1. 00:27:275 (2) - I like your patterns at this part, but I would like to suggest you something. Actually, you've done some copy-pasta with your previous objects and all that stuff to fit with the music, which is pretty good. But! I think with this slider, you could reverse it by doing Ctrl+J and by doing this, I think it would be better since the direction of the slider will go up and could catch the next circle more easily than previously.
   
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2. 00:30:433 (1,2,3,4) - It makes it a bit harder the way you've placed it, that's a nice choose of pattern, but I was thinking of something else. Something that will make some kind of circle pattern. With the slider (2), I thought that you could place it at where the slider (1) is and could afterward make a rotation of 90degres. After that, you could make a copy/paste of this slider for the slider (4). It should at the end, make something like this: (But if you do that, it would be recommended to change the emplacement of the circle (1) so the previous slider could catch it easily.
   
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3. 02:36:117 (3,4,5,6) - With these circles, you could actually make the same thing as the two previous objects, since it has a similar sound, it could be good if it was almost the same thing. So first, delete these circles and then copy/paste the two previous objects and reverse the emplacement of the timeline. (The circle should be before the slider). After that, do Ctrl+H
   
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4. 02:38:012 (1,2,3,4) - The flow of these circles aren't pretty good because, the previous slider goes at the left to catch the circle (1) but then, you're coming back at the same place, I meant, it goes back to the right. So, the flow here isn't pretty good. Also, by seeing these objects, the circle (2) is overlapping the previous slider. Here's another reason to make the change. Actually, highlight the circles (2,4) [02:38:170 (2,4) - ] and reverse them by doing Ctrl+H. By doing this, the slider will be fully shaded and it won't make an overlap with the circle.
5. 03:32:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There's some symmetry problems here.. Mostly of the circles don't have the same proportion/spacing that it should have. For an example, the circle (4) should have been between the circles (3,7). On the picture, here, we can perfectly see the proportion/symmetric problem. I've moved the circle (4) a bit to make it centered to the circles (3,7) on the picture. But as you can see, the circles (1,5) have a huge proportionality problem. Try to make them proportional, so it will be perfectly spaced.
6. 03:33:433 (8,9,10) - Talking about the symmetry on the previous point, these circles would have looked better if they were centered between the circles (3,7).
7. 03:43:223 (5) - Spacing error here. Move it one grid up, it will be consistent with the spacing of the previous objects.
8. 03:44:960 (1,2,3) - *Comment* Oh god, these sliders are awesome! The flow that they're giving, that's nice!
9. 04:08:012 (3) - This circle is not aligned with the previous circles and I think you should make the change by moving it one grid at the left. By doing this, you will be sure that these circles will be aligned
10. 04:08:960 (1,3) - That's normal that these circles are not aligned?

Quanteck wrote:

OmG this beatmaps REALLY needs to be ranked Gosh!

Sieg wrote:

Quanteck wrote:

OmG this beatmaps REALLY needs to be ranked Gosh!

Sieg wrote:

Quanteck wrote:

OmG this beatmaps REALLY needs to be ranked Gosh!

Sieg wrote:

Sieg wrote:

OmG this beatmaps REALLY needs to be ranked Gosh!

Sgord1 wrote:

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1. 00:05:170 (1,2) - This pattern is too linear, consider curving 00:05:170 (1) and changing the spacing of 00:06:118 (2).
2. 00:15:275 (1,2,3) - Put a reverse slider here, it fits the record scratch well.
3. 00:32:407 (6) - This is overmapped, you don't need this here, and I think just having 00:32:328 (5,6,7) fits the song nicer and emphasises the small stop in the song.
4. 00:35:328 - A clear beat that you haven't mapped here, I see that it's intentional as there is already 00:34:854 (7,8,9), but I would still consider changing.
5. 00:45:039 (5) - Overmapped just like 00:32:407 (6), I imagine that this repeats later in the song so I will not mention it any more, you can fix it if you think there is a problem here.
6. 02:56:960 (1,2) - I think you can do something more creative and avoid the overlap here.
7. 03:36:828 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try doing something like this here http://puu.sh/gW4x3/5e37cc4860.jpg it fits the song nicer imo
8. 03:39:907 (1) - This is a massive sv change, at least set this up with jumps, it is very unreadable during play.
9. 04:31:696 (1,2,3) - This is not neccessary, put a double here or a repeat slider instead.
10. 05:29:328 - The skeletons in the sb flash here instead of at 05:29:249, I suggest fixing this unless it was on purpose to let the player see it after the spinner or something.