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Thanks!quintessence wrote:
Comfortable song!
☆Star
Fixed everything.Azure_Kyte wrote:
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
00:37:24 (4) - Looks a little messy, even if correct spacing wise. Can it be moved 3 grids to the right?
No other problems found
[Normal]
No problems found
[Hard]
00:57:10 (5) - I'd shorten this so that it reverses every 1/4 beat, and place a note at 00:57:62.
01:03:72 (2) - Shorten one reverse?
No problems found. Nice job
[Insane]
It's good
A nice happy jumpy sort of song. You've done well, so have a star for your work
Loogiesquared wrote:
Comments/Suggestions, not orders.!~
NormalSPOILER
00:30:62 (3,4,5) : Instead of 3 beats, you should add a quick slider that repeats 4 times. (Screenshot)
00:33:93 (3,4,5) : Instead of 3 beats, you should add a quick slider that repeats 4 times. (Screenshot)
00:37:24 (7) : Make this like the sliders i suggested above.
00:41:79 (2) : Make this slider extend to 00:42:418.
00:57:10 (7) : Instead of 3 beats, you should add a quick slider that repeats 4 times. (Screenshot)
01:01:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6) : Too many overlaps for an easy/normal map.
01:03:728 : Instead of suggestion what i suggested before, why don't you try this? (screenshot)
Fixed most things. Half the slider/notes were kept as-is for variety's sake, and the last one, while cool, seemed a bit hard for Normal.
HardSPOILER
00:23:797 : Add a beat here.
00:41:073 : Add a beat here.
Besides the first minute, there are basically no hitsounds.
I ran out of ideas for hitsounds, other than finishes. I'll give it a bit more thought.
InsaneSPOILER
00:08:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) : ...uh... what?
00:40:86 (3) : Spacing.
Rearranged to be a bit easier to read.
Overall
- The Background looks like something you ripped from GoogleImages, try to make an original one, or ask somebody.
- The map starts at least 30sec after the music starts on Easy and Normal. Map the beggining.
The song became kinda repetitive at the beginning, so I started mapping when the chorus actually started.
In terms of background, I'll try.
Thanks to all of you!Ekaru wrote:
Easy:
00:37:24 (4) - Space a little bit further from 3, so it has the same spacing as the other hit circles. Also, move its end so it's 100% over 1, resulting in a readable stack.Done before.
I would do some more slider stacking at the end part with all the sliders, but that is optional.
All other difficulties are fine. Star!
Thanks for modding, it's all changed.Dusty wrote:
Modding while tired... I don't see anything blatantly wrong, just a few minor suggestion things
[Easy]
0:37:243 - The slider overlaps the next note so it's hard to see
0:38:073 - Is this supposed to be square?
1:07:866 - ^
1:07:866 - If you want to muck around with timing and volume, you could add a crescendo:
-----1:07:66/67659ms - Add timing section with 30% volume
-----1:08:28/68280ms - Add timing section with 50% volume
-----1:09:10/69108ms - Add timing section with 70% volume
-----1:09:93/69935ms - Add timing section with 90% volume
[Normal]
0:16:556 (2-O)- Slider is weird-looking. Maybe move the bottom-left slider point a little left?
0:28:142's Kiai Time - Ouch, my ears... I know this is Kiai, but can you turn the finish down a bit?
[Hard]
1:03:728 (2-O)- Maybe one less repeat.
1:11:177 (Spinner)- Maybe finish (edit: for consistency with other difficulties)
[Insane]
Lives up to its name (is that good or bad? ).
+star
Everything was done, including hitsounds on Hard. Thanks!osuplayer111 wrote:
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
All seems fine.
[Easy]
01:00:41 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These part with sliders can confuse, because all are not visible correctly, see what you can do for that.
[Normal]
00:34:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is really hard for a normal.
[Hard]
Add more hitsounds.
00:57:93 (1) - Too close from 00:57:62 (6).
[Insane]
01:10:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This is really confusing. Change it.
Thanks for modding!ouranhshc wrote:
Normal
00:25:866(5) - line up with 4 This was on Insane, right? Fixed.
Hard
00:43:039(2) - line up with 1? Osu does something weird here, it's intentionally misaligned in editor so that it aligns itself in play mode. o_O
00:57:728(6) - move to right to red tick Done.
01:03:521(x) - insert beat here Done.
Easy
i didn't find anything
Insane
I didn't find anything (to my knowledge)