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Lenka - Everything At Once

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riffy

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
аимод говорит у тебя конфликт в леттербоксах и лид-инах а он есть? по осу файлам все норм D:

Easy:
00:10:167 (1) - двинем его подальше от 1, лучше же http://puu.sh/2UzJZ.jpg ~
00:32:098 (4,1) - бланкет где http://puu.sh/2UzLa.jpg ~
00:51:546 (3) - давай его в другую сторону http://puu.sh/2UzND.jpg как-то не течет, мне кажется. После предыдущего слайдера, там надо именно что-то такое ;_;/
01:01:477 (2,3,4) - флоу? http://puu.sh/2UzOI.jpg oh you, I'll change this to something like "creative-flow-pattern"

Normal:
00:17:201 (2,3,4) - уверен что такой ломаный флоу сойдет? там же две дуги, просто искаженные
00:38:718 (5,6) - я бы сделал что-нибудь такое http://puu.sh/2UzUy.jpg чтоб не забивать все в угол

Hard:
00:37:891 (5,6) - этот джамп не очнь, в музыке ничего же нет uguuu
01:34:373 (4,1) - фикс бланкет da
01:34:580 (1,2) - может как-то симметрично относительно y расположить? они симметричны D:

фикс зис анд колл ме фор речек \w/ /jk
Thaaaank you! :3/
Miya
General
  1. Why you no continue your pineapple sb effect until the last spinner? ><
  2. I think it will be nice if you fade out the sb\night completely at 00:49:477 - or around it.
Easy
  1. 00:23:408 (1) - How about adding a whistle here at the slider start? The music is right on transition here, so i think it's a nice idea to put a whistle.
  2. 00:30:029 (1) - ^
  3. 00:33:339 (1) - And you forget a whistle here at the silder start ><
  4. 00:36:649 (1) - ^
  5. Why u no continue your whistle at 2nd kiai? :<
  6. 01:29:615 (1) - Err, please don't overlap slider like this on easy. It can confuse some beginner :<
Normal
  1. 00:39:960 (1) - A whistle on this spinner sounds good to hear imo.
  2. 00:50:098 (2) - This note is kinda overmapped. I suggest to delete it. I can't hear any vocal, notes, beat that support this circle. :<
  3. 01:25:477 (3,4,1) - I think you forgot to put a whistle pattern here that following vocal like you did on 01:12:649 (1,2) - and 01:18:856 (3) -
  4. 01:42:649 (5) - Please don't break your vocal consistencies here. It sound's weird. So i suggest to delete this circle. :<
Hard
  1. 00:34:994 (5) - I think you forgot to put a whistle on this slider start.
  2. 00:39:960 (1) - Same, here too.
  3. Same as easy, why u no continue your whistle at 2nd kiai? Feels missing something :<
  4. 01:39:132 (4) - Woops, you also miss a whistle with drum sampleset at this slider repeat.
Wow, very nice, neat, clean, and simple mapset. I like it <3
Star ~
Topic Starter
riffy

Miya wrote:

General
  1. Why you no continue your pineapple sb effect until the last spinner? >< Uh.. because kiai ends and that pineapple thing is for kiai only >3<
  2. I think it will be nice if you fade out the sb\night completely at 00:49:477 - or around it.uguu
Easy

  • Applied every hitsounding suggestion.
  1. 01:29:615 (1) - Err, please don't overlap slider like this on easy. It can confuse some beginner :< Oh, c'mon! It's perfectly readable and ooks pretty cute. there's no way people can't read it!
Normal

  • Applied everything for my part.
  1. 01:25:477 (3,4,1) - I think you forgot to put a whistle pattern here that following vocal like you did on 01:12:649 (1,2) - and 01:18:856 (3) - not sure if it fits here good enough. I won't change it for now
  2. 01:42:649 (5) - Please don't break your vocal consistencies here. It sound's weird. So i suggest to delete this circle. :< isn't it following "you" in vocals?
Hard

  • Simply copied hitsounds from [Easy] diff. So it's kinda fixed. :3
Wow, very nice, neat, clean, and simple mapset. I like it <3
Star ~
Thanks a lot, I appreciate it!
Thunderstorm
Здравствуй.
Ох уж этот СБ :)

[Overall]
AIMod требует epilepsy warning. Сам я, вроде, ничего такого не заметил интенсивного, но подумай над этим

[Easy]
01:32:925 (1) - тут заместо нотки начать слайдер (который 01:33:339 (2) - ) - отлично войдёт под вокал
01:27:978 (3,1) - красиво. но выбивается из общей картины своей единственностью на всю мапу.

[Normal]
00:38:718 (5) - спейсинг поломался у тебя тут

[Hard]
00:44:098 (3) - SB волка в тест режиме уезжает из-под начала слайдера (хотя в эдиторе всё ок)

Усё, больше ни на что глаз не жалуется. :)
Topic Starter
riffy
Applied everything, except enabling epilepsy warning! Thanks a lot!
Loooctav
Bakadajalatamabatakari Good Luck c:
Miya
Rechecked everything via IRC, and i think it's good now.:3
  1. Fixed some rhythm, and mostly just hitsound mod.
Bubbled~

I loss the log, sadly q.q
Aurele
...@Storyboard: 00:53:201 - My part starts here, right? Not 01:06:442 (1) - ..
I totally remember of mapping this, due to the hitsounds: 00:56:511 (1,2,3,4) -
Topic Starter
riffy
Oh, I guess you know your parts better. Fixed!
Miya
Rebubbled due to minor change of sb from creator.
I don't know this when i was modding it. ><
Gero
Uhh ... just one thing before of ranked ! Bakari


[Hard]

00:43:270 (1,2,3) - for now, this looks very bad with SB.
Move this Slider 00:43:270 (1) - To X: 172 Y: 350 and this circle 00:43:891 (2) - To X: 27 Y: 273 and this slider 00:44:098 (3) - To X: 110 Y: 299




No Kudosu!

Good Luck Baka!
Zero__wind
Omg, really nice creativity !
rank rank rank !
I love Lenka ~
hurry * before it got ranked :3
Topic Starter
riffy
It isn't looks so ugly during testpleay, look! @ Gero
Thank you, I'll try! @ Zero__wind
Elly-chan
all i wanna be is everything, everything at once

ti klab members unite
Niko-nyan

Elly-chan wrote:

all i wanna be is everything, everything at once

ti klab members unite
please rank it Elly o3o
popner
[Hard]
00:33:960 (2,3) - if you exchange the note and the slider the rhythm will fit the music better imo, like:

01:10:580 (3) - you can bend it more so that it will looks better with other objects:


The mapset is clean and the storyboard is interesting.
Topic Starter
riffy
Yea, applied both suggestions, thank you.
popner
Ranked!
Topic Starter
riffy
First!

thank you!
Flask
哇泡泡

Gratz baka!
Satellite
congratz~
Sieg
Congratz :oops:
Lally
gratz moeri <3
Nymph
grats!
IchiGUN
грацую :D
Niko-nyan
for you because ranked moeri
19:45 BanchoBot: Anda telah meraih #1 pada Lenka - Everything At Once [Hard] <Catch the Beat>
19:48 BanchoBot: Anda telah meraih #1 pada Lenka - Everything At Once [Hard] <Taiko>
19:49 BanchoBot: Anda telah meraih #1 pada Lenka - Everything At Once [Normal] <Taiko>
19:57 BanchoBot: Anda telah meraih #1 pada Lenka - Everything At Once [Hard] <osu!mania>

too much #1 lol
Kodora
Congratz :3
Dino99
Gratz baka~ x)
Zero__wind
oops, late
congratz~
Satellite
/me late lol

Congratz~!
Lolicakey
Congratz Baka~ri o3o/
Crazykitszors
Cute story board! nice job. 8-)
Ulysses
HAHA SB is awesome and funny!
Enjoyed it!
69653863
omg ranked moeri pro sber 2013 x
pw384
I see pineapples ;w;

Edit: lol @ "notbaka.png"
Stefan
I WASN'T PREPARED!!! EVERYTHING CAME AT ONCE AAAAAAA
Aurele

Stefan wrote:

I WASN'T PREPARED!!! EVERYTHING CAME AT ONCE AAAAAAA
AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA WOW XDDD

Yay Bakari! :D
Mystyk
dat storyboard LOL I laughed while playing, I really enjoy this storyboard, pedobear and pineapple with sunglasses xD and btw quite enjoyable map, I like it, nice job! :3 congrats!
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