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Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-06-21T23:22:59+00:00

Everything taken except Lunah's spinner thing :3~

Illumined

59 posts

Joined May 2012

Illumined 2012-06-22T00:44:14+00:00

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

Please check the offset for all difficulties. They're now with Offset: 1087.32321758132 ←this numeber orz

Easy
00:55:944 (1) - Super nazi. Move slider's end 1 grid up.

-kevincela-'s Normal
Sounds bad while custom claps aren't placed on 2/4 beats orz..

Tons of unused timing section D: eg:
00:14:901 -
00:15:001 -
00:34:001 -
...etc

I found that there are MATs that requiring mappers to remove bookmarks for reducing file size. So may timing sections should be removed too?

02:38:458 (2,3,4) - Rhythm suggestion, to coordinate with 02:35:715 (2,3,4) -

02:41:544 (4) - A bit out of screen...?

Insane
AR is absolutely not enough while during guitar solo. Highly recommend to rearrange that part.

Collab
Lizzehb
00:37:429 (2,3) - Feel llke these two could be Ctrl+R.
00:48:401 (4,5) - Strange gap D: Adding note between them?
00:49:944 (1,2,3) - Spacing

Lilac
01:38:287 (6,7) - Use the same spacing as 01:37:772 (5,6) - for a better flow?

Derekku
03:19:257 - to 03:24:743 - Awesome!

/facepalm to my useless modding
Good luck!

Saturnalize

1,490 posts

Joined March 2011

Saturnalize 2012-06-23T19:30:43+00:00

1/7 BEATMAP

=General=
Klean. (if you know what I mean)

=Easy=
1. 00:14:801 (1) - Fourth dot one grid tiny up, because of this. http://puu.sh/D7rQ
2. 00:19:601 (3) - No, just no. Make this neater, please. This would just perfect. http://puu.sh/D7tU
3. 00:34:344 (1,2,1,2,3) - Nice curve with a point, but if we take a look from 00:34:344 (1) - , it looks (imho) ugly. So, make something like this? http://puu.sh/D7wm
4. 01:40:515 (3) - Neater, yeah. http://puu.sh/D7yP

=-kevincela-'s Normal=
1. 00:20:715 - Break? It's empty here so perhaps it can fill the emptiness?
2. 00:31:687 - ^
3. 00:37:172 - ^
4. 00:51:658 (3) - Second point to (164,72)
6. 01:04:258 - Another awkward emptiness, but this time you can put spinner. (1,2,3, too. Just please, empty part are ugly and makes no sense when it's really empty)
7. 01:43:001 - COME ON D:
8. 01:48:487 - D:
9. 02:15:572 - Shouldn't tell you again about what do I want to say.

So many emptiness, fill with slider, spinner, or break, you choose.

=impossiblexu's Hard=
Great, just fix some overlap and you're done.

=Insane=
1. 01:47:373 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use Create polygon circle.
2. 01:49:430 (1) - Sakura has point this stuff out, time to recall. http://puu.sh/zGNe
3. 02:48:230 (8) - http://puu.sh/D80H
4. 02:53:030 (6) - http://puu.sh/D820

=Collab=
Awesome as expected!

=Ozzy's Taik-On!!=
Nothing bad, some streams can be replaced with sliders, especially during the guitar holding notes.

Good luck <3

Mercurial

Mercurial 2012-06-25T19:25:14+00:00

I like the way this is going...

GAY!

General

Inconsistency on Combo Colours: http://puu.sh/DzVD
Inconsistency on Kiai Times: http://puu.sh/DzWT http://puu.sh/DzX7

Easy

AR 5???? WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING ABOUT?! Turn down until AR 3, please.
HP -1, yeah.
00:38:630 (4) Touching HP-Bar http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352779
01:42:915 (1) Why NC Here? The vocal doesn't change here.
02:16:858 - Breaktime what?
03:08:286 (6) NC Here. o/

Normal

AR4, nice ♥
Since this diff moves too fast, CS4 could be better.
00:08:458 (4) Circles under sliders could be messy for beginner/normal players.
00:13:944 (5) ^
00:20:801 - Breaktime here, please.
00:31:772 - ^
00:37:258 - ^
00:45:487 (2) Same as 00:08:458
00:54:401 (3) The tail is touching the score section.
01:25:258 (6) Same as 00:08:458
01:32:115 - Same as 00:20:801
01:43:087 - ^
01:48:572 - ^
01:59:544 (2) Same as 00:08:458.
02:02:287 (2) ^
03:03:315 (2) ^

Solid Diff anyway.

Hard

00:37:429 (3,4,5,6) This -> http://puu.sh/DAik

Insane

01:28:344 (11) Clap here (Tail)
02:16:858 - Breaktime what?
03:34:343 (1,2,3,4) They aren't parallel sliders.

Collab

00:46:858 (8) THIS IS NOT A MOD COMMENT. Talking about rare sliders.
00:47:372 (9,1,2) Those sliders aren't parallel, also, spacing is weird. http://puu.sh/DAtc
01:06:744 (6) Touching HP-Bar http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/352806
KURISUCHIANU BADASS MAPPER.
02:34:687 - http://puu.sh/DAC2. Yeah.

That's all for now.

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2012-06-26T17:15:55+00:00

I really don't agree about the circles under the sliders,but for the rest go ahead and fix CDFA

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-06-26T21:57:16+00:00

swwwaaaggg~

I won't change the name in the storyboard, but I did notice that I forgot about adding his new name to the tags~.

Lizbeth

osu! Alumni

1,731 posts

Joined August 2008

Lizbeth 2012-06-27T03:17:17+00:00

Hi~

[Collab]
00:55:429 (4) - new combo
01:01:429 (3) - delete this note and place the next slider here, adding a repeat.
01:03:315 (1) - what about start a slider here till 01:03:658 - and add a note here: 01:03:829, fits good with the vocals~
01:12:572 (1,2,3,4) - I think this should start here instead: 01:12:401 - Move backwards those objects and add a circle here: 01:13:429 - Remember to fix placement in the chart if you do this.
02:01:429 (9) - I dont like this slider being different from the rest, the set seems out of balance, what about something like this: http://puu.sh/DVrj
02:03:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There isnt anything in the song that justify this stream, consider to do something else here.
02:16:172 (2) - why not put this slider in a jump? I think it would fit good here.

[Insane]
01:49:430 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:601 (3) - add new combo.
02:59:886 (3) - same
03:10:857 (3) - same
03:20:629 (6) - new combo

[impossiblexu's Hard]
00:55:430 (4) - Tricky spacing there.
02:16:687 (1) - remove new combo, and add it here: 02:17:201 -
Also not sure about 1/4 notes for this hard, the streams longer than 3 circles seem not to fit well with the difficulty.

[-kevincela-'s Normal]
Seems fine, nice clean map.~

[Easy]
00:44:973 (1) - Maybe a bit too fast after the spinner, why not end spinner at: 00:43:601 - and start it one beat earlier to make it longer.
01:56:287 (1) - same here
02:57:315 (1) - same here... though this one is harder to fix.... >: Could be an exception.

[Ozzy's Taik-On!!]
I think you should lighten some sections, the map is too intense all the time, some easier sections would be good in my opinion.

Myan~

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-06-28T06:11:25+00:00

So I'll see if Lizzehb can change her parts, since they're kinda big things

I took a lot of the mod, though >3<~. Thanks for modding, Lizbeth-sama

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Tur00 2012-06-30T01:47:43+00:00

[easy]

00:28:515 (1) - Dont use much sliders with form of line dont look very good in a easy lvl :C
http://puu.sh/ErFq

00:16:687 (3) - Change the sample "Whistle" for Finish.

01:49:773 (5) - Change this direction to http://puu.sh/ErHm

01:55:258 (5,6,7) - I think that this notes dont song with rithym.. delete those?

02:48:401 (4) - the sample "finish" dont sound good :$, better whistle.

02:51:830 (3) - change the sample "finish" for Whistle.

02:53:887 (4) - Delete this note and better start the spinner here but the final spin is in the same place 02:56:544

[-keincela-'s Normal]

02:13:087 (2) - Delete this note and put a circle with clap.

02:13:429 (2) - if you make ^ , i think that this space is empty . Make a circle without sample.

02:14:115 (3) - delete the reverse arrow and move the slider to 02:14:458 "the first part of the slider with
clap but the second without sample".

02:13:772 (2) - if you make ^ , i think that you can make a slider that end in 02:14:115 "the first part of
the slider with clap but the second without sample" .

i think that those are to follow better the rhythm .
I think that are so. http://puu.sh/ExWo

03:14:115 (2) - Delete this note and put a circle with clap.

03:14:457 (2) - if you make ^ , i think that this space is empty . Make a circle without sample.

03:15:143 (3) - Delete this slider and better put a circle in 03:15:468 "with clap" .

03:14:800 (2) - if you make ^ , i think that you can make a slider that end in 03:15:143
"the first part of the slider with clap but the second without sample"

the same message of the previous mod. only rhythm D:
I think that are so. http://puu.sh/EyaR

This is all of this diff.

[imposiblexu's Hard]

00:29:201 (3) - delete this slider and better add a slider that end in 00:29:372 without sample

00:29:544 (3) - if you make ^ you can add a hit circle here .. with "clap"

00:30:401 (3) - delete this slider and better add a slider that end in 00:30:572 with "whistle" in the first part of the slider.
And the second without sample.

00:30:744 (3) - if you make ^ you can add a hit circle here .. with "whistle"

01:57:487 (1) - delete this slider and better add a hitcircle with

01:57:658 (1) - if you make ^ you can add a slider that end in 01:57:829 without sample

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <'**'> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is all .. i cant mod the insane diif , why is very hard to me =( srry
wait that this mod can help you :3
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~(°*-*°)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2012-06-30T14:28:19+00:00

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Keep the combo color the same in each diff
Keep the kiai time the same in each diff too.

[Easy]
00:24:401 (2) - spacing
00:34:344 (1,2) - delete finish (need not use here :< even a bit noisy)
00:35:372 (2,3) - ^
00:39:487 (1,2) - ^
00:35:030 (1) - delete
00:40:173 (3) - ^
01:28:001 (4) - ummm..cosider not moving it to another placec
01:30:230 (2) - spacing
01:33:315 (5) - try to end at 01:33:315 here
02:40:173 (1) - spacing
02:45:658 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - abuse finish?

[-kevincela-'s Normal]
HD+1or2 OD+1 (since the OD in Easy diff is the same ,and HD is even higher)
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:14:901 (snap to 00:14:887)
00:15:001 (snap to 00:14:972)

[impossiblexu's Hard]
00:28:515 (1) - x:472 y:256
00:55:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - so tiny spacing, try to make it stright
02:00:230 (1) - ctrl+r (maybe do a better effect)
02:00:573 (2) - the same as above
03:17:200 (3) - spacing?

[Insane]
00:34:001 (1) - spacing
00:44:287 (1) - try quintuple
01:55:601 (1,2) - ^
03:22:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try anti-clockwise

[Collab]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:16:598 (snap to 00:16:601)
00:48:744 - a note here...
00:51:487 (7) - ^
01:06:401 (4,5,6,7) - spacing??
01:40:515 (5) - try reducing a return
02:04:515 (1) - separate from the stream
02:04:858 (2) - reduce 2 return and only need add a note at 02:05:372
03:07:772 (10) - newcombo
03:15:315 (2) - move to another place
03:21:143 (5,7) - ctrl+r
--------------------------------------------------
Nice Mapset > <
old map o3o
Good Luck with Rank

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-06-30T19:37:28+00:00

Thanks for modding.

Combo Colors: I'm leaving them the same for mapper preference and rules stating that diffs made by different people can have different colors
Same with Kiai
Lilac told me he was re-mapping his part, so I won't change them for right now. If he ends up not re-mapping, I'll change stuff~.

Thanks again for the modding :3

jossieP

1,875 posts

Joined May 2010

jossieP 2012-07-01T15:39:05+00:00

CDFA wrote:
RRRRRIIIITTTTTSSSSUUUUUEEEEENNNNN

/o/!!!!!

dont want to mod k-on but take some stars instead

Derekku

COOL DUDE

7,270 posts

Joined March 2009

Derekku 2012-07-01T19:04:07+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
03:07:772 (10) - newcombo i don't see the need; the combo only goes up to 15, and there's a 13-combo in another spot of my part
03:15:315 (2) - move to another place (1) was supposed to be a jump, but I see now how 2 is then confusing. Changed this section a bit
03:21:143 (5,7) - ctrl+r i don't see why? but i do agree that those streams on the right side are a bit ugly, so i rotated them both out a bit

CDFA: replace everything in my part (between the spinner at the beginning and the spinner at the end) with this:

SPOILER

300,192,177315,5,4
16,120,177657,1,8
16,264,177829,1,0
308,120,178172,2,0,B|348:128|376:152|388:192|376:232|348:256|308:264,3,210
16,120,179543,1,0
84,252,179715,1,8
220,192,179886,1,0
256,48,180057,5,4
292,192,180229,1,0
428,252,180400,1,8
496,120,180572,1,0
204,264,180915,2,0,B|164:256|136:232|124:192|136:152|164:128|204:120,3,210
496,264,182286,1,0
428,132,182457,1,8
292,192,182629,1,0
256,204,182715,1,0
220,192,182800,5,4
256,48,182972,1,0
292,192,183143,1,8
256,336,183315,2,0,B|218:296|158:312|158:312|142:252|89:240,1,210
20,116,183829,1,8
160,76,184000,2,0,B|212:92|256:48|256:48|300:92|352:76,1,210
492,116,184515,1,8
421,240,184686,2,0,B|369:252|353:312|353:312|293:296|256:336,1,210
220,192,185200,1,8
256,48,185372,1,0
256,48,185457,1,0
256,48,185543,5,4
292,192,185715,1,0
420,240,185886,1,8
292,192,186057,1,0
92,240,186400,1,0
220,192,186572,1,8
92,240,186743,1,4
256,48,187086,1,4
420,240,187429,1,4
92,240,187772,1,0
116,256,187857,1,0
144,272,187943,1,8
172,288,188029,1,0
200,304,188115,1,0
228,320,188200,1,0
256,336,188286,5,4
388,284,188457,1,0
428,148,188629,1,8
328,48,188800,2,0,B|320:88|296:116|256:128|216:116|192:88|184:48,4,210
327,335,190515,1,0
428,236,190686,1,8
388,100,190857,1,0
256,48,191029,5,4
124,100,191200,1,0
84,236,191372,1,8
184,336,191543,2,0,B|192:296|216:268|256:256|296:268|320:296|328:336,4,210
184,48,193257,1,0
84,148,193429,1,8
124,284,193600,1,0
256,336,193772,5,4
404,80,194115,1,8
108,80,194457,1,0
200,144,194629,1,0
312,144,194800,1,8
404,80,194972,5,4
200,292,195315,1,0
312,292,195486,1,8
256,384,195657,1,0
256,0,196000,1,0
312,92,196171,1,8
200,92,196342,1,0
108,96,196515,6,0,B|64:248|148:364|256:388|256:388|364:364|448:248|404:96,1,735,4|4
256,336,198057,1,0
256,232,198229,1,0
304,132,198400,1,0
256,336,198743,1,0
256,232,198915,1,0
208,132,199086,1,0
72,112,199257,5,4
208,40,199429,1,0
280,176,199600,1,8
144,248,199772,1,0
216,120,199943,1,0
352,48,200115,1,0
424,184,200286,1,8
288,256,200457,1,0
360,128,200629,5,4
496,56,200800,1,0
504,84,200886,1,0
512,112,200972,1,8
512,272,201143,1,0
504,300,201229,1,0
496,328,201315,1,0
360,256,201486,1,0
388,264,201572,1,0
416,272,201657,1,8
416,112,201829,1,0
388,120,201915,1,0
360,128,202000,5,4
224,56,202172,1,0
152,192,202343,1,8
288,264,202515,1,0
216,136,202686,1,0
80,64,202857,1,0
8,200,203029,1,8
144,272,203200,1,0
116,284,203286,1,0
88,296,203372,5,4
228,376,203543,1,0
256,372,203629,1,0
284,376,203715,1,8
424,296,203886,1,0
396,284,203972,1,0
368,272,204057,1,0
216,224,204229,1,0
212,196,204315,1,0
228,172,204400,1,8
256,160,204486,1,0
284,172,204572,1,0
300,196,204657,1,0
296,224,204743,6,0,B|280:320|128:344,1,210,4|8
68,224,205257,1,0
216,224,205429,2,0,B|232:320|384:344,1,210,4|8
444,224,205943,1,0
336,124,206115,6,0,B|280:92|256:56|256:56|232:92|176:124,1,210,4|8
256,224,206629,1,0
384,216,206800,2,0,B|316:252|256:380|256:380|196:252|128:216,1,420,4|4

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-07-01T19:59:05+00:00

updated (>'3')>

dosyeru

431 posts

Joined August 2010

dosyeru 2012-07-02T20:56:16+00:00

It's my first modding, so take a look below them with a light heart.

easy

00:16:687 (3) - did you make this slider with hi-hat of drums? i prefer that this slider extends to 00:17:201.IMO
00:27:658 (4) - ^ to 00:28:173
00:38:630 (4) - how about make this slider go toward next circle?
00:47:373 (2) - take off the finish sound, then
00:47:715 (1) - add one.
00:50:458 (1) - add the finish sound, and take it off at the last circle of this slider.
00:58:687 (3) - If you add above sounds, add the finish sound at here.
01:00:058 (5) - add the finish sound.
01:03:315 (1) - add the crap sound instead of the finish one.

01:28:001 (1) - how about if this slider extends to 01:28:515?
01:33:830 (5) - how about if this circle moves to 01:34:001?
01:38:973 (4) - ^^
01:58:687 (2) - the same things as the 1st chorus.

02:37:087 (1) - take off the finish sound from the last circle of this slider.
02:46:344 (3) - how about if this slider shifts to 02:46:001, then, add a note at 02:48:058.

02:57:315 (1) - make the same pattern of the finish sounds as 1st & 2nd chorus.

I understand that adding the sound such as the finish or craps is depending on individual favorite eventually.
These are just suggestion as you know.

-kevincela-'s normal

AR -1
I like this map's rhythm, but I think it's a little hard for normal players.

00:02:801 & 00:02:972 how about replace these pattern with a slider?

01:03:487 (4) - shift to 01:03:315, and add a note at 01:03:658
01:05:887 () - add a note

01:46:344 (2) - move to 01:47:372, and
01:46:687 (3) - this slider moves to 01:46:344.
02:17:201 - add a note

impossiblexu's hard

AR -1 ?

I feel each circle is very closed, it may seem to be more difficult than hard diff.

00:33:829 - how about if these 5 circles go toward next sliders like 00:44:887.
01:44:629 (3,4,5,6) - how about NC at (3) and (5), or make them keep more distance.

I like using many sliders like this diff.

collab

02:57:315 (7) - how about if this slider goes the down side, these parts are busy.IMO
01:12;058 (9) - these stuck notes, I think these should be avoid.
02:37:087 (5) - ^
03:18:743 (5,6,7) - ^

Insane

I feel that circles are generally drawing a gentle curve line, but when a slider shows up, that line changes a sharp curve line suddenly.

I mean this is yours

SPOILER

I prefer the line like this

SPOILER

But, i also feel that it's boring if there are always gentle curves.
I'm ambiguous about it.

01:55:687 these are a little scrambled especially using default skin.

03:16:343 this note may be hidden the slider.

anyway, thank you for giving a chance to practice for modding.

Derekku

COOL DUDE

7,270 posts

Joined March 2009

Derekku 2012-07-02T22:00:57+00:00

No change on my collab part, but I understand what you mean about making the notes into sliders. However, I think that the silence after the spinner and the single notes help make the final chorus feel more exciting than a held-out slider. (:

Note to CDFA: Fix the fade-outs on the names for Lunah/CDFA. Even though they're covered up by spinners, they'll be shown in CtB/Taiko, and thus they should fade out properly.

Reiji-RJ

1,402 posts

Joined April 2010

Reiji-RJ 2012-07-03T21:07:55+00:00

Hey, m4m

General

Hey, your guest diffs have different combo colours, fix this?
And your diffs have different kiais. Fix it too?

Easy

Hey, AR -1 and HP - 1 too. They are too high for Easy
00:16:687 (3) - I don't think that whistle (on the body) fits this note. Maybe remove it and add finishes to the beginning and end of the slider? And fix all notes like here (00:27:658 (4) - and so on)
00:38:630 (4) - It touches HP bar. And spacing between 00:38:630 (4,1) - is too high. Maybe move like here?
SPOILER
00:46:344 (2) - remove finish from the end
00:47:715 (1) - and add here to the beginning?
00:50:458 (1) - ^
00:53:201 (3) - (nazi) maybe stack with the end of 00:50:458 (1) - ? Also, put nc here as long comboes are not good in Easy.
00:58:687 (3) - finish and nc
01:01:430 (2) - ^
01:04:858 (2,3) - I suggest you to make 1 slider instead of circles as red ticks are quite hard to read in Easy
01:12:401 (5) - you can put nc here :3
01:28:001 (4) - it's placement under 01:26:115 (1) - makes it hard to read. Move it away.
01:31:944 (4,5) - I suggest you to do this (as circle on red tick plays baad):
SPOILER
01:39:830 (1) - finish
01:48:401 (3) - new combo
01:41:715 (4) - this note plays bad too. Very bad :< So:
SPOILER
01:53:544 (4) - new combo
01:59:029 (1) - finish?
02:01:772 (1) - ^
02:04:515 (3) - ^ and nc
02:10:001 (1) - finish?
02:12:744 (2) - ^
02:16:172 (2,3) - make one slider instead of circles
02:18:230 - maybe add a note?
03:02:800 (3) - new combo
03:04:172 (5) - finish to the end?
03:08:286 (6) - move nc here!
03:17:200 (2,3) - again, make slider

-kevincela-'s Normal

At first, 1,4 SV is too high for Normal :<
00:20:972 - Map this blank space, please. Oh, I see lots of such blank spaces..
00:22:858 (1) - if you won't map ^ this: start from red tick after blank space is really hard. Fix it please
01:23:201 (1) - again, red tick
01:34:173 (1) - slider from red tick is more harder D: start from downbeat
03:31:600 - I like your end :O but other diffs are made till the end, so why not to map?

impossiblexu's Hard

00:54:401 (1) - move it up so that it wouldn't overlap 00:54:401 (1) - so much?
SPOILER
03:31:600 - I like your end too, but other diffs are made till the end, so why not to map?

I'll mod other diffs soon, quite busy now... Sorry :<
Try to mod it asap >_<

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-07-03T22:49:21+00:00

Changes done.

Thanks for modding ouo.

Also, I finally gave in and put my own stars into this map~. Yay

Also, if you're like, stalking the thread, I'm working on the SB fadeouts right now, so don't be all like "omg wtf"

Also, I'm keeping combocolor and kiai differences since there's no rules against them and the mappers chose to keep it like that (although they're not even that different, except for taiko o-o).

Crimmi

1,947 posts

Joined June 2009

Crimmi 2012-07-04T04:27:21+00:00

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

An moe conversation leading to an IRC mod >3<

22:06 CDFA: : Have you modded this already? :3~
22:06 : *CDFA is listening to (Hikasa Yoko - Listen!!)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24610]
22:06 Crimmi: : hmm no i doubt i've modded it
22:06 CDFA: : uuu~
22:06 Crimmi: : but ok
22:07 Crimmi: : downloading
22:07 CDFA: : If you've already modded it, you can mod THIS then >:3
22:07 : *CDFA is listening to (Plastic Tree - Future Colors (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37873]
22:07 Crimmi: : Yu-Gi-Oh <3
22:07 Crimmi: : i'll mod that then
22:08 CDFA: : Yay o3o
22:08 CDFA: : Yu-Gi-Oh! <3~
22:08 CDFA: : Miiirrai iroooo~
22:08 Crimmi: : i want to get Giltter ranked .3.
22:08 CDFA: : Glitter .3.
22:09 CDFA: : WHICH REMINDS ME
22:09 CDFA: : I NEED TO GET THIS RANKED ROO
22:09 : *CDFA is listening to (Masaaki Endoh - Road to Tomorrow ~Going my way!!~)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36934]
22:09 CDFA: : I just need to make more diffs since apparently I can't go approval anymore D:
22:09 Crimmi: : oh and the link is fixed
22:09 CDFA: : swag~
22:09 : *Crimmi is listening to (Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Glitter (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52700]
22:11 Crimmi: : then what about this CDFA-sama
22:11 : *Crimmi is listening to (NicoNicoDouga - Don't Say "Meltdown")[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24861]
22:40 CDFA: : Finished modding ouo
22:40 CDFA: : Good job >3<~
22:41 Crimmi: : thanks CDFA-sama
22:41 Crimmi: : :3
22:41 CDFA: : yw ouo~ Nyaa~
22:41 : *CDFA cuddles Crimmi~
22:42 Crimmi: : mind if i IRC mod this right?
22:42 : *Crimmi is editing (Hikasa Yoko - Listen!!)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24610]
22:42 CDFA: : Go ahead o3o
22:42 CDFA: : ;lsdkjfg;sd I'
22:42 CDFA: : I'm mapping this right now, it's fun :3
22:42 : *CDFA is watching HTT - Singing! []
22:44 Crimmi: : so much green lines
22:44 Crimmi: : xD
22:44 CDFA: : Green Lines <3~
22:47 Crimmi: : did you try the map with OD +1?
22:47 Crimmi: : on Easy?
22:49 CDFA: : I forget if I changed it or not o3o
22:49 CDFA: : lemme check'
22:50 CDFA: : I can add OD +1~
22:50 CDFA: : I didn't try to map with it, though ;~;
22:51 Crimmi: : ah ok then
23:01 Crimmi: : 03:25:429 (1,2,3,4) - can you make this a better diamond or box ;~;
23:02 CDFA: : On easy, right? :3~
23:02 Crimmi: : yep.
23:02 CDFA: : moe~
23:02 Crimmi: : Easy is as good as my Caipirinha
23:03 CDFA: : moe o3o
23:08 Crimmi: : I love Insane \(^3^)/
23:08 Crimmi: : i'm gonna post the guest diff mods in the thread.
23:08 CDFA: : Yay o3o
23:08 CDFA: : Thanks Crimmi-sama <3~
23:09 Crimmi: : no i should be thanking you
23:09 Crimmi: :

23:09 CDFA: : uguu :3
23:09 : *CDFA cuddles Crimmi~
23:09 Crimmi: : i got my modding swag again
23:09 CDFA: : I've had my modding swag on since school got out ;D
23:09 Crimmi: : my goal is back again

23:09 CDFA: : Modding swag is fun :3~
23:09 Crimmi: : i've seen
23:09 CDFA: : W-W-What's your goal? :3
23:09 Crimmi: : over 400 kudosu

23:09 CDFA: :

oo
23:10 CDFA: : Go go kudosu rankings <3~
23:10 Crimmi: : Y U NO MAT YET
23:10 Crimmi: : xD
23:10 CDFA: : lool >3<~
23:10 CDFA: : I don't think peppy likes me enough to let me be MAT x3X
23:10 Crimmi: : >.>
23:10 Crimmi: : wha?
23:10 CDFA: : the BATs would be like "Why not Zoidberg" and he'd be like "um no"
23:10 CDFA: : >3<~
23:11 Crimmi: : but brian, you're modding machine xD
23:11 CDFA: : I know >3<~
23:11 CDFA: : I MIGHT BECOME MAT EVENTUALLY
23:11 CDFA: : and I'm only modding machine for the summer o3o. Once school starts, I'll like, barely mod x3
23:11 Crimmi: : then "Don't Say Lazy" & "Listen!!"
23:11 CDFA: : RIIITTTSSSUUUEEENNN~
23:12 Crimmi: : I wanted to be an mat
23:12 CDFA: : moe MAT Crimmi o3o
23:12 Crimmi: : but i keep asking myself, why?
23:12 Crimmi: : i want to be one but I need ambition
23:13 Crimmi: : a push if you will.
23:13 Crimmi: : i'll be the rarest MAT evar.
23:13 Crimmi: : hehehe....
23:13 CDFA: : moe >:3~
23:14 Crimmi: : do i really look good in purple CDFA-sama?
23:14 Crimmi: : ^.^
23:15 CDFA: : Yup :3~
23:15 CDFA: : I remember in my last avatar, my name was purple
23:15 CDFA: : and I was like "uuu~"
23:15 Crimmi: : lol
23:20 Crimmi: : ever played a game called Yume Miru Kusuri: A Drug That Makes You Dream?
23:20 CDFA: : Nope o3o
23:20 CDFA: : is it moe?~
23:20 Crimmi: : yes especially Aeka
23:20 CDFA: : nyaa~
23:20 CDFA: : OH AND ALSO CRIMMI
23:20 CDFA: : You need to introduce your daughter to Mio Akiyama o3o
23:21 Crimmi: :

23:21 CDFA: :

23:21 CDFA: : Then kawaii will occur
23:21 Crimmi: : here's Aeka http://puu.sh/FGuS
23:21 CDFA: :

oooooooooooooooooooooooo
23:21 CDFA: : Moe~
23:21 Crimmi: : her story made me shed manly tears
23:22 CDFA: : uuu~
23:22 Crimmi: : she's Case 1: Bullying
23:22 CDFA: : Oh noes~
23:22 CDFA: : They're jelly because she's too kawaii <3
23:23 Crimmi: : yes that's exactly correct
23:23 Crimmi: : but they just don't like her
23:23 CDFA: : so she ate them >:3
23:23 CDFA: : Oh no~
23:23 Crimmi: : no you as the main character have a choice to save her or ignore her and go to case 2
23:23 CDFA: : :O
23:23 CDFA: : Save her, of course :3
23:24 Crimmi: : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yume_Miru_ ... _You_Dream
23:24 CDFA: : "Adults only" wut
23:25 CDFA: : W-W-Wait, is this a hentai game?!
23:25 CDFA: : o3o
23:25 Crimmi: : it's a visual novel
23:25 Crimmi: : not really that hentai
23:25 CDFA: : Is it hentai?~
23:25 CDFA: : :O
23:25 CDFA: : woahs~
23:26 CDFA: : s;kdlfgs I have to eats
23:26 CDFA: : brb
23:26 Crimmi: : happy feasting!!
00:06 Crimmi: : ah did you add Ozzy to the tags?
00:08 CDFA: : :O
00:08 CDFA: : umumum
00:08 CDFA: : idunno
00:09 Crimmi: : check
00:09 CDFA: : k o3o
00:09 CDFA: : Also, skldgjkl;sdj, I finally submitted this

00:09 : *CDFA is listening to (HTT - Singing!)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54083]
00:09 Crimmi: : yay~
00:09 CDFA: : I have OzzyOzrock, but not Ozzy ouo
00:09 Crimmi: : hmm
00:10 Crimmi: : stupid aibat
00:10 Crimmi: : lol
00:10 CDFA: : lol~
00:14 Crimmi: : check these kiais for inconsistency http://puu.sh/FJac
00:14 CDFA: : ouo
00:14 CDFA: : They're all the same, but Insane and Collab have extra bursts to make moe moe cannons come out~
00:16 Crimmi: : hmm ok
00:16 CDFA: : ovo
00:18 Crimmi: : can you make the audio lead in 1400?
00:18 Crimmi: : in Ozzy's Taiko
00:18 CDFA: : Sure o3o
00:19 Crimmi: : in collab 00:16:598 - snap to 00:16:601
00:19 Crimmi: : the green line
00:20 CDFA: : k o3o
00:22 Crimmi: : well this map is kickass, makes me wanna watch K-ON! myself
00:22 CDFA: : Do it

00:22 Crimmi: : gonna post this useless mod now

00:23 CDFA: : uguu
00:23 : *CDFA cuddles Crimmi~

Go Go CDFA-sama, get this ranked!!

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-07-04T04:30:15+00:00

swag o3o

I'll make the changes in a bit

LesTrucsRoses

271 posts

Joined July 2010

LesTrucsRoses 2012-07-06T00:20:22+00:00

TIEM 4 A LTR MOD UP INT THIS BITCHS.

IMPODLIERNJSE's HARD

SPOILER

00:16:687 (2) - DIS SLIDER MOCES WITH THE MUSIC I LIEK THAT.
00:22:001 (2,3,4,5) - WAT IS RHIS THIS IS NOT PROPER AT ALL.
00:27:658 (3) - WHISTLE HITSOUND ON BOTHE ENDS.
00:37:430 (3,4,5,6) - OHH BBY U CAN'T DIAGONEL HERE.
01:31:601 (1,2,3,4) - I DUN KNOW EWHICH FIRECTEION SLIDERS GO. WHAT U THINKW THIS IS?
01:44:630 (3,4,5,6) - THESE MINIJUMPS R CRAY.

COLLAB

SPOILER

01:10:944 (3) - NO HITSOUDN.
01:11:029 (4) - CLAP HITSOUDN.
01:14:629 (3) - WHISTOLE HITSOUDN.
01:14:972 (6) - WHISTOLE HITSOUDN.
01:37:001 (2) - REMOVE TIHS BEAT.
01:38:458 (6) - MAEK THIS SLIDERF 2 TICKMS LONGER.
02:41:544 (1,2,3,4) - THERE IOS NO WAY OF KNIOWING WHICH SLIDER GOES WHHERE.
03:05:715 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I DUN GET IT. CONFUSING.

INSNAE

SPOILER

NUN PROBELSM FOUSND.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-07-06T22:04:35+00:00

Changed some minor stuff. The only major thing changed was that I changed the sliders in Lunah's diff, since multiple people have mentioned them being hard to read, now

Derekku

COOL DUDE

7,270 posts

Joined March 2009

Derekku 2012-07-06T22:11:50+00:00

LesTrucsRose wrote:
03:05:715 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I DUN GET IT. CONFUSING.

Fixed.

292,192,185715,1,0
420,240,185886,1,8
400,100,186057,1,0
112,100,186400,1,0
220,192,186571,1,8
92,240,186742,1,0

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,605 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-07-21T22:29:53+00:00

1 year old map. Y U SO SLOW TO RANK CDFA? c:

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2012-07-22T14:27:45+00:00

Gabe wrote:
1 year old map. Y U SO SLOW TO RANK CDFA? c:

Because his map is too sexy to be ranked.

Crok425

262 posts

Joined October 2010

Crok425 2012-07-28T05:22:21+00:00

From the mod queue.

[Easy]
00:43:773 Myabe put up a spinner in there. That part kinda feels empty, so start it there and finish it in 00:44:630 and put a finisher in it.
03:08:629 Slider that ends in 03:08:972 and make it repeat it... in short, this below

SPOILER

I couldn't find anything else, sorry.

[-kevincela-'s Normal]
02:53:887 You can either do two things in this thing. 1) Do the thing you did in 02:54:573 and end it in 02:55:258 , or 2) Start with just a circle and do what you did in 02:54:572 but in 02:54:058 . It sounds kinda weird in the way you put it.
And... I'm unable to find something else. Nice work, man

.

[impossiblexu's Hard]
02:12:744 Start with a finisher.
Couldn't see anything else.

[Collab]
I couldn't find anything.

[Insane]
Nope... still nothing. Sorry.
__________________________

Done. Sorry for the small mod, the map it's pretty good. Though... I don't like how the Taiko one sounds, that's my mod for Taiko XD.

Good luck geting this ranked.

PS: Just for curiosity... where is the source of your avatar?

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-07-28T22:38:54+00:00

OH MAN

SOMEONE FINALLY MODDED THIS MAP

Anyways

For the source of my avatar, I did a google image search for Big Al with 128x128 image dimensions. This appeared.

Anyways, doing the mod right now. Yay

SuperMIC

420 posts

Joined July 2011

SuperMIC 2012-08-16T20:51:01+00:00

I should do a remod, last time I didn't get to mod the collab! o3o Kds if you want.

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[Easy]

00:27:658 (4) - The whistle in the slider body sounds unmoe. :< Remove please!
00:28:515 (1,2,3) - This looks ugly imo because the two sliders aren't symmetrical with respect to (2)! :< Try this!:

Mio-chaniscool1

If you do that, after, re-space (4,5,1)! o3o

00:40:515 (1,1) - Unattractive they aren't on the same horizontal axis. :< Move (1) (the second (1) lol) down a grid, (2) is still fine in terms of spacing!
00:42:230 (3,4) - Same as above point. Move (4) up a grid for more moeness!
00:53:201 (3) - There should be a Finish on the start of this slider!
00:55:944 (1) - Assymetrical! :< Move the endpoint up one grid!
00:58:687 (1) - Why not stack this under the maroon (1)? Looks better and gets rid of that unsexy overlap. :< Then re-space (2) and (3). Here's what I did:

Mio-chaniscool2

01:01:430 (2) - Add a Finish to the start of this slider. Will sound cooler!
01:02:458 (3) - Add a Finish to the end of this slider. Will sound cooler!
01:03:315 (1) - It'd be cool if this blanketed (3). Here's some steps to make a sexy blanket!

1. Make a symmetrical 4-point slider with small 45 degree-angled lines and a semi-longer straight line. You can build it right above (3) on the x-axis to check if it's really good or not.

Mio-chaniscool3

2. Rotate that sexy blanket 30 degrees!

Mio-chaniscool4

3. Turn off Grid-snap, turn on distance snap, and wiggle the blanket around so it looks like when you are playing (3) you play into the blanket.

Mio-chaniscool5

4. Add Finishes to start and end of (1) like you did before, and then re-space (2) and (3).

Mio-chaniscool6

5. Congratulations! You have a sexy blanket!

01:11:030 (3) - Move up one grid so it's on the same horizontal axis as (2).
01:12:058 (4,5) - To avoid the most overlap, I recommend placing these on a vertical axis with respect to (3).

Mio-chaniscool7

01:12:401 (5) - It'd be cool if you switched to the Soft hitsound set and put a finish here!
01:28:001 (4) - Again, I find the whistle on this slider's body unattractive. :<
01:47:373 (2) - Add a Finish to the ed of this slider. Will sound cooler!
01:50:801 (1,4) - "Overlap! Of the non-sexy kind!" -Rena-chan

You might have to redo a bit of this section to avoid the overlap. (And I mean you'll want to, it's REALLY anti-moe. :<)

Mio-chaniscool8

Mio-chaniscool9

In the above image, you see I deleted the original (2) for overlap purposes...

02:01:772 (1) - There should be a Finish on the start of this slider!
02:04:515 (1) - ^

So yeah, refer to the other points at the other Kiai section. Or, just fix up the first Kiai and copypasta it into all the other Kiai sections! \:D/

02:18:230 (1) - Soft hitsound set and Finish?
02:41:544 (3) - Finish on start of this?
02:43:258 (2) - Finish sounds bad on the end of this. Remove?
03:08:286 (6) - Technically this should have an NC.
03:08:972 (1) - And this an RNC.
03:12:400 (4) - To keep with the consistency of (1,2,3), move this down two grids and one right.
03:13:772 (2) - Finish on the start and end of this slider?
03:13:772 (2,1) - HOWEVER, it would becool if (2) blanketed (1). :3

Cue tutorial!

1. Make a 3-point symmetrical slider with respect to the y-axis. You can use a hitcircle if you need a guide. :3 It should use about 30 degree angles.

Mio-chaniscool10

2. Delete your hitcircle guide, re-space (2). You'll need to re-space the previous (1) for maximum sexiness. After that, re-space the next (1), and then (2) and (3). Add those Finishes to (2), if you are going to.

Mio-chaniscool11

3. Maximum moeness achieved!

[-kevincela-'s Normal]

As a general recommendation for the beginning and all of the verses, why not add whistles in places like 00:02:973 (5,6) to keep consistancy with the rest of the mapset? I know the Collab and Hard do this. I understand you wanted to just use the whistles when you actually have those crash/ride cymbals doing this rhythm, but still adding whistles in places like these gives the map an extra punch.

The Finishes in place of the whistles I recommended I'm not that crazy about, you might wanna change them to whistles if you want. Again, nothing unrankable about these and I guess they sound okay, but I think those whistles would really work better.

00:39:487 (1,2,3,4) - Move this entire pattern down a few grids? (1) grazes the HP bar, and I know you might think "So who cares" but I promise it'll look tons better if it didn't.
01:09:658 (1,3) - Tiny bit of slider Nazi, but I'd prefer if the last line after the anchor on these sliders is straight. Just a Nazi thingy, so ignore if you want.
01:30:230 (5) - Improve this blanket? Looks really lopsided as is.

Mio-chaniscool12

01:40:515 (3,4) - Again, improve this slider blanket? :3 (3) should be a 4-point slider, not a 3-point for better control.

Mio-chaniscool13

324,124,100515,2,0,B|284:144|228:144|188:124,1,140,0|8
152,216,101201,2,0,B|216:244|296:244|360:216,2,210,0|0|8

01:50:801 (1,3) - Definitely not crazy on the looks of these sliders. Try the traditional elbow method?

Mio-chaniscool14

02:12:401 (1) - Why a jump...?
02:17:030 (1,2,3) - Here I'd recommend use of the Soft hitsound set.
02:54:573 (6) - I really worry about players thinknig this is only a once-repeat slider. Especially this late in the map, if a combobreak occurs people will get mad. :< Maybe replace this with something else?
03:00:572 (2,4) - Ugly overlap. Shuffle around (3) and (4) to fix.
03:18:057 (1,2) - Again, use Soft hitsound set?

----

And as always I got too lazy to finish AGAIN SO STAY TUUUNNNEEDDD. probably won't finish lolol

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-08-28T04:15:20+00:00

EVENTUALLY

EVENTUALLY DAMMIT

Raging Bull

2,809 posts

Joined June 2010

Raging Bull 2012-11-24T04:57:55+00:00

eventually still?

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2012-11-24T23:44:31+00:00

EVENTUALLY

Makou

50 posts

Joined June 2011

Makou 2013-02-16T23:45:40+00:00

eventually~

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-02-17T00:14:18+00:00

EVENTUALLY

Raging Bull

2,809 posts

Joined June 2010

Raging Bull 2013-02-17T00:23:54+00:00

How long is eventually?

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-02-17T00:25:48+00:00

2014

Makou

50 posts

Joined June 2011

Makou 2013-02-18T13:31:04+00:00

EVENTUALLY!! LOL

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-02-21T02:35:03+00:00

what have I done

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-02-21T02:51:09+00:00

Also, along with reviving this, Kuri (Now Christian) says he wants to re-do his part. If anybody else wants to make revisions that'll be cool.

I'm re-doing the storyboard names and will have them up soon.

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2013-02-27T03:46:24+00:00

[easy]
00:28:515 (1,3) - how about make these sliders a bit roundly?
00:40:515 (1) - how about make last point 2~3 grid down
00:57:658 (2) - how about make this slider a bit flatly?
01:04:858 (2,3) - how about change these circles to slider?
01:47:373 (2) - make this slider like this slider -> 01:44:287 (3) -
02:16:172 (2,3) - how about change these circles to slider?
02:48:401 (4) - hmm.. 1.23 distance by '02:46:344 (3) - ' is not good for easy gd.. it's need some fix
03:17:200 (2,3) - how about change these circles to slider?

02:56:287 -> change this point's offset to 176544

[normal]
02:56:287 -> change this point's offset to 176544

nice

[hard]
00:26:115 (4) - how about make this slider's bending to upwards?
01:24:744 (1) - how about 'ctrl+g'?
01:29:887 (4) - how about make this slider's bending to upwards?

02:56:458 -> change this point's offset to 176544

[collab]
01:44:544 (8) - change 1 snap later, reduce 1 reverse, and make 1 circle at 01:44:544

02:56:287 -> change this point's offset to 176544

[insane]
02:43:601 (2) - make this slider like this slider -> 02:43:087 (1) -

02:56:287 -> change this point's offset to 176544

not bad

that's all
good luck

+1

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-02-27T04:27:16+00:00

uguu, thank you owo

SuperMIC

420 posts

Joined July 2011

SuperMIC 2013-03-05T00:59:51+00:00

o3o

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: K-ON!! - Listen [ED1].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 44973
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12058,23030,34001,44973,55944,66915,72401,83373,94344,105315,116287,127258,138230,149201,154687,165658,177315,188286,199257,211600
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Listen!!
TitleUnicode:Listen!!
Artist:Hikasa Yoko
ArtistUnicode:Hikasa Yoko
Creator:CDFA
Version:SMIC's Hard
Source:K-ON!!
Tags:OzzyOzrock -kevincela- Lybydose Lizzehb Lilac MarioBros777 Kurisuchianu Lunah LoweH Derekku impossiblexu SuperMICrophone lesslunatic
BeatmapID:85193
BeatmapSetID:24610

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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380,324,181943,2,0,P|460:332|504:272,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,192,182457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,68,182800,6,0,P|324:92|272:40,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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20,180,184172,2,0,L|1:257,1,80
36,328,184515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,352,184686,2,0,P|192:344|244:284,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,185200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,72,185543,5,4,0:0:0:0:
416,60,185715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,108,185886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,188,186057,2,0,L|424:344,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,364,186572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,328,186743,2,0,P|280:284|256:248,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,187086,2,0,P|188:196|164:232,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,320,187429,2,0,P|44:244|56:172,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,104,187943,2,0,L|120:72,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,60,188286,6,0,P|168:36|204:32,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,52,188629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,116,188800,2,0,P|372:180|448:176,1,160
484,248,189315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,248,189486,2,0,P|404:268|328:248,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,190000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,172,190172,2,0,P|118:153|38:173,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,252,190686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,320,190857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,191029,6,0,P|188:332|216:304,2,80,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,256,191543,2,0,L|92:104,1,160
128,36,192057,2,0,P|160:64|200:60,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,192400,2,0,L|256:192,1,80
384,36,192743,2,0,P|352:64|316:62,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,140,193086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,160,193172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,180,193257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,252,193429,5,8,0:0:0:0:
412,324,193600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,193772,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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132,252,194629,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,324,194800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,312,194972,2,0,P|132:252|68:200,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,195486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,68,195657,2,0,P|88:12|160:28,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,136,196172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,228,196343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,196515,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,28,196686,6,0,L|428:60,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,92,197029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,244,197200,2,0,L|378:293,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,340,197543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,136,197715,1,4,0:0:0:0:
68,40,198057,6,0,P|44:76|48:112,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,198400,2,0,P|108:248|64:328,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,368,198915,2,0,P|160:336|176:300,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,136,199257,6,0,L|224:60,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,199600,2,0,L|368:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,200,199943,2,0,L|296:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,200286,2,0,L|152:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,176,200629,6,0,P|88:96|156:60,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,52,201143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,52,201229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,52,201315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,52,201486,2,0,P|340:96|316:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,201829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,202000,6,0,P|336:224|372:240,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,312,202343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,312,202515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,202686,2,0,P|140:328|104:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,203029,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,240,203201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,92,203372,6,0,P|108:56|144:44,1,80
160,120,203715,2,0,P|193:108|217:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,72,204057,2,0,P|318:108|352:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,44,204400,2,0,P|404:56|428:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,168,204743,5,4,0:0:0:0:
440,248,204915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,205086,2,0,L|312:336,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,360,205429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,344,205600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,276,205772,2,0,P|104:232|80:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,152,206115,5,4,0:0:0:0:
40,76,206286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,36,206457,2,0,P|148:20|184:24,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,32,206800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,56,206972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,207143,2,0,P|392:164|376:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,207486,5,8,0:0:0:0:
204,236,207657,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,140,207829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,148,208000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,259,208172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,186,208343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,124,208515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,197,208686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,208857,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,40,210229,6,0,L|48:84,3,40
44,100,210572,2,0,L|36:144,3,40,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,210915,2,0,L|24:204,3,40,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,220,211257,2,0,L|12:264,3,40,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,280,211600,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-03-14T04:04:36+00:00

Replaced impossiblexu's diff with MICs diff.

This is because impossiblexu's diff has been mangled beyond recognition and he hasn't been in contact with me for the two years this map has been pending, plus I had some issues with the difficulty. So MIC. yay mic.

Jarby

2,962 posts

Joined August 2008

Jarby 2013-03-23T20:23:29+00:00

Easy:

00:42:230 (3,4) - I'd move the end of the slider back 1/2 and the circle back 1/2 also to fit the vocals as the rest of the map has done earlier. I can imagine it throwing off a new player as it is.
01:05:373 (3) - End kiai here to fit with the later kiai time. It's better that way. In fact, I believe it's a requirement to make kiai the same across all difficulties which it is not right now.
02:42:229 (4) - Unsnapped end apparently.

Ozzy's ifdsjfdvfd:

Dunno if the final object is appropriate, but the rest is fine.

SMIC's Hard:

You probably don't want to keep this named as "Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [What if we just got rid of all of the jews].osu".
03:30:229 (1,2,3,4,1) - Bit of a dick ending to a fairly easy map.
I'd probably remove the other hard since it's all quite similar to this, Insane and Collab.

Insane:

00:31:601 (4) - Asymmetrical, lower the top two points down.
01:24:058 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:04:001 (1) - Again, remove new combo. No reason to have one this short and distinctly separate.
03:08:285 (1) - ^

Collab:

02:03:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream doesn't really have much of a calling. I'd just kill it.

Various unsnapped objects. Check AIMod.

Makou

50 posts

Joined June 2011

Makou 2013-03-24T07:35:39+00:00

EVENTUALLY

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-03-24T17:54:48+00:00

As a note, I'm kudosuing MIC's post because his actual mod post won't let me kudosu it.

Also, Cristian is still re-mapping his part. He'll finish it.

Eventually.

SuperMIC

420 posts

Joined July 2011

SuperMIC 2013-03-25T00:06:55+00:00

since when was my diff named what if we got rid of all the jews

i was not informed of this

Also Jarby, I'm surprised you commented on the 1/4 sliders rather than the square jumps. :p Imo the 1/4 sliders are okay because you just click on the beat and hold and the distance spacing is relatively low. If other people complain, I'll change it though.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-03-25T00:14:14+00:00

SuperMICrophone wrote:
since when was my diff named what if we got rid of all the jews

i was not informed of this

oops

Jarby

2,962 posts

Joined August 2008

Jarby 2013-03-25T17:11:12+00:00

SuperMICrophone wrote:
since when was my diff named what if we got rid of all the jews

i was not informed of this

Also Jarby, I'm surprised you commented on the 1/4 sliders rather than the square jumps. :p Imo the 1/4 sliders are okay because you just click on the beat and hold and the distance spacing is relatively low. If other people complain, I'll change it though.

It requires a certain level of focus and coordination to do both, but as a beginner, I was awful at those 1/4 sliders. I can see someone failing right at the end there, but maybe that was just my personal brand of failure as a new player.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-04-28T22:57:20+00:00

kuri pls your part update it pls u sed

Scarlet Devil_old_1

144 posts

Joined December 2012

Scarlet Devil_old_1 2013-05-31T23:26:30+00:00

Since you sorta asked for someone to mod this, Here I am!~

~Mod~

☆Easy☆
--------------------
00:24:401 (2) - Curve the slider like this? http://puu.sh/35r0b.jpg
00:32:630 (3) - Curve the slider~ http://puu.sh/35rKF.jpg
00:35:030 (1) - Spaced it away from the previous combo
00:43:601 (1) - 00:44:630 (2) - Add a spinner?
02:01:430 (5) - Add a note with clap here

☆-kevincela-'s Normal☆
-------------------------------------
Clear~

☆impossiblexu's Hard☆
-------------------------------------
AR 7 or 8
00:26:115 (4) - Flip it?http://puu.sh/35sOh.jpg
00:41:715 (5) - Blanket the next note? http://puu.sh/35sSf.jpg
00:48:915 (5,1) - Make it straight? http://puu.sh/35sXX.jpg
01:26:115 (1,2) - Make it curved? http://puu.sh/35thL.jpg
01:30:230 (1) - Make it blanket the next note
02:12:401 (4) - ^
03:13:772 (3) - ^

☆Insane☆
---------------------
00:21:830 (1) - Centre and curve it~ http://puu.sh/35tOg.jpg
00:38:973 (7) - ^ around the note
00:50:972 (6,7) - Copy the previous and horizontal flip and make the single note have even spacing http://puu.sh/35tXN.jpg
02:02:287 (6,7) - ^
01:06:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...Make it less bland?

☆Collab☆
--------------------
Just saying .. sb could be sexy like your other collab maps >.>

I couldn't really find no problems on this diff, but that's just me

I tired my best to mod, sorry if it's bad or not helpful

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-01T18:23:57+00:00

Nyanderson-kun wrote:
☆Collab☆
--------------------
Just saying .. sb could be sexy like your other collab maps >.>

[/box]
l

Yay, thank you <3~

SB isn't like my other storyboards since they were both made by Beuchi-chan. This one was made by myself, lol :3.

I'll kudosu and apply in a bit owo

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-02T15:12:06+00:00

Update and stuff

um impossiblexu's diff shouldn't be in there, it's replaced with SuperMIC's diff, lol

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2013-06-06T00:35:40+00:00

Hi o/

[General]
Everything looks in their place.

[Easy]
Use AR3, AR1 is too slow ;u;
00:57:658 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
01:01:430 - How about making this? I think it fits more as vocals emphasizes in 01:02:630.
01:47:373 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
01:49:773 (3) - ^
01:50:801 (1,4) - Please avoid this overlap :<
02:08:972 (2) - Soften a bit this curve.
02:12:744 (2,3) - Something similar as I said in 01:01:430.
02:51:487 (2) - Remove this, it breaks a bit the consistency of your 2/1 pattern.

[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:34:001 (1) - I think a clap is missing in the ticks.
00:35:030 (2) - ^

[SMIC's Hard]
If you can change that whitish color for combos, it'd be awesome, it just becomes brighter during kiai and flashes too hard :<

[Ozzy's TaiK-On!!]
01:28:001 (1,1,2,1) - I think you're missing the K K pattern you did in 00:27:658 (1,2) -
01:33:487 (1,1,2,1) - ^
02:21:487 - You have two green lines in this spot.

Higher diffs felt fine, I enjoyed them all >w<
Cool SB in Collab, it's simple but I liked the effect you used and the font :3

Short mod for a long song, but I really like this map how it is, good luck C:

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-06T01:30:41+00:00

guts um I'll have someone help me understand what the taiko mod means but yay thanks for modding <3~

Cristian

1,945 posts

Joined November 2009

Cristian 2013-06-13T07:55:37+00:00

02:21:487 - You have two green lines in this spot.
^ no worries

01:28:001 (1,1,2,1) - I think you're missing the K K pattern you did in 00:27:658 (1,2) -
01:33:487 (1,1,2,1) - ^
^ That's Ozzy's job

eldnl

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

2,930 posts

Joined March 2010

eldnl 2013-06-15T08:03:42+00:00

[General]

You have 2 osu folders of the same song (one inside the other), one of them doesn't have the hard difficulty, please fix it.

[Easy]

00:17:544 (1,3) - I'm pretty sure you can do these sliders a bit better, they seems really weird now.
01:04:858 (2,3) - Make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
01:12:401 (5) - A finish sounds good here.
01:23:373 (1) - ^ Same as above.
01:27:487 (3) - I'm not a big fan of stacked notes on the easier difficulty, strongly suggest to change it.
02:16:173 (2,3) - As I said, make these notes a single slider, because this rhythm is hard to read for beginners.
02:29:201 - What about adding a spin like the harder difficulties? the break is too long ...
03:17:200 (2,3) - I guess you know what to do here.
03:27:486 (4) - Maybe you can delete this note and extend the spin, because it is too short for an easy.

[Normal]

Good job, the only thing that I can say is that this difficulty could be a bit hard to read, but that's how the whole difficulty is mapped.
02:29:201 - Add a spin here, because the break is too long.

[Hard]

Perfect.

[Insane]

Seems like a very old difficulty from you, I could point out a lot of minor suggestions, because technically there is nothing wrong with the difficulty, but I think you can work on improving it by yourself, with your new mapping style, I know you can do it a lot better now, because I saw your last map and it's pretty well done.

Edit, fix your folder please!

Cristian

1,945 posts

Joined November 2009

Cristian 2013-06-15T16:06:42+00:00

EDIT: nvm

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-15T22:21:11+00:00

I'LL MAKE THE UPDATES

REMOVED MY INSANE DIFF SINCE LIKE WHY HAVE TWO INSANE DIFFS LOL

inb4 everyone gets mad because my only full diff is the easy diff

eldnl

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

2,930 posts

Joined March 2010

eldnl 2013-06-15T23:31:37+00:00

CDFA wrote:
inb4 everyone gets mad because my only full diff is the easy diff

lol I think this is an exception, you already mapped an insane difficulty;p

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-06-16T07:47:48+00:00

here i am doing m4m
i wanted to mod the other maps but one has like 2 fresh mods, one got graved and one is starred so...k-on it is

Black is suggestions
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Inconsistencies in combo colours for the guest diffs, please fix them
i had a feeling ur osz is screwed up cause i needed to update after downloading, so i took a peek and...

SPOILER

you have another song folder inside the song folder lolol should check your local setup for this song's folder and then do a full submit

[Easy]
00:12:058 (1) - finish on start
00:16:687 (3) - add whistle like the other sliders of its kind
00:53:201 (3) - NC
01:40:515 (3) - this slider can look better with only one midpoint or using the new algorithm
01:53:544 (4) - NC should be placed here instead of 01:55:258 (1) to avoid confusion due to the partial overlap with 01:50:801 (1)
02:44:973 (3,4,1,2,3) - this part plays a bit confusing, it would be alot better if you can unstack 02:46:001 (2,3) so the flow is easier for newbies to follow
02:54:230 (1) - end at 02:56:630
02:57:315 (1) - add finish on start
03:13:772 (2) - lower the middle grid so the blanket on 03:15:657 (1) can look better
03:31:600 (2) - add finish on slider head

[-kevincela-'s Normal]
AR+1, makes the stacks easier to read imo
00:34:001 (1) - if you raise the red point by 2 grids it will make this perfectly centered
01:30:230 (5) - blanket can look better here
01:55:772 - felt like there should be a note here
02:53:887 (5) - NC
Nice symmetry ^_^

[SMIC's hard]
01:02:629 (3,4,5) - the stack here doesnt really flow well, it would be better if you stacked 01:03:144 (4) on top of 01:03:315 (5), or just dont stack it at all
01:47:372 (1,2,3,4,1) - this can curve a bit smoother for better flow
02:55:258 (1) - end this at 02:56:544
03:13:086 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - the difficulty on this might be too hard compared to the rest of the map, its a triplet 1/4 followed by 3 1/2 single taps which is quite demanding for a Hard...maybe make 03:13:429 (1,2) into a slider instead
03:17:715 (5) - woot got too intense here too, stack on where 03:16:343 (7) was makes it alot easier to play
03:28:172 (5) - NC for easier readability
i can imagine the fail/retry graph on this map peak on the last 20 seconds...

[Collab]
00:56:972 - add a note here
01:30:572 - a note here too stacked with 01:30:572 (2), makes it easier to play since its now a 1/2 stack under 01:30:229 (1)
01:36:915 (1,2,3) - use 1.00x spacing here?
02:13:944 (7,8,9,10,11) - feels better here with this rhythm:

SPOILER

02:16:858 (1) - end at 02:18:229
02:53:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the diamond formations are not the same shape >< make the one on the right skinnier
03:29:200 (2,3,4) - add whistles?
a good reminiscent of 2010/2011

Thats all, good luck on ranking

(though why wasnt this ranked back then ><)

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-06-18T11:05:34+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

Easy

• Approach Rate 4 fits a lot better imo. (also consider to increase HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty to 3)
• 00:35:030 (1) - This new combo is not really necessary, remove it.
• 00:40:515 (1) - ^
• 00:43:944 (x) - Start a slider here, end it 1/1 later and add a repeat.
• 01:31:944 (4) - End this slider at 01:32:973 and add a circle at 01:33:487.
• 01:55:258 (1) - Remove this new combo.
• 03:37:086 (4,1) - Delete the circle and start the spinner 1/1 earlier.

-kevincela-'s Normal

I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
• I settaggi della difficoltà sono un pò bassi, per come hai mappato questa diff personamente metterei HP 5, AR 6 e OD 5.
• 00:20:972 (x) e parti successive uguali - Perchè hai lasciato questi buchi enormi? Capisco che vuoi mappare basandoti sulla voce della cantante ma lasciare delle pause del genere non è proprio il massimo, le trovo abbastanza noiose, qua ad esempio prova questa pattern:
SPOILER
• 02:17:373 (2,3) - Seleziona questi due slider e capovolgili orizzontalmente, ci sono già questi due cerchi 02:15:144 (4,5) a "riempire" la parte destra dello schermo.

SMIC's Hard

• 00:03:487 (6) - This circle is not necessary imo, delete it. (or move it 1/2 later)
• 00:06:229 (8) - ^
• 00:08:972 (8) - ^
• 02:32:629 (1,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 02:35:029, then end the previous spinner 1/2 later.
• 02:51:487 (2,3,4) - Add some new combo like you did at 02:46:001 (1,1,1).
• 03:30:229 (1,2,3,1) - Try a different spacing, I don't really like the current one:
SPOILER

Collab

• 01:26:801 (3,4) - Try this pattern:
SPOILER
• 02:11:201 (4,6) - Try to stack perfectly the end of these sliders.
• 02:14:458 (8,9) - Move the slider 1/2 later and the circle at 02:14:458.

Ozzy's Taik-On!!

Looks good.

Call me again when you're ready and I'll recheck.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-18T16:26:27+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
-kevincela-'s Normal

I'm going to write in italian, if you want a translation just ask.
• I settaggi della difficoltà sono un pò bassi, per come hai mappato questa diff personamente metterei HP 5, AR 6 e OD 5.
• 00:20:972 (x) e parti successive uguali - Perchè hai lasciato questi buchi enormi? Capisco che vuoi mappare basandoti sulla voce della cantante ma lasciare delle pause del genere non è proprio il massimo, le trovo abbastanza noiose, qua ad esempio prova questa pattern:
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• 02:17:373 (2,3) - Seleziona questi due slider e capovolgili orizzontalmente, ci sono già questi due cerchi 02:15:144 (4,5) a "riempire" la parte destra dello schermo.
I'll ask kevin to read the italian later lol :3

SMIC's Hard

• 00:03:487 (6) - This circle is not necessary imo, delete it. (or move it 1/2 later) It's following the drums ouo.
• 00:06:229 (8) - ^
• 00:08:972 (8) - ^
• 02:32:629 (1,1) - Delete the slider and add a circle at 02:35:029, then end the previous spinner 1/2 later. I didn't do the exact change, but I moved the spinner 1/2 earlier to make more musical sense rather than just ending.

I usually won't respond to mod posts since I'm silly and all, but I'll respond to this one for recheck reasons.

Most things not explicitly stated should be done

I'll PM when kevin's stuff and other things are done uguu.

Diasios

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Diasios 2013-06-22T08:50:04+00:00

(ノﾟДﾟ)ノ彡

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-22T08:52:57+00:00

IT'S HAPPENING

ilu xxheroxx-nyan <3~

Zeraph

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Zeraph 2013-06-22T08:53:28+00:00

INB4 2OLDMAPEVERY1MAD

Raging Bull

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Raging Bull 2013-06-22T10:24:24+00:00

Omg. No Thank you v3

Damn

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2013-06-22T13:20:14+00:00

Nice Taiko, Ozzy.

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-06-22T17:34:51+00:00

CDFA \:D///

General
- You can add " 日笠陽子" into ArtistUnicode for every diff as it is Hikasa Yoko in Japanese.

Easy
00:46:344 (2) - is this spacing intentional?
02:01:772 (1) - finish head according to 00:50:458 (1) -
03:20:286 (3) - it's fine but I concern if it is a bit off screen, just wondering if you can move it left a bit apart from the border

-kevincela-'s Normal
01:02:801 (3,4,5) - I find this weird as you were following vocal mainly, example : 00:58:687 (1,2,3,4) - so when it comes to these points, it made me hit early that it shouldn't have been. So I suggest you use this rhythm from the screenshot, hope you consider using it

SPOILER

02:14:115 (3,4,5) - same as above ^ , apply same pattern
03:15:143 (3,4) - ^

SMIC's Hard
03:30:229 (1,2,3) - maybe move them a bit far apart from each other a bit ? just moving 03:30:743 (2) - 3-4 grids up , it might be able to read easier as I believe some players would think it's constant stream so they would get these sliders wrongly. Just only my opinion though

, depends on you

Collab
nice Collab !

tell me after you are done applying these.

Edit : ranked

Raose

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Raose 2013-06-22T19:39:52+00:00

YOU DID IT CONGRATSSS ^____^

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-22T19:41:32+00:00

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-06-22T19:44:07+00:00

2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-06-22T19:50:59+00:00

Andrea wrote:
2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!

Indeed! Congrats CDFA!

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-22T20:07:35+00:00

~~OMG CDFA YOU'RE SO GOOD I LOVE YOU <3~~ hahaha congrats ;D

Konei

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Konei 2013-06-22T20:15:23+00:00

Oh, gratz ~

Aqo

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Aqo 2013-06-22T20:49:01+00:00

wtf

Loooctav

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Loooctav 2013-06-22T20:50:55+00:00

2 Years omg

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2013-06-22T21:04:46+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
why wasnt this ranked back then

well now it is, congratulations!

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-22T21:12:44+00:00

ALSO LOL INB4 PEOPLE ARE LIKE "What's that gold star is that a super star omg"

CXu

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CXu 2013-06-22T22:35:09+00:00

Socool.

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-06-22T22:35:28+00:00

cool

UnderminE

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UnderminE 2013-06-22T22:47:48+00:00

oh man cool as fug

Tanzklaue

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Tanzklaue 2013-06-22T22:49:05+00:00

this map is just pure fun, good job :3

Garven

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Garven 2013-06-22T22:56:55+00:00

Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-22T23:03:25+00:00

Garven wrote:
Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:

ALL 75 OF MY GRAVED MAPS WOO

Raging Bull

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Raging Bull 2013-06-23T01:06:06+00:00

History was made today.

wendao

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wendao 2013-06-23T01:13:15+00:00

Andrea wrote:
2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!

Saturnalize

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Saturnalize 2013-06-23T01:22:55+00:00

Now let's see if I can reach pending longer than this.

Andrea wrote:
2 years later a miracle happens.

Congrats!

No, Andrea, this map deserves what it should get. It's not a miracle, don't make this sounds like a bad map getting ranked.

CDFA ilysm

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-06-23T01:40:50+00:00

congrats \:D/

Cristian

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Cristian 2013-06-23T01:49:09+00:00

Garven wrote:
Now what map am I going to joke about never getting ranked? D:

My pending maps.

a32

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a32 2013-06-23T03:37:08+00:00

Glad to see this ranked ww

UnderminE

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UnderminE 2013-06-23T09:17:59+00:00

More than that

it's been more than 2 years since this song came out

man i am getting old

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2013-06-23T09:26:25+00:00

CDFA wrote:
ALSO LOL INB4 PEOPLE ARE LIKE "What's that gold star is that a super star omg"

Hahaha
Congratulations!

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-23T13:42:05+00:00

UnderminE wrote:
More than that

it's been more than 2 years since this song came out

man i am getting old

1993 was 20 years ago

Nessuka

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Nessuka 2013-06-23T14:02:42+00:00

Yo momma so old she has 'mariobros777' in her tags.

No. but gratz you.

Seph

Seph 2013-06-23T14:47:11+00:00

welp i wont hear jokes about your maps not getting ranked

grats though

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2013-06-23T16:04:06+00:00

IT'S RANKED
SOMETHING MUST BE WRONG HERE

jk, congratulations \:D/

Hanyuu

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Hanyuu 2013-06-23T16:48:47+00:00

Congrats

pimp

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pimp 2013-06-23T16:57:43+00:00

gratz

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-06-24T07:34:03+00:00

Hanyuu wrote:
Congrats

^

Piotrekol

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Piotrekol 2013-06-24T22:35:00+00:00

~~is it only me or this map is offsynced >.>?(played collab diff)~~
NVM but how... o.o
<3

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