, so non-stop drumming may make players tired. It's kinda out of your regular pattern, y'know. Consider adding more sliders!
  8. 01:48:718 (1) - We both know why these sliders aren't a good idea and I already told you million times that they ruin consistent flow and appear kinda strange. Are you SURE that you want to keep it? ;_;
    Note: 01:56:718 (1) - ;_;
[Insane]
  1. 01:52:718 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - spacing shouuld be consistent. It's just the same word again and again. Keep spacing similar, too!

    Nothing else. Awesome one <3
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Insane is really impressive. Good luck!
Sieg
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Topic Starter
Sieg
my 2c about your and stefans diff, I think current one state is really really good and doesn't need any cs sv ds or settings changes, mostly because of rhythms used
riffy
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riffy
Well, it's a bit messed up. But yeah, that's fine. I'm just saying because it is here, but what done is done, anyway.
Sieg
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Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg

-Bakari- wrote:

[Hard]
  1. Almost 3 minutes with no breaks? Consider adding some!
    это же хард
  2. All diff settings +1. (Circles should be smaller, too!) It's [Hard] diff, so it should be hard. What's more 1/2 beats look really strange with low AR. :<
    +1 всему, цс оставил как есть
  3. 00:09:218 (2,2) same for all these 3/4s ;_; - as for these sliders, they would work with Tick Rate 2, but without it - it seems strange. So map all these 1/4s or try another way to map it, it sounds strange when you map this beaat randomly.
    нууу не рандомно, там барабан как раз на синем, а не на белом, звучат то они как раз нормально.
  4. 00:13:218 (2,3) - nazi - it's nazi time~ go fix your blankets <3 Anyway, we both know that you ca improve them a lot, so go ahead and do it!
    подправил чуть-чуть
  5. 00:54:468 (4,1) - nazi - looks like you've failed to make a blanket here, lol. Anyway, we both know that you can make this pattern looks prettier by making something like this
    ну я попытался что-то тут сделать, но вообще я там бланкет и не планировал
  6. 00:54:718 (1) - even if you don't follow vocals, at least listen to them. Vocals appearing in th e middle of this slider sound at least STRANGE. They may confuse players and ruin all the fun :<
    я не мапаю караоке :3
  7. 01:23:968 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - it's hard, so non-stop drumming may make players tired. It's kinda out of your regular pattern, y'know. Consider adding more sliders!
    да это же хард :3
  8. 01:48:718 (1) - We both know why these sliders aren't a good idea and I already told you million times that they ruin consistent flow and appear kinda strange. Are you SURE that you want to keep it? ;_;
    они мне тоже не нравятся, но я хочу чтоб это место было замаплено
    Note: 01:56:718 (1) - ;_;
    ;_;
[Insane]
  1. 01:52:718 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - spacing shouuld be consistent. It's just the same word again and again. Keep spacing similar, too!
    все любят рандомные джампы <3

    Nothing else. Awesome one <3
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Insane is really impressive. Good luck!
Спасибо!

upd: забыл таги, добавлю попозже
Stefan
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Stefan

-Bakari- wrote:

[Stefan's Easy]
  1. I lol'd at velocity here. Both Velocity and DS are bigger than on my [Normal]. Maybe we should do something about it. Personally, I think that you can reduce space between your motes. Reducing SV is also a good idea here, I guess. Looks like it has been solved with Sieg.
  2. Reduce OD and HP by one tick to keep diff spread balanced. It also makes diff more playable, this is [Easy] diff, remember! ^
  3. 00:14:717 (3,1) - nazi time - overlap here looks a little bit ugly. That'd be great if you'll try to avoid it somehow. It is visible even during testplay. Fixed.
  4. 00:42:218 - unused green lines should be removed. They confuse mapper and modders :< Fixed.
    Note: 00:56:218 - guess what? \:D/ !
  5. 00:51:718 (2) - both music and vocals kinda end at 00:52:218 - so this slider sounds strange here. Consider replacing it with something like 1/1 slider and circle. example (4 and 5 could be replaced with slider, too) 00:52:718 has been mapped on the Begin of the next Lyric part. It's fine as it is.
    Note: same goes at 01:09:718 (5) - 01:29:718 (4) - :< Sounds similar ,but suggestion is the same. Almost the same situation as before.
  6. 00:56:718 (1) - first of all, you can remove (2) and add repeat to this slider. Then, put a circle to 00:58:718 - so, we will follow vocals much closer,it sounds awesome here. example Same thing goes to, 01:24:718 (1,2) - so you should apply or ignore both of these suggestions to keep consistency. The part of 00:57:468 - 00:58:218 is imo not purposed to be kept hold.
    Oh, and DO NOT CHANGE DIRECTION OF THIS SLIDER SO SUDDENLY. MAke sure that it is visible and make curve smoother. Beginners should be able to read how this slider goes from beginning and 'till the end. example Well, I understand what you mean. Changed.
  7. 01:12:718 (2,4) - nazi - sliders should be more readable for beginners. What's more second slider sholdn't be curved this way because it follows nothing. Can't you find another way? At least make shape of these sliders more readable. Can't describe how retarded I find their shape. :,D Changed.
  8. 02:02:718 (1) - it's nazi time <3 - slider overlaps itself, so it may confuse beginners. Consider curving it like this, instead.
    Note: don't copy my ugly slider, it's just an example, y'know. And how I will do that. <3
  9. 02:18:718 (1,1) - please, make sure that these stacks are playable for beginners. THis song has low BPM, so it should be relazing for beginners. Don't stress them with hard-to-read patterns. I will wait with this part. For that I used NC to divide them.
Thanks (9)ri
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384,100,64218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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128,284,66218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
52,176,66718,6,0,P|112:144|164:144,1,120,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,67718,1,6,0:0:0:0:
349,143,68218,2,0,P|400:144|460:176,1,120,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,69218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
300,316,69718,2,0,P|240:324|184:184,1,240,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,68,71718,5,12,0:0:0:0:
364,324,72718,2,0,B|400:316|448:332|484:324,2,120,12|6|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,74218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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128,192,76218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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216,236,80218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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452,292,82218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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436,260,87218,5,6,0:0:0:0:
412,132,87718,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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72,228,91218,5,6,0:0:0:0:
76,96,91718,2,0,P|128:64|176:96,1,120,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92718,1,12,0:0:0:0:
338,292,93218,2,0,P|384:320|436:288,1,120,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,94218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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56,316,96718,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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256,204,100218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
196,88,100718,2,0,P|60:120|68:192,1,240,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,102218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,204,102718,6,0,P|364:160|472:204,1,240,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,104218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104718,12,4,106718,0:0:0:0:
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404,204,129718,2,0,P|376:112|244:92,1,240,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,160,131218,5,6,0:0:0:0:
60,268,131718,2,0,B|96:320|96:320|160:324,1,120,12|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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276,48,133718,1,12,0:0:0:0:
148,80,134218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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236,120,138218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
128,196,138718,6,0,P|136:280|272:276,1,240,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,140218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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356,184,142218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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152,192,147718,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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256,280,149218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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96,272,155718,1,6,0:0:0:0:
204,348,156218,2,0,P|256:328|316:348,1,120,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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36,224,160218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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292,260,164718,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
updated \w/
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Easy:
~02:23:968 - Can you move the sliders for beginners to read them easily? --> http://puu.sh/3tkIZ.jpg
~That's it

Normal:
~Nothing here.

Hard:
~01:51:968 - Add circle then clap.Sounds better and matches hard diff.
~01:59:968 - ^

Insane:
~00:25:718 - You could try to put the jumps further away to make it more fun :D
~00:28:468 (9) - ^
~00:48:968 (2) - Put this further down for a big fun jump! --> http://puu.sh/3tmhs.jpg
~00:56:968 (2) - Copy and paste change^
~01:16:968 (2) - ^
~01:24:968 (2) - Maybe different this time? --> http://puu.sh/3tmlL.jpg
~02:52:718 (1) - Unnecessary NC?

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
Verlaren
Verlaren
[General]
select letterbox during breaks because you haven't a video or storyboard.

[insane]
nothing to say.

[hard]
02:06:968 (2,1) - stack patterns pls

[Bakari's normal]
00:13:718 (2,4) - sack them
00:28:718 (1,3) - ^

[Stefan's easy]
same as insane

sorry for small mod, good map. No kds pls for this poor mod.
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks gideon5504 and Verlaren for mods. :3
little fixes on hard and ins
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
[Hard]

00:17:218 (6) - The repeat uses clap instead of whistle, intentional? The same for 00:19:218 (2) - Imo it sounds better with whistle like the first part.
00:53:218 (2) - Because of your hitsounds, The repeat in a blue tick really makes it sound weird (as in your hitsounds follows very closely to the instruments, so suddenly changing to vocals in a not so good spot makes it weird), I suggest you to change it to this: http://puu.sh/3tHaw.jpg

02:20:968 (2) - Im not quite sure why you would start the slider on the red ticks, it should start at 02:20:718 - and then end at 02:21:218 - imo.
02:23:968 (3) - Same here but this time it should be 1/2 tick later..
02:27:968 (6) - etc

[Easy]

00:48:218 (2) - This note should be taken out imo. Flows better. In fact, you have that note taken out on 00:55:718 (2,1) - Lol.
01:20:218 (4) - Same here, delete it

Nothing more to say about the rest!
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Sieg
sliders like 00:17:218 (6) follows drums, music really have drum beat on blue (and repeat) not on white.
and this ones 02:20:968 (2) I think, I'll change them

Thanks <3
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi, from my queue

[General]
02:34:718 ~ 02:38:718 - and 02:42:718 ~ 02:46:718 - add kiai?

[Stefan's Easy]
fine

[Bakari's Normal]
01:25:718 (4) - add finish here like in previous part

[Hard]
CS +1? since normal has CS 4
00:16:718 (5) - add NC? cause it's the start of a measure

[Insane]
02:31:968 (6,7) - maybe this curve is nicer http://puu.sh/3tXYp.jpg

sorry for such a basic mod OTL. if it's not helpful, don't kds if you feel like it
pretty neat map :3 star~ good luck :)
Sieg
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Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks pieguy1372
+NC on hard and mentioned circle a bit moved on insane
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