ShiauKe wrote:

Hi~from my queue
wonderful map!!
i can't find problem ._.
ranked now!!!

[Insane]

1. 03:23:714 (7) - x:336 y:48 no i want this jump o:

[Hard]

1. 00:35:611 (1) - try this?
   
2. 01:43:714 (3,4,5,6) - i think it is a little close i think 1.0 spacing fits oo!

i really love your map,cRyo ;w;

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi from my queue!

I can't find anything wrong whit this
take this star thx for checking/star

Natsu wrote:

Hi from my Queue

General

• I see alot of greenline unsnapped and why this dont have kiai?

green lines works fine i manually set all unsapped lines, about kiai dont want to add it now, but i will think about it

Easy:

• 00:03:370 Remove finish and add whistle fit better imo dont want 3 whistles in a row
  00:06:473 finish + whistle like the other diff?
  00:07:680 ^
  00:10:266 why this finish better add clap like you did in the other diffs dont know where to add clap there
  00:25:439 add clap
  00:27:508 add clap here like the other diffs
  00:27:852 remove clap from slider head
  00:28:542 whistle again like the other diffs o3o i decided to make little bit different from other diffs o3o!
  00:31:301 missing finish
  00:34:404
  00:43:025 x: 309 y:218 i think current is fine
  01:06:818 add circle here i found this pause weird
  01:47:852 x:294 y:75 dont see difference ^^
  01:55:266 x:260 y:330 to fix the little distance error same
  02:14:577 x:192 y:167 look better (nazi)
  
  how you make fun easys T-T just typical easy xD

Normal:

• 00:02:163 x: 257 y:62 to fix a little the distance error those +-0.1 are fine ^^
  00:05:611 (4) - x: 425 y:360 ^ same
  00:06:473 finish + whistle like the other diff? want to make different!
  00:07:680 ^ same
  00:10:266 add clap
  00:25:439 ^
  00:26:128 missing clap
  00:31:301 finish
  00:35:094 add clap
  01:08:370 remove finish and add clap in the slider tail i think whistle better !
  02:04:232 (4,5) - stack they better like you did in previous patterns not sure what do you mean, i think this placement is fine o.o

Hard:

• i dont see problems here nice diff

Insane:

• 00:10:266 add clap here following your pattern
  00:11:645 remove clap and add finish? i like current one oo!
  02:53:025 x8 y:200 to be perfect in line with (1)
  03:30:094 why no add whistle since i feel weird the song finish without hitsound if you add here add it in all diffs i think muted end fits with music ^^

Nice map hope i help you in something

scanter wrote:

BG size is 1023x767. you should find new one. yeah will fix later o.o!
Check timing unsnapped. unsnapped greenlines fine
plz set on kiai time. dont want to add kiai now, but i will think about it

[Easy]
00:25:439 (1) - Add clap on slider's first. you can hear that.
00:26:818 (3) - Add clap on slider's end. ^
00:27:852 (4) - Clear clap at slider's first.
00:59:749 (2) - Clear clap. you can hear 00:59:921 this part. yes but as you can see there is no note there xD, and this clap sounds fine for me, feels a bit empty without it
01:08:370 (3) - add whistle of slider passing idk its a bit too long for slider whistle, at the end it sounds not that good <.<
01:13:542 (3) - Clear clap same as before since pattern not following white tick claps i decided to add it in other places to fill that emptyness
01:18:197 (5) - NC. sound was changed. dont want NC for only 1 slider
01:31:990 (1) - Fit distance x1.1 no this tottaly fine, there is a huge pause between notes so if i use 1.1 spacing slider will be almost at the edge of the screen and difference between 1.0 and 1.1 wont help you to read this pattern better oo!
01:58:025 (2) - object is too far. fit distance x1.1
02:08:197 (2) - Clear clap at slider's end. actually, you can hear about 02:08:887 this time. same as before
02:10:956 (2) - same. yes ^^
02:24:404 (1) - Clear clap at slider's end. same!
02:29:577 (3) - NC. sound was changed. dont like 1 object NC
02:40:956 (1,2) - How about makes symmetrical? like this. current placement plays better for me !
02:53:197 (2) - maybe you know what I'm saying http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662194 dont understand xD
02:55:956 (3) - How about this? I'm considered vocal's vibration. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662204 it looks nice, but i found this kind of shapes a bit confusing because of slider ball path and always avoid them
02:56:042 - timing point should move to 02:55:956 deleted xD
02:58:370 (2) - Clear clap. you can hear 02:58:542
03:00:611 (2) - Clear clap at slider's end.
03:03:887 (2) - Clear clap.
03:06:645 (2) - ^
03:09:404 (2) - ^
03:12:163 (2) - ^ all this claps sounds fine for me ww

[Normal]
01:01:301 (1) - Add clap slider's first.
01:20:956 (3) - NC. sound was changed. dont like 1object NC
02:29:921 (7) - NC. sound was changed. ^^^
02:53:197 (2) - Move to x:312, y:116. fit distance x1.1

[Hard]
00:59:749 (3) - Ctrl + G. moving looks better. want to keep 1.0 spacing
01:20:956 (3) - NC. sound was changed. dont like 1object NC
02:55:956 (1) - Move to x:407, y:128. not perfect stacked. i think its perfectly stacked o:
03:29:059 (1) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662863 spinner will be too short if i add prespinner note

[Insane]
00:53:887 (2) - Ctrl + G? moving looks good to me i think this angle is little bit weird <_<
01:15:352 (2) - I can't hear about any sound. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662875 triplet plays better for me
01:20:956 (4) - Add NC. sound was changed. ~~~
01:34:145 (6) - Clear this circle. I can't hear any sound. and how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662880 no i clearly hear stream here o:
01:59:145 (6,8,10) - How about clear clap? I think, if you're follow this, so rhythmical this stream. i like current one
03:29:059 (1) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662884 same as before, dont want to make spinner shorter

Good map & Nice song xD so moe. btw GL on rank ! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662908

Teara wrote:

Really solid beatmap set. Second time I tried modding this and now I'm just being really picky. Get a MAT =p getting mat takes forever \=3=/

Good job!

[General]
You have a lot of unsnapped green timing points on all four osu!standard diffs. Please fix this. yeah i know, but the dont need to be fixed because they works exactly as i want them to be

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate/OD +1

Only real complaint here is

02:07:852 (1) - Maybe consider moving this more the the middle, a spinner is the hardest part of the game, and I feel this is to close to the edge. hmm, time distance between spinner and note is big, and i dont think that player will feel anything uncoumfortable here

[Normal]
00:10:439 (1,2) - This might be a little to hard for a Normal, consider making it a slider maybe. why....its just 1/1 rhytm on red ticks, typical pattern for N diffs o.o

Rest looks good!

[Taiko Oni]

00:43:542 (1) - Finish~
00:44:232 (1) - ^
00:56:301 (1) - ^
00:56:818 (1) - ^
02:05:266 (1) - ^
02:05:783 (3) - ^
02:44:059 (2,4) - Remove Finish

[Hard]
The claps right at the start, I'm not to fond of them. (maybe make them a bit softer, or try a different clap hitsound that might fit?) i think soft clap fits fine here o:

[Insane]
Same as hard, the claps right at the start, I'm not to fond of them.

The Tempo/BPM of the song really doesn't warrant a AR of 9! Please reduce it with one. 174bpm is enough for me to set AR9

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ cRyo, sorry for always being late.

General:

-- Uhh,, though you hesitate to, I think you should add kiai.. at least like a short one at 00:58:887. dont want to add it right now

Easy:

00:31:990 (2) - I hope you can do some more work on this. Especially, the second curve doesn't look nice.
01:16:645 (3) - Imo, Normal Finish at the start will be better. prefer ring sound
03:04:232 (3) - ^ same
03:09:749 (3) - ^ same >_<
01:54:059 (1) - Make the curve more symmetric,,
01:55:266 (2) - Imo, the soft whistle at the end didn't sound well. idk, i think it match with vocal o:
02:25:611 (2) - Add Whistle at the start its already got finish, this whistle feels unnecessary o:
02:26:473 (3) - ^ same
02:28:370 (2) - Add whistle in the slide? sounds bad for me, it might be following vocal but completely dont match with music.
03:12:508 (3) - ^ same
03:20:956 (3) - Imo, this isn't a good slider for an easy. Try to get the end point away from the slider to make more readable. i think its absolutely readable o_o

Normal:

00:26:990 (3) - 1 Grid down~
00:31:301 (3,1) - Starting NC at (3) fits the song.
00:30:611 (1) - To avoid short combo because of above, remove NC here.
00:41:645 (1,3) - ^ (maybe)
00:58:542 (1) - Imo, deleting will be better since this is normal,, i think its fine since spinner is not short and this normal is 4+ stars
01:06:301 (3) - 1 Grid down~
01:15:956 (3) - Delete Whistle at the end?
01:16:645 (4,6) - ^
01:17:508 (5) - Add Whistle? finish is enough for me oo!
01:28:370 - Useless green line~
01:33:714 (4) - I think you should add soft-Whistle at the start.
01:40:266 (6,1) - NC (6)
01:51:301 (3,1) - NC (3)
02:04:404 (5) - Delete Whistle at the end? want to keep it ._.
02:07:508 (1) - Similar opinion yes
02:24:232 (1) - 1 grid down~
02:26:473 (5) - Add whistle finish enough oo!
02:42:335 (2) - Add soft-Whistle at the end as (1).
02:45:956 (5) - NC because lyrics starts. i think this short combo is unnecessary
02:49:232 (1) - Consider placing at (128,145) the end of 02:46:128 (2). want to start new part in the middle of the screen
02:58:025 (2) - Delete Whistle at the end? also add clap there
03:03:542 (3) - ^ this one is fine for me
03:25:783 (1,2) - Add Whistle at the start to emphasize more. no...i think only finish sounds better o:
03:27:163 (3) - ^ at the start. same
03:29:059 (3) - In fact, the wiggles should start at 03:29:577 to fit the music better.

Hard:

00:18:025 (3) - Delete Whistle. fine for me
00:49:577 (3) - ^? same
01:03:714 (3) - NC to emphasize instrument?no, this kind of NC doesnt make sense for me, current NC separated with pause, i think its more logic
01:40:266 (7,1) - Start NC at (7) same here, i like to separate NC with pause
01:47:852 (2,3) - Making the distance around 1.20x will be better.
02:18:197 (3,4) - ^
02:46:301 (2) - Add a note at (256,80)? want to keep current symmetry

Insane:

00:18:025 (3) - Delete Whistle fine for me
01:02:508 (7) - ^ at the slide. same oo!
02:34:318 (3) - Deleting this note sounds better. i think current one sounds better >_<
02:39:232 (2) - 1 grid left
03:25:783 (1,2,3) - Add whistle prefer only finish

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hello ! Sorry for the delay u.u

General

1. There is a lot of unsnapped sections in all the diffs but i guess its fine
2. When you make a slider try to end the slider in the middle of the circle like this http://puu.sh/2KpHl.jpg i know it takes a whistle, but it really helps you whit symmetrical issues its too complicated w
3. No KIA time it`s something you don't have to miss you add some fun to the playing, just my opinion dont want to add kiai <_<
4. Bg.jpg is 1023x767 the recommended size is 1024x768 i resized it for you: thx xD

Easy

1. 00:06:128 (x) - Try to a note whit whistle here, it sounds good whit the instrumental i want to keep current pause, time for recover etc + divides slow part and fast part
2. 00:33:714 (3) - Remove that whistle if you hear the instrumental there is no whistle there i hear whistle
3. 03:17:508 (1) - Add NC before the spinner

Normal

1. 00:19:404 (5) - I think that this slider its better if you do it like this http://puu.sh/2KpRy.jpg it flows better idk but current angle flows better for me o.o!
2. 00:24:749 (4) - Remove NC i don't think its neccesary there
3. 01:15:266 (1) - Remove NC, 01:15:439 (2) Add NC i think it fits better whit how are you placing the NC
4. 01:47:508 (1) - Remove NC i don't think its neccesary there due there is no change of voice or a high pitch
5. 03:02:852 (1) - Remove NC, 03:03:025 (2) Add NC flows better whit the vocals ^^^^ i think all this NC following vocal, so dont want to change ._.

Hard

1. 00:47:163 (1) - Unnecesary NC remove it NC for changing rhytm
2. 00:55:956 (5) - I think this jump its really hard, i know this Diff is named Hard but try to avoid jumps every second you can play it but players not so pro can't, its just an opinion don't get mad i think this jumps very easy >_<
3. 01:50:956 (5) - I suggest to remove that slider and put three notes there like this http://puu.sh/2KqDn.jpg it really plays better according to hte vocals and the instrumental dont want to do that because vocal ends 1 tick earlier then music, and i think islider plays better

Insane

• OD +1 i like OD7 >_<

It is a good map, no biggest problems i hope to see it ranked soon.

Good Luck!