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Sieg

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Sieg 2013-05-31T15:38:01+00:00

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Death is so terribly final, while life is full of possibilities.

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riffy

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riffy 2013-06-10T03:08:40+00:00

i was here

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Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-10T07:31:54+00:00

okay

RikiH_

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RikiH_ 2013-06-11T17:36:47+00:00

m4m

General

From here 01:29:839 to here 01:34:083 it would be really cool if you raise the volume gradually, since in the song the volume raises

I also suggest to add a spinner in all diffs (maybe at the end) for variety in scores.

Easy

00:17:691 (1,2) - I'd prefer a blanket here
00:33:959 (3,4,1) - You put a straight line here, I'd prefer a circular pattern, for example:

00:43:155 (1) - Last sliderpoint to 449|305 for a better symmetry
01:07:912 (4,5,1) - The same as above, I'd prefer a circular pattern for a better flow

01:15:692 (1,2,3,4) - I'd remake the pattern because 01:15:692 (1) is supposed to be symmetric with 01:13:570 (1,2)

Bakari's Normal

I'm not really sure but I'd add some finishes here

00:47:399 (1) - Beginning
00:48:460 (2) - Beginning
00:49:521 (1) - Beginning
00:50:582 (2)
00:56:948 (1) - Beginning
00:58:009 (3) - Beginning
00:59:070 (1) - Beginning
01:29:839 (2) - Beginning
01:30:900 (1)
01:31:608 (3) - Repeat
01:33:022 (1) - Beginning

Obviously, I highly suggest to apply this in all diffs if you like it.

01:10:741 (1,2) - This blanket is a bit ugly
01:28:071 (3,1) - ^
01:28:778 (1,2) - Swap NCs

Hard

01:29:485 (6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure this fits...

____________________

Really good map, take a star

moonlightleaf

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moonlightleaf 2013-06-11T17:54:13+00:00

M4M

General

背景图片请用1024x768

全程在玩抽一段做break呗

Normal难度和Easy 没啥区别呀，

Normal+Hard 也是可以rank的建议去掉Easy

Easy

我觉得重叠note不好,新手不适合

00:57:302 note？

01:30:193　＾

Normal

CS = 3

01:00:485 note

Hard

00:04:782 note 放1上面调整6号

00:04:428(5) 删

00:06:550(5) ^

00:07:965 note

00:09:026 ^

00:44:039 note 放2上面

00:46:161(3) 放 x|280 y|80

00:59:954 note

01:01:015 ^

01:02:076 ^

01:08:442 ^

01:00:661(1) 删

01:01:722(5) ^

01:03:844(5) ^

01:05:966(3) ^

01:26:126(2) ^

01:31:961(1) 放到 x|372 y|76

GOOD LUCK >w<

Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-11T18:10:53+00:00

Thanks RikiH_, moonlightleaf and TrigonometrY :3
updated

Vascud

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Vascud 2013-06-11T21:15:28+00:00

Very good map, Best of "Ramin Djawadi - Game of Thrones (Main Title)"

i hope, it will be ranked some day

Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2013-06-11T21:48:12+00:00

能用中文的哦？

渣modder，渣mapper，没经验，大部分提的建议都是从玩家角度出发，见谅QVQ

哎。。。老实说这图我实在是挑不出什么毛病啦。。。QVQ

Genaral

tag只有一个？再加几个吧？

Hard

01:14:631 (6) - 移到401,139？
01:15:692 (3) - 移到220,142？
01:24:180 (2) - 这个滑条尾好像太靠上了。。。可能会被HP槽挡住吧。。。不过貌似不改也不影响打图。。。01:25:595 (1) - 倒是无所谓
01:29:485 (6,7,8,9) - 总感觉这几个不太整齐。。。再整理一下？

Bakari's Normal

00:16:983 (2,3) - 我知道你想摆个曲线。。。不过ds再调整一下？差的有点多啊，主要是太明显了。。。1.13和1.08真心感觉不一样。。。
00:49:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, 难道说是故意的么。。。如果是的话就无视我。。。
00:52:704 (2,3,4) - ^
01:22:412 (1,2,3) - ^这个特明显。。。
还有好多，不说了。。。（感觉自己吹毛求疵QVQ

Easy

01:15:692 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个弧线或许能做的更好看一些？
01:29:839 (1) - 感觉离01:28:424 (2) - 有点近，估计有人开dthr的时候会感觉到。。。拉远一点？

哎，渣mod见谅QVQ
good luck

Alarido

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Alarido 2013-06-12T00:27:48+00:00

M4M From your queue

Sincerely, your map is kinda Bubbable. No [General] issues found. And either [Easy] and [Bakari's Normal] are fully Bubbable but, looking at [Hard] ....

[Hard]
00:05:666 (2,3,4,5) - It's a kinda Highlander jump which Song does not suggests. On flow, it goes well.
♥ 00:16:630 (4,5,6,1) - These jumps are AMAZING ♥ I like them! They are 100% CORRECT! Ah! There some other jumps like this, I agree at all (:
00:20:520 (2,3,4) - It's a bit confusing to eyes, even flow is OK.
00:45:277 (1,2,3,4) - Mainly the sliders (1) and (4) are a bit confusing here, even though flow is, again, OK.

There is a Replay available too → HERE ← oot elbaliava yalpeR a si erehT

(Well, this is the maximum a retard player can [try] do

~)

Att.

And don't forget explain why not changing something. Expertise sharing helps osu! keep growing.

Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-12T04:24:24+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
能用中文的哦？
np :3

Genaral
tag只有一个？再加几个吧？
yep, I guess I should find more
Hard
01:14:631 (6) - 移到401,139？
yep
01:15:692 (3) - 移到220,142？
yep
01:24:180 (2) - 这个滑条尾好像太靠上了。。。可能会被HP槽挡住吧。。。不过貌似不改也不影响打图。。。01:25:595 (1) - 倒是无所谓
moved
01:29:485 (6,7,8,9) - 总感觉这几个不太整齐。。。再整理一下？
I think that's fine, but maybe I'll remove this further

Easy
01:15:692 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个弧线或许能做的更好看一些？
fixed a little
01:29:839 (1) - 感觉离01:28:424 (2) - 有点近，估计有人开dthr的时候会感觉到。。。拉远一点？
moved little bit, yes

哎，渣mod见谅QVQ
good luck

Thanks :3

Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-12T04:29:24+00:00

Alarido wrote:
[Hard]
00:05:666 (2,3,4,5) - It's a kinda Highlander jump which Song does not suggests. On flow, it goes well.
♥ 00:16:630 (4,5,6,1) - These jumps are AMAZING ♥ I like them! They are 100% CORRECT! Ah! There some other jumps like this, I agree at all (:
00:20:520 (2,3,4) - It's a bit confusing to eyes, even flow is OK.
00:45:277 (1,2,3,4) - Mainly the sliders (1) and (4) are a bit confusing here, even though flow is, again, OK.

Good points to think about. I don't want change for now but thanks for noticing. I'll deal with them later when I'll have more opinions on this.

There is a Replay available too → HERE ← oot elbaliava yalpeR a si erehT

(Well, this is the maximum a retard player can [try] do ~)

Att.

And don't forget explain why not changing something. Expertise sharing helps osu! keep growing.

Thanks :3

Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-12T04:29:54+00:00

Vascud wrote:
Very good map, Best of "Ramin Djawadi - Game of Thrones (Main Title)" i hope, it will be ranked some day

riffy

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riffy 2013-06-12T05:04:47+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
m4m

Bakari's Normal

I'm not really sure but I'd add some finishes here Sieg will hitsound everything

00:47:399 (1) - Beginning
00:48:460 (2) - Beginning
00:49:521 (1) - Beginning
00:50:582 (2)
00:56:948 (1) - Beginning
00:58:009 (3) - Beginning
00:59:070 (1) - Beginning
01:29:839 (2) - Beginning
01:30:900 (1)
01:31:608 (3) - Repeat
01:33:022 (1) - Beginning

Obviously, I highly suggest to apply this in all diffs if you like it.

01:10:741 (1,2) - This blanket is a bit ugly ~
01:28:071 (3,1) - ^ ~
01:28:778 (1,2) - Swap NCs no, it'll ruin my pattern and consistency :<

moonlightleaf wrote:
M4M

CS = 3 nope, why should I use it?

01:00:485 note 'kay

Hollow Wings wrote:
Bakari's Normal
00:16:983 (2,3) - 我知道你想摆个曲线。。。不过ds再调整一下？差的有点多啊，主要是太明显了。。。1.13和1.08真心感觉不一样。。。
00:49:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, 难道说是故意的么。。。如果是的话就无视我。。。
00:52:704 (2,3,4) - ^
01:22:412 (1,2,3) - ^这个特明显。。。
还有好多，不说了。。。（感觉自己吹毛求疵QVQ

Sorry, can you translate it for me? I have no idea what's written here

updt zbs

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248,84,66497,6,0,P|296:88|420:56,1,160,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,120,67558,2,0,P|480:164|464:280,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,360,68619,5,4,0:0:0:0:
400,340,68973,2,0,P|344:344|308:336,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,364,69680,2,0,P|244:312|232:200,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,132,70741,6,0,P|224:120|276:132,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,192,71448,2,0,P|344:160|348:108,2,80,8|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,72509,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,204,72863,6,0,P|108:148|156:52,1,160,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,52,73924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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424,212,78168,6,0,L|340:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,288,91254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,160,92669,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Sieg

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Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-12T07:30:09+00:00

updated

Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2013-06-12T10:44:39+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Hollow Wings wrote:
Bakari's Normal
00:16:983 (2,3) - 我知道你想摆个曲线。。。不过ds再调整一下？差的有点多啊，主要是太明显了。。。1.13和1.08真心感觉不一样。。。
00:49:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, 难道说是故意的么。。。如果是的话就无视我。。。
00:52:704 (2,3,4) - ^
01:22:412 (1,2,3) - ^这个特明显。。。
还有好多，不说了。。。（感觉自己吹毛求疵QVQ
Sorry, can you translate it for me? I have no idea what's written here

I'm sorry that i haven't noticed this is a gd from foreigner to me. I'll give ur map's mod here in english. D:

Bakari's Normal (in english)
00:16:983 (2,3) - seems like u want make them a special curve? but they have really different ds each other... like 1.13 and 1.08, they looks really different... arrange them? D:
00:49:521 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ (did u do that on purpose? ignore me if the answer is yes.
00:52:704 (2,3,4) - ^
01:22:412 (1,2,3) - ^ (these are really different ds...
and more... u can check them by yourself...
thou i think this is a good map, just some precision suggestion up there... good luck :3

riffy

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riffy 2013-06-12T12:44:13+00:00

Fixed DS on my diff, thank you!

Also, we did IRC mod with Sieg.

IRC

11:09 -Bakari-: Первое, зачем тебе х1.4 DS на изе?
11:10 Sieg: чтоб было все красиво
11:10 -Bakari-: После каждого слайдера ускорние в полтора раза
11:10 -Bakari-: это красиво, но не очень играбельно
11:10 -Bakari-: 0.8 попробуй
11:10 -Bakari-: тогда оверлапы будут такие, как бужто их так и задумывали
11:10 Sieg: ты мне сейчас предлагаешь ремапать всю дифу :\
11:11 -Bakari-: Нет, передвинуть \:D/
11:11 Sieg: да я не думаю, что это плохо играбельно
11:11 -Bakari-: 00:21:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - такие паттерны реально не очень играются. Слишком много серклов, попробуй замещать их слайдерами
11:12 Sieg: да наверное
11:13 -Bakari-:  00:09:203 (1) - попробуй перестроить флоу, читается так, будто сначала надо бить (1), а потом уже (5)
11:13 Sieg: станку 5 и 1
11:14 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/3dQa7.jpg
11:15 -Bakari-: 00:16:276 (2) -  хвост двойки слишком близко, новички могут слйчайно кликнуть на него. 
11:15 Sieg:  да что-такое
11:15 -Bakari-: А изя и так чертовски сложная, упрости хотя бы флоу
11:15 Sieg: изя для будущих кукези
11:16 -Bakari-: 00:17:691 (1,2) - nazi - сделал бы бланкет, а то страшный прямо как моя рожа по утрам
11:16 Sieg: что там страшного то, ладно
11:16 Sieg: сейчас что-нибудь придумаю
11:16 -Bakari-: Глаза невыспавшиеся
11:16 -Bakari-: а, ты про слайдер ;_;
11:17 -Bakari-: 00:21:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - даже в нормале полегче, там со слайдерами чередуется, а тут нон-стоп клики
11:17 Sieg: http://puu.sh/3dQft.jpg
11:18 Sieg: не нон стоп, там же
11:18 Sieg: ресты
11:18 Sieg: 2\1
11:18 -Bakari-: все равно не очень, уже на пятом круге ритм теряется
11:19 -Bakari-: а когда идет 00:24:764 (1,2,3,4) - новичок уже в ужасе
11:19 Sieg: дааа ладно
11:19 -Bakari-: + стаки тоже НЕ ИНАЧЕ КАК ПРОДЕЛКИ САТАНЫ
11:19 -Bakari-: СТАКИ ЖЕ НЕЧИТАЕМЫ ЕБАТЬ НОТА В НОТЕ
11:19 -Bakari-: Ну как-то так
11:19 Sieg: это же для куки :)
11:19 Sieg: кстати
11:19 Sieg: бтв
11:19 Sieg: про китайский мод, там только на спейсинг жалуются
11:20 Sieg: там что-то типо 1.1
11:20 Sieg: и 1
11:20 -Bakari-: А, ну я ничего не понял, мне и так норм :D
11:20 Sieg: ну не суть важно вобщем
11:20 Sieg: ну я б там тоже ничего править не стал особо
11:20 -Bakari-: 00:38:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - нет. Второй раз такое нельзя ._.
11:20 Sieg: 3 раза
11:20 Sieg: или 4
11:21 -Bakari-: D:
11:21 Sieg: 3
11:21 -Bakari-: Ну явно перебор
11:21 Sieg: да оно же в ритм
11:21 Sieg: да и 2\1
11:21 Sieg: пустые места
11:21 -Bakari-: после него такой изяшный паттер 
11:21 -Bakari-: паттерн* 00:43:155 (1,2,3) - 
11:21 -Bakari-: кстати, там тройка слизком близко, но тут хотя бы читаемо 
11:21 *-Bakari- runs
11:22 Sieg: :3
11:22 -Bakari-: 00:49:167 (3,4) - nazi - ...
11:23 Sieg: почти, да
11:23 Sieg: фксд
11:23 -Bakari-: 00:55:533 (6,1) - после стака не очень, но это норма.
11:23 Sieg: 32 это норма
11:23 Sieg: да
11:24 -Bakari-: алсо, [http://puu.sh/3dQpH.jpg так легче и быстрее их рисовать]
11:24 Sieg: так они кривее получаются :\
11:24 -Bakari-: неее, в самый раз
11:24 -Bakari-: у БД очень аккуратные
11:25 Sieg: дело вкуса
11:25 Sieg: я вообще изи так делал
11:25 -Bakari-: 01:08:619 (1,2) - новичок ведет слайдер, начинеает делть реверс (Тут появляется 2) и новичок моментально бросает слайдер, чтоб кликнуть на (2)
11:26 Sieg: и жмет ретрай
11:26 Sieg: +1пк
11:26 Sieg: профит
11:26 Sieg: :3
11:27 -Bakari-: 01:12:863 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
11:27 Sieg: 3й раз
11:27 Sieg:  :\
11:27 -Bakari-: заполняй их ЧЕМ НИБУДЬ полегче
11:27 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/3dQuP.jpg
11:27 -Bakari-: Ну хоть так
11:27 Sieg: :)
11:28 -Bakari-: потом доделаем мод, я пока пойду ._,/

We've fixed

some flow mistakes
General rhythm
Penis-shaped sliders ._.
Minor improvements

Note: log is incomplete, but still..

tiper

tiper 2013-06-15T10:57:19+00:00

13:01 Sieg: хайль
13:01 tiper: привет
13:02 tiper: проснусь - напишу мод
13:03 Sieg: акей, если что давай ирк помодим, у меня там просто бат в теме будет в течении дня ;_; а модик и пару сп еще надо
13:09 tiper: а, вот так вот все у тебя
13:09 tiper: ну ок
13:09 tiper: быстрее будет
13:09 Sieg: :3
14:38 tiper: линк дай
14:38 *Sieg is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262157 Ramin Djawadi - Game of Thrones (Main Title)]
14:42 tiper: хард
14:43 Sieg: хард
14:43 tiper: 00:08:142 (3) - вистл не пропустил по паттерну?
14:43 Sieg: да можно поставить, но там не такой сильный
14:43 Sieg: ээ
14:43 Sieg: ударный
14:43 Sieg: инструмент
14:43 Sieg: хз как он называется тут
14:46 tiper: 00:51:643 (1) - клэпа не хватает, имо
14:46 tiper: 00:52:704 (3) - и тут
14:46 tiper: (на коцах)
14:46 Sieg: добавим
14:48 tiper: 01:19:052 (9) - и вот сюда бы нотку
14:48 tiper: прямо на линию между (8) и (1)
14:49 tiper: 01:18:699 (7) - можно даже вот эту вот удалить
14:49 Sieg: да может
14:49 tiper: она не сильно принципиально по сравнению с тем местом, где я сказал
14:49 Sieg: а если
14:49 Sieg: просто 7 удалить?
14:49 tiper: можно и так
14:49 Sieg: так наверное даже лучше
14:49 tiper: действительно
14:49 tiper: лучше
14:50 tiper: 01:33:022 (5) - ну и вот этот бы слайдер куда-нибудь подальше от предыдущей ноты
14:50 tiper: как раньше было сделано
14:50 tiper: 01:30:900 (4,1) - вот тут вот
14:51 Sieg: там еще этот квадрат потом ><
14:51 tiper: можешь просто ctrl+g на этом слайдере сделать
14:51 tiper: 01:30:900 (4) - будет как тут
14:52 Sieg: да тогда начало квадрата
14:52 Sieg: надо двинуть
14:52 Sieg: как там флоу получится
14:52 Sieg: http://puu.sh/3gaTx.jpg
14:52 Sieg: не очень же
14:52 tiper: ну да
14:52 tiper: ну хз
14:52 Sieg: а хотя
14:52 tiper: думаю, там можно просто квадрат этот покрутить
14:52 Sieg: вроде нормально
14:54 tiper: нормал норм, но меня там размер кружков напрягает
14:55 Sieg: да
14:55 Sieg: ну бакари
14:55 tiper: ну, а с изи только по хс
14:55 tiper: 00:08:142 (4) - вистл, если в харде ставил
14:55 Sieg: что там
14:55 Sieg: неа
14:55 Sieg: не ставил
14:56 tiper: 00:51:643 (1,2) - клэпы
14:56 tiper: на концах
14:56 tiper: и все
14:56 Sieg: +
14:56 Sieg: отлично
14:56 Sieg: лог на форум дропни, спасибо за мод
14:56 tiper: сейчас в тред закину

Sieg

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Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-15T10:58:06+00:00

Thanks tiper :3
updated

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2013-06-16T00:03:26+00:00

I would consider calling this Main Title since that is how it is listed in the ost (don't have booklet to confirm though). Source field will tell you where the song is from.

Easy:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
00:17:691 (1,2) - I know you are trying to change it up a bit, but 1 looks slightly strange tome, and with the amount of blanketing you use, the idea that 1 does not blanket 2 is weird
01:08:619 (1) - since you have so much blanketing, shouldn't this slider blanket 01:11:448 (2)
01:23:473 (3) - since this is not blanketing anything and the ends are at similar heights...., I would suggest making the ends at the same height and rearrange notes accordingly
Combo mod:
01:02:960 (1) - I don't feel that these notes have enough power to justify a new combo
01:12:863 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:29:839 (1)
01:19:936 (1) - same as 01:02:960 (1)

Bakari's Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
This map really doesn't capture the music imo. There is only 1 two white note gap. Every other note in the map is separated by 1 white tick, nothing else. It makes the map get fairly boring after a while. Tbh, I felt the easy was more fun to play than this
00:12:386 (2) - point the end down a bit more to lead to 00:13:447 (3)
01:14:278 (3) - I don't like how the ending of 3 is overlapped by 1

Combo mod:
00:13:447 (3,1) - I know you want to have your combos be 2 white ticks long, but you are being inconsistent with 00:21:935 (1,2)
00:53:765 (4) - why is this combo not following your pattern of a new combo every 2 white ticks
00:54:826 (1) - probably because of the previous a new combo here makes very little sense in relation to the music (If you want to change up your combo pattern, please follow the music and don't just a variation of the 2 white tick combo that doesn't follow the music. Since this is true about the rest of map, stopping the combo map here.)

Hard:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
The AR does not fit the song or difficulty imo. 6 or 7 work a lot better.
00:14:508 (5,1) - this overlap is aesthetically unpleasing
00:16:983 (5,6,1) - ^
00:31:484 (5,1) - ^
00:39:972 (5,1) - ^ (Also, I think you used this slider too many times now)

=================
Overall, not a bad map, but I think the normal needs a bit of work. On a brighter note, great easy diff.

Sieg

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Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-16T05:23:42+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
I would consider calling this Main Title since that is how it is listed in the ost (don't have booklet to confirm though). Source field will tell you where the song is from.
Thanks to HBO for calling this just Main Title?
I want to keep it as it is right now if this is possible because "Ramin Djawadi - Main Title"only ok if you listening cd.

Easy:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
00:17:691 (1,2) - I know you are trying to change it up a bit, but 1 looks slightly strange tome, and with the amount of blanketing you use, the idea that 1 does not blanket 2 is weird
changed
01:08:619 (1) - since you have so much blanketing, shouldn't this slider blanket 01:11:448 (2)
fixed
01:23:473 (3) - since this is not blanketing anything and the ends are at similar heights...., I would suggest making the ends at the same height and rearrange notes accordingly
I find current one way of placing much better then 01:23:119 (2,4) - on same heights
Combo mod:
01:02:960 (1) - I don't feel that these notes have enough power to justify a new combo
that one is consistent with 2 previous same patterns 00:24:764 (1) - and 00:41:740 (1) - and also 01:15:692 (1) - and 01:19:936 (1) - so idk why you mention only this :3
main reason why I can put NC on this not only consistence with other 4 note combo but HP issues that may occur on misses, aesthetics, gameplay and music (every combo have pause in gameplay before)
01:12:863 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:29:839 (1)
same as 00:19:813 (3) - and 00:36:789 (3) - I would say this combed by pattern.
01:19:936 (1) - same as 01:02:960 (1)
and denying this one I explained already

Hard:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
The AR does not fit the song or difficulty imo. 6 or 7 work a lot better.
players hate low AR on fast BPM~170 songs
00:14:508 (5,1) - this overlap is aesthetically unpleasing
00:16:983 (5,6,1) - ^
00:31:484 (5,1) - ^
00:39:972 (5,1) - ^ (Also, I think you used this slider too many times now)
idk if you know\noticed that I love to make all things in aesthetics way, I don't find this overlaps unpleasant on contrary I find this ones as very clear and fun.

=================
Overall, not a bad map, but I think the normal needs a bit of work. On a brighter note, great easy diff.

Thanks blissfulyoshi :3

riffy

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riffy 2013-06-16T14:59:40+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
Bakari's Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
This map really doesn't capture the music imo. There is only 1 two white note gap. Every other note in the map is separated by 1 white tick, nothing else. It makes the map get fairly boring after a while. Tbh, I felt the easy was more fun to play than this boring after a while? that's a short song, so simple rhythm + quite fast BPM is a perfect combination here, imo!
00:12:386 (2) - point the end down a bit more to lead to 00:13:447 (3) nah, that'd look weird to me + i really want to keep my flow here
01:14:278 (3) - I don't like how the ending of 3 is overlapped by 1it's a blanket slider. Well, I'll change them if more people will complain

Combo mod:
00:13:447 (3,1) - I know you want to have your combos be 2 white ticks long, but you are being inconsistent with 00:21:935 (1,2) I've already noticed that thing before, but I don't feel like changing it because changing combos will look really strange here
00:53:765 (4) - why is this combo not following your pattern of a new combo every 2 white ticks fixed
00:54:826 (1) - probably because of the previous a new combo here makes very little sense in relation to the music (If you want to change up your combo pattern, please follow the music and don't just a variation of the 2 white tick combo that doesn't follow the music. Since this is true about the rest of map, stopping the combo map here.) I've re-arranged combos a bit

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Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-16T15:09:10+00:00

updated

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-18T17:32:59+00:00

I've made some sort of bonus, can be found in description tab.

nanda2009

925 posts

Joined October 2009

nanda2009 2013-06-19T15:53:26+00:00

Hi.

[Easy]

The SV is too slow compared to the distance between each objects imo. Consider to increase it for a bit
00:01:422 - 00:04:251 - this part feels a bit wrong imo. for example : 00:01:776 - This part feels empty, and 00:01:422 (2) 's tail isn't following any sound from the music imo. Try to change it to something similar to this
SPOILER
00:16:276 (2) - Disable clap at the head
00:24:764 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why don't you place these to something similar to 00:41:740 (1,2,3,4,1). It plays better imo.
00:26:179 (1,2) - It's a bit too hard to move the cursor down riight after moving your cursor up. These play badly. Try to change these to something similar to this :
SPOILER
You might have to move (3,4) to keep the distance
00:29:008 (4,5) - A bit nazi. These aren't stacked.
00:33:252 (2) - Same case as 00:16:276
00:51:643 (1,2,3) - Same case as 00:26:179 (1,2)

[Bakari's Normal]
00:09:910 (2,3) - Change it to something similar to this :

SPOILER
these play better imo.
01:14:278 (3) - This already pointed by other modders. I agree with this. The overlapping looks annoying.It's even visible in gameplay. And it's actually a bit annoying imo.
Suprisingly, these play better imo :
SPOILER
00:41:033 (1,2) - Looking at other parts similar to this ( 00:16:276 (4,1) ), I prefer switching the Combo setup
00:49:521 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:07:788 (2,3,4,5) - This is the part when the music volume increased. Rather than making these pattern too simple. I prefer making it like this :
SPOILER
00:43:155 (1,2) - Tricky pattern. The distance is too short. Add a note at 00:44:039
01:04:375 (1,2) - I prefer this. Feels better imo :
SPOILER
01:17:991 (4,5,6) - It's weird that you started to use 1/4 triplets from here. Even though the sound pattern from the music already start from 00:44:039.

Nice mapset. GL

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-19T16:30:21+00:00

nanda2009 wrote:
Hi.
Hallo

[Easy]
The SV is too slow compared to the distance between each objects imo. Consider to increase it for a bit
I don't think so
00:01:422 - 00:04:251 - this part feels a bit wrong imo. for example : 00:01:776 - This part feels empty, and 00:01:422 (2) 's tail isn't following any sound from the music imo. Try to change it to something similar to this
SPOILER
yep, nice one
00:16:276 (2) - Disable clap at the head
nope, this clap is consistent
00:24:764 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why don't you place these to something similar to 00:41:740 (1,2,3,4,1). It plays better imo.
this pattern really doesn't have any issues in gameplay :\
00:26:179 (1,2) - It's a bit too hard to move the cursor down riight after moving your cursor up. These play badly. Try to change these to something similar to this :
SPOILER
You might have to move (3,4) to keep the distance
same this is common deal to flow like that
00:29:008 (4,5) - A bit nazi. These aren't stacked.
fixed
00:33:252 (2) - Same case as 00:16:276
same
00:51:643 (1,2,3) - Same case as 00:26:179 (1,2)
uguuu

[Hard]
00:07:788 (2,3,4,5) - This is the part when the music volume increased. Rather than making these pattern too simple. I prefer making it like this :
SPOILER
yep, that a nice way too, but I prefer to make pause here like an intro or something :3
00:43:155 (1,2) - Tricky pattern. The distance is too short. Add a note at 00:44:039
aha, I'll think about adding circle here
01:04:375 (1,2) - I prefer this. Feels better imo :
SPOILER
I don't want to spam a lot
01:17:991 (4,5,6) - It's weird that you started to use 1/4 triplets from here. Even though the sound pattern from the music already start from 00:44:039.
actually any noticeable triplets starts from 01:17:991 and this suits to a bit escalate on the end

Nice mapset. GL

Thanks nanda2009 :3

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-06-19T20:37:59+00:00

Hey mod from my Queues

tbh I have nothing to say here. the map seem okay for me ><
here just something. sorry for my noob mod :c

General

your current BG is 1366x768 but should be 1024x768?

[Easy]

I have nothing to sa. Just one. I wouldnt stack these Note together in a easy diff. since this is for a beginner and it could confuse them just saying

Good luck to get this rank c:

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-19T20:51:07+00:00

Thanks Dark_Ai :3
1366x768 bg is ok and I'll consider what to do with stacks on easy.

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-06-20T05:53:14+00:00

fixed everythng except comboing. I want to keep combos more consistent

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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TitleUnicode:Game of Thrones (Main Title)
Artist:Ramin Djawadi
ArtistUnicode:Ramin Djawadi
Creator:Sieg
Version:Bakari's Normal
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Sieg

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Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-20T06:03:21+00:00

updated

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-21T14:05:10+00:00

title changed ~ok
double post again

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-21T15:08:10+00:00

Omg, I know that song.. xDD

Summoned via Konei, Irre and Luka's Modding Queue

[General]

Tags+Source: ✓
Picture: ✓
mp3: ✓
Preview Point: ✓
Offset: seems fine for me!

[Easy]

Well the hitsounding seems interesting, but it's somehow too quiet for me. I suggest making the hitsound louder(like the data), not changing the volume of them ingame.. since you're going up all the time.

00:08:849 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/3kSOe.jpg What about this idea? The flow doesn't get interrupted then and it looks nice as well!
You used the stacking pretty good, i think it's fine for the map. I'm saying this, because everytime i ask a beginner-player he says: omg i hate stacking so much.
00:33:959 (3,4,1) - I don't really like the placing here, it seems somehow straight, somehow there's a slight curve in it, could you make it a bit more .. straight or curvy? xD Whatever you want.
00:42:094 (2) - I think this note should be a bit more on the left side, because it doesn't like a real curve now: 1->2 is straight, the rest seems like a curve..
Maybe try: x: 60 y:320
01:06:497 (3) - I think rotating this by like 10° would give everything a nicer look, try it!

Don't forget to have a look at the other DS if you move it.

Really, really nice diff! Especially the blankets, it seems perfect.

[Bakari's Normal]

Are you sure you don't want to use CS 3?

00:16:276 (4,1,2,3) - Hm, I think this could be a bit hard for a normal player, I hope you can get me. I suggest you try to put in a reversed slider instead of 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - . If you do so, 00:16:276 (4) - plesae move this to x: 476 y: 96, it would follow your previous placing-pattern.
00:25:118 (3) - Isn't there a hitsound missing on the slidertick?
00:36:789 (1) - Hmm, moving this slightly to the right would create a nice path between the previous slider! Try it

00:59:070 (3) - Missing hitsound on the slidertick again, I suppose.

Hm >< It looks really nice, I have to say, but the rhythm.. I think there could be some more creativity, since you used these 1/2 sliders very often.. Try to bring in some 1/1 sliders, (I know, you have them, but pretty less).. 00:44:216 (2,3) - for example at parts like this, a 1/1 slider would fit i guess!

[Hard]

Gameplay: Ohh.. i dislike singletapping. xDD I'm personally not a big fan of that. About the map itself, well, the song seems pretty majestetic, but the fact that you have to be stressed during the whole diff destroys that feeling a bit >< (You really used single circles a lot, to don't let it empty, i guess)

00:00:714 (1,2,3,4) - This sounds really weird, why is 1 extended to the red tick?
00:02:306 (5,6) - These are the circles i'm talking about above, please try to map so it fits the song perfectly.
00:18:752 (2,3,4,5) - The DS seems a bit messed up, why is it lowered here? O: Please fix

00:19:813 (1) - Same as above, i don't get why it's extended.
00:22:642 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You did a nice job here! I really like the rhythm here. I wish it would be more like this

00:44:746 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Looks really nice, but is too hard for a 'hard' diff to be honest. Try reducing the jump a bit.
01:09:503 (4,5,6) - o.o Why all of a sudden this triplet? D:
01:17:991 (4,5,6) - Same here, please remove it, i can't hear that it's in the song and it's pretty .. lonely with the one above. xD
01:29:485 (6,7,8,9) - This is fine though! It gives a nice stress at the end.

I hope i could help you a bit, maybe there is too much critic and too less suggestions. If you wish more, please ask me, I didn't want to say the map is bad, without givign enough suggestions.

Take my star

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Sieg 2013-06-21T17:36:35+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
Omg, I know that song.. xDD
xD

[Easy]

Well the hitsounding seems interesting, but it's somehow too quiet for me. I suggest making the hitsound louder(like the data), not changing the volume of them ingame.. since you're going up all the time.
i'll consider this but hs volume seems fine for me

00:08:849 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/3kSOe.jpg What about this idea? The flow doesn't get interrupted then and it looks nice as well!
yep, nice idea
You used the stacking pretty good, i think it's fine for the map. I'm saying this, because everytime i ask a beginner-player he says: omg i hate stacking so much.
00:33:959 (3,4,1) - I don't really like the placing here, it seems somehow straight, somehow there's a slight curve in it, could you make it a bit more .. straight or curvy? xD Whatever you want.
sure
00:42:094 (2) - I think this note should be a bit more on the left side, because it doesn't like a real curve now: 1->2 is straight, the rest seems like a curve..
Maybe try: x: 60 y:320
I've tried ;_; fixed
01:06:497 (3) - I think rotating this by like 10° would give everything a nicer look, try it! Don't forget to have a look at the other DS if you move it.
changed in other way :3

Really, really nice diff! Especially the blankets, it seems perfect.
thaaanks

[Hard]

Gameplay: Ohh.. i dislike singletapping. xDD I'm personally not a big fan of that. About the map itself, well, the song seems pretty majestetic, but the fact that you have to be stressed during the whole diff destroys that feeling a bit >< (You really used single circles a lot, to don't let it empty, i guess)
This is personal preference yep, as for me I really love to play 160-180 as singletap with a lot of circles.

00:00:714 (1,2,3,4) - This sounds really weird, why is 1 extended to the red tick?
oh, seems fine but I'll change this I guess
00:02:306 (5,6) - These are the circles i'm talking about above, please try to map so it fits the song perfectly.
uhm, I don't get this ;_;
00:18:752 (2,3,4,5) - The DS seems a bit messed up, why is it lowered here? O: Please fix
jump, everybody loves random jumps \w/
00:19:813 (1) - Same as above, i don't get why it's extended.
yep, seems that I need to fix this one too
00:22:642 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You did a nice job here! I really like the rhythm here. I wish it would be more like this
:)
00:44:746 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Looks really nice, but is too hard for a 'hard' diff to be honest. Try reducing the jump a bit.
hardest diff, that's ok
01:09:503 (4,5,6) - o.o Why all of a sudden this triplet? D:
actually this is not sudden on 25% you can here there is beat on blue
01:17:991 (4,5,6) - Same here, please remove it, i can't hear that it's in the song and it's pretty .. lonely with the one above. xD
uguu, same here
01:29:485 (6,7,8,9) - This is fine though! It gives a nice stress at the end.
xD

I hope i could help you a bit, maybe there is too much critic and too less suggestions. If you wish more, please ask me, I didn't want to say the map is bad, without givign enough suggestions.
yep but that is my style - some jumps, quantity of circles
and my vision of rhythm not likely I'm going to change this a lot :\

Take my star

thanks <3 <3 <3

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-21T19:04:27+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Irreversible wrote:
00:18:752 (2,3,4,5) - The DS seems a bit messed up, why is it lowered here? O: Please fix
jump, everybody loves random jumps \w/ omg i love you for saying that I LOVE YOU MAN!!!!!!

thanks <3 <3 <3

it's fine that you have your own mapping style

hurrdurr hope i could help anyway~

riffy

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riffy 2013-06-22T04:49:14+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Bakari's Normal]

Are you sure you don't want to use CS 3? yea, I'm 146% sure that CS3 looks ugly with my patterns

00:16:276 (4,1,2,3) - Hm, I think this could be a bit hard for a normal player, I hope you can get me. I suggest you try to put in a reversed slider instead of 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - . If you do so, 00:16:276 (4) - plesae move this to x: 476 y: 96, it would follow your previous placing-pattern. As you've noticed there're no any 1/2 patterns, so i made this diff harder by using 1/1 circles a lot
00:25:118 (3) - Isn't there a hitsound missing on the slidertick? Sieg did all the hitsounding, so it's up to him
00:36:789 (1) - Hmm, moving this slightly to the right would create a nice path between the previous slider! Try it yea, nice idea
00:59:070 (3) - Missing hitsound on the slidertick again, I suppose. it's totally up to Sieg, I guess

Hm >< It looks really nice, I have to say, but the rhythm.. I think there could be some more creativity, since you used these 1/2 sliders very often.. Try to bring in some 1/1 sliders, (I know, you have them, but pretty less).. 00:44:216 (2,3) - for example at parts like this, a 1/1 slider would fit i guess!

I'll think about this, but I'm not really ure because I think that rhythm is fine as it is ;_;

я король ящериц

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Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-22T04:51:05+00:00

updated

Smoothie

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Smoothie 2013-06-22T08:44:14+00:00

Heya
From my modding queue.

Well, i don't have that much to say.
Just some suggestions~

[Hard]
00:16:630 (4,5,6) - Consider adding whistles on them. It goes quite well with the music.
00:21:935 (8) - How about making a slider here that ends at 00:22:288? Imo it plays and sounds quite good.
00:31:484 (5) - Add a whistle on the slider start?
00:33:606 (4,5,6) - Same as i mentioned above. Consider adding whistles on them~
00:39:972 (5) - Whistle on the slider start~
00:42:094 (4,5,6) - Whistles?
00:55:356 - Add a note?

[Bakari's Normal]
00:09:203 (1,2) - How about this? It keeps things moving.

SPOILER

00:14:508 (1) - The music gets a bit "dramatic" here. So, how about adding a whistle on the slider start? It sounds really nice.
00:16:630 (1,2,3) - Same as i mentioned above. Whistles on these would be really nice.
00:31:484 (2) - Add a whistle~
00:33:606 (3) - Whistle on the slider start.
00:39:972 (2,2,3,4) - If you added the whistles i mentioned above you might want to apply them here, too.
01:13:924 (2) - Whistle on the slider start and end~
01:16:400 (3,4) - Add whistles~
01:17:107 (5) - Add a NC and remove the NC here if you did so 01:18:168 (1)

[Easy]
00:16:276 (2) - Whistle on the slider end?
00:16:983 (3,4) - Also, whistles on these would be nice.
00:33:252 (2,3,4) - Same as above~
00:42:094 (2,3,4) - Whistles on these would sound nice.

Well, that's all
Really nice map!

Good luck!

Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-22T08:56:07+00:00

Thanks Smoothie whistles applied :3

Teara

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Teara 2013-06-22T10:12:21+00:00

Posting the last two suggestions because you keep going offline. Let me know when you decline/fixed these.

[Hard]

01:26:568 (5) - Doesnt fit, please delete it.
01:29:574 (7,9) - Same here, delete these two, they aren't needed. And it sounds 10 times better without it.

Tiny IRC mod

11:51 Teara: Hey
11:52 Sieg: hey
11:52 Teara: a few things
11:53 Teara: Easy and normal are great :3
11:53 Teara: but some issues in hard
11:53 Sieg: :3
11:53 Teara: 00:28:301 (1,2) - this is placed well, but it plays a little awkward
11:53 Teara: reduce the jump a tiny bit
11:54 Sieg: alright
11:55 Teara: 01:06:497 (1,2) - same issue, song is really relaxing, doesnt warrent bigish jumps
11:57 Teara: but just a tiny bit is fine
11:57 Teara: http://puu.sh/3lvPG.jpg < like that
11:57 Teara: and he goes offline
12:03 Sieg: oh my internet.... i've updeted these two, anything more?
12:03 Teara: oh, wb
12:03 Teara: lets see
12:04 Teara: 01:26:568 (5) -
12:04 Teara: lol... offline again..

Sieg

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Sieg 2013-06-22T10:20:34+00:00

applied all, thanks, sorry my internet really bad today :<

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