Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Snow Crystal · forum

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-05-03T10:03:32+00:00

Hi~ Hinsvar Xinely (:3」_)=3

From your modding queue m4m

[General]

(Events)
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sc.jpg",1,1
your change this point 0,0 change please

[Cold]

00:25:469 (1,2) I think this pattern shape blanket is better

SPOILER

00:56:276 (1,2,3) hmm.. This is blanket shape really bad.. change this shape

SPOILER

01:03:776 (2) This is slider move x:392 y:352 is pretty blanket shape
01:33:919 (2,3,4) This pattern can help improve the appearance of

SPOILER

01:35:182 (5) hmm.. repeat slider really awkward.. You hear the sound of the piano,
If would don't it, i think it fit the lyrics.
01:37:995 (3) hmm.. I think the tempo this slider is awkward and Can be confusing because of hearing the beat and the slider.
So, I recommand this beat.

SPOILER

02:07:057 (5) hmm.. i think this slider (4) note blanket is better
02:09:635 (2,3,4) This beat seems a little awkward. but my personal opinion.
I recommand this beat

SPOILER

[Frozen]

00:02:849 (1,2,3,4) If this pattern naturally I would like to change this.

SPOILER

00:53:932 (2,3,4) I think this beat is awkward, Beats to fit the lyrics and think it should be
so I recommand this beat

SPOILER

00:56:745 (1,2,3,4,5) I think the pattern look more beautiful it

SPOILER

01:08:932 remove green line
01:42:682 (5) hmm.. really bad blanket i think this slider blanket shape change this

SPOILER

02:22:526 (2,3,4,5) hmm.. this is pattern shape i recommand this pattern

SPOILER

03:03:073 (1,2,3) You intended? I think this pattern not good. i think note the distance between the constant

I like this song <3 ~~ Good luck ^^

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-05-03T13:11:49+00:00

from hinely m4m queue
Request m4m from Hinsvar~ (Since Xinely already modded my map orz)

Modding Guide:

Unrankable
You Need to Change/Add this
It'll be better if you follow this
Suggestions

General

//Background and Video events
0,0,"sc.jpg",1,1
make this to
```
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sc.jpg",0,0
```
Personally, I can't really see the lyric image because it too blend with the background orz. (Except for kiai part because the BG darken). Perhaps change it a bit darker and stroke effect the lyric by 2 on white color. Or make the lyric with same color as now but make another effect. What I suggest is add outer glow with darker color. Uh if you don't understand ask me in game pm lol~ my english is bad xp

Storyboarding

00:28:620 : make this lyric image under previous lyric image (1c.png) ?
Because normally next Lyric would appear under previous lyric imo

Cold

00:24:870 (1)- : 3rd slider point x200 y80
00:26:745 (3)- : why don't you copy previous slider and paste it here? Similar sliders would very helpful for newbie player to play / pro player to flashlight this part uh,
00:29:557 (2)- : add whistle on head?
00:46:432 (4)- : last slider point 2grid up?
01:46:432 (5)- : perhaps make them like this?
SPOILER
02:07:057 (5)- : perhaps make them like this to make better?
SPOILER
02:10:104 (3)- : doesn't fit imo, change this into circle at 02:10:338 ?

Freeze

00:07:526 (5)- : add whistle?
00:07:760 (1)- : copy previous slider and paste it here would be very nice
00:19:713 (3)- : I don't quite understand this sudden jump. What I suggest is stack this slider behind (5) 00:18:541- like this. If you do so then move 4th slider to x384 y236?
SPOILER
00:29:323 (2,3,4)- : Quite unhappy with current flow. How about move 2 to x60 y184
3 to x312 y124 and 4 to x152 y136. Here's the code ._.
```
60,184,29323,2,0,L|156:228,1,90
312,124,29791,2,0,L|204:80,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,30260,1,4,0:0:0:0:
```
00:29:791 (3,4)- : add finish on slider tail and 4th circle?
01:01:666 (3)- : add whistle?
01:07:291 (5)- : why don't copy previous slider and paste it here? Straight sliders and sudden curved slider is a bit weird for me imo
SPOILER
01:09:635 - : clearly heard bass /or something like that here. add note?
01:42:682 (5)- : last slider point 3 grid up
01:58:151 (3)- : add clap here
02:05:885 (4)- : higher vocal sound here, add whistle at the head?
02:09:166 (5)- : last slider point 1grid down
03:03:307 (3)- : suppose there's jump at here? Quite sad because you used jump on previous note but not here..

that's all I can find, good luck

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-05-04T07:56:51+00:00

[Cold]
in GG's mod just accept 01:35:182 (5) -
tennya's mod fix all except 01:46:432 (5)- and 02:07:057 (5)-
thank you for mod ~

need hug because cold in here ~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 10 - Snow Crystal.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69635
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2370,17370,32370,39870,54870,69870,84870,92370,107370,124245,139245,154245,169245,183541
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Snow Crystal
TitleUnicode:Snow Crystal
Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Cold
Source:
Tags:Ryu* Ryutaro Nakahara Konami Starving Trancer Xinely collaboration yanlu Rainbow*Rainbow
BeatmapID:231677
BeatmapSetID:84015

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sc.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,32570,38550
2,85070,89175
2,154445,167925
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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[Frozen]
too much fix but with my own fix

thank you for mod

frozen chan~

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Title:Snow Crystal
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Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
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Creator:Hinsvar
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Tags:Ryu* Ryutaro Nakahara Konami Starving Trancer Xinely collaboration yanlu Rainbow*Rainbow
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Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Hinsvar 2013-05-04T12:21:53+00:00

Zhengster wrote:
hoping for a mod from your m4m queue >< Take these as suggestions!

Frozen

01:55:573 (2,3) - How about adjusting these for a smoother curve? Done, I guess.
SPOILER
02:31:198 (2) - maybe stack on top of 02:28:854 (2) ^

goodluck ! I'm kinda cold now..

rezoons wrote:
Hi ,

Since i still feel bad for my last mod i've decided to mod this as well:
NO KUDOS it's just to justify a M4M because i didn't deserve it with the last mod.

[Cold]
00:53:932 (2) - Why is there a lonely note here? It kills the flow and it didn't really match with the song imo. It does match, I think~
01:22:760 - If i hear correctly there would have to be a note here. (Or start the spinner here) Added a circle.
01:50:182 (5) - I think the song is pretty much the same as 00:20:182. So, add a whistle? (and at the end of 01:52:995 (3) too) Done.
[Frozen]
00:54:635 (4,1) - ^ Made the blanket look better.
02:24:870 (1) - Why NC? New stanza.
~~Good Luck~~

GrayKaiser82 wrote:
Hi~ m4m from your queue~

[General]
looks fine~

[Cold]
00:41:745 (4) - move this slider to x:352-y:44, should be straight from the previous notes.(and fix the next notes) Uh, did other stuff here.
02:32:135 (2) - move this to x:404-y:196 This kind of curved positioning is intentional...

Perfect diff o.o

[Frozen]
00:05:182 (1,2,1,2) - remove NC(s), and it looks ugly to me, consider making a perfect "square" or something. It's to denote the changing spacing. Also, no, it's supposed to be a trapezium.

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Nice map! i love the song ^^ I feel like i want to make a guest diff on this o_o

Good luck!

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hi~ Hinsvar Xinely (:3」_)=3

From your modding queue m4m

[General]

(Events)
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sc.jpg",1,1
your change this point 0,0 change please Done.

[Frozen]

00:02:849 (1,2,3,4) If this pattern naturally I would like to change this. The flow is better my way, so... no.
SPOILER
00:53:932 (2,3,4) I think this beat is awkward, Beats to fit the lyrics and think it should be
so I recommand this beat Don't think so. This 1/1 slider is also to give some kind of break for players...
SPOILER
02:22:526 (2,3,4,5) hmm.. this is pattern shape i recommand this pattern Made something similar to it.
SPOILER

I like this song <3 ~~ Good luck ^^

- t e n n y a - wrote:
from hinely m4m queue
Request m4m from Hinsvar~ (Since Xinely already modded my map orz)

Modding Guide:
Unrankable
You Need to Change/Add this
It'll be better if you follow this
Suggestions
General
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sc.jpg",1,1
make this to
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sc.jpg",0,0
Already done.
Personally, I can't really see the lyric image because it too blend with the background orz. (Except for kiai part because the BG darken). Perhaps change it a bit darker and stroke effect the lyric by 2 on white color. Or make the lyric with same color as now but make another effect. What I suggest is add outer glow with darker color. Uh if you don't understand ask me in game pm lol~ my english is bad xp I'll tell this to yanlu.
Storyboarding
00:28:620 : make this lyric image under previous lyric image (1c.png) ?
Because normally next Lyric would appear under previous lyric imo
Cold
00:46:432 (4)- : last slider point 2grid up? icwudt. Done.
Freeze
00:07:526 (5)- : add whistle? It would make 00:07:760 sound less emphasized, so no.
00:07:760 (1)- : copy previous slider and paste it here would be very nice Done.
SPOILER
01:58:151 (3)- : add clap here The clap fits with 01:58:385 (4) better in this stanza.
that's all I can find, good luck

Thanks for modding everyone!

Revo

78 posts

Joined April 2012

Revo 2013-05-06T15:16:42+00:00

Here's my random mod:

[General]
I think it's all fine~

[Cold]

00:22:057 (2) - Maybe you should "only" copy-paste this slider from the previous slider (00:21:120 (1) -). I found that you copy-pasted, flipped it, and reverse the slider.
00:54:870 (1,2,3) - I suggest you make the first slider as the blanket for the third slider, and let the third one overlap the first
```
369,117,54870,6,0,B|395:117|395:117|415:117|495:193|411:269|391:269|391:269|343:269,1,240
```
SPOILER
00:57:682 (4,1) - If you follow my previous suggestion, remember to check these distance snaps
01:43:620 (1) - Move the slider point x:192 y:192 to x:188 y:204
02:30:495 (1) - Move the slider point x:340 y:308 to x:322 y:312 to make it better
02:52:995 (1) - Move the slider point x:380 y:164 to x:380 y:156

[Frozen]

00:21:120 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a bit more proper? Use this code:

44,212,21120,6,0,P|76:188|148:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,60,21588,2,0,P|172:75|219:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,64,22057,2,0,P|320:103|295:172,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,228,22526,2,0,P|364:252|292:264,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:44:323 (2) - Move it to x:152 y:240. It looks better when it's blanketed with 2 sliders

02:15:495 (1) - Make the blanket slider like this:

416,384,135495,6,0,B|452:368|468:336|464:300|464:300|428:212,1,180

Good Luck!

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-05-15T08:32:19+00:00

Revolver_revo wrote:
Here's my random mod:

[General]
I think it's all fine~

[Cold]
02:30:495 (1) - Move the slider point x:340 y:308 to x:322 y:312 to make it better idk, there doesn't seem to be an improvement...

Thanks anyway

Also, Xinely changed some things, so here's your kudosu

wmtokok

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wmtokok 2013-05-29T07:54:14+00:00

HI
from M4M

Cold

00:30:495 (3) - this none should X1.2 or change 00:29:557 (2) - to X1.0

01:56:745 (5) - x:188 y:316

01:21:120 (1) - add finish on head?

02:30:495 (1) - this slider feeling is strange,can change this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781852 or ctrl+c 02:26:745 (1) -

03:02:838 (4) - add whistle on tail

Frozen

00:26:510 (1) - Remove finish

01:38:932 (5) - ctrl+c 01:35:182 (3) - see this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781888

01:57:682 (3) - add clap on tail

01:58:385 (4) - Remove clap

03:03:307 (3) - add whistle on tail

The end~~~

I like this song

good Luck

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-05-29T08:22:56+00:00

wmtokok wrote:
HI
from M4M

Cold
01:56:745 (5) - x:188 y:316 It's already there...

01:21:120 (1) - add finish on head? The instrument doesn't support the finish, and it sounds really weird...

02:30:495 (1) - this slider feeling is strange,can change this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781852 or ctrl+c 02:26:745 (1) - Done.

Frozen
01:57:682 (3) - add clap on tail The sound that supports clap can only be heard at 01:58:385 (4).

01:58:385 (4) - Remove clap Nope; this is where the clap is supposed to be.

Thanks for modding

Miya

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Joined June 2011

Miya 2013-05-31T05:24:48+00:00

Sorry for the delay. I need to prepare for my new map too in order to do m4m too

General

Add epilepsy warning please, that white glow is so bright, and it occur frequently in this map.
How about adding one more combo color? 2 combo colour is too monotone. A dark white like this http://puu.sh/34YmZ.jpg is good imo, since the background is also dominate by white.

Cold

00:51:120 (1) - Reduce this slider length by 1/2. It will the vocal better. Also don't forget to add a circle here 00:52:995 -
01:07:291 (3) - Extend this slider length by 1/2 too so it's end will reach the downbeat at 01:07:995 -.It's really not good to hear if you suddenly skip a downbeat here while you always doesn't skip in previous section.
01:21:120 - Volume 40% after kiai is too low since the rhythm volume is still high. Raise it by 10%.
01:22:760 (2) - Don't stack any circle under slider on any normal or easy, it's very hard to read.
01:32:370 - Delete this timing point. 30% volume is too low. It's hard to hear any beat with 30% volume in this section.
01:47:370 - Raise this timing volume as well by 10% then delete timing point 01:54:870 - since it will be useless.
01:52:760 - Add a note here, doesn't consistent with 01:49:010 -
02:04:245 (1) - Extend this slider length by 1/2 too. The vocal is still going if you end this slider at current spot. It's really weird to hear, and not good to the player for those who listen to the music.
02:24:870 (4) - Change whistle to clap at slider end? This should be place for clap not whistle.
02:34:245 - I thought the map is end here when first playing this map lol. Very deceiving break, but its okay lol

Frozen

00:26:510 (1) - Remove finish on this slider start. It's too loud, doesnt good to hear.
01:09:870 (1) - New Combo bug. Please Add NC here.
01:32:370 - Same problem with normal.
01:47:370 - ^
01:57:682 (3) - Add whistle on this slider end? feels empty here.

Nice map.
Star~

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-05-31T06:29:08+00:00

Miya wrote:
Sorry for the delay. I need to prepare for my new map too in order to do m4m too

General
Add epilepsy warning please, that white glow is so bright, and it occur frequently in this map. Done.
How about adding one more combo color? 2 combo colour is too monotone. A dark white like this http://puu.sh/34YmZ.jpg is good imo, since the background is also dominate by white. I don't think so. Two colours of contrasting shades should look nice enough already.
Cold
00:51:120 (1) - Reduce this slider length by 1/2. It will the vocal better. Also don't forget to add a circle here 00:52:995 - I intentionally followed the instrument, and don't see why should I follow the vocal instead.
01:21:120 - Volume 40% after kiai is too low since the rhythm volume is still high. Raise it by 10%. Done.
01:22:760 (2) - Don't stack any circle under slider on any normal or easy, it's very hard to read. Thought it would be fine in Normal... k done.
01:32:370 - Delete this timing point. 30% volume is too low. It's hard to hear any beat with 30% volume in this section. Okay.
01:47:370 - Raise this timing volume as well by 10% then delete timing point 01:54:870 - since it will be useless. I think it's still audible, but +5% I guess.
01:52:760 - Add a note here, doesn't consistent with 01:49:010 - I want to make a variety of rhythm. This kind of inconsistency is fine in my eyes.
02:24:870 (4) - Change whistle to clap at slider end? This should be place for clap not whistle. Whoops. Done.
02:34:245 - I thought the map is end here when first playing this map lol. Very deceiving break, but its okay lol lol
Frozen
00:26:510 (1) - Remove finish on this slider start. It's too loud, doesnt good to hear. Okay...
01:09:870 (1) - New Combo bug. Please Add NC here. Done.
01:32:370 - Same problem with normal. k
01:47:370 - ^ lol same
01:57:682 (3) - Add whistle on this slider end? feels empty here. Done too.
Nice map.
Star~

Thanks for modding

Miya

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Miya 2013-05-31T07:35:58+00:00

No kudos for me? so mean q.q

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-05-31T07:46:21+00:00

Miya wrote:
No kudos for me? so mean q.q

...Sorry, I'm pretty forgetful lol

bigfrog

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Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2013-05-31T15:35:31+00:00

Hello~
from m4m :3
sorry,i just can mod some fine tuning

Cold
00:04:010(2) x:280 y:308
00:09:870(1) x:264 y:200
00:22:057(2) tail x:268 y:200
00:23:932(5) x:332 y:300 just make a square
00:41:745(4) x:336 y:44
00:45:495(3) two grid up
00:51:120(1) stack on 00:48:307(2) tail?
01:01:432(4) one grid down
01:11:276(2) one grid right
01:41:041(2) one grid down
01:49:010(3) one grid down
01:51:120(1) one grid right
02:07:995(1) one grid right and 02:09:401(2) one grid down
02:13:151(2) bend the other direction?
02:20:651(2) one grid up
02:26:041(6) one grid right
02:52:526(4) x:252 y:340
02:57:916(2) one grid down
02:59:088(4) x:8 y:160
03:01:666(2) one grid up

Frozen
00:08:463(2) x:248 y:320
00:11:041(2) two grid down
00:16:432(1) less bend
00:19:713(3) x:480 y:172
00:30:260 one grid right
00:58:620(1) tail x:300 y:272
01:06:120(1) x:312 y:324 plz
01:06:588(3) tail x:96 y:176
01:07:057(4) x:172 y:128 plz
01:10:573(3) one grid left
01:38:698(4) one grid up
01:40:573(3) one grid left
01:43:620(1) tail x:68 y:272
01:44:557(3) one grid down
01:45:260(4) ^
01:46:432(3) parallel with 01:45:495(1)
01:54:401(4) and 01:54:870(1) straight
02:06:588(1) x:128 y:296
02:57:448(2) x:124 y:180
02:58:620(1) one grid left
03:03:307(3) a straight slide?

that all~ hope it can help you
good song><

xChippy

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Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-05-31T18:02:08+00:00

Hihi~
M4M from your queue =w=

Im a noob modder/mapper so if my mod sucks no need to m4m =w=
Cold
puuush acting weird ><
All suggestions ><
00:15:026 (2) - add note here?
00:23:932 (5) - Make it a slider instead?
00:29:557 (2) - x174 y144
01:06:823 (2) - x79 y193
01:13:151 (4) - how about make it similiar to 01:16:901 (3,4) - (the way how you place them)
03:01:901 (3) - x304 if you follow it the next placings changes too ofcourse :3
03:03:541 (1) - Put a spinner instead?

Frozen
00:08:463 (2) - how about moving it a little down :3 x245 y350 maybe?
00:13:620 (1) - how about making this a straight one just like 00:13:151 (2) - but than ctrl J+G ofcourse :3
00:52:057 (3) - x364 y338
01:54:870 (1) - Add clap to the end of this slider
03:03:307 (3) - move it a little upwards
Sorry for the small mod ><
I like this song ^^ and Good luck!! :3

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-06-05T13:48:23+00:00

bigfrog wrote:
Hello~
from m4m :3
sorry,i just can mod some fine tuning

Cold
00:04:010(2) x:280 y:308 Why should I?
00:09:870(1) x:264 y:200 Done.
00:22:057(2) tail x:268 y:200 Symmetrical with 00:21:120 (1).
00:23:932(5) x:332 y:300 just make a square Done.
00:41:745(4) x:336 y:44 ^
00:45:495(3) two grid up ^
00:51:120(1) stack on 00:48:307(2) tail? Doesn't seem to have any noticeable difference.
01:01:432(4) one grid down ^
01:11:276(2) one grid right ^, but done for this anyway.
01:41:041(2) one grid down Won't be in line with other objects.
01:49:010(3) one grid down Done.
01:51:120(1) one grid right ...k I guess.
02:07:995(1) one grid right and 02:09:401(2) one grid down ^
02:13:151(2) bend the other direction? I think it's fine the way it is.
02:20:651(2) one grid up Won't be in line with other objects too.
02:26:041(6) one grid rightWhy should?
02:52:526(4) x:252 y:340 Done.
02:57:916(2) one grid down ^
02:59:088(4) x:8 y:160 ^
03:01:666(2) one grid up ^

Frozen
00:08:463(2) x:248 y:320 Done.
00:11:041(2) two grid down ^
00:16:432(1) less bend Supposed to go with 00:15:963 (2)'s curve.
00:19:713(3) x:480 y:172 Done.
00:30:260 one grid right It's already aligned on the center of the two previous sliders.
00:58:620(1) tail x:300 y:272 Symmetrical with 00:57:682 (5).
01:06:120(1) x:312 y:324 plz Done.
01:06:588(3) tail x:96 y:176 ...Looks weird TBH .-.
01:07:057(4) x:172 y:128 plz Aligned stuff here.
01:10:573(3) one grid left Done.
01:38:698(4) one grid up ^
01:40:573(3) one grid left ^
01:43:620(1) tail x:68 y:272 Supposed to blanket 01:44:323 (2).
01:44:557(3) one grid down Did stuff here instead.
01:45:260(4) ^ Didn't exactly follow the previous suggestion, so...
01:46:432(3) parallel with 01:45:495(1) Did something.
01:54:401(4) and 01:54:870(1) straight The current state is fine, IMO.
02:06:588(1) x:128 y:296 Done.
02:57:448(2) x:124 y:180 ^
02:58:620(1) one grid left ^
03:03:307(3) a straight slide? A slight diagonal here looks nice for me.

that all~ hope it can help you
good song><

xChippy wrote:
Hihi~
M4M from your queue =w=

Im a noob modder/mapper so if my mod sucks no need to m4m =w=
Cold
puuush acting weird ><
All suggestions ><
00:15:026 (2) - add note here? I want to keep the rhythm calm here.
00:23:932 (5) - Make it a slider instead? Don't see what's wrong with this.
00:29:557 (2) - x174 y144 Moved somewhere nearby.
01:06:823 (2) - x79 y193 Done... in another way?
01:13:151 (4) - how about make it similiar to 01:16:901 (3,4) - (the way how you place them) I wanna make variations here.
03:01:901 (3) - x304 if you follow it the next placings changes too ofcourse :3 ...Don't see why should it be moved ._.
03:03:541 (1) - Put a spinner instead? The spinner's gonna be too short.

Frozen
00:08:463 (2) - how about moving it a little down :3 x245 y350 maybe? Done in previous mod.
00:13:620 (1) - how about making this a straight one just like 00:13:151 (2) - but than ctrl J+G ofcourse :3 I don't see any point in doing that.
00:52:057 (3) - x364 y338 Moved near that.
01:54:870 (1) - Add clap to the end of this slider Yep, done.
03:03:307 (3) - move it a little upwards Did stuff here.
Sorry for the small mod ><
I like this song ^^ and Good luck!! :3

Thanks for modding

Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2013-06-10T08:15:26+00:00

Hi, I'm a newbie modder giving some noob suggestions here as a player, would u mind? lol

Cold

01:06:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part... feel different from the others, u can check ur 02:22:995 (1,2,3,4) - part :3
01:50:651 - add a note? 01:58:151 (6) - is just like this part

Frozen

00:08:932 (1) - reverse?
00:42:682 (3) - this slider... move to an other place to make a flow or jump?
00:56:276 (5) - this slider is cause trouble in reading to most players, u can check ur 01:53:932 (3,4) - part, this is just fit.
02:30:495 (1) - reverse? (just suggestion
03:03:307 (3) - add a spinner?

beautiful song, and i like your map's pattern~:3

good luck~

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-06-10T08:45:45+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
Hi, I'm a newbie modder giving some noob suggestions here as a player, would u mind? lol

Cold
01:06:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part... feel different from the others, u can check ur 02:22:995 (1,2,3,4) - part :3 I don't see anything wrong with this...
01:50:651 - add a note? 01:58:151 (6) - is just like this part Okay, added.
Frozen
00:08:932 (1) - reverse? It's following the loudness of the instrument.
00:42:682 (3) - this slider... move to an other place to make a flow or jump? Uhm, why should I?
00:56:276 (5) - this slider is cause trouble in reading to most players, u can check ur 01:53:932 (3,4) - part, this is just fit. 00:55:807 (4) has a slider tick; it would definitely help in reading the length of the slider.
02:30:495 (1) - reverse? (just suggestion Done.
03:03:307 (3) - add a spinner? idk; I think the spinner is going to be too short...

beautiful song, and i like your map's pattern~:3

good luck~

Thanks for modding

Melt

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Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-06-11T15:44:00+00:00

Hi ~
M4M

[Cold]

00:02:370(1)add a finish here?
00:10:807(2)x:309 y:96 for blanket
00:11:745(3)down a little to avoid overlap with 1
00:22:057(2)copy00:21:120(1) and ctrl+>> may looks better o.o
00:55:338(1,2)sometings like this？
SPOILER
01:22:995(1)i think its better to add a circle and make the spin start at 01:23:229
01:41:041(2)it may sounds better if you remove this circle because there are not the climax of the music
01:44:791(2)^
03:00:495(1)some suggestion for this slider
SPOILER

[Frozen]

00:26:979(2)nazi o.o
SPOILER
00:45:495(1)remove nc
00:45:729(2)nc
00:45:963(3)remove nc
00:56:979(2,3,4)two gird left
01:42:096(2,3,5)2 x:211 y:220 3 x:209 y 246 and 5 x:307 y:258 to make them parallel to each other
02:56:745(1,3)i dont like the shape of those slider
03:01:666(2)try this rhythm?
SPOILER

that's all from me,nice map :3
good luck~

Natsu

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Natsu 2013-06-15T04:58:35+00:00

Hi M4M

General:

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning
SPOILER
Frozen:
1. 00:13:502 maybe is just me but I dont feel nothing in this point maybe delete it
2. 00:18:307 add whistle maybe you forget it
3. 00:22:057 ^
4. 00:26:510 remove finish and whistle from head and slider body and add whistle in the tail
5. 00:26:159 delete this nothing in music here but you forget add one in 00:26:393 i feel music here
6. 00:27:682 remove whistle from slider body just let it on the head
7. 00:28:385 why you ignore vocals gonna fit better if you add a circle here imo actually feel so empty
8. 00:29:323 whistle in the tail maybe you forget it other diff got it
9. 00:29:791 remove finish from tail and add clap
10. 00:30:495 add acircle with finish here and start spinner in 00:30:729 fit better with the song also for consistency with the other diff and remove whistle from spinner since finish is enought
11. 00:52:995 add whistle like you did on cold
12. 00:54:635 remove whistle? sound weird taking in consideration a finish in next slider imo
13. 01:01:901 1/2 slider gonna fit better the vocal here
14. 01:02:370 add whistle like cold
15. 01:07:995 remove new combo no sense for me is just one circle with no jump on it better remove it
16. 01:08:112 add clap in the spinner
17. 01:09:870 add whistle you know why :p
18. 00:43:620 you forget put hitsounds on this slider whistle in the head clap in the tail
19. 00:44:909 add circle i feel music here
20. 00:45:963 remove new combo since the next jump is not big is perfect readable without it imo
21. 00:55:807 maybe can you move the last point of this slider to x:320 y:80 cuz the next slider get overlapped is a little hard to read it with hd or dt imo
22. 01:22:995 unstack it since a little jump gonna fit better this part
23. 01:30:495 add clap
24. 01:37:057 add whistle
25. 01:37:995 ^
26. 01:40:573 remove whistle
27. 01:40:807 add whistle
28. 01:41:276 remove whistle from tail
29. 01:41:745 add whistle
30. 01:44:323 remove whistle
31. 01:44:557 add whistle in the head and tail
32. 01:45:963 remove whistle from tail
33. 01:46:432 add whistle
34. 01:46:784 remove clap
35. 01:46:901 add clap
36. 01:47:135 remove clap
37. 02:22:057 when i was playing this diff I feel weird this stack since break the flow maybe unstack it imo
38. 02:26:745 remove whistle finish fit better alone
39. 02:27:916 (3,4,1) - also here the 2 last stacked circles make me confuse since i was used to play this triplet like you did before better unstack it
40. 03:01:901 remove whistle
Cold:
1. 00:21:120 (1,2) - fix the little distance error here
2. 00:24:870 x:144 y:148 to fix the little distance error
3. 01:56:745 add whistle in the tail like the other diff?
4. 02:07:057 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - fix distance error is little but better fix it can be confuse for newbies
5. 02:04:245 add finish
6. 03:03:541 remove this new combo no sense for me also other diff dont have it
7. take in consideration some hitsounds suggestion I did in the other diff
Nice map GL with this

ritsu-tanaika

468 posts

Joined September 2012

ritsu-tanaika 2013-06-16T09:17:41+00:00

Hi, I'll help you m4m the snow crystal map!

General: Good use of pattens but some parts the audio needs to be louder

COLD

00:20:651 (4) - Add a note at X:236 Y: 208 Without this note, the gameplay sounds less fluent

00:53:932 (2) - Increase the audio to 60%, currently its only at 40% and its not loud enough for players to hear

01:07:291 (3) - Increase audio to 60%, same reason as above. also, if the slider ended on the white tick at 01:07:526, it sounds better

02:01:432 (3) - Change the tip of the slider to be at X:160 Y:124, if you follow this the slider looks better when curved more to the right

02:25:807 (5,6,7) - New combo?

FROZEN

The timing section at 00:17:370 is too quiet at 30%. please change the volume to 40%

00:45:495 (1,2) - No need to new combo

00:53:229 (2,3) - This pattern is a little confusing, consider moving 00:53:229 (2) - to X:80 Y: 304 and leave 00:53:463 (3) - at original location

00:56:276 (5) - This slider could be moved to X:284 Y:68,

Right now, the 5 is hidden under 00:55:807 (4) - so it makes it very hard for players to follow.

ONLY FOLLOW THIS IF YOU FOLLOWED THE ONE ABOVE ---> 00:56:745 (1) - Stack this under 00:56:276 (5) - to finish the pattern

01:41:745 (1) - Consider making these slider perfectly vertical to make a Y shape pattern (X:208 Y:104)

02:11:510 (5) - Add a circle at X:472 Y:100

02:14:557 (4) - Ctrl + G this to make it slide on the opposite side

02:24:401 (1,2) - No need to NC

03:03:776 (1) - Add a slider at the end which ends at 03:04:713 , reduce audio to 5%

Hope I helped

peeace

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peeace 2013-06-16T14:37:10+00:00

m4m from your queue.. i'll post my map on your queue

[General]

" if your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be insane (this basically means that it's highly recommended to have 3 difficulties unless the song itself doesn't allow much variety); if your mapset has three difficulties, one of them should be about ~2.5/3 star difficulty level, and the second should not be Insane; "
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset

i suggest making a new difficulty (around 4 star)

for the map, its more to my suggestions and opinions..

[cold]
01:06:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks weird, u can remap that part..

02:19:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - i think u can make the flow of this part moving in a better circle anticlockwise movement

[Frozen]
00:04:713 (2,1,2,1,2) - end slider 2 and the rest - try making a better pattern. perfect polygon circle or perfect star will be good..
00:21:120 (1,2,3,4,1) - that pattern can be improved into like 01:36:120 (1,2,3,4,1) but going inwards
00:30:260 (4) - move to (196,144) - put it exact mid point of slider 2 and 3, how do u found out the exact midpoint?, create 2 slider (only for positioning help, remove it later),1 connecting end of slider 2 and 3, another 1 connecting head of slider 2 and 3, put it in the intersection of the slider,thats the mid point, or u can simply calculate the cordinates ..

01:02:838 (3,4,5,6,7) - u have madke that pattern at 00:56:745 (1,2,3,4,5) make a star instead, for variation
01:20:885 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - place it to middle, then
01:22:760 (4,1) - (40,256), flip horizontal of position of slider 2 in previous combo

02:22:057 (2,3,4,5) - same distance snapping will be good

hope this helps..

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-17T01:49:08+00:00

peeace ..

our map have 2 difficulty, so it's rankable.. and we not make insane ... why?? ask bpm xD

reject all in cold.. just follow add finish in natsu's mod. and little fix by me :3

cold >_____<

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udah ah hinsvar loe kd aja semua, gw lupa ngefix yg mana aja ``

cold freeze frozen Q_Q

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Senritsu

2,197 posts

Joined October 2011

Senritsu 2013-06-17T05:49:48+00:00

Xinely wrote:
udah ah hinsvar loe kd aja semua, gw lupa ngefix yg mana aja ``

ngakak bacanya wakakakwa

Goodluck anyway~ XD

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Hinsvar 2013-06-18T11:47:38+00:00

Melt wrote:
[Cold]
00:02:370(1)add a finish here? Done.
00:10:807(2)x:309 y:96 for blanket Did my best for this.
00:11:745(3)down a little to avoid overlap with 1 Uhm, that can't be helped I guess...
[Frozen]
00:26:979(2)nazi o.o
SPOILER
00:45:495(1)remove nc A new stanza starts here.
00:45:729(2)nc ^
00:45:963(3)remove nc ^

Natsu wrote:
General:

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning
SPOILER
Frozen:
00:13:502 maybe is just me but I dont feel nothing in this point maybe delete it I think I can hear something there...
00:52:995 add whistle like you did on cold Uhm, there's already a whistle...
00:54:635 remove whistle? sound weird taking in consideration a finish in next slider imo It fits with the song and doesn't interfere with the finish.
01:09:870 add whistle you know why :p ...No? The song doesn't suggest a whistle.
00:43:620 you forget put hitsounds on this slider whistle in the head clap in the tail Uhm, they're already there...
00:44:909 add circle i feel music here Don't think it needs to be mapped.
00:45:963 remove new combo since the next jump is not big is perfect readable without it imo Done.
01:22:995 unstack it since a little jump gonna fit better this part Done.
01:30:495 add clap ^
01:37:057 add whistle There's nothing on the song that indicates the need of it.
01:37:995 ^ ^
01:40:573 remove whistle Okay.
01:40:807 add whistle ^
01:41:276 remove whistle from tail The instrument is louder here compared to 01:41:745.
01:41:745 add whistle ^
01:44:323 remove whistle Similar to the case above.
01:44:557 add whistle in the head and tail ^
01:45:963 remove whistle from tail ^
01:46:432 add whistle ^
01:46:784 remove clap This is the spot where the clap is supposed to be.
01:46:901 add clap ^
01:47:135 remove clap ^
02:22:057 when i was playing this diff I feel weird this stack since break the flow maybe unstack it imo Nope; I'm sure enough it fits well with how the song goes.
02:26:745 remove whistle finish fit better alone The music clearly demands a finish hitsound here.
02:27:916 (3,4,1) - also here the 2 last stacked circles make me confuse since i was used to play this triplet like you did before better unstack it I don't see any problem with this, seriously. It plays well for me and isn't confusing.
03:01:901 remove whistle Why?
Cold:
01:56:745 add whistle in the tail like the other diff? Done.

ritsu-tanaika wrote:
General: Good use of pattens but some parts the audio needs to be louder

COLD

00:53:932 (2) - Increase the audio to 60%, currently its only at 40% and its not loud enough for players to hear Uh, I'm sure enough it's audible.

01:07:291 (3) - Increase audio to 60%, same reason as above. also, if the slider ended on the white tick at 01:07:526, it sounds better

02:01:432 (3) - Change the tip of the slider to be at X:160 Y:124, if you follow this the slider looks better when curved more to the right It's following 01:58:620 (1)'s curve.

02:25:807 (5,6,7) - New combo? No; it would make the combo pattern inconsistent.

FROZEN

The timing section at 00:17:370 is too quiet at 30%. please change the volume to 40% Done.

00:45:495 (1,2) - No need to new combo k.

00:53:229 (2,3) - This pattern is a little confusing, consider moving 00:53:229 (2) - to X:80 Y: 304 and leave 00:53:463 (3) - at original location Uh... I don't think it's confusing though o.o

02:24:401 (1,2) - No need to NC k, k.

peeace wrote:
[General]

" if your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be insane (this basically means that it's highly recommended to have 3 difficulties unless the song itself doesn't allow much variety); if your mapset has three difficulties, one of them should be about ~2.5/3 star difficulty level, and the second should not be Insane; "
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset

i suggest making a new difficulty (around 4 star) Frozen is easy enough to be a Hard even if the star is pretty high, so nope.

for the map, its more to my suggestions and opinions..

[cold]
02:19:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - i think u can make the flow of this part moving in a better circle anticlockwise movement Moved a few things around here.

[Frozen]
00:04:713 (2,1,2,1,2) - end slider 2 and the rest - try making a better pattern. perfect polygon circle or perfect star will be good.. Rearranged.
01:20:885 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - place it to middle, then
01:22:760 (4,1) - (40,256), flip horizontal of position of slider 2 in previous combo Hmm, not really sure how should I do these two suggestions...
02:22:057 (2,3,4,5) - same distance snapping will be good It follows the increase of the vocal's volume.

Thanks for modding everyone!

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2013-06-24T02:51:28+00:00

My 7th mod

Cold:
~01:22:760 -It's a bit hard to read,put the circle at the reverse slider end to emphasis 1/2 beat note.
~03:03:541 - ^-Same goes here
~Can't find anymore mistakes here 0.o

Frozen:
~00:53:229 -Put NC here instead of the circle b4.
~01:46:432 - It's a bit hard to read here,maybe something new?

Your map has been modded many times,so I dunno if this advice would do any but I tried my best ><
Great map btw ^^ and good luck~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Hinsvar 2013-06-24T08:16:03+00:00

gideon5504 wrote:
My 7th mod

Cold:
~01:22:760 -It's a bit hard to read,put the circle at the reverse slider end to emphasis 1/2 beat note. Uhm, I'm sure enough it's not that hard and it's impossible to place it there.
~03:03:541 - ^-Same goes here ^
~Can't find anymore mistakes here 0.o

Frozen:
~00:53:229 -Put NC here instead of the circle b4. Why?
~01:46:432 - It's a bit hard to read here,maybe something new? Hmm, rearranged the pattern there.

Your map has been modded many times,so I dunno if this advice would do any but I tried my best ><
Great map btw ^^ and good luck~

Thanks for modding!

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2013-06-24T11:02:27+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
gideon5504 wrote:
My 7th mod

Cold:
~01:22:760 -It's a bit hard to read,put the circle at the reverse slider end to emphasis 1/2 beat note. Uhm, I'm sure enough it's not that hard and it's impossible to place it there.
~03:03:541 - ^-Same goes here ^
~Can't find anymore mistakes here 0.o

Frozen:
~00:53:229 -Put NC here instead of the circle b4. Why?
~01:46:432 - It's a bit hard to read here,maybe something new? Hmm, rearranged the pattern there.

Your map has been modded many times,so I dunno if this advice would do any but I tried my best ><
Great map btw ^^ and good luck~
Thanks for modding!

Lol, I tried my best but I am still inexperienced in modding

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

AnreFM 2013-06-26T17:39:54+00:00

Halo Hinsvar

M4M from Hinely's queue? :3

StoryBoarding

00:29:674 - SB loads exceed 5.00, try to reduce?
02:02:955 - ^
02:38:112 - ^
02:41:862 - ^
02:45:612 - ^
01:13:620 - Suggestion : For every star.png that have reached the bottom of the map, how about adding fade? Will make the map nicer and besides, having them dissappear like that isn't looked really nice in my opinion orz
02:07:514 - Same as above; for the s.png this time, add fade also

COLD

00:13:620 (1) - nazi sorry; raise the slider end 1 grid to keep symmetry with 00:11:745 (3) -
00:41:276 (2,3,4) - Why the circles are so straight? How about moving the
00:41:510 (3) - Doesn't really look nice i think orz
00:56:745 (3) - Avoid stacking on normal, might be confusing for beginners
01:07:995 (4) - Make it curvy?
01:22:760 (2) - I don't think this note is really necessary and a tiny bit confusing for beginner orz
01:49:245 (4) - NC? different rhythm
02:24:870 (4) - NC
02:32:604 (1) - I think the spinner should start better at 02:32:838 instead, more fit the flow you're following from the notes before it
03:03:541 (1) - Change with spinner until 03:04:245? Can make the play better

FROZEN

00:11:745 (1,2,3) - Why not symmetry with 00:10:807 (1,2,3) -? If it is, it will make the NC in the 00:12:682 (1) - fit actually orz
00:53:229 (2) - NC here instead of 00:52:995 (1) -
02:11:510 - Add note here? Isn't really good if left blank orz
02:29:557 (1) - Doesn't really necesarry to put NC here, still same rhythm(and to avoid too short combo too )
03:03:073 (2) - NC? Gives a nice feeling and to emphasize the silence gap in the 03:02:370 (1) -

Uhh sorry for the short mod, this map is already great

Hope my mod helps you, good luck!

Starrr~

~~kecantol sama lagunya~~

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2013-06-27T05:50:39+00:00

Mod requested from my queue's 12 hour birthday bonus! ^^

Cold
I think the hitsounds should be louder. At least by about 5%. For this diff and the other diff
00:26:745 (3) - Move the slider to x360 y216 then resnap the other notes.

Frozen
00:23:463 (2,3,4) - try

E-eh @.@ Ne.. I couldn't find much. Gomen >< Dun give me Kudosu! I dun want kudosu for this. very sry

~~You've been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~~

shikyu

786 posts

Joined January 2011

shikyu 2013-06-28T13:52:41+00:00

hi, M4M for Hinely's queue

overall it's pretty good, just some little suggestion

[Frozen]
00:18:541 (5,1,2,3,4) - it can be a pentagonal (?), if you interested to change http://puu.sh/3qiD7.jpg
00:23:698 (3) - you can place it blanket with slider (4)
01:06:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - too linear, it can be made into circular pattern like this http://puu.sh/3qhl1.jpg
01:41:745 (1) - whistle on slider's start?
02:03:776 (1,2) - prefer drum-finish here, but up to you
02:58:385 (4,1) - use 1,2x DS pls, it's awkward since it has same beat, after that use 1,0x DS isn't problem http://puu.sh/3qiut.jpg

[Cold]
00:26:745 (3) - move bit down (x:360 y:216) and fix slider to blanket 00:26:276 (2)
01:01:432 (4) - move to x:372 y:176 to blanket slider head with slider (3)
02:54:401 (3) - move a bit down? to prevent it touch HP bar and make smooth circular (can use x:192 y:32)
02:55:807 (5) - move bit down to blanket slider head with slider 02:54:870 (4)

I prevent from nazi mod, especially for triplet arrangement. just make it have more variety (circular or diagonal), your choice

semoga berguna :v that's all, good luck~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Hinsvar 2013-06-29T08:08:29+00:00

AnreFM wrote:
COLD
00:13:620 (1) - nazi sorry; raise the slider end 1 grid to keep symmetry with 00:11:745 (3) - Arranged the slider by myself.
00:41:276 (2,3,4) - Why the circles are so straight? How about moving the
00:41:510 (3) - Doesn't really look nice i think orz I don't see any problem with this o.o
00:56:745 (3) - Avoid stacking on normal, might be confusing for beginners I'm sure enough stacks are fine in a Normal diff...
01:07:995 (4) - Make it curvy? It fits better with the entire pattern if made straight.
01:22:760 (2) - I don't think this note is really necessary and a tiny bit confusing for beginner orz Huh? I think it's fine; there's nothing to worry o.o
01:49:245 (4) - NC? different rhythm Don't see how could it be different.
02:24:870 (4) - NC ^
02:32:604 (1) - I think the spinner should start better at 02:32:838 instead, more fit the flow you're following from the notes before it Done.
03:03:541 (1) - Change with spinner until 03:04:245? Can make the play better Nope; a spinner that lasts less than a second is a very bad idea.
FROZEN
00:11:745 (1,2,3) - Why not symmetry with 00:10:807 (1,2,3) -? If it is, it will make the NC in the 00:12:682 (1) - fit actually orz I wanted to create a variety of patterns, and to be honest, I don't think making a symmetrical pattern will work here...
00:53:229 (2) - NC here instead of 00:52:995 (1) - Umm, I'm following the stanza.
02:11:510 - Add note here? Isn't really good if left blank orz I'm sure enough that one's fine if left unmapped.
02:29:557 (1) - Doesn't really necesarry to put NC here, still same rhythm(and to avoid too short combo too ) It's to indicate that it's the beginning of a new pattern.
03:03:073 (2) - NC? Gives a nice feeling and to emphasize the silence gap in the 03:02:370 (1) - Well, it follows the... yeah, stanzas, and I don't see why should we abandon that here...
Uhh sorry for the short mod, this map is already great
Hope my mod helps you, good luck!
Starrr~ ~~kecantol sama lagunya~~

yurunneram wrote:
Mod requested from my queue's 12 hour birthday bonus! ^^

Cold
I think the hitsounds should be louder. At least by about 5%. For this diff and the other diff
00:26:745 (3) - Move the slider to x360 y216 then resnap the other notes. Done.

Frozen
00:23:463 (2,3,4) - try k.

E-eh @.@ Ne.. I couldn't find much. Gomen >< Dun give me Kudosu! I dun want kudosu for this. very sry Nope; I'll still give you one because your mod is still helpful.

~~You've been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~~

shikyu wrote:
hi, M4M for Hinely's queue

overall it's pretty good, just some little suggestion

[Frozen]
00:18:541 (5,1,2,3,4) - it can be a pentagonal (?), if you interested to change http://puu.sh/3qiD7.jpg ...Will consult to her later.
00:23:698 (3) - you can place it blanket with slider (4) Did stuff here.
01:06:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - too linear, it can be made into circular pattern like this http://puu.sh/3qhl1.jpg Also not gonna touch this for now.
01:41:745 (1) - whistle on slider's start? Done.
02:03:776 (1,2) - prefer drum-finish here, but up to you Drum-whistle goes better with the song, IMO o.o
02:58:385 (4,1) - use 1,2x DS pls, it's awkward since it has same beat, after that use 1,0x DS isn't problem http://puu.sh/3qiut.jpg Done.

[Cold]
00:26:745 (3) - move bit down (x:360 y:216) and fix slider to blanket 00:26:276 (2) ...It's scary how can two modders suggest the exact same thing. Done.
01:01:432 (4) - move to x:372 y:176 to blanket slider head with slider (3) I think she intentionally makes a pattern like this, and thus I won't be touching it for now.
02:54:401 (3) - move a bit down? to prevent it touch HP bar and make smooth circular (can use x:192 y:32) y 48 instead.
02:55:807 (5) - move bit down to blanket slider head with slider 02:54:870 (4) Same as the second suggestion.

I prevent from nazi mod, especially for triplet arrangement. just make it have more variety (circular or diagonal), your choice
semoga berguna :v that's all, good luck~

Thanks for modding everyone

happy30

Featured Artist

2,064 posts

Joined August 2008

happy30 2013-07-02T03:56:07+00:00

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

nice song~ sb is cute too.
I had two issues with the sb though. I don't know why but widescreen SBs are not supported yet. Could you use a 4:3 bg instead of your current 16:9 bg so that black borders will appear at the sides when you play it in widescreen mode? It will look much better for the SB.
The second thing is that some snowflakes or stars randomly appeared or disappeared on the screen >.> It would look better if they faded.

Cold
nice collab!
very solid diff. The rhythm and spacing were both good.
The hitsounds fit the song well too.

Frozen
the sliders are a bit too fast in the first 20 seconds imo. can you reduce the speed there to like 0.75x?
I had the same feeling for the slower part after the break. I think you could reduce the speed there as well.
Other than that the map was quite nice. your mapping styles fit together nicely. I liked the triplets you used.

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-07-10T18:13:07+00:00

yo here's your mod from my random queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i agree with happy about the stars and snowflakes disappearing on the screen. it'd look really nice and more effective if you fade it in/out somehow.

[Cold]
00:15:495 (1) - remove the NC for this because the piano is the same as the previous combo, also it should look easier for players since it has a straight path to the next note to keep the flow steady during gameplay.
00:26:745 (3) - make this slider look like (1) because the flow would be steady and symmetrical, also i find it more fun to follow during gameplay IMO. it should look something like this.
00:30:495 (3) - stack this perfectly on the beginning of (1). same reason as above, about the flow being steady.
01:35:182 (5) - forgetting a whistle? i highly consider adding a whistle at the beginning for consistency with the other whistles in the whistle pattern.
02:17:370 (3) - i think i heard claps at the end of this slider. i say that you should listen carefully for it to hear it, but idk if it's me. if you can't hear it, then ignore this suggestion.

[Frozen]
00:16:432 (1) - i think you can do 0.50 instead of 0.75 to show emphasis in the piano. i find 0.75 too fast and quick to the piano, so i feel that 0.50 should fit here instead IMO.
00:18:541 (5) - add whistles at the repeat arrow and at the end since they're emphasizing the piano, also i find that it fits with this part of the song since you did a similar whistle in this combo.
00:19:713 (3) - consider adding a whistle at the end. same reason as above.
00:23:698 (3,4) - i say that you make your spacing consistent here to increase the flow and excitement in this part of the song during gameplay.
01:57:682 (3,4) - you made a mistake in this clap pattern. it should be on the end of (3), not (4) because adding the clap at (4) breaks the consistency pattern in the claps during gameplay.
02:03:776 (3) - why not a NC here? it follows a new phrase and you did the same thing in cold as well.

and that's all. these diffs are pretty nice. call me back for a re-check once the faded out problem is fixed.

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-07-11T08:13:33+00:00

thank you all for modding >.< fixed the issues~

osb. code here:

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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-07-11T09:25:14+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
yo here's your mod from my random queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
i agree with happy about the stars and snowflakes disappearing on the screen. it'd look really nice and more effective if you fade it in/out somehow. Fixed by yanlu... I think?

[Cold]
00:15:495 (1) - remove the NC for this because the piano is the same as the previous combo, also it should look easier for players since it has a straight path to the next note to keep the flow steady during gameplay. Wait, this is not supposed to be NC'd in the first place. Fixed.
00:26:745 (3) - make this slider look like (1) because the flow would be steady and symmetrical, also i find it more fun to follow during gameplay IMO. it should look something like this. Done.
00:30:495 (3) - stack this perfectly on the beginning of (1). same reason as above, about the flow being steady. | It's already stacked there...
01:35:182 (5) - forgetting a whistle? i highly consider adding a whistle at the beginning for consistency with the other whistles in the whistle pattern. Done.
02:17:370 (3) - i think i heard claps at the end of this slider. i say that you should listen carefully for it to hear it, but idk if it's me. if you can't hear it, then ignore this suggestion. Uh, idk, but I don't think I heard anything on the music that can fit with a clap...

[Frozen]
00:16:432 (1) - i think you can do 0.50 instead of 0.75 to show emphasis in the piano. i find 0.75 too fast and quick to the piano, so i feel that 0.50 should fit here instead IMO. Done.
00:18:541 (5) - add whistles at the repeat arrow and at the end since they're emphasizing the piano, also i find that it fits with this part of the song since you did a similar whistle in this combo. ^
00:19:713 (3) - consider adding a whistle at the end. same reason as above. ^
00:23:698 (3,4) - i say that you make your spacing consistent here to increase the flow and excitement in this part of the song during gameplay. ^
01:57:682 (3,4) - you made a mistake in this clap pattern. it should be on the end of (3), not (4) because adding the clap at (4) breaks the consistency pattern in the claps during gameplay. Not really sure about this; I think it's supposed to be on the red tick, but okay, I think this one's good too. Done.
02:03:776 (3) - why not a NC here? it follows a new phrase and you did the same thing in cold as well. Done, yeah.

and that's all. these diffs are pretty nice. call me back for a re-check once the faded out problem is fixed.

Thanks for modding!

*Yes, Xinely told me to fix her parts, so here you go.

Also thanks to happy for testplaying (sorry for replying really late orz) and yanlu for providing the updated SB script)

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2013-07-12T05:49:02+00:00

re-check~ no kd for this post.

[Cold]
03:02:838 (4) - i think this should be a NC since the vocals change in this part of the song. remember to remove the NC on the next note if you do this since they're connected.

[Snowy]
00:13:502 (3) - i find that this circle is unnecessary to the music, so you should remove it for that purpose to keep a steady flow in this part.
00:16:432 (1) - the beginning of the slider should be 0.50, not the end since it's at 0.50.
00:22:995 (1,2) - i think that if you do a perfect stack at the end of (4), it'll be more neater and more smoother in transition, but if you do this, you should keep the spacing between (1,2) consistent, so reduce the spacing between (4,1) to 1.90 so that it'll be consistent in spacing and it'll be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay.
01:15:377 (5) - same as 00:13:502.
01:18:190 (3) - ^
01:33:190 (3) - same as above since this part is a bit calm and an extra circle isn't necessary here.
01:38:346 (2) - ^
01:42:096 (2) - ^
01:48:190 (3) - same as 00:13:502.
02:08:346 (3) - ^

also there's one snowflake that disappears suddenly at the 2nd kiai, so you should fix that so that it'd be consistent in the fade-outs.

and that's all for now.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-07-12T14:19:08+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
re-check~ no kd for this post.

[Cold]
03:02:838 (4) - i think this should be a NC since the vocals change in this part of the song. remember to remove the NC on the next note if you do this since they're connected. Fixed.

[Snowy]
00:13:502 (3) - i find that this circle is unnecessary to the music, so you should remove it for that purpose to keep a steady flow in this part. Done.
00:16:432 (1) - the beginning of the slider should be 0.50, not the end since it's at 0.50. Oh damn lol. Done.
00:22:995 (1,2) - i think that if you do a perfect stack at the end of (4), it'll be more neater and more smoother in transition, but if you do this, you should keep the spacing between (1,2) consistent, so reduce the spacing between (4,1) to 1.90 so that it'll be consistent in spacing and it'll be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay. Did things here by my own way.
01:15:377 (5) - same as 00:13:502. There are sounds from an instrument here...
01:18:190 (3) - ^ ^
01:33:190 (3) - same as above since this part is a bit calm and an extra circle isn't necessary here. Done here.
01:38:346 (2) - ^ There are instruments here.
01:42:096 (2) - ^ Done here.
01:48:190 (3) - same as 00:13:502. Instruments.
02:08:346 (3) - ^ ^

also there's one snowflake that disappears suddenly at the 2nd kiai, so you should fix that so that it'd be consistent in the fade-outs. Fixed by yanlu.

and that's all for now.

Thanks for the recheck~

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2013-07-12T21:07:05+00:00

everything looks good and ready to go, so here's your bubble

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kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-07-12T21:48:29+00:00

Ranked.

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Elisha_old

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Elisha_old 2013-07-12T21:53:08+00:00

CONGRATS!

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Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Snow Crystal

General

Storyboarding

Cold

Freeze

Zhengster wrote:

rezoons wrote:

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Gloria Guard wrote:

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General

Storyboarding

Cold

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Revolver_revo wrote:

wmtokok wrote:

Miya wrote:

Miya wrote:

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xChippy wrote:

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Xinely wrote:

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