IamKwaN wrote:

hi 小然

[General]

1. Max BG 1024x768
2. Mp3 128-192kbps
3. Preview point all the same
4. 時間問題
   
   1. Hard第7個kiai time結尾同你另外兩個diff 時間5同 :3
   2. Offset 5統一 :3
   3. Easy: 00:27:581 - 多餘的inherited point
5. One difficulty<
6. Combo colour consisitency
7. Tag consistency Nardo兄個Taiko少左d tag :3
8. Audio lead-in consistency

[Easy]

1. HP Drain: 4 or less
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 4 or less
4. Overall Difficulty: 4 or less
5. Slider velocity: 1.00x or less
6. distance snap其實你有無用到 因為我見都錯得幾離譜 ;w; 例如: 00:31:010 (3,4) 同 00:32:724 (4,1) 之間空既拍子一樣但空位就差好遠 同埋你系用幾多distance snapping 我較極都5岩數 ;w; 捉我人手DS未死過xD
7. 00:31:010 (3) - 呢個CTRL+< 兩下 再CTRL+G會5會好d 考慮ing >.<
8. 00:32:724 (4) - ^ 轉完之後砌返對稱 考慮ing >.<
9. 00:58:438 (3) - spacing
10. 01:03:581 (3) - 呢個blanket得5夠靚:3 同埋 01:05:295 (4) spacing問題 Fixed
11. 01:07:010 (5) - easy5好重疊 d新手用default skin 個300爆炸圖案會姐曬呢個slider Fixed
12. 01:11:724 (3) - 介乎0.5 - 0.6之間既distance snapping lol 見到全部SV都系1.0x 最好distance snapping 5好轉黎轉去 5系好難follow Fixed
13. 01:13:867 (5) - spacing
14. 01:14:724 (6) - 重疊 Fixed
15. 01:17:295 (2) - 呢到開始用返1.0 distance snapping 幾好
16. 01:20:724 (5) - spacing
17. 01:25:867 (3) - ^
18. 01:27:581 (4) - ^
19. 01:30:152 (2) - ^
20. 01:49:867 (1) - 比 01:48:152 (2) 姐左少少
21. 02:03:581 (3) - spacing
22. 02:17:295 (1) - 可以對稱返少少
    

    slider頭 X=188 Y=120
    中間 X=256 Y=148
    slider尾 X=324 Y=120

23. 02:23:724 (3,1) - spacing
24. 02:25:867 (2) - ^
    之後我5 mod spacing了 要重新snap一次:3
25. 02:27:581 (1) - 比02:25:867 (2) 姐左d
26. 02:39:581 (2) - ^
27. 02:44:724 (1) - spacing + stack
    之後應該系重複 我懶所以都系5mod跟返前面啦 ;w;
28. 03:48:153 - spinner系呢到停我覺得好d 呢個位之前都仲有少許音樂 同埋個hitsound可以較細聲d 例如5%

Fixed
好多都係ds問題,已經修正左大部份,所以吾話比你知我有冇fixed xD

[Hard]

1. 00:41:081 (5) - 我覺得可del :3 Fixed
2. 00:56:295 (3) - spacing (? 不過我覺得hard可以無甘嚴 建議全部snap一次先 跟住先睇下邊d位可以玩trick 因為我見有d位真系無啦啦拉闊snapping數 x.x
3. 01:07:438 (6,7) - 5系直線 :3 特登:3
4. 01:43:652 (2) - 呢個位spacing同前面5系好統一 個人意見: 貼返住前面個slider個尾 好似01:36:152 (1,2,3) 5知系我個人鐘意整齊定咩~_~ 考慮ing >.<
5. 02:20:724 (1) - 同02:19:867 (6) 5重疊 1系就重疊返佢 好似前面甘 1系就5好stack Fixed
6. 02:23:295 (6) - spacing ds 1.4 \:D/
7. 02:57:581 (3,1) - 重疊:3 Fixed
8. 03:39:688 (1) - same as easy

Fixed

[Endstep]

1. 5識mod lol
2. 淨系覺得第一個break之後d hitsound大聲左d Fixed
3. 01:02:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - 呢段聽落比較奇怪 Fixed
4. 01:07:439 (1,1) - remove NC 無必要開新combo 個人意見 因為 01:03:582 (1,2,3,4) 都無開 :3 Fixed
5. combo colour方面 前面kiai time之前果段同後面kiai time之前果段好似5系好同 5知道系咪我錯覺 ;w; Fixed
6. 03:39:688 (1) - spinner same Fixed
7. Sorry 我真系5識mod 原諒我 ;w;

早日rank圖請食飯 \:D/

超多謝君媽實用mod >.<

Hi!
[General]
Offset +10
Select all Timing and Inherited Points, move offset by 10, resnap all objects.
[Storyboard]
From osu!wiki:

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

Your SB-Elements (BG Effect.jpg and bg Blue.jpg) have 1024x768 resolution.
01:08:724 - increase a pulsation here with start of chorus:

S,0,68698,68752,0.6266665,0.8

02:44:724 - ^
[Hard]
HP DR +1
OD +1
00:15:591 (4) - I'd straighten it:
00:16:448 (6,7) - how about this:
00:17:734 (1) - move to 428;224 (x;y)
00:38:734 (3,4,5,6) - nice
01:08:734 (1) - finish at beginning: 01:12:162 (1) - 01:15:591 (1) - 01:19:019 (1) - 01:22:448 (1) - 01:25:877 (1) - 01:29:305 (1) - 01:32:734 (1) -
01:34:448 (3) - x:84
01:36:162 (1) - finish at beginning: 01:39:591 (1) - 01:43:019 (1) - 01:49:877 (1) - 01:56:734 (1) -
01:46:448 (1) - Slider with zigzags would fit music. Try this:
02:44:734 (1) - finish at beginning: 02:48:162 (1) - 02:51:591 (1) - 02:55:020 (1) - 02:58:448 (1) - 03:01:877 (1) - 03:05:305 (1) - 03:08:734 (1) - 03:22:448 (1) -
02:03:591 (1) - add finish
02:18:591 (3) - replace it with circle
02:25:448 (3) - ^
02:26:734 (6) - try this:
02:29:948 -
03:12:162 (1) - finish at beginning. Same here: 03:15:591 (1) - 03:19:020 (1) - 03:25:877 (1) - 03:29:305 (1) - 03:32:734 (1) -
03:31:877 (4,1) - stack these sliders:
03:39:591 (1) - finish
[Easy]
Random spacing for nice placing of objects in Easy is baaad idea. Nice sliders, but, please, follow the same Distance Snap.
01:10:448 (2,3,4) - ugly overlap
02:46:448 (2,3,4) - ^
02:37:877 (1,2) - ^
01:48:162 (2) - maybe better rotate it?
03:24:162 (2) - ^
[Normal]
00:13:877 (1) - clap
00:17:305 (1) - clap at beginning
00:20:734 (1) - ^
00:24:162 (1) - ^
00:26:734 (4) - finish at end
01:05:305 (1,2,3,4,1) - fix spacing
[Endstep]
OD +1
00:36:807 (5) - unsnapped circle
00:37:236 (7) - unsnapped circle
02:03:592 (1) - finish
02:28:236 (3) - unsnapped circle
02:28:879 (7) - unsnapped slider
02:41:950 (4) - unsnapped slider
03:39:592 (1) - finish
Too fast for me, but looks nice.

Good luck in rankings!

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hi!
[General]
Offset +10

SPOILER

Select all Timing and Inherited Points, move offset by 10, resnap all objects.
Fixed, Thanks for timing help >.<
[Storyboard]
From osu!wiki:

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

Your SB-Elements (BG Effect.jpg and bg Blue.jpg) have 1024x768 resolution.
01:08:724 - increase a pulsation here with start of chorus:

S,0,68698,68752,0.6266665,0.8

02:44:724 - ^
[Hard]
HP DR +1 Fixed
OD +1 Fixed
00:15:591 (4) - I'd straighten it:

SPOILER

00:16:448 (6,7) - how about this:

SPOILER

00:17:734 (1) - move to 428;224 (x;y) Fixed
00:38:734 (3,4,5,6) - nice Thanks
01:08:734 (1) - finish at beginning: 01:12:162 (1) - 01:15:591 (1) - 01:19:019 (1) - 01:22:448 (1) - 01:25:877 (1) - 01:29:305 (1) - 01:32:734 (1) -
01:34:448 (3) - x:84 Fixed
01:36:162 (1) - finish at beginning: 01:39:591 (1) - 01:43:019 (1) - 01:49:877 (1) - 01:56:734 (1) -
01:46:448 (1) - Slider with zigzags would fit music. Try this:

SPOILER

02:44:734 (1) - finish at beginning: 02:48:162 (1) - 02:51:591 (1) - 02:55:020 (1) - 02:58:448 (1) - 03:01:877 (1) - 03:05:305 (1) - 03:08:734 (1) - 03:22:448 (1) -
02:03:591 (1) - add finish
02:18:591 (3) - replace it with circle Fixed
02:25:448 (3) - ^ Fixed
02:26:734 (6) - try this:

SPOILER

02:29:948 -

SPOILER

03:12:162 (1) - finish at beginning. Same here: 03:15:591 (1) - 03:19:020 (1) - 03:25:877 (1) - 03:29:305 (1) - 03:32:734 (1) -
03:31:877 (4,1) - stack these sliders: Fixed

SPOILER

03:39:591 (1) - finish
Hitsound will be add when I have free time
[Easy]
Random spacing for nice placing of objects in Easy is baaad idea. Nice sliders, but, please, follow the same Distance Snap.
01:10:448 (2,3,4) - ugly overlap
02:46:448 (2,3,4) - ^
02:37:877 (1,2) - ^
01:48:162 (2) - maybe better rotate it?

SPOILER

03:24:162 (2) - ^
Fixed all the spacing problems
[Normal]
00:13:877 (1) - clap
00:17:305 (1) - clap at beginning
00:20:734 (1) - ^
00:24:162 (1) - ^
00:26:734 (4) - finish at end
01:05:305 (1,2,3,4,1) - fix spacing Fixed
Hitsound will be add when I have free time
[Endstep]
OD +1
00:36:807 (5) - unsnapped circle
00:37:236 (7) - unsnapped circle
02:03:592 (1) - finish
02:28:236 (3) - unsnapped circle
02:28:879 (7) - unsnapped slider
02:41:950 (4) - unsnapped slider
03:39:592 (1) - finish
Too fast for me, but looks nice.

Good luck in rankings!

Thank you for the helpful mod
fixed a lots of problems

Keep on working please

nold_1702 wrote:

Keep working please

Thanks
btw求nold神mod

just 路过

[general]
feat不小写么

[endstep]
00:33:142 (2) - 这个叠到后面去比较好 就是00:32:714 (1) 放在184:184 然后00:33:142 (2) 放在172:204
01:18:999 (1) - 有点撞到(2) 最好开始那里往下靠一点
01:38:607 (3) - 这里加个note, 然后滑条放在01:38:714 这里是1/2+1/1, 放成3/4效果也不错
01:42:142 (1,1,1,1) - 要变色的话最好变下速, 1.8x 1.6x 1.4x 2.0x比较好
01:44:714 (1) - 最后那地方和(2)间隔有点小, 往下拉一点
01:57:464 - 可以的话最好加个note, 有点空了
03:02:928 (2) - 感觉flow不好读, 建议叠(2)
copy/paste parts ^

[hard]
01:45:464 (2) - 先加个note 再放slider 1/2
03:10:428 (4) - 放太近o.o

normal/easy none

感觉是好图

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

just 路过

[general]
feat不小写么 考慮中...
[endstep]
00:33:142 (2) - 这个叠到后面去比较好 就是00:32:714 (1) 放在184:184 然后00:33:142 (2) 放在172:204 不錯唷!我喜歡~
01:18:999 (1) - 有点撞到(2) 最好开始那里往下靠一点 Fixed
01:38:607 (3) - 这里加个note, 然后滑条放在01:38:714 这里是1/2+1/1, 放成3/4效果也不错 這個rhythm貌似怪怪的...我再想一下
01:42:142 (1,1,1,1) - 要变色的话最好变下速, 1.8x 1.6x 1.4x 2.0x比较好 Fixed
01:44:714 (1) - 最后那地方和(2)间隔有点小, 往下拉一点 Fixed
01:57:464 - 可以的话最好加个note, 有点空了 Fixed
03:02:928 (2) - 感觉flow不好读, 建议叠(2) Fixed
copy/paste parts ^

[hard]
01:45:464 (2) - 先加个note 再放slider 1/2 Fixed
03:10:428 (4) - 放太近o.o Fixed

normal/easy none

感觉是好图

感謝路過神mod >w<
超實用thx >.<

已射 ;w;

IamKwaN wrote:

已射 ;w;

Thanks 君君;w;

hi

[General]

reversearrow.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128 (currently 125x125).

tags和timing都不统一 看AIBAT

endstep难度里有各种unsnap需要修

确保所有kiai的绿线在长白线上

所有standard难度里加SliderBorder: 255, 255, 255 在.osu里的[color]栏下

[endstep]

00:09:571 (6) - 改间距以及变得更加等边三角
00:19:857 (1) - ^等腰三角
00:21:142 (2) - stack
00:24:571 (2) - ^
01:18:892 (4,1) - 修一下间距 以及这个slider开头需要修一下做blanket http://puu.sh/2q4pA
01:33:464 (4) - 这间距也没什么道理 需要弄一下 建议修slider形状
02:23:071 (3) - 即使能看出你是有意这么放的但还是不建议 没有组成一种pattern

图整体还是属于比较新潮的那种 打起来也比较炫酷 但有几个点要提一下：

1 细节 整体给人感觉炫酷但细节也要好 比如stack overlap blanket的设计
2 关于sightreading 大部分的1/4跳现在要拉开已经是共识了 然而混入的有几个1/2间距和1/4一样 并且歌曲里没呢么突出1/2 虽然不是不能打 但也一定能找到更好的梗放他们
3 关于slider形状设计的能看出你花了不少心思 但说实话http://puu.sh/2q4AZ这种搭配能不能叫梗还要商榷一下 只是想按图钉一样把3个slider按在一起 而不是结构上的搭配 这种还需要更多创造力

taiko diffs are okay, I'm not willing to picking nazi

gap between hard and endstep is too huge, theoretically this isn't acceptable


[Normal]

00:06:999 (1) - 这slider实在难看 你是想做波浪形还是不规则形？波浪形的话两条平行线可做 4点或5点 http://puu.sh/2q4Ua
00:28:428 (2) - 这也是 不规则形的话 http://puu.sh/2q4Va
01:44:071 (2,3,1) - 这难度不建议放antijump

除了美观以外 你也能感受到低难度做不规则slider迎合这种dubstep音乐的问题 由于SV速度和密度限制 无论怎么研究wiggle或者不规则slider都感觉没insane那么爽 加了repeat就更是 去的时候迎合了音乐 折返回来时候呢? 而且更不容易做的美观 因为spacing要求高 所以对于低难度还是寻求一下平衡 不要也一味的做成那样

当然这只是建议

LKs wrote:

hi

[General]

reversearrow.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128 (currently 125x125).

tags和timing都不统一 看AIBAT

endstep难度里有各种unsnap需要修

确保所有kiai的绿线在长白线上

所有standard难度里加SliderBorder: 255, 255, 255 在.osu里的[color]栏下

[endstep]

00:09:571 (6) - 改间距以及变得更加等边三角 Fixed
00:19:857 (1) - ^等腰三角 Fixed
00:21:142 (2) - stack Fixed
00:24:571 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:18:892 (4,1) - 修一下间距 以及这个slider开头需要修一下做blanket http://puu.sh/2q4pA Fixed
01:33:464 (4) - 这间距也没什么道理 需要弄一下 建议修slider形状 Fixed
02:23:071 (3) - 即使能看出你是有意这么放的但还是不建议 没有组成一种pattern 仍在想怎樣弄

图整体还是属于比较新潮的那种 打起来也比较炫酷 但有几个点要提一下：

1 细节 整体给人感觉炫酷但细节也要好 比如stack overlap blanket的设计
2 关于sightreading 大部分的1/4跳现在要拉开已经是共识了 然而混入的有几个1/2间距和1/4一样 并且歌曲里没呢么突出1/2 虽然不是不能打 但也一定能找到更好的梗放他们
3 关于slider形状设计的能看出你花了不少心思 但说实话http://puu.sh/2q4AZ这种搭配能不能叫梗还要商榷一下 只是想按图钉一样把3个slider按在一起 而不是结构上的搭配 这种还需要更多创造力

多謝提醒;w;

taiko diffs are okay, I'm not willing to picking nazi

gap between hard and endstep is too huge, theoretically this isn't acceptable Insane WIP

[Normal]

00:06:999 (1) - 这slider实在难看 你是想做波浪形还是不规则形？波浪形的话两条平行线可做 4点或5点 http://puu.sh/2q4Ua 這slider是cancel扭的 Fixed
00:28:428 (2) - 这也是 不规则形的话 http://puu.sh/2q4Va ^ Fixed
01:44:071 (2,3,1) - 这难度不建议放antijump Fixed

除了美观以外 你也能感受到低难度做不规则slider迎合这种dubstep音乐的问题 由于SV速度和密度限制 无论怎么研究wiggle或者不规则slider都感觉没insane那么爽 加了repeat就更是 去的时候迎合了音乐 折返回来时候呢? 而且更不容易做的美观 因为spacing要求高 所以对于低难度还是寻求一下平衡 不要也一味的做成那样

当然这只是建议

我看此圖難rank啊
果然我不適合做mapper
btw超感謝你抽空看圖並留下建議
我會努力的;w;

can put osu!mania in is map

lucalima99 wrote:

can put osu!mania in is map

great idea but I dont know how to make mania map

路過看到這張圖果斷加Favourite

Regou wrote:

路過看到這張圖果斷加Favourite

億萬個感謝>w<!!!!!!

Hi

[Endstep]

This diff plays well but still contains some problems on spacing,sightreading.Luv this diff,hope you can keep on working on this map and get this ranked as soon as possible.

00:06:999~00:41:071 >> Various spacing between 1/2 and 1/4 are way too similar,cause bad sightreading and misleading players.You have to fix them.I am going to point them out.

Such as 00:06:999 (1,2) -
This is a 1/4 spacing


00:07:428 (2,3) -
And this is a 1/2 spacing.

Get the problem?Your spacing between 1/2 1/4 are too similar,even 1/4 spacing > 1/2 spacing.

00:08:285 (1,2) - and 00:08:714 (2,3) - make them like these.
Also,00:08:285 is unsnapped,snap it on 00:08:284 by moveing it on the timeline zoom.


00:10:428 (1,2) - and 00:10:857 (2,3) - Make them like these.I think it can be shown the click time obiviously.

00:11:714 (1,2) - You did it right,no change here but I just mentioned it since you did the correct spacing.

00:13:857 (1,2) - here too.Make them like these.I used two notes instead of your slider.


About improvement on rhythm in this part:
You put some strong hit on slider ends oftenly such as :
00:15:356 >>This is a strong drum hit but you use a slider end on this timing so it gives a weird feeling to players.
To solve this problem,if I were you,I would use 2 notes instead of this slider.

00:16:857 (8) - This slider is end on a heavy drum too.Do it like this?


00:19:320 -There's a heavy drum too but you blank this.Not a problem but I think you may add a note here.


That's all for slow part.




00:54:999 ~ 01:07:857 >>Transition stage

Nothing here.






01:08:714 ~ 01:34:214 >>KIAI

Same problem as I noticed in slow part.1/2 and 1/4 are too similar.

01:12:571 (2,1) - Since there's a new combo between these two sliders so I think it's okay;w;

01:21:571 (1,2) - However,these two are not okay for me,you know what I want to say.Maybe do it like this
01:33:571 (1,2,3) - LKs mentioned it before,let me give my own opinion ;w;.I think it's decent enough as a pattern even it's just 3 different sliders 120 anti-clock and puting there.It's just not creative but not a non-pattern haha.

01:39:571 (1) - Put it downward to blanket the pervious slider please?
01:42:999 (1,2) - Same,1/2 ? 1/4? dunno.here?

01:48:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why no any whistle here ;w;.Forgoten or lazy or intentional?

01:51:571 (1,2) - Spacing.

02:00:999 (1,2,3) - It's bad this time because their unnatural slider cruve don't fit each others.Do it same as 01:33:571 (1,2,3) and I think it will be better.

02:30:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm sound bad but not wrong.Since you suddenly changed what you used to follow.You used to follow instrumental before this part but you suddenly changed to follow drum here.If I were you I would put them like this:

lol you forgot to add whistle I thought:
02:59:606 (3) -
02:59:928 (4) -
03:00:142 (1,2,3,1,2) -
03:01:857 (1) -
03:02:928 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
And the whole part.

03:24:464 (3) - NC this making it more readable.Since its end stacking on the pervious note making it hard to read

03:28:000 (2) - Same,spacing

03:28:857 (3) - ^

03:34:857 (2) - ^
03:39:677 (1) - Use gradually volume(漸退音量) make it more natural.


That's all.

nold_1702 wrote:

Hi

[Endstep]

This diff plays well but still contains some problems on spacing,sightreading.Luv this diff,hope you can keep on working on this map and get this ranked as soon as possible.

00:06:999~00:41:071 >> Various spacing between 1/2 and 1/4 are way too similar,cause bad sightreading and misleading players.You have to fix them.I am going to point them out.

Such as 00:06:999 (1,2) -
This is a 1/4 spacing


00:07:428 (2,3) -
And this is a 1/2 spacing.

Get the problem?Your spacing between 1/2 1/4 are too similar,even 1/4 spacing > 1/2 spacing.

00:08:285 (1,2) - and 00:08:714 (2,3) -

SPOILER

make them like these.
Also,00:08:285 is unsnapped,snap it on 00:08:284 by moveing it on the timeline zoom.


00:10:428 (1,2) - and 00:10:857 (2,3) -

SPOILER

Make them like these.I think it can be shown the click time obiviously.

00:11:714 (1,2) - You did it right,no change here but I just mentioned it since you did the correct spacing.

00:13:857 (1,2) - here too.Make them like these.

SPOILER

I used two notes instead of your slider.


About improvement on rhythm in this part:
You put some strong hit on slider ends oftenly such as :
00:15:356 >>This is a strong drum hit but you use a slider end on this timing so it gives a weird feeling to players.
To solve this problem,if I were you,I would use 2 notes instead of this slider.

00:16:857 (8) - This slider is end on a heavy drum too.Do it like this?


00:19:320 -There's a heavy drum too but you blank this.Not a problem but I think you may add a note here.


That's all for slow part.
^Fixed All The Problems



00:54:999 ~ 01:07:857 >>Transition stage

Nothing here.






01:08:714 ~ 01:34:214 >>KIAI

Same problem as I noticed in slow part.1/2 and 1/4 are too similar.

01:12:571 (2,1) - Since there's a new combo between these two sliders so I think it's okay;w; okay;w;

01:21:571 (1,2) - However,these two are not okay for me,you know what I want to say.Maybe do it like this

SPOILER

Fixed

01:33:571 (1,2,3) - LKs mentioned it before,let me give my own opinion ;w;.I think it's decent enough as a pattern even it's just 3 different sliders 120 anti-clock and puting there.It's just not creative but not a non-pattern haha. Fixed

01:39:571 (1) - Put it downward to blanket the pervious slider please?

SPOILER

Fixed

01:42:999 (1,2) - Same,1/2 ? 1/4? dunno.

SPOILER

here? Fixed

01:48:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why no any whistle here ;w;.Forgoten or lazy or intentional? ;w;

01:51:571 (1,2) - Spacing. Fixed

02:00:999 (1,2,3) - It's bad this time because their unnatural slider cruve don't fit each others.Do it same as 01:33:571 (1,2,3) and I think it will be better. 諗緊點整

02:30:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm sound bad but not wrong.Since you suddenly changed what you used to follow.You used to follow instrumental before this part but you suddenly changed to follow drum here.If I were you I would put them like this: very good (y)

lol you forgot to add whistle I thought: hitsound慢慢搞
02:59:606 (3) -
02:59:928 (4) -
03:00:142 (1,2,3,1,2) -
03:01:857 (1) -
03:02:928 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
And the whole part.

03:24:464 (3) - NC this making it more readable.Since its end stacking on the pervious note making it hard to read Fixed

03:28:000 (2) - Same,spacing Fixed

03:28:857 (3) - ^ Fixed

03:34:857 (2) - ^

SPOILER

Fixed

03:39:677 (1) - Use gradually volume(漸退音量) make it more natural. 整緊


That's all.

超級多謝神nold神mod >w<
改超多 >.<
Thank you so much for checking my 爛圖 >.<

Skrillex !! 讓我想起nold的那張 lol

[General]

1. 因為有hitcircle.png作為底圖所以要在Color的地方上SliderBorder (太鼓diff不用)
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255 (任何RBG顏色)

   RBG顏色可以自己改, 這裡是示意圖 (從別的圖拿來的 lol Combo colour不一樣不要介意)
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 兩個太鼓diff的kiai都沒有結尾 這挺忌諱的 一定要有結尾才行
3. AIMod/AIBat都說reversearrow.png必需是128x128, 你自己斟酌裁裁看吧 不會裁可以找我 (你一定會裁的對吧 lul)
4. 去掉Letterbox during breaks? Testplay的時候第一個想法就是"怎麼有letterbox ;__;", 況且02:03:784 - 背景轉換時上下有東西擋住十分醜陋
5. 打開閃瞎眼提示 (這不太確定 不過02:43:856 - 有點閃 kiai段也是一樣)
6. Title: Imma Try It Out (feat. Alvin Risk) feat永遠是小寫 範例

[Endstep]

1. 00:07:427 (2,3,4) - 等邊三角形比較好看
2. 00:17:284 (10,1) - swap nc你懂, 重音問題
3. 00:31:857 (3) - 比較偏向於例圖這樣的flow 相對之下(1,2)就很掉 這裡放random spacing顯得遜色一點 (總結就是不放跳不好玩)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:36:142 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不很喜歡這邊跳的flow 既然都要不等距了那就玩大一點
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:857 (8,1) - 怎麼說呢 既然都speed up了那還擠在一團作什麼呢 這時候不來個跳一點都不燃好嗎 擺到螢幕右邊都行 就是不要拘瑾於spacing
6. 01:05:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 漸大的spacing會更爽
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   216,112,65285,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,112,65392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   272,108,65499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   296,96,65607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   316,80,65714,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   312,120,65821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   316,160,65928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   328,196,66035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   376,180,66142,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   408,144,66249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   456,136,66357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   504,148,66464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   496,212,66571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   484,276,66678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   452,332,66785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   388,348,66892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   324,340,66999,6,0,P|297:319|264:268,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:09:785 (2,3) - 這種1/4跳不太喜歡 大致上也不太能接受 已經不是"這裡該跳這裡不該跳"的問題了, 1/4就還是安份守己好好random spacing排掉免的讀圖困難 誤認為這兩個之間是1/2了
   (2)擺x:252, y:204即可破
8. 01:12:999 (1) - 這個是故意停在1/6線的嗎
9. 01:13:214 (2,3) - 你懂 ((2)擺x:96, y:100)
10. 01:26:713 - whistle
11. 01:56:714 (1) - ^ (sliderbody)
12. 02:03:571 (1) - 想finish的衝動 (ry
13. 02:26:928 (5,6) - 太窄 至少到1.6x spacing襯托vocal
14. 02:37:321 (4,5) - 感覺刪(5)然後(4)加長1/4比較對音樂
15. 03:00:142 (1,2,1) - body都能whistle 後面以此類推
    後面那段是複製大法嗎..

嘛我就只看這個diff 整體來說不錯 whistle下的很美 滑條形狀略炫酷 打起來也爽爽的
不過這種時候用複製大法就輸了啊...extra diff用複製大法顯的自己懶 而且有點沒創意恩

總結: osu! needs more Ends.

osu! needs more Ends.

Flask wrote:

Skrillex !! 讓我想起nold的那張 lol

[General]

1. 因為有hitcircle.png作為底圖所以要在Color的地方上SliderBorder (太鼓diff不用)
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255 (任何RBG顏色)

   Fixed
   RBG顏色可以自己改, 這裡是示意圖 (從別的圖拿來的 lol Combo colour不一樣不要介意)
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 兩個太鼓diff的kiai都沒有結尾 這挺忌諱的 一定要有結尾才行 Fixed
3. AIMod/AIBat都說reversearrow.png必需是128x128, 你自己斟酌裁裁看吧 不會裁可以找我 (你一定會裁的對吧 lul) 已裁AoA
4. 去掉Letterbox during breaks? Testplay的時候第一個想法就是"怎麼有letterbox ;__;", 況且02:03:784 - 背景轉換時上下有東西擋住十分醜陋 不知道甚麼是letterbox ;w; sorry T^T
5. 打開閃瞎眼提示 (這不太確定 不過02:43:856 - 有點閃 kiai段也是一樣)
6. Title: Imma Try It Out (feat. Alvin Risk) feat永遠是小寫 範例

Fixed

[Endstep]

1. 00:07:427 (2,3,4) - 等邊三角形比較好看 Fixed
2. 00:17:284 (10,1) - swap nc你懂, 重音問題 Fixed
3. 00:31:857 (3) - 比較偏向於例圖這樣的flow 相對之下(1,2)就很掉 這裡放random spacing顯得遜色一點 (總結就是不放跳不好玩) Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:36:142 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不很喜歡這邊跳的flow 既然都要不等距了那就玩大一點 考慮中因這跳我用了很多時間去排;w;
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:857 (8,1) - 怎麼說呢 既然都speed up了那還擠在一團作什麼呢 這時候不來個跳一點都不燃好嗎 擺到螢幕右邊都行 就是不要拘瑾於spacing 特地想將加速的slider置中(因個人感覺置中更爽((跑
6. 01:05:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 漸大的spacing會更爽 Good One!!!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   216,112,65285,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,112,65392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   272,108,65499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   296,96,65607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   316,80,65714,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   312,120,65821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   316,160,65928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   328,196,66035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   376,180,66142,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   408,144,66249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   456,136,66357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   504,148,66464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   496,212,66571,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   484,276,66678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   452,332,66785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   388,348,66892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   324,340,66999,6,0,P|297:319|264:268,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:09:785 (2,3) - 這種1/4跳不太喜歡 大致上也不太能接受 已經不是"這裡該跳這裡不該跳"的問題了, 1/4就還是安份守己好好random spacing排掉免的讀圖困難 誤認為這兩個之間是1/2了 Fixed
   (2)擺x:252, y:204即可破 Fixed
8. 01:12:999 (1) - 這個是故意停在1/6線的嗎 不是啊0.0
9. 01:13:214 (2,3) - 你懂 ((2)擺x:96, y:100) Fixed
10. 01:26:713 - whistle Fixed
11. 01:56:714 (1) - ^ (sliderbody) Fixed
12. 02:03:571 (1) - 想finish的衝動 (ry Fixed
13. 02:26:928 (5,6) - 太窄 至少到1.6x spacing襯托vocal Fixed
14. 02:37:321 (4,5) - 感覺刪(5)然後(4)加長1/4比較對音樂 我覺得原本的更好;w;
15. 03:00:142 (1,2,1) - body都能whistle 後面以此類推 Fixed
    後面那段是複製大法嗎.. ;w;

嘛我就只看這個diff 整體來說不錯 whistle下的很美 滑條形狀略炫酷 打起來也爽爽的
不過這種時候用複製大法就輸了啊...extra diff用複製大法顯的自己懶 而且有點沒創意恩

總結: osu! needs more Ends.

謝謝Flask神摸
改好多
Thanks a lot >.<

mintong89 wrote:

osu! needs more Ends.

osu! needs more 節操

[general]

reduce opacity of ' III ' in


[Endstep]

00:31:857 (3) - stack better with 00:32:285 (4)

00:32:285 (4) - X:188 Y:160

00:54:999 (1) - X:135 Y:296

00:55:964 (2) - X: 56 Y:192

00:56:285 (3) - X:120 Y:64

00:57:571 (8,9) - note (8) X:180 || Y:256 (stack with 00:56:928 (5)- )

01:19:857 (1) - X:356 Y:24

02:01:321 (2) - After this delete slider (3) and replace it with a note next:


if possible for 02:01:856 (4) - slider slow (SV 0.7)

03:37:642 (3) - ^

02:31:642 (3,4,5) - hard to read

02:48:571 (2) - stack end with 02:48:035 (4)

[Endsane]

AR 9? :\

00:16:000 (2) - stack with 00:15:357 (1)

02:02:927 - add



SV 0.7 soft

02:22:856 (3) - stack with 02:21:463 (3)

02:40:749 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack with 02:41:284 (1) start

Cool SB owo

唔知點解我覺得endstep OD7好低= =

Mio_chan wrote:

唔知點解我覺得endstep OD7好低= =

OD7都難架喇= ='''
錦多加速slider OD8會超難打 - -
btw thanks for建議 -v-

Pizza2000 wrote:

[general]

reduce opacity of ' III ' in


[Endstep]

00:31:857 (3) - stack better with 00:32:285 (4) Fixed

00:32:285 (4) - X:188 Y:160 too far away for 1/4 spacing ;w;

00:54:999 (1) - X:135 Y:296 Fixed

00:55:964 (2) - X: 56 Y:192 Fixed

00:56:285 (3) - X:120 Y:64 Fixed

00:57:571 (8,9) - note (8) X:180 || Y:256 (stack with 00:56:928 (5)- ) purposely

01:19:857 (1) - X:356 Y:24 Fixed

02:01:321 (2) - After this delete slider (3) and replace it with a note next: Think more about that owo

SPOILER

http://d.pr/i/w8eZ

if possible for 02:01:856 (4) - slider slow (SV 0.7)

03:37:642 (3) - ^

02:31:642 (3,4,5) - hard to read Fixed

02:48:571 (2) - stack end with 02:48:035 (4) it stack with 02:47:285 (1) -

[Endsane]

AR 9? :\ sorry but 8 will be more better ;w;

00:16:000 (2) - stack with 00:15:357 (1)

02:02:927 - add



SV 0.7 soft

02:22:856 (3) - stack with 02:21:463 (3) ds

02:40:749 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack with 02:41:284 (1) start purposely

Cool SB owo

Thanks you so much for modding

於是我來了:3
難度很多，所以我就只mod簡單的難度吧~

[General]

Noting

[Easy]
HP2 OD2吧，特別是這個圖的難度只有半顆星，這麼高的數值有點兀突@@

1. 00:24:142 - 多餘的綠線
2. 00:27:571 - ^
3. 00:41:284 (5) - NC?
4. 01:01:856 (1,2,3,4) - 相比於這張圖的難度，這連續4個1/1感覺好難@@ 2,3,4挑一個刪掉會比較好
5. 01:05:284 (1) - Easy不能放2次以上折返的滑條
6. 01:08:714 - 這個綠線沒有對齊，把他搬到 01:08:713；類似的情況有01:22:428，01:34:428，01:49:857，02:17:285，02:44:714， 02:56:714，02:58:428，03:10:428，03:25:857，03:39:571
7. 01:12:142 (4) - NC (下略
8. 01:24:142 (2) - 同 01:05:284 (1)
9. 02:23:713 (3) - 要刪掉這個note嗎，感覺一直滿滿的1/1，對新手來說有點吃力~
10. 02:37:427 (3) - ^
11. 02:41:284 (1) - 同 01:05:284 (1)
12. 03:00:142 (2) - ^
13. 03:12:141 (1) - 這個滑條的時間偏了，把它搬到 03:12:142
14. 03:39:677 (1) - 轉盤太接近前面的滑條，Easy的話最少要相隔1/2，所以把它搬到 03:39:784 開始吧

[Normal]

1. 00:24:142 - 多餘的綠線
2. 00:25:856 (3,4) - 這種1/2變距的確是有人做過，不過以我所見通常是出現在Hard以上，而對我來說Normal出現這種變距，對於新手也會較為吃力
3. 00:27:571 - 多餘的綠線
4. 00:30:999 (1) - 要不要考慮在 00:32:284 結束，感覺會比較適合
5. 00:39:570 (4) - 3次折返會讓新手混亂，特別是前面有兩個沒有折返，樣子差不多的滑條，新手容易適應了沒有折返的滑條，導致忘記在這個滑條需要折返；或者他們會看到第一個箭嘴，但是也很容易忽略了第二、三次折返，因為這個滑條的長度很短，不容易瞬間察覺第二、三次折返的存在；所以我會建議把這個換掉:3
6. 00:55:000 - 跟Easy一樣綠線並沒有對齊，同樣的情況有 01:08:714，01:22:428，01:34:428，01:49:857，02:44:714，02:58:428，03:10:428，03:25:857，03:39:571
7. 01:07:213 (1) - 總覺得與後面的距離怪怪@@ 另外就是2次折返在這裡比較難察覺，換成1次折返的滑條+1個note會比較好
8. 02:00:999 (4,1,2) - 這三點的節奏有點難抓，能不能將這三個點弄成滑條？
9. 02:41:284 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 看起上來會很困難@@ 要不要改成三個Note重疊放置
10. 02:48:999 (1,2) - 這兩個之間的時間差距，應該跟 02:45:570 (1,2) 是一樣的，為何會有兩種不同的距離？大部份情況來說，我都不建議Normal出現任何的距離變化
11. 03:16:963 (2,3) - 藍線的note嘛@@ 太難抓了，將 03:17:284 (3) 推前，然後2次折返如何？
12. 03:20:070 (2,3,1) - 這樣疊放有點坑嗲~ 新手會混亂，分開它們吧
13. 03:36:999 (4,1,2) - 同 02:00:999 (4,1,2)

就這樣吧~ 觸圖一枚 Good Luck

As requested.

I did my best here, and I really want you to think about my suggestions.

[General]

1. Since you map has storyboard, disable letterbox during breaks. Otherwise those letterbox loooks a bit weird and may hurt your storyboard.
2. Start mapping all your diffs from thesame point. For example, the point where you start mapping on [Easy] diff is absolutely random and sounds weird, imo.
3. Tell us how to understand your diff names. Say in Creator's word that Endsane and Endstep are [Insane] diffs. We can't choose diff to play if fe don't know how hard it is.
4. In your diffs, some kiais are inconsistent. Are you sre that it should be like this? Check it out, please!

[Easy]

1. First of all, your diff settings are totally unbalanced and too hard for an [Easy] diff. Try to reduce OD/HP Drain by one tick. It'll make your patterns the way more playable for beginners. Remember, that this diff is the easiest.
2. I should say, that your comboing is very inconsistent. The whole map looks messy and weird because some combos are too long, some combos are too short. It makes map random and less playable.
3. 00:29:285 (2,3) - your flow here is quite hard to read for beginners. Your patterns are very hard to read for the easiest diff. Unfortunately, the same thing happens with many-many patterns on this diff. 00:34:428 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:999 (4,5) -
   
   flow details

   Red is how beginners see yur flow. They see it in a wrong way, because patterns are quite messy.
   Blue is correct flow. Quite hard to read and may confuse beginners.
   
4. 01:05:285 (1) - no. Don't do it. Double-reversed sliders aren't readable for beginners. It's a very uncommon pattern in easiest diffs, what's more second reverse arrow appears too fast and it makes this pattern unreadable for beginners.
   Note: same for 01:24:142 (2) - 02:41:284 (1) - 03:00:141 (2) -
5. 01:12:142 (4) - It's quite a bad idea. Slider changes its dirrection the way too fast. For beginners it's a very-very hard to play such sliders.
6. 01:36:142 (1) - it looks like you were too lazy to create some patterns here. This slider feels a boit off and too long. For beginners, long sliders are stressful. At least remove reverse-arrow and map it properly. Because it seems like you're just lasy. No offense, but it's reallly weird imo.
7. 01:48:142 (2,1) - overlaps in easiest diffs are not recommended. It makes map look pretty ugly sometimes. But that's ok if it is one of your first maps.
8. 02:56:713 (5) - if you kiai ends at this circle, it is quite reasonable to place a new combo here. But placing two combos in a row may stress beginners. Consider placing a circle at 02:57:999 - to make patterns better. In the end, you will have something like this
9. 03:12:141 (1) - if you use those long sliders, at least make them different. Overusing copypasta is disrespect towards players.
   Note: same 03:25:856 (1)
10. 03:44:713 - if you want to reduce volume of that spinner use Soft hitsounds. S section with 5% volume here. (apply for all diffs)

[Normal]

1. 00:09:571 (3,4) - stacks like this one are very hard to read for a [Normal] diff. Consider unstacking and replacing with something easier-readable.
2. 00:15:571 (4,5) - nazi - blanket slider here could be better.example. I'm not forcing you to change, but example looks better than your pattern, imo.
3. 00:25:642 - try to avoid unused green lines. They make modding harder and doesn't look so good. What's more it doesn't make any sense to keep unused green lines here, right?
4. 00:28:428 (2) - I'd replace this slider with 1/1 slider and circle to follow vocals/music closer.
5. 00:33:892 - there's no beat in music. That's why using 3/4 slider here is a bad idea and looks pretty weird.
6. 00:39:571 (4) - this slider is unpredictable. It's impossible to guess how many reverses does this slider have. And it is impossible to read those reverses because they appear too fast. That's why this pattern is kinda unplayable for a [Normal] diff.
   Note:same as above 01:07:214 (1) - 01:07:214 (1) - here
7. 00:54:999 (1) - consider ending this slider 1/4 later to keep consistent rhythm. What's more it will make your patterns more playable and enjoyable.
8. 01:01:857 (1) - same as above here. Consider changing both or none of them to keep rhythm and patterns consistent. By the way 01:07:214 (1,1) - this overlap looks a little bit messy, imo.
9. 01:08:714 (1,2) - 3/4 rhythnm in [Normal] diff, try to start this slider from the white tick to keep more enjoyable rhythm. It is very hard to play your diff because of those 3/4 notes. They confuse me a lot :<
   Note:same for 01:13:321 (2) -02:17:285 (1) - 02:24:142 (1) - 02:34:428 (1) - 02:37:856 (1) - and so on.. you got the idea, right?
10. 01:11:285 (4,1) - slider looks a bit mssy and it's hard to read. Mostly because slider changes its direction too sudden. Try to make something easier-readable here? This is [Normal] diff, after all!
    Note:01:15:571 (1) - 01:18:999 (1) - 01:22:428 (1) - 01:25:857 (1) - 01:39:571 (1) - 01:42:999 (1) - 01:49:857 (1) - 01:59:285 (4) - 02:47:285 (4,1) - 02:51:571 (1) - 02:55:000 (1) - 02:58:428 (1) - 03:01:857 (1) - 03:15:571 (1) - same
11. 02:02:713 - try to avoid empty gaps like this one. This diff has HP Drain 4 and if you've missed one or two notes in previous pattern, it may kill you :<
12. 02:43:857 (5,1) - broken spacing, players might mistakenly click (1)
13. 03:11:392 and 03:38:821 - I've already mentioned, that those empty spaces are too big and may kill players :<
14. Too many copypasta here, again. I understand, that song is long but please, respect players! They want to see creativity, not Ctrl+C>Ctrl+V :<

[Hard]

1. 00:15:571 (4,5,6,7) - Well.. Those jumps look kinda random. It's quite weird to play them due to low AR and calm rhythm.Try to keep jumps more neat and consistent. For example some jumps with x1.5 spacing will fit here much better.
2. 00:33:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to avoid many 1/4 notes in a row. THis is [Hard] diff, not [Insane]!
3. Some of your combos like 00:30:142 (1,2,3,4) - 00:33:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are too short towards others. It looks a bit strange and may confuse players.
4. 00:41:284 - drag your break here! It'll look the way better, trust me! example
   Note: how to do it? Place your cursor near left side of "B" in timeline and move it :3 It's pretty easy.
   Note2:same for 00:56:713 - 01:00:142 -
5. 01:07:428 (6) - jump here is too hard it's over x2.00 and it is too hard :< You shouldn't se too fast jumps here, because it will stress players! This is not an [Insane] diff, after all!
   Note: 01:21:142 (6) - watch out! Those jumps are too hard!
6. 01:07:428 (6) - I guess you've missed a beat at this tick. It seems like it is needed here. Without it your pattern sounds empty.
7. 01:07:428 (6) - same as above. Apply both those suggestions, or ignore both of them. Consistency, you know /
8. 01:18:999 (1) - just saying, that this slider may be considered as unrankable, because it has "slowdown" on its start. But you should ask BATs, if you aren't sure. what I'm talking about
   Note: same for 01:22:428 (1) 01:51:571 (1) - 01:53:285 (1) - 02:54:571 (9) - 02:58:428 (1) - 03:27:571 (1) - 03:33:357 (2,3,4) -
9. 01:43:642 (2,3,4) - sudden anti-jumps are unreadable. Try to place at least a new combo on (2) to make them readable. But I'd keep using regular spacing here. By the way, I don't like the way how you ignore strong beats on white ticks here :<
   Note: same for 01:50:499 (2,3,4) - 01:57:357 (2,3,4) - 03:19:642 (2,3,4) - 03:26:500 (2,3,4) -
10. 02:17:285 (1,2) - do not ignore white ticks! End those sliders on whiteticks. It'll give you consistent and enjoyable rhythm. Wat's more it fits much better here.
11. 03:16:214 (2,3) - random spacing changes for no reason. They're quite stressful for players and it is impossibe to read them here. Consider stacking notes properly or keeping regular spacing here.

[Endstep]
This diff looks much better, Have you mapped it later than other diffs?

1. 01:06:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even for an EXTRA diff, 1/4 jumps are unplayable. Please, do not use them at all!
2. Some of sliders during kiais (with red dots) may be unrankable. Please make sure that you don't use red dots to slowdown/speed up sliders.
3. 01:12:999 (1) - Unsnapped slider. Try to re-snap this slider, if it is possible.
   
   Actually, patterns here aren't that bad. But I'm unsure about this diff. Because there're too mant sliders where you use red dots to slowdown sliders. What's more you overuse Slider Velocity changes here. It makes map too hard and unreadable. I'm pretty sure, that you don't really need too many different slider velocities. Try to think it over and remove some slider velocities. (same for ALL [Insane] diffs in this mapset)

[Endsane]

1. Consider using OD7, it'll make your mapset more balanced and this is [Insane] diff, after all.
2. 00:15:357 (1,2) - spacing is inconsistent here for no reason. Try to place a NC to make it readable, or you can fix spacing here.
3. 00:30:142 (1,1) - I'd remove this and this new combo to keep comboing more consistent. It doesn't looks like it is needed here, anyway. :<
4. 00:55:856 - place here a circle, to follow vocals. It'll make your diff much more playable.
   Note: 00:59:284 - same here
5. 01:14:713 (1,1,1,1) - if you use velocity changes here, make sure they're readable. I bet none of players will be able to pass it PROPERLY for the first try!
   Note: 01:28:427 (1,1,1,1) - 02:50:713 (1,1,1,1) - 03:04:427 (1,1,1,1) - 03:09:892 (1,1) - 03:36:999 (1,1,1) - same
6. 01:20:499 (8) - this 1/4 jump is unreadabl and confusing for players. try to keep consistent spacing during streams! Same happens 01:30:463 (4,5) - here and so on. It looks like 1/2 patterns and players will be confused. I'm begging you do not change spacing when you do 1/4 patterns. In 99% cases it is a bad idea and makes map unplaable!
7. 01:35:606 (2,3,1) - 1/4 and then 1/1 at the same stack. It is quite had for players to read it. What's more you may miss (1) after clicking (3). That's why I recommend you to move (1) somewhere else.
8. 01:42:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - please avoid NC spam unless you have reasons to do it. I'm begging you.
9. 02:47:713 (5) - consider replacing this slider with something easier readable? I feel like this shape looks pretty awkward here. :<
10. 03:10:642 - have you missed a circle here? It feels like you've missed it because this is end of the kiai and it is reasonable to have a circle here!
11. 03:11:606 (2,3,1) - same mistake as 01:20:499 (8). I feel like you've just copypasted some patterns. Please, don't do it! I is disrespect towards players :<
12. 03:18:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I'm sure that you have copypasted 01:42:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1). Do not copy your mistakes, remove those extra new combos, they are overused and looks messy here.

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I did my best to help you. I'm sure that you should re-work a lot of patterns in all diffs. Also you should avoid all this copypasta and weird velocity changes. I really hope that ths mod will help you to improve your map.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

於是我來了:3
難度很多，所以我就只mod簡單的難度吧~

[General]

Noting

[Easy]
HP2 OD2吧，特別是這個圖的難度只有半顆星，這麼高的數值有點兀突@@ Fixed

1. 00:24:142 - 多餘的綠線 Fixed
2. 00:27:571 - ^ Fixed
3. 00:41:284 (5) - NC? Fixed
4. 01:01:856 (1,2,3,4) - 相比於這張圖的難度，這連續4個1/1感覺好難@@ 2,3,4挑一個刪掉會比較好 Fixed
5. 01:05:284 (1) - Easy不能放2次以上折返的滑條 Fixed
6. 01:08:714 - 這個綠線沒有對齊，把他搬到 01:08:713；類似的情況有01:22:428，01:34:428，01:49:857，02:17:285，02:44:714， 02:56:714，02:58:428，03:10:428，03:25:857，03:39:571 Fixed
7. 01:12:142 (4) - NC (下略 Fixed
8. 01:24:142 (2) - 同 01:05:284 (1) Fixed
9. 02:23:713 (3) - 要刪掉這個note嗎，感覺一直滿滿的1/1，對新手來說有點吃力~ Fixed
10. 02:37:427 (3) - ^ Fixed
11. 02:41:284 (1) - 同 01:05:284 (1) Fixed
12. 03:00:142 (2) - ^ Fixed
13. 03:12:141 (1) - 這個滑條的時間偏了，把它搬到 03:12:142 Fixed
14. 03:39:677 (1) - 轉盤太接近前面的滑條，Easy的話最少要相隔1/2，所以把它搬到 03:39:784 開始吧 Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:24:142 - 多餘的綠線 Fixed
2. 00:25:856 (3,4) - 這種1/2變距的確是有人做過，不過以我所見通常是出現在Hard以上，而對我來說Normal出現這種變距，對於新手也會較為吃力 Fixed
3. 00:27:571 - 多餘的綠線 Fixed
4. 00:30:999 (1) - 要不要考慮在 00:32:284 結束，感覺會比較適合 ok
5. 00:39:570 (4) - 3次折返會讓新手混亂，特別是前面有兩個沒有折返，樣子差不多的滑條，新手容易適應了沒有折返的滑條，導致忘記在這個滑條需要折返；或者他們會看到第一個箭嘴，但是也很容易忽略了第二、三次折返，因為這個滑條的長度很短，不容易瞬間察覺第二、三次折返的存在；所以我會建議把這個換掉:3 Fixed
6. 00:55:000 - 跟Easy一樣綠線並沒有對齊，同樣的情況有 01:08:714，01:22:428，01:34:428，01:49:857，02:44:714，02:58:428，03:10:428，03:25:857，03:39:571 Fixed
7. 01:07:213 (1) - 總覺得與後面的距離怪怪@@ 另外就是2次折返在這裡比較難察覺，換成1次折返的滑條+1個note會比較好 Fixed
8. 02:00:999 (4,1,2) - 這三點的節奏有點難抓，能不能將這三個點弄成滑條？ Fixed
9. 02:41:284 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 看起上來會很困難@@ 要不要改成三個Note重疊放置 Fixed
10. 02:48:999 (1,2) - 這兩個之間的時間差距，應該跟 02:45:570 (1,2) 是一樣的，為何會有兩種不同的距離？大部份情況來說，我都不建議Normal出現任何的距離變化 Fixed
11. 03:16:963 (2,3) - 藍線的note嘛@@ 太難抓了，將 03:17:284 (3) 推前，然後2次折返如何？
12. 03:20:070 (2,3,1) - 這樣疊放有點坑嗲~ 新手會混亂，分開它們吧
13. 03:36:999 (4,1,2) - 同 02:00:999 (4,1,2) Fixed

就這樣吧~ 觸圖一枚 Good Luck

Thank you so much for modding >w<
fixed a lot of problems

-Bakari- wrote:

As requested.

I did my best here, and I really want you to think about my suggestions.

[General]

1. Since you map has storyboard, disable letterbox during breaks. Otherwise those letterbox loooks a bit weird and may hurt your storyboard.
2. Start mapping all your diffs from thesame point. For example, the point where you start mapping on [Easy] diff is absolutely random and sounds weird, imo.
3. Tell us how to understand your diff names. Say in Creator's word that Endsane and Endstep are [Insane] diffs. We can't choose diff to play if fe don't know how hard it is.
4. In your diffs, some kiais are inconsistent. Are you sre that it should be like this? Check it out, please!

[Easy]

1. First of all, your diff settings are totally unbalanced and too hard for an [Easy] diff. Try to reduce OD/HP Drain by one tick. It'll make your patterns the way more playable for beginners. Remember, that this diff is the easiest.
2. I should say, that your comboing is very inconsistent. The whole map looks messy and weird because some combos are too long, some combos are too short. It makes map random and less playable.
3. 00:29:285 (2,3) - your flow here is quite hard to read for beginners. Your patterns are very hard to read for the easiest diff. Unfortunately, the same thing happens with many-many patterns on this diff. 00:34:428 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:999 (4,5) - Fixed
   
   flow details

   Red is how beginners see yur flow. They see it in a wrong way, because patterns are quite messy.
   Blue is correct flow. Quite hard to read and may confuse beginners. Fixed
   
4. 01:05:285 (1) - no. Don't do it. Double-reversed sliders aren't readable for beginners. It's a very uncommon pattern in easiest diffs, what's more second reverse arrow appears too fast and it makes this pattern unreadable for beginners. Fixed
   Note: same for 01:24:142 (2) - 02:41:284 (1) - 03:00:141 (2) -
5. 01:12:142 (4) - It's quite a bad idea. Slider changes its dirrection the way too fast. For beginners it's a very-very hard to play such sliders. Fixed
6. 01:36:142 (1) - it looks like you were too lazy to create some patterns here. This slider feels a boit off and too long. For beginners, long sliders are stressful. At least remove reverse-arrow and map it properly. Because it seems like you're just lasy. No offense, but it's reallly weird imo. Fixed
7. 01:48:142 (2,1) - overlaps in easiest diffs are not recommended. It makes map look pretty ugly sometimes. But that's ok if it is one of your first maps. lol
8. 02:56:713 (5) - if you kiai ends at this circle, it is quite reasonable to place a new combo here. But placing two combos in a row may stress beginners. Consider placing a circle at 02:57:999 - to make patterns better. In the end, you will have something like this Fixed
9. 03:12:141 (1) - if you use those long sliders, at least make them different. Overusing copypasta is disrespect towards players.
   Note: same 03:25:856 (1) Fixed
10. 03:44:713 - if you want to reduce volume of that spinner use Soft hitsounds. S section with 5% volume here. (apply for all diffs)

nice one

[Normal]

1. 00:09:571 (3,4) - stacks like this one are very hard to read for a [Normal] diff. Consider unstacking and replacing with something easier-readable. Fixed
2. 00:15:571 (4,5) - nazi - blanket slider here could be better.example. I'm not forcing you to change, but example looks better than your pattern, imo.
3. 00:25:642 - try to avoid unused green lines. They make modding harder and doesn't look so good. What's more it doesn't make any sense to keep unused green lines here, right?
4. 00:28:428 (2) - I'd replace this slider with 1/1 slider and circle to follow vocals/music closer.
5. 00:33:892 - there's no beat in music. That's why using 3/4 slider here is a bad idea and looks pretty weird.
6. 00:39:571 (4) - this slider is unpredictable. It's impossible to guess how many reverses does this slider have. And it is impossible to read those reverses because they appear too fast. That's why this pattern is kinda unplayable for a [Normal] diff.
   Note:same as above 01:07:214 (1) - 01:07:214 (1) - here
7. 00:54:999 (1) - consider ending this slider 1/4 later to keep consistent rhythm. What's more it will make your patterns more playable and enjoyable. thinking
8. 01:01:857 (1) - same as above here. Consider changing both or none of them to keep rhythm and patterns consistent. By the way 01:07:214 (1,1) - this overlap looks a little bit messy, imo.
9. 01:08:714 (1,2) - 3/4 rhythnm in [Normal] diff, try to start this slider from the white tick to keep more enjoyable rhythm. It is very hard to play your diff because of those 3/4 notes. They confuse me a lot :< Fixed
   Note:same for 01:13:321 (2) -02:17:285 (1) - 02:24:142 (1) - 02:34:428 (1) - 02:37:856 (1) - and so on.. you got the idea, right?
10. 01:11:285 (4,1) - slider looks a bit mssy and it's hard to read. Mostly because slider changes its direction too sudden. Try to make something easier-readable here? This is [Normal] diff, after all! change it as passable
    Note:01:15:571 (1) - 01:18:999 (1) - 01:22:428 (1) - 01:25:857 (1) - 01:39:571 (1) - 01:42:999 (1) - 01:49:857 (1) - 01:59:285 (4) - 02:47:285 (4,1) - 02:51:571 (1) - 02:55:000 (1) - 02:58:428 (1) - 03:01:857 (1) - 03:15:571 (1) - same
11. 02:02:713 - try to avoid empty gaps like this one. This diff has HP Drain 4 and if you've missed one or two notes in previous pattern, it may kill you :< Fixed
12. 02:43:857 (5,1) - broken spacing, players might mistakenly click (1) Fixed
13. 03:11:392 and 03:38:821 - I've already mentioned, that those empty spaces are too big and may kill players :< Fixed
14. Too many copypasta here, again. I understand, that song is long but please, respect players! They want to see creativity, not Ctrl+C>Ctrl+V :<

ok I will be more creativity ;w;

[Hard]

1. 00:15:571 (4,5,6,7) - Well.. Those jumps look kinda random. It's quite weird to play them due to low AR and calm rhythm.Try to keep jumps more neat and consistent. For example some jumps with x1.5 spacing will fit here much better. Fixed
2. 00:33:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to avoid many 1/4 notes in a row. THis is [Hard] diff, not [Insane]! Fixed
3. Some of your combos like 00:30:142 (1,2,3,4) - 00:33:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are too short towards others. It looks a bit strange and may confuse players. I decide to make this combo for the jump of 00:30:785 (4,1) -
4. 00:41:284 - drag your break here! It'll look the way better, trust me! example cool
   Note: how to do it? Place your cursor near left side of "B" in timeline and move it :3 It's pretty easy.
   Note2:same for 00:56:713 - 01:00:142 - Fixed
5. 01:07:428 (6) - jump here is too hard it's over x2.00 and it is too hard :< You shouldn't se too fast jumps here, because it will stress players! This is not an [Insane] diff, after all! thjis jump become more easy now ;3
   Note: 01:21:142 (6) - watch out! Those jumps are too hard! Fixed
6. 01:07:428 (6) - I guess you've missed a beat at this tick. It seems like it is needed here. Without it your pattern sounds empty.
7. 01:07:428 (6) - same as above. Apply both those suggestions, or ignore both of them. Consistency, you know /
8. 01:18:999 (1) - just saying, that this slider may be considered as unrankable, because it has "slowdown" on its start. But you should ask BATs, if you aren't sure. what I'm talking about I will fix this as passable i can ;w;
   Note: same for 01:22:428 (1) 01:51:571 (1) - 01:53:285 (1) - 02:54:571 (9) - 02:58:428 (1) - 03:27:571 (1) - 03:33:357 (2,3,4) -
9. 01:43:642 (2,3,4) - sudden anti-jumps are unreadable. Try to place at least a new combo on (2) to make them readable. But I'd keep using regular spacing here. By the way, I don't like the way how you ignore strong beats on white ticks here :<
   Note: same for 01:50:499 (2,3,4) - 01:57:357 (2,3,4) - 03:19:642 (2,3,4) - 03:26:500 (2,3,4) - Fixed all
10. 02:17:285 (1,2) - do not ignore white ticks! End those sliders on whiteticks. It'll give you consistent and enjoyable rhythm. Wat's more it fits much better here. Fixed
11. 03:16:214 (2,3) - random spacing changes for no reason. They're quite stressful for players and it is impossibe to read them here. Consider stacking notes properly or keeping regular spacing here.

Fixed


[Endstep]
This diff looks much better, Have you mapped it later than other diffs?

1. 01:06:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even for an EXTRA diff, 1/4 jumps are unplayable. Please, do not use them at all! I think this jumps are okay to play, dont change it first ;w;
2. Some of sliders during kiais (with red dots) may be unrankable. Please make sure that you don't use red dots to slowdown/speed up sliders.
3. 01:12:999 (1) - Unsnapped slider. Try to re-snap this slider, if it is possible. Fixed
   
   Actually, patterns here aren't that bad. But I'm unsure about this diff. Because there're too mant sliders where you use red dots to slowdown sliders. What's more you overuse Slider Velocity changes here. It makes map too hard and unreadable. I'm pretty sure, that you don't really need too many different slider velocities. Try to think it over and remove some slider velocities. (same for ALL [Insane] diffs in this mapset)

owo

[Endsane]

1. Consider using OD7, it'll make your mapset more balanced and this is [Insane] diff, after all. Fixed
2. 00:15:357 (1,2) - spacing is inconsistent here for no reason. Try to place a NC to make it readable, or you can fix spacing here. Fixed
3. 00:30:142 (1,1) - I'd remove this and this new combo to keep comboing more consistent. It doesn't looks like it is needed here, anyway. :<
4. 00:55:856 - place here a circle, to follow vocals. It'll make your diff much more playable.
   Note: 00:59:284 - same here nice
5. 01:14:713 (1,1,1,1) - if you use velocity changes here, make sure they're readable. I bet none of players will be able to pass it PROPERLY for the first try!
   Note: 01:28:427 (1,1,1,1) - 02:50:713 (1,1,1,1) - 03:04:427 (1,1,1,1) - 03:09:892 (1,1) - 03:36:999 (1,1,1) - same Thinking...(it is good to die for the first time((runs
6. 01:20:499 (8) - this 1/4 jump is unreadabl and confusing for players. try to keep consistent spacing during streams! Same happens 01:30:463 (4,5) - here and so on. It looks like 1/2 patterns and players will be confused. I'm begging you do not change spacing when you do 1/4 patterns. In 99% cases it is a bad idea and makes map unplaable!
7. 01:35:606 (2,3,1) - 1/4 and then 1/1 at the same stack. It is quite had for players to read it. What's more you may miss (1) after clicking (3). That's why I recommend you to move (1) somewhere else.
8. 01:42:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - please avoid NC spam unless you have reasons to do it. I'm begging you.
9. 02:47:713 (5) - consider replacing this slider with something easier readable? I feel like this shape looks pretty awkward here. :<
10. 03:10:642 - have you missed a circle here? It feels like you've missed it because this is end of the kiai and it is reasonable to have a circle here!
11. 03:11:606 (2,3,1) - same mistake as 01:20:499 (8). I feel like you've just copypasted some patterns. Please, don't do it! I is disrespect towards players :<
12. 03:18:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I'm sure that you have copypasted 01:42:142 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1). Do not copy your mistakes, remove those extra new combos, they are overused and looks messy here.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I did my best to help you. I'm sure that you should re-work a lot of patterns in all diffs. Also you should avoid all this copypasta and weird velocity changes. I really hope that ths mod will help you to improve your map.

I can only say that -Bakari- is such a god modder
I love you
btw thank you so much for mod >w<
fixed a lot of problems

Hi there


[Easy]
00:26:713 (2) - Reverse, flip vertically and horizontally for better flow?
01:24:141 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bar
01:25:856 (3) - New combo, since you add NC every 2 bars
01:40:427 (2) - ^
01:54:141 (2) - ^
01:57:570 (4) - ^
02:36:142 (2) - Stack the head slider with 02:33:999 (3) to make it clean looks? lol
03:39:784 (1) - End it at long white tick? You probably mistake or something


[Normal]
00:32:714 (1) - Remove new combo, it doesn't changing the vocal part at music
00:57:357 (4) - Spacing error
01:00:999 (5) - ^
01:37:857 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Please use distance spacing 1.00x, because other part in chorus part is using distance spacing 1.00x. Just to make sure it's consistent, unless you have a reason
02:50:713 (4) - Spacing error


[Hard]
00:31:857 (3) - Forgot to put clap here?
00:35:285 (3) - ^


[Endstep]
01:12:999 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
01:42:142 (1,1,1,1,1) - This combo pattern seemse doesn't make sense, IMO
01:48:357 (2,3) - If you do this, players will hard to tell which one is head/tail slider. Consider to change the pattern
02:59:500 (2,3) - ^
03:18:142 (1,1,1,1,1) - This combo pattern seemse doesn't make sense, IMO
03:24:357 (2,3) - Same issue as 01:48:357 (2,3)


Good luck~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[Easy]
00:26:713 (2) - Reverse, flip vertically and horizontally for better flow? Fixed
01:24:141 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bar Fixed
01:25:856 (3) - New combo, since you add NC every 2 bars Fixed
01:40:427 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:54:141 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:57:570 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:36:142 (2) - Stack the head slider with 02:33:999 (3) to make it clean looks? lol Fixed
03:39:784 (1) - End it at long white tick? You probably mistake or something Fixed


[Normal]
00:32:714 (1) - Remove new combo, it doesn't changing the vocal part at music Fixed
00:57:357 (4) - Spacing error Fixed
01:00:999 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:37:857 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Please use distance spacing 1.00x, because other part in chorus part is using distance spacing 1.00x. Just to make sure it's consistent, unless you have a reason Fixed
02:50:713 (4) - Spacing error Fixed


[Hard]
00:31:857 (3) - Forgot to put clap here? Sure
00:35:285 (3) - ^ Awesome \o/


[Endstep]
01:12:999 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider Fixed
01:42:142 (1,1,1,1,1) - This combo pattern seemse doesn't make sense, IMO I think it is ok because i do the speed change(?) of this slider
01:48:357 (2,3) - If you do this, players will hard to tell which one is head/tail slider. Consider to change the pattern this is ok to see if you play and I try to change the pattern before but some modder want me to stack this notes back together ;w; so dont change it first ;w;
02:59:500 (2,3) - ^ ^
03:18:142 (1,1,1,1,1) - This combo pattern seemse doesn't make sense, IMO same as 01:42:142 (1,1,1,1,1) -
03:24:357 (2,3) - Same issue as 01:48:357 (2,3) same as 01:48:357 (2,3) -


Good luck~

Thank you so much for taking my pm reqs >w<
Fixed a lot of problems >w<

I'll probably mod this map soon, because I love it.

TicClick wrote:

I'll probably mod this map soon, because I love it.

YES!!!OMG!!!
Thank you for loving this ;w;

as your request

[General]
fine

[Normal]
03:06:998 (3) - unsnapped slider end
03:38:926 (1) - ^
01:40:964 (2) - better to use same spacing here, or the rhythm is too hard to read

[Hard]
03:44:713 - why not use soft sound here?

[Endstep]
01:07:856 (5) - move it to the centre? looks better imo
01:53:927 - add a note here?
03:29:927 - ^
03:44:713 - same as Hard

[Endsane]
03:44:713 - same as Hard

awesome, call me back then

General

1. Please use preview time 01:06:999 or 01:08:713 which fits more than the current one

Okay imma try it out

[Endstep]

1. 00:10:857 (2) - shouldn't it have the same hitsound on the sliderbody as on 00:10:428 (1)?
2. 00:41:071 (1) - I feel like you should replace it with two notes to map the downbeat on 00:41:284 and therefore make player hit the note at that time
3. 00:53:284 - I would drag break's end back to make it start right here to put more emphasis
4. 01:08:714 (1) - I would add finish here
5. 01:10:749 (2) - it feels a bit odd to hit it and not hear hit sound (all the other sliders have it). I undestand that you made it intentionally because you used whistle on its body, but you better bring it back (if you agree, look for similar sliders and fix them in this manner)
6. 01:36:141 (1) - I would add finish here
7. 01:34:534 - add spinner to fill the pause? In my opinion, it plays better
8. 01:38:713 - you didn't map this beat! Please consider doing so (possible solution: http://puu.sh/34kxx.jpg, where 3, 4 and 5 replaced your slider with a single repeat)
9. 01:42:999 (1) - add finish here (I think you got my idea of adding a finish on every 4th big white tick)
10. 01:49:107 (1) - I feel like there should be a note instead of this slider, which needs to be moved 1/4th forward (possible pattrern). Sure it will require a bit of work, but.. well, it might be just my opinion
11. 01:54:142 - you skipped this one too (well, it will be a bit harder to rework than the previous one)
12. 02:03:571 (1) - Endsane and Hard have a kiai fountain here
    
    Apply everything you agree with me on to the next kiai parts.

[Endsane]

1. 01:11:713 (6) - blargh, it overlaps itself. Why don't you change its shape to a better one?
2. 01:12:999 (1,2,3) - fix spacing or stack the circle onto the second slider
3. 01:42:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds like overmap, please consider removing circles from blue ticks
4. 01:48:463 (4,2,1) - add whistle
5. 01:49:856 (1) and 01:53:284 (1) - ^ (check the rest to add missing whistles)
6. 02:03:570 (1) - add finish
7. 02:23:713 (6) - make a proper stack or just move it from under the slider
8. 02:34:427 (1,2) - make a proper stack
9. 02:40:749 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - same as above (it doesn't work this way: http://puu.sh/34l0H.jpg)
10. 02:47:713 (5,1) - such an ugly overlap, any chance of fixing it by spacing them out or changing their shapes a bit?
11. 03:10:534 - better end the kiai fountain here
12. 03:18:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - sounds like overmap, please consider removing circles from blue ticks
13. 03:24:463 (4,2,1) - add whistle
14. 03:25:856 (1) and 03:29:284 (1) - ^ (check the rest to add missing whistles)
15. 03:37:856 - end kiai here (and remove the next green offset because you won't need it after you do this)
    
    I skipped something, for example, checking for missing finishes, but you should be able to do it on your own.

Quick look:

1. Hard: end kiai here: 03:37:856
2. Normal: same as above

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
fine

[Normal]
03:06:998 (3) - unsnapped slider end Fixed
03:38:926 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:40:964 (2) - better to use same spacing here, or the rhythm is too hard to read Fixed

[Hard]
03:44:713 - why not use soft sound here? ok

[Endstep]
01:07:856 (5) - move it to the centre? looks better imo nice!
01:53:927 - add a note here? ok
03:29:927 - ^ ok
03:44:713 - same as Hard Fixed

[Endsane]
03:44:713 - same as Hard Fixed

awesome, call me back then <3

Thank you so much for taking my pm reqs >w<
Fixed all!

TicClick wrote:

General

1. Please use preview time 01:06:999 or 01:08:713 which fits more than the current one

Okay imma try it out

[Endstep]

1. 00:10:857 (2) - shouldn't it have the same hitsound on the sliderbody as on 00:10:428 (1)?
2. 00:41:071 (1) - I feel like you should replace it with two notes to map the downbeat on 00:41:284 and therefore make player hit the note at that time sorry but I think speed up slider will be more better ;w;
3. 00:53:284 - I would drag break's end back to make it start right here to put more emphasis nice!
4. 01:08:714 (1) - I would add finish here added
5. 01:10:749 (2) - it feels a bit odd to hit it and not hear hit sound (all the other sliders have it). I undestand that you made it intentionally because you used whistle on its body, but you better bring it back (if you agree, look for similar sliders and fix them in this manner) I will think more about it
6. 01:36:141 (1) - I would add finish here added
7. 01:34:534 - add spinner to fill the pause? In my opinion, it plays better I think it is not so well but I will think more about it ;w;
8. 01:38:713 - you didn't map this beat! Please consider doing so (possible solution: http://puu.sh/34kxx.jpg, where 3, 4 and 5 replaced your slider with a single repeat)
9. 01:42:999 (1) - add finish here (I think you got my idea of adding a finish on every 4th big white tick) added
10. 01:49:107 (1) - I feel like there should be a note instead of this slider, which needs to be moved 1/4th forward (possible pattrern). Sure it will require a bit of work, but.. well, it might be just my opinion sorry but I think the original one is better
11. 01:54:142 - you skipped this one too (well, it will be a bit harder to rework than the previous one) ok
12. 02:03:571 (1) - Endsane and Hard have a kiai fountain here Fixed
    
    Apply everything you agree with me on to the next kiai parts. sure!

[Endsane]

1. 01:11:713 (6) - blargh, it overlaps itself. Why don't you change its shape to a better one? Fixed
2. 01:12:999 (1,2,3) - fix spacing or stack the circle onto the second slider Fixed
3. 01:42:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds like overmap, please consider removing circles from blue ticks just like Endstep and I think this part is ok to be overmap a bit ;w;
4. 01:48:463 (4,2,1) - add whistle Fixed
5. 01:49:856 (1) and 01:53:284 (1) - ^ (check the rest to add missing whistles) Fixed
6. 02:03:570 (1) - add finish Fixed
7. 02:23:713 (6) - make a proper stack or just move it from under the slider Fixed
8. 02:34:427 (1,2) - make a proper stack Fixed
9. 02:40:749 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - same as above (it doesn't work this way: http://puu.sh/34l0H.jpg) Fixed
10. 02:47:713 (5,1) - such an ugly overlap, any chance of fixing it by spacing them out or changing their shapes a bit? Fixed
11. 03:10:534 - better end the kiai fountain here Fixed
12. 03:18:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - sounds like overmap, please consider removing circles from blue ticks just like Endstep and I think this part is ok to be overmap a bit ;w;
13. 03:24:463 (4,2,1) - add whistle Fixed
14. 03:25:856 (1) and 03:29:284 (1) - ^ (check the rest to add missing whistles) Fixed
15. 03:37:856 - end kiai here (and remove the next green offset because you won't need it after you do this) Fixed
    
    I skipped something, for example, checking for missing finishes, but you should be able to do it on your own.

Quick look:

1. Hard: end kiai here: 03:37:856 Fixed
2. Normal: same as above

Fixed

Thank you so much for modding my map and fav it >w<!

Foreverends wrote:

TicClick wrote:

1. 00:53:284 - I would drag break's end back to make it start right here to put more emphasis nice!

Wait, no! I meant this:

TicClick wrote:

Wait, no! I meant this:

SPOILER

Result:

silly me DX
Fixed!
Thanks >w<

no kd

[Normal]
03:39:142 - unsnapped

call me back then

wcx19911123 wrote:

no kd

[Normal]
03:39:142 - unsnapped Fixed

call me back then

Thank you ;w;

this is bad \:D/
edit: after self-popped and fixed a slider in Hard diff, checked and rebubbled

wcx19911123 wrote:

this is bad \:D/

omg!!!!!!!
I love you!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much ;w;!!!

加油JJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ

yeah. I hope this beatmap gonna be approved

加油沖上去 >v<

happy623 wrote:

8-) 加油JJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ

[CrusadeR] wrote:

yeah. I hope this beatmap gonna be approved

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

加油沖上去 >v<

Thanks all <3

Hi. Sneeking in to check the bubbled Taikos.

[ Oni]

Actually I'm okay with the Oni. Would see no reason why not to rank it.

[ Muzukashii]

Muzukashii is so far okay and patterns not too hard due to the slow BPM.
Just a recommendation from me before it gets ranked:

Consider to keep the SV in kiais the same. In most cases Muzukashii don't have any SV changes. It also prevents having overlaps like 02:01:641 (44,1) - . Some people might consider this as unrankable, so think about it.

That's it. There shouldn't be any problem to rank the Taikos. Good luck!

hurry up and rank this ;w;

OnosakiHito wrote:

Hi. Sneeking in to check the bubbled Taikos.

[ Oni]

Actually I'm okay with the Oni. Would see no reason why not to rank it.

[ Muzukashii]

Muzukashii is so far okay and patterns not too hard due to the slow BPM.
Just a recommendation from me before it gets ranked:

Consider to keep the SV in kiais the same. In most cases Muzukashii don't have any SV changes. It also prevents having overlaps like 02:01:641 (44,1) - . Some people might consider this as unrankable, so think about it.

That's it. There shouldn't be any problem to rank the Taikos. Good luck!

will fix when another BAT arrive
Thank you >w<

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

hurry up and rank this ;w;

I will call BAT to check bubble soon
Thank you

黎啦黎啦

happy623 wrote:

黎啦黎啦

射喇射喇

¸.·´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨)
(¸.·´ (¸.·` . ¸.•´ ¸.•*´¨☆

star!

very op if bubbled~

Irreversible wrote:

¸.·´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨)
(¸.·´ (¸.·` . ¸.•´ ¸.•*´¨☆

star!

very op if bubbled~

Thank you so much for star!

Foreverends wrote:

OnosakiHito wrote:

Hi. Sneeking in to check the bubbled Taikos.

[ Oni]

Actually I'm okay with the Oni. Would see no reason why not to rank it.

[ Muzukashii]

Muzukashii is so far okay and patterns not too hard due to the slow BPM.
Just a recommendation from me before it gets ranked:

Consider to keep the SV in kiais the same. In most cases Muzukashii don't have any SV changes. It also prevents having overlaps like 02:01:641 (44,1) - . Some people might consider this as unrankable, so think about it.

That's it. There shouldn't be any problem to rank the Taikos. Good luck!

will fix when another BAT arrive
Thank you >w<

It's a terrible thing if you wait for another BAT.
What if a BAT comes in and ranks it without paying attention to this post? (Evwn if they should, we never know, right.)
If I was you, I would do the change now and recall the bubbler to rebubble.

Gabe wrote:

It's a terrible thing if you wait for another BAT.
What if a BAT comes in and ranks it without paying attention to this post? (Evwn if they should, we never know, right.)
If I was you, I would do the change now and recall the bubbler to rebubble.

ok
Thank you for remind me

加油繼續沖上去:D

Gabe wrote:

It's a terrible thing if you wait for another BAT.
What if a BAT comes in and ranks it without paying attention to this post? (Evwn if they should, we never know, right.)
If I was you, I would do the change now and recall the bubbler to rebubble.

THE POWER OF LAZINESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

now you're bat again, rank this map pls thx

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

加油繼續沖上去:D

sure <3
Thanks 佑佑<3 (gay

Flask wrote:

Gabe wrote:

It's a terrible thing if you wait for another BAT.
What if a BAT comes in and ranks it without paying attention to this post? (Evwn if they should, we never know, right.)
If I was you, I would do the change now and recall the bubbler to rebubble.

THE POWER OF LAZINESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

now you're bat again, rank this map pls thx

LOL

加油！ end-神麻婆~！

Gabe wrote:

It's a terrible thing if you wait for another BAT.
What if a BAT comes in and ranks it without paying attention to this post? (Evwn if they should, we never know, right.)
If I was you, I would do the change now and recall the bubbler to rebubble.

So notice it in the creator's word plus here
Or you should rank it :X

mintong89 wrote:

加油！ end-神麻婆~！

Yeah米桶來集氣\:D/

nold_1702 wrote:

Gabe wrote:

It's a terrible thing if you wait for another BAT.
What if a BAT comes in and ranks it without paying attention to this post? (Evwn if they should, we never know, right.)
If I was you, I would do the change now and recall the bubbler to rebubble.

So notice it in the creator's word plus here
Or you should rank it :X

so nice x) (me runs

GO GO GO

omg congratz with bubble \:3/

/slow

Flower wrote:

GO GO GO

GO GO POWER RANGER \:D/(?
哦~~~Flower也來了((感動;w;

Kodora wrote:

omg congratz with bubble \:3/

/slow

Thank you for gratz dora <3

Hi there~~random bubble check
you can fix OnosakiHito's mod now :>

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Uncheck letterbox during breaks in both Taiko diffs
2. Remove kiai fountains in both Taiko diffs

[Endstep]

1. 01:40:427 - add a note here for the drum?

[Endsane]

1. 01:04:427 (7) - split it into a note + slider like this?
   
2. 01:07:856 (5) - NC here ?

[Hard]

1. 00:37:000 (10) - looked odd a bit... try this shape?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:00:142 (1,2) - add one repeat to each?

[Normal]

1. 02:43:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - worry about the difficulty here a bit, anyway, not a big issue

That's all, call me back when you're ready

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~random bubble check Yeah \:D/
you can fix OnosakiHito's mod now :>

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Uncheck letterbox during breaks in both Taiko diffs Fixed, Thanks for your help ;w;
2. Remove kiai fountains in both Taiko diffs Fixed

[Endstep]

1. 01:40:427 - add a note here for the drum? Nice, added

[Endsane]

1. 01:04:427 (7) - split it into a note + slider like this? Fixed
   
2. 01:07:856 (5) - NC here ? Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:37:000 (10) - looked odd a bit... try this shape? Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:00:142 (1,2) - add one repeat to each? I think the original one is better, so no change ;w;

[Normal]

1. 02:43:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - worry about the difficulty here a bit, anyway, not a big issue I try another way before but some modder suggest that to stack the notes

That's all, call me back when you're ready

Thank you so much for doing the bubble check of my map \:D/
I am ready owo

OnosakiHito wrote:

Hi. Sneeking in to check the bubbled Taikos.

[ Oni]

Actually I'm okay with the Oni. Would see no reason why not to rank it.

[ Muzukashii]

Muzukashii is so far okay and patterns not too hard due to the slow BPM.
Just a recommendation from me before it gets ranked:

Consider to keep the SV in kiais the same. In most cases Muzukashii don't have any SV changes. It also prevents having overlaps like 02:01:641 (44,1) - . Some people might consider this as unrankable, so think about it.

That's it. There shouldn't be any problem to rank the Taikos. Good luck!

Fixed ;w;
Thank you for modding

恭喜~

Scorpiour wrote:

Ranked~~!!

Thank you so much ;w;
I love you ;w;

qoot8123 wrote:

恭喜~

Thank you >w<!!!

Wow, finally ranked. Good job!

inverness wrote:

Wow, finally ranked. Good job!

Thank you inverness >w<

Congratz!!

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Congratz!!

Thank you >w<

Congratz!!
Skrillex! x3

Midasmens wrote:

Congratz!!
Skrillex! x3

Thanks 小米 >w<

omg congratz

Endsane > Endstep :c

Kodora wrote:

omg congratz

Thank you dora >w<

Harez wrote:

Endsane > Endstep :c

Endsane <=> Endstep D:

D: hahaha

congrats! interesting map

nold_1702 wrote:

D: hahaha

其實最多謝應該係你;w;
你真係幫左我好多><
Thank you so much nold <3

RLC wrote:

congrats! interesting map

OMG!!!it is RLC!!!!
Thanks you so much >w<

我怎麼還記得早上sco還在群裡問"foreverends呢?"

挖恭喜惹

Flask wrote:

我怎麼還記得早上sco還在群裡問"foreverends呢?"

啊例~!!!
btw qq要重裝(哭

raririn wrote:

挖恭喜惹

Thank you raririn >w<

哈 被黑成狗惹

恭喜first rank~

CONGRATZ!! FİNALLY!! RANKEEED!! <3 <3

lol @ user rating.

Even if i personnaly think Endsane and Endstep arent really well maped (wrong AR) but my personnal taste.
Just looks like osu! community too closed-minded and rating song instead of map.

AlphaWaves wrote:

Just looks like osu! community too closed-minded and rating song instead of map.

Unless it's like just that specific song that's bad for whatever reason idunno.

Grats on rank woo.

As for playing this map. . . I don't play much osu!standard, but I think. . .

Imma try it out.

这么好的图谁tm的黑的

lol Thanks all <3

CDFA wrote:

AlphaWaves wrote:

Just looks like osu! community too closed-minded and rating song instead of map.

Unless it's like just that specific song that's bad for whatever reason idunno.

Grats on rank woo.

As for playing this map. . . I don't play much osu!standard, but I think. . .

Imma try it out.

Hum, well its not really what i wanted to say. my bad.
Actually, the 2 hardest maps are really WEIRD, but there are (almost) no mistakes, its accurate, fun to play, etc..
but just because its unusual to see such maps it gets bad ranks, even if the map is nice.

遲來的Gratz

That so coooool

恭喜恭喜
好歌好图

I love endsteeppp I think its easier to use mouse only instead of using it with keyboard xD