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Kayano

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Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-06-17T01:27:33+00:00

Mod req from my queue~

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - Just suggestion

General

黑色的hitcircleoverlay不是不可以，但是感觉和hitcircle背景不是很搭的样子，改成白色的？

Easy
03:34:927 (1) - 整张图就这个地方变了速，我觉得不是很必要，并且是Easy难度稍微照顾一下新人
其它方面很好了

Normal
01:33:881 (4) - 整个slider往上移一格（四个像素）然后结尾也往上拉一格
02:27:494 (6) - 多回转一次听起来更舒服？

Hard
01:04:078 (1,2) -
01:56:359 (7) - NC

总的来讲已经做的很好了，Easy和Normal真的不错，1PCSS（笑
加油~祝早日ranked

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-06-17T01:45:24+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
Mod req from my queue~

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - Just suggestion
General
黑色的hitcircleoverlay不是不可以，但是感觉和hitcircle背景不是很搭的样子，改成白色的？唔再考虑一下吧比较prefer黑色的或许可能会换bg

Easy
03:34:927 (1) - 整张图就这个地方变了速，我觉得不是很必要，并且是Easy难度稍微照顾一下新人从实际玩的角度根本不会影响因为这是一个reverse 你肯定要一直按住的不过它有没有减速，而你按住了之后就会发现它减速了那么多按一会就可以了这个减速是增强表现力用的
其它方面很好了

Hard
01:04:078 (1,2) - 稍微改了一点点我现在的形状2是包的1的跟随圈，而且你要知道我1的形状是和前面的一个滑条相关的太弯了感觉不好看
01:56:359 (7) - NC no， Hard里面的NC是用来提示变速的不会改 kiai段我如果在一个长滑条上加NC那一定说明它和之前的滑条速度不一样

总的来讲已经做的很好了，Easy和Normal真的不错，1PCSS（笑
加油~祝早日ranked

thx for your mod~

Teara

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Teara 2013-06-17T03:16:52+00:00

Get a few more mods, then call me back for a recheck.

IRC Log

SPOILER

04:44 Teara: that skin ;(
04:45 Zero__wind: oh hi
04:45 Teara: or rather, that slider border
04:45 Zero__wind: better not be black ?
04:45 Teara: ye, makes it really hard to see IMO
04:46 Teara: try white/grayish rather
04:46 Zero__wind: fine
04:46 Zero__wind: Just having a try =.= seems didn't turn out fine ...
04:46 Teara: ok

04:46 Zero__wind: ok I'd change that
04:46 Teara: great
04:48 Teara: normal has no kiai? did the user forget to add it? or left it out on purpose?
04:49 Zero__wind: hmm I'm not sure, will ask him when I catch him later today
04:59 Teara: easy and hard is very good
04:59 Zero__wind: :3 glad to hear that
04:59 Teara: only concern in easy is
04:59 Teara: 00:20:122 (3) - these type of patterns
04:59 Zero__wind: for ?
05:00 Teara: newer players might not hold the button down long enough
05:00 Teara: since its hard to sight read.
05:00 Teara: I prefer more straight sliders then compact ones in a easy
05:00 Zero__wind: ok I bet I got the point
05:00 Zero__wind: because it's self-overlapping >
05:00 Zero__wind: ?
05:00 Teara: ye
05:00 Zero__wind: ok will change that
05:00 Teara: 000:34:441 (2) -
05:00 Teara: this is fine
05:00 Teara: you can still see most of the slider
05:02 Zero__wind: would 01:25:390 (2) - be fine ?
05:02 Zero__wind: as you suppose
05:02 Teara: its a little tricky
05:03 Teara: 01:33:382 (3) -
05:03 Teara: but this is just extreme nazi by me
05:03 Teara: you can ignore =p
05:03 Zero__wind: yeah
05:03 Zero__wind: I was just about to ask you about this one
05:03 Zero__wind: :3
05:04 Teara: can you do hitsound changes on normal?
05:04 Teara: or should I just post them instead?
05:04 Teara: make one section a little softer=p
05:04 Zero__wind: better post in thread, sorry for the inconvinience
05:04 Teara: alright
05:05 Zero__wind: I don't want to tamper with his diff, though we're friends :3
05:06 Teara: alright

05:12 Teara: ah, he has kiai fountains
05:12 Zero__wind: yeah I knew that
05:13 Zero__wind: You can simply write this line in the thread and he'll decide whether to make kiai consistent as well
05:13 Teara: alright

[General]
I'd prefer it if you use a background that fits the theme more. A random anime girl for a english song makes me sad.

[G's Normal]
Consider making Kiai the same as Easy/Hard as it really fits.

01:14:734 (6) - to 01:17:731 - reduce volume by -10%?

01:19:063 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

You do the same thing over and over again. While it does fit, you can notice it. Maybe try a different pattern on each odd repeat?

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-06-17T05:09:53+00:00

Teara's mod

Consider making Kiai the same as Easy/Hard as it really fits.

O

01:14:734 (6) - to 01:17:731 - reduce volume by -10%?

O

01:19:063 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

You do the same thing over and over again. While it does fit, you can notice it. Maybe try a different pattern on each odd repeat?

O

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-06-17T05:37:32+00:00

all diffs updated !

Lucy_Heartfilia_old

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Lucy_Heartfilia_old 2013-06-18T12:25:39+00:00

Easy
扫描
虽说是扫描，但是我觉得EASY好像好多滑条形状。。。
现描述一种现象，虽然不是UNRANKABLE的,随着自己RANK的数量增加可以慢慢修改,改善
00:11:131 (1),(2),(3) -这3个COMBOL之间的距离空了一点点
00:16:126 (4) - 它与(3)和(5)却是无一丝间距，然后你纵观下EASY所有的地方都有不一样。因为你的歌很平稳，EASY没什么跳所以所有的间距应该有一个规律的，但是由于使用了Tiny的模式导致间距有差别，所以Tiny我觉得对作图者的要求是最高的，因为你移动的范围扩，那么每两个之间的距离就要用眼睛自己对了
00:17:458 (2) - 这种尖角滑条美观要-分的
00:44:098 (2) - 我少列些吧-，-你有空，有爱就重新想下怎么弯，EASY难改我也知道，容易改好后DISTANCE不对
00:52:423 (3) - 是个字母M都也没关系，但是这个-，-
01:00:082 (2) - 蚯蚓-，-
01:03:745 (3) - 这个遮挡满难改的，不过你图节奏，音效都可以，如果有爱，空余时间可以开始搞美工了
01:07:075 (1) - 这尖的太可怕了
01:21:061 (3) - 这个是我最上面说的那个问题，间距你一上来由空一点点，然后后面有边和边想连的，这里这个是覆盖了一点点，就三种了吧
01:25:390 (2) - 。。。
01:55:693 (3) - 这个滑条明显往右弯就不遮挡了
02:21:334 (2) - 尖角

G's Normal
精细
其实我先看NORMAL的，我第一眼扫描看NORMAL觉得整体是很好的，不过精细应该还是能MOD出点东西的

美观：
NORMAL的滑条很好，就几个非刻意遮挡
00:56:419 (1) - 虽然距离控制，半遮挡是必须的，但是最好不好让(2)从(1)结束的下面往上穿
01:02:413 (2) - 这里就可以
01:12:403 (1) - 也是，这个(1)往右拐就可以
01:20:728 (4) - ~
01:28:720 (5) - ~
01:49:699 (3) - 这个看起来就挺舒服的，为什么呢？因为前面让改的SLIDER全很短，短了遮挡就不美观
01:59:689 (2) - 短了就不行
02:22:999 (1) - 对称可以优化

难度差：
00:52:423 (1) - 这个转盘是HARD的难度吧
02:47:974 (1) - 转盘也难了，我建议难度名字变HARD，几个转盘都是HARD的转盘，而且也4.5了

HITSOUND
没神马问题

COMBOL
没神马问题

距离&节奏
没神马问题

HARD
扫描
滑条美化，没啥UNRANKABLE

没看到啥UNRANKABLE，但是滑条美观不太好，美观↑ = RANK一首所需要的周期↓。所以后期如果有爱改美观吧，虽然美观是MODIFY里难度最高的修改，却也是收益最大的工作。然后有一种心里不能有，比如别人MOD的东西，觉得在某张RANK图里看到过就可以不用改，对的，也许是不用改，但是你要用更多的时间去换RANK。
另外，莎士比亚是你的老师，那我就是莎士比亚的老师。（开玩笑的-，-，我错了。最多1/8个老师吧）

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-06-19T01:06:09+00:00

From The SLOW BPM Free Mod Queue!

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Let's go!

* No general issues. Let's go ahead →

[Easy]
* No issues here (some aestetical only, but I won't going Nazi)

[G's Normal]
* Surely, the overlap between (4) and (5) on 01:28:220 (4,5) will be pointed by further modders (or even the past ones -- I can't read Chinese), but there is no problem here imo (and I like the flow it gives!)
01:59:023 (1,2) - This other overlap feels a bit worse -- you could make it clear like → http://puu.sh/3iVRs.jpg
* Be sure I didn't ignored/forgotten some partially hidden notes such as 02:17:338 (4) and 03:13:948 (5), but seems there's no non-destructive solution for this overlap here

but they seem fine.

[Hard]
* Very clean diff ♥

That's it ^^

And take a

!!! For the song and map perfection.

GO GO RANK
(Map is kinda bubbleable)

Zero__wind

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Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-06-19T02:51:42+00:00

Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:
Easy
扫描
虽说是扫描，但是我觉得EASY好像好多滑条形状。。。
现描述一种现象，虽然不是UNRANKABLE的,随着自己RANK的数量增加可以慢慢修改,改善
00:11:131 (1),(2),(3) -这3个COMBOL之间的距离空了一点点
00:16:126 (4) - 它与(3)和(5)却是无一丝间距，然后你纵观下EASY所有的地方都有不一样。因为你的歌很平稳，EASY没什么跳所以所有的间距应该有一个规律的，但是由于使用了Tiny的模式导致间距有差别，所以Tiny我觉得对作图者的要求是最高的，因为你移动的范围扩，那么每两个之间的距离就要用眼睛自己对了我只是有的间距是0.98x有的是1.03x 这样这叫做间距不等？这叫做距离没规律？这叫做放跳？这又不是在打串子求求你别闹好么我不知道你要是给别人mod的时候挑这种东西别人会怎么想，但是对于我来说，我只能认为你很蠢
00:17:458 (2) - 这种尖角滑条美观要-分的我觉得挺好的，为了满足群众要求稍微放缓一些
00:44:098 (2) - 我少列些吧-，-你有空，有爱就重新想下怎么弯，EASY难改我也知道，容易改好后DISTANCE不对这根本都不构成问题，而且一点也不难修如果你认为难修是因为你太弱
00:52:423 (3) - 是个字母M都也没关系，但是这个-，- 没有任何改的打算
01:00:082 (2) - 蚯蚓-，- 如果你非要把它想得那么不堪没有人能救你
01:03:745 (3) - 这个遮挡满难改的，不过你图节奏，音效都可以，如果有爱，空余时间可以开始搞美工了这种遮挡根本就不构成问题但是为了满足群众要求我改了 ok？
01:07:075 (1) - 这尖的太可怕了毫无问题
01:21:061 (3) - 这个是我最上面说的那个问题，间距你一上来由空一点点，然后后面有边和边想连的，这里这个是覆盖了一点点，就三种了吧再次重申这根本就不是问题
01:25:390 (2) - 。。。招你惹你了
01:55:693 (3) - 这个滑条明显往右弯就不遮挡了行可以
02:21:334 (2) - 尖角又怎样

HARD
扫描
滑条美化，没啥UNRANKABLE

没看到啥UNRANKABLE，但是滑条美观不太好，美观↑ = RANK一首所需要的周期↓。所以后期如果有爱改美观吧，虽然美观是MODIFY里难度最高的修改，却也是收益最大的工作。然后有一种心里不能有，比如别人MOD的东西，觉得在某张RANK图里看到过就可以不用改，对的，也许是不用改，但是你要用更多的时间去换RANK。很难得你能说一句觉得是对的话是没错不是别的图里出现过就意味着那是好的就意味着我就可以用但是你好歹提一些更有价值的东西出来？你在这里跟我侃侃而谈，我请问你是post数比我多？做的图比我多？rank的图比我多？kd数比我多？PC数比我多？排名比我高？你占了哪一条？我只能认为你根本不懂怎么作图
另外，莎士比亚是你的老师，那我就是莎士比亚的老师。（开玩笑的-，-，我错了。最多1/8个老师吧）

我完全不介意我图rank了以后你来打1分如果你觉得对得起自己的良心的话但是我必须告诉你的是至少你这一篇mod 很蠢。但是无论如何至少你花时间去做了谢谢

@Alarido ： thanks for your time and star ~

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2013-06-19T05:13:02+00:00

呜看到mod queue了 ~~ 有点晚了对不起> <但是咱还是看一下吧也许看不出什么但是只提一些建议哦QvQ 渣mod
[General]

音效很好呀赞~

发现了normal的最后的转盘用时间线来慢慢减少音量的方法但是easy和hard没有呢感觉用在hard上也会很好QvQ

[Hard]

01:15:067 (1) - 有些不太好看> < 其实也是可以的

做的好好看不出什么了QvQ

[normal]

01:40:042 (6) - 这个感觉歪歪的QvQ

没有什么了> <

[easy]

03:03:958 (2) - 这个好像漏掉了一个clap呀

基本没有什么问题了

快去rank吧....

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-06-19T06:46:00+00:00

Lucy_Heartfilia'mod

00:56:419 (1) - 虽然距离控制，半遮挡是必须的，但是最好不好让(2)从(1)结束的下面往上穿

X, 我是覺得這排法玩起來很順也很好看，而且應該不難讀o3o
01:02:413 (2) - 这里就可以
01:12:403 (1) - 也是，这个(1)往右拐就可以

X, 這裡是順著 01:11:737 (5) 排的，往右彎感覺不太好看
01:20:728 (4) - ~

同上
01:28:720 (5) - ~

同上
01:49:699 (3) - 这个看起来就挺舒服的，为什么呢？因为前面让改的SLIDER全很短，短了遮挡就不美观

短的的確有點不好看，不過其他排法我覺得用在normal不太適合

01:59:689 (2) - 短了就不行

X, 改成長的話會少一個音
02:22:999 (1) - 对称可以优化

盡力，我對這種藝術slider不太行

难度差：
00:52:423 (1) - 这个转盘是HARD的难度吧

我把之後的note移到比較中間了
02:47:974 (1) - 转盘也难了，我建议难度名字变HARD，几个转盘都是HARD的转盘，而且也4.5了

同上，星星的話是mapper要求的o3o

Alarido' mod

* Surely, the overlap between (4) and (5) on 01:28:220 (4,5) will be pointed by further modders (or even the past ones -- I can't read Chinese), but there is no problem here imo (and I like the flow it gives!)
01:59:023 (1,2) - This other overlap feels a bit worse -- you could make it clear like → http://puu.sh/3iVRs.jpg
* Be sure I didn't ignored/forgotten some partially hidden notes such as 02:17:338 (4) and 03:13:948 (5), but seems there's no non-destructive solution for this overlap here but they seem fine.

O, fixed 01:59:023 (1,2), 02:17:338 (4), 03:13:948 (5) i like this pattern so i will not change it

Sweet Vanilla's mod

01:40:042 (6) - 这个感觉歪歪的QvQ

調了一下o3o

Zero__wind

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Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2013-06-19T06:52:16+00:00

@Sweet Vanilla : 我不倾向于在最后的地方减音量我觉得吉他的声音没怎么变小…… Easy里面也没有漏clap…那个就是那样的呀=。=

all diffs updated ！

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2013-06-19T12:22:14+00:00

IRC

19:38 Eggache0: Hi irc mod
19:38 Zero__wind: 来咯
19:38 Eggache0: easy没找到什么啊
19:38 Zero__wind: 0.0
19:39 Zero__wind: 因为上午自修过
19:39 Eggache0: 01:25:390 (2) - 
19:39 Eggache0: 这个还是有点丑
19:39 Eggache0: 应该是弯的弧度太大……？
19:39 Zero__wind: 唔=。=
19:40 Zero__wind: 为了不self-overlap 弄成这样了……
19:40 Zero__wind: 好吧我让1下去点给它些位置……
19:40 Eggache0: ……嘛 想好了再改呗
19:41 Eggache0: normal我就post了
19:41 Eggache0: 来hard
19:43 Zero__wind: 嗯
19:43 Eggache0: 01:16:732 (4) - 
19:44 Eggache0: 感觉滑条应该在这起 圈去掉就行
19:44 Zero__wind: 圈？
19:44 Zero__wind: 不是Hard么
19:44 Zero__wind: 我穿越了？
19:45 Eggache0: ……咱俩offset
19:45 Eggache0: 不一样？
19:45 Zero__wind: 这个点哪里有（4）
19:45 Zero__wind: 01:16:732 (1) - 
19:45 Eggache0: http://puu.sh/3jeo0.jpg
19:45 Eggache0: 这个
19:45 Zero__wind: 完蛋 这我要上图的哪里去找
19:46 Eggache0: 第一个kiai后面
19:47 Zero__wind: 我第一个kiai后面哪里有这个？
19:47 Eggache0: o 我开错了
19:47 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3jerB.jpg
19:47 Eggache0: 00:33:109 (1) - 
19:47 Eggache0: 这次是hard了
19:48 Eggache0: 从这到00:33:109 (1) - 
19:48 Eggache0: note感觉密度太大
19:49 Zero__wind: 我看看
19:49 Zero__wind: 到哪里
19:50 Zero__wind: 你这个又贴错
19:50 Eggache0: 00:38:270 - 
19:50 Zero__wind: 那说白了不就00:36:439 (2,3,4) -  它们3个么
19:50 Zero__wind: 说这么隐晦
19:51 Eggache0: ...嘛 你自己调整就好 至于我说的是哪几个……
19:53 Eggache0: 00:52:423 (1) - 
19:53 Eggache0: 00:53:422 - 应该在这结束吧
19:54 Zero__wind: 有一个转音嘛
19:54 Zero__wind: 然后我就让那滑条扭曲了一下
19:54 Eggache0: ……效果不太好 不过可以接受
19:54 Eggache0: 就这样吧
19:55 Eggache0: 01:42:706 (2,3,4,5) - 
19:55 Zero__wind: ？
19:55 Eggache0: vocal到底是在slider头还是尾上……
19:56 Zero__wind: 头
19:56 Eggache0: 那就改一下3和4
19:56 Zero__wind: 嗯？
19:57 Eggache0: 现在这样4容易点早……
19:57 Eggache0: 因为vocal放在3的尾巴上了
19:58 Zero__wind: 我看下
19:58 Zero__wind: 那个love其实有点模糊
19:59 Zero__wind: 到底在哪里起的
19:59 Eggache0: love关系不太大吧 me在01:44:704 - 
20:00 Eggache0: vocal下在头的话这应该下个东西
20:00 Eggache0: 感觉
20:00 Zero__wind: me确实是在红线
20:01 Zero__wind: 诶呀烦死了 打来个电话半天说不安慰你
20:02 Zero__wind: 说不完*
20:02 Eggache0: ;_;不安慰我啊
20:02 Eggache0: ……咳
20:03 Zero__wind: 那个5我还是不想调……因为那个地方开始就是跟吉他和鼓走了……
20:03 Zero__wind: 如果红线加个nte反而只会更难的样子
20:04 Eggache0: 难不是问题吧……
20:04 Eggache0: 嘛算了 不开DT问题也不大
20:04 Zero__wind: 比较模糊的地方我就想用滑条糊弄过去…毕竟判定送
20:04 Zero__wind: 判定松*
20:05 Eggache0: o 之后有几个类似的vocal放错我就过了
20:05 Eggache0: 02:27:994 - 这没理由放空吧
20:05 Zero__wind: 比如？
20:06 Zero__wind: no 这里本来就什么都没有
20:07 Eggache0: wtf 明明有啊 算了vocal不算
20:07 Zero__wind: 你一定要明白vocal于我如无物啊=.=
20:08 Eggache0: ._.我overmap起家 别墅了
20:08 Eggache0: 03:34:927 (1,1) - 
20:08 Zero__wind: 我整张图除了01:42:373 (1,2,3,4) -  以外没有一个地方跟的vocal =.=
20:08 Zero__wind: 嗯?
20:08 Eggache0: 感觉可以更好
20:08 Eggache0: 大概就是这个意思
20:09 Eggache0: 因为我也不知道哪不对劲
20:09 Zero__wind: =.=
20:09 Eggache0: 以上 normal我写在post里 就这样吧
20:10 Zero__wind: 嗯多谢
20:10 Eggache0: 最后你这个skin我看哪个slider都以为有reverse
20:10 Eggache0: 真是
20:10 Eggache0: sad

[G]
All suggestions

01:16:732 (4,5) - 直接让5在4这里开始吧
01:29:219 (6) - delete 01:29:386 - 这里加个短slider或note
01:44:870 (1) - 其实我觉得应该这里起01:44:704 -
02:22:999 (1) - 如果是波浪形slider的话不应该这么做……去找个别的图看看？

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-06-19T15:41:30+00:00

Eggache0's mod

01:16:732 (4,5) - 直接让5在4这里开始吧

X, 01:16:898 - 這裡有個音所以不動
01:29:219 (6) - delete 01:29:386 - 这里加个短slider或note

X, 兩邊藍線都有鼓聲，我大多都跟鼓聲的應該不難聽出來o.o
01:44:870 (1) - 其实我觉得应该这里起01:44:704 -

X, 理由同上o3o
02:22:999 (1) - 如果是波浪形slider的话不应该这么做……去找个别的图看看？

我是拉S形阿(;ﾟДﾟ)

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-06-22T10:12:28+00:00

[Hard]
01:01:747 (2) - 没包好

[G's normal]
01:17:065 (5) - 注意红点

[Other]
看不出啥...no kd
Goodluck

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-06-28T17:49:42+00:00

Small IRC mod tweaking some of the sliders.

Good mapset.

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-06-28T18:32:34+00:00

Very good

so we waitin' now for next stage! Good luck

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-06-29T06:32:15+00:00

群里发了发现有，就来骗了……最后背景还是3次元啊……
Hard
00:22:453 - 其实这个break调不调其实都不影响……
01:01:747 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/838455
01:47:701 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/838458
02:08:680 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/838460
用老式滑条就要用得帅气不是么w
以后只指出note
03:08:953 (3) -
03:13:615 (1) -
03:16:279 (1) -
03:32:263 (1) -
就这样吧……最近事情有点多，只能mod一个难度抱歉了喵……而且mod质量也不太高

MMzz

Elite Mapper

3,979 posts

Joined June 2009

MMzz 2013-06-29T07:13:12+00:00

Ranked!